1. Easy (1.44 stars, 173 notes)
2. Hard (3.3 stars, 462 notes)
3. Normal (1.61 stars, 262 notes)

egas00 wrote:

Karena kamu map pertama jadi aku seriusin dikit lah [biasanya ga serius :3 ]
Warna Merah = Rekomendasi
Warna Hitam = Personal Opini

BPM : bagus
Offset : 190 kayaknya mantap deh => mmmmhhhh, gimana ya, diubah ke 190 jadi aga2 ngga sreg gimana gitu dengernya, jadi ini saya ngga ubah ya

Easy

Song Setup

General =
Hmm gimana kalo kolom Tags nya di kosongin dulu? kalo Akustik sama Instrumental ikut Genre nanti kalau udah di rank
Grid nya jadiin 4 aja di View -> Grid Level
Spin untuk easy diff Minimal Auto dapat 8000 gan [7000 toleransi, tergantung BPM]

Dfficulty =
- HP Drain : ok
- Circle Size : er, Ok lah Easy
- Approach Rate : Hmm.. Tambahin 1 donk ... terlalu lambat D:
- Overall Diff : TERLALU RENDAH D: D: D: , paling enggak　２－３　

Btw karena Easy bukan spesialis saya jadi dikit aj ya XD

00:41:165 - 00:42:629 , Kenapa ga 1 slider bolak balik aja ? => ok, oooh, jadi klo easy min harus 8000 ya, bru tau maklum nubie, hehe
00:46:043 - New Combo ? => ok
00:52:385 - New Combo ? => ok
00:54:824 - New Combo ? => ok
01:11:409 (2) Ini di pindah donk, di X:369 , Y:288 atau daerah situ lah => itu berarti harus mindahin dulu yang 01:10:433 (1), tapi udah bisa ko
01:15:311 - New Combo ? => ok
01:22:141 - Bukannya New Combo disini bagus ya? Dan juga KIAI time mu dari sini => ok, kirain kiai-nya mulai pas masuk reff, tapi ternyata lebih pas disana ya, hmmm
01:39:702 - New Combo ? => ok
01:47:507 - Ganti 1 slider bolak balik\ / => ok
01:57:994 - New combo pindah sini aja gan => saya pake new combonya pas abis 4/4 lagu di guitar pro-nya sih, jadi ini ga di ganti
02:03:116 - Spinner ganti ~ => ok
02:10:921 - Too Much Spinner~ => ok
02:36:287 - Kiai Time mulai dari sini XD kecepetan kamu => ok
02:53:848 - New Combo ~ => ok
03:21:897 , di pindah di 03:21:653 , aja soalnya Easy Diff => klo pindah sana ga pas sama nadanya gan
03:39:702 - New Combo => ok
03:42:141 - New Combo di hilangin aja =>ok
03:46:531 - New Combo => ok

Yang lainnya nyusul kalo ada waktu :3

theramdans wrote:

hai random mod
maaf kalau terlalu detail

[General]
Seriusan???? Mapset ini Sama sekali ga ada Break Time! Suatu mapset HARUS ada Break nya. => klo yang Easy+Normal kenya susah klo harus dibikin Break, soalnya nanti combo terlalu dikit (ato emang ga apa2 ya?). Saya mikirnya ntar kurang etis klo mapnya aga panjang tapi combonya cuma dikit, gtu, klo yang Hard sama nsane emang udah ada tempat buat dijadiin Break sih, tapi diisi dlu, kan klo harus dihapus mah gampang tinggal delete
Kiai time 1 mulai di 01:22:131 => ok
Kiai time 2 mulai di 02:36:277 =>ok
Karena lagunya lumayan panjang mapsetnya lebih baik NORMAL HARD INSANE tanpa Easy, cuman Normalnya rada gampang dengan bintang dibawah 3 => saya pengen nyoba aja dlu bikin 4, percobaan pertama, tes kesanggupan

Distance snap banyak yang kacau dan tidak konsisten, cek Ai Mod (File>Open Ai Mod) lalu centang "Check distance snap" lalu perbaiki => ok

Easy

[General]
AR +1 atau +2, karena terlalu pelan => ok, kenya +1 aja deh
HP +1 => ok
OD +1 atau => ok
Distance snapping terlalu besar (kontradiksi dengan SV dan AR serta bpm yang pelan, tidak sinkron)
coba ganti distance snappingnya ke 1.2 => dijadiin 1.3 sma saya

00:19:692 - New Combo
00:27:497 - ^
00:39:204 - ^
00:41:155 (1) - spinner ini tidak cocok disini karena terlalu pendek dan jaraknya ke not selanjutnya hanya 1 beat (ini tidak boleh ada di diff Easy). Coba ganti dengan slider bolak balik atau jadikan break section aja , lumayan 4 beat.
00:47:009 - New Combo
00:50:423 - hilangkan New Combo, pindahin New Combonya ke (2) selanjutnya
00:54:814 - New Combo
00:58:228 (3,1) - geser dikit (1) ke kiri biar blanketnya pas dengan (3)
01:02:619 - New Combo
01:14:326 - ^
01:22:131 - kiai time mulai disini
01:26:033 - New Combo
01:29:936 - New Combo disini bukan di (1) sebelmnya
01:33:838 - New Combo
01:37:740 - ^
01:41:643 - ^
01:45:545 - sama kayak 01:29:936
01:47:497 (1) - sama kayak 00:41:155 (1)
02:01:155 - New Combo
02:03:106 (1) - sama kayak 00:41:155 (1)
02:08:960 - New Combo
02:10:911 (1) - sama kayak 00:41:155 (1)
sisa modnya kira2 sama sampai akhir soalnya lagunya kepanjangan ^^. Benerin aja distance snapnya ke 1.2, New Combo ikutin musik/gitarnya sama spinnernya jangan kependekan/ga pas dengan musik/not setelahnya kurang atau sama dgn 1 beat.

=> untuk beberapa perbaikan combo ada yang ngga disesuain sama saran disini, karena saya menyesuaikan dengan perubahan Chrod-nya (udah apal letak2 rubah chordnya sih ),klo bisa cek lagi ya

Normal

[General]
AR dan HP + 1
Diff ini kontradiksi banget ama Easy, karena CS lebih kecil SV lebih cepat tapi distance snapnya lebih kecil
Coba distance snap diseragamin ke 1.0 dan jangan bikin kaya 00:24:082 (1,2) karena distance terlalu jauh (jump)
Combo2 nya kepanjangan, coba dipendekin sesuai irama musik nya , biasanya new combo dipake setiap 2 stanza, tapi itu tergantung alur lagunya kayak gimana

=> ok, untuk normal distance-nya udah di snap di 1.0 dan combo udah di perpendek

Hard

SV di diff ini terlampau jauh terlalu cepat jika dibandingkan dgn diff normal (normal sv 1.0 hard sv 1.8) coba sv nya 1.4~1.6. Kalau 1.8 cocoknya dif Insane
Distance snap di bagian awal lagu terlalu kecil coba dibesarkan, karena ini diff hard distance boleh di ubah sedikit2 tapi harus konsisten dan polanya yang wajar dan masuk akal serta pas ama lagunya

00:19:448 (1) - slider kayak gini mending diganti pake circle aja => ngga diubah jadi spinner tapi yang slider pendeknya diubah jadi 2 hit circle aja
00:21:399 (5) - ^ => ^
00:27:253 (1) - ^ => ^
00:33:106 (1,2) - dua spinner kayak gni ga cocok => nah ini bingung kudu digimanain?

=> ok, untuk hard sebagian diikutin, tpi kenya aga susah juga klo harus ganti SV (orgnya malesan ), yah nanti lah digantiSV-nya klo niat

Insane

Insane nya sadis, AR HP dan OD terlalu besar, saran:
AR 8 HP 7 OD 7
Polanya secara keselurhan udah bagus, tapi ga aku mod full soalnya udah kepanjangan

=> ok, AR, HP dan OD udah diganti tapi 8 8 8, ngga 8 7 7
padahal klo pun kepanjangan juga ga apa2 biar bener nih mapnya

Saran

Pola map udah bagus
tapi distance snaping harus dipelajari lagi
dan hitsound, mapnya terlalu sepi tanpa hitsound + lagunya kalem bener
dan Break Time! Itu sangat penting

=> makasih sarannya, diusahain lah ditambahin hitsound-nya, soalnya masih aga bingung make hitsound yang cocok
Break Time udah ditambahin buat yang Hard sama Insane, yang Easy sama Normal ngga ditambahin (penjelasan diatas)

OSU! NEEDS MORE DEPAPEPE!

K4zuya K wrote:

theramdans wrote:

hai random mod
maaf kalau terlalu detail

[General]
Seriusan???? Mapset ini Sama sekali ga ada Break Time! Suatu mapset HARUS ada Break nya. => klo yang Easy+Normal kenya susah klo harus dibikin Break, soalnya nanti combo terlalu dikit (ato emang ga apa2 ya?). Saya mikirnya ntar kurang etis klo mapnya aga panjang tapi combonya cuma dikit, gtu, klo yang Hard sama nsane emang udah ada tempat buat dijadiin Break sih, tapi diisi dlu, kan klo harus dihapus mah gampang tinggal delete

Sephibro wrote:

The offset is very early, this one is much better:

Offset: 202 I think it's too late/slow, especially in the beginning (intro) and reff part

don't forget to resnap all inherited timing points (green lines)
also check AiMod (ctrl+shift+A) because some objects aren't correctly snapped


Good luck!

OK, all fixed, thanks

yurunneram wrote:

EASY

01:00:667 (3,4) - Turn these two into one beat sliders?

01:08:960 (3) - Spacing a bit uneven

02:10:911 (2) - You think maybe rotate anti clockwise abit so that the tail is same dist away from (1) as the head?

02:20:667 (1) - Blanket properly

eto... actually I don't do very well with instrumentals... well if it's short I'm okay but this is quite long and I get bored easily ehehe ^^")7 so gomene I'll stop here. just a lil thing: I dun believe in Aimod

dun give kudosu

5eania wrote:

[Easy]
03:28:730 (7) - copy to the 6

5eania wrote:

really sorry to be late. i'll shoot a star.

[General]
probably, Offset +14 changed to 185. +14 is not quite right in the reff part and ending ^^

[Easy]
03:28:730 (7) - copy to the 6 done

[Normal]
00:57:984 (1) - move to back 1/2 snap, and reduce 1 reverse. done
01:05:058 (4) - use 1/1 snap reverse slider. done
03:29:448 - need 1/2 slider. done
03:39:204 (1,2) - remove done
03:39:448 - 1/2 slider done

[Hard]
00:31:399 (1,2,3,4) - Suggest
Image Link done
00:38:228 (7) - looks better more under grid (like x:192 y:140) done
00:54:082 (3) - x:356 y:192 done
01:36:277 (1) - use rotate! (Ctrl + Shift + R) done
02:24:326 (1) - x:368 y:240 done
02:43:106 (7) - copy to the 6, and Ctrl + H,G done
03:45:301 ~ 03:50:437 - 1/3 snap part. done

[Insane]
01:21:155 (1,2) - increase 1/4 snap. done
01:31:033 (2) - move to back 1/8 snap. i refer to chord voice, not melody one here, so no change here ^^
01:32:145 (1) - remove, and add circle to 01:32:145 - 01:32:389 done
01:39:706 ~ 01:41:657 - Suggest
Image Link done
02:35:315 (1,2) - increase 1/4 snap. (and you can choice ctrl + g) done, but not the ctrl+g
02:53:852 ~ 02:55:803 - Suggest
Image Link i don't think it's good, too close and cramped
03:21:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - increase spacing form away previous notes. Like this. done
03:29:950 (6,7,8) - 1/4 rever slider. want to try making something like talent shredder bass part, super tapping lol
03:30:559 (9) - remove i refer to drum sound for this part, so i think i don't need to remove this ^^
03:45:301 ~ 03:50:437 - 1/3 snap part. done

tellertheworld wrote:

My friend(VictorWong):

Offset should be 206 instead of 180.

theramdans wrote:

[General]
Seriusan???? Mapset ini Sama sekali ga ada Break Time! Suatu mapset HARUS ada Break nya.

raheta_adi wrote:

bener tuh kata theramdans. map ini harus dikasi break. kenapa? karena ini mapset untuk rank, bukan approved. kalau seandainya ini approved sih engga masalah, itu udah biasa. contonya di map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/32201 ga ada break sama sekali tapi itu bisa diterima, karena ini map approved.

Note : no kudosu for this post.

Guidelines wrote:

Use breaks where possible.

Momochikun wrote:

theramdans wrote:

[General]
Seriusan???? Mapset ini Sama sekali ga ada Break Time! Suatu mapset HARUS ada Break nya.

raheta_adi wrote:

bener tuh kata theramdans. map ini harus dikasi break. kenapa? karena ini mapset untuk rank, bukan approved. kalau seandainya ini approved sih engga masalah, itu udah biasa. contonya di map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/32201 ga ada break sama sekali tapi itu bisa diterima, karena ini map approved.

Note : no kudosu for this post.

Just passed by, because this guy post his map on Ely's queue.
And i totally disagree with this, yeah look at > https://osu.ppy.sh/s/82612
This 4 minutes map got no break especially on Insane, and it got ranked. why ?
Because on the Ranking Criteria,

Guidelines wrote:

Use breaks where possible.

And this rule was belong in Guidelines, so it means if there're no possible part on the map that can be used as break. So it's not.
Also it was up to mapper that he/she want to use a break or not on the map. No modders / Bats may change it, if it still make sense on the map.
However, break were still recommended on beginner's diff like easy and normal.

Well, Good Luck for your very first map ~

makasih infonya (ato bisa disebut pembelaan? lol)

K4zuya K wrote:

5eania wrote:

really sorry to be late. i'll shoot a star.

[General]
probably, Offset +14 changed to 185. +14 is not quite right in the reff part and ending ^^

[Easy]
03:28:730 (7) - copy to the 6 done

[Normal]
00:57:984 (1) - move to back 1/2 snap, and reduce 1 reverse. done
01:05:058 (4) - use 1/1 snap reverse slider. done
03:29:448 - need 1/2 slider. done
03:39:204 (1,2) - remove done
03:39:448 - 1/2 slider done

[Hard]
00:31:399 (1,2,3,4) - Suggest
Image Link done
00:38:228 (7) - looks better more under grid (like x:192 y:140) done
00:54:082 (3) - x:356 y:192 done
01:36:277 (1) - use rotate! (Ctrl + Shift + R) done
02:24:326 (1) - x:368 y:240 done
02:43:106 (7) - copy to the 6, and Ctrl + H,G done
03:45:301 ~ 03:50:437 - 1/3 snap part. done

[Insane]
01:21:155 (1,2) - increase 1/4 snap. done
01:31:033 (2) - move to back 1/8 snap. i refer to chord and drum sound, not melody one here, so no change here ^^
01:32:145 (1) - remove, and add circle to 01:32:145 - 01:32:389 done
01:39:706 ~ 01:41:657 - Suggest
Image Link done
02:35:315 (1,2) - increase 1/4 snap. (and you can choice ctrl + g) done, but not the ctrl+g
02:53:852 ~ 02:55:803 - Suggest
Image Link i don't think it's good, too close and cramped
03:21:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - increase spacing form away previous notes. Like this. done
03:29:950 (6,7,8) - 1/4 rever slider. want to try making something like talent shredder bass part, super tapping lol
03:30:559 (9) - remove i refer to drum sound for this part, so i think i don't need to remove this ^^
03:45:301 ~ 03:50:437 - 1/3 snap part. done

ok, thank you so much for the modding and star

Setsurei wrote:

yo! walau di queue masih ada pending mods, screw my queue lol
I'm helping Indonesian mapper while I'm in the mood of modding this map
aku mod in indo aja biar jelas maksudnya, walau ada beberapa istilah yang masih pakai inggris

[General]
for a first beatmap ini lumayan - my first map was a disaster
hitsoundnya sedikit sekali, aku point beberapa saja yang "jelas" (I suck on hitsounding lol) saya juga kurang begitu ngerti cara pake HS yang bener lol
hitsoundnya agak "ngulang" dari easy, aku cuma sebut sedikit saja
kalo pakai clap hitsoud di lagu ini, decrease volumenya ke 30-40%, kalo terlalu keras lagunya ketutupan suara clapnya
dan disini sebenernya banyak ugly flownya tapi malas sebut lol - too many straight sliders, usahakan pakai curve lebih sering

[Easy]
00:13:843 (4) - kasih hitsound finish+clap di ekor 00:15:306 - done
00:15:794 (1) - finish di kepala, clap di ekor done
00:17:745 (2) - clap di ekor done
00:19:697 (1,2) - imo normal whistle nya ga cocok sekali, karena ini instrumental kalem. ganti soft whistle? done
00:27:502 (1,2) - ^ done
diff easy kalo bisa jangan pakai beat 1/16.. beat 1/2 atau max 1/4 aja karena newbie ga bisa ngepasin time kapan dia harus hit
00:35:337 (1,2,3) - ini dibenarkan posisinya (00:35:306 (1) - 00:37:257 (2) - 00:38:233 (3) - ) justru klo dipasin ngga pas klo easy, ntah knapa. udah di coba sama saya dan emang ga pas klo di pasin di garis putih. lagi pula itu kan tetep pas satu ketukan (00:35:337 (1,2)) dan 2 ketukan (00:37:288 (2,3)) ^^
00:41:160 (2) - clap di ekor done
00:50:428 (1) - clap done
00:50:916 (2) - dibikin curve done
00:54:331 (2) - clap done
00:54:819 (3) - dibikin curve done
00:56:770 (5) - clap di ekor done
01:05:063 (2) - ^ done
01:17:502 (4) - snap ekornya dibenarkan (ga pas di garis putih) ini juga sama, klo dipasin ngga pas sound nya
01:18:691 (1,2,3) - ini melenceng juga, 1/16 jangan dipakai di Easy/Normal diff ^
01:22:136 (1) - finish di kepala done
01:24:819 (3,1) - flow cut, 01:26:038 (1) - dimiringkan saja seperti ini done

SPOILER

01:28:965 (3,1) - ini juga flow cut walau ga seberapa nampak, rubah jadi seperti ini? done

SPOILER

digaris biar jelas

ini flow sebelum ku rubah:


yang ini setelah ku rubah:

01:32:867 (2) - x 232 y 316 done
01:33:843 (1) - ekornya dinaikan done

SPOILER

01:53:356 (1,2) - sama seperti 00:19:697 (1,2) - done
02:10:916 (2) - clap di ekor done
02:18:721 (3) - ^ done
02:36:282 (2) - finish di kepala done
02:38:965 (4,1) - similar to 01:24:819 (3,1) - done
02:51:891 (4) - ^ done
03:48:477 (1) - finish done

[Normal]
00:13:843 (3,4) - ntar dikira newbie ekornya (4) jadi kepalanya, lebih baik dipindah saja
dempetan gini bikin bingung (except if this is Hard+) done
00:14:575 (4) - finish+clap di ekor done
00:15:794 (1) - finish done
00:16:526 (2) - why of all means ini garis lurus. tidak flowing dengan baik di 00:15:794 (1,2,3,1) - done
00:41:160 (1,1) - kalo bisa Easy / Normal diff kasih jarak 1 stanza kosong setelah spinner (mulainya disini setelah spinner 00:43:599 - ), agak susah buat newbie untuk click 00:43:111 (1) ok, untuk beberapa tempat bisa di ubah. tapi untuk beberapa yang lain ngga diubah soalnya udah spinnya bukan slider tapi hit circle dan klo itu diilangin jadi ngga enak ^^

similar matter

01:29:941 (1,1) -
01:51:404 (1,1) -
02:10:916 (1,1) -
02:44:087 (1,1) -
03:13:355 (1,1) -

00:46:526 (5) - clap done
00:54:331 (2) - ^ done
00:57:745 (1) - clap di ekor 00:58:233 - done
01:02:136 (7) - clap done
01:05:063 (4) - clap di ekor done
01:22:136 (3) - finish di kepala done
01:45:063 (1,3) - overlap, salah satu geser dikit done
01:45:550 (2,4) - ini juga done
02:59:453 (3,1) - flow cut done
03:20:672 (4,1,2) - flownya kurang luwes, ctrl+G terus pindah ke x 68 y 180 done

seperti ini

03:24:819 (5,1,2) - 03:24:819 (5) - jangan terlalu melengkung kedalam, flownya ga enak done
03:26:526 (2,3,4) - sesak sekali, 03:28:233 (3) - dibikin curve saja saya juga bingung harus dbikin gimana lol

[Hard]
00:52:380 (7,9) - lebih bagus lagi kalo (7) nya stack ekornya (9) persis done
01:22:136 (3,4) - overlap, kalo bisa head slidernya jangan ditutup (harus jelas) done
02:30:428 (7,8) - ^ done

[Insane]
objectnya banyak yang ga rapi ): tolong sebut dimana yang kurang rapihnya biar bisa dirapiin
03:21:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - aku ga yakin bisa FCin ini map lol namanya juga insane lol
03:25:550 (8,1) - this start is not good, pindah ke arah lawannya aja (pindah juga object berikutnya 03:26:282 (2,3,4,5,6) - ) ^
03:37:745 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - jangan mefet2, 03:37:136 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - pindah agak dalam dikit done

feel free to PM me in-game - malas sebut disini
tambah kebawah tambah dikit modnya lol
anyway, good luck![/color]

1. Remove Depapepe from tag, because it's available in Artist.
2. Offset is wrong.183 is better

• 00:07:989 (1,2,3) - Hitsoundnya mana? ._.
  00:19:697 (1,2) - make it so curve.
  00:35:337 (1) - this slider must starts in 00:35:306
  00:37:288 (2,3) - fix the rhythm/beat tick
  00:44:575 (2,3) - I don't like this placement.
  01:00:184 (2,3) - blanket propely
  01:49:453 (1) - No DS alright here. fix it
  01:53:355 (1,2) - scary slider (hhhh really scary)
  02:24:575 (1) - last node is red
  Di lurusin slider yg ini
  
  Before

  
  After

  
  02:26:526 (2,3,4) - flow into here is bad
  03:03:315 - the break must start in 03:03:599
  03:46:526 (2) - lurusin slidernya

• 00:08:721 (2) - i don't like this slider with 90° slider.
  00:32:867 (4,5) - the rhythm looks weird you follow here.
  00:43:111 - add circle
  00:45:063 (2) - Kalau bikin jump jangan disini kak
  00:45:550 (3,4,5,1) - i don't really interessing in this flow
  01:10:428 (1) - stack

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

:? Hi :3

[General]

1. Remove Depapepe from tag, because it's available in Artist. changed
2. Offset is wrong.183 is better changed

[Easy]

• 00:07:989 (1,2,3) - Hitsoundnya mana? ._. ok added
  00:19:697 (1,2) - make it so curve. done
  00:35:337 (1) - this slider must starts in 00:35:306 done, ternyata klo offsetnya dibenerin jadi pas
  00:37:288 (2,3) - fix the rhythm/beat tick done
  00:44:575 (2,3) - I don't like this placement. udah diganti
  01:00:184 (2,3) - blanket propely done
  01:49:453 (1) - No DS alright here. fix it done
  01:53:355 (1,2) - scary slider (hhhh really scary) changed
  02:24:575 (1) - last node is red fixed (? dunno what you mean lol)
  Di lurusin slider yg ini ngga diubah, malah ditambahin miring
  
  Before

  
  After

  
  02:26:526 (2,3,4) - flow into here is bad this is why i don't make the last note straight
  SPOILER

  
  03:03:315 - the break must start in 03:03:599 done
  03:46:526 (2) - lurusin slidernya done

[Normal]

• 00:08:721 (2) - i don't like this slider with 90° slider. changed
  00:32:867 (4,5) - the rhythm looks weird you follow here. changed
  00:43:111 - add circle ignored (he said i can ignore this)
  00:45:063 (2) - Kalau bikin jump jangan disini kak changed
  00:45:550 (3,4,5,1) - i don't really interessing in this flow changed
  01:10:428 (1) - stack changed

Just easy and normal xD
Good luck~~

RatedNC17 wrote:

Hello (from M4M)

SPOILER

[Easy]
00:21:158 (1) - add clap done
00:23:109 (2) - ^ done
00:25:061 (2) - ^ done
00:27:012 (4) - ^ done
00:28:963 (1) - ^ done
00:30:914 (2) - ^ done
00:47:987 (2) - make your slider bend straight (unless it's suppose to do that) i don't really understand what you mean here, can you explain with example?
00:56:768 (3) - put it at x:268 y: 136 done
01:06:524 (1) - put it at x:412 y: 172 done
01:39:695 (1) - move to x:76 y:112 done
02:16:768 (2) - make the slider bend straight same with 00:47:987 (2) -
02:53:841 (1) - move to x:64 y:276 done
02:55:792 (3) - move to x:308 y:52 done
03:11:402 (1) - take off NC i think it fits better before i remove the NC. I use NC because the guitar chord changes here
03:27:012 (5) - NC done
03:29:939 (1) - take off NC done
03:30:914 (2) - NC done
03:41:646 (3,4,5) - move to x:404 y: 312 done
add some more hitsounds ok, i've added some new HSs

[Normal]
00:13:841 (3) - move to x:356 y:140 done
00:15:291 (4) - move to x:488 y:228 done
00:39:207 (3) - x:432 y:164 done
00:40:670 (4) - x:284 y:64 done
00:41:158 - move to spinner to 00:43:109 nope. for normal after spinner the space should be 1 stanza and this is 1 stanza (from Guidlines)
01:17:500 (3) - move to x:128 y:196 done
01:48:719 (3) - move to x:280 y:344 done
02:10:914 - move the spinner to 02:12:865 same as 00:41:158 -
02:44:085 - move the spinner to 02:46:524 same as 00:41:158 -
add hitsounds ok, added some HSs

[Hard]
AR -1 i won't change this. it's pretty normal for hard to have this AR
00:23:353 (1,2) - x:152 y:152 done
00:25:061 (4) - x:336 y:260 done
00:38:475 (8,9,10) - big jumps for hard it's not that jumpy i think
Nothing else to say here except that some jumps are a bit far for hard and again add hitsounds i'm not that good with HSs. still new to mapping

[Insane]
AR -1
Thats about it except once again hitsounds teach me how to be good with adding HSs

Really like this map i'm definitely keeping this map