This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 28 мая 2009 г. at 10:32:30

Artist: T.I ft Justin Timberlake
Title: Dead And Gone
Tags: Justin Timberlake Dead And Gone
BPM: 67,5
Filesize: 7249kb
Play Time: 02:05
Difficulties Available:

1. Dead & Gone (4,72 stars, 189 notes)
2. Newborn (2,16 stars, 94 notes)
3. Still Alive (4,19 stars, 167 notes)

Download: T.I ft Justin Timberlake - Dead And Gone
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hi everybody. This is my first beatmap so basically any advice is welcome.
Hope you like it

!!PLEASE DOWNLOAD THE BEATMAP AGAIN IF YOU GOT IT BEFORE 26.05.09 SINCE NEW SOUNDS WERE ADDED!!

UPDATES:

27.04.09 Fixed the spacing
04.05.09 Offset moved to 14,398 + added some sounds + minor changes
05.05.09 Added a background picture + spacing changed in several notes at the end
06.05.09 Added new difficulty (a lot easier but still 4 stars) + some changes to it
12.05.09 Added sounds for [Still Alive] and [Dead and Gone]
17.05.09 Added new difficulty [Newborn] (Easy) + Some changes to all difficulties
18.05.09 Alignment issued in [Newborn] corrected
26.05.09 Was away for a while. Alignment issued in [Still Alive] and [Dead and Gone] corrected + hitsound changes (all beatmaps)
27.05.09 Some hitsounds added/changed + alingment issues fixed in all difficulties + Finally got to add hitsounds to the rap part

good One))

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02:03:73 (3) - why it has diffierence distance?

no other problem@@
Good song expect more difficulty Give you star^U^

HI, me again
Only some suggestion to you

Still Alive:
01:56:17 (1) - move it 1 grid down
02:00:17 (5) - same with above

Could do with an easier difficulty. Also there are quite a few beats that are new combos for no reason. Otherwise, all is fine. Starred.

I like the new combos placed unexpectedly on the stream. Although the Dead and Gone difficulty can be played by 1 person.

I suggest you make an insane version, suitable for tagcoop for at least 4 or 8. ) (if you're gonna make tis, you could remove teh new combos placed for no reason)

-- like teh* song.

and yea. i find teh last slider on the Still Alive difficulty to be offsync :/ .. but i'm not that sure.

Good map considering its your first. Props.

*ed

Wow, what an interesting song you chose.

[Still Alive]:
(NOTE: All of these things for this difficulty are minor cosmetic suggestions that you can choose to do or not. I do not want to force a style upon you.)
00:17:06 (6) - Add a clap here?
00:20:62 (5) - Clap?
00:21:95 (7) - Repeat of this should get a Clap?
00:24:17 (3) - Clap?
00:25:95 (1) - The beginning and endpoint of this slider can get a Clap.
00:31:28 (5) - Add a clap here?
00:34:84 (5) - Clap?
00:36:17 (7) - Repeat of this slider gets a clap?
00:38:39 (3) - Beginning of this slider should get a clap...?
00:40:17 (1) - Add a Finish here?
01:42:39 (6) - Clap?
01:45:95 (5) - Clap?
01:47:28 (1) - The repeat of this may get a clap.
01:49:50 (4) - Beginning of this slider...Clap?
01:55:28 (3) - New combo?
01:56:62 (7) - Clap...? I think you're going to see a pattern.
01:57:95 (1) - Slider repeat...Clap?
02:00:17 (5) - Clap?
02:01:50 (1) - Repeat gets clap?
02:03:73 (3) - Clap?
02:05:50 (5) - Beginning of Slider gets Clap?

[Dead & Gone]:
(I'm not going to do those clap suggestions because they're the same area)
00:40:17 (1) - Make it end at the red tick before it. Add a Finish too.
00:46:84 (3) - Move 1 to the left on Grid Level 3.
00:53:50 (5) - Have this stack under the slider endpoint overlapping it. Readjust spacing for other things if you need to.
00:55:28 (1) - Move 1 to the right on Grid Level 3.
00:56:62 (7) - Move 1 to the left on Grid Level 3.
02:03:73 (3) - Stack this under the slider endpoint overlapping it. Readjust spacing for other things if you need to.

I'm impressed by this. The map actually seems pretty fun. You did a good job handling the beats. xD

Add more hitsounds. The song is going to be bare and boring without those babies.

However, I think you may need to make a little easier difficulty. [Still Alive] kind of is a little hard for beginners. That's up to you though, I suppose...

Star~

[Newborn]
00:18:398 (1) - Подвинь на один грид вправо.
00:19:731 (1) - Имхо, лучше сделать слайдер горизонтальным и "поравнять" с предыдущим слайдером.
00:42:620 (1) - Подвинь на 1 грид вправо.
01:10:398 (2) - Новое комбо?
02:00:620 (4) - Лучше не закруглять слайдер, имхо.
02:04:175 (4) - Тут ошибки нет, но ритм круто сделал, понравилось)

[Still Alive]
00:15:731 (2, 3) - Либо опусти это, либо подними это 00:16:620 (4, 5, 6)
00:24:398 (4) - Добавь еще один "возврат" этому слайдеру и опусти следующий слайдер.
00:42:620 (1) - Имхо, начиная с этой части надо добавить больше хлопков, которые выделяют сильную долю, т.к. они куда-то пропали. =(
01:41:064 (2) - Вправо на 1 грид.

[Dead & Gone]
00:23:286 (1) - Наложи (хД) на конец предыдущего слайдера.
00:46:842 (3) - Подвинь чуть влево.
00:47:286 (1) - Подвинь на середину.

Звезда.

Newborn~

1. 01:17:50 (10) - Redo break after slider.
2. 01:49:50 (7,8) - Move a tick down.
3. 02:04:17 (4) - ^

Still Alive~ (Portal reference lol)

1. Redo the break.

Dead and Gone is fine.

Good job!

As alwways, I won't nazi mos spacing because I suck at this, but be prepared for alignment nazi mod.
Hint : if not alogned perfectly, use no Grid Snap

[NewBorn]
00:15:73 (2,3,4,5) - align all with end of (2)
00:18:39 (1) - take the last control tick a little up (without gridsnap) to have perfect alignment
00:37:50 (1) - align with previous?
01:39:73 (1,2) - align
01:41:06 (2,3) - ^
01:42:84 (5,1) - ^
01:49:06 (6,8) - Minor thing, but try to get (8) on (6)
02:04:17 (4) - Down 1 grid. End sounds a little weird

[Still Alive]
The Cake is a Lie
00:21:06 (6,7) - Align end and start
00:30:17 (2,3) - maybe align these two
00:58:84 (6,8) - align?
01:48:62 (2,3) - align
01:49:50 (4,5) - ^
01:55:50 (2,3) - ^
Are tou still there?

[Dead & Gone]
00:15:95 (3 .. 8) - align
01:45:95 (5,6) - ^
01:46:39 (6,1) - ^
01:47:28 (1,1,2) - I disagree these overlaps.
01:51:28 (1,2) - align (yeah, i'm nazi on this)


Starred

I'm back!

No big errors this time around.

[Newborn]:
00:55:73 (3) - Might need to turn off Grid Snapping + Distance Snap, but try making the endpoint of this slider be horizontally the same with (2)?
01:04:62 (1) - Move this like 2 to the right on Grid Level 3?
01:51:28 (8) - Beginning of this slider should get a Clap.
01:55:28 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:02:84 (1) - Turn off Grid Snap if you must and make this vertically aligned with (2).
02:04:17 (4) - Same as above, except for (3).

Most of this is optional~

Good luck on the future of this map.

Add more whistles and please have better new combo spots.

Newborn
00:14:39 (1) - Add a finish on the first part of the slider.
00:18:39 (1) - Same as ^ and a whistle. Also, add two timing sections on the blue ticks before and after this white tick here 00:18:842
And make sure the first is using Custom override1 then take a soft-hitclap.wav file from the templete skin folder (download it if you didn't) and rename it to soft-slidertick.wav.

00:25:95 (1) - Add a finish and whistle at the end of this slider aka the 3rd hit.

do the finish/whistle thing at parts where the 2nd singer, says "too long" or words similar"

00:45:50 (1) - Slightly out of spacing to the 1 slider beforehand, also add a clap to the start of the slider.
00:47:28 (1) - Add a clap to the start of the slider.
Basically add a clap to any note that is 2 white ticks from the clap beforehand so it's like the song.
01:04:62 (1) - No need for a new combo.

Still Alive.
Anything with hitsounds like in newborn.

Dead And Gone.
Somewhat similar to Newborn which isn't a good thing.
Same hitsound issues as Newobrn.

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Newborn:
00:21:06 (2) - might want to align with 1
00:31:28 (4) - too close
00:37:50 (1) - put on top of 2 from previous combo
00:42:62 (1,1) - repeating sliders like this are very difficult and are not advised for lower difficulty levels.
00:45:50 (1) - too close
00:49:95 (1,2,1,2) - spacing
00:52:62 (2,3,1,2) - spacing
00:58:39 (2,3) - spacing
01:03:73 (10) - spacing
01:11:28 (1) - you might want to make this go in the same direction as the other 2
01:14:39 (4,5) - spacing
01:45:06 (2) - spacing
01:51:28 (8) - spacing

Still Alive:
00:16:62 (4,5,6) - align with 3
01:41:06 (2) - align with the end of 1
02:05:50 (5) - can you move this so it is not overlapped by 4

Dead and Gone:
00:46:39 (1) - center between 2 and 3
00:51:28 (3) - center between 1 and 2
01:43:06 (8) - move this so it is not overlapped by 7
02:02:84 (1) - align with the red slider

Beatmaps seem a little too similar at some parts like the beginning and right after the breaks, but I guess this is okay. Star.

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I usually think "oh god, a first beatmap. This must be a waste of my time." But.. I'm impressed.

- Dead & Gone:
00:43:73 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
00:48:84 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:49:06 (2) - New combo.
00:50:84 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:53:50 (5) - New combo.
01:14:84 (12) - New combo.
01:15:06 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:56:39 (4,5) - No really sure about this. I dislike spacing tricks on maps that don't have many of them, so I suggest you fix this to make it even. Again, it's only my opinion.

- Still Alive:
00:43:73 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
01:14:84 (9) - New combo.
01:15:06 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:52:62 - This is an awkward gap, imo. Maybe you could fill it up with some notes? Haha.

- Newborn:
00:58:84 (3) - New combo.
01:00:62 (5) - New combo.
01:02:39 (7) - New combo.
01:43:73 (1) - What happened to the clap at the middle of the slider? XP
01:45:06 (2) - New combo.
01:48:62 (5) - New combo.
01:51:28 (8) - No clap at the start of the slider? New combo.
01:59:28 (2) - New combo.

All good
cool slider ticks amd hitsounds
spacing is fine
timing is good enough
star it

only one thing
slider tick clap sounds a bit louder than circle clap
you can use 90% volume for those ticks

NewBorn:
My only concern is that extremely long break in the middle.

Still Alive:
It sounds kind of dull with minimal hitsounds, and the clap on a beat, imo.
and still griping about long break.

Dead and Gone:
Same points here.

Overall, nothing else really wrong with it, except one kinda major factor imo, and please take no offense to it.... but its not as fun as it could be. Don't get me wrong, it's a well constructed map, but theres nothing really catchy or memorable about it.

Although, if you want my suggestion? Skin the numbers with the "Typewriter" font, to match the background.

No problems detected

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RemmyX25 wrote:

Well, if it does get graveyarded, just give us a yell and we'll be glad to yoink it out for you

Tnx

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[Newborn]
00:42:62 (1) - move 1/4 in either direction
00:52:62 (2) - align with 1
00:55:73 (3) - clap the third hit


[Still Alive]
00:42:62 (1) - move 1/4 in either direction
00:56:17 (4) - clap the start
01:10:84 (5) - clap?
01:14:84 (1,2,3,4) - getting repetitive and kinda boring


[Dead&Gone]
00:42:62 (1) - move 1/4
00:56:17 (5) - clap
01:16:62 (7,8,9,10) - getting repetitive


i would like to see this map have a little more style to it and a little less streams of notes every half beat in the rap section

Just for the record, I still find this map rather uninteresting and not fun, as its just hit-hit-hit-clap-hit-hit-hit-hit-hit-hit-clap- etc

I'm not trying to be an ass about it, but ranked maps are not just about getting points.

RemmyX25 wrote:

Just for the record, I still find this map rather uninteresting and not fun, as its just hit-hit-hit-clap-hit-hit-hit-hit-hit-hit-clap- etc

I'm not trying to be an ass about it, but ranked maps are not just about getting points.

Haven't yet started working on it i just log in and look at the comments at the moment. Still got exams...

[newborn]
01:16:17 (8) - new combo

[still alive]
all is fine

[dead & gone]
circles are too small imo. It's no fun playing now
I recommend doubling the bpm so you can map to some of the rap without having to use 1/8s. The map is pretty easy now so I recommend making it harder this way.
01:16:62 (7) - new combo
01:48:62 (2,4) - i don't like that the slider of (2) overlaps with the (4) it looks ugly.
02:05:50 (1) - remove new combo

map is pretty good but try spicing it up a little. [dead&gone] is pretty dull but has lots of potential . starred

Aah, I remember modding this map. Great job! Ranked!

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Very nice song!Good work too!