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Lenka - The Show

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riffy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 3 февраля 2014 г. at 16:48:14

Artist: Lenka
Title: The Show
Tags: indie Kripac
BPM: 123
Filesize: 4495kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,66 stars, 106 notes)
  2. Hard (4,81 stars, 208 notes)
  3. Normal (3,98 stars, 152 notes)
Download: Lenka - The Show
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1/3

Life is a maze
and love is a riddle
I don't know where to go
I can't do it alone!


It's showtime!
Niko-nyan
and
happy623
xD/ love the song and sb
Suimya
epic song with epic sb ahah xD

worth a star =w=
Momochikun
Baka-chan Go ~
xChippy
Yo~
As per request.

  • [General]
  1. Epic SB xD
  2. Add a soft-sliderslide o-o?
  3. All diff looking good! but only thing lacking is hitsounds =w=

  • [Hitsound for all diff]
    You probably used the copier soo this makes it easier xD
  1. 00:15:266 - Whistle
  2. 00:32:339 - Whistle same sound as 00:30:388 - which has a whistle
  3. 00:37:217 - You could put a whistle here on the head to emphasize with the carrillon(?) don't really know what it is but it sounds nice :3
  4. 00:44:046 - Missing finish I think since the cymbals are playing
  5. 01:03:071 - Should be finish same reason as above cymbals~
  6. 01:11:851 - ^ Cymbals
  7. 01:28:924 - Whistle and remove the whistle here 01:28:762 (5) -
  8. 01:30:225 - Should be a finish tho cymbals o-o
  9. 01:30:713 - Clap
  10. 01:30:876 - Whistle
  11. 01:40:144 - Clap~
  12. 01:42:095 - Clap
  13. 01:44:534 - Whistle
  14. 01:45:510 - Whistle
  15. 00:46:973 - Try a drum+clap :P

  • [Hard]
    The first kia is lacking in whistle imo ><, you could atleast put some on the Stanza's :3
  1. 00:08:924 (1) - This one kinda played awkward for me since there is nothing really to support the end with, as for (2) it has Do~n't so I suggest to change (1) to a circle instead
  2. 00:20:632 (1) - move it to around 292|168 will make it look cleaner (Centered in the square)
  3. 01:09:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try this rythm :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1063229 (don't look placing xD)

  • [Normal]
    Same about the kia as in Insane
  1. 00:47:949 - I'd prefer a actual note here with a finish =w= cuz also this way you start the kia with a click xD oh btw if you do NC =w=

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:20:632 (6) - NC here for consistency o-o? also remove the NC here than 00:21:607 (1) -
  2. 00:37:705 (4) - Do something like this? so you get that beat from the stanza http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1063263
  3. 01:05:510 (3,4,5) - nazi The DS here is getting kinda odd o-o
Topic Starter
riffy
Thanks a lot, everything should be applied!
[-mii-chan-]
Yo~ free mod xD Love the SB sooo much~

Easy
00:20:632 (6) - my idea is this should really be drum-clap or drum-finish. The music silences completely at this point, so I don't want echoes from hitsounds '3'
00:21:607 (1) - normal-clap at slider's end
00:24:534 (4) - drum-clap or drum-finish like above
00:29:900 (3) - normal-clap at slider's end too
00:44:046 (1) - should end at 00:46:973 - and redo it like this: http://puu.sh/50Uk5.jpg
01:18:193 (3) - no whistle at slider's end, sounds strange to me, emphasizing nothing there :s
01:19:168 (1) - should only be 2 stanza's long. Then it's a short break, it's Easy after all :)

Normal
00:01:933 (2) - make it like this: http://puu.sh/50UL2.jpg
00:09:900 (5) - make it like this: http://puu.sh/50UO8.jpg instead of a slider only :s
00:12:827 (4) - ^
00:20:632 (5) - same problem like Normal :s drum-clap or drum-fn here :D
00:24:372 (1) - just soft-hitnormal here?
00:30:225 - add a note?
00:32:176 - ^
00:52:664 (2) - distance snap is too near '3' maybe little to you but I still tell in case u want to move it
01:24:534 (3) - clap instead of whistle at repeat?
01:26:811 (5) - ^

Hard
00:02:583 (4) - a note only instead of slider there, slider's end totally NOT fit in with me :s
00:03:884 - missing a note here :D
00:09:412 (2) - redo like this :D http://puu.sh/50ViL.jpg
00:20:632 (1) - drum-clap or finish or just plain soft-normal
00:24:372 (5) - ^
00:36:241 (1) - slider's end is finish
00:56:241 (2) - slider's start is finish
01:16:729 (4) - replace the slider with 1 note
01:19:006 (6) - merge the spinner with this note => spinner should start at this point & del the note
01:29:737 - add a note here
01:36:567 - ^

Well that's pretty much what I can offer right now \:D/ hope you find it useful~ I've gotta do my assignment now :D see ya later IRC
Topic Starter
riffy
hope to check it SOON

or not, anyway, i'll try

thank you!
Topic Starter
riffy

o0ohitomio0o wrote:

Yo~ free mod xD Love the SB sooo much~

Easy
00:20:632 (6) - my idea is this should really be drum-clap or drum-finish. The music silences completely at this point, so I don't want echoes from hitsounds '3' drum whistle fits better, imo. sorry ;_;
00:21:607 (1) - normal-clap at slider's end no way, it'll be totally off D:
00:24:534 (4) - drum-clap or drum-finish like above aaand no, it sounds kinda off, sorry :<
00:29:900 (3) - normal-clap at slider's end too naaaaah, there's no need to. music has no such sound there D:
00:44:046 (1) - should end at 00:46:973 - and redo it like this: http://puu.sh/50Uk5.jpg i'll need more opinions on this thing, because I'm not sure. sorry ;_:
01:18:193 (3) - no whistle at slider's end, sounds strange to me, emphasizing nothing there :s :D ok
01:19:168 (1) - should only be 2 stanza's long. Then it's a short break, it's Easy after all :) will need more opinions >3< ^

Normal
00:01:933 (2) - make it like this: http://puu.sh/50UL2.jpg it'll be too hard, sorry o3o
00:09:900 (5) - make it like this: http://puu.sh/50UO8.jpg instead of a slider only :s whyy? I want to keep it like this :<
00:12:827 (4) - ^ same, sorry
00:20:632 (5) - same problem like Normal :s drum-clap or drum-fn here :D whistle-drum
00:24:372 (1) - just soft-hitnormal here? let's keep hitsounds consistent o3o
00:30:225 - add a note? too hard D:
00:32:176 - ^ ^
00:52:664 (2) - distance snap is too near '3' maybe little to you but I still tell in case u want to move it should be fixed
01:24:534 (3) - clap instead of whistle at repeat? sure
01:26:811 (5) - ^ o3o sure

Hard
00:02:583 (4) - a note only instead of slider there, slider's end totally NOT fit in with me :s c'mon, it fits here, the sound fades here ;_:/ (reduced the volume, tho)
00:03:884 - missing a note here :D sure
00:09:412 (2) - redo like this :D http://puu.sh/50ViL.jpg naaah, it's ok as it is. there's no need to. sorry
00:20:632 (1) - drum-clap or finish or just plain soft-normal I'd go with drum whistle
00:24:372 (5) - ^ ~^
00:36:241 (1) - slider's end is finish c'mon, the finish sound is too loud
00:56:241 (2) - slider's start is finish same as above o3o
01:16:729 (4) - replace the slider with 1 note sure thing
01:19:006 (6) - merge the spinner with this note => spinner should start at this point & del the note no way! i don't want to ignore the sound at 01:19:168 -
01:29:737 - add a note here yeeah
01:36:567 - ^ kay o3o

Well that's pretty much what I can offer right now \:D/ hope you find it useful~ I've gotta do my assignment now :D see ya later IRC
thanks a lot!
Umi
i'm here :3

So many 1/3's song recently x)

let'su go !

Easy

- 00:05:510 (2) - align the end with the start ? i mean symmetry
- 00:06:973 (3) - in this way for a better flow
- 00:16:241 (1) - whistle on tail
- 00:17:217 (2) - whistle on reverse
- 00:18:680 (3) - what about this ? i think it's less boring to have the second shape in another way
- 00:19:656 (4) - NC ?
- 00:25:510 (1,3,1) - since you aligned 00:26:973 (2,4) -, align them too ?
- 00:29:900 (3,4) - same as 00:18:680 (3) -
- 00:42:095 (3) - increase the flow here ?
- 01:31:851 (3) - i personally prefer in this direction x)

Normal

- CS 4 it remind me something ahah <3
- Something that i didn't understand : why during the first KIAI you decreases the DS ? o.o
- well i'll point first some 1/3 slider that you should remove imo and add a single note instead because it doesn't follow wery well the song '-', after it's up to u xD
00:04:859 (1) -
00:08:762 (3) -
00:13:640 (5) -
- 00:17:705 (1) - whistle
- 00:18:680 (3) - Better flow
- 00:24:372 (1) - why this lonely NC ? :o remove ? '-'
- 00:46:485 (2) - move it to 145,221
- 01:04:534 (2) - you should put the shape in this, way the current flow is kinda bad imo

Hard

- 00:09:412 - it need a note :o
- 00:04:046 (2) - NC here for the anti-jump
- 00:16:729 (2) - whistle on tail
- 00:22:583 (3) - NC '-'
- 00:37:217 (2) - ^
- 00:48:924 (3,4) - use the same shape here ? and then make it like this (more or less)
- 00:59:168 (1) - end point 108,43
- 01:04:046 (3) - move it to 49,182
- 01:39:656 (2) - i think you know what i mean now x)

Well i guess that's all, this mapset is so good *-* I really like your pattern in the hard diff ! and the SB <3 good luck on ranking o3ob ~ have a star
Topic Starter
riffy
Thank you, I'll check it asap! <3
Kyouren
Can i make a diff?
Topic Starter
riffy
sorry, nope. i don't think that this map is even going for rank :P
Aurele
why not? o.o
Niko-nyan
gonna mod it friday so go wait it :)
don't stop the show please o3o
Topic Starter
riffy
Don't waste your time, man! I'm not going to rank this.
Niko-nyan

-Bakari- wrote:

Don't waste your time, man! I'm not going to rank this.
let me rank this? with another sb from me
Topic Starter
riffy
Do as you want. Who am I to stop you?
Gero

Niko-nyan wrote:

don't stop the show
You should not stop -Bakari-
Please, you're an awesome mapper and one cool person :3 don't give up!


Sincerely yours Gero.
Topic Starter
riffy
Thank you, man. But I really don't feel like ranking or modding anything, atm. I just can't force myself to do it.

Whatever, I'm back!
Gero
Finally \:D/

Go Bakari ♥~
Andrea

-Bakari- wrote:

Don't waste your time, man! I'm not going to rank this.
No, you're wrong dear.

~General~
  1. Add a preview point on all of the difficulties, you're missing it right now.
~Easy~
  1. 00:44:046 (1) - Add a finish at the end of this spinner to emphasize with the strong beat of the song.
  2. 01:01:607 (1) - I don't think this new combo here is necessary, I would just remove it.
  3. 01:46:485 (1) - Add a finish and remove the whistle at the end of this spinner to emphasize with the strong beat of the song.
~Normal~
  1. Increase OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
  1. 00:24:372 (1) - I don't think this new combo here is necessary, I would just remove it.
  2. 01:46:485 (1) - Add a finish and remove the whistle at the end of this spinner to emphasize with the strong beat of the song.
~Hard~
  1. 00:01:115 (1) - This circle is unsnapped, make sure to resnap it properly in the timeline.
  2. 00:09:412 - It feels like you're missing a note here, adding one would be nice.
  3. 01:03:559 (2) - Add a finish and remove the whistle at the begin of this slider to emphasize with the strong beat of the song and kiai start.
  4. 01:46:485 (1) - Add a finish and remove the whistle at the end of this spinner to emphasize with the strong beat of the song.
The storyboard is amazing xD Call me back!
Topic Starter
riffy
Everything should be fixed now! Thanks a lot for an awesome mod, bro <3
Andrea
Oh yeah, this map is awesome!

Bubbled~
Topic Starter
riffy
Thanks a lot! <3

Zero__wind
oops that bubble :3
Momochikun
OMG i remember when testplayed this map,
Go Bakari <3
onotoleonide
Topic Starter
riffy
That's just a text, we'll do it with the mod from the next BAT :)

лопну же. :(
- Melody
Go Baka ♥ °^°
happy623

- Melody wrote:

Go Baka ♥ °^°
alacat
hi Baka Bakari :3 It's showtime ! lol

[General]
  1. Why do you use only JPEG file " ClassicMaze " ? i recommend you to use PNG file for quality of storyboard. it would be more beautiful imo.
  2. If it is possible, how about adding " soft-sliderslide " of silence ? i feel it is a bit noisy. file : http://puu.sh/6InAJ.zip
[Easy]
  1. nothing~
[Normal]
  1. 01:03:559 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider instead of whistle ? it needs stronger sound imo. also you added this sound to hard diff at here.
  2. 01:21:119 (2) - ^ Same.
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:412 (2) - missing a whistle.
  2. 00:39:168 (1) - add a whistle to the head of the slider here to follow the vocal in the music. it is better to put hit sounds with constant rhythm like your previous part.
  3. 00:47:461 - Why don't you follow the drum sound here ? it would fit well with this background music.

Thanks :D

well, check these and let me know ;)
Topic Starter
riffy

alacat wrote:

hi Baka Bakari :3 It's showtime ! lol

[General]
  1. Why do you use only JPEG file " ClassicMaze " ? i recommend you to use PNG file for quality of storyboard. it would be more beautiful imo. Well, it doesn't really really matter. Anyway, did it in order to avoid any troubles.
  2. If it is possible, how about adding " soft-sliderslide " of silence ? i feel it is a bit noisy. file : http://puu.sh/6InAJ.zip Seriously, how could I miss it? :D
[Easy]
  1. nothing~ yay :3
[Normal]
  1. 01:03:559 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider instead of whistle ? it needs stronger sound imo. also you added this sound to hard diff at here. Yeah, sure.
  2. 01:21:119 (2) - ^ Same. Same ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:412 (2) - missing a whistle. Whoops~
  2. 00:39:168 (1) - add a whistle to the head of the slider here to follow the vocal in the music. it is better to put hit sounds with constant rhythm like your previous part.yeah, nice idea
  3. 00:47:461 - Why don't you follow the drum sound here ? it would fit well with this background music. I DO follow them



Thanks :D

well, check these and let me know ;)
Thanks a lot!
alacat
Alright !
Topic Starter
riffy
Just enjoy the show! ♥
Umi
Yay Gratz bakari :D
Gero
Bakari is Back ♥ ~

Gratz ♥ ~
Kyouren
Gratzz!! -Bakari-!!^^
Oyatsu
Oh LOLLLL... This song is in Comfort show ><
Congrtaz!! Bakari-san :D
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