Okay, I didn't used many suggestion, but I think the reason for it is clear._Gezo_ wrote:
SPOILERHere we go.
[Tags]
How come Elly-chan is still present? Unless she's done a diff there, I really recommend you to remove that one.
Tag recommendations, but not a must:Changed the tags.
- Apparitions stalk the night, for an appearance in kiai.
- version, since you used "ver.", as version is the full word (even though we almost never see that in older maps)
Timing is a bit off, but I might be tricked since I actually got 3ms late at most while testing.
I hit too early... hm. I will see what the next modder is going to say.
The rest is okay so let's move on diffs. Yeah, diffs. There might be few suggestions, that you may deny without providing a reason if you find it too silly.
[Kantan]
Since the rhythm in 00:42:568 (1,2) - is the same as 00:35:295 (1,2,3) - , why not making these two patterns consistent between each other?
Didn't use three kats because the up coming part provides them. So I kept it simple.
I really couldn't find anything else; it's a very solid diff you got there.
[Futsuu]
00:15:295 (2,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3) - Since I think 00:22:568 (1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1) - comes from the highlighted pattern, I think it would be better making it consistent between themselves (1/1-wise, you can keep the 1/2 on the second part.)
If you don't know which notes I'm precisely talking about, these are 00:17:568 (2) - and 00:21:204 (2) -
Needed some moments before I change it, but since someone else didn't like them much I will listen to your suggestion.
Same as Kantan, very solid.
[Muzukashii]
At first sight, I had the impression that it was an easier Oni. Not saying that it was one. Hm, I agree. I think I'm going to make a new Muzukashii.
01:02:795 (1,2,3) - You've used kkd numerous times before, why not here? Is that to make a don pattern of 2 notes ? the pattern kkd is really hard, so I wanted to keep it a bit simple by using a kkk as well. Also trying to emphasize note 01:04:841 (1) - in this way.
01:03:704 (1,2,1) - ^ same here (I think it used to be kkd before) ^
From 01:13:477 (1) - , I think it's a bit empty due to the absence of notes as in 01:13:932 - , 01:15:750 - , 01:21:204 - ... You miss a snare, I think.
Well, all intentionally so I want to keep it in this way.
Another solid map there, that's something I really like. However as I said, it feels like an Oni at times.
[Oni]
00:29:159 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I find that too bad that there's no finish at the end, but either way, I think that would break the whole pattern, unless jirostyle allows for big notes at the end of streams (which would surprise me) well due to pattern constellation and the dislike of using finishers at the beginning of a stanza I keep it as it is.
00:44:386 (1) - Big don here ? We clearly hear a crash, that wouldn't be too much. Same as before. At 00:29:841 (1) - is also none, only at 00:57:113 (1) - which is at the end of the whole pattern section.
Oh man. That's one overly solid mapset. Good job!
Still, even the points which I didn't applied were a good though, so I'm happy you checked it.
Going to make a new Muzukashii since the current one is rather Easy-Oni level.
Thank you Gezo!
