Here we go.
[Tags]
How come Elly-chan is still present? Unless she's done a diff there, I really recommend you to remove that one.
Tag recommendations, but not a must:
The rest is okay so let's move on diffs. Yeah, diffs. There might be few suggestions, that you may deny without providing a reason if you find it too silly.
[Kantan]
Since the rhythm in 00:42:568 (1,2) - is the same as 00:35:295 (1,2,3) - , why not making these two patterns consistent between each other?
I really couldn't find anything else; it's a very solid diff you got there.
[Futsuu]
00:15:295 (2,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3) - Since I think 00:22:568 (1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1) - comes from the highlighted pattern, I think it would be better making it consistent between themselves (1/1-wise, you can keep the 1/2 on the second part.)
If you don't know which notes I'm precisely talking about, these are 00:17:568 (2) - and 00:21:204 (2) -
Same as Kantan, very solid.
[Muzukashii]
At first sight, I had the impression that it was an easier Oni. Not saying that it was one.
01:02:795 (1,2,3) - You've used kkd numerous times before, why not here? Is that to make a don pattern of 2 notes ?
01:03:704 (1,2,1) - ^ same here (I think it used to be kkd before)
From 01:13:477 (1) - , I think it's a bit empty due to the absence of notes as in 01:13:932 - , 01:15:750 - , 01:21:204 - ... You miss a snare, I think.
Another solid map there, that's something I really like. However as I said, it feels like an Oni at times.
[Oni]
00:29:159 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I find that too bad that there's no finish at the end, but either way, I think that would break the whole pattern, unless jirostyle allows for big notes at the end of streams (which would surprise me)
00:44:386 (1) - Big don here ? We clearly hear a crash, that wouldn't be too much.
Oh man. That's one overly solid mapset. Good job!
[Tags]
How come Elly-chan is still present? Unless she's done a diff there, I really recommend you to remove that one.
Tag recommendations, but not a must:
- Apparitions stalk the night, for an appearance in kiai.
- version, since you used "ver.", as version is the full word (even though we almost never see that in older maps)
The rest is okay so let's move on diffs. Yeah, diffs. There might be few suggestions, that you may deny without providing a reason if you find it too silly.
[Kantan]
Since the rhythm in 00:42:568 (1,2) - is the same as 00:35:295 (1,2,3) - , why not making these two patterns consistent between each other?
I really couldn't find anything else; it's a very solid diff you got there.
[Futsuu]
00:15:295 (2,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3) - Since I think 00:22:568 (1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1) - comes from the highlighted pattern, I think it would be better making it consistent between themselves (1/1-wise, you can keep the 1/2 on the second part.)
If you don't know which notes I'm precisely talking about, these are 00:17:568 (2) - and 00:21:204 (2) -
Same as Kantan, very solid.
[Muzukashii]
At first sight, I had the impression that it was an easier Oni. Not saying that it was one.
01:02:795 (1,2,3) - You've used kkd numerous times before, why not here? Is that to make a don pattern of 2 notes ?
01:03:704 (1,2,1) - ^ same here (I think it used to be kkd before)
From 01:13:477 (1) - , I think it's a bit empty due to the absence of notes as in 01:13:932 - , 01:15:750 - , 01:21:204 - ... You miss a snare, I think.
Another solid map there, that's something I really like. However as I said, it feels like an Oni at times.
[Oni]
00:29:159 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I find that too bad that there's no finish at the end, but either way, I think that would break the whole pattern, unless jirostyle allows for big notes at the end of streams (which would surprise me)
00:44:386 (1) - Big don here ? We clearly hear a crash, that wouldn't be too much.
Oh man. That's one overly solid mapset. Good job!