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Taylor Swift - Fifteen [Osu|Taiko]

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BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke

Hello mancuso_JM_! Mod request via in game. Sorry for the delay!

[General]
  1. Everything checks out to be clear and rankable! No issues to point out! Excellent! ^_^
[Easy]
  1. 01:01:432 (3,4) - This spacing is quite strange because these angled sliders are overlapping each other and it doesn't look visually pleasing. Instead, it is better make these sliders linear and align them parallel to each other accordingly. Here is an example of what you could do:
    Image/Code
    36,116,61432,2,0,L|56:48,2,70,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    104,152,62374,2,0,L|84:220,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    176,184,63317,5,4,0:0:0:0:
  2. 02:08:657 (3,4) - Optional suggestion, but I personally would not make these patterns overlap each other when using a blanket pattern such as this as it looks unattractive to play. Instead, I would replace the curved V slider blanket with a circular slider blanket and increase the spacing to around 1.1x as it looks cleaner and doesn't overlap at all. Here is an example (again, this is optional):
    Image
  3. 02:56:406 (2,3) - These linear sliders are okay, but you could make these linear sliders more interesting by curving them. Here is an example if what you could do (btw, this does not affect spacing :3):
    Image/Code
    364,144,176406,2,0,B|308:128|300:80|300:80|292:36,1,140,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
    220,36,177348,2,0,B|212:80|212:80|204:128|148:144,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 04:24:364 (1) - The flow of the current pattern feels like a forced wave pattern when the music did not call for it. The flow between the notes can be improved by starting this slider upward (concave up) instead of downward. Here is an example:
    Image
  5. 04:35:987 (4) - Ewww! Not a good idea to overlap/hide the slider track like that. I know what you are trying to do here, but this slider could be confusing and almost feels like a semi-burai slider. What you could possibly do is to separate the middle anchor points (similar to the slider at 04:42:898), but I fully recommend to rearrange this slider shape.
[Normal]
  1. Optional, but I recommend to increase the Approach Rate to 5 to have a steady AR difficulty spread. Since Easy and Hard difficulty has set on 3 and 7 respectively, setting the AR to 5 in Normal should be okay! Of course, this is optional.
  2. 00:13:997 (2,3,4,1) - Optional, but I just thought about something you could do here. It will require adjusting the patterns at 00:14:940 (3,4) though, but I believe in the end that the pattern will look more aesthetically pleasing. Here it goes: Try moving 1 at 168|144 so the start of 1 and the end of 2 is parallel with 00:14:940 (3,4).
  3. 00:40:699 (1,2,3,4) - Nazi suggestion, but I would move this whole pattern starting at 328|328 to make a nice triangle pattern at 00:40:071 (3,1,2).
  4. 00:56:092 (2) - Another nazi suggestion, but this map design is calling for it (I also noticed that the patterns in the 2nd verse are much cleaner than the 1st verse XD). Anyways, try moving this circle a grid down for consistent spacing and a nice triangle pattern.
  5. 00:59:547 (3,4,5) - Nothing major, but it caught my eye. The spacing between 1 and 2 is a grid off, which can be easily fixed by moving 2 and 3 (and possibly 4) a grid up. You may have to fix 02:08:657 (1,2,3) as well if suggested.
  6. 02:56:406 (1,2,3) - Personally, I would try a symmetrical approach such as moving this pattern at 8|192 while also stacking 3 with 02:56:092 (2). You don't really have to do this as this is my personal preference, but I'm a huge fan of symmetry and aesthetics XD.
[Hard]
  1. While test playing this difficulty, I didn't notice anything flow breaking at all. I received a S rank in my first attempt! Good job in flow! :3
  2. 01:19:966 (7,8,1,2) - Wait! D: Why not make 7 and 8 symmetrical with 01:17:767 (2,3)? I was expecting it too XD. Well actually, my main reason is because you could of make the sliders at 01:20:594 (1,2) symmetrical afterwards XD. Yes, it would require spacing change, but it would be much of a hassle since there is a break time nearby. Just an optional suggestion. :P
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:08:029 (22,23) - I would consider swapping these notes to due to stay consistent with the guitar sounds.
  2. 00:13:997 (40,41,42,43) - Compare to 00:12:427 (35,36), the vocal sections are relatively inconsistent. I would try dkdk instead if you are following the vocals. However, if you were following the guitar sounds, the current pattern seems fine.
  3. 00:28:133 (82) - I can hear an increased pitch of the guitar here. Consider inserting a kat here to emphasize it. If considered, add one at 00:30:018 (88) as well. :3
  4. 01:26:563 (262) - There's nothing audible here. I believe you meant to move this kat at 01:26:720 (262). If not, please ignore.
  5. 02:55:463 (215,216) - Try swapping these notes as it emphasizes well with the higher percussions.
[Oni]
  1. Your Oni difficulty is pretty good. There's nothing much to point out. :3
  2. 02:57:976 (387) - The don sounds better with the supporting percussions. I would add one here. :3
  3. 03:55:777 (602,603) - This part sound awkward with the vocals. Consider swapping these notes for a better emphasis.
Good map and well-structured map overall. The song is pretty sad, but the map itself is pretty fun to play. I would like to see this map ranked soon. Good luck with your map! ^_^

EDIT: Added QAT banner since this map was choosen via QAT queue! :3
Last edited by BeatofIke , edited 1 time in total.
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
From queue :3

Easy:

00:28:133 (1) - Delete Whistle at the end.
00:31:903 (3) - Delete Whistle at the head.
00:59:547 (1) - I doubt a 3/4 slider reverse would be nice for an easy. Rather deleting (2), and increasing the slider by 1/4 would be better.
02:24:992 (2) - ^
01:25:935 - Useless timeline.
01:52:322 (3) - Delete Whistle at the head.
02:36:301 (1) - Uhh,, This kind of slider in an easy will be confusing a little. Maybe try this slider, which has a circle in the middle? And adjust Distance of 02:38:814 (1).
SPOILER
180,176,156301,6,2,B|320:148|360:52|256:-8|152:52|192:148|332:176,1,420,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
04:13:997 (3) - Delete Clap at the head.
04:35:987 (4) - Well, I think this slider is too complex as an easy too.

Normal:

00:30:961 (2) - Umm just a single circle may be enough for a Normal imo.
01:23:107 (4) - Delete Clap at the head.
01:25:935 - Useless timeline.
01:39:442 (2) - 1 Grid left for distance.
01:55:463 (4) - Reduce 1/4? Again, the fast click in normal didn't felt nice.
03:32:846 (1) - ^
03:59:233 (1,2) - Start NC from (2) to follow the lyrics?
04:01:746 (1,2) - ^?
04:03:317 (3,4) - Make (3) a note?
04:06:772 (1) - Reduce 1/4? Yeah, feel free to ignore all these kind of suggestions.
04:10:856 (3) - Symmetry is good too, but I think breaking to a note and a 1/2 slider may fit the lyric better.
04:13:997 (4) - Delete Clap at the head.
04:38:814 (4) - Well just a round slider would be nice enough lol

Hard:

00:43:526 (1) - Delete Whistle? Feels spammed.
00:46:353 (2) - Delete Whistle at the reverse?
01:04:887 (6) - Delete Whistle at the end. I think the whistle is louder than the vocal to match.
01:09:914 (4) - ^
02:06:144 (1) - 1 Grid right?
03:59:076 (7) - Add a Clap?
04:13:683 (6) - Delete Clap at the end.

Good map, with neat patterns.
Zexion
308 posts
Joined May 2012
Zexion
Hola que tal, te prometí un mod y lo prometido es deuda jajaja. Todas son sugerencias estéticas y algunas de ritmo, además de eso no tengo nada que objetar! Preferí usar imágenes para la mayoría porque me ayuda a ilustrar mejor mis ideas. Por cierto, no se modear taiko asi que las salté.

[Hard]
00:27:191 (3) Creo que la dirección de este slider no sigue bien el flow puesto que las siguientes notas van arriba y este apunta a la izquierda. Intenta algo asi?:
SPOILER
00:37:243 (4) Curva este slider un poco? Se ve mejor.
SPOILER
01:13:055 Agrega una nota con clap?
01:21:537 Se me ocurre que podrías utilizar el mismo pattern de doublets que usaste antes, algo asi: (la nota en la que estoy posicionado es la de 01:21:537 )
SPOILER
02:17:924 Una linea recta entre estas notas?
SPOILER
02:46:982 Esto sigue mejor el ritmo a mi gusto, es el mismo pattern de doublets
SPOILER
03:03:788 (6) Esta nota me suena que está de sobra. Considera eliminarla.
03:31:903 (2,3,4,5) Separa estas en dos doublets
SPOILER
03:49:338 (4) Creo que suena mejor sin esta nota.
04:42:898 Creeeo que con sampleset soft suena mejor, pero ni yo estoy seguro jajaja

Notable, muy entretenida para jugar.


[Normal]
00:49:809 Escucho un beat de la canción acá, creo que podrías colocar una nota.
00:52:636 Usa un slider con una repetición para que seguir la batería de la canción.
SPOILER
[img]]http://puu.sh/4Ykd0.jpg[/img]
02:17:539 (3) Igual que lo de arriba!
02:42:898 (1) Me parece algo engañoso que un slider en una normal empiece del lado opuesto desde donde estaba la nota anterior, considera usar Ctrl+G y ordenar el resto. Mejor que no porque tendrías que re-ordenar todos los patterns siguientes xD
03:33:291 (2) No me gusta este overlap :( , pero es algo personal jajaj.
04:03:317 (3) Este slider de medio tiempo no suena bien. Y si usas solo una nota y el otro slider?
SPOILER

Me gustó bastante, solo que creo que usaste quizás muchas notas "stackeadas", y no se si eso le va bien a una dificultad normal. Buenos sliders!


[Easy]
00:40:081 (3,4) Creo que nunca es bueno hacer overlaps en dificultades fáciles, podrías cambiarlo.
00:44:783 (2) Suena bien pero lo veo medio dificil de seguir para una dificultad facil...
01:51:694 (2) Creo que con un Ctrl+H sigue mejor el flow, pero lo mismo del overlap despues...


No se me ocurre nada mas! :c, pero es un excelente mapa! Que sliders mas geniales :D

======================================================================================
Vaya, creo que es el mapa mas largo que he modeado. Espero algo de lo que haya dicho te sirva, saludos y espero verlo rankeado pronto :D
mancuso_JM_
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4,615 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
mancuso_JM_
BeatofIke
SPOILER

BeatofIke wrote:

Hello mancuso_JM_! Mod request via in game. Sorry for the delay!

[General]
  1. Everything checks out to be clear and rankable! No issues to point out! Excellent! ^_^
[Easy]
  1. 01:01:432 (3,4) - This spacing is quite strange because these angled sliders are overlapping each other and it doesn't look visually pleasing. Instead, it is better make these sliders linear and align them parallel to each other accordingly. Here is an example of what you could do: Hmm.. I prefer to deny this because I like it those curved sliders, in addition with your code appears a weird overlap that I dislike it. So, I'll keep these curved sliders
    Image/Code
    36,116,61432,2,0,L|56:48,2,70,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    104,152,62374,2,0,L|84:220,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    176,184,63317,5,4,0:0:0:0:
  2. 02:08:657 (3,4) - Optional suggestion, but I personally would not make these patterns overlap each other when using a blanket pattern such as this as it looks unattractive to play. Instead, I would replace the curved V slider blanket with a circular slider blanket and increase the spacing to around 1.1x as it looks cleaner and doesn't overlap at all. Here is an example (again, this is optional): I like how it looks this one too :/. In addition, it is not that overlapped :p
    Image
  3. 02:56:406 (2,3) - These linear sliders are okay, but you could make these linear sliders more interesting by curving them. Here is an example if what you could do (btw, this does not affect spacing :3): Nice one.. Applied.
    Image/Code
    364,144,176406,2,0,B|308:128|300:80|300:80|292:36,1,140,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
    220,36,177348,2,0,B|212:80|212:80|204:128|148:144,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 04:24:364 (1) - The flow of the current pattern feels like a forced wave pattern when the music did not call for it. The flow between the notes can be improved by starting this slider upward (concave up) instead of downward. Here is an example: Good idea.. Fixed.
    Image
  5. 04:35:987 (4) - Ewww! Not a good idea to overlap/hide the slider track like that. I know what you are trying to do here, but this slider could be confusing and almost feels like a semi-burai slider. What you could possibly do is to separate the middle anchor points (similar to the slider at 04:42:898), but I fully recommend to rearrange this slider shape. I personally like the way that this slider follow the music and definetly is not hard to read. Anyway, since you looked convinced of that suggestion I won't denied this completely but I'll wait for future modders, if somebody else mention me that I'll probably fix it.
[Normal]
  1. Optional, but I recommend to increase the Approach Rate to 5 to have a steady AR difficulty spread. Since Easy and Hard difficulty has set on 3 and 7 respectively, setting the AR to 5 in Normal should be okay! Of course, this is optional. Hmm.. Ok, because this was suggested before by other modders.
  2. 00:13:997 (2,3,4,1) - Optional, but I just thought about something you could do here. It will require adjusting the patterns at 00:14:940 (3,4) though, but I believe in the end that the pattern will look more aesthetically pleasing. Here it goes: Try moving 1 at 168|144 so the start of 1 and the end of 2 is parallel with 00:14:940 (3,4). Alright.. fixed.
  3. 00:40:699 (1,2,3,4) - Nazi suggestion, but I would move this whole pattern starting at 328|328 to make a nice triangle pattern at 00:40:071 (3,1,2). lol.. fixed :P
  4. 00:56:092 (2) - Another nazi suggestion, but this map design is calling for it (I also noticed that the patterns in the 2nd verse are much cleaner than the 1st verse XD). Anyways, try moving this circle a grid down for consistent spacing and a nice triangle pattern. it doesn't make the difference but done.
  5. 00:59:547 (3,4,5) - Nothing major, but it caught my eye. The spacing between 1 and 2 is a grid off, which can be easily fixed by moving 2 and 3 (and possibly 4) a grid up. You may have to fix 02:08:657 (1,2,3) as well if suggested. I did that, especially for flow.. Is a little change but still I prefer to keep that.
  6. 02:56:406 (1,2,3) - Personally, I would try a symmetrical approach such as moving this pattern at 8|192 while also stacking 3 with 02:56:092 (2). You don't really have to do this as this is my personal preference, but I'm a huge fan of symmetry and aesthetics XD. Fixed but moved to y:188 instead :P
[Hard]
  1. While test playing this difficulty, I didn't notice anything flow breaking at all. I received a S rank in my first attempt! Good job in flow! :3 Thanks! :)
  2. 01:19:966 (7,8,1,2) - Wait! D: Why not make 7 and 8 symmetrical with 01:17:767 (2,3)? I was expecting it too XD. Well actually, my main reason is because you could of make the sliders at 01:20:594 (1,2) symmetrical afterwards XD. Yes, it would require spacing change, but it would be much of a hassle since there is a break time nearby. Just an optional suggestion. :P LOL.. I didn't expect a symetrical pattern here, and it is not the best place to use symetrical things (at least on my point of view).. Keeping that because I like how it flows especially :P
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:08:029 (22,23) - I would consider swapping these notes to due to stay consistent with the guitar sounds. I wanted some of variety here, and definetly the k d works too. So, no changes here.
  2. 00:13:997 (40,41,42,43) - Compare to 00:12:427 (35,36), the vocal sections are relatively inconsistent. I would try dkdk instead if you are following the vocals. However, if you were following the guitar sounds, the current pattern seems fine. Hmm.. I definetly prefer the d k k d pattern here, I think it fits with both, vocals and guitar.
  3. 00:28:133 (82) - I can hear an increased pitch of the guitar here. Consider inserting a kat here to emphasize it. If considered, add one at 00:30:018 (88) as well. :3 Not really necesary I have to say, especially because this is a Muzu and I used combined 1/4 patterns only if it is necessary-
  4. 01:26:563 (262) - There's nothing audible here. I believe you meant to move this kat at 01:26:720 (262). If not, please ignore. This definetly sounds much better! Fixed moving (262) to 01:26:720
  5. 02:55:463 (215,216) - Try swapping these notes as it emphasizes well with the higher percussions. Sure thing.. Done.
[Oni]
  1. Your Oni difficulty is pretty good. There's nothing much to point out. :3 Thanks :3
  2. 02:57:976 (387) - The don sounds better with the supporting percussions. I would add one here. :3 Okie.
  3. 03:55:777 (602,603) - This part sound awkward with the vocals. Consider swapping these notes for a better emphasis. Fixed.
Good map and well-structured map overall. The song is pretty sad, but the map itself is pretty fun to play. I would like to see this map ranked soon. Good luck with your map! ^_^
Thanks!!

Sonnyc

Sonnyc wrote:

From queue :3

Easy:

00:28:133 (1) - Delete Whistle at the end.
00:31:903 (3) - Delete Whistle at the head. Sound reasonable, both delated.
00:59:547 (1) - I doubt a 3/4 slider reverse would be nice for an easy. Rather deleting (2), and increasing the slider by 1/4 would be better.
02:24:992 (2) - ^ I used them due to the low BPM and I think it won't provide a complication due to this reason. I prefer to keep them.
01:25:935 - Useless timeline. Wut? The kiai finish in this point :P
01:52:322 (3) - Delete Whistle at the head. k
02:36:301 (1) - Uhh,, This kind of slider in an easy will be confusing a little. Maybe try this slider, which has a circle in the middle? And adjust Distance of 02:38:814 (1). I forgot to change this before, fixed now.
SPOILER
180,176,156301,6,2,B|320:148|360:52|256:-8|152:52|192:148|332:176,1,420,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
04:13:997 (3) - Delete Clap at the head. Alright.. Removed.
04:35:987 (4) - Well, I think this slider is too complex as an easy too. Any suggestion? Well, as I explained before I don't find it hard to read at all :/.

Normal:

00:30:961 (2) - Umm just a single circle may be enough for a Normal imo. Done.
01:23:107 (4) - Delete Clap at the head. It's following the drums properly, I prefer to keep it.
01:25:935 - Useless timeline. Same as easy.
01:39:442 (2) - 1 Grid left for distance. lol.. ok xD
01:55:463 (4) - Reduce 1/4? Again, the fast click in normal didn't felt nice.
03:32:846 (1) - ^ I personally think that they are reasonable for a Normal..
03:59:233 (1,2) - Start NC from (2) to follow the lyrics?
04:01:746 (1,2) - ^? But this would be inconsistent with my comboing, because I put them following the downbeats.
04:03:317 (3,4) - Make (3) a note? Fixed.
04:06:772 (1) - Reduce 1/4? Yeah, feel free to ignore all these kind of suggestions. Same as before xDD
04:10:856 (3) - Symmetry is good too, but I think breaking to a note and a 1/2 slider may fit the lyric better.I used a 1/1 because the vocals it is represented in a long pitch, and not a short one.. I think this makes sense.
04:13:997 (4) - Delete Clap at the head. Same as before.
04:38:814 (4) - Well just a round slider would be nice enough lol I like it, let me keep this one xDD.

Hard:

00:43:526 (1) - Delete Whistle? Feels spammed. Fixed
00:46:353 (2) - Delete Whistle at the reverse? I prefer to keep it due to the sound in the ''clap'' in the instrumental.
01:04:887 (6) - Delete Whistle at the end. I think the whistle is louder than the vocal to match.
01:09:914 (4) - ^ Both deleted
02:06:144 (1) - 1 Grid right? I like this curve, and the spacing issue is so little
03:59:076 (7) - Add a Clap? Oh.. something were missed in this pattern and it was that clap xD. Added.
04:13:683 (6) - Delete Clap at the end. it fits with drums imo.

Good map, with neat patterns.
Thanks for the mod and star! :D

Zexion

Zexion wrote:

Hola que tal, te prometí un mod y lo prometido es deuda jajaja. Todas son sugerencias estéticas y algunas de ritmo, además de eso no tengo nada que objetar! Preferí usar imágenes para la mayoría porque me ayuda a ilustrar mejor mis ideas. Por cierto, no se modear taiko asi que las salté.

[Hard]
00:27:191 (3) Creo que la dirección de este slider no sigue bien el flow puesto que las siguientes notas van arriba y este apunta a la izquierda. Intenta algo asi?: A mi me gusta como fluye y como se ve. Lo dejo por ahora como esta :P
SPOILER
00:37:243 (4) Curva este slider un poco? Se ve mejor. En este caso me gusta mas recto, en mi opinion se siente mejor despues del Slider en 1/1 curvo.
SPOILER
01:13:055 Agrega una nota con clap? Pero no hay sonido ahi xD. Una pausa es la mejor opcion sin dudas.
01:21:537 Se me ocurre que podrías utilizar el mismo pattern de doublets que usaste antes, algo asi: (la nota en la que estoy posicionado es la de 01:21:537 ) Segui el sonido de la guitarra en conjunto con los drums para agregar los 2-plets, y se siente mejor como esta, prefiero no tocar esto.
SPOILER
02:17:924 Una linea recta entre estas notas? algo nazi, pero bueno.. Hecho xD.
SPOILER
02:46:982 Esto sigue mejor el ritmo a mi gusto, es el mismo pattern de doublets Hmm.. no estoy de acuerdo. Hay en algunos puntos donde agregaste el final de los kicks sliders donde no hay ningun sonido, entonces no tiene sentido agregar notas, objetos en estos puntos. Creo que de mi modo, esta siguiendo la guitarra (principalmente) de una mejor manera.
SPOILER
03:03:788 (6) Esta nota me suena que está de sobra. Considera eliminarla. Hmm.. yo siento un sonidito ahi sobre ese beat :P (intenta escuchando en 25% playback si no lo escuchas en velocidad normal).
03:31:903 (2,3,4,5) Separa estas en dos doublets UN 3-plet sigue mejor la guitarra :/
SPOILER
03:49:338 (4) Creo que suena mejor sin esta nota. lol.. es bastante notorio el sonido ahi xDD.
04:42:898 Creeeo que con sampleset soft suena mejor, pero ni yo estoy seguro jajaja xDD.. Siento que el normal sigue mejor los drums.

Notable, muy entretenida para jugar. Gracias! :)


[Normal]
00:49:809 Escucho un beat de la canción acá, creo que podrías colocar una nota. No se siente tan necesario, viendo que estoy siguiendo lo mas importante del instrumental.
00:52:636 Usa un slider con una repetición para que seguir la batería de la canción. Lo sentia algo dificil, pero bueno.. lo cambie igual :P
SPOILER
[img]]http://puu.sh/4Ykd0.jpg[/img]
02:17:539 (3) Igual que lo de arriba! ^
02:42:898 (1) Me parece algo engañoso que un slider en una normal empiece del lado opuesto desde donde estaba la nota anterior, considera usar Ctrl+G y ordenar el resto. Mejor que no porque tendrías que re-ordenar todos los patterns siguientes xD lol
03:33:291 (2) No me gusta este overlap :( , pero es algo personal jajaj. A mi si xD
04:03:317 (3) Este slider de medio tiempo no suena bien. Y si usas solo una nota y el otro slider? Si, lo arregle en un mod anterior a esto.
SPOILER

Me gustó bastante, solo que creo que usaste quizás muchas notas "stackeadas", y no se si eso le va bien a una dificultad normal. Buenos sliders!


[Easy]
00:40:081 (3,4) Creo que nunca es bueno hacer overlaps en dificultades fáciles, podrías cambiarlo. Pero este no es tan grande y fluye bien.
00:44:783 (2) Suena bien pero lo veo medio dificil de seguir para una dificultad facil... Hmm.. no.. no creo que esto sea dificil xD
01:51:694 (2) Creo que con un Ctrl+H sigue mejor el flow, pero lo mismo del overlap despues... Mismo que el primero..


No se me ocurre nada mas! :c, pero es un excelente mapa! Que sliders mas geniales :D

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Vaya, creo que es el mapa mas largo que he modeado. Espero algo de lo que haya dicho te sirva, saludos y espero verlo rankeado pronto :D
Gracias por el mod! :D.. Se aprecia ^_^

Thanks guys!
Updated ^^!
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30

from the QAT-queue


[General]
The timing is off, multiple sections are required.
I came up with this, it's certainly better but you might need someone else to recheck it.

Offset 515 BPM 95,5
Offset 45740 BPM 95,5
Offset 73373 BPM 95,5
Offset 178910 BPM 95,5

[Easy]
00:10:542 (1) - remove the hitfinish here? I think it sounds better without since there's nothing in the song that sounds similar.
01:02:374 (4) - make prev/next equal here?
02:46:353 (1) - stack this on (2)?
04:39:442 (1) - spacing too big, keep consistent and make everything 1/2 apart overlap

[Normal]
01:09:285 (3) - To make this look prettier, make sure the distance between (3) and (2) is the same as the distance between (3) and endpoint of (1)
02:58:291 (3,4,1) - ^

[Hard]
goood

taikos are good too.
mancuso_JM_
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happy30 wrote:


from the QAT-queue Hiya!


[General]
The timing is off, multiple sections are required.
I came up with this, it's certainly better but you might need someone else to recheck it.

Offset 515 BPM 95,5
Offset 45740 BPM 95,5
Offset 73373 BPM 95,5
Offset 178910 BPM 95,5 I'll wait for a confirmation before to change that..

[Easy]
00:10:542 (1) - remove the hitfinish here? I think it sounds better without since there's nothing in the song that sounds similar. Used a whistle instead.
01:02:374 (4) - make prev/next equal here? Ok, used 1.1x in distance spacing for this pattern
02:46:353 (1) - stack this on (2)? Hmm.. k
04:39:442 (1) - spacing too big, keep consistent and make everything 1/2 apart overlap Is not too big, during the gameplay 1.1 and 1.0 is almost the same thing. I'll keep it because for the sake of the blanketing pattern and for the reason mentioned above ofc.

[Normal]
01:09:285 (3) - To make this look prettier, make sure the distance between (3) and (2) is the same as the distance between (3) and endpoint of (1) lol.. this is pretty nazi I think and I personally like how this looks. Especially the structure with the following objects.
02:58:291 (3,4,1) - ^ ^

[Hard]
goood

taikos are good too. Nice ^^.. Thanks!
Thanks for modding! :3
I'll be updating this later on..
Breeze
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Sorry for the super delay, this map is good, I can see nothing
I agree with happy30, your timing sounds off from the middle part, I've tried another timing which needs only one red line
BPM:95.505 Offset:500
Need someone more to comfire the timing :/
mancuso_JM_
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Breeze wrote:

Sorry for the super delay, this map is good, I can see nothing
I agree with happy30, your timing sounds off from the middle part, I've tried another timing which needs only one red line
BPM:95.505 Offset:500
Need someone more to comfire the timing :/
Thanks Breeze! I've talked to TicClick to see if he can check it.. I'll wait him for a confirmation! :3
Nwolf
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ARGH IT'S SO SLOW !"@!)?

woof again

[Muzu]

Reducing the amount of 1/4 notes a bit because I think there are a few too many (mainly at the beginning):
00:10:228 (28,29) - Delete these
00:11:327 - Add d, 00:11:484 (33) - change to k
00:13:526 (37,38,40,41) - Delete 38/41 and 37/40 d --> k
00:16:982 (48,49) - Delete 48, 49 d --> k
00:19:495 (56) - Delete
00:25:463 (72) - Delete
00:38:657 (115) - Delete
00:46:196 (141) - Delete
00:58:291 (178) - No finisher here, doesn't fit
01:00:804 (186) - ^

finisher stuff for the other choruses too (if they are in the same place as the ones mentioned)

that's it for Muzu, increase in difficulty during the diff sounds like a nice idea (and it is existent before this mod anyway)

[Oni]

Less overmapping in the first strophe maybe (not intro), so the map doesn't start with a high amount of 1/4 notes (more than that kiai part has)

02:01:118 (154,196) - Finishers don't fit


Nice taikos, gl for rank^^
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I am happy with both Breeze's and happy30's timings (though happy's requres an extra offset at 183951, I think), but it's better to apply the one with less offsets (read: Breeze's); it also gives a better approximation at the beginning (for me, 515 is too late).
Also, there's a pretty random clap at 01:19:348 (6), mind removing it?

P.S. I hope I didn't screw it up.
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Nwolf wrote:

ARGH IT'S SO SLOW !"@!)? DT for the sake! :D

woof again xDD

[Muzu]

Reducing the amount of 1/4 notes a bit because I think there are a few too many (mainly at the beginning): But at the beginning is where the guitar act with more frecuency I think, that's why I mapped in this way.
00:10:228 (28,29) - Delete these I don't think so, because the sound over those ticks is pretty high.
00:11:327 - Add d, 00:11:484 (33) - change to k the music goes in a lower pitch in this section, so I prefer to use some of 1/2 instead.
00:13:526 (37,38,40,41) - Delete 38/41 and 37/40 d --> k
00:16:982 (48,49) - Delete 48, 49 d --> k
00:19:495 (56) - Delete
00:25:463 (72) - Delete
00:38:657 (115) - Delete
00:46:196 (141) - Delete Well, I fixed some of them (where the music goes in a less pitch) and I kept those that I found necessary to follow the music in a proper way.
00:58:291 (178) - No finisher here, doesn't fit
01:00:804 (186) - ^ Both fixed.

finisher stuff for the other choruses too (if they are in the same place as the ones mentioned)

that's it for Muzu, increase in difficulty during the diff sounds like a nice idea (and it is existent before this mod anyway) lol.. yeah xDD

[Oni]

Less overmapping in the first strophe maybe (not intro), so the map doesn't start with a high amount of 1/4 notes (more than that kiai part has) I did some tiny changes here.

02:01:118 (154,196) - Finishers don't fit Removed


Nice taikos, gl for rank^^
Thanks a lot Woof..

TicClick wrote:

I am happy with both Breeze's and happy30's timings (though happy's requres an extra offset at 183951, I think), but it's better to apply the one with less offsets (read: Breeze's); it also gives a better approximation at the beginning (for me, 515 is too late).
Also, there's a pretty random clap at 01:19:348 (6), mind removing it?

P.S. I hope I didn't screw it up.
Thanks man! I used Breeze's timing then! :D..
Lol'd.. Removed this clap xDD..

Everything should be done here (resnapped all notes and kiai, recalculated sliders length and fixed some other issue manually :P)
Updated!
wcx19911123
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as your request

[General]
widescreen support is not the same in all diffs(don't know how it works)
the current timing is fine(BPM 95.505 offset 500)

[Easy]
03:49:179 - 03:49:493 - try some drum hitclap or hitfinish here? they sound nice
04:02:058 (4) - hope you can move this slider up a bit, it's nearly out of the screen
04:44:464 - put a circle at x:404 y:112? for better symmetry and to follow the finish in the music

[Normal]
02:28:450 (1,3) - this 2 sliders seems can blanket better
03:30:960 (3) - put it at x:256 y:240? flow can be better imo
03:49:493 - same as Easy here
04:44:464 - same as Easy here, well this pattern is hard to be symmetrical..

[Hard]
02:08:346 (9,10,1) - is this manually stacks? if not, please stack them better
03:16:510 - break should start at here, the current one need to resnap
03:49:493 - same as Easy

nice map, feel free to call me back
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wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request Hiya!

[General]
widescreen support is not the same in all diffs(don't know how it works) Removed in Normal, is just useless because I don't have a sb xD
the current timing is fine(BPM 95.505 offset 500) oh.. yes! Thanks :3

[Easy]
03:49:179 - 03:49:493 - try some drum hitclap or hitfinish here? they sound nice Sure.. why not?
04:02:058 (4) - hope you can move this slider up a bit, it's nearly out of the screen Made some little tweaks in this pattern and fixed.
04:44:464 - put a circle at x:404 y:112? for better symmetry and to follow the finish in the music Hmm.. Alright.

[Normal]
02:28:450 (1,3) - this 2 sliders seems can blanket better I just moved (2,3) one grid left, is the best I can do actually.
03:30:960 (3) - put it at x:256 y:240? flow can be better imo There is no overlap during the gameplay, so fixed.
03:49:493 - same as Easy here Added
04:44:464 - same as Easy here, well this pattern is hard to be symmetrical.. I put this new note in x:49 y:130 and it'll be symetric with the end of (1) xD.

[Hard]
02:08:346 (9,10,1) - is this manually stacks? if not, please stack them better I'm sure I've fixed this before :(.. Fixed now anyway.
03:16:510 - break should start at here, the current one need to resnap So little, but fixed anyway
03:49:493 - same as Easy Added (and in the previous note too).

nice map, feel free to call me back
Thanks a lot for modding, I fixed all in general :)..
Updated!
wcx19911123
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well, the standard diffs are ready
is the icon allowed, or I need to bubble after taiko icon?
mancuso_JM_
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wcx19911123 wrote:

well, the standard diffs are ready
is the icon allowed, or I need to bubble after taiko icon?
Yay! Thanks!
Yes, I think the icon is allowed now (I've seen it a lot of time lately).. so the next Taiko BAT can bubble the map if he/she think the taikos are ready.
Let's wait for it :)
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my kd pls hehehehehehehe
SPOILER
02:03 HeatKai: 00:28:456 (80,81,82,83) - i don't really like to see this kind of dk kd/ kd dk pattern in muzu
02:04 HeatKai: it's consider as hard
02:04 mancuso_JM_: but if you consider the really low bpm, I think this will not be hard in any aspect
02:05 HeatKai: I know the bpm is low. actually if the bpm is high, i don't even recommend dd kk/dd dd / kk kk pattern in muzu
02:05 HeatKai: lol
02:05 HeatKai: 00:45:104 (134,135,136,137,138) - this sounds better if k k d d k
02:06 mancuso_JM_: nice, changed
02:07 HeatKai: 00:51:073 (150) - add circle here ;w; and 00:51:701 (151) - 
02:08 HeatKai: why you didn't put circle at the obvious place that got drum sound ;w; so empty :p
02:09 HeatKai: 00:55:628 (166) - delete this circle, there's no beat. and ddd after another ddd is really tiring in muzu //yes bpm i remember lolol *Runs
02:09 mancuso_JM_:  I didn't want a consecutive pattern xD
02:09 mancuso_JM_: but alright
02:09 mancuso_JM_: btw, what about adding finishers in 00:50:759 - 00:51:387 - 00:52:015 - ?
02:10 mancuso_JM_: I like how the emphasize those drums
02:10 mancuso_JM_: lol.. removed xD
02:10 HeatKai: i think normal d fits more. if d D d D, the D will be louder then the normal ones .__. but in the song it's almost the same volume
02:12 mancuso_JM_: but I think there is an extra sound in those objects, maybe it'll sound a bit exagerated big dons, but I think a constant d d d d d is pretty borring
02:12 mancuso_JM_: boring*
02:12 mancuso_JM_: maybe some kats? or something xD?
02:12 HeatKai: if you want too, then adding some kat might solve it
02:13 HeatKai: adding D is confusing, giving extra marks and who can't press two key in the same time. gg no extra mark /runs
02:13 HeatKai: 01:15:888 (229) - k
02:13 mancuso_JM_: xD
02:13 mancuso_JM_: alright, I used some kats then
02:14 HeatKai: lol
02:14 mancuso_JM_: nah.. I think in this case the big don fits better with the pitch in the music
02:16 HeatKai: 01:40:075 (298,299) - d k
02:16 HeatKai: 01:41:332 (303,304,305) -  d k d
02:17 HeatKai: 01:53:268 (25,26) - why not try to delete this two and leave a gap follows the vocal :3
02:18 mancuso_JM_: all fixed D:
02:18 mancuso_JM_: and used d d k d pattern in the last one
02:19 HeatKai: d
02:19 HeatKai: 02:12:116 (88) - 
02:19 HeatKai: d
02:19 HeatKai: lol
02:19 HeatKai: forgot to paste
02:20 mancuso_JM_: xD
02:21 mancuso_JM_: alrighty
02:21 HeatKai: 02:17:770 (99) - circleeeeee
02:22 HeatKai: 02:20:597 (110) - k
02:22 HeatKai: 02:21:068 (112) - delete
02:23 mancuso_JM_: fixed, fixed, fixed :p
02:23 HeatKai: good boy mancuso
02:23 HeatKai: HAHAHA
02:23 *HeatKai runs
02:24 mancuso_JM_: haha
02:24 HeatKai: 02:26:565 (130,131,132,133) - just hling
02:24 HeatKai: 02:28:136 (135) - k
02:25 mancuso_JM_: lol, fixed xD
02:26 HeatKai: 03:05:516 (245) - add circle
02:26 HeatKai: 03:06:144 (247) - ^
02:26 HeatKai: 03:08:029 (251) - ^
02:26 HeatKai: 03:08:657 (252) - ^
02:28 HeatKai: 03:46:980 (356,357,358,359) - 
02:28 mancuso_JM_: I think I mentioned that, but I only wants to use notes in the highest pitch in this section
02:28 mancuso_JM_: the only things that fit here are dons
02:28 mancuso_JM_: and these highest points in the instrumental won't be emphasized if I add more dons in te middle
02:28 mancuso_JM_: dat hl xD
02:29 HeatKai: 04:39:752 (513,514,515,516) - 
02:29 HeatKai: well it's okay if you don't want too
02:29 HeatKai: because straight 1/2 in muzu is
02:29 HeatKai: weird
02:29 HeatKai: lol
02:30 mancuso_JM_: xD
02:31 HeatKai: and dat kkd
02:31 HeatKai: ddk
02:31 HeatKai: or whatever that's not kkk ddd
02:31 mancuso_JM_: is kkk now :p
02:33 HeatKai: hahah
02:34 HeatKai: the oni is pretty smooth
02:35 mancuso_JM_: :3 (?
02:36 HeatKai: 02:55:778 (377) - k
02:36 *HeatKai slap mancuso
02:38 mancuso_JM_: baka.. fixed xD
02:38 HeatKai: 03:17:453 (440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454) - well this part pattern sounds a lil off from the song
02:40 HeatKai: what i mean about lil off is
02:40 HeatKai: it doesn't really fit
02:41 mancuso_JM_: let me see
02:43 mancuso_JM_: I did something with guitar and vocals
02:44 HeatKai: ok nice
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HeatKai wrote:

my kd pls hehehehehehehe
SPOILER
02:03 HeatKai: 00:28:456 (80,81,82,83) - i don't really like to see this kind of dk kd/ kd dk pattern in muzu
02:04 HeatKai: it's consider as hard
02:04 mancuso_JM_: but if you consider the really low bpm, I think this will not be hard in any aspect
02:05 HeatKai: I know the bpm is low. actually if the bpm is high, i don't even recommend dd kk/dd dd / kk kk pattern in muzu
02:05 HeatKai: lol
02:05 HeatKai: 00:45:104 (134,135,136,137,138) - this sounds better if k k d d k
02:06 mancuso_JM_: nice, changed
02:07 HeatKai: 00:51:073 (150) - add circle here ;w; and 00:51:701 (151) - 
02:08 HeatKai: why you didn't put circle at the obvious place that got drum sound ;w; so empty :p
02:09 HeatKai: 00:55:628 (166) - delete this circle, there's no beat. and ddd after another ddd is really tiring in muzu //yes bpm i remember lolol *Runs
02:09 mancuso_JM_:  I didn't want a consecutive pattern xD
02:09 mancuso_JM_: but alright
02:09 mancuso_JM_: btw, what about adding finishers in 00:50:759 - 00:51:387 - 00:52:015 - ?
02:10 mancuso_JM_: I like how the emphasize those drums
02:10 mancuso_JM_: lol.. removed xD
02:10 HeatKai: i think normal d fits more. if d D d D, the D will be louder then the normal ones .__. but in the song it's almost the same volume
02:12 mancuso_JM_: but I think there is an extra sound in those objects, maybe it'll sound a bit exagerated big dons, but I think a constant d d d d d is pretty borring
02:12 mancuso_JM_: boring*
02:12 mancuso_JM_: maybe some kats? or something xD?
02:12 HeatKai: if you want too, then adding some kat might solve it
02:13 HeatKai: adding D is confusing, giving extra marks and who can't press two key in the same time. gg no extra mark /runs
02:13 HeatKai: 01:15:888 (229) - k
02:13 mancuso_JM_: xD
02:13 mancuso_JM_: alright, I used some kats then
02:14 HeatKai: lol
02:14 mancuso_JM_: nah.. I think in this case the big don fits better with the pitch in the music
02:16 HeatKai: 01:40:075 (298,299) - d k
02:16 HeatKai: 01:41:332 (303,304,305) -  d k d
02:17 HeatKai: 01:53:268 (25,26) - why not try to delete this two and leave a gap follows the vocal :3
02:18 mancuso_JM_: all fixed D:
02:18 mancuso_JM_: and used d d k d pattern in the last one
02:19 HeatKai: d
02:19 HeatKai: 02:12:116 (88) - 
02:19 HeatKai: d
02:19 HeatKai: lol
02:19 HeatKai: forgot to paste
02:20 mancuso_JM_: xD
02:21 mancuso_JM_: alrighty
02:21 HeatKai: 02:17:770 (99) - circleeeeee
02:22 HeatKai: 02:20:597 (110) - k
02:22 HeatKai: 02:21:068 (112) - delete
02:23 mancuso_JM_: fixed, fixed, fixed :p
02:23 HeatKai: good boy mancuso
02:23 HeatKai: HAHAHA
02:23 *HeatKai runs
02:24 mancuso_JM_: haha
02:24 HeatKai: 02:26:565 (130,131,132,133) - just hling
02:24 HeatKai: 02:28:136 (135) - k
02:25 mancuso_JM_: lol, fixed xD
02:26 HeatKai: 03:05:516 (245) - add circle
02:26 HeatKai: 03:06:144 (247) - ^
02:26 HeatKai: 03:08:029 (251) - ^
02:26 HeatKai: 03:08:657 (252) - ^
02:28 HeatKai: 03:46:980 (356,357,358,359) - 
02:28 mancuso_JM_: I think I mentioned that, but I only wants to use notes in the highest pitch in this section
02:28 mancuso_JM_: the only things that fit here are dons
02:28 mancuso_JM_: and these highest points in the instrumental won't be emphasized if I add more dons in te middle
02:28 mancuso_JM_: dat hl xD
02:29 HeatKai: 04:39:752 (513,514,515,516) - 
02:29 HeatKai: well it's okay if you don't want too
02:29 HeatKai: because straight 1/2 in muzu is
02:29 HeatKai: weird
02:29 HeatKai: lol
02:30 mancuso_JM_: xD
02:31 HeatKai: and dat kkd
02:31 HeatKai: ddk
02:31 HeatKai: or whatever that's not kkk ddd
02:31 mancuso_JM_: is kkk now :p
02:33 HeatKai: hahah
02:34 HeatKai: the oni is pretty smooth
02:35 mancuso_JM_: :3 (?
02:36 HeatKai: 02:55:778 (377) - k
02:36 *HeatKai slap mancuso
02:38 mancuso_JM_: baka.. fixed xD
02:38 HeatKai: 03:17:453 (440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454) - well this part pattern sounds a lil off from the song
02:40 HeatKai: what i mean about lil off is
02:40 HeatKai: it doesn't really fit
02:41 mancuso_JM_: let me see
02:43 mancuso_JM_: I did something with guitar and vocals
02:44 HeatKai: ok nice
I'll find an other taiko mod, and I'll bother you again xD!
TKS
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TKS
Let's go.


[Oni]
  1. 00:02:698 (10,11,12) - try to kdd. need the fit to strong bass sound. and kdd will make good contrast with here 00:05:211 (21,22,23)
    and 00:07:724 (32,33,34) - ^
  2. 00:10:237 (43,44,45) - ddk is better. fit the bass, guiter, and flow of song :D
  3. 00:30:498 (126) - del.
    and 00:30:655 (126) - finisher ? i need the finisher here. anyway, please try these patterns.
  4. 00:52:329 (215) - D ? i can hear kick sound again. also, current pattern has D is independence. D D pattern will make good flow i think.
  5. 01:14:632 (307,308,309,310,311) - k is a little noisy for me. please try ddd k k. these are simple pattern than your pattern. but can more fit the music imo.
  6. 01:19:972 (326) - => 01:19:658 - bassdrum is here. well its up to you.
  7. 01:30:338 (22) - k. please fit to bell? sound. same as 01:27:825 (12) -
    if you changed to above, 01:30:024 (21) - d is good :D
  8. 01:43:531 ~ 01:46:044 - del some notes? song is a quiet part. i want the accent.
  9. 01:53:583 (126) - k ? for guiter sound.
  10. 01:59:708 - you can add d. vocal is stretched. its up to you.
  11. 02:49:182 (348) - no finisher.
    02:49:653 - add d
    02:49:967 (352) - del.
    02:50:124 (352) - finisher
    and 02:50:438 (353) - no finisher. please try these patterns.
  12. 03:38:184 (525) - D
  13. 03:49:493 (574) - d ?
  14. 03:50:121 (576) - K is good. its beautiful flow.
  15. 03:56:089 - how? this part has cool guiter? sound i think. Image
  16. 04:35:354 (72) - if you want to use finisher. not here. maybe here? => 04:35:668 (73)
  17. 04:39:438 - add d. kdkd is good. but bassdrum is also strong.

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:28:456 (80,81,82,83) - kd dk is really harder pattern for Muzu. this song has lower bpm. but dont have to use here. k d k(1/2) is better.
  2. 01:00:025 (180) - hard rhythm of sudden ;_;
    00:59:868 - add d
    01:00:025 (180) - => 01:00:182
    and 01:00:496 (182) - del? well your pattern is no problem. its up to you.
  3. 01:12:276 (218,219) - dd. because sound is not high. and can emphasize K
  4. 01:55:467 (30) - K ?
  5. 01:55:938 (31) - del. this notes is make sense. but it rhythm was felt to be hard to hit.
  6. 02:56:092 (214) - del.
  7. 03:03:631 (235,236) - why only triplet here? del is better.
  8. 04:26:716 (461) - del.
    and 04:26:873 (461) - finisher. good flow.
if that was helpful, please mod this ;_;b https://osu.ppy.sh/s/106822

goodluck! :)
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Go find a taiko BAT! :D
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TKSalt wrote:

Let's go.


[Oni]
  1. 00:02:698 (10,11,12) - try to kdd. need the fit to strong bass sound. and kdd will make good contrast with here 00:05:211 (21,22,23) I find the highest pitch in the blue tick here, so I personally think dkd is the best option.
    and 00:07:724 (32,33,34) - ^ ^
  2. 00:10:237 (43,44,45) - ddk is better. fit the bass, guiter, and flow of song :D it sounds coherent. Fixed.
  3. 00:30:498 (126) - del.
    and 00:30:655 (126) - finisher ? i need the finisher here. anyway, please try these patterns. Hmm.. but the sound in there is pretty notorious. I'll keep it.
  4. 00:52:329 (215) - D ? i can hear kick sound again. also, current pattern has D is independence. D D pattern will make good flow i think. Sure.. Done.
  5. 01:14:632 (307,308,309,310,311) - k is a little noisy for me. please try ddd k k. these are simple pattern than your pattern. but can more fit the music imo.oh.. that's true. Fixed.
  6. 01:19:972 (326) - => 01:19:658 - bassdrum is here. well its up to you. Agree.. Fixed.
  7. 01:30:338 (22) - k. please fit to bell? sound. same as 01:27:825 (12) -
    if you changed to above, 01:30:024 (21) - d is good :D Both fixed! :P
  8. 01:43:531 ~ 01:46:044 - del some notes? song is a quiet part. i want the accent. yes, but guitar becomes in a higher pitch here, and i'm emphasizing the guitar in this part. That's why I prefer to keep that.
  9. 01:53:583 (126) - k ? for guiter sound. Sure.
  10. 01:59:708 - you can add d. vocal is stretched. its up to you. Hmm.. I didn't like that much, I prefer this d dkd pattern here.
  11. 02:49:182 (348) - no finisher. lol.. removed.
    02:49:653 - add d It doesn't fit really well with vocals nor drums, so i don't see a note here really necessary-
    02:49:967 (352) - del. But i can listen the drums in this beat, so I don't want to delete it.
    02:50:124 (352) - finisher
    and 02:50:438 (353) - no finisher. please try these patterns. Sorry, but I disagree about this.
  12. 03:38:184 (525) - D Fixed for consistency.
  13. 03:49:493 (574) - d ? I prefer to emphasize drums with kats here, if you listen properly the sound here and the sound in 03:49:179 - is similar. That's why I decided to use kats in both places
  14. 03:50:121 (576) - K is good. its beautiful flow. oh.. it's true. In addition both instrumental and vocals becomes in a high pitch, so it is a good thing this big kat.
  15. 03:56:089 - how? this part has cool guiter? sound i think. Image I definetly prefer my pattern here :P
  16. 04:35:354 (72) - if you want to use finisher. not here. maybe here? => 04:35:668 (73) Cymbals are acting in (72) and not in (73) here, that's why I used a finisher in (72).
  17. 04:39:438 - add d. kdkd is good. but bassdrum is also strong. Alright, I have a similar pattern in my ''Hard'' and others modders mentioned that before too. So, added.

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:28:456 (80,81,82,83) - kd dk is really harder pattern for Muzu. this song has lower bpm. but dont have to use here. k d k(1/2) is better. Meh.. you win guys (HeatKai said me the same :P), the BPM is really low, but ok, removed the kd dk and used other thing instead.
  2. 01:00:025 (180) - hard rhythm of sudden ;_;
    00:59:868 - add d
    01:00:025 (180) - => 01:00:182
    and 01:00:496 (182) - del? well your pattern is no problem. its up to you. Meh.. Fixed. Sounds good anyway.
  3. 01:12:276 (218,219) - dd. because sound is not high. and can emphasize K Hmm.. alright.
  4. 01:55:467 (30) - K ? Done
  5. 01:55:938 (31) - del. this notes is make sense. but it rhythm was felt to be hard to hit. Removed.
  6. 02:56:092 (214) - del. ok
  7. 03:03:631 (235,236) - why only triplet here? del is better. I prefer to keep this, because the sound in these beats is similar as the one that I wanted to follow.
  8. 04:26:716 (461) - del. If you listen the music in 25% playback, you'll notice that this note is following vocals.
    and 04:26:873 (461) - finisher. good flow. No, since I rejected your previous suggestion.
if that was helpful, please mod this ;_;b https://osu.ppy.sh/s/106822

goodluck! :)
Thanks for modding, it was helpful :D
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HeatKai
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i dun buble fo long time, lez go see hao dis go. /swag
jericho2442
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aaaand well....yup...its ranked ;)

grats
pw384
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AWESOME!!
P o M u T a
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P o M u T a

384059043 wrote:

AWESOME!!
TKS
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grats!
Kyouren
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Gratzz!! Mancuso_JM_!!^^

FIFTEEN!!!!!?????? XD
Zexion
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Felicidades Mancuso, es un excelente mapa :D

Saludos!
mancuso_JM_
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oh.. that was unexpected! :P
Thanks Jeri and thanks guys for the comments :3
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Felicidades~
Guess I should really work on dt...
cokeshawty
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Congrats (:
Dainesl
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Dainesl
I really think you should've added a Futsuu in there to give beginners something to enjoy...just saying.

It's only 96 BPM, so I think a Futsuu would've worked well.
Gero
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oh :3 Gratz Man!
Sieg
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\w/
Kodora
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congratz mancuso ~
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Taylor Swift <3!
Gratz
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