thanks for mod. :3[ Yuki ] wrote:
Hello~sjoy
M4M
[baka's Normal]
00:34:423 (3) - Ctrl+H and x:292,y:208 <<Orientation 00:21:520 (1,3) - and 00:31:842 (1,3) - the same mode. So this one remain.
02:48:616 (5) - NC? added
wow..very good
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Hi. From my modding queue.
[baka's Normal]
02:57:649 (1)
- Move to x:226 y:142 (disable Grid Snap if needed).
[Yuki's Hard]
00:24:261 (1)
- Move to x:68 y:228
00:28:616 (3)
- Move to x:224 y:176
00:31:519 (3)
- Move to x:196 y:184. Make sure to move (4) as well.
00:54:342 (4)
- Change it to something like this.
01:07:971 - 01:24:423
- The map is really confusing with those pauses.
01:36:358 (1)
- Move to x:296 y:224
01:49:261 - 02:05:713
- This part is confusing too.
[Lunatic]
01:12:165 (2)
- Change that slider to this.
01:25:947 (9)
- Move to x:292 y:224
Pretty much what I can find.
Fun map.
[baka's Normal]
02:57:649 (1)
- Move to x:226 y:142 (disable Grid Snap if needed).
[Yuki's Hard]
00:24:261 (1)
- Move to x:68 y:228
00:28:616 (3)
- Move to x:224 y:176
00:31:519 (3)
- Move to x:196 y:184. Make sure to move (4) as well.
00:54:342 (4)
- Change it to something like this.
01:07:971 - 01:24:423
- The map is really confusing with those pauses.
01:36:358 (1)
- Move to x:296 y:224
01:49:261 - 02:05:713
- This part is confusing too.
[Lunatic]
01:12:165 (2)
- Change that slider to this.
01:25:947 (9)
- Move to x:292 y:224
Pretty much what I can find.
Fun map.
thx for moddingMira-san wrote:
[Yuki's Hard]
00:24:261 (1) change to another place
- Move to x:68 y:228
00:28:616 (3) it makes me confused
- Move to x:224 y:176
00:31:519 (3) nope
- Move to x:196 y:184. Make sure to move (4) as well.
00:54:342 (4) ok
- Change it to something like this.
01:07:971 - 01:24:423 (σ‘・д･)σ
- The map is really confusing with those pauses.
01:36:358 (1) move to another place
- Move to x:296 y:224
01:49:261 - 02:05:713 nyanyanyanyanyanyanya
- This part is confusing too.
From my queue~
Thank you for M4M!
[General]
~Good Luck~
Thank you for M4M!
[General]
- For Tags, "zun" is suitable?
- Tags conflict with other diffs. ("[Minakami Yuki]" is lacked)
- because there is no easy-diff, it is better to make this diff easier. how about reducing 1/2 notes (red line) more?
- 01:24:745 (3,5) - avoid overlap
- 02:56:358 (3,1) - satck slider's heads correctly
- 03:06:681 (2,1) - ^
- 00:57:003 (3) - rotete more and avoid too overlap
- 01:02:165 (3) - ^
- 01:05:390 (1,1) - too difficult. make more time distance or move 01:07:971 (1) - more near the center
- 01:24:584 (6,7) - I prefer to chanoge for 1 slider
- 02:05:874 (6,7) - ^
- 02:24:745 (7,8) - rotete more and avoid too overlap
- 02:48:455 (1) - start at 02:48:616
- 03:00:229- it is better to add a note like the following
- 03:10:552 (1) - ^
- 03:12:971 (1) - delete. otherwise too difficult
- 03:20:874 (1) - same as 03:00:229-
- 03:31:197 (1) - ^
- 03:47:971 (7) - NC
- 00:16:041 (1) - whistle at whole slider is not suitable. add whistle only 00:16:041 and 00:16:202
- 00:43:778 (2,5) - stack correclty
- 01:46:036 (5) - it is better to change for symmetric slider about 01:46:358 (6) -
- 02:30:552 (3) - NC?
- 03:38:939 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - how about regular hexagon?SPOILER
68,173,218939,6,0,P|126:171|174:149,1,110.000003356934,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,67,219261,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,230,219423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,173,219584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,126,219745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,253,219907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
207,44,220068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,44,220149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,44,220229,6,0,P|259:24|328:34,1,110.000003356934,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
~Good Luck~
thx for moddingRandomEffect wrote:
[Yuki's Hard]
- 00:57:003 (3) - rotete more and avoid too overlap ok
- 01:02:165 (3) - ^ ok
- 01:05:390 (1,1) - too difficult. make more time distance or move 01:07:971 (1) - more near the center ok
- 01:24:584 (6,7) - I prefer to chanoge for 1 slider nope, it's fine
- 02:05:874 (6,7) - ^ ^
- 02:24:745 (7,8) - rotete more and avoid too overlap ok
- 02:48:455 (1) - start at 02:48:616 ok
- 03:00:229- it is better to add a note like the following I think it's fine
- 03:10:552 (1) - ^^
- 03:12:971 (1) - delete. otherwise too difficult ok
- 03:20:874 (1) - same as 03:00:229- same
- 03:31:197 (1) - ^ ^
- 03:47:971 (7) - NC ok
Topic Starter
thanks for moddingRandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
Thank you for M4M!
[General]
[Lunatic]Touhou <3
- 00:16:041 (1) - whistle at whole slider is not suitable. add whistle only 00:16:041 and 00:16:202 fixed
- 00:43:778 (2,5) - stack correclty fixed
- 01:46:036 (5) - it is better to change for symmetric slider about 01:46:358 (6) - fixed
- 02:30:552 (3) - NC? ok
- 03:38:939 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - how about regular hexagon? good~
SPOILER68,173,218939,6,0,P|126:171|174:149,1,110.000003356934,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,67,219261,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,230,219423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,173,219584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,126,219745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,253,219907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
207,44,220068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,44,220149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,44,220229,6,0,P|259:24|328:34,1,110.000003356934,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
~Good Luck~
thanks :3Mira-san wrote:
Hi. From my modding queue.
[baka's Normal]
02:57:649 (1)
- Move to x:226 y:142 (disable Grid Snap if needed).---fixed.
thx :3RandomEffect wrote:
[baka's Normal]all fixed
- Tags conflict with other diffs. ("[Minakami Yuki]" is lacked)
- because there is no easy-diff, it is better to make this diff easier. how about reducing 1/2 notes (red line) more?
- 01:24:745 (3,5) - avoid overlap
- 02:56:358 (3,1) - satck slider's heads correctly
- 03:06:681 (2,1) - ^
我只是提点我的看法 基本不用管的感觉。。
嘛嘛 大概就是这么多意见 normal我也看了下 感觉除了滑条形状别的不知道说什么
因为我也就是个新人 只能说说我的直观感觉。。。有用就最好了
Yuki's Hard
00:13:138 总觉得这里没有 滑条开始的好难受
01:20:229 ^
02:59:584 ^
03:09:907 ^
03:20:229 ^
00:40:874 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 这里的两个音效都巨奇怪 尤其是开始那里的D:C1 感觉音乐没那么大的变化 可是音效突变太厉害了
02:45:874 (1,2,3) - 这三个往返 我觉得第一个最后一个是长白线声音有一个大鼓点 和只有两个不一样 然后用一个样子放有点怪 反正我第一次看的时候就觉得很违和
02:52:487 (1) - 这啥？0.0 我25%速度听了半天没发现有曲调的突然转折啊
03:03:455 (3) - 感觉这类滑条速度慢点比较好 不过每个改比较麻烦就是了0.0
03:15:713 (1) - 这个后面柔和一点啊。。L难度那个我就很中意
03:26:036 (1) - ^
03:28:616 (1) - 为何为要这么尖锐0.0
03:33:374 (5) - 这个好难点啊喂 把这个做成滑条结尾是不是好点 和上一个note 这样他就能自动了0.0
题外话 命名难度的时候我该怎么知道yuki是值得你还是那个 [ yuki ] 你们两个什么关系，，
01:20:229 ^
02:59:584 ^
03:09:907 ^
03:20:229 ^
00:40:874 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 这里的两个音效都巨奇怪 尤其是开始那里的D:C1 感觉音乐没那么大的变化 可是音效突变太厉害了
02:45:874 (1,2,3) - 这三个往返 我觉得第一个最后一个是长白线声音有一个大鼓点 和只有两个不一样 然后用一个样子放有点怪 反正我第一次看的时候就觉得很违和
02:52:487 (1) - 这啥？0.0 我25%速度听了半天没发现有曲调的突然转折啊
03:03:455 (3) - 感觉这类滑条速度慢点比较好 不过每个改比较麻烦就是了0.0
03:15:713 (1) - 这个后面柔和一点啊。。L难度那个我就很中意
03:26:036 (1) - ^
03:28:616 (1) - 为何为要这么尖锐0.0
03:33:374 (5) - 这个好难点啊喂 把这个做成滑条结尾是不是好点 和上一个note 这样他就能自动了0.0
题外话 命名难度的时候我该怎么知道yuki是值得你还是那个 [ yuki ] 你们两个什么关系，，
Lunatic
02:30:068 (9) - 我觉得NC放在这里比较好看 没必要非要长白线吧。。。
00:20:557 为什么不用个 break 0.0
01:11:197 - 感觉这个弧度有点尖 有点难受
02:51:842 (2,3,4) - 前面连打那么大声 这里突然那么小落差太大 感觉这三个完全没有击打感
03:19:907 (2) - 这个小小的扭曲我喜欢！
03:23:455 (1) - 这里音乐就是一个完全的平调。。这个拐一下就很奇怪了 因为中间没有调的变化
03:29:100 (2) - 这里是个升调~是不是做个向上的滑条比较好0.0
00:20:557 为什么不用个 break 0.0
01:11:197 - 感觉这个弧度有点尖 有点难受
02:51:842 (2,3,4) - 前面连打那么大声 这里突然那么小落差太大 感觉这三个完全没有击打感
03:19:907 (2) - 这个小小的扭曲我喜欢！
03:23:455 (1) - 这里音乐就是一个完全的平调。。这个拐一下就很奇怪了 因为中间没有调的变化
03:29:100 (2) - 这里是个升调~是不是做个向上的滑条比较好0.0
嘛嘛 大概就是这么多意见 normal我也看了下 感觉除了滑条形状别的不知道说什么
因为我也就是个新人 只能说说我的直观感觉。。。有用就最好了
Topic Starter
感谢MODkamisamaaa wrote:
Lunatic02:30:068 (9) - 我觉得NC放在这里比较好看 没必要非要长白线吧。。。 也行吧
00:20:557 为什么不用个 break 0.0 破坏连续性
01:11:197 - 感觉这个弧度有点尖 有点难受 改了
02:51:842 (2,3,4) - 前面连打那么大声 这里突然那么小落差太大 感觉这三个完全没有击打感 故意的
03:19:907 (2) - 这个小小的扭曲我喜欢！
03:23:455 (1) - 这里音乐就是一个完全的平调。。这个拐一下就很奇怪了 因为中间没有调的变化 手滑了
03:29:100 (2) - 这里是个升调~是不是做个向上的滑条比较好0.0 有道理
嘛嘛 大概就是这么多意见 normal我也看了下 感觉除了滑条形状别的不知道说什么
因为我也就是个新人 只能说说我的直观感觉。。。有用就最好了
thx for moddingkamisamaaa wrote:
Yuki's Hard00:13:138 总觉得这里没有 滑条开始的好难受 因为这里我跟的钢琴
01:20:229 ^ 因为我跟的主音轨
02:59:584 ^ ^
03:09:907 ^ ^
03:20:229 ^ ^
00:40:874 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 这里的两个音效都巨奇怪 尤其是开始那里的D:C1 感觉音乐没那么大的变化 可是音效突变太厉害了 这里我听得就是鼓音所以用的D
02:45:874 (1,2,3) - 这三个往返 我觉得第一个最后一个是长白线声音有一个大鼓点 和只有两个不一样 然后用一个样子放有点怪 反正我第一次看的时候就觉得很违和 好，如果有人再指出 我就改一下
02:52:487 (1) - 这啥？0.0 我25%速度听了半天没发现有曲调的突然转折啊 这种转折一般就是改flow而已不一定是要曲调转折
03:03:455 (3) - 感觉这类滑条速度慢点比较好 不过每个改比较麻烦就是了0.0 0.0
03:15:713 (1) - 这个后面柔和一点啊。。L难度那个我就很中意
03:26:036 (1) - ^ ^
03:28:616 (1) - 为何为要这么尖锐0.0 啊咧？
03:33:374 (5) - 这个好难点啊喂 把这个做成滑条结尾是不是好点 和上一个note 这样他就能自动了0.0 这个也可以考虑，其实不难点的说
题外话 命名难度的时候我该怎么知道yuki是值得你还是那个 [ yuki ] 你们两个什么关系，，嘛，那个[Yuki]只是来摸图的，一般都会说明GD是谁做的的
I'm not gonna mod this. Great job OwO
sjoy I give you ticket. Come back for mod when ya need mod for another map
sjoy I give you ticket. Come back for mod when ya need mod for another map
嗨，sjoy。In-game REQ.
[General]
Stack Leniency 是有調到嗎? 一般不是都是7? 我覺得應該不用調。
[baka's Normal]
00:25:874 (4) - 尾端應該跟白線，imo.
01:43:294 (4) - ^
01:53:132 (3) - 這邊是不是少了個clap?
02:46:681 (2,3,4) - 太多finish，1沒加頭的話，我覺得這邊頭應該是不用加的。
02:48:616 (1) - 尾端finish?
02:55:068 (1) - 這個照著02:54:100 (2) 弧形來放吧?
03:02:165 (2) - 這個弧形好怪，太彎。也沒包(1)。
以03:02:810 (1) 角度來看，空隙大小不一，建議重放。
03:10:552 (5) - +finish
03:31:197 (5) - ^
03:51:842 (1) - 前端finish
03:53:132 (1) - 結尾50%太大聲了，轉盤尾端我建議再小聲點 再加個finish? (音量10或20)(個人覺得10比較好)
[Yuki's Hard] HP+1?
00:42:649 (2) - 尾端我感覺可以+個finish做強調? (或whist，或兩個+起來)
00:45:229 (2) - ^
00:47:810 (2) - ^
00:50:390 (2) - ^
00:58:939 (1,2) - (1)弄到(428|260)，(2)弄到(328|320)，可以變這樣01:01:358 (4) - 疊前面的4?
01:03:616 (3) - 尾端clap?
01:04:100 (4) - 這邊前端是不是少了一個clap?我覺得+了還挺好的。
01:05:390 (1) - 我覺得轉盤尾端能再小聲點，imo。
01:20:229 (2) - 少了一個note?
01:25:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:59:584 (1,2) - 應該能對稱，imo。
02:10:390 (4) - 同00:42:649
02:12:971 (4) - ^
02:15:552 (2) - ^
02:18:132 (2) - ^
03:41:842 (2,3) - 我覺得1~4每個空隙都一樣大比較好看，imo。
[Lunatic] 你的難度沒什麼問題..果然神麻婆
02:03:778 (6) - Ctrl+g?
03:09:584 (7) - 滑條頭漏了clap?
[Other]
1.如果有任何修改上的問題，可以 PM 或 In-game 詢問。
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
- Red words: Should be fix it.
- Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
- Black words : In my personal suggestion.
[General]
Stack Leniency 是有調到嗎? 一般不是都是7? 我覺得應該不用調。
[baka's Normal]
00:25:874 (4) - 尾端應該跟白線，imo.
01:43:294 (4) - ^
01:53:132 (3) - 這邊是不是少了個clap?
02:46:681 (2,3,4) - 太多finish，1沒加頭的話，我覺得這邊頭應該是不用加的。
02:48:616 (1) - 尾端finish?
02:55:068 (1) - 這個照著02:54:100 (2) 弧形來放吧?
03:02:165 (2) - 這個弧形好怪，太彎。也沒包(1)。
以03:02:810 (1) 角度來看，空隙大小不一，建議重放。
03:10:552 (5) - +finish
03:31:197 (5) - ^
03:51:842 (1) - 前端finish
03:53:132 (1) - 結尾50%太大聲了，轉盤尾端我建議再小聲點 再加個finish? (音量10或20)(個人覺得10比較好)
[Yuki's Hard] HP+1?
00:42:649 (2) - 尾端我感覺可以+個finish做強調? (或whist，或兩個+起來)
00:45:229 (2) - ^
00:47:810 (2) - ^
00:50:390 (2) - ^
00:58:939 (1,2) - (1)弄到(428|260)，(2)弄到(328|320)，可以變這樣01:01:358 (4) - 疊前面的4?
01:03:616 (3) - 尾端clap?
01:04:100 (4) - 這邊前端是不是少了一個clap?我覺得+了還挺好的。
01:05:390 (1) - 我覺得轉盤尾端能再小聲點，imo。
01:20:229 (2) - 少了一個note?
01:25:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:59:584 (1,2) - 應該能對稱，imo。
02:10:390 (4) - 同00:42:649
02:12:971 (4) - ^
02:15:552 (2) - ^
02:18:132 (2) - ^
03:41:842 (2,3) - 我覺得1~4每個空隙都一樣大比較好看，imo。
[Lunatic] 你的難度沒什麼問題..
02:03:778 (6) - Ctrl+g?
03:09:584 (7) - 滑條頭漏了clap?
[Other]
1.如果有任何修改上的問題，可以 PM 或 In-game 詢問。
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
thanks for moddingsmallboat wrote:
[Yuki's Hard]
HP+1? 不想加，因为这个hard有点难
00:42:649 (2) - 尾端我感覺可以+個finish做強調? (或whist，或兩個+起來)
00:45:229 (2) - ^
00:47:810 (2) - ^
00:50:390 (2) - ^ these four all added
00:58:939 (1,2) - (1)弄到(428|260)，(2)弄到(328|320)，可以變這樣难看01:01:358 (4) - 疊前面的4? 叠上去flow就不对
01:03:616 (3) - 尾端clap? added
01:04:100 (4) - 這邊前端是不是少了一個clap?我覺得+了還挺好的。 不用加，那个finish有作用
01:05:390 (1) - 我覺得轉盤尾端能再小聲點，imo。 好
01:20:229 (2) - 少了一個note? 加了
01:25:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这毕竟不是insane01:59:584 (1,2) - 應該能對稱，imo。 这本来就是对称的imo
02:10:390 (4) - 同00:42:649
02:12:971 (4) - ^
02:15:552 (2) - ^
02:18:132 (2) - ^ 这4个同上
03:41:842 (2,3) - 我覺得1~4每個空隙都一樣大比較好看，imo。 不觉得
Topic Starter
[quote="smallboat"]嗨，sjoy。In-game REQ.
02:03:778 (6) - Ctrl+g? 不了
03:09:584 (7) - 滑條頭漏了clap? 没漏
[Other]
感谢MOD
02:03:778 (6) - Ctrl+g? 不了
03:09:584 (7) - 滑條頭漏了clap? 没漏
[Other]
感谢MOD
thanks for mod :3smallboat wrote:
[baka's Normal]
00:25:874 (4) - 尾端應該跟白線，imo.-----跟音乐 你可以看00:31:036 (5) - 这两个滑条虽然长度不一样 但是都在一样的地方加了clap 所以此处暂时保留 如果跟后面的排列一样星数就超了什么的 而且带上音效后也没什么违和感
01:43:294 (4) - ^-----^
01:53:132 (3) - 這邊是不是少了個clap?-----我觉得不用 这个滑条尾的地方 音乐没有那么强 不需要clap
02:46:681 (2,3,4) - 太多finish，1沒加頭的話，我覺得這邊頭應該是不用加的。-----跟音乐
02:48:616 (1) - 尾端finish?-----added
02:55:068 (1) - 這個照著02:54:100 (2) 弧形來放吧?----- 后面也是这个节奏 此处保留
03:02:165 (2) - 這個弧形好怪，太彎。也沒包(1)。
以03:02:810 (1) 角度來看，空隙大小不一，建議重放。-----这个当时摆着就有点别扭 想让2包住1 但是这样子后面的1的弧度就包不住2 你这么一说我就不强迫它被后面的包住了
03:10:552 (5) - +finish-----added
03:31:197 (5) - ^-----^
03:51:842 (1) - 前端finish-----added
03:53:132 (1) - 結尾50%太大聲了，轉盤尾端我建議再小聲點 再加個finish? (音量10或20)(個人覺得10比較好)-----音量fixed fin倒不必了 我更倾向于这个转盘最后消音
Topic Starter
thanks for staryurunneram wrote:
I'm not gonna mod this. Great job OwO
sjoy I give you ticket. Come back for mod when ya need mod for another map
Hello~
From my modding queue
[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
总算摸到华语mapper的图了
有点尴尬，我猜肯定会有人拿spread来说事，事实上我也认为处于两难境地，H和L难度比较连贯并且都很难，而N有一种偏向EZ的感觉，如果N做难了，难度连贯却少个ez，如果做简单了当ez，难度不连贯（大概就是当今的感觉），又缺中间难度。。
关键问题是，这曲子这么燃做ez真是不好做。。
射一发
[baka's Normal]
finish用的太多啦~开始的时候没有那么燃的
00:24:100 (3,4) - flow问题
02:51:197 (1,2,1) - NM的话这种flow尽量少用并且我也不太清楚为何这里会用这种排列，没有太大逻辑关系
02:55:068 (1,2) - flow有问题
02:55:068 (1,2) - 漏音
顺便说下，这里已经kiai了，没有空这么多拍的必要了，按照你前边的节奏，这里怕是要太过密了，其实前边我就感觉节奏有些密。话又说回来，
03:15:713 (1,2) - 之前类似的地方没有反flow，这里却特地反了一下，会有一点突兀的感觉
03:18:294 (1,2) - 这里flow有问题，如果是hard以上的话我可以理解，NM的话这种flow尽量少用一些。。
03:19:907 - 这里漏音
03:25:390 (3) - 不是很喜欢重音落在滑条尾的处理
03:28:616 (1) - ^
03:39:907 (2,3,1) - 联系不够，并且flow反向
03:49:261 (1,2,3) - 有一点小小的想法，这里kiai的这么high了，打开一些吧，这种画圈似乎显得拘束。
[Yuki's Hard]
00:23:939 - 这里有一种漏音的感觉，虽然感觉更像是刻意为之
00:27:810 - 还是要说下漏音，不过前边也漏了，对比一下似乎没有太多不妥，不过感觉都加上连贯些。
01:05:390 (1) - 感觉不适合放转盘
01:10:552 (1,2) - 不适合stack，旋律在发展并没有停滞感
01:11:197 (2,3) - 节奏注意，因为之前一直在跟的是乐曲的声音而不是节拍或鼓声，只有这个地方你跟的是鼓声
01:17:649 (3,4) - 感觉似乎这里可以强调一下，不管是用跳一点，还是用flow反向，只是这样跟flow有点无聊额，即使不变的话，也至少把3、4对称一下吧
01:18:294 (1,2,1) - 嗯。。这里的stack我不是很理解，毕竟这三个音应该算是一组音吧
01:20:229 (2) - 而这里的flow却又反了个向，反向可以在后面的3处反，在这个点就反了感觉不太合曲
01:20:390 (3,4) - 嗯，节奏上来书我更倾向于把这里的一个滑条跟note合成一个滑条
01:24:584 (6) - ^ 虽然跨长白线，但是听上去的确合一下比较好
02:00:229 (2,1) - 感觉这两个滑条之间没有很强的平行关系
02:52:165 (2,1) - Stack一下如何？
02:58:939 (5,6) - 联系不够并且flow有点问题
03:09:261 (5,6) - 联系不够，flow问题小点
上边两处虽然形成了良好的呼应，但是单滑条毕竟显得单薄，所以我觉得转盘就不要开头占一个强音，把那个强音的位置直接改成note如何？至少没有那么单薄
03:20:390 (6,1) - ^
03:30:713 (6,1) - ^
看到这里我觉得呼应极了，但是就是感觉单薄。。
03:33:132 (4,5,6) - 空了好大的拍子却只增大了这么一点距离，我认为不够，这里节奏本来就比较适合跳，至少要达到前边123的距离标准吧，这个时间间距可是1.5倍呢
03:45:875 (7,8) - 联系不够，不如stack一下，有依据，并且这种间距我觉得也不是很好
[Lunatic]
好燃，图不错
00:02:170 (3,1) - 感觉stack一下可能好些。。
00:13:138 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一段排列点个赞
00:23:132 (3,4) - 虽然排列本身很好看，但是有两点有疑问，第一找不到突然增大间距的理由，第二flow的反向感觉也是缺乏理由
00:24:745 (3,4) - flow感觉不是很好
00:28:939 (5,6,1) - 跳的好急又快，弯好大，感觉这里没有那么明显的跳的标志
00:32:165 (2,3,4,5) - 间距问题，嗯，虽然有点挑刺之感
其实这一小段的间距感觉有点乱，音乐上没有听出太多的需要跳的地方，也没有到kiai
00:46:359 (2,3,4,5) - 就我个人而言flow有点奇怪
00:58:132 (4) - stack不是很适合这里吧，虽然我菊的也还行
01:00:068 (4,1) - 感觉flow有问题，看的话却不是很明显，因为这里往下偏了一点，然后似乎差不多是个直角接滑条。。
01:12:649 (4,5,6,1) - 不是很舒服的flow
01:41:519 (1,2,3) - ^
01:43:778 (7,8) - 突然减小的间距让人觉得不是很舒服
01:44:100 (1,2,3) - 这里的间距也觉得没有变的理由
01:46:036 (5,6) - 我的话会考虑ctrl+G,不然不觉得这里的flow反向不自然么？
01:58:939 (3,4,5,6) - 6为何不ctrl+g?这种排列会有一种可惜，突然的感觉
02:02:165 (1,2,3,4) - 按照音乐的趋势我认为1、2应该比3、4跳的小
02:23:778 (5,1) - 跳的突然
02:46:036 (3,4,5) - 前边相似的地方你没有改变flow比如02:41:197 (4,5) 这里也就不要改了吧。。
02:53:455 (4,1) - 其实flow是有一点问题的，不过这个地方要是改就比较费劲，所以不改掉也过得去
02:56:519 (2) - 跳的不是很合逻辑
03:27:810 (5,6) - 这里间距看不明白，感觉不要变间距比较好
03:46:197 (5) - 这个滑条我理解是一个过渡作用，它的音比之前那个滑条弱了不少，让它在这个排列中改变了flow流向我认为不是很合理，并且后面接连打的flow也不是很好
That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue. .
From my modding queue
[Notion]
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
总算摸到华语mapper的图了
有点尴尬，我猜肯定会有人拿spread来说事，事实上我也认为处于两难境地，H和L难度比较连贯并且都很难，而N有一种偏向EZ的感觉，如果N做难了，难度连贯却少个ez，如果做简单了当ez，难度不连贯（大概就是当今的感觉），又缺中间难度。。
关键问题是，这曲子这么燃做ez真是不好做。。
射一发
[baka's Normal]
finish用的太多啦~开始的时候没有那么燃的
00:24:100 (3,4) - flow问题
02:51:197 (1,2,1) - NM的话这种flow尽量少用并且我也不太清楚为何这里会用这种排列，没有太大逻辑关系
02:55:068 (1,2) - flow有问题
02:55:068 (1,2) - 漏音
顺便说下，这里已经kiai了，没有空这么多拍的必要了，按照你前边的节奏，这里怕是要太过密了，其实前边我就感觉节奏有些密。话又说回来，
03:15:713 (1,2) - 之前类似的地方没有反flow，这里却特地反了一下，会有一点突兀的感觉
03:18:294 (1,2) - 这里flow有问题，如果是hard以上的话我可以理解，NM的话这种flow尽量少用一些。。
03:19:907 - 这里漏音
03:25:390 (3) - 不是很喜欢重音落在滑条尾的处理
03:28:616 (1) - ^
03:39:907 (2,3,1) - 联系不够，并且flow反向
03:49:261 (1,2,3) - 有一点小小的想法，这里kiai的这么high了，打开一些吧，这种画圈似乎显得拘束。
[Yuki's Hard]
00:23:939 - 这里有一种漏音的感觉，虽然感觉更像是刻意为之
00:27:810 - 还是要说下漏音，不过前边也漏了，对比一下似乎没有太多不妥，不过感觉都加上连贯些。
01:05:390 (1) - 感觉不适合放转盘
01:10:552 (1,2) - 不适合stack，旋律在发展并没有停滞感
01:11:197 (2,3) - 节奏注意，因为之前一直在跟的是乐曲的声音而不是节拍或鼓声，只有这个地方你跟的是鼓声
01:17:649 (3,4) - 感觉似乎这里可以强调一下，不管是用跳一点，还是用flow反向，只是这样跟flow有点无聊额，即使不变的话，也至少把3、4对称一下吧
01:18:294 (1,2,1) - 嗯。。这里的stack我不是很理解，毕竟这三个音应该算是一组音吧
01:20:229 (2) - 而这里的flow却又反了个向，反向可以在后面的3处反，在这个点就反了感觉不太合曲
01:20:390 (3,4) - 嗯，节奏上来书我更倾向于把这里的一个滑条跟note合成一个滑条
01:24:584 (6) - ^ 虽然跨长白线，但是听上去的确合一下比较好
02:00:229 (2,1) - 感觉这两个滑条之间没有很强的平行关系
02:52:165 (2,1) - Stack一下如何？
02:58:939 (5,6) - 联系不够并且flow有点问题
03:09:261 (5,6) - 联系不够，flow问题小点
上边两处虽然形成了良好的呼应，但是单滑条毕竟显得单薄，所以我觉得转盘就不要开头占一个强音，把那个强音的位置直接改成note如何？至少没有那么单薄
03:20:390 (6,1) - ^
03:30:713 (6,1) - ^
看到这里我觉得呼应极了，但是就是感觉单薄。。
03:33:132 (4,5,6) - 空了好大的拍子却只增大了这么一点距离，我认为不够，这里节奏本来就比较适合跳，至少要达到前边123的距离标准吧，这个时间间距可是1.5倍呢
03:45:875 (7,8) - 联系不够，不如stack一下，有依据，并且这种间距我觉得也不是很好
[Lunatic]
好燃，图不错
00:02:170 (3,1) - 感觉stack一下可能好些。。
00:13:138 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一段排列点个赞
00:23:132 (3,4) - 虽然排列本身很好看，但是有两点有疑问，第一找不到突然增大间距的理由，第二flow的反向感觉也是缺乏理由
00:24:745 (3,4) - flow感觉不是很好
00:28:939 (5,6,1) - 跳的好急又快，弯好大，感觉这里没有那么明显的跳的标志
00:32:165 (2,3,4,5) - 间距问题，嗯，虽然有点挑刺之感
其实这一小段的间距感觉有点乱，音乐上没有听出太多的需要跳的地方，也没有到kiai
00:46:359 (2,3,4,5) - 就我个人而言flow有点奇怪
00:58:132 (4) - stack不是很适合这里吧，虽然我菊的也还行
01:00:068 (4,1) - 感觉flow有问题，看的话却不是很明显，因为这里往下偏了一点，然后似乎差不多是个直角接滑条。。
01:12:649 (4,5,6,1) - 不是很舒服的flow
01:41:519 (1,2,3) - ^
01:43:778 (7,8) - 突然减小的间距让人觉得不是很舒服
01:44:100 (1,2,3) - 这里的间距也觉得没有变的理由
01:46:036 (5,6) - 我的话会考虑ctrl+G,不然不觉得这里的flow反向不自然么？
01:58:939 (3,4,5,6) - 6为何不ctrl+g?这种排列会有一种可惜，突然的感觉
02:02:165 (1,2,3,4) - 按照音乐的趋势我认为1、2应该比3、4跳的小
02:23:778 (5,1) - 跳的突然
02:46:036 (3,4,5) - 前边相似的地方你没有改变flow比如02:41:197 (4,5) 这里也就不要改了吧。。
02:53:455 (4,1) - 其实flow是有一点问题的，不过这个地方要是改就比较费劲，所以不改掉也过得去
02:56:519 (2) - 跳的不是很合逻辑
03:27:810 (5,6) - 这里间距看不明白，感觉不要变间距比较好
03:46:197 (5) - 这个滑条我理解是一个过渡作用，它的音比之前那个滑条弱了不少，让它在这个排列中改变了flow流向我认为不是很合理，并且后面接连打的flow也不是很好
That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.
.
Topic Starter
感谢MOD啦azuretwinight wrote:
Hello~
From my modding queue
[Lunatic]
好燃，图不错
00:02:170 (3,1) - 感觉stack一下可能好些。音不点个人不喜欢叠
00:13:138 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一段排列点个赞
00:23:132 (3,4) - 虽然排列本身很好看，但是有两点有疑问，第一找不到突然增大间距的理由，第二flow的反向感觉也是缺乏理由 这里只要是考虑对称
00:24:745 (3,4) - flow感觉不是很好 疏忽了已改
00:28:939 (5,6,1) - 跳的好急又快，弯好大，感觉这里没有那么明显的跳的标志 连乐器都变化了阿
00:32:165 (2,3,4,5) - 间距问题，嗯，虽然有点挑刺之感 00:32:487 (3) - 是之前做连打串的BLANKET 4是和00:33:132 (1) - 叠在一起我觉得比较整齐
其实这一小段的间距感觉有点乱，音乐上没有听出太多的需要跳的地方，也没有到kiai
00:46:359 (2,3,4,5) - 就我个人而言flow有点奇怪 我觉得挺顺的
00:58:132 (4) - stack不是很适合这里吧，虽然我菊的也还行
01:00:068 (4,1) - 感觉flow有问题，看的话却不是很明显，因为这里往下偏了一点，然后似乎差不多是个直角接滑条。。 还行 我再想想
01:12:649 (4,5,6,1) - 不是很舒服的flow 这里故意xD
01:41:519 (1,2,3) - ^ 还好阿
01:43:778 (7,8) - 突然减小的间距让人觉得不是很舒服 其实主要是排版
01:44:100 (1,2,3) - 这里的间距也觉得没有变的理由 保持先
01:46:036 (5,6) - 我的话会考虑ctrl+G,不然不觉得这里的flow反向不自然么？这里是故意的原先确实是CTRL+G的
01:58:939 (3,4,5,6) - 6为何不ctrl+g?这种排列会有一种可惜，突然的感觉 好
02:02:165 (1,2,3,4) - 按照音乐的趋势我认为1、2应该比3、4跳的小
02:23:778 (5,1) - 跳的突然 我NC都喜欢跳 个人习惯吧
02:46:036 (3,4,5) - 前边相似的地方你没有改变flow比如02:41:197 (4,5) 这里也就不要改了吧。。
02:53:455 (4,1) - 其实flow是有一点问题的，不过这个地方要是改就比较费劲，所以不改掉也过得去
02:56:519 (2) - 跳的不是很合逻辑 这里专门坑HD的xD
03:27:810 (5,6) - 这里间距看不明白，感觉不要变间距比较好 排版为了整洁
03:46:197 (5) - 这个滑条我理解是一个过渡作用，它的音比之前那个滑条弱了不少，让它在这个排列中改变了flow流向我认为不是很合理，并且后面接连打的flow也不是很好 我再想一下
That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.
thx for moddingazuretwinight wrote:
[Yuki's Hard]
00:23:939 - 这里有一种漏音的感觉，虽然感觉更像是刻意为之 对我就是故意的
00:27:810 - 还是要说下漏音，不过前边也漏了，对比一下似乎没有太多不妥，不过感觉都加上连贯些。 ^
01:05:390 (1) - 感觉不适合放转盘 混过去而已，放点别的也难改了
01:10:552 (1,2) - 不适合stack，旋律在发展并没有停滞感 和后面一个呼应下而且这里的发展并不是十分明显
01:11:197 (2,3) - 节奏注意，因为之前一直在跟的是乐曲的声音而不是节拍或鼓声，只有这个地方你跟的是鼓声 这两个其实只是为了连贯而已
01:17:649 (3,4) - 感觉似乎这里可以强调一下，不管是用跳一点，还是用flow反向，只是这样跟flow有点无聊额，即使不变的话，也至少把3、4对称一下吧 我本来也是3,4对称，但是这样就显得难看，所以最后还是用了2,4对称，如果还有人指出我可以考虑稍微动一下
01:18:294 (1,2,1) - 嗯。。这里的stack我不是很理解，毕竟这三个音应该算是一组音吧 按ds的话没地放了，不按ds又会迷惑别人，所以算了
01:20:229 (2) - 而这里的flow却又反了个向，反向可以在后面的3处反，在这个点就反了感觉不太合曲 没觉得
01:20:390 (3,4) - 嗯，节奏上来书我更倾向于把这里的一个滑条跟note合成一个滑条 这不行
01:24:584 (6) - ^ 虽然跨长白线，但是听上去的确合一下比较好 这里我改了，后面那个一样的地方你怎么没说啊，我也一起改了
02:00:229 (2,1) - 感觉这两个滑条之间没有很强的平行关系 这也不是平行啊，只是顺flow而已
02:52:165 (2,1) - Stack一下如何？ 不好
02:58:939 (5,6) - 联系不够并且flow有点问题 把6ctrl+G了
03:09:261 (5,6) - 联系不够，flow问题小点 ^
上边两处虽然形成了良好的呼应，但是单滑条毕竟显得单薄，所以我觉得转盘就不要开头占一个强音，把那个强音的位置直接改成note如何？至少没有那么单薄 主要不想再加难了
03:20:390 (6,1) - ^ ^
03:30:713 (6,1) - ^ ^
看到这里我觉得呼应极了，但是就是感觉单薄。。
03:33:132 (4,5,6) - 空了好大的拍子却只增大了这么一点距离，我认为不够，这里节奏本来就比较适合跳，至少要达到前边123的距离标准吧，这个时间间距可是1.5倍呢 你是真的想做成Insane嘛？
03:45:875 (7,8) - 联系不够，不如stack一下，有依据，并且这种间距我觉得也不是很好 正常间距，没啥问题
sjoy，文件发你qq了
其实。。我想说只改这几个地方难度上增不了多少的，尤其是后面3:33:132那里我觉得间距拉开才减小难度呢，挨得比较紧反而读图会困惑。。感谢认真改摸！[Minakami Yuki] wrote:
azuretwinight wrote:
[Yuki's Hard]
01:24:584 (6) - ^ 虽然跨长白线，但是听上去的确合一下比较好 这里我改了，后面那个一样的地方你怎么没说啊，我也一起改了 噗，漏了
02:58:939 (5,6) - 联系不够并且flow有点问题 把6ctrl+G了
03:09:261 (5,6) - 联系不够，flow问题小点 ^
上边两处虽然形成了良好的呼应，但是单滑条毕竟显得单薄，所以我觉得转盘就不要开头占一个强音，把那个强音的位置直接改成note如何？至少没有那么单薄 主要不想再加难了
03:20:390 (6,1) - ^ ^
03:30:713 (6,1) - ^ ^
看到这里我觉得呼应极了，但是就是感觉单薄。。
03:33:132 (4,5,6) - 空了好大的拍子却只增大了这么一点距离，我认为不够，这里节奏本来就比较适合跳，至少要达到前边123的距离标准吧，这个时间间距可是1.5倍呢 你是真的想做成Insane嘛？
azuretwinight wrote:
03:33:132 (4,5,6) - 空了好大的拍子却只增大了这么一点距离，我认为不够，这里节奏本来就比较适合跳，至少要达到前边123的距离标准吧，这个时间间距可是1.5倍呢
这个真心不能改233，改大了其实反而不好我觉得0.0
这个hard已经偏难了其实
谢谢你的mod啦XDazuretwinight wrote:
首先 关于这个难度的立场 我有话要说 我觉得吧 我没什么发言权[/四暗刻]
[baka's Normal]
finish用的太多啦~开始的时候没有那么燃的-----有两段我一直在用fin只是为了跟音乐 和曲子的进程其实没什么关系 不过这么说了 我把前面那段的声音弄小了点
00:24:100 (3,4) - flow问题-----fixed
02:51:197 (1,2,1) - NM的话这种flow尽量少用并且我也不太清楚为何这里会用这种排列，没有太大逻辑关系-----fixed
02:55:068 (1,2) - flow有问题-----其实我觉得这里flow问题不大 毕竟对这个难度来讲 SV不高 这种flow并不别扭
02:55:068 (1,2) - 漏音-----跟后面一段kiai同步吧 而且1踩的那声长度为2拍 不用刻意在中间的弱拍上加note
顺便说下，这里已经kiai了，没有空这么多拍的必要了，按照你前边的节奏，这里怕是要太过密了，其实前边我就感觉节奏有些密。话又说回来，
03:15:713 (1,2) - 之前类似的地方没有反flow，这里却特地反了一下，会有一点突兀的感觉-----fixed
03:18:294 (1,2) - 这里flow有问题，如果是hard以上的话我可以理解，NM的话这种flow尽量少用一些。。-----fixed
03:19:907 - 这里漏音-----
03:25:390 (3) - 不是很喜欢重音落在滑条尾的处理-----怎么说呢 也是为了节奏统一吧 毕竟两段kiai其实就是重复同一个节奏4次
03:28:616 (1) - ^[/color]-----这个滑条尾是"弱"拍 一般的4/4拍的曲子基本都是这个节奏 强--弱--次强--弱 "强"就是长白线的那拍 但是按照osu的计算拍子的方式 放到正常情况下 曲子的bpm都应该只剩一半的 所以"次强"就是第二根长白线 不过你去看前奏的bpm93的部分 这个节奏还是没有问题的-----语言是不是有点乱- - 我也看不懂自己在说什么
03:39:907 (2,3,1) - 联系不够，并且flow反向-----什么联系- - 如果是指的跟音乐的联系的话 因为我不是跟的电吉他 和电吉他之外的那个我也不知道改怎么形容的音色还是对得上的 flow fixed
03:49:261 (1,2,3) - 有一点小小的想法，这里kiai的这么high了，打开一些吧，这种画圈似乎显得拘束。-----fixed 关于这段kiai 我只是在和主难度的kiai同步而已 就我个人的看法 我觉得这段作收尾的大概好一些 所以做这段的时候就想着怎么把节奏稍微缓一缓- -而且在之前 我最初完成这个diff的时候 是没有最后这段的
[Lunatic]
00:13:944 (1) - 我觉得这么摆会好看很多而且玩起来也比较好，就是这串的后面的间距拉开点
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091239
(图里面加了个NC为了可以看清楚，改的时候可加可不加)
现在这个摆法有点偷懒而且感觉读不清
00:21:842 (2,3) - 个人不支持这里搞那么小间距，建议ctrl+g
00:23:294 (4,5,6) - 这三个note的流向感觉不太对劲，建议56换位然后7ctrl+g
00:27:003 (2,3) - 这里想跳的话把2和3换个位置跳起来可能会比较舒服大概╮(￣▽￣")╭..
00:34:745 (2,3,4,5) - 2和3这边的跳我看也听不出必要性，4和5这边的间距我才觉得应该要大跳一下，重音节奏
00:49:987 (2) - 听不出必要性，删掉
00:57:649 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方让我感觉读图的时候简直是个悲剧，你前面摆的很空很整洁这边突然note和slider纠结到了一起然后再加上这个打图的时候的圆圈简直就是不能多说Orz.......不要覆盖成这样至少把4移一下....
01:02:890 (1,1) - 这边节奏好带感的真的不考虑做？放两个spinner在这里有点浪费
01:11:197 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091269 应该是这个节奏
01:12:649 (4,5,6) - 光听节奏的话56之间的距离应该要比45之间的要大，这里就感觉有点太刻意追求摆放了
01:32:003 (5,6,7) - 试试看摆成一个比234更大的三角形，间距这边大一点感觉会好
01:37:326 (5,1) - 前面两个还行，后面这边这个间距小的实在不能忍要知道这种间距我都是放1/4而不是1/2的【不对】
01:58:939 (3,4) - 看起来太挤了
02:02:165 (1,2) - 02:02:810 (3,4) - 12的间距在节奏上的表示应该比34小
02:44:745 (1,2,3) - 不能理解在同一个节奏块为啥前面间距那么大后面间距突然那么小
02:56:358 (1,2) - 02:57:003 (7,8) - ^
03:01:358 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091291 这边节奏应该是这样，建议是按照这张图里1和2搞成slider
03:03:455 (4) - 蓝线结尾然后折返
03:04:100 (1,2) - 拉远一点间距
03:46:519 (1,2,3,4) - 和前面的有个问题一样，读图悲剧的那个
这个难度有些问题主要集中在间距，同一个节奏块上突然的间距缩小有点理解不能，我个人在作图的时候会统一一下哪个节奏类型用哪个间距比如普通的1/4节拍会用1.2x间距要是重音强调的大跳的时候会用2.5x间距到3X间距左右这样，统一一下比较好
[Yuki]
00:00:880 (1) - 最后加个whistle
00:09:912 (x) - whistle
00:14:428 (2) - ^
00:23:132 (3) - clap
然后我不理解这一小段一小段的break意义何在，玩的时候break的意义在于让人休息，在hard里面我也不知道用这种小段小段的break强调什么所以建议删除，然后建议加note就算加满1/4的note然后降音我也觉得比这种无厘头加break玩的感觉要好
01:02:810 (1) - 这种地方我倾向于每一个note都有一个nc来强调下...嘛不喜欢可以不加
01:20:390 (3) - 尾部clap
01:30:068 (2,3) - 今天才有一个朋友过来说他因为这样被unrank了
01:56:358 (3,4) - 摆成这样比较好
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091326
后面那个一堆break同上上上上上
02:25:390 (1) - 结尾clap
02:59:584 (X) - +note
后面这几段复制的同上
[Baka]
normal和hard的sv相差的有点大有煞笔权限会喷这个
normal有些地方宁可节奏单调一点我也觉得不要用太复杂的红线节奏，因为你大部分都用了长slider折返像是03:45:390 (2) - 我觉得你也可以用03:44:100 (1) - 这种节奏来避免红线节奏，要不然有些地方感觉同一节奏块一个是so easy一个是too hard ._.|||
00:13:944 (1) - 我觉得这么摆会好看很多而且玩起来也比较好，就是这串的后面的间距拉开点
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091239
(图里面加了个NC为了可以看清楚，改的时候可加可不加)
现在这个摆法有点偷懒而且感觉读不清
00:21:842 (2,3) - 个人不支持这里搞那么小间距，建议ctrl+g
00:23:294 (4,5,6) - 这三个note的流向感觉不太对劲，建议56换位然后7ctrl+g
00:27:003 (2,3) - 这里想跳的话把2和3换个位置跳起来可能会比较舒服大概╮(￣▽￣")╭..
00:34:745 (2,3,4,5) - 2和3这边的跳我看也听不出必要性，4和5这边的间距我才觉得应该要大跳一下，重音节奏
00:49:987 (2) - 听不出必要性，删掉
00:57:649 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方让我感觉读图的时候简直是个悲剧，你前面摆的很空很整洁这边突然note和slider纠结到了一起然后再加上这个打图的时候的圆圈简直就是不能多说Orz.......不要覆盖成这样至少把4移一下....
01:02:890 (1,1) - 这边节奏好带感的真的不考虑做？放两个spinner在这里有点浪费
01:11:197 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091269 应该是这个节奏
01:12:649 (4,5,6) - 光听节奏的话56之间的距离应该要比45之间的要大，这里就感觉有点太刻意追求摆放了
01:32:003 (5,6,7) - 试试看摆成一个比234更大的三角形，间距这边大一点感觉会好
01:37:326 (5,1) - 前面两个还行，后面这边这个间距小的实在不能忍要知道这种间距我都是放1/4而不是1/2的【不对】
01:58:939 (3,4) - 看起来太挤了
02:02:165 (1,2) - 02:02:810 (3,4) - 12的间距在节奏上的表示应该比34小
02:44:745 (1,2,3) - 不能理解在同一个节奏块为啥前面间距那么大后面间距突然那么小
02:56:358 (1,2) - 02:57:003 (7,8) - ^
03:01:358 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091291 这边节奏应该是这样，建议是按照这张图里1和2搞成slider
03:03:455 (4) - 蓝线结尾然后折返
03:04:100 (1,2) - 拉远一点间距
03:46:519 (1,2,3,4) - 和前面的有个问题一样，读图悲剧的那个
这个难度有些问题主要集中在间距，同一个节奏块上突然的间距缩小有点理解不能，我个人在作图的时候会统一一下哪个节奏类型用哪个间距比如普通的1/4节拍会用1.2x间距要是重音强调的大跳的时候会用2.5x间距到3X间距左右这样，统一一下比较好
[Yuki]
00:00:880 (1) - 最后加个whistle
00:09:912 (x) - whistle
00:14:428 (2) - ^
00:23:132 (3) - clap
然后我不理解这一小段一小段的break意义何在，玩的时候break的意义在于让人休息，在hard里面我也不知道用这种小段小段的break强调什么所以建议删除，然后建议加note就算加满1/4的note然后降音我也觉得比这种无厘头加break玩的感觉要好
01:02:810 (1) - 这种地方我倾向于每一个note都有一个nc来强调下...嘛不喜欢可以不加
01:20:390 (3) - 尾部clap
01:30:068 (2,3) - 今天才有一个朋友过来说他因为这样被unrank了
01:56:358 (3,4) - 摆成这样比较好
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091326
后面那个一堆break同上上上上上
02:25:390 (1) - 结尾clap
02:59:584 (X) - +note
后面这几段复制的同上
[Baka]
normal和hard的sv相差的有点大有煞笔权限会喷这个
normal有些地方宁可节奏单调一点我也觉得不要用太复杂的红线节奏，因为你大部分都用了长slider折返像是03:45:390 (2) - 我觉得你也可以用03:44:100 (1) - 这种节奏来避免红线节奏，要不然有些地方感觉同一节奏块一个是so easy一个是too hard ._.|||
Topic Starter
感谢MODtutuhaha wrote:
[Lunatic]
00:13:944 (1) - 我觉得这么摆会好看很多而且玩起来也比较好，就是这串的后面的间距拉开点 我试试看
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091239
(图里面加了个NC为了可以看清楚，改的时候可加可不加)
现在这个摆法有点偷懒而且感觉读不清
00:21:842 (2,3) - 个人不支持这里搞那么小间距，建议ctrl+g 好
00:23:294 (4,5,6) - 这三个note的流向感觉不太对劲，建议56换位然后7ctrl+g 好
00:27:003 (2,3) - 这里想跳的话把2和3换个位置跳起来可能会比较舒服大概╮(￣▽￣")╭..好
00:34:745 (2,3,4,5) - 2和3这边的跳我看也听不出必要性，4和5这边的间距我才觉得应该要大跳一下，重音节奏 好
00:49:987 (2) - 听不出必要性，删掉 我觉得还行
00:57:649 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方让我感觉读图的时候简直是个悲剧，你前面摆的很空很整洁这边突然note和slider纠结到了一起然后再加上这个打图的时候的圆圈简直就是不能多说Orz.......不要覆盖成这样至少把4移一下.... 已经REMAP了
01:02:890 (1,1) - 这边节奏好带感的真的不考虑做？放两个spinner在这里有点浪费 我在想想好了，有点懒
01:11:197 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091269 应该是这个节奏这里主要是考虑到美观对称就没改了
01:12:649 (4,5,6) - 光听节奏的话56之间的距离应该要比45之间的要大，这里就感觉有点太刻意追求摆放了有道理
01:32:003 (5,6,7) - 试试看摆成一个比234更大的三角形，间距这边大一点感觉会好 改了
01:37:326 (5,1) - 前面两个还行，后面这边这个间距小的实在不能忍要知道这种间距我都是放1/4而不是1/2的【不对】;w;鬼畜麻婆你好，已改
01:58:939 (3,4) - 看起来太挤了变宽了
02:02:165 (1,2) - 02:02:810 (3,4) - 12的间距在节奏上的表示应该比34小 上次改过了这次又复原了;w;
02:44:745 (1,2,3) - 不能理解在同一个节奏块为啥前面间距那么大后面间距突然那么小 失误了;w;
02:56:358 (1,2) - 02:57:003 (7,8) - ^ ;w;改了
03:01:358 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091291 这边节奏应该是这样，建议是按照这张图里1和2搞成slider 这里是故意的感觉有击打感;w;
03:03:455 (4) - 蓝线结尾然后折返妥
03:04:100 (1,2) - 拉远一点间距 好
03:46:519 (1,2,3,4) - 和前面的有个问题一样，读图悲剧的那个 之前就想改了，没想到好的办法
这个难度有些问题主要集中在间距，同一个节奏块上突然的间距缩小有点理解不能，我个人在作图的时候会统一一下哪个节奏类型用哪个间距比如普通的1/4节拍会用1.2x间距要是重音强调的大跳的时候会用2.5x间距到3X间距左右这样，统一一下比较好
恩这个我会注意的
thanks for moddingtutuhaha wrote:
[Yuki]
00:00:880 (1) - 最后加个whistle
00:09:912 (x) - whistle
00:14:428 (2) - ^
00:23:132 (3) - clap
然后我不理解这一小段一小段的break意义何在，玩的时候break的意义在于让人休息，在hard里面我也不知道用这种小段小段的break强调什么所以建议删除，然后建议加note就算加满1/4的note然后降音我也觉得比这种无厘头加break玩的感觉要好 我觉得这不是无厘头啊，这是一种警告的提示表示后面会有“强敌来临”提醒玩家打起注意的做法，如果有别人也说这个有问题的话我在考虑改吧，我个人是不希望改的=v=
01:02:810 (1) - 这种地方我倾向于每一个note都有一个nc来强调下...嘛不喜欢可以不加 嘛不加了
01:20:390 (3) - 尾部clap
01:30:068 (2,3) - 今天才有一个朋友过来说他因为这样被unrank了
01:56:358 (3,4) - 摆成这样比较好 有点远了我觉得=。=
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091326
后面那个一堆break同上上上上上
02:25:390 (1) - 结尾clap
02:59:584 (X) - +note
后面这几段复制的同上
on comments → all fixed
hello sjoy ~
here's mod from my queue
thank you for requesting "last remote" song
gonna tell my brother to mod this too :3
[baka's Normal]
00:29:584 (3) - please avoid placing node out of grid snap like this http://puu.sh/5gO7a.jpg
00:31:842 (1) - stack this perfectly with slider's tail at 00:30:552 (4)
02:22:003 (4) - you missing finish on reverse here
03:00:229 (3) - another node same as 00:29:584
03:42:810 (3) - ^
[Yuki's Hard]
00:00:880 (1) - add whistle on tail
01:00:229 (1) - add whistle on head
01:05:390 - sounds better if you add note with finish here and start the spinner at 01:05:552
01:07:971 (1) - i prefer to add a circle here instead of slider
01:24:261 - add note here? if you do this, then remove the note at 01:24:745 (7)
01:34:100 (2) - maybe this kind slider flows better? http://puu.sh/5gNG5.jpg
02:24:745 (7) - i played at 600x800 windows mode here and this reverse slider goes out of my screen off. maybe you can find another way to fix this
02:58:939 (5) - remove the reverse and add a 4/4 slider at 02:59:261 because this part i feels gap here. this applies to the rest other three parts too
03:02:810 (1) - ctrl+h this and move back to it's recent position, it looks better for me
03:19:100 (3,4) - it's better not to stack them
03:29:584 (3,4) - ^
[Lunatic]
00:14:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - find another better pattern here? i recommend to make a pentagon here but, maybe you'll like this http://puu.sh/5gP9F.jpg
02:56:358 (1,2) - reduce it's DS, this jump feels uncomfortable to play. if you keep this, add NC at 02:56:681 (3)
nice song, nice map overall
good luck
here's mod from my queue
thank you for requesting "last remote" song
gonna tell my brother to mod this too :3
[baka's Normal]
00:29:584 (3) - please avoid placing node out of grid snap like this http://puu.sh/5gO7a.jpg
00:31:842 (1) - stack this perfectly with slider's tail at 00:30:552 (4)
02:22:003 (4) - you missing finish on reverse here
03:00:229 (3) - another node same as 00:29:584
03:42:810 (3) - ^
[Yuki's Hard]
00:00:880 (1) - add whistle on tail
01:00:229 (1) - add whistle on head
01:05:390 - sounds better if you add note with finish here and start the spinner at 01:05:552
01:07:971 (1) - i prefer to add a circle here instead of slider
01:24:261 - add note here? if you do this, then remove the note at 01:24:745 (7)
01:34:100 (2) - maybe this kind slider flows better? http://puu.sh/5gNG5.jpg
SPOILER
02:05:552 - same as 01:24:261400,32,94100,2,0,P|368:60|348:100,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:24:745 (7) - i played at 600x800 windows mode here and this reverse slider goes out of my screen off. maybe you can find another way to fix this
02:58:939 (5) - remove the reverse and add a 4/4 slider at 02:59:261 because this part i feels gap here. this applies to the rest other three parts too
03:02:810 (1) - ctrl+h this and move back to it's recent position, it looks better for me
03:19:100 (3,4) - it's better not to stack them
03:29:584 (3,4) - ^
[Lunatic]
00:14:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - find another better pattern here? i recommend to make a pentagon here but, maybe you'll like this http://puu.sh/5gP9F.jpg
SPOILER
it start from 00:13:138 (1) to 00:16:041 (1). all notes here stacked perfectly, also i ctrl+h 'ed 00:13:299 (2,3)256,196,13138,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,84,15396,1,2,0:0:0:0:
428,224,15718,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,354,16041,6,0,B|256:304,1,50,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:56:358 (1,2) - reduce it's DS, this jump feels uncomfortable to play. if you keep this, add NC at 02:56:681 (3)
nice song, nice map overall
good luck
Topic Starter
thanks for moddingVhy wrote:
hello sjoy ~
[Lunatic]
00:14:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - find another better pattern here? i recommend to make a pentagon here but, maybe you'll like this http://puu.sh/5gP9F.jpg change another waySPOILERit start from 00:13:138 (1) to 00:16:041 (1). all notes here stacked perfectly, also i ctrl+h 'ed 00:13:299 (2,3)256,196,13138,5,2,0:0:0:0:
202,252,13299,2,0,L|152:252,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,252,13621,2,0,L|360:252,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,13944,5,2,0:0:0:0:
152,252,14105,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,136,14267,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,84,14428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,136,14589,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,252,14750,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,304,14912,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,224,15073,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,84,15396,1,2,0:0:0:0:
428,224,15718,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,354,16041,6,0,B|256:304,1,50,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:56:358 (1,2) - reduce it's DS, this jump feels uncomfortable to play. if you keep this, add NC at 02:56:681 (3)
set it intentionally
nice song, nice map overall
good luck
some fixed, thx. Umm..In fact, I made this without GS ._.Vhy wrote:
[baka's Normal]
00:29:584 (3) - please avoid placing node out of grid snap like this http://puu.sh/5gO7a.jpg
00:31:842 (1) - stack this perfectly with slider's tail at 00:30:552 (4)
02:22:003 (4) - you missing finish on reverse here
03:00:229 (3) - another node same as 00:29:584
03:42:810 (3) - ^
thx for moddingVhy wrote:
[Yuki's Hard]
00:00:880 (1) - add whistle on tail already has whi
01:00:229 (1) - add whistle on head change to fin
01:05:390 - sounds better if you add note with finish here and start the spinner at 01:05:552 ok
01:07:971 (1) - i prefer to add a circle here instead of slider i don't like it
01:24:261 - add note here? if you do this, then remove the note at 01:24:745 (7) ><
01:34:100 (2) - maybe this kind slider flows better? http://puu.sh/5gNG5.jpgSPOILER02:05:552 - same as 01:24:261 sameok400,32,94100,2,0,P|368:60|348:100,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:24:745 (7) - i played at 600x800 windows mode here and this reverse slider goes out of my screen off. maybe you can find another way to fix this fixed
02:58:939 (5) - remove the reverse and add a 4/4 slider at 02:59:261 because this part i feels gap here. this applies to the rest other three parts too no change I may think about it
03:02:810 (1) - ctrl+h this and move back to it's recent position, it looks better for me ok
03:19:100 (3,4) - it's better not to stack them ok
03:29:584 (3,4) - ^ ok
sorry to sjoy 今天很忙没空看，看完mod就要断网了哭哭，就直接post在这里了
SPOILER
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273,296,189261,2,0,P|231:281|187:281,2,88.000002685547,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,311,189907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
70,225,190068,2,0,L|56:50,1,176.000005371094
256,192,190552,12,0,192810,0:0:0:0:
316,57,193132,6,0,P|308:144|357:229,1,176.000005371094,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
453,231,193616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
399,139,193778,2,0,P|309:147|265:168,2,132.00000402832
393,33,194423,2,0,P|297:36|224:67,2,176.000005371094,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,82,195229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
398,139,195390,2,0,L|385:185,2,44.0000013427735,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,146,195713,6,0,B|226:152|190:55|190:55|162:48,1,176.000005371094,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
59,71,196197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,174,196358,2,0,L|109:295,1,132.00000402832
132,332,196681,2,0,L|222:358,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,337,197003,2,0,P|405:324|479:276,2,176.000005371094,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,260,197810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,236,197971,2,0,L|389:220,3,44.0000013427735,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,191,198294,6,0,P|442:109|375:35,1,176.000005371094,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,37,198778,2,0,L|190:58,1,88.000002685547
105,116,199100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,221,199261,2,0,L|126:307,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,341,199584,2,0,P|231:298|219:257,2,88.000002685547,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,149,200229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
450,176,200390,2,0,L|482:350,1,176.000005371094
256,192,200874,12,0,203132,0:0:0:0:
81,79,203455,6,0,L|266:62,1,176.000005371094,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,98,203939,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,182,204100,2,0,P|436:253|424:320,2,132.00000402832
314,199,204745,2,0,P|328:268|271:360,2,176.000005371094,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,160,205552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,77,205713,2,0,L|124:30,2,44.0000013427735,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,160,206036,6,0,B|154:204|76:179|76:179|63:215,1,176.000005371094,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,310,206519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,339,206681,2,0,L|334:332,1,132.00000402832
371,324,207003,2,0,L|445:257,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
477,167,207326,2,0,P|499:60|456:6,2,176.000005371094,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,95,208132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,59,208294,2,0,L|250:51,3,44.0000013427735,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,55,208616,6,0,B|137:106|137:106|116:202,1,176.000005371094,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,300,209100,2,0,L|230:335,1,88.000002685547
328,333,209423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,257,209584,2,0,L|312:222,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,133,209907,2,0,P|261:89|275:48,2,88.000002685547,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,149,210552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
61,176,210713,2,0,L|30:350,1,176.000005371094
256,192,211197,12,0,212165,0:0:0:0:
328,120,212487,6,0,L|354:80,3,44.0000013427735
398,55,212810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,155,212971,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,256,213132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,326,213374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,256,213616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,152,213778,6,0,L|81:106,3,44.0000013427735,4|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,58,214100,2,0,L|145:67,3,44.0000013427735,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,66,214423,2,0,L|241:57,3,44.0000013427735
250,109,214745,2,0,L|239:151,3,44.0000013427735,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,201,215068,6,0,P|315:236|427:236,1,176.000005371094,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,284,215713,2,0,P|160:249|48:249,1,176.000005371094,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,325,216358,6,0,L|355:288,3,44.0000013427735,4|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,262,216681,2,0,L|386:209,3,44.0000013427735,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,166,217003,2,0,L|367:123,3,44.0000013427735
336,83,217326,2,0,L|300:59,3,44.0000013427735,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,67,217649,6,0,P|162:93|68:75,1,176.000005371094,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,171,218294,2,0,P|350:145|444:163,1,176.000005371094,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,352,218939,6,0,L|388:352,2,44.0000013427735,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,352,219261,2,0,L|146:352,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,255,219584,2,0,L|149:255,2,44.0000013427735
299,255,219906,2,0,L|391:255,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,158,220229,6,0,L|387:158,2,44.0000013427735,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,158,220551,2,0,L|145:158,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,61,220874,2,0,L|149:61,2,44.0000013427735
299,61,221196,2,0,L|391:61,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,144,221519,6,0,P|465:195|456:242,1,88.000002685547,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,292,221842,2,0,P|362:241|371:194,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,168,222165,2,0,P|280:219|271:266,1,88.000002685547
190,316,222488,2,0,P|177:265|186:218,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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101,95,223132,2,0,L|131:57,3,44.0000013427735,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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272,49,223778,1,8,0:0:0:0:
373,75,223939,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,96,224019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,119,224100,6,0,P|413:205|398:291,1,176.000005371094,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,346,224584,2,0,P|293:260|308:174,1,176.000005371094
300,68,225068,2,0,P|246:81|221:109,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,199,225390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
158,302,225552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
62,257,225713,1,8,0:0:0:0:
85,154,225875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,195,226197,2,0,P|266:243|228:276,2,88.000002685547,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,100,226681,6,0,L|430:80,1,88.000002685547,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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285,195,227326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,235,227487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,260,227568,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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401,266,228294,2,0,L|414:176,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,94,228616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,48,228778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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314,332,230068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
414,299,230229,1,8,0:0:0:0:
431,195,230390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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441,231,232649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,233052,12,0,235552,0:0:0:0:
Hi sjoy ^^
Thanks for your modding (:
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Other lines are normal mods, just suggestion unless for Unrankable or strongly recommended changes.
Very good maps and nice song choice too (: STAR !!!!
Att.
Thanks for your modding (:
Unrankable ─ Doubtful Item ─ Tips & Tricks ─ ♥ Greetings ─ * Comments ─ Other lines are normal mods, just suggestion unless for Unrankable or strongly recommended changes.
* Usually I focus in flow and playability. Sometimes also on symmetry (if any).
* Since [baka's Normal] might feel a bit hard for the osu!novices and beginners, consider providing an Easy diff -- either by yours or a guest -- it would be great (:
[Lunatic]
00:33:455 (2) - Move the middle node by 2 grids down, so the blanket will get nicer.
00:58:132 (4) - Move to x:408 y:192 to improve flow and make pattern a bit more nicer (:
01:38:778 (7) - Move to x:432 y:236 to align better within the stream.
01:50:390 (4) - Move to x:136 y:232 for pattern consistency with 01:49:261 (1,2) - .
01:50:552 (1) - If you applied the last mod, then move 01:50:552 (1) - to x:120 y:96 for spacing equalization.
♥ Amazing (:
[Yuki's Hard]
01:08:616 (2,3,1) - Spacing Inconsistency... would place 01:08:939 (3) - either far from 01:09:261 (1) or stacked with its head.
03:30:552 (6) - Move to x:80 y:72 on spacing, otherwise player might be tempted to click here earlier and break combos.
♥ Nice diff !
[L18N+]
♥ 00:46:358 (4,5,1) - Loved how this is perfectly made (:
♥ 01:44:100 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Loved the flow going forth and back on same path ^^
♥ 02:41:842 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
♥ No complaints here ^^ Well-made diff
[baka's Normal]
* Nice diff, very solid and good rhythms ^^
* Since [baka's Normal] might feel a bit hard for the osu!novices and beginners, consider providing an Easy diff -- either by yours or a guest -- it would be great (:
[Lunatic]
00:33:455 (2) - Move the middle node by 2 grids down, so the blanket will get nicer.
00:58:132 (4) - Move to x:408 y:192 to improve flow and make pattern a bit more nicer (:
01:38:778 (7) - Move to x:432 y:236 to align better within the stream.
01:50:390 (4) - Move to x:136 y:232 for pattern consistency with 01:49:261 (1,2) - .
01:50:552 (1) - If you applied the last mod, then move 01:50:552 (1) - to x:120 y:96 for spacing equalization.
♥ Amazing (:
[Yuki's Hard]
01:08:616 (2,3,1) - Spacing Inconsistency... would place 01:08:939 (3) - either far from 01:09:261 (1) or stacked with its head.
03:30:552 (6) - Move to x:80 y:72 on spacing, otherwise player might be tempted to click here earlier and break combos.
♥ Nice diff !
[L18N+]
♥ 00:46:358 (4,5,1) - Loved how this is perfectly made (:
♥ 01:44:100 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Loved the flow going forth and back on same path ^^
♥ 02:41:842 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
♥ No complaints here ^^ Well-made diff
[baka's Normal]
* Nice diff, very solid and good rhythms ^^
Very good maps and nice song choice too (: STAR !!!!
Att.
hi hi :3
Second why you didn't use clap ? '-' there is lot of place where a clap is needed take a look at this others diff and try to do same
- 00:34:423 (3) - it touch the HP bar with HR mod move it somewhere else
- 00:37:003 (1,2) - improve the blanket here, like this
- 00:53:778 (3,1) - avoid this kind of overlap it could be confused for beginner
- 00:58:939 (3,1) - ^
- 01:01:519 (3,5) - ^
-01:18:294 (1,2) - blanket better plz
-01:55:068 (2,4) - same as before avoid overlap move it to x:140,y:196
- 02:57:649 (1,3) - improve blanket
- 00:46:036 (3) - move it to x:348,y:232, better flow
- 01:09:907 (3,2) - what about stack them, to keep the same DS just down the end of 01:10:552 (1) -
- 01:15:068 (3,2) - try to avoid this overlap ^^
- 01:16:519 (3,1) - same
- 02:27:971 (1,3) - stack them perfectly or don't overlap them
- 02:54:423 (5) - 1/1 slider fit better imo
- 03:04:745 (4) - ^
- 03:34:423 (1,3) - not stacked perfectly
- 03:41:519 (4) - NC
- 00:58:616 (3,3) - not stack perfectly
- 01:08:939 (3,1) - DS is kinda confused here 01:08:616 (2,3) - it's 1,00 and then 01:08:939 (3,1) - you pass to 0,50 could be less confused if you stack them
- 01:49:261 (1,2) - i'm not a hug fan of 1/1 slider stacked with a 1/1 break between us, but if you like you ignore me x)
- 02:04:423 (2) - same as 01:08:939 (3,1) - ctrl G maybe ? '-'
- 03:20:229 (6,7) - stack 6 with 7
- 03:30:552 (6,7) - ^
nice diff :3
- 00:23:616 (6,2) - stack perfectly
- 00:35:068 (4,1) - ^
- 00:40:229 (3,4) - you should put a 1/2 slider instead and then make this pattern
- 00:43:778 (2) - ctrl G and then 00:44:100 (3,4) - ctlr G too
- 00:44:423 (5,2) - stack them perfectly
- 01:13:132 (1,3) - these shape are kinda ~ why you didn't use only one anchor point ? it could look better, and also you can make better blanket
- 01:13:778 (3,4) - stack
- 01:24:584 (1,2,3,6) - ^
- 01:29:907 (1,2) - make the blanket like this
- 02:02:810 (3,4) - this jump @.@ consider reduce it a bit
- 02:28:294 (4) - - 03:22:971 (6,3) - stack
and that's all for me :3 good luck on ranking !
baka's Normal
First why you don't start mapping at 00:21:520 - same as the others, you should really >.< plz consider thisSecond why you didn't use clap ? '-' there is lot of place where a clap is needed take a look at this others diff and try to do same
- 00:34:423 (3) - it touch the HP bar with HR mod move it somewhere else
- 00:37:003 (1,2) - improve the blanket here, like this
- 00:53:778 (3,1) - avoid this kind of overlap it could be confused for beginner
- 00:58:939 (3,1) - ^
- 01:01:519 (3,5) - ^
-01:18:294 (1,2) - blanket better plz
-01:55:068 (2,4) - same as before avoid overlap move it to x:140,y:196
- 02:57:649 (1,3) - improve blanket
L18N+
- 00:32:810 (2,1,2,2) - playing 4 times the same slider is kinda boring imo, try to change a bit the shape or the rythm maybe- 00:46:036 (3) - move it to x:348,y:232, better flow
- 01:09:907 (3,2) - what about stack them, to keep the same DS just down the end of 01:10:552 (1) -
- 01:15:068 (3,2) - try to avoid this overlap ^^
- 01:16:519 (3,1) - same
- 02:27:971 (1,3) - stack them perfectly or don't overlap them
- 02:54:423 (5) - 1/1 slider fit better imo
- 03:04:745 (4) - ^
- 03:34:423 (1,3) - not stacked perfectly
- 03:41:519 (4) - NC
Yuki's Hard
- 00:42:165 (1,2) - in this way ?- 00:58:616 (3,3) - not stack perfectly
- 01:08:939 (3,1) - DS is kinda confused here 01:08:616 (2,3) - it's 1,00 and then 01:08:939 (3,1) - you pass to 0,50 could be less confused if you stack them
- 01:49:261 (1,2) - i'm not a hug fan of 1/1 slider stacked with a 1/1 break between us, but if you like you ignore me x)
- 02:04:423 (2) - same as 01:08:939 (3,1) - ctrl G maybe ? '-'
- 03:20:229 (6,7) - stack 6 with 7
- 03:30:552 (6,7) - ^
nice diff :3
Lunatic
- 00:22:164 (3,4) - what about make it like that ?- 00:23:616 (6,2) - stack perfectly
- 00:35:068 (4,1) - ^
- 00:40:229 (3,4) - you should put a 1/2 slider instead and then make this pattern
- 00:43:778 (2) - ctrl G and then 00:44:100 (3,4) - ctlr G too
- 00:44:423 (5,2) - stack them perfectly
- 01:13:132 (1,3) - these shape are kinda ~ why you didn't use only one anchor point ? it could look better, and also you can make better blanket
- 01:13:778 (3,4) - stack
- 01:24:584 (1,2,3,6) - ^
- 01:29:907 (1,2) - make the blanket like this
- 02:02:810 (3,4) - this jump @.@ consider reduce it a bit
- 02:28:294 (4) - - 03:22:971 (6,3) - stack
and that's all for me :3 good luck on ranking !
Topic Starter
[quote="Alarido"]Hi sjoy ^^
Thanks for your modding (:
─ Unrankable ─ Doubtful Item ─ Tips & Tricks ─ ♥ Greetings ─ * Comments ─
Other lines are normal mods, just suggestion unless for Unrankable or strongly recommended changes.
[notice]* Usually I focus in flow and playability. Sometimes also on symmetry (if any).
* Since [baka's Normal] might feel a bit hard for the osu!novices and beginners, consider providing an Easy diff -- either by yours or a guest -- it would be great (: I think is not suitable for this song to make a really E because it has high bpm.I think this normal is ok.making a Easy just broken the whole song rhythm
[Lunatic]
00:33:455 (2) - Move the middle node by 2 grids down, so the blanket will get nicer. ok
00:58:132 (4) - Move to x:408 y:192 to improve flow and make pattern a bit more nicer (: ok
01:38:778 (7) - Move to x:432 y:236 to align better within the stream. ok
01:50:390 (4) - Move to x:136 y:232 for pattern consistency with 01:49:261 (1,2) - . change another style
01:50:552 (1) - If you applied the last mod, then move 01:50:552 (1) - to x:120 y:96 for spacing equalization.^
♥ Amazing (:
thanks for modding and star
Thanks for your modding (:
Unrankable ─ Doubtful Item ─ Tips & Tricks ─ ♥ Greetings ─ * Comments ─ Other lines are normal mods, just suggestion unless for Unrankable or strongly recommended changes.
[notice]* Usually I focus in flow and playability. Sometimes also on symmetry (if any).
* Since [baka's Normal] might feel a bit hard for the osu!novices and beginners, consider providing an Easy diff -- either by yours or a guest -- it would be great (: I think is not suitable for this song to make a really E because it has high bpm.I think this normal is ok.making a Easy just broken the whole song rhythm
[Lunatic]
00:33:455 (2) - Move the middle node by 2 grids down, so the blanket will get nicer. ok
00:58:132 (4) - Move to x:408 y:192 to improve flow and make pattern a bit more nicer (: ok
01:38:778 (7) - Move to x:432 y:236 to align better within the stream. ok
01:50:390 (4) - Move to x:136 y:232 for pattern consistency with 01:49:261 (1,2) - . change another style
01:50:552 (1) - If you applied the last mod, then move 01:50:552 (1) - to x:120 y:96 for spacing equalization.^
♥ Amazing (:
thanks for modding and star
just saw my queue and my sis asked me to mod this
imo i think it's perfect already.
just more star from me >w<
this is the best last remote instrumental song i've ever heard. and dat chorus OMGGGG
imo i think it's perfect already.
just more star from me >w<
this is the best last remote instrumental song i've ever heard. and dat chorus OMGGGG
Topic Starter
thanks for modding-Umi- wrote:
hi hi :3Lunatic
- 00:22:164 (3,4) - what about make it like that ? I don't like making a jump here
- 00:23:616 (6,2) - stack perfectlydone
- 00:35:068 (4,1) - ^ done
- 00:40:229 (3,4) - you should put a 1/2 slider instead and then make this pattern keep.change the instrument here
- 00:43:778 (2) - ctrl G and then 00:44:100 (3,4) - ctlr G too done
- 00:44:423 (5,2) - stack them perfectly done
- 01:13:132 (1,3) - these shape are kinda ~ why you didn't use only one anchor point ? it could look better, and also you can make better blanket ok
- 01:13:778 (3,4) - stack done
01:24:584 (1,2,3,6) - ^ done
- 01:29:907 (1,2) - make the blanket like this done
- 02:02:810 (3,4) - this jump @.@ consider reduce it a bitemmm.ok
- 02:28:294 (4) - ok
- 03:22:971 (6,3) - stack done
and that's all for me :3 good luck on ranking !
Topic Starter
thanks againLunaties wrote:
just saw my queue and my sis asked me to mod this
imo i think it's perfect already.
just more star from me >w<
this is the best last remote instrumental song i've ever heard. and dat chorus OMGGGG
Alarido wrote:
[Yuki's Hard]
01:08:616 (2,3,1) - Spacing Inconsistency... would place 01:08:939 (3) - either far from 01:09:261 (1) or stacked with its head. also fixed in -Umi-'s diff~
03:30:552 (6) - Move to x:80 y:72 on spacing, otherwise player might be tempted to click here earlier and break combos. I think may not because the rhythm is same as before =w=
♥ Nice diff ! thx~
thx for modding~-Umi- wrote:
Yuki's Hard
- 00:42:165 (1,2) - in this way ? ok
- 00:58:616 (3,3) - not stack perfectly fixed~
- 01:08:939 (3,1) - DS is kinda confused here 01:08:616 (2,3) - it's 1,00 and then 01:08:939 (3,1) - you pass to 0,50 could be less confused if you stack them fixed~
- 01:49:261 (1,2) - i'm not a hug fan of 1/1 slider stacked with a 1/1 break between us, but if you like you ignore me x) x) here no change, I think it's fine
- 02:04:423 (2) - same as 01:08:939 (3,1) - ctrl G maybe ? '-' here I changed~
- 03:20:229 (6,7) - stack 6 with 7 nope~
- 03:30:552 (6,7) - ^ ^
nice diff :3
Hello, from m4m, and sorry for my lateness
[Lunatic]
00:13:138 (1) - I think its better to take out the whistle here
00:17:492 (1) - And add whistle here
[Yuki]
03:33:132 (4) - New combo here to make the change of rhythm more noticeable?
[L18N+]
00:02:492 (2) - Delete note? I feels useless and unnecessary
00:25:390 (1,2) - I would have preferred to use a slider that starts at 00:25:390 - and ends at 00:25:874 - the rhythm would be easier to follow
00:30:552 (1,2) - Same as above, and for the rest of the map, i hope you know what I mean
01:10:229 (4,1,2) - They sound weird, and its because all of the sudden you start to follow a different rhythm with this slider 01:10:552 (1), I suggest to either extend the slider so it ends at next white tick, or add a note at 01:10:390 -
01:16:197 (2) - This also sounds weird to me, delete the slider, and add note at 01:16:197 -
01:20:229 - Add a note here? Or delete the note at 01:24:423 (2) - ?
03:01:358 (1,2) - I actually prefer it to be this way: http://puu.sh/5sVTB.jpg
The map is cool, just some spots where rhythm seemed to be a bit too weird for me, although I have to say that it also had good parts that I specially liked a lot, like the ones after the break.
[Baka's Normal]
Diff is good
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Anyways this is all, and again, sorry for the late. And Ill also try to get to your mod on my map as soon as I have a bit of free time and give you kudosu then.
[Lunatic]
00:13:138 (1) - I think its better to take out the whistle here
00:17:492 (1) - And add whistle here
[Yuki]
03:33:132 (4) - New combo here to make the change of rhythm more noticeable?
[L18N+]
00:02:492 (2) - Delete note? I feels useless and unnecessary
00:25:390 (1,2) - I would have preferred to use a slider that starts at 00:25:390 - and ends at 00:25:874 - the rhythm would be easier to follow
00:30:552 (1,2) - Same as above, and for the rest of the map, i hope you know what I mean
01:10:229 (4,1,2) - They sound weird, and its because all of the sudden you start to follow a different rhythm with this slider 01:10:552 (1), I suggest to either extend the slider so it ends at next white tick, or add a note at 01:10:390 -
01:16:197 (2) - This also sounds weird to me, delete the slider, and add note at 01:16:197 -
01:20:229 - Add a note here? Or delete the note at 01:24:423 (2) - ?
03:01:358 (1,2) - I actually prefer it to be this way: http://puu.sh/5sVTB.jpg
The map is cool, just some spots where rhythm seemed to be a bit too weird for me, although I have to say that it also had good parts that I specially liked a lot, like the ones after the break.
[Baka's Normal]
Diff is good
---------------------------
Anyways this is all, and again, sorry for the late. And Ill also try to get to your mod on my map as soon as I have a bit of free time and give you kudosu then.
thx for moddingXanandra wrote:
[Yuki]
03:33:132 (4) - New combo here to make the change of rhythm more noticeable? ok
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