Stefan wrote:

Last edited by Stefan on about 6 years ago, edited 1337 times in total.

Stefan wrote:

Amazing to see the Map ranked soon. Wird aber auch mal Zeit, ne? *hides*

eikkaleyd wrote:

Yeah and I'll reply it again when it is ranked.XD

aabc271 wrote:

So, it turns out that I am a few days late Orz
Anyway, let's go ~
Utsuho-don so cute www

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to
Grey~ Explanations of my suggestions

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[ Inner Oni]

Already talked to ono in irc. Mod content in the spoilerbox as a reference. Log lost because both have osu crashed x_x

SPOILER

Looks quite fine, so I'll focus more on the minor things

• 00:53:037 (Triplets x4) and 01:02:637 (Triplets x4) - It'll be nice if there are some kind of connections in terms of hitsound pattern usage ( eg Pattern of ABAB x2, ABAC x2 )

• 01:17:637 (Finishes) - They're quite sudden to me because the previous parts do not contain consecutive 1/2 finishes. I'd prefer adding finishes at 01:18:837 (2,3) only, but that's my preference only.

• 01:50:037 ~ 01:59:487 - Maybe you can add some 1/4s to make the notes less repetitive ? ( eg you can consider sth like o ooo loop at 01:54:837 and 01:57:237 )

Suggested patterns ~

Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

00:24:687 (2) - Blue note, or maybe change a bit the surrounding notes too if necessary ? ( Well, just because of the previous dkk x2, I think (1,2) could stand out against background music. Also comparing with 00:26:337 ( ddk x4 ), maybe you can use dkk x4 here. It's more like my personal feelings though )

00:59:337 (1) - Blue note, so that it becomes ooooo ? ( Just a personal preference thinking that following the pitch of instrument will be better than following the less obvious drum. I guess you understand what I mean :3 )
01:00:837 (1) - ^
01:08:937 (1) - ^. This time changing the 5-plets into ooooo.

01:06:537 (x) - Maybe add o o (1/2) ? ( Suddenly sounds empty for me, since the previous part doesn't have such odd rest )

01:13:587 (2,1) - o o ? ( Hitsound preference on the pitch again. 01:13:287 has a lower pitch than 01:13:737 so I think d k fits this increase more naturally )

01:48:237 (7-plets) - ooooooo ? ( By referring to the hitsounds before this, I guess you're trying to follow the background hits and drums. kkddkkd somehow fits the drums better so you can consider this )

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[ Oni]

Also modded in irc. Log below in spoilerbox as a reference.

SPOILER

20:58 aabc271: Osu just crashed
20:58 aabc271: I need the log ;w;
20:59 OnosakiHito: fuck
20:59 OnosakiHito: I don't have it either
20:59 OnosakiHito: lol
20:59 OnosakiHito: you know mine crashed as well...
20:59 aabc271: DDDDDDDD:
20:59 OnosakiHito: uuuuuh, nvm let's just continue. Just mention in thread that one part got lost due to error.
21:00 OnosakiHito: and save current one.
21:00 aabc271: It's ok
21:00 aabc271: Because I only modded the inner oni
21:00 aabc271: I'll just post
21:00 aabc271: Never mind
21:00 aabc271: I'll mention in my post that you've already responded to my inner oni mod
21:01 OnosakiHito: oh, okay.
21:01 aabc271: Unstable osu. Seems this build is not that well-debugged
21:05 OnosakiHito: So, we are done...?
21:06 OnosakiHito: Ah, I missunderstand..
21:06 OnosakiHito: Yeah, indeed.
21:07 aabc271: Well, I'm modding oni now
21:07 aabc271: So, done for irc maybe xD
21:08 OnosakiHito: k
21:08 OnosakiHito: only for inner we did iirc?
21:09 aabc271: But we can of course do others for irc
21:09 aabc271: That is, I mod now, then say instantly to you
21:09 OnosakiHito: sure
21:10 aabc271: 00:23:637 - I'm not so sure about the hitsounds of 1/2
21:10 aabc271: They sound ok yet don't really fit the music, or is that my illusion ?
21:11 aabc271: Maybe you can make a reference with 00:28:437
21:11 aabc271: 00:28:437 -
21:11 OnosakiHito: true lol
21:11 OnosakiHito: changed
21:11 aabc271: ok :3
21:13 aabc271: 00:48:837 - Oni is not that lenient, either lol
21:13 aabc271: Not an issue though, just saying www
21:16 aabc271: 01:11:637 (1,2) - Finish, just like inner oni ?
21:16 aabc271: Same for 01:14:037, 01:16:437
21:17 OnosakiHito: Nah, would like to keep it here.
21:17 OnosakiHito: It was intensional that I didn't used here finisher but in the Inner I did.
21:17 OnosakiHito: In this way I can emphasize 01:18:837 (1,2,1,1,1) - more
21:18 aabc271: ok then never mind
21:22 aabc271: 02:43:887 - Quite odd to have a slider here ? w
21:23 aabc271: At least the similar section has notes instead 02:52:887 -
21:23 OnosakiHito: changed to d k k d kkk d d
21:23 aabc271: ok :3
21:24 aabc271: Seems oni is quite structure-based, so I think I won't mod too much on minor patterns
21:24 OnosakiHito: ok.
21:24 aabc271: eg 01:50:037 - Hitsound is totally off for me, but I know it's the opposite of 01:52:437 -
21:25 OnosakiHito: yeah
21:25 OnosakiHito: lol
21:25 aabc271: I think there's a better way to create a contrast with 1:52
21:25 aabc271: But that depends on you whether to change
21:25 aabc271: It can be not 100% symmetrical, you know
21:27 aabc271: Maybe I'll go dinner first. 9:27 here
21:28 OnosakiHito: alright.
21:28 OnosakiHito: I have to go as well.
21:28 *aabc271 savelogs
21:28 aabc271: REMEMBER THAT LOL
21:28 OnosakiHito: Dunno, for muzu futsuu and kantan
21:28 OnosakiHito: you can post it in thread
21:28 OnosakiHito: and I will check.
21:28 aabc271: ok then :3
21:28 OnosakiHito: o7
21:28 OnosakiHito: See you later then.
21:28 aabc271: Bye :3
21:28 OnosakiHito: thanks for now~
21:28 aabc271: It's ok ww

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[ Muzukashii]

• 01:27:837 (1/2 x11) - Maybe you can cut this 1/2 x11 sections into smaller parts, like deleting 01:28:587 (1) and 01:29:187 (1) ( This 1/2 seems to be quite longer than the others with mostly < 7 hits, and so you might want to balance that a bit ) Oh, good idea!

• 02:28:137 (3,1) - I'm not sure if it's me, but I think the 1 should be at 02:28:587 instead because that's where the new section of calmer music starts. Hm, I think current pattern fits better since I mapped to the main sound here.

Suggested patterns ~

Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

01:17:187 (1) - Remove finish ? ( imo the music isn't that strong to make finish a better choice. Comparing with K 01:20:637, this note isn't that significant because 01:16:737 (14,1,1) are all emphasized to a certain extent in 1/1 spacing , unlike 1:20 being the only emphasized in 1/1 spacing ) Oh, you are right.

01:23:637 (1,2) - Add finish ? ( For consistency on use of finish with 01:33:237 (1,2) )yes

Overall really nice. The use of hitsounds and patterns are amazing, especially the first 50 seconds

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[ Futsuu]

• 02:45:237 (1,1,1,1) - I think more note should be added in between these. Currently it feels quite empty as the previous parts of this kiai is denser. Oh, this was due to difficulty. Kinda true what you say, but I really worry it becomes too hard on a BPM with 200.

Once again, the hitsounds fit well with the patterns and so this futsuu is nicely-made :3

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[ Kantan]

• 01:39:237 (1) - I'm not sure about this short spinner. It can be too short for new players since they might fail to react quickly, causing the failure to complete the spinner. I'd suggest deleting it, and adding K at 01:39:237, then D 01:39:837. Oh, true. Changed~

Suggested patterns ~

Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

01:09:537 (x) - Add a red note here ? ( So that the patterns are consistent with 00:54:837, 00:59:637 and 01:04:437 ) That was intensional to have a rise of notes here. 2/1 -> 11/1

01:54:537 (x) - Add a blue note ? ( It could be boring to have 1/1 d k loop for 9 seconds ) changed
01:59:337 (x) - ^ ( Depending if you mind using k k D 1/1 )changed

Again a nice kantan with appropriate newbie-friendly patterns

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I'll say the taiko diffs are ready for rank

As usual, Ono makes good taiko mapset with great mix of hitsounds and patterns

Find me when you've fixed the above mods, since I'll bubble this :3

Star and good luck ~

OnosakiHito wrote:

Chewin wrote:

OnosakiHito wrote:

OnosakiHito wrote:

Is this real world?! T^T

Saten and Regou, we did it. For real. Thank you for your hard work!
Also at this point thanks to all the guys who supported/modded the set. Also I want to thank the coffee and my mother!

Now let's hope this gets not unranked for some reason. lol
Unyuu~
(jumps around like crazy. God, I'm so happy.)

happy box

OnosakiHito wrote:

Kodora wrote:

Wowo, it was so long, congratulations, Ono!

osu! needs more OD10 maps :>

silmarilen wrote:

holy shit, the first od10 map since 2008

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

i saw this map when i started mapping (around 2012/03) and now this got ranked, finally.
congrats, guys.

OnosakiHito wrote:

eikkaleyd wrote:

Yeah and I'll reply it again when it is ranked.XD

eikkaaaaaaaa. Nice to see you again. Was thinking about you few days ago. \o/

Darkravens23 wrote:

endlich