Hi~
Nice SB as usual Sherri ~
also nice song too here
take my star and Good Luck ~
General
~ add widescreen support since this map use SB?
~ no need "Dekaane" in tags, already have in "DakeDekaane" and name of diff
~ 01:17:732 - kiai off due same as 01:05:100 - ?
~ change name creator become Yumih /runs <3
Easy
00:25:626 (3) - clap in repeat for consistency? also for follow piano
00:28:784 (3) - clap in tail? music sound here is loud, also consistency with previous
00:34:705 (2) - hmm maybe you will reject this but , 00:35:100 - vocal in here is loud, you can't skip this imo, try http://puu.sh/4ISJ5.jpg ?
00:41:021 (2) - whistle? consistency with 00:39:442 (5) -
00:55:232 (4) - inconsistency spacing here, i know you want this circle stacked in (1)'s tail but it's unrankable when spacing is not consisten
my advice : if you want to keep (4)'s stacked , make 00:54:047 (3) - like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1021525
01:05:495 (1) - in tail, yap this sound is loud but it's too much loud if you use finish imo, try use clap instead?
01:22:468 (3,4) - for this, in (3) , 01:23:061 - have cymbal here, can't skip to map this imo so delete (4) and make like http://puu.sh/4ITac.jpg (head and repeat use finish, tail use clap)
01:28:784 - from here 01:30:363 - , volume increase in 01:28:784 - and still loud sound in 01:30:363 - , 5% here really not fit, try 20-25% instead (if you follow, apply in all diffs except dekaane's)
Normal
00:28:784 (3) - same as easy, clap in tail for consistency?
00:42:600 (4,5) - try make smooth flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1021560
00:48:521 (1) - nazi, 280,248 for symmetrical with (2) and blanket with (3)?
01:05:692 (2) - same as easy, try clap in tail instead, due cymbal is more loud more hard in 01:06:482 - than 01:06:087 - , oh or you can try make 01:06:087 - volume lower here
01:08:850 (2) - try for follow vocal since this is normal which played by newbie too. try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/4ITyq.jpg ?
01:16:153 (3) - based my taste in flow, try 236,360 for better flow?
01:21:679 (2) - whistle in head to follow violin sound?
01:24:837 (3) - this flow is bad due straight slider and then curved, try http://puu.sh/4ITDI.jpg ?
Dekaane'sHard
00:26:021 (2) - feel free to reject, based piano here, try ctrl+G? xP
00:39:639 (7) - try in 440,228 for better flow?
00:53:653 (3) - ctrl+G to make it harder? /runs
01:06:087 - same as other diff, try lower volume or change clap?
fun ~
Insane
OD-1 for better spread with others
00:39:837 (1) - cymbal so loud here, change to finish
00:44:475 (1,2,3,4) - actually you can make stream from 00:44:475 - until 00:45:067 -
00:45:758 (7) - NC due stream? you did it in previous like 00:36:284 (1) - , for consistency yeah yeah yeah
00:55:232 (7) - try ctrl+G , it's really fit with music imo <3
01:06:087 (4) - same as other
Nice SB as usual Sherri ~
also nice song too here
take my star and Good Luck ~