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yuikonnu - Hatsukoi no Ehon

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litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
litoluna
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年2月25日 at 15:56:33

Artist: yuikonnu
Title: Hatsukoi no Ehon
Tags: HoneyWorks GUMI VOCALOID Nijiiro Chocolatier Dagger-Gazel Satellite
BPM: 155
Filesize: 24343kb
Play Time: 03:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Gazel's Hard (4.84 stars, 435 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 694 notes)
  3. Normal (2.95 stars, 196 notes)
Download: yuikonnu - Hatsukoi no Ehon
Download: yuikonnu - Hatsukoi no Ehon (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2
OWC2014 Quarterfinals FM3

Normal : by me
Gazel's Hard : by Satellite
Insane : by me

Special Thanks
Guest : Satellite
changelog
  1. Add video.avi(2013/08/27)
  2. Add soft-slidertick2.wav and slide2(2013/8/31)
Modding help
~Modder list~
  1. Saten(Timing check)
  2. scanter
  3. Lally
  4. ZLOdeuka-
  5. Garven(Timing check)
  6. Mei
  7. raheta_adi
  8. Sana
  9. bigfrog
  10. Guy
  11. Delis
  12. Garven
  13. 10crystalmask01
  14. CakiP
  15. Legaulto
  16. Gabe
  17. Garven(Rebubble)
  18. BeatofIke

Last edited by litoluna , edited 87 times in total.
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
it definitely felt too late the offset

I would decrease the offset by -11 ms

Easiest would just be to mark every section and move all of them

Hope it was of any help~
good luck
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
litoluna
@Saten
thanks Saten :3
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
litoluna
move pend
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
Test Play Request from my queue


http://puu.sh/4qR6M.osr

so disappointed that I die at last... :(

awesome in my opinion and enjoy my "rainbow hit".

good luck with your map~
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
litoluna
@mtbbsben
thanks test play~!!
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter
Hi o3o/

Normal

  1. 00:30:312 (2) - Make it perfect blanket? w
  2. 00:43:418 (6) - ボーカルが 00:43:891 ここで終わるので似合わないスライダーだと思います。こんなリズムはどうでしょうか？
    SPOILER
  3. 01:22:418 (2) - nice distance :D

Gazel's Hard

  1. 00:22:102 (1) - 始点と終点が重なっているのが少し危険 o.o!
  2. 00:41:997 (3) - これもミスする易い
  3. 00:50:523 (3) - More perfect blanket? w
    SPOILER
  4. 00:51:786 (3) - Same.
  5. 01:08:839 (1,2,3) - ちょっとおかしいなリズムですね。こんなリズムはどうでしょうか？ボーカルによく似合っていると思います
    SPOILER
  6. 02:13:260 (1) - 背後にあるサークルが危ないと思います。こんな風にするのがもっといいかも？
    SPOILER
  7. 02:20:207 (1) - Clap? because combo burst of kiai-time =w=
  8. 02:26:207 - Clap
  9. 02:36:312 (2) - Ctrl + G? 02:37:260 (1,2,3,4) こちらと同様に。
  10. 02:58:418 - Finish?

Insane

  1. 00:25:891 (1) - ギターの音に合わせて形を少しアレンジして見ましょ :> 例えば、こんな形とか？
    SPOILER
  2. 01:02:523 - Volume 40%?
  3. 01:35:602 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - このBPMでこんなに長いストリームはやばい気がします. これはどうですか？ 茶色の1,2回を見てください :>
    SPOILER
  4. 01:41:681 (1,2) - Bad flow. こんなのどうですか？
    SPOILER
  5. 01:47:523 (1,1,1) - NC spam imo. insane players playing well 1/2 anti-jump
  6. 02:07:418 (1,1,1,1,1) - Delete NC
  7. 02:15:786 (1) - 私の初恋でした w
  8. 02:34:733 (1) - x:436, y:60. bad overlap
That's all xD sry poor modding :< too nice love song <3 I love it
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
litoluna
@scanter

scanter wrote:

Hi o3o/

Normal

  1. 00:30:312 (2) - Make it perfect blanket? w ok~!
  2. 00:43:418 (6) - ボーカルが 00:43:891 ここで終わるので似合わないスライダーだと思います。こんなリズムはどうでしょうか？Backのdrumsの音の終わりが 00:44:523 - なので伸ばしています。
    SPOILER
  3. 01:22:418 (2) - nice distance :D ah w fixed

Insane

  1. 00:25:891 (1) - ギターの音に合わせて形を少しアレンジして見ましょ :> 例えば、こんな形とか？ nice idea!
    SPOILER
  2. 01:02:523 - Volume 40%? ok~!
  3. 01:35:602 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - このBPMでこんなに長いストリームはやばい気がします. これはどうですか？ 茶色の1,2回を見てください :> Insane diffだから問題ないかなぁとおもいます
    SPOILER
  4. 01:41:681 (1,2) - Bad flow. こんなのどうですか？　ここでGuitarの流れが変わるのでわざと逆の流れをつくってます。
    SPOILER
  5. 01:47:523 (1,1,1) - NC spam imo. insane players playing well 1/2 anti-jump ん～。。。自分はNCがあったほうがわかりやすいと思うのでとりあえず保留で><
  6. 02:07:418 (1,1,1,1,1) - Delete NC^
  7. 02:15:786 (1) - 私の初恋でした w　<3
  8. 02:34:733 (1) - x:436, y:60. bad overlap ok!
That's all xD sry poor modding :< too nice love song <3 I love it
nice modding! o/
arigatou!!
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite

scanter wrote:

Hi o3o/

Gazel's Hard

  1. 00:22:102 (1) - 始点と終点が重なっているのが少し危険 o.o!
  2. 00:41:997 (3) - これもミスする易い
  3. 00:50:523 (3) - More perfect blanket? w
    please code....
    SPOILER
  4. 00:51:786 (3) - Same. ^
  5. 01:08:839 (1,2,3) - ちょっとおかしいなリズムですね。こんなリズムはどうでしょうか？ボーカルによく似合っていると思います
    SPOILER
  6. 02:13:260 (1) - 背後にあるサークルが危ないと思います。こんな風にするのがもっといいかも？
    SPOILER
  7. 02:20:207 (1) - Clap? because combo burst of kiai-time =w=
  8. 02:26:207 - Clap
  9. 02:36:312 (2) - Ctrl + G? 02:37:260 (1,2,3,4) こちらと同様に。
  10. 02:58:418 - Finish? no

That's all xD sry poor modding :< too nice love song <3 I love it
almost Fixed thanks useful modding scanter <3

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: hatsukoi no ehon.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 140060
Countdown: 0
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Hatsukoi no Ehon
TitleUnicode:初恋の絵本
Artist:yuikonnu
ArtistUnicode:ゆいこんぬ
Creator:litoluna
Version:Gazel's Hard
Source:
Tags:HoneyWorks GUMI VOCALOID Nijiiro Chocolatier Dagger-Gazel Satellite
BeatmapID:300294
BeatmapSetID:110870

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112,212,155997,6,0,P|148:200|180:180,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,296,156312,2,0,P|234:265|244:232,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,288,156628,2,0,P|349:254|331:224,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,164,156944,2,0,P|360:148|327:139,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,56,157260,6,0,P|288:71|255:80,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,164,157575,2,0,P|222:153|192:135,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,196,157891,2,0,P|116:164|107:131,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,132,158207,2,0,P|30:98|48:68,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,48,158523,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,164,158839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,176,158918,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,188,158997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,200,159075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,159154,1,4,0:0:0:0:
392,136,159470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,148,159549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,159628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,172,159707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,184,159786,5,4,0:0:0:0:
436,340,160102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,328,160181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,316,160260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,304,160339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,292,160418,2,0,L|420:280,3,35,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,320,160733,2,0,L|328:332,3,35,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,161049,6,0,B|220:304|220:304|200:356|152:376|104:368|76:328,1,210,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,276,161681,2,0,P|152:240|152:208,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,160,161997,2,0,P|72:196|72:228,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,208,162312,6,0,B|188:196|188:196|208:248|256:268|304:260|332:220,1,210,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,164,162944,2,0,P|256:128|256:96,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,16,163260,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,16,163575,5,4,0:0:0:0:
180,152,163891,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,108,164207,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,48,164523,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,188,164839,6,0,B|288:248|356:272|356:272|384:236|432:228,2,210.000008010865,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,166181,12,2,167365,0:0:0:0:
256,192,167444,12,4,168628,0:0:0:0:
444,96,168944,5,8,0:0:0:0:
424,176,169102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,120,169260,2,0,L|296:136,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,96,169575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,180,169733,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,180,169812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,180,169891,6,0,P|176:176|132:92,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,48,170365,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,48,170444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,48,170523,2,0,P|48:116|68:184,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,244,170997,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,256,171075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,270,171154,6,0,P|140:294|140:318,2,35,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,300,171470,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,356,171786,2,0,P|240:328|248:232,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,160,172260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,232,172418,6,0,P|276:260|372:268,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,196,172891,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,184,173049,2,0,P|300:168|280:140,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,104,173365,2,0,P|344:70|350:36,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,4,173681,6,0,P|226:55|158:65,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,52,174154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
159,66,174312,2,0,P|210:111|220:179,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,156,174786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,80,174944,5,2,0:0:0:0:
140,156,175260,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,80,175575,2,0,P|356:88|412:56,2,140,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,28,176365,5,0,0:0:0:0:
204,112,176523,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,304,176839,2,0,P|356:296|412:328,2,140,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,348,177786,6,0,P|63:302|46:240,2,140,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,178497,12,0,180944,0:0:0:0:
litoluna
1,073 posts
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Topic Starter
litoluna
update~
Lally
3,177 posts
Joined December 2011
Lally
hi from #queue o3o///

[General]
  1. 02:51:154 - this kiai flash fits not here
  2. 02:47:049 - in your diff N and I add a spinner in this part because it follow a strange rhythm hard to understand at first try
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:628 (2) - tryto do this slider like:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:36:628 (5,6) - i would use a slider here :o
  3. 01:10:733 (1,2,3,1,2) - try to do this slider like:
    SPOILER
  4. 02:26:523 (5) - new combo
[Gazel o3o]
  1. 00:34:733 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this kind of stalked jumps areno more allowed as far i know ,they should have some grind of distance and not a perfect stack
  2. 01:35:365 (1) - i feel it to random i know your following the vocal here but i think this part should be better without
[Insane]
  1. 00:13:733 (2) - ctrl+g feels better here
  2. 01:25:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - try with a better stack like:
    SPOILER
  3. 01:42:312 (3) - if you're following the guitar the rhythm should be like:
  4. 02:19:575 - hmm why are you finish the breack here?,leave it as it is :
nice mapset o3o!! good luck
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
litoluna
@Lally

Lally wrote:

hi from #queue o3o///

[General]
  1. 02:51:154 - this kiai flash fits not here ummm.reservation
  2. 02:47:049 - in your diff N and I add a spinner in this part because it follow a strange rhythm hard to understand at first try
    ok spinner in Normal diff.
    if other parson opinion,I'll rethink it in Insane diff
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:628 (2) - tryto do this slider like: ok! like that correction
    SPOILER
  2. 00:36:628 (5,6) - i would use a slider here :o strong drums sound in back sound.I think Circle is the best
  3. 01:10:733 (1,2,3,1,2) - try to do this slider like: ok! nice idea
    SPOILER
  4. 02:26:523 (5) - new combo fixed
[Insane]
  1. 00:13:733 (2) - ctrl+g feels better here ok~!
  2. 01:25:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - try with a better stack like: ok!
    SPOILER
  3. 01:42:312 (3) - if you're following the guitar the rhythm should be like: ok! nice rhythm
  4. 02:19:575 - hmm why are you finish the breack here?,leave it as it is : my mistake x(
nice mapset o3o!! good luck
Thanks Lally!!
nice modding! I was helped :)
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite

Lally wrote:

hi from #queue o3o///

hi Lally owo/


[Gazel o3o]
  1. 00:34:733 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this kind of stalked jumps areno more allowed as far i know ,they should have some grind of distance and not a perfect stack
    :arrow: I think so too!! but... no idea ._.
  2. 01:35:365 (1) - i feel it to random i know your following the vocal here but i think this part should be better without
:arrow: okay remake :D

nice mapset o3o!! good luck
thanks modding~~!!

http://puu.sh/4ycuk.zip
litoluna
1,073 posts
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Topic Starter
litoluna
update~!
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
ZLOdeuka-
Hello~ from my modding Queue

● Your map should have at least one the easiest diff (less than 3 stars) then you need to make [Easy] or make it easier to [Normal]
● 4 Kiai time finish here 02:46:102
● 02:51:628 delete green section without kiai

[Normal]

●00:18:628 (2) - it does not look nice. maybe copypaste 00:17:049 (1) ?

[Gazel's Hard]

AR -1
●00:14:207 (1) - remove new combo
●00:14:207 (1,1) - distance seems to me incomprehensible. as here 00:13:733 (2,1) - it is another.
●01:10:733 (2) - 1 grid up. it contacts the first combo.

Insane - perfect

I do not see anything unranked. Great map :)

Good luck.
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

Hello~ from my modding Queue



[Gazel's Hard]

AR -1
:arrow: no
●00:14:207 (1) - remove new combo
:arrow: no because this 1/3 Rhythm
●00:14:207 (1,1) - distance seems to me incomprehensible. as here 00:13:733 (2,1) - it is another.
:arrow: nooo...
●01:10:733 (2) - 1 grid up. it contacts the first combo.
:arrow: okay! a mini change!

Insane - perfect

I do not see anything unranked. Great map :)

Good luck.
thanks modding! :)
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
litoluna
@ZLOdeuka-

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

Hello~ from my modding Queue

● Your map should have at least one the easiest diff (less than 3 stars) then you need to make [Easy] or make it easier to [Normal] I don't think there is any problem.
● 4 Kiai time finish here 02:46:102 ok!
● 02:51:628 delete green section without kiai ok~

[Normal]

●00:18:628 (2) - it does not look nice. maybe copypaste 00:17:049 (1) ? mini change this point

I do not see anything unranked. Great map :)

Good luck.
thanks modding~!! :) :)

update~
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
The timing goes beyond what osu! is capable of there. It starts with a triplet, then a quadruplet, then a quintuplet. osu! can handle the first two, but the last, we need to manipulate the BPM, and I'd rather not do that. Nobody is going to be able to play these in time and you be able to communicate these exact rhythms readably.

This is a quintuplet.


This means that 5 notes will be contained within one beat of the music. I recommend you don't try to map this exactly. Just use a slider or a spinner to map over it.
litoluna
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Topic Starter
litoluna
@Garven

Garven wrote:

The timing goes beyond what osu! is capable of there. It starts with a triplet, then a quadruplet, then a quintuplet. osu! can handle the first two, but the last, we need to manipulate the BPM, and I'd rather not do that. Nobody is going to be able to play these in time and you be able to communicate these exact rhythms readably.

This is a quintuplet.


This means that 5 notes will be contained within one beat of the music. I recommend you don't try to map this exactly. Just use a slider or a spinner to map over it.
I was very helpful :) :)
Thank you Garven!
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei
hi just random mod there



[Insane]

* 00:14:997 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - maybe change to this
Picture

* 00:21:470 (5) - NC

* 01:15:470 (2) - make a same slider like （1）

* 01:19:102 (2,3) - i prefer switch this 2 notes

* 01:34:891 (4,5) - i prefer stack (4) with 01:35:365 (1) - and move (5) to x304 y236


[Gazel's Hard]

* 00:37:102 (4) - remove this....actually i have no exact reason for this but during test play i think remove this will be better for me

* 00:41:049 (1) - ctrl+g...if youwant it harder just ignore this

* 01:07:260 (4) - i think this should be clap

* 02:05:365 (2) - maybe ctrl + g


[normal]

* 00:17:049 (1,2) - make same slder for this two

* 01:31:181 add note there

* 02:20:365 i think there should be Kiai time right?

if there are some points which you think it's wrong just point out, i am glad to see these
btw hope you can go and rank it. Good luck
litoluna
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Topic Starter
litoluna
@Mei

Mei wrote:

hi just random mod there



[Insane]

* 00:14:997 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - maybe change to this
Picture

* 00:21:470 (5) - NC ok~

* 01:15:470 (2) - make a same slider like （1） no

* 01:19:102 (2,3) - i prefer switch this 2 notes no 01:18:944 (1,2,3,4) - Trapa japonica class

* 01:34:891 (4,5) - i prefer stack (4) with 01:35:365 (1) - and move (5) to x304 y236 this star patten (01:34:733 (3,4,5,6,1) - )

[normal]

* 00:17:049 (1,2) - make same slder for this two No.

* 01:31:181 add note there umm,difficult in Nomal diiff

* 02:20:365 i think there should be Kiai time right? reservation

if there are some points which you think it's wrong just point out, i am glad to see these
btw hope you can go and rank it. Good luck
thanks modding and star~!! :) :)
change NC and other mini change~!
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite

Mei wrote:

hi just random mod there

[Gazel's Hard]

* 00:37:102 (4) - remove this....actually i have no exact reason for this but during test play i think remove this will be better for me

* 00:41:049 (1) - ctrl+g...if youwant it harder just ignore this

* 01:07:260 (4) - i think this should be clap
:arrow: Fixed

* 02:05:365 (2) - maybe ctrl + g


if there are some points which you think it's wrong just point out, i am glad to see these
btw hope you can go and rank it. Good luck

thanks modding :)
Rukaru
829 posts
Joined April 2012
Rukaru
hi, from my queue. :D

[General]
beautiful mapset!

[Normal]
00:15:786 (3) - make the slider end at 00:16:260 if you do, move 00:16:733 (4) to 00:16:575
00:18:628 (2) - make this 1/1 slider which start at 00:18:786 and end at 00:19:102
02:41:049 (1,2,3,4) - how about this?
SPOILER

[Gazel's Hard]
hi satellite!

01:20:523 (3) - delete this?

oh my...wonderful.

[Insane]
uh...I can't really mod insane, but from what I see this is really good diff. I like those streams

[]
I think you ask wrong person to mod this map. wwwwwww
I am too noob for this.

if you find this mod is not helpful please don't give kudosu. I bet it's not. xD

uh...I like the map and the song. take my star. :D
litoluna
1,073 posts
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Topic Starter
litoluna
@raheta_adi

raheta_adi wrote:

hi, from my queue. :D

[General]
beautiful mapset!

[Normal]
00:15:786 (3) - make the slider end at 00:16:260 if you do, move 00:16:733 (4) to 00:16:575 ok~! and (4)change slider
00:18:628 (2) - make this 1/1 slider which start at 00:18:786 and end at 00:19:102 no. back sound(piano)start at 00:18:628 - .
02:41:049 (1,2,3,4) - how about this? sorry no. strong cymbals sound in 02:41:523 - but vocal start at 02:41:681 - .this i don't ignore sound...
so remove finish.sorry poor english.

SPOILER
[Insane]
uh...I can't really mod insane, but from what I see this is really good diff. I like those streams
[]
I think you ask wrong person to mod this map. wwwwwww
I am too noob for this.

if you find this mod is not helpful please don't give kudosu. I bet it's not. xD

uh...I like the map and the song. take my star. :D
thanks modding and star :D
Hanabi
Hanabi
Hi~ litoluna

for M4M

[Normal]
00:18:628 (1,2) - try this
00:41:997 (4) - make it straight
SPOILER

[Hard]
00:09:713 (1) - reduce sound
00:14:207 - remove NC
01:20:207 (1,2) - try to change slider
01:57:154 (2,1) - stack
02:05:049 (1,2) - too far imo
02:54:786 (4,1,2) - confusing distance


[Insane]
00:37:260 (1,2,3) - players can be confused with the stream,
01:00:312 (1,2,3,4) -
01:10:733 (3) - ctrl + g , it mess the flow
02:15:786 (1) - oh beautiful O.o
02:20:602 - i feel empty here


i love the song, love the map xD Good luck!

ゆいこんぬ 大好き!!
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
litoluna

[ Sana ] wrote:

Hi~ litoluna

for M4M

[Normal]
00:18:628 (1,2) - try this okay!
00:41:997 (4) - make it straight fixed
SPOILER

[Insane]
00:37:260 (1,2,3) - players can be confused with the stream, 　umm.. I not think of idea. sorry putting on hold this
01:00:312 (1,2,3,4) - ok
01:10:733 (3) - ctrl + g , it mess the flow nice flow idea
02:15:786 (1) - oh beautiful O.o <3
02:20:602 - i feel empty here i think no problem


i love the song, love the map xD Good luck!

ゆいこんぬ 大好き!!
thanks Sana~!
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite

[ Sana ] wrote:

Hi~ litoluna

for M4M

[Hard]
00:09:713 (1) - reduce sound
:arrow: OK
00:14:207 - remove NC
:arrow: No this 1/3
01:20:207 (1,2) - try to change slider
:arrow: I like it =.=
01:57:154 (2,1) - stack
:arrow: Done
02:05:049 (1,2) - too far imo
:arrow: >.>
02:54:786 (4,1,2) - confusing distance
:arrow: kept

i love the song, love the map xD Good luck!

ゆいこんぬ 大好き!!
thanks modding~ :)
bigfrog
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
bigfrog
Hello~ from queue
sorry for late :<

Normal
00:11:997 (1,2) - since for looks more neat,i prefer this :
00:46:102 (3) - maybe 116|132 to get better flow
01:33:786 (1) - move to 396|300 to fixed distance? (0.97) and blanket also better o.o
02:14:523 (1) - blanket 02:15:786 (1) end?

Gazel's Hard
00:28:418 (1,2) - try this? :
01:17:681 (1,3) - blanket better
02:34:891 (2,3) - maybe can blanket,since i think (3,4) also can be symmetry :3

Insane
02:34:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe can make a star of there
02:54:312 (3) - a little too bent? just like 02:53:997 (2)

ah,i'm still not good at modding Insane...

it's a very awesome song and map ><!!
good luck~!
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
litoluna
@bigfrog

bigfrog wrote:

Hello~ from queue
sorry for late :<

Normal
00:11:997 (1,2) - since for looks more neat,i prefer this :
00:46:102 (3) - maybe 116|132 to get better flow
01:33:786 (1) - move to 396|300 to fixed distance? (0.97) and blanket also better o.o
02:14:523 (1) - blanket 02:15:786 (1) end? sorry no. flow (2,3)

Insane
02:34:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe can make a star of there
02:54:312 (3) - a little too bent? just like 02:53:997 (2)

ah,i'm still not good at modding Insane...

it's a very awesome song and map ><!!
good luck~!
thanks modding~!
almost fixed
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. 00:00:404 - BPMが合っていません。BPM155に設定してみてください。resnapもお忘れなく。
  2. 00:01:093 - こっちのoffset(もしくはBPM)も少しずれているように感じました。　がこれについては正確な数値が出せなかったので他の方の意見を参考にしてみてください。もちろん上記のBPMも正確ではない可能性があります。

[Insane]
  1. 00:25:812 (2) - ここもclap入れましょう。
  2. 01:21:312 (5) - clap
  3. 01:22:418 (4) - スライダーの終わりの音がボーカルに合わせているわけでもないので不自然でした。個人的には01:22:418 - にnote置いて、01:22:497 - からスピナーを開始し、01:24:470 - ここで止めてvolume10%を追加するのをオススメします。（あまり好ましくない方法かもしれませんが・・）
  4. 02:15:628 (2) - 02:15:154 (1) - こっちに合わせてこれもスライダー上に乗せてみてはどうでしょう？
    SPOILER
  5. 02:50:681 (2,3,4) - もうちょっと整えて綺麗にしましょう。ややdistanceがずれてますが、飛ばすなら後半のnoteの方がいいです。
    SPOILER
  6. 02:58:418 (4) - 01:22:418 (4) -ここと同じです

[Gazel's Hard]
  1. 02:38:839 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hard diffで190の５連ってキツイような

    他は言うことなかったです！

[Normal]
  1. OD2は低すぎると思います。Star少し上がるけど+1してみては？
  2. 00:43:102 (5,6) - 少し複雑な音取りで難しいと思いました。こんな感じにしてみてはどうでしょう？

  3. 01:22:418 (2) - 01:23:207 - ここまでのスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょうか？終端のvolumeも調節してみてください。これを適用するならスピナーは削除。
  4. 02:38:523 (3,4) - 終端のclap削除? Insaneではfinishでした。
頑張ってください！ :)
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
litoluna
@Guy

Guy wrote:

Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. 00:00:404 - BPMが合っていません。BPM155に設定してみてください。resnapもお忘れなく。　change
  2. 00:01:093 - こっちのoffset(もしくはBPM)も少しずれているように感じました。　がこれについては正確な数値が出せなかったので他の方の意見を参考にしてみてください。もちろん上記のBPMも正確ではない可能性があります。

[Insane]
  1. 00:25:812 (2) - ここもclap入れましょう。 fixed
  2. 01:21:312 (5) - clap fixed
  3. 01:22:418 (4) - スライダーの終わりの音がボーカルに合わせているわけでもないので不自然でした。個人的には01:22:418 - にnote置いて、01:22:497 - からスピナーを開始し、01:24:470 - ここで止めてvolume10%を追加するのをオススメします。（あまり好ましくない方法かもしれませんが・・） voの伸ばし部分にspinnerはさむ感じであわせてたのでno.volume10%を追加。
  4. 02:15:628 (2) - 02:15:154 (1) - こっちに合わせてこれもスライダー上に乗せてみてはどうでしょう？ fixed
    SPOILER
  5. 02:50:681 (2,3,4) - もうちょっと整えて綺麗にしましょう。ややdistanceがずれてますが、飛ばすなら後半のnoteの方がいいです。了解です。
    SPOILER
    　
  6. 02:58:418 (4) - 01:22:418 (4) -ここと同じです ^
[Normal]
  1. OD2は低すぎると思います。Star少し上がるけど+1してみては？ ok
  2. 00:43:102 (5,6) - 少し複雑な音取りで難しいと思いました。こんな感じにしてみてはどうでしょう？参考にして少し変えました。

  3. 01:22:418 (2) - 01:23:207 - ここまでのスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょうか？終端のvolumeも調節してみてください。これを適用するならスピナーは削除。　fixed
  4. 02:38:523 (3,4) - 終端のclap削除? Insaneではfinishでした。clap消しました。
頑張ってください！ :)
Moddingとstarありがとうございました！
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite

bigfrog wrote:

Hello~ from queue
sorry for late :<

Gazel's Hard
00:28:418 (1,2) - try this? :
:arrow: Done
01:17:681 (1,3) - blanket better
02:34:891 (2,3) - maybe can blanket,since i think (3,4) also can be symmetry :3

it's a very awesome song and map ><!!
good luck~!
thanks modding :)


Guy wrote:

Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. 00:00:404 - BPMが合っていません。BPM155に設定してみてください。resnapもお忘れなく。
  2. 00:01:093 - こっちのoffset(もしくはBPM)も少しずれているように感じました。　がこれについては正確な数値が出せなかったので他の方の意見を参考にしてみてください。もちろん上記のBPMも正確ではない可能性があります。

[Gazel's Hard]
  1. 02:38:839 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hard diffで190の５連ってキツイような
    :arrow: DTじゃなかったら割といけると思うんです!!!((BATさんに言われたら検討してみます))

    他は言うことなかったです！
頑張ってください！ :)

もっどありがとう！！
Delis
1,433 posts
Joined May 2012
Delis
[General]
Widescreen Support　のチェックは外して構わないでしょうか、確かSBを使用してないのであれば必要無かったかと思います。（スイマセンよくわかんないですX_X..でも、外しておいて大丈夫かと。）

[Normal]
00:07:989 (2) - x120 y136くらいまで動かして、左右対称のようにしてみては。
01:24:628 (1) - 01:23:365 - まで伸ばしてみては。ここまでボーカルが伸びてるのでここでスライダーを終わらせたほうがいいかと思いました。
SPOILER
02:20:207 (1) - 細かいですけど、この方が私は好きです。
SPOILER
02:46:260 (1) - add a whistle,少し寂しい気がしたので。

[Satellite's Hard]
00:05:920 (2) - move to x384 y100,私だったらこうするのですがどうでしょう。
00:08:334 (3,4) - 少し退屈かなーって感じたので、stack外して00:08:679 (4) - をx48 y284に移動してみては。私はプレイして、このほうが好きでした。
00:10:748 (1) - add a whistle on the head. ピアノなってるのでー
01:22:418 (4) - 01:23:365 - ここまでスライダーを伸ばしてみては。理由はNormalと同じです。
01:46:102 (3) - clapじゃなくてfinishなような。裏の音聞いた限りその方が合ってるように感じました。
01:46:733 (1) - なんかこのスライダーかっこわるい・・・01:41:681 (1) - これCTRL < + CTRL G　したほうがかわいい :roll:
01:58:102 (1) - add a finish on the head ,無くてもいいけど、あってもいいのでは :roll:
02:07:891 (1) - NCしてもいいのでは。 あと 02:08:207 - シンバルの音なってるし、finishつけてもいいんじゃないですか！（ここの部分なんていえばいいの;w;）
02:40:418 (6) - NC追加してもいいんじゃないでしょうか！

you must make more perfect blankets.

[Insane]
00:15:628 (7,8,1) - 少しAIMが窮屈に感じたので、こんな感じにしてみては。ただ多少この後の配置を変えないとダメかもしれないです＞＜。
SPOILER
01:45:154 (2) - 01:44:207 (1) - の頭にスタックさせるの好きなんですけど、どうですか！
01:47:997 - うーん。。サークルいれてもいいんじゃないでしょうか。。？finishもセットで。
02:41:681 (1,2) - 少し遠い・・かな？初見で結構ぐちゃぐちゃになっちゃったので一応かいときます！あと、02:41:681 (1) - のほうのfinishは必要ないんじゃないかな！
02:43:260 (5) - add a finish ??
02:47:049 (2,3,4) - CTRL R にして、additions - drum のwhistleほうが後ろの音に合ってるかと思いますけど、このままでも十分あってるんじゃないかと思うのでお任せで～。
02:50:523 (1,2,3,4) - もうちょっとspacing狭くしませんか、連打の後にいきなりで少しキツかったので :|
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
litoluna
@Delis

Delis wrote:

[General]
Widescreen Support　のチェックは外して構わないでしょうか、確かSBを使用してないのであれば必要無かったかと思います。（スイマセンよくわかんないですX_X..でも、外しておいて大丈夫かと。） 自分もよくわからないのでとりあえずこのままにしときます。

[Normal]
00:07:989 (2) - x120 y136くらいまで動かして、左右対称のようにしてみては。　ok
01:24:628 (1) - 01:23:365 - まで伸ばしてみては。ここまでボーカルが伸びてるのでここでスライダーを終わらせたほうがいいかと思いました。　ok
SPOILER
02:20:207 (1) - 細かいですけど、この方が私は好きです。　ok
SPOILER
02:46:260 (1) - add a whistle,少し寂しい気がしたので。　ok


[Insane]
00:15:628 (7,8,1) - 少しAIMが窮屈に感じたので、こんな感じにしてみては。ただ多少この後の配置を変えないとダメかもしれないです＞＜。 スペーシング広めで置き直しました~
SPOILER
01:45:154 (2) - 01:44:207 (1) - の頭にスタックさせるの好きなんですけど、どうですか！ Streamの入り位置的に移動しないほうがいいかなと思ったのでno
01:47:997 - うーん。。サークルいれてもいいんじゃないでしょうか。。？finishもセットで。 スネアが一つ前で切れててそこで自分が終わらせたいのでno.ごめんなさい＞＜
02:41:681 (1,2) - 少し遠い・・かな？初見で結構ぐちゃぐちゃになっちゃったので一応かいときます！あと、02:41:681 (1) - のほうのfinishは必要ないんじゃないかな！スペーシングは問題ないとおもってるので保留で！他の方から指摘あったら考えます remove finish
02:43:260 (5) - add a finish ?? ok
02:47:049 (2,3,4) - CTRL R にして、additions - drum のwhistleほうが後ろの音に合ってるかと思いますけど、このままでも十分あってるんじゃないかと思うのでお任せで～。 このままで~
02:50:523 (1,2,3,4) - もうちょっとspacing狭くしませんか、連打の後にいきなりで少しキツかったので :| ok!狭くしました~
thanks modding Delis-chan~ :)
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