Hi~
Generally I find 00:58:415 - 00:59:324 - 01:01:483 - to be near-nudity, so maybe you should remove the video or have someone to make this scene censored.
[Easy]
00:09:779 - maybe use normal sample + soft whistle? this way you can present this part more fluent
00:17:506 - normal finish instead of soft?
kiai - I feel a little strange about normal sample on downbeats...
01:17:052 - same as 00:09:779
[Normal]
personally I don't like the downbeat-normal patterns as 2,4-downbeat is more suitable for this song, maybe.
00:43:415 (5) - finish -> whistle?
01:05:688 (1) - reverse arrow partially overlapped by previous object
[Hard]
OD-1?
The difficulty of this and of Insane is too close imo. Maybe you can reduce some streams.
00:16:256 (6) - maybe delete?
[Insane]
I suggest OD-1, reason:
Maybe I should add DT...
00:16:824 (2,4) - too far imo. maybe use a "asymptotic" pattern
00:19:892 (6) - maybe move to 00:20:120 -
00:20:461 (2) - move to 00:20:574 - ?
00:32:961 (1,2) - change to 1/4 slider or 1.5x SV may have good effect
00:36:597 (1,2) - ^
Good luck~
Generally I find 00:58:415 - 00:59:324 - 01:01:483 - to be near-nudity, so maybe you should remove the video or have someone to make this scene censored.
[Easy]
00:09:779 - maybe use normal sample + soft whistle? this way you can present this part more fluent
00:17:506 - normal finish instead of soft?
kiai - I feel a little strange about normal sample on downbeats...
01:17:052 - same as 00:09:779
[Normal]
personally I don't like the downbeat-normal patterns as 2,4-downbeat is more suitable for this song, maybe.
00:43:415 (5) - finish -> whistle?
01:05:688 (1) - reverse arrow partially overlapped by previous object
[Hard]
OD-1?
The difficulty of this and of Insane is too close imo. Maybe you can reduce some streams.
00:16:256 (6) - maybe delete?
[Insane]
I suggest OD-1, reason:
Maybe I should add DT...
00:16:824 (2,4) - too far imo. maybe use a "asymptotic" pattern
00:19:892 (6) - maybe move to 00:20:120 -
00:20:461 (2) - move to 00:20:574 - ?
00:32:961 (1,2) - change to 1/4 slider or 1.5x SV may have good effect
00:36:597 (1,2) - ^
Good luck~