ZUN - Crimson in the Black Sea ~ Legendary Fish [Taiko|Osu] · forum

DarkDunskin

1,875 posts

Joined April 2009

DarkDunskin 2013-06-23T18:40:20+00:00

Yes thats the Taiko I meant. You can add it if you want.

DarkDunskin

1,875 posts

Joined April 2009

DarkDunskin 2013-06-30T14:02:29+00:00

So here's the Taiko Mod I owed you:

[714's Taiko Oni]

00:05:608 (22,23) - Delete Notes. This is a rather silent part in the song.
00:09:790 (44) - Delete Note, dk kd doesnt fit here.
00:11:972 (61) - Remove Clap.
00:11:972 (61) - Add Finish.
00:17:699 (90,91) - Delete (90) and add Finish on (91).
00:21:336 (115,116) - Delete (116) and add Clap on (115).
00:21:790 (117,118) - Delete (118) and add Finish on (117).
00:23:517 (132,133) - Delete (132) and add Finish on (133).
00:29:426 (159) - Remove Clap and add Finish.
00:35:245 (186) - ^
00:41:063 (208) - Add Finish.
00:49:790 (250) - Remove Clap and add Finish.
00:52:608 (270,271) - Remove Clap and add Finish on (271) and delete (270).
00:55:608 (291) - Remove Clap and add Finish.
00:58:517 (304) - ^
00:58:881 (305,306,307,308,309) - "k d k d D" would fit nice here.
01:01:426 (315) - Remove Clap and add Finish.
01:04:336 (326) - Add Finish.
01:05:790 (331) - ^
01:08:336 (341) - ^
01:10:154 (353) - ^
01:15:881 (384,385) - Delete (384) and add Finish on (385).
01:19:517 (410,411) - Add Clap on (410), delete (411).
01:21:699 (429,430) - Delete (429), add Finish on (430).
01:27:517 (459,460) - Delete (459), add Finish on (460).
01:33:790 (507,508,509,510,511,512,513) - Do it like in the beginning, switch red and blue!
01:38:699 (527,528) - Delete notes.
01:42:608 (548) - Add Clap.
01:42:881 (550) - Delete Note.
01:45:063 (565) - Add Finish.
01:50:790 (597,598) - Delete (597), add Finish on (598).
01:54:426 (623,624) - Add Clap on (623), Delete (624).
01:54:881 (625,626) - Add Finish on (625), delete (626).
01:56:608 (640,641) - Delete (640), remove clap and add Finish on (641).
02:02:517 (663) - Add Finish.
02:08:336 (688) - Remove Clap add Finish.
02:08:699 (689,690,691,692,693) - "k d k d D" would fit nice here.
02:14:154 (710) - Add Finish.
02:14:517 (711,712,713,714,715) - "k d k d D" would fit nice here.
02:17:063 (721) - Remove Clap add Finish.
02:19:245 (730,731) - Add Finish on (730), delete (731).
02:22:790 (750,751) - Delete (750), add Finish on (751).
02:25:790 (771) - Add Finish.
02:28:699 (793,794) - Add finish on (793), delete (794).
02:31:426 (810,811) - Add Clap on (810), remove clap from (811) and add Finish.
02:33:063 (816) - Remove Clap and add Finish.
02:34:517 (822) - ^
02:37:426 (833) - Add Finish.
02:38:881 (838) - Remove Clap and add Finish.
02:43:245 - Add Note + Finish.

Sorry for Utlra-nazi-monster-mod. <_<

[714's Taiko Muzukashii]

00:17:790 (58) - Add Finish.
00:21:790 (74) - ^
00:23:608 (77) - ^
00:29:426 (97) - Remove Clap, add Finish.
00:35:245 (119) - ^
00:41:063 (141) - Add Finish.
00:49:790 (175) - Remove Clap, add Finish.
00:52:699 (185) - Add Finish.
00:55:608 (196) - ^
00:58:517 (207) - Remove Clap, add Finish.
00:59:972 (212) - Add Finish.
01:01:426 (218) - Remove Clap, add Finish.
01:04:336 (229) - Add Finish.
01:05:790 (234) - Remove Clap, add Finish.
01:08:336 (243) - ^
01:10:154 (1) - Add Finish.
01:15:972 (20) - ^
01:27:608 (59)- Add Finish on (59)
01:33:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Do it like the beginning, switch red and blue notes.
01:45:063 (37) - Add Finish.
01:50:881 (58) - Add Finish.
01:54:881 (74) - ^
01:55:608 (1) - Shorten the spinner to 01:56:517 - add note + Finish at 01:56:699 - instead.
02:02:517 (21) - Add Finish.
02:08:336 (43) - Remove Clap, add Finish.
02:09:790 (48) - Add Finish.
02:14:154 (65) - Remove Clap, add Finish.
02:15:608 (70) - ^
02:15:608 (70) - ^
02:19:245 (85,86) - Add Finish on both notes.
02:22:881 (97) - Add Finish.
02:25:790 (108) - ^
02:28:699 (119) - ^
02:31:426 (130,131) - Add Clap on (130), remove Clap from (131) and add Finish.
02:33:063 (136) - Remove Clap, add Finish.
02:34:517 (142) - ^
02:37:426 (153) - Add Finish.
02:38:881 (158) - ^
02:43:245 - Add Note + Finish.

I'm terribly sorry but I react allergic to missing Finish Notes lol.
Muzukashii feels a bit like a harder Futsuu, you should probably add some triplets like kkk or ddd here and there.

Besides that these Taiko's still lack consistency as I believe.
There's still much room for improvements, but don't give up there's still hope!
Find more mods an opinions to your Taiko Difficultys and it should work all out in the end.
Also I'm not always right, I probably just suck at modding Taiko ^^"
That's it.

@ Leader:
I didn't have much time to work on a proper SB for this map until now and won't have it in near future.
So just continue mapping like normal okay ^^

Only kudosu one post (If you found it helpful)~

Hellgert

489 posts

Joined May 2012

Hellgert 2013-07-01T14:47:54+00:00

when this map will be map,i waiting this map rank

can you add a japanese name on it,name:黒い海に紅く～ Legendary Fish(accept/ingrone)

hs714

257 posts

Joined March 2011

hs714 2013-07-03T10:28:06+00:00

DarkDunskin <3

DarkDunskin wrote:
So here's the Taiko Mod I owed you:

[714's Taiko Oni]
00:05:608 (22,23) - Delete Notes. This is a rather silent part in the song. - done
00:09:790 (44) - Delete Note, dk kd doesnt fit here. - nnnn.. sorry ;_;
00:11:972 (61) - Remove Clap. - thanks :3
00:11:972 (61) - Add Finish. - ^
00:17:699 (90,91) - Delete (90) and add Finish on (91). - ^
00:21:336 (115,116) - Delete (116) and add Clap on (115). - sorry..
00:21:790 (117,118) - Delete (118) and add Finish on (117).- ^
00:23:517 (132,133) - Delete (132) and add Finish on (133). - thank you <3
00:29:426 (159) - Remove Clap and add Finish. - ^
00:35:245 (186) - ^ - ^
00:41:063 (208) - Add Finish. - ^
00:49:790 (250) - Remove Clap and add Finish. - ^
00:52:608 (270,271) - Remove Clap and add Finish on (271) and delete (270). - ^
00:55:608 (291) - Remove Clap and add Finish. - ^
00:58:517 (304) - ^- ^
00:58:881 (305,306,307,308,309) - "k d k d D" would fit nice here.- ^
01:01:426 (315) - Remove Clap and add Finish. - ^
01:04:336 (326) - Add Finish. - ^
01:05:790 (331) - ^- ^
01:08:336 (341) - ^ - ^
01:10:154 (353) - ^ - ^
01:15:881 (384,385) - Delete (384) and add Finish on (385).- I think fit this part..sorry ;_;
01:19:517 (410,411) - Add Clap on (410), delete (411). - ^
01:21:699 (429,430) - Delete (429), add Finish on (430). - thanks!
01:27:517 (459,460) - Delete (459), add Finish on (460). - sorry..
01:33:790 (507,508,509,510,511,512,513) - Do it like in the beginning, switch red and blue! - fixed xD
01:38:699 (527,528) - Delete notes. - ^
01:42:608 (548) - Add Clap. - ^
01:42:881 (550) - Delete Note. - sorry. orz
01:45:063 (565) - Add Finish. - done :3
01:50:790 (597,598) - Delete (597), add Finish on (598). - sorry
01:54:426 (623,624) - Add Clap on (623), Delete (624). - ^
01:54:881 (625,626) - Add Finish on (625), delete (626). - ^
01:56:608 (640,641) - Delete (640), remove clap and add Finish on (641). - ^
02:02:517 (663) - Add Finish.- changed xD
02:08:336 (688) - Remove Clap add Finish. - ^
02:08:699 (689,690,691,692,693) - "k d k d D" would fit nice here. - changed to d k k d D~! :3
02:14:154 (710) - Add Finish. - done :3
02:14:517 (711,712,713,714,715) - "k d k d D" would fit nice here. - changed to d d k k D :>
02:17:063 (721) - Remove Clap add Finish. - done~
02:19:245 (730,731) - Add Finish on (730), delete (731). - ^
02:22:790 (750,751) - Delete (750), add Finish on (751). - sorry ;_;
02:25:790 (771) - Add Finish. - done :]
02:28:699 (793,794) - Add finish on (793), delete (794). - sorry!
02:31:426 (810,811) - Add Clap on (810), remove clap from (811) and add Finish. - done :>
02:33:063 (816) - Remove Clap and add Finish. - ^
02:34:517 (822) - ^ - ^
02:37:426 (833) - Add Finish. - ^
02:38:881 (838) - Remove Clap and add Finish. - ^
02:43:245 - Add Note + Finish.
Sorry for Utlra-nazi-monster-mod. <_<
- it's okay! I'm very glad for your mod! xD

[714's Taiko Muzukashii]
00:17:790 (58) - Add Finish.- done :>
00:21:790 (74) - ^ - nnn.. sorry I can't hear the Big notes sound for this part.. :I
00:23:608 (77) - ^ - thank you~!
00:29:426 (97) - Remove Clap, add Finish. - ^
00:35:245 (119) - ^ - ^
00:41:063 (141) - Add Finish. - maybe, 3/4(?) parts Big notes is so hard at the Muzukashii diff..
00:49:790 (175) - Remove Clap, add Finish. - done :>
00:52:699 (185) - Add Finish. - ^
00:55:608 (196) - ^ - ^
00:58:517 (207) - Remove Clap, add Finish. - changed to k d d d k　D :3
00:59:972 (212) - Add Finish. - same as up. sorry. orz
01:01:426 (218) - Remove Clap, add Finish. 0 done :3
01:04:336 (229) - Add Finish. - sorry..orz
01:05:790 (234) - Remove Clap, add Finish. - ^
01:08:336 (243) - ^ - thank you :3
01:10:154 (1) - Add Finish. - ^
01:15:972 (20) - ^ - ^
01:27:608 (59)- Add Finish on (59) - ^
01:33:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Do it like the beginning, switch red and blue notes. - ^
01:45:063 (37) - Add Finish. - ^
01:50:881 (58) - Add Finish. - ^
01:54:881 (74) - ^ - sorry :I
01:55:608 (1) - Shorten the spinner to 01:56:517 - add note + Finish at 01:56:699 - instead. - nnn~.. sorry!orz
02:02:517 (21) - Add Finish. - done :>
02:08:336 (43) - Remove Clap, add Finish. - ^
02:09:790 (48) - Add Finish. - same as up~! orz
02:14:154 (65) - Remove Clap, add Finish. - ^
02:15:608 (70) - ^ - ^
02:15:608 (70) - ^ - ^
02:19:245 (85,86) - Add Finish on both notes. - ^
02:22:881 (97) - Add Finish. - thank you!
02:25:790 (108) - ^- ^
02:28:699 (119) - ^ - ^
02:31:426 (130,131) - Add Clap on (130), remove Clap from (131) and add Finish. - sorry
02:33:063 (136) - Remove Clap, add Finish. - ^
02:34:517 (142) - ^ - done~!
02:37:426 (153) - Add Finish. - sorry!
02:38:881 (158) - ^ - ^ orz
02:43:245 - Add Note + Finish. - changed to slider end at 02:43:245 - :3
I'm terribly sorry but I react allergic to missing Finish Notes lol.
Muzukashii feels a bit like a harder Futsuu, you should probably add some triplets like kkk or ddd here and there.

Besides that these Taiko's still lack consistency as I believe.
There's still much room for improvements, but don't give up there's still hope!
Find more mods an opinions to your Taiko Difficultys and it should work all out in the end.
Also I'm not always right, I probably just suck at modding Taiko ^^"
That's it.

@ Leader:
I didn't have much time to work on a proper SB for this map until now and won't have it in near future.
So just continue mapping like normal okay ^^

Only kudosu one post (If you found it helpful)~

I'm really thank you & really glad add your Inner Oni! \(*'ω')/♥
Thanks for your mod! DarkDunskin <33

update onegaishimasu! ヽ(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ
Taiko Muzukashii: http://puu.sh/3u27a.osu
Taiko Oni: http://puu.sh/3u27c.osu

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,723 posts

Joined July 2010

fanzhen0019 2013-07-12T05:54:57+00:00

Hi :3 From my queue.

General

Use 2000ms lead-in.
Manually resnap these notes in Dunskin's taiko.
01:06:428 (18) -
01:07:428 (24) -
02:39:428 (18) -
02:39:519 (19) -
02:40:519 (27) -

Easy

Hitsounds

01:04:336 (1) - To consist, use whistle here instead of clap.
01:28:336 - ,01:29:063 - Add clap.
01:33:063 (3) - Finish.
02:22:881 - Finish instead.

Arrangement & Design

00:23:608 (1,3) - Consider to make these symmetrical?

BCI's Normal

Hitsounds

01:27:426 (5) - Clap.

Arrangement & Design

Looks nice overall.

Collab Hard

Hitsounds

Kodora's Part:

00:17:790 - Soft-finish here.
Leyko's Part:
00:35:063 (2,3) - Use normal-hitnormal.

Arrangement & Design

Kodora's Part:

02:33:972 (2,3,4,5) - (nazi) It's not a perfect rectangle.
Leyko's Part:
Clear.

Lunatic

Hitsounds

00:03:245 - Add a whistle.
00:04:154 - ,00:04:336 - ,00:04:699 - ,00:05:063 - ,00:05:790 - Add a whistle.
00:12:881 - ,00:13:608 - ,00:14:336 - Add a clap.
00:14:699 (1) - Clap.
00:17:790 - Finish.
00:35:608 - Clap.
00:41:426 - Clap.
00:46:881 (1) - Clap. And remove this clap :00:47:426 (2) -
01:02:426 - Whistle.
01:07:245 (4) - Maybe a clap is needed.
01:15:972 - Finish.
01:20:699 (3) - Clap.
01:21:790 - Finish.
01:53:426 - Clap.
Hitsounds still need some work.

Arrangement & Design

Clear!

That's it! Good luck~

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2013-07-20T00:49:38+00:00

Hi.

Insane

01:23:608 (5) - Distance snap on this note.
02:31:608 (7) - I suggest putting one of those custom hitsounds on the starting point of this slider.

Collab Hard

01:23:972 (7) - Distance snap on this one.
02:20:699 (3) - This slider isn't like the others. It's not symmetrical.

Easy

02:03:972 (2) - Put ending point at X:164 Y:344

Can't find anything on BCI's Normal.

And sorry the noob mod. I don't mod Taiko diffs too. :/

sjoy

1,026 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2013-07-20T08:20:17+00:00

HI

From M4M
I like ZUN song very much

I'm a new mapper .I hope I can help your map as soon as possible
Easy:
00:28:699 how about add a note?
00:34:517 ^
01:33:063 (3) - add the fin?
BCI'Normal:
00:12:699 (2) - add the fin?
01:21:790 (1) - 01:22:336 (2) - add the clap?
Collab Hard:
00:19:245 (1) - move to 120, 296 and 00:19:972 (2) - move to160,128?
00:26:336 (7) - move to 104,192?
01:04:881 (3) - I don't think it's good to stack with01:04:154 (5,1,2) -
01:05:972 (1) - move to 312,152?
01:06:336 (2) - move to 472,112?
02:11:245 (4,1) - how about stack
02:12:245 (2,5,8) - I thinks it's diffcult to set the note on the blue line on hard chang to slide?
02:35:517 (2,2,2) - ^
02:37:245 (3) - move to 232,256?
02:39:426 (2) - I don't think it's good to stack
Lunatic:
00:43:972 (4) - add the fin?
00:58:517 (5) - ^
01:07:245 (4) - ^
Sorrry my mod is limited .

Good luck

Kodora

Kodora 2013-07-30T13:19:49+00:00

/late

fixed few things

sorry, denied all rhytm-suggestions ^^

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: legendary fish.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 81790
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 26472
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Crimson in the Black Sea ~ Legendary Fish
TitleUnicode:黒い海に紅く ～ Legendary Fish
Artist:ZUN
ArtistUnicode:ZUN
Creator:Leader
Version:Collab Hard
Source:Touhou
Tags:Scarlet Weather Rhapsody SWR th10.5 Iku Nagae BCI black_cherry_ita Leyko Kodora hs714 DarkDunskin Collab Collaboration
BeatmapID:249745
BeatmapSetID:88770

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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188,80,116699,6,0,P|256:52|324:80,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,220,117426,2,0,L|444:312,2,112.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,248,118154,2,0,L|328:360,2,112.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,248,118881,2,0,L|184:360,2,112.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,220,119608,6,0,P|80:200|68:116,1,150,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,120336,2,0,P|248:52|260:136,1,150,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
400,188,121063,2,0,B|376:256|376:256|368:288|384:332,1,150,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
236,304,121790,2,0,P|196:304|160:284,1,75,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
120,200,122154,2,0,L|80:184,2,37.5,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
192,132,122517,6,0,P|256:96|320:132,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,276,123245,2,0,L|464:264,2,112.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,324,123972,2,0,L|164:336,2,112.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,240,124699,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,192,124972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,296,125245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,232,125426,6,0,P|64:160|56:84,1,150,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
216,36,126154,2,0,B|244:64|272:68|272:68|364:64,1,150,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
432,100,126699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,168,126881,2,0,L|468:320,1,150,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
308,348,127608,2,0,L|311:273,1,75
256,192,127972,2,0,L|272:152,3,37.5,0|0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,128,128336,6,0,P|204:80|128:80,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,136,129063,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,196,129336,1,0,1:0:0:0:
64,272,129608,1,0,1:0:0:0:
112,340,129790,6,0,P|184:316|260:320,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,280,130336,2,0,L|472:228,1,150,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
468,148,130881,2,0,P|432:140|400:120,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,48,131245,1,0,1:0:0:0:
348,44,131972,5,0,1:0:0:0:
216,112,132245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,192,132517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,116,132699,1,0,1:0:0:0:
172,184,132972,1,0,1:0:0:0:
296,264,133244,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,192,133426,1,0,1:0:0:0:
132,116,133699,1,0,1:0:0:0:
132,268,133972,1,0,1:0:0:0:
188,328,134154,6,0,P|256:356|324:328,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,156,134881,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,80,135154,1,0,1:0:0:0:
144,156,135426,1,0,1:0:0:0:
184,228,135608,6,0,P|224:168|200:96,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,40,136154,2,0,B|96:56|56:40|56:40|72:72|64:108,1,150,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
40,176,136699,2,0,L|56:252,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,316,137063,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,137245,12,0,138517,1:0:0:0:
184,120,138881,6,0,L|168:80,2,37.5,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,139245,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,188,139608,1,4,0:0:0:0:
392,88,139972,6,0,P|424:152|408:256,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,280,140517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,296,140699,2,0,B|240:296|216:344|216:344|192:296|128:296,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,256,141245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,176,141426,2,0,L|8:96,2,112.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,142154,2,0,L|128:8,2,112.5,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,142881,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,142926,12,0,145608,0:0:0:0:
137,92,145790,6,0,B|108:100|93:126|93:126|101:179|55:228,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,284,146517,2,0,L|316:340,2,112.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,203,147245,2,0,L|86:147,2,112.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,163,147972,1,2,0:0:0:0:
382,199,148245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,80,148517,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,81,148699,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,148745,12,0,151063,0:0:0:0:
128,104,151245,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,104,151426,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,104,151608,2,0,P|224:96|288:48,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,124,152154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
406,157,152336,2,0,P|460:129|492:88,2,112.5,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,234,153063,1,6,0:0:0:0:
136,296,153608,5,2,0:0:0:0:
168,136,153972,1,2,0:0:0:0:
142,61,154154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,35,154336,1,2,0:0:0:0:
250,113,154517,1,4,0:0:0:0:
416,288,155245,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,288,155517,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,288,155790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,240,155972,5,4,0:0:0:0:
352,240,156245,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,240,156517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,156699,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,156972,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,192,157245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,256,157426,5,4,0:0:0:0:
232,256,157608,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,256,157972,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,208,158336,5,2,0:0:0:0:
144,208,158517,1,0,1:1:0:0:
104,136,158699,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,136,158881,1,4,1:1:0:0:
104,136,159063,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,136,159426,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,104,159790,5,2,0:0:0:0:
408,64,159972,1,0,1:1:0:0:
416,144,160154,1,2,0:0:0:0:
343,183,160336,5,4,1:1:0:0:
256,192,160381,12,4,161790,0:0:0:0:
104,184,162517,5,0,0:0:0:0:
124,193,162607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
146,196,162698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,188,162789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,174,162880,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,160,162971,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,147,163062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,137,163153,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,132,163244,1,4,0:0:0:0:

Hellzero

687 posts

Joined April 2010

Hellzero 2013-08-01T09:47:00+00:00

[Lunatic]
00:36:699 (3) - 1 grid up, 1 drid right
00:39:154 (2,3) - too close
01:02:881 (2,3) - ^
01:23:245 (4,5) - ^
01:58:881 (5) - ctrl+g for better flow
02:22:881 - too loud >< maybe make about 40%?
02:28:699 - ^
[Collab Hard]
00:06:154 (3,4) - не лучше ли просто отзеркалить?
Спейсинг скачет, Kodora использует 1.1x а Leyko 1.0x
00:53:426 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - НК на синих тиках? Лучше сделать аналогии с предыдущем паттерном, т.е. на 00:54:154 - 00:54:881 - 00:55:608
01:02:154 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:07:245 (1) - Ну тут то на ровном месте зачем НК. Сделай тогда уж какой-нибудь паттерн (джамп/антиджамп и т.п.) что бы был смысл выделять НК (или убрать)
01:51:426 (4,5,6) - хоть и по спейсингу, но визуально видно что они впритык друг к другу, так что лучше их немного раздвинуть.
02:11:972 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Kodora на такие паттерны НК ставил, так что вы определитесь ставить их или нет. (с НК по-моему лучше смотрится)
02:22:881 (1) - вновь одиночное НК
02:25:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - тот же паттерн, тот же совет с НК
02:36:699 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - это может запутать игрока %_% сначала паттерн идет на синих тиках а потом резко перескакивает на красный но выглядит все одинаково. Лучше анстакнуть (3) 02:37:972
02:40:336 (1) - forever alone~
[BCI's Normal]
すごい
[Easy]
00:36:699 (2) - move last slider point 1 grid left for symmetry lol /;p\
Good job

BCI

1,081 posts

Joined May 2011

BCI 2013-08-13T18:56:07+00:00

Hellzero wrote:
[BCI's Normal]
すごい

я так похожа на японца? :< /runs

Kodora

Kodora 2013-08-13T19:26:43+00:00

BCI wrote:
я так похожа на японца? :< /runs

(｣･ω･)｣うー！(／･ω･)／にゃー！

Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2013-08-19T14:45:52+00:00

Yoo Leader, coming from my Queue.

[General]

iku.png is an unused file in your folder, either find something to use it for or remove it.
Easy and Lunatic have different KIAI times, which should not be the case because both difficulties are yours.
There are some unsnapped things in Dunskin's Inner Oni, you will have to fix those.

[Easy]

00:02:517 (4) - Checking the flow, I would shape it the other way to prevent an useless flow change here.
00:05:426 (4) - I would seperate those two beats for the sake of gameplay feeling, I'd rather have a NC and a clickable beat on the piano note, so the player gets to feel the new part. Maybe you could shorten it by 1/1 and add a note on the downbeat.
00:26:517 (3) - The start should have a whistle aswell considering the intensity of the piano is the same as on the previous Slider, also it will help to emphasize the downbeat.
00:32:336 (3) - Same thing as above on the end, also it will help to catch the enduring tone.
00:58:517 (1) - You're missing a whistle on the end to have a consistent pattern.
01:02:881 (4,5) - Switching to Normals sounds way too sudden here, to follow the piano, I'd rather replace them by whistles.
01:04:336 (1) - Same for this Sliderend here, it will be consistent with your other Sliders aswell.
01:53:790 (1) - The start should either have a Normal sample to have consistency or a whistle to follow the piano, I'll leave this to you.
02:33:063 (2) - I would love to change the whistle on the end to a normal hitnormal, it will be consistent with the previous and next Slider.

[BCI's Normal]

00:58:517 (1) - I think you are missing a clap on the end to keep the consistency.
01:04:336 (1) - Very very nazi, but anyways I would like it if you could place this in the center of the grid.
01:02:881 (3) - You should use your costum tick here aswell, to keep the claps consistent, I don't see a reason not to.
01:05:790 (3) - Same here.
01:56:699 (1) - Missing a clap on the end.
01:57:426 (2) - You don't use your Slidertick costum again, I won't point this out anymore because you can see where it's missing yourelf, just check it.
01:58:154 (3) - You could clean this up a bit and try to make it exactly symmetrical, but the actual reason to point this out is that you accidently put the whistle on the whole Sliderbody, where it's noisy.
02:19:245 (1) - Too soon after a Spinner, I'd recommend you to shorten the Spinner by 1/1.

[Collab Hard]

00:16:699 (2) - You should use normal sampleset at the start to keep consistency, if you wanna keep the whistle switch to addition soft.
00:17:063 (3) - Using a Normal finish on the end sounds too noisy here since there is no enduring sound it would fit to, I'd recommend to leave this with a hitnormal.
00:29:063 (8) - This jump doesnt make a lot of sense, I'd prefer normal spacing.
00:35:154 (3) - This note is mapped to nothing and this should never be the case, especially not in a Hard difficulty, I'd advise to remove it.
00:59:517 (2) - What the hell is that spacing? Space it normally for the sake of readability.
01:04:517 (2) - Having a note here sounds really wry considering the previous red ticks were not mapped aswell, just reomving it would be cool enough.
01:05:063 - According to the melody, here should really be e note, either move 3 there or add a new note, both is fine.
01:07:336 (1) - Why is this Spinner ending on the blue tick? It is much too sudden for the next note and not following anything, please end it either on the white or red tick.
01:21:063 (3,4,5,6) - I don't like the usement of streams in Hard difficulties, leave them to the hardest difficulty please. You could replace those 4 notes by a kick slider.
02:20:699 (3) - A bit nazi, but I think this Slider could be more symmetrical.
02:25:790 (1) - I'd really replace the whistle on the start by a finish, for the one to follow the cymbal and for the other one to keep consistency with previous parts.
02:35:245 (1,1,1) - I would love the idea of adding finishes to all of those, this will make a pretty nice hitsound rhythm.
02:37:426 (1,2) - Stacking those 2 will be very confusing as there was a sudden rhythm change and players will be most likely to think of it as 1/4.
02:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't really like the idea of this stream, but I'd say it is ok, tho I'd rather have something easier.

[Lunatic]

00:03:245 (3) - There is no actual sense in leting this end on the blue tick, there is no sound at all.
00:04:699 (9) - Same here.
00:09:517 (6) - Try a whistle here to get the high tone of the piano.
00:35:972 (4) - The clap on the end sounds unfiting and just wry as the music is too soft to bear the hitnormal at this point. Just removing it would be better.
00:46:154 (1,2) - Try whistles on those starts to introduce the KIAI in a more exciting way?
00:49:790 (8) - Finish should be on the start to follow the cymabal, and the end should not have a hitsound as there is no tone that needs to be emphasized.
01:04:336 (1) - Replace the whistle on the start by a finish to catch the cymbals, it will fit the music better.
01:05:790 (4) - Same thing here.
01:27:608 (3) - And here again.
02:01:063 (5,6) - I would more like the idea of using ctrl and g on both of them to fix the spacing and having the flow more natural by doing so.
02:19:972 (1) - Again, finish fits much better than whistle due to the cymbals.
02:22:881 (1) - EH? Why is this part having Normal hitsound samples? It sounds very sudden, is inconsistent with the previous part and reallly weird. I would just change to soft sampleset for the sake of hitsound consistency and gameplay.
02:28:699 (1) - Same here, but if you won't change it, at least replace the clap on one by a finish for consistency.
02:31:608 (1,6) - Same things about the cymbal and whistles as on the previous Sliders.
02:34:517 (3) - And here aswell.
02:37:426 (1,6) - And here cymbals again.

Uhh, that's it.

Pretty cool set actually, tho I feel as if the Hard collab and the Insane could use some more mods.

Good luck :>

Leader

osu! Alumni

1,849 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Leader 2013-08-19T16:29:58+00:00

Fixed everything on my diffs, really thanks.

Kodora

Kodora 2013-08-20T00:59:40+00:00

Konei wrote:
[Collab Hard]

00:16:699 (2) - You should use normal sampleset at the start to keep consistency, if you wanna keep the whistle switch to addition soft. done
00:17:063 (3) - Using a Normal finish on the end sounds too noisy here since there is no enduring sound it would fit to, I'd recommend to leave this with a hitnormal. i always use finishes to emphazire strong parts of the song, i not always add them only following music. it fits for me, so dont wanna remove.
00:35:154 (3) - This note is mapped to nothing and this should never be the case, especially not in a Hard difficulty, I'd advise to remove it. its COMPLETELY ok. maps not supposed to only blindly copy songs rhytm, mapper can add own rhytm too. if it fits enough there is nothing wrong (just my 2 cents about this)
00:59:517 (2) - What the hell is that spacing? Space it normally for the sake of readability. will fix later
01:04:517 (2) - Having a note here sounds really wry considering the previous red ticks were not mapped aswell, just reomving it would be cool enough. no sorry
01:05:063 - According to the melody, here should really be e note, either move 3 there or add a new note, both is fine. no sorry
01:07:336 (1) - Why is this Spinner ending on the blue tick? It is much too sudden for the next note and not following anything, please end it either on the white or red tick. O_O wondering right now too
01:21:063 (3,4,5,6) - I don't like the usement of streams in Hard difficulties, leave them to the hardest difficulty please. You could replace those 4 notes by a kick slider. 4 notes arent real stream, especially 165 bpm only
02:20:699 (3) - A bit nazi, but I think this Slider could be more symmetrical. ~~this slider sucks gonna remap this part~~
02:25:790 (1) - I'd really replace the whistle on the start by a finish, for the one to follow the cymbal and for the other one to keep consistency with previous parts. nooo
02:35:245 (1,1,1) - I would love the idea of adding finishes to all of those, this will make a pretty nice hitsound rhythm. good, will add
02:37:426 (1,2) - Stacking those 2 will be very confusing as there was a sudden rhythm change and players will be most likely to think of it as 1/4. its clerly readable as 1/2 due to approaches, btw music isnt call for 1/4 here, so i probably leave it as it now
02:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't really like the idea of this stream, but I'd say it is ok, tho I'd rather have something easier. i S'd it with dt, dont see any problem with it. Hard diffs must be challenging, also its a nice difficulty probression.

Btw, my parts is really enough old so i decided to remap them ~~probably i will change even some things what i denied right now... not stream of course~~ so wont send diff right now. Thanks for mod!

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2013-08-24T06:02:27+00:00

here's your ticket (sorry for delay)

Easy

00:06:154 (5,1) - swap NC

BCI's Normal

00:26:426 - not used green line
00:47:608 (1) - delete NC?
02:11:245 (1) - need finish on start imo

Collab Hard

00:53:426 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - try http://puu.sh/49vzt.jpg this NC setting
00:59:517 (2) - hmmmm this note looks like 1/1 beat for me since you placed 00:59:790 (3) - this note more farther than (2) note
01:04:336 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - i don't know which rhythm u tried to follow here
01:07:336 (1,1) - wow this isn't good for hard diff imo
02:22:926 (1) - i'd rather move this slider to 1/4 beat (next blue tick) like you did in before (and 02:28:745 (1) - same here)
02:25:790 (1) - add finish on start
02:28:699 (7) - NC
02:37:426 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - same rhythm problem with before
02:40:336 (1) - delete NC
02:40:381 (1) - you may know here

Lunatic

00:21:336 (8) - 0.4x DS is purposed on this slider? -nazi (and you may know 00:23:608 (1) - here)
00:49:790 (8) - well i think just a note feels better than 1/2 slider (and move spinner too)
00:46:154 (1,2,1) - it will be awesome if you set SV changings to x0.5 -> x0.75 ->x1.0 like this (and 02:19:245 (1,2,1) - same here)
01:30:336 (1) - delete NC for consistence with 00:20:518 (2) - here (and i'm not sure if that NC is really needed)
02:07:972 (9) - clap
02:11:972 (6) - NC

well it'll be better if you add HSs more consistently (just opinion)

good luck~

Kodora

Kodora 2013-08-31T23:47:16+00:00

Remapped my parts in collab. Little note to next modders:

1) I wont remove/replace last stream - it's important part of difficulty progression
2) I wont add more kiai - song is very repetitive and isnt called for it at all
3) Stack Leniency higher than 0.3 makes no sense for my patterns

Kecco

908 posts

Joined September 2009

Kecco 2013-09-01T13:37:21+00:00

Hello, modding the Lunatic diff on my own accord.

[General]
• I don't like the colours you're using. I'd suggest these ones (I used them for some of my touhou maps, they're copyrighted!) They fit much better.

SPOILER

Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 250,83,41
Combo3 : 245,225,86

• Add "Jun'ya Ota" in the tags.

[Lunatic]
00:03:972 (5,6,7,8) - Why don't you make a square? Something like this ↓ Way better flow imo. [If you follow this suggestion, fix the spacing with the slider 00:04:699 (9) - ]

SPOILER

00:03:972 (5) - New combo.
00:07:244 (7,8) - Move them a bit more downwards and to the right. Better flow.
00:09:699 (8) - 444;240
00:22:608 (4) - This note relies on nothing. Delete it.
00:35:972 (4,5) - Why don't you make them the same of 00:35:245 (2,3) - ? Would flow better. [Also, you should do it for consistency with 00:41:063 (1,2,3,4) - ]
00:47:790 (1,2) - I don't like this. Doesn't play good imo. Up to you. You could do something like this.

SPOILER

01:02:336 (1,2) - ^
01:06:699 (6) - New combo.
01:19:245 (4,5,6,7) - Mhmh, it's not that readable, but you're following the beats so I guess it's fine. By the way, if you feel like remapping this, do it.
02:01:063 (5) - New combo.
02:06:881 (6) - ^
02:17:063 (4) - What about this? Or something close to that.

SPOILER

02:20:881 (1,2) - Same suggestion of the ones up.
02:23:608 (6) - New combo.
02:26:699 (1,2) - Same suggestion of the ones up.
02:40:336 (1) - Stack it under the 02:39:790 (7) - ? [Just a suggestion, don't take it that serious]

From 00:26:517 - to 00:58:154 - Too many spinners

But I guess it's fine since you're following the instrument

Nice mappu!

Leader

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Topic Starter

Leader 2013-09-01T14:18:58+00:00

Kecco wrote:
Hello, modding the Lunatic diff on my own accord.

[General]
• I don't like the colours you're using. I'd suggest these ones (I used them for some of my touhou maps, they're copyrighted!) They fit much better. I'd rather use mine since they fit with bg <_<
SPOILER
Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 250,83,41
Combo3 : 245,225,86
• Add "Jun'ya Ota" in the tags. Not really needed

[Lunatic]
00:22:608 (4) - This note relies on nothing. Delete it. It does o_O
00:35:972 (4,5) - Why don't you make them the same of 00:35:245 (2,3) - ? Would flow better. [Also, you should do it for consistency with 00:41:063 (1,2,3,4) - ] Seems fine to me, I may change in the future if anyone will suggest the same, though
00:47:790 (1,2) - I don't like this. Doesn't play good imo. Up to you. You could do something like this. It's okay in my opinion
SPOILER

01:19:245 (4,5,6,7) - Mhmh, it's not that readable, but you're following the beats so I guess it's fine. By the way, if you feel like remapping this, do it. This pattern appeared before, what's wrong with this one in particular?
02:01:063 (5) - New combo. No, there's no need
02:06:881 (6) - ^ ^
02:40:336 (1) - Stack it under the 02:39:790 (7) - ? [Just a suggestion, don't take it that serious] Heck no
From 00:26:517 - to 00:58:154 - Too many spinners But I guess it's fine since you're following the instrument It's a kind of escalation, they won't appear anymore in kiai part

Nice mappu!

Rest has been fixed, thank you.

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-09-09T13:58:20+00:00

gg... take a star <3

AruOtta

1,296 posts

Joined May 2012

AruOtta 2013-09-14T13:03:22+00:00

From your request ~

[Easy]
Nothing to say, just more hitsound =)

[BCI's Normal]
BG : Blue hair like Tenshi ? xD
00:23:608 (1,2) - Blanket ?

[Collab Hard]
00:46:154 (1,2) - Move them down :

SPOILER

[~~Insane~~ Lunatic]
02:43:244 (1) - We can't hear the hitsound =/

Because of short mod (and because I like the song), Take my Star =3

Good Luck *u*

ampzz

ampzz 2013-09-17T15:07:37+00:00

GeneralNothing at all to comment on here; everything checked out a-OK to me and sorry for the lateness.

EasyThe difficulty itself felt like a massive counter-clockwise circle in the beginning with a monotonous amount of looping around the same arc. I'll offer some suggestions to hopefully make it seem less like a circle and have a bit of variation; your choice if you want to apply them.

00:05:426 (4,1,2,3,4) - This I found to be sort of lacking with just a slow progressive curve on the lower half of the screen. Why not mix it up with something snappish like this -
SPOILER
00:09:063 (1,2,3) - Try this?
SPOILER
00:11:972 (1,2,3,4,1) - Go for something bouncy here too?
SPOILER

With this just vertically flip 00:14:881 (1,2,3) - for the end of this.
00:19:972 (4,1,2,3,4) - Using (4) to blanket (1) with a change to the pattern of (2,3,4) looks and plays nicely if done like this -
SPOILER
Part1:

Part 2:
00:23:608 (1,2,3) - Something like this to make it seem less boring -
SPOILER
00:36:699 (2) - vertical flip this and just slightly reposition it so it fits at 1.0x snap.
00:39:608 (1,2,3,4) - Something like this instead of a better lead into the upcoming spinner?
SPOILER
00:55:972 (1) - Didn't expect this spinner here with how you mapped the prior sounding roll with a long curved slider but guess I can't complain there.
01:07:245 (1) - This spinner I would prefer to be a nice curved slider with a repeat on it (which lasts the same length) that blankets the prior (2)'s end

All the rhythm and everything is fine to me; just work on altering some of the combos to be a bit more 'vivid' to play rather than repetitive.

I'll save all the changes I've made to the .osu so if you want to get the codes for all of this let me know.

BCI's NormalOverall this difficulty was very strong and enjoyable to play with only a few things which irked me (personal thing) that I will note.

00:03:972 (2,5) - Feels a bit too condensed for an overlap to me.
00:24:336 (2,1) - This I would suggest just to offset to x:385 y:125 for a better read and to make it seem less copy paste-ish later on..
01:50:517 (4) - Personally I wouldn't bother with this and just have the lull play as is.
02:37:426 (1) - I didn't like this one's positioning; would suggest to move it to x:401 y:163 and after that you'll need to adjust your following combo.

Collab HardA bit of nitpicking on stuff in this difficulty especially with the spinners starting on utterly stupid 1/8th intervals after beats.

00:03:063 (1) - Remove NC and place it on the next white tick instead. Basically copy this NC logic over onto other sections as well so there's more focus on the musical break up.
00:11:245 (7) - Could do with an NC.
00:16:699 (2) - CTRL + G please.
00:28:699 (7,8,9,1) - The flow run off from (7) into (8) just feels awkward to play especially considering how the end of this combo is, rearrange it a bit so it feels natural to play.
00:32:154 (7,1) - A little visual tweak for here would be to use (1) to blanket (7).
00:35:154 (3) - Doesn't have much foreground focus audibly so I would prefer this removed. Then you could rearrange the prior combo like this -
SPOILER

In saying this I really prefer triples to be focused on the highly audible tones so I won't bother pointing out all of them but just use them to emphasise that higher pitched synthesiser roll instead of barely inaudible beats.
00:39:608 (5) - NC this please since it is a new musical phase and to help people comprehend the spacing better.
00:46:154 (1) - CTRL + G this for additional flow in this combo.
00:59:063 (4,6) - I would really love for these to be located at x:328 y:150 instead so it's a really nice flow in and out of the sliders.
01:00:517 (1,2,3) - What about a bit of change here so you keep doing a floating arc like this? -
SPOILER
01:12:972 (2) - I would prefer for this to be removed so there's more focus on triples being played due to that higher pitched synthesiser.
01:15:245 (7) - It's weird that this is a kick slider instead of a 1/1 slider or even 1/2 slider with a repeat consider the same drum rolls have been mapped over before.
01:18:790 (2) - Same deal as other triples like this.
01:26:881 (8,9,1) - A bit of extended flow addition here by opting away from the boring straight slider which doesn't lead to the next sections' direction -
SPOILER
01:32:699 (5,6) - Just no, the kick slider (if you plan to keep it) must start on 01:32:699 - and end on 01:33:063 - with the lull until 01:33:426 (1) - . Your current rhythm set-up here made no sense.
01:45:063 (1,2,3) - Change (1)'s direction so it flows off into (2,3) nicer.
01:47:881 (2) - Eh, Would prefer this gone and funking up the combo around here.
01:48:336 (4,1,2) - Why does (2) overlap on (4)'s start? If it's purely to up the difficulty I highly advise against it. Also, for this I would actually like to play (4) as a repeat slider so you get a nice hold on the piano here.
01:49:426 (1,1,1,1,1) - NC spam, yuck.
02:25:790 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This was just disgusting to sight-read/play.
02:37:426 (4,1) - Either stack (1) under (4) perfectly or set it in a completely different spot on the map.
02:39:790 (2,1) - Yuck. This was horrible when I got to it, even more so than the constant overlap. Why ruin the end with something utterly senseless like this?

Some of the stuff I point out later also reflects on other stuff in the difficulty since I was giving it a few run-throughs and kept forgetting if I had or hadn't picked on things beforehand.

InsaneQuite a fun difficulty.

00:09:699 (8) - Any reason this isn't a circle + 1/2 slider? I kept trying to play is like that. I'll refrain from constantly pointing out this rhythm bit just in case it's how you wanted to represent the section of music.
00:21:245 (7) - Personal irk here is that I prefer playing to a consistent rhythm which would mean that I wouldn't expect to play this.
00:47:790 (1) - Same thing as above; to me it plays really nice without this beat here at all since it's a pure focus on the synth. Optionally you could place your 00:47:881 (4) - back on 00:47:426 - with a repeat so you hold it.
00:58:154 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of this, what about a kick slider?
00:59:972 (3,4) - For HD sight-readabilities' sake get (4) out from under (3)'s body.
01:08:699 (6) - Would prefer this gone myself, I slipped up on the first since I didn't really hear this beat at all; would help to give focus to the rattatat sound too.
01:20:790 (2,4) - These I would prefer gone to give more emphasis on the upcoming stream.
01:31:972 (9,1,1) - Confusing NC break-up. Just place it on 01:31:972 - and remove the other two.
01:52:336 (1,3) - Angle these slightly so it's a natural run off and out of (2).
01:59:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This was really awesome to play, great job. (´∪`*)
02:02:426 (10) - Remove this to make it oh, so much better.
02:22:881 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Not going to lie here, I could not understand the beat break-up at all. There's parts which were mapped to that made me constantly question which band of music I was meant to be playing and others which just confused me outright. Pick a certain series of beats to map here and stick to it so it's actually comprehensible instead of loosely relying on pure circle reading.
My loose take on the rhythm

I'll revise it and let you know some other time when my brain is completely functional again. xD
02:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Would've preferred something a little fancier for the final section/stream of the map.

Kodora

Kodora 2013-09-17T16:34:01+00:00

ampzz wrote:
[notice]
Collab HardA bit of nitpicking on stuff in this difficulty especially with the spinners starting on utterly stupid 1/8th intervals after beats. this totally ok since they all following same note long note, there is no any musical reason to keep 1/4 pause
00:03:063 (1) - Remove NC and place it on the next white tick instead. Basically copy this NC logic over onto other sections as well so there's more focus on the musical break up. NC placed here due to jump, so noo~
00:11:245 (7) - Could do with an NC. Done
00:16:699 (2) - CTRL + G please. Will ruin my pattern, so no.
00:46:154 (1) - CTRL + G this for additional flow in this combo. same here ^
00:59:063 (4,6) - I would really love for these to be located at x:328 y:150 instead so it's a really nice flow in and out of the sliders. Done
01:00:517 (1,2,3) - What about a bit of change here so you keep doing a floating arc like this? - Done
SPOILER
01:45:063 (1,2,3) - Change (1)'s direction so it flows off into (2,3) nicer. Done
01:47:881 (2) - Eh, Would prefer this gone and funking up the combo around here. Pattern combo, so no ;p
01:48:336 (4,1,2) - Why does (2) overlap on (4)'s start? If it's purely to up the difficulty I highly advise against it. Also, for this I would actually like to play (4) as a repeat slider so you get a nice hold on the piano here. It overlaps because i want to make a little trap here, also i dont really get your point about reverse-slider, current rhytm is fine for me
01:49:426 (1,1,1,1,1) - NC spam, yuck. No.
02:25:790 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This was just disgusting to sight-read/play. Its perfectly playable, lol. I tested it several times before with different players and it was works fine.
02:37:426 (4,1) - Either stack (1) under (4) perfectly or set it in a completely different spot on the map. Stacked
02:39:790 (2,1) - Yuck. This was horrible when I got to it, even more so than the constant overlap. Why ruin the end with something utterly senseless like this? Changed this part.

diff

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Leader 2013-09-17T17:04:19+00:00

ampzz

ampzz wrote:
GeneralNothing at all to comment on here; everything checked out a-OK to me and sorry for the lateness.
EasyThe difficulty itself felt like a massive counter-clockwise circle in the beginning with a monotonous amount of looping around the same arc. I'll offer some suggestions to hopefully make it seem less like a circle and have a bit of variation; your choice if you want to apply them.
00:05:426 (4,1,2,3,4) - This I found to be sort of lacking with just a slow progressive curve on the lower half of the screen. Why not mix it up with something snappish like this - Why not?
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00:09:063 (1,2,3) - Try this? I prefer my pattern because it flows better.
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00:11:972 (1,2,3,4,1) - Go for something bouncy here too? No, because consistency with previous pattern
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With this just vertically flip 00:14:881 (1,2,3) - for the end of this.
00:19:972 (4,1,2,3,4) - Using (4) to blanket (1) with a change to the pattern of (2,3,4) looks and plays nicely if done like this - Neat. Done~
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Part1:

Part 2:
00:23:608 (1,2,3) - Something like this to make it seem less boring - Done
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00:36:699 (2) - vertical flip this and just slightly reposition it so it fits at 1.0x snap. Okay
00:39:608 (1,2,3,4) - Something like this instead of a better lead into the upcoming spinner? Awesome, changed to that
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00:55:972 (1) - Didn't expect this spinner here with how you mapped the prior sounding roll with a long curved slider but guess I can't complain there. Keeping this.
01:07:245 (1) - This spinner I would prefer to be a nice curved slider with a repeat on it (which lasts the same length) that blankets the prior (2)'s end I'd rather a spinner here (I couldn't do a blanket here xD)
All the rhythm and everything is fine to me; just work on altering some of the combos to be a bit more 'vivid' to play rather than repetitive.

I'll save all the changes I've made to the .osu so if you want to get the codes for all of this let me know.

BCI's NormalOverall this difficulty was very strong and enjoyable to play with only a few things which irked me (personal thing) that I will note. Fixing for her
00:03:972 (2,5) - Feels a bit too condensed for an overlap to me. Fixed
00:24:336 (2,1) - This I would suggest just to offset to x:385 y:125 for a better read and to make it seem less copy paste-ish later on.. Nah, it's fine
01:50:517 (4) - Personally I wouldn't bother with this and just have the lull play as is. I prefer as it is, to be honest
02:37:426 (1) - I didn't like this one's positioning; would suggest to move it to x:401 y:163 and after that you'll need to adjust your following combo. Okay

InsaneQuite a fun difficulty.
00:09:699 (8) - Any reason this isn't a circle + 1/2 slider? I kept trying to play is like that. I'll refrain from constantly pointing out this rhythm bit just in case it's how you wanted to represent the section of music. I tried this idea but I think it plays better as it is.
00:21:245 (7) - Personal irk here is that I prefer playing to a consistent rhythm which would mean that I wouldn't expect to play this. Fixed, done like 00:09:426 (6,7,8) -
00:47:790 (1) - Same thing as above; to me it plays really nice without this beat here at all since it's a pure focus on the synth. Optionally you could place your 00:47:881 (4) - back on 00:47:426 - with a repeat so you hold it. Actually, I think it works well with music, might change if someone else complain.
00:58:154 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of this, what about a kick slider? Stream is fine, imo
00:59:972 (3,4) - For HD sight-readabilities' sake get (4) out from under (3)'s body. Okay, done
01:08:699 (6) - Would prefer this gone myself, I slipped up on the first since I didn't really hear this beat at all; would help to give focus to the rattatat sound too. That's cool, removed
01:20:790 (2,4) - These I would prefer gone to give more emphasis on the upcoming stream. Actually, I really like this stream as it is xD
01:31:972 (9,1,1) - Confusing NC break-up. Just place it on 01:31:972 - and remove the other two. Mhm, okay
01:52:336 (1,3) - Angle these slightly so it's a natural run off and out of (2). Done
01:59:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This was really awesome to play, great job. (´∪`*) Thank you!
02:02:426 (10) - Remove this to make it oh, so much better. Done!
02:22:881 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Not going to lie here, I could not understand the beat break-up at all. There's parts which were mapped to that made me constantly question which band of music I was meant to be playing and others which just confused me outright. Pick a certain series of beats to map here and stick to it so it's actually comprehensible instead of loosely relying on pure circle reading. I'll see, probably will fix it.
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I'll revise it and let you know some other time when my brain is completely functional again. xD Let me know :3
02:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Would've preferred something a little fancier for the final section/stream of the map. Will rework.

Updatated, many thanks.

@Kenzert9: didn't fix anything, sorry. Thank you anyway for checking~

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Irreversible 2013-09-22T20:16:11+00:00

Bubbles are too mainstream, take my heart!

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Irreversible wrote:
Bubbles are too mainstream, take my heart!

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11t 2013-09-22T23:24:59+00:00

Riidaa hi

Irreversible wrote:
Bubbles are too mainstream, take my heart!

Ranked!

S-scared me for a second there; I had already finished half of this mod post and then I saw that and ;_;

Silly irre.

[Collab Hard]

00:21:426 (5,6,1) - Unnecessarily confusing. There aren't any other double hidden stacks in this difficulty and it just seems unnecessary at this point in the music. Moving 00:21:608 (6) to somewhere like 298,198 would make this much easier to read.

02:25:790 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I'm not sure I like this pattern; it feels too gimmicky to me. It's isolated because there isn't anything else like it in the map, and there's nothing particularly appealing or interesting about the slider-hitcircle combo to justify making the player stare at and play through it four times. There are other ways to achieve repetition without having to be overly repetitive; what you did at 00:46:154 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) was fine in my opinion. I'd try and map a different pattern here, though if you really want to keep this you should at least fix the spacing inconsistencies with 02:26:336 (2,2,2,2) .

Overall, this difficulty plays nicely. The rhythm fits and is easy to read and the majority of the map flows well. Good work!

[BCI's Normal]

00:20:517 (4) - Consider moving to 00:20:336 . Having a gap until a red tick feels weird on Normal difficulties, and especially since your rhythm has been steady up until now.

02:40:336 (5) - Move to 140,336 so that it's aligned with (4). Ending the song with these two misaligned looks a bit awkward to me. If you change this, fix 01:06:699 (4,5) as well for consistency.

[Insane]

4697, my favorite settings!

00:17:063 (3) - Consider Ctrl+H and move to 364,132. This would flow better for me personally because it extends the previous oval flow, but what you have now is also okay.

yes i am a professional ms painter

~~00:18:517 (5,1,1) - Consider Ctrl+G on each of these.~~

00:17:790 (3,4) - Actually, consider Ctrl+G on each of these instead, and restack 00:17:608 (1,2,3) .

image

This flows even better from 00:17:063 (3) if you took my suggestion above about it, because it creates some nice backflow:

image

00:23:608 to 01:10:154 - This section plays extremely well. Amazing use of 3/4s in combination with cusp and oval flow. Good work! The spinners here feel a bit excessive, but that's just me and I don't like to spinspinspin as much as other people do. It's fine!

01:07:245 (3) - Fix blanket. Startpoint 246,184; midpoint 147,198; endpoint 92,75. This won't mess with the distance snappings you previously had here (~1.30x from previous; ~1.20x to next).

02:15:608 (5,6) - I'm not sure if you were going for a blanket here, but if you were, you should make this neater, and if you weren't, well maybe you should go for a blanket. 02:15:608 (5) - midpoint to 422,303; endpoint to 448,216. 02:16:154 (6) - move to 344,232 so that it's 1.31x distance away from (5) after these adjustments.

Consider being more consistent with your 1/4 spacings for aesthetic reasons. Compare:
00:41:790 (3,4) - 0.74x
00:47:790 (1,2) - 0.32x
00:49:063 (6,7) - 0.46x
02:20:881 (1,2) - 0.14x
02:21:426 (3,4) - 0.25x
02:31:608 (1,2) - 0.42x
Maybe some of these are intentional, but for example I don't see a reason to space 00:47:790 (1,2) and 00:49:063 (6,7) or 02:14:154 (1,2) and 02:14:881 (3,4) differently. These slight differences aren't really noticeable in normal play, though, so don't worry too much about them; I thought I'd point this out in case you cared enough about these small details.

02:23:608 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Okay, after listening really really hard to the music I can hear what you're mapping to here. Still, I think it plays a bit awkwardly. Starting 1/4 streams/stacks on blue ticks is always going to cause some confusion. Maybe you could try something like this:

images

Because of slider dropoff leniency the gap actually isn't much of an issue (though this will probably require a spacing adjustment anyway; maybe you could try turning the stack into a stream instead), and the visual of the short (4) slider can help to cue the player in on the proper timing of the stack. This also gives you something to add a clap hitsound to at 02:23:972 , which makes more sense in my opinion than a clap hitsound at 02:23:881 . If you change something here, don't forget to do it at 02:29:426 (3,4,5,6,7,1) as well.

Overall, this is a very well-designed map. The way you handle the flow in combination with the 1/4 rhythm is incredible. The mapping is visually clean and organized, as well. Amazing work, and ~~congrats on~~ good luck with ranking!

☆~

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11t wrote:
Riidaa hi It's Riido, btw :<

Irreversible wrote:
Bubbles are too mainstream, take my heart!

Ranked!
S-scared me for a second there; I had already finished half of this mod post and then I saw that and ;_;

Silly irre. Yeah.

[Insane]
4697, my favorite settings!

00:17:063 (3) - Consider Ctrl+H and move to 364,132. This would flow better for me personally because it extends the previous oval flow, but what you have now is also okay. Fine, fixed
yes i am a professional ms painter

~~00:18:517 (5,1,1) - Consider Ctrl+G on each of these.~~

00:17:790 (3,4) - Actually, consider Ctrl+G on each of these instead, and restack 00:17:608 (1,2,3) .
image
This flows even better from 00:17:063 (3) if you took my suggestion above about it, because it creates some nice backflow: I don't like flow between 00:17:063 (3) - and 00:17:608 (1) - at all, so no
image

00:23:608 to 01:10:154 - This section plays extremely well. Amazing use of 3/4s in combination with cusp and oval flow. Good work! The spinners here feel a bit excessive, but that's just me and I don't like to spinspinspin as much as other people do. It's fine! Thank youuu TvT will see about spinners

01:07:245 (3) - Fix blanket. Startpoint 246,184; midpoint 147,198; endpoint 92,75. This won't mess with the distance snappings you previously had here (~1.30x from previous; ~1.20x to next). Done

02:15:608 (5,6) - I'm not sure if you were going for a blanket here, but if you were, you should make this neater, and if you weren't, well maybe you should go for a blanket. 02:15:608 (5) - midpoint to 422,303; endpoint to 448,216. 02:16:154 (6) - move to 344,232 so that it's 1.31x distance away from (5) after these adjustments. And done

Consider being more consistent with your 1/4 spacings for aesthetic reasons. Compare:
00:41:790 (3,4) - 0.74x
00:47:790 (1,2) - 0.32x
00:49:063 (6,7) - 0.46x
02:20:881 (1,2) - 0.14x
02:21:426 (3,4) - 0.25x
02:31:608 (1,2) - 0.42x
Maybe some of these are intentional, but for example I don't see a reason to space 00:47:790 (1,2) and 00:49:063 (6,7) or 02:14:154 (1,2) and 02:14:881 (3,4) differently. These slight differences aren't really noticeable in normal play, though, so don't worry too much about them; I thought I'd point this out in case you cared enough about these small details. Welp, there was an error and others are kinda intentional, as you said it's not a big deal but fixed up a bit.

02:23:608 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Okay, after listening really really hard to the music I can hear what you're mapping to here. Still, I think it plays a bit awkwardly. Starting 1/4 streams/stacks on blue ticks is always going to cause some confusion. Maybe you could try something like this:
images
Because of slider dropoff leniency the gap actually isn't much of an issue (though this will probably require a spacing adjustment anyway; maybe you could try turning the stack into a stream instead), and the visual of the short (4) slider can help to cue the player in on the proper timing of the stack. This also gives you something to add a clap hitsound to at 02:23:972 , which makes more sense in my opinion than a clap hitsound at 02:23:881 . If you change something here, don't forget to do it at 02:29:426 (3,4,5,6,7,1) as well. That's great, done

Overall, this is a very well-designed map. The way you handle the flow in combination with the 1/4 rhythm is incredible. The mapping is visually clean and organized, as well. Amazing work, and ~~congrats on~~ good luck with ranking! Thank you :3

☆~

Applied suggestion on Normal too, thank you!

Kodora

Kodora 2013-09-23T15:23:03+00:00

11t wrote:
[Collab Hard]
00:21:426 (5,6,1) - Unnecessarily confusing. There aren't any other double hidden stacks in this difficulty and it just seems unnecessary at this point in the music. Moving 00:21:608 (6) to somewhere like 298,198 would make this much easier to read. I love variable placement & michievous patterns. Also, this is not that hard, so no change

02:25:790 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I'm not sure I like this pattern; it feels too gimmicky to me. It's isolated because there isn't anything else like it in the map, and there's nothing particularly appealing or interesting about the slider-hitcircle combo to justify making the player stare at and play through it four times. There are other ways to achieve repetition without having to be overly repetitive; what you did at 00:46:154 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) was fine in my opinion. I'd try and map a different pattern here, though if you really want to keep this you should at least fix the spacing inconsistencies with 02:26:336 (2,2,2,2) . Fixed spacing, wont change pattern because music at this part is soo repetitive & because i love it as it now.

Overall, this difficulty plays nicely. The rhythm fits and is easy to read and the majority of the map flows well. Good work!

☆~

Thanks!

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osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 81790
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.3
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[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:黒い海に紅く ～ Legendary Fish
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ArtistUnicode:ZUN
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Source:Touhou
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OverallDifficulty:7
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Irreversible

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4,315 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2013-09-24T16:06:18+00:00

Take my IRC mod, I hope I was able to help you a bit. I really liked the gameplay a lot!

17:17 Irreversible: Leader
17:17 Irreversible: irc mod now
17:17 Leader: ok
17:17 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/286577 ZUN - Crimson in the Black Sea ~ Legendary Fish [Lunatic]]
17:17 Irreversible: wait isn't alrdy ranked
17:17 Leader: bat is noob
17:17 Leader: and it's still unranked
17:17 Irreversible:

((
17:17 Irreversible: 00:02:517 (4) -
17:17 Irreversible: can you explain me this placing please?
17:18 Irreversible: wouldn't it make more sense to put it somewhere, where the DS still increases?
17:18 Irreversible: 00:00:336 (1,2,3) - like here you know?
17:18 Leader: ok, moved up
17:19 Irreversible: but
17:19 Irreversible: watch out
17:19 Irreversible: 00:00:336 (1,3) -
17:19 Irreversible: you see this?
17:19 Irreversible: 00:01:063 (2,4) - the same DS between them, just to get a good pattern
17:19 Leader: yup?
17:20 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/4z7no.png
17:20 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/4z7nP.png
17:20 Irreversible: ok LOL
17:20 Irreversible: 00:03:972 (1,2,3,4) -
17:20 Leader: BEST PAINER
17:20 Irreversible: this square pattern can be improved
17:20 Irreversible: DS between 1 + 3 isn't the same as between 2 + 4
17:21 Irreversible: also
17:21 Irreversible: for a better flow i highly recommend:
17:21 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/4z7rf.jpg
17:22 Leader: that's sweet
17:22 Irreversible: 00:05:063 (6,1) - make those two paralell please
17:23 Irreversible: also, try to get this: 00:04:699 (5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/4z7tX.jpg
17:23 Irreversible: 00:05:972 (1,2,3) - move those more to the right, otherwise it's too close to ^ , in case you've apllied it, not sure though, just making it sure
17:23 Irreversible: 00:08:336 (2) - this blanket can actually be improved it you move the last white tick 1 little tiny bit to the left
17:23 Leader: triangle is perfect now btw
17:24 Irreversible: 00:09:426 (6,7) - click on this <- and move both it like this, that it says 448 144
17:24 Leader: uuh ok
17:25 Irreversible: 00:10:336 (1) - it's possible, but please, the finish is on the big white tick and imo a beat that shouldn't be left behind -
17:25 Irreversible: so you should arrange it like that, that there is something to click : replace by 1 circle and 1 slider.
17:26 Irreversible: 00:10:881 (2) - move to 244 232 to make your triangle pattern even more perfect.
17:27 Leader: mm
17:27 Leader: got it
17:27 Irreversible: i also have a suggestion for the rhythm thing, for the replacement:
17:27 Irreversible: if you have a circle 00:10:336 (10) - , stack it with 00:10:881 (2) -
17:27 Irreversible: the piano would be emphasized with the jump
17:27 Irreversible: 00:12:699 (4) - is this no-blanket on purpose? - if not, fix it <3
17:28 Irreversible: 00:13:245 (5) - well up to you, but what about moving it to 348 60? it would actually follow the given flow, and gives a nice drop-lead in to the next slider.
17:28 Leader: no-blanket is fine ):
17:28 Irreversible: alright :3
17:29 Irreversible: 00:13:972 (7) - don't you think yourself this does totally not fit your quality that you've mapped like before?
17:29 Leader: also 1.7 spacing
17:29 Leader: uh
17:29 Irreversible: it's just so near to the 6..
17:29 Irreversible: oh
17:29 Irreversible: it can be less
17:29 Irreversible: but just that you follow the path
17:29 Leader: yup, done
17:30 Irreversible: 00:13:426 (6,7,8) - well imo this whole pattern just doesn't look really good
17:30 Irreversible: it's up to you if you want to tidy up, just tell me if you think the same, i'm glad helping you finding smth different :3
17:31 Irreversible: 00:17:063 (3) - whta about moving it a bit more up? i can show you why, lemme draw smth again LOL
17:31 Leader: flows great imo
17:32 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/4z7MG.jpg 00:17:063 (3) -
17:32 Irreversible: for this
17:32 Irreversible: 00:17:063 (3) -
17:32 Leader: and also no <.<, it's okay as it is
17:32 Irreversible: but let's assume this is the normal DS
17:32 Irreversible: (and there is a slider)
17:32 Irreversible: it would be more downwards
17:32 Irreversible: just to follow consistency
17:32 Irreversible: if you move it a bit more upwards, it's the same, just that it's .. at the top
17:33 Irreversible: looks like you follow DS though
17:33 Leader: oh, ok then
17:33 Leader: LOL
17:33 Irreversible: gotcha
17:33 Irreversible: HUA
17:33 Irreversible: xD
17:33 Irreversible: 00:18:517 (5,6,1) - what happened with the hitsounds here?
17:34 Leader: i forgot a clap
17:34 Leader: apparently
17:34 Irreversible: and a whistle i guess
17:34 Leader: yup
17:34 Leader: ;;
17:34 Irreversible: 00:24:336 (3) - add a whistle my friend <3
17:35 Irreversible: 00:26:608 (1) - add whislte , 00:29:426 (1) - add finish on it's tail
17:35 Leader: head or tail
17:35 Irreversible: head
17:35 Irreversible: uh
17:35 Irreversible: wait
17:35 Irreversible: head
17:35 Irreversible: 00:23:608 (1) - and whistle on the tail here
17:36 Irreversible: 3) to emphasize the piano
17:36 Irreversible: 1) to follow the pattern itself
17:36 Leader: there's a whistle on tail already <.<
17:36 Irreversible: i mean
17:36 Irreversible: end
17:36 Irreversible: o,o
17:37 Leader: i'm talking of 00:24:336 (3) -
17:37 Irreversible: head
17:37 Irreversible: there
17:37 Leader: no, because there's in tail already anyway
17:37 Irreversible: tail??
17:37 Leader: also have to go soon, I think
17:37 Irreversible: ew D:
17:37 Leader: whistle in both head and tail
17:37 Leader: sounds bad
17:37 Irreversible: well normally you put a finish on the start
17:38 Irreversible: wait what
17:38 Irreversible: 00:25:063 (5) -
17:38 Irreversible: it's to follow this
17:38 Irreversible: it is the same LOL
17:38 Irreversible: (forget the finish=
17:39 Leader: i'm kinda retarted today
17:39 Leader: yey
17:39 Irreversible: should i stop now? o.o
17:39 Leader: nono
17:39 Irreversible: ehm
17:39 Irreversible: we can do it like this
17:39 Irreversible: i just tell you the other things
17:39 Irreversible: and then you upload
17:39 Irreversible: and i fix some hitsounds
17:39 Irreversible: where you forgot it
17:40 Irreversible: (nothing else)
17:40 Leader: oh, okay
17:40 Leader: if you prefer to do that
17:40 Irreversible: or i fix everything
17:40 Irreversible: HUE
17:40 Irreversible: xD
17:40 Irreversible: well idk
17:40 Irreversible: you can tell
17:40 Irreversible: where was I..
17:40 Irreversible: 00:29:790 (2) - whislte on the head
17:41 Irreversible: 00:30:154 (3,4,5) - i see what you wanted to do here, but to make it better, 5 should be rotated more to the right shouldn't it?
17:41 Irreversible: 00:30:881 (4,5,1) - and pls, triangle pattern, it's just for some polishment. (and i don't think it would hurt your mapping style, does it? if it does just tell me lol9
17:42 Irreversible: 00:35:245 (2) - finish, not whistle on the head
17:42 Leader: mhm, that pattern is fine
17:42 Leader: okay to finish
17:43 Irreversible: 00:37:790 (4) - if you wanna go on with the clap pattern i'd add one..
17:43 Irreversible: doesn't fit really though
17:43 Irreversible: how about leaving it
17:43 Irreversible: kthxbye
17:43 Irreversible: 00:38:881 (7) - NC i suppose?
17:43 Leader: wtf
17:43 Irreversible: due to.. new.. part?
17:43 Leader: yup
17:44 Irreversible: 00:42:154 (4) - but here you should definetly add a claop
17:44 Irreversible: because it's the last white tick before a new one starts (sry i dunno those upbeat downbeat stuff etc.)
17:44 Irreversible: 00:43:972 (6) - finish to get rid of lame whistles
17:45 Irreversible: 00:49:063 (6) - first of all, this is a bad made blanket, secondly it's a bit too close for my taste, what about moving it a little to the lefT?
17:45 Leader: oookay ;w;
17:45 Leader: i do suck a lot on hitsounds
17:45 Irreversible: 00:49:426 (7) - normally you've used 0.69 for 1/4 , here 0.46. please fix
17:45 Irreversible: 00:42:154 (4) - and here 0.74, well it would be nice if you made it similar
17:45 Irreversible: 00:44:063 (1) - those spinners annoy me, too many of them orz
17:46 Leader: ;w;
17:46 Irreversible: 01:01:790 (2,3) - remember my painting before with the' let's assume there is a circle blabla'.. same here
17:46 Leader: will remove some
17:46 Irreversible: that would be cool

17:46 Leader: 1/4 are not similar but that's intentional
17:46 Irreversible: well i see, but in the same parts you should use the same DS
17:47 Irreversible: 00:49:426 (7) - 00:42:154 (4) - a nd those two are the 'same part' if you compare the rhythm
17:47 Irreversible: no they aren't
17:47 Irreversible: ignore me
17:47 Leader: ye but not same pattern :p
17:47 Irreversible: NAZI POLICY OMG 01:02:426 (2,4,7) - 0.21 0.22 0.23 NUKE PLS
17:47 Irreversible: THIS MUST ALL BE THE SMAE NOT 0.1 DS DIFFERENCE OMG LEADER P L S
17:48 Irreversible: 01:09:426 (3) - sounds so harsh q.q i'd extend it by one rotate, sounds better itself but would technically be overmapped, up to you
17:48 Leader: LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
17:48 Leader: i forgot to stack 4
17:48 Leader: ok
17:48 Irreversible: 01:10:154 (1) - 80% finish
17:49 Irreversible: 01:18:426 (8,9,1,2,3) - ciao bella io miss the hitsoundis
17:49 Leader: you killed me
17:49 Leader: bye
17:49 Leader: rofl
17:49 Irreversible: why? XD
17:49 Leader: ciao bella io miss the hitsoundis
17:49 Leader: qotd
17:50 Irreversible: 01:19:790 (7) - the same thing as before, and here it's rhythmcally wrong too i suppose .. what about a single circle 01:19:790 (7) - and 01:19:972 (8) - ?XD
17:50 Irreversible: lol haha mio pro italiano
17:51 Leader: i think that pattern is fine
17:51 Leader: o,o
17:51 Irreversible: the pattern is
17:51 Irreversible: the rhythm isn't
17:51 Leader: it is too
17:51 Irreversible: alright then
17:52 Irreversible: 01:25:063 (4) - a bit to the right, remember my drawing
17:52 Irreversible: it'll haunt you in your dreams
17:52 Irreversible: 01:28:336 (6,7,8) - MIO AMORE IO VOGLIO UNO BISCOTTI (hitsounds)
17:53 Irreversible: 01:56:699 (1) - you missed a finish here too..
17:53 Leader: OK TESORO
17:53 Irreversible: 02:01:790 (7,8,9) - why did you decrease SV here?
17:54 Irreversible: DS*
17:55 Leader: should plays fine now
17:55 Leader: fixed
17:55 Leader: *play
17:55 Leader: aah ;_;
17:55 Irreversible: 02:06:154 (4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/4z8Bt.jpg you might overthink it, the same thing again
17:55 Irreversible: 02:05:245 - DS change too, seems just a bit odd
17:55 Irreversible: 02:05:426 (1) - * sorry
17:56 Irreversible: 02:11:972 (1) - if you made this curve http://puu.sh/4z8Dg.jpg like that it would improve the flow very much O__O
17:56 Irreversible: it leads the next things in more
17:56 Leader: nazi
17:56 Irreversible: and about the DS, it's up to you, just some consistency mod
17:57 Leader: fixed done and done blabla
17:57 Leader: :3
17:57 Irreversible: 02:19:245 (1,1,1) - oh and btw a tip for these things
17:57 Irreversible: it's a super cool effect if you make 5% on each slider end
17:57 Irreversible: 02:24:881 (2) - 128 108 same as usual
17:57 Irreversible: 02:33:972 (1) - hitsound
17:57 Irreversible: whistle i guess
17:58 Irreversible: 02:40:426 (1) - add a finish to build up tension
17:58 Irreversible: 02:43:245 (1) - add 100 to let the tension out of this and omg BAMMM miss
17:58 Irreversible: loljk
17:58 Irreversible: 100%
17:59 Leader: 70% i'd say
17:59 Leader: OK DONE
17:59 Irreversible: ehm
17:59 Irreversible: i'd say 100
17:59 Irreversible: loljk
18:00 Irreversible: omg try 300%
18:00 Irreversible: hack eeet
18:00 Irreversible: loljk
18:00 Irreversible: 00:23:608 (1) -
18:00 Leader: oh right
18:00 Leader: is it possible?
18:00 Irreversible: wrong DS
18:00 Irreversible: in compare with the stream
18:00 Irreversible: pls leader pls

good luck, and take a star <3

Damnae

Elite Storyboarder

640 posts

Joined July 2011

Damnae 2013-09-30T14:46:25+00:00

hi, mostly suggestions

Lunatic

00:03:972 (1) - remove whistle and either

add one at 00:04:154 (2) - to follow that kick sound,
or add one at 00:04:336 (3) - here for that louder piano sound, and also remove it from 00:04:517 (4) - ?

00:09:426 (6,7) - bring them closer like you did with 01:30:881 (4,5) - ? looks more readable to me.
00:12:517 (3,4) - blanket them ?
00:14:154 (8) - ctrl-g ?
00:18:154 (4) - ctrl-g ?
00:18:154 (4,5) - fix this blanket
00:21:063 (5,6) - same as 00:09:426 (6,7) -
00:24:245 - add a circle here ?
00:25:790 (8,9) - move them to the left so they don't overlap with 00:25:426 (7) -
00:37:608 (3,4) - ctrl-g and move then around so that it looks like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1011090 ?
00:42:154 (4,1) - the movement between these two would feel better like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1011035. screenshot also contains some suggestions for what come after that slider.
00:43:426 (3) - and 00:43:790 (5) - remove whistle ?
00:43:972 (6) - whistle instead of finish ?
00:49:790 (8) - finish (40% volume) instead of whistle ?
00:49:972 (1) - not sure why this spinner is 1/2 after the note while the others are 1/4 after it
00:55:608 (1) - finish (40% volume) instead of whistle ?
00:59:972 (3) - ctrl-g ?
01:32:517 (4) - whistle ?
01:32:699 (6,7,8,9,10) - whistle on each, and finish on 10 ?

Jaxalotl

189 posts

Joined December 2012

Jaxalotl 2013-10-05T14:56:32+00:00

Easy

00:23:245 Slider ends here

ALL I FOUND xD

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-10-09T15:12:19+00:00

dalla mia m4m q,scusa il ritardo,ma ho perso tutta la motivazione per osu

[Easy]

00:22:517 (4) - finiscilo 1/4 prima pls o.o poi lo spacing è anche sbagliato è confonde :V
00:43:972 - potresti aggiungere un circle quicon un finish e iniziare lo spinner 1/2 dopo
01:14:517 - non vedo il motivo di interrompere il break qui,secondo me faresti prima a lasciarlo come dalla impostazioni standard messe dall'editor
01:28:336 (2) - hai dimenticatoilnormal sampleset per questo slider sempbra cosi vuoto senza un qualcosa che da il ritmo ;_;
01:33:063 (3) - sinceramente suona malissimo questo cerchio perchè a 01:33:426 - si sente chiaramente un suono forte che non p stato mappato io ti consiglierei :
a) di aggiungere un circle 01:33:426 - qui con un finish o un normal sampleset (a tua preferenza)
b) o nel caso migliore che la cosa è anche piu' semplice ed esce meglio di far partire uno slider dove attualmente si trova 01:33:063 (3) - e di farlo finire a 01:33:426 - qui
01:42:154 - invece di interrompere il break qui fai partire uno spinner da qui che finisce a 01:45:063 (1) - (ovviamente eliminalo e rimpiazza lo spinner end con un finish o3o) è piu' gradevole che aspettare che muoia il drain (anche se non lo fa,comunque hai capito cosa intendo,spero)
01:55:245 (2) - dovresti alzarlo di un paio di grind per creare un flow migliore
SPOILER
02:11:245 (3) - finish allo slider start
02:17:063 - qui tu non mappi proprioil suono del finish che si sente nella musica , perche non aggiungi un circle qui e inizii lo spinner 1/2 dopo?
02:22:881 (4) - mancanza di normal sampleset sulla reverse e alla fine dello slider
02:25:790 (2) - nella reverse adda un whistle o normal sampleset :V
02:38:881 (4) - usa il normal sampleset alla fine dello slider per mantenere la consistenza con la precedente hitsound pattern

[BCI]

00:10:517 (3,4) - try to place this 2 objects like this ,flows a bit better
SPOILER

[Hard]
Kodora:

00:09:063 (3) - is better to make this slider juat curved
00:49:836 (1) - just why? start it atleas here : 00:49:881 -
00:55:654 (1) - same
01:07:290 (1) - same
01:50:881 (3) - ;_; ugly slider try with something like:
SPOILER
02:22:926 (1) - same again ...
02:26:517 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i think you should give a bit more untack as it is now,and personally i don't find that this style fits with ZUN
02:28:745 (1) - same again about the spinners...
02:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - imo is kinda weid to have this here,personally it son't fits with this diff, is a hard not a lunatic

Leyko

01:33:426 (1) - try with a finish here

[Lunatic]

01:32:336 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - prosegui questo stream fino a 01:33:426 -
02:24:336 (1,2,3,4) - forma un quadrato con questi,floweranno meglio perchè attualmente il jump diciamo che c'è tra 02:24:336 (1,2) - è molto brutto e flowa male

mota carina questa diff o3o waaaahme gusta molto sei migliorato tanto o3o!! good luck

Kodora

Kodora 2013-10-09T16:59:43+00:00

Lally wrote:
[Hard]
Kodora:
00:09:063 (3) - is better to make this slider juat curved that's more bug, it not supposed to looks like this o_o fixed anyway
00:49:836 (1) - just why? start it atleas here : 00:49:881 - because note & spinner following same note & 1/4 pause really feels too much here
00:55:654 (1) - same ^
01:07:290 (1) - same ^
01:50:881 (3) - ;_; ugly slider try with something like: i love ugly sliders, but changed form a bit anyway
SPOILER
02:22:926 (1) - same again ... ye
02:26:517 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i think you should give a bit more untack as it is now,and personally i don't find that this style fits with ZUN that part is too repetitive, and it fits enough as for me. also more unstack will looks less tricky :c
02:28:745 (1) - same again about the spinners... ye
02:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - imo is kinda weid to have this here,personally it son't fits with this diff, is a hard not a lunatic 165 bpm 9 notes is common thing for a Hard diff.

Thanks!

SPOILER

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Leader

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Leader 2013-10-09T21:19:01+00:00

Thor wrote:
Easy
00:23:245 Slider ends here
ALL I FOUND xD

My mistake, fixed. Thank you for pointing it out!

Lally

Lally wrote:
dalla mia m4m q,scusa il ritardo,ma ho perso tutta la motivazione per osu

[Easy]
00:22:517 (4) - finiscilo 1/4 prima pls o.o poi lo spacing è anche sbagliato è confonde :V Erroraccio mio ahah
00:43:972 - potresti aggiungere un circle quicon un finish e iniziare lo spinner 1/2 dopo Non mi piace nelle Easy orz
01:14:517 - non vedo il motivo di interrompere il break qui,secondo me faresti prima a lasciarlo come dalla impostazioni standard messe dall'editor Boh, avrò toccato qualcosa a random
01:28:336 (2) - hai dimenticatoilnormal sampleset per questo slider sempbra cosi vuoto senza un qualcosa che da il ritmo ;_;
01:33:063 (3) - sinceramente suona malissimo questo cerchio perchè a 01:33:426 - si sente chiaramente un suono forte che non p stato mappato io ti consiglierei :
a) di aggiungere un circle 01:33:426 - qui con un finish o un normal sampleset (a tua preferenza)
b) o nel caso migliore che la cosa è anche piu' semplice ed esce meglio di far partire uno slider dove attualmente si trova 01:33:063 (3) - e di farlo finire a 01:33:426 - qui
01:42:154 - invece di interrompere il break qui fai partire uno spinner da qui che finisce a 01:45:063 (1) - (ovviamente eliminalo e rimpiazza lo spinner end con un finish o3o) è piu' gradevole che aspettare che muoia il drain (anche se non lo fa,comunque hai capito cosa intendo,spero)
01:55:245 (2) - dovresti alzarlo di un paio di grind per creare un flow migliore
SPOILER
02:11:245 (3) - finish allo slider start
02:17:063 - qui tu non mappi proprioil suono del finish che si sente nella musica , perche non aggiungi un circle qui e inizii lo spinner 1/2 dopo?
02:22:881 (4) - mancanza di normal sampleset sulla reverse e alla fine dello slider
02:25:790 (2) - nella reverse adda un whistle o normal sampleset :V
02:38:881 (4) - usa il normal sampleset alla fine dello slider per mantenere la consistenza con la precedente hitsound pattern
[BCI]
00:10:517 (3,4) - try to place this 2 objects like this ,flows a bit better It's okay as it is
SPOILER
[Lunatic]
01:32:336 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - prosegui questo stream fino a 01:33:426 - No, si sente bene il suono su cui ho mappato lo stream e lì non c'è
02:24:336 (1,2,3,4) - forma un quadrato con questi,floweranno meglio perchè attualmente il jump diciamo che c'è tra 02:24:336 (1,2) - è molto brutto e flowa male
mota carina questa diff o3o waaaahme gusta molto sei migliorato tanto o3o!! good luck Ty ><

Thaaaanks!

karterfreak

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karterfreak 2013-11-07T02:45:59+00:00

Not sure if you're still working on this map, but I noticed some unrankable issues while trying the Inner Oni by Dunskin

[Dunskin's Inner Oni]

00:22:972 (39,40) - Doubled note, delete one here.

00:58:245 (45,44) - ^

01:32:790 (41,40) - ^

01:56:063 (37,38) - ^

02:31:336 (49,48) - ^

The difficulty itself is pretty good though

[714's Muzukashii]

00:38:881 (136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145) and 01:02:154 (225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234) - Honestly I find the pattern you used in the Oni for these two sections is a lot better than what you have here and isn't any more difficult. I suggest using the patterns from the Oni here.

Leader

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Leader 2013-11-08T17:37:12+00:00

Fixed that stuff in Muzukashii because 714-chan is pretty busy and can't log often, so I got the permission to fix for them. :3c

DarkDunskin

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DarkDunskin 2013-11-08T19:49:12+00:00

Whatthefu*!!1!1!!11!
Please do as Tasha says and delete these Notes.
Thanks!