ZUN - Crimson in the Black Sea ~ Legendary Fish [Taiko|Osu] · forum

asaink

Joined July 2010

asaink 2013-06-10T08:08:13+00:00

hi, for M4M.

This is all suggestion, so feel free ignore.but, please tell me why it is no change.I can't mod about hitsounds & Taiko maps sorry...

[General]
nothing-
[Easy]

OD -1 or -2　　generally, OD<(or=)AR is better.
00:10:154 - add circle?
00:15:608 (2,3) - Make be more horizontal, then flow is better.
00:43:972 (1) - Circle or slider shouldn't be placed soon after spinner's end in Easy.I suggest that shift spinner one beats before.(00:43:608 - 00:45:790)---(1)
00:49:790 (1) - same as (1)
01:59:245 (4) - move to (X:76,Y:352)
01:59:608 (1) - spinner's end is 02:01:063
02:08:336 (1) - flip horizontally?
02:17:063 (1) - same as (1)
02:22:881 (1) - same as (1)
02:29:063 (1,1) - Circle or slider shouldn't be placed soon after spinner's end in Easy.

[BCI's Normal]

00:15:245 (2) - change to slider(00:15:245 - 00:15:608)?
01:03:608 (4) - too close to HP bar
02:17:245 (1,1) - Circle or slider shouldn't be placed soon after spinner's end in Normal.I suggest that delete 02:19:245 (1).
02:43:245 - remove KIAI time and 02:43:426 - delete this green line

[Collab Hard]

Unicode title Is corrupted.
As long as there is no special reason, let's add a KIAIl time.
AR -1
00:12:699 (3,4,5) - keep DS constant.
00:49:790 (1) - not stack is better imo.
01:07:336 (1) - change to 01:07:426 - 01:09:972?
01:47:245 (4) - too close to HP bar
01:52:881 (8) - move to (X:88,Y:80)
02:22:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - hmm...I feel this is a little difficult for Hard.make another rhythm?
02:28:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ^
02:33:972 (2,3,4,5) - keep DS constant.

[Lunatic]

00:10:881 (4) - too close to HP bar
00:12:336 (2) - move to (X:196,Y:284).flow is better.
00:46:154 (1,2,3) - keep DS constant.
01:07:245 (4) - move to (X:0,Y:212).
02:27:245 (3) - move to more right
02:35:063 (5) - move to (X:112,Y:264).flow is better.

Good Luck!

regenz

1,277 posts

Joined November 2009

regenz 2013-06-10T08:42:56+00:00

Hi M4M request http://osu.ppy.sh/s/39032 Rin - Prism*Magical (DJ SHARPNEL hardrave remix) Short Ver.

[General]
The hit sound in Lunatic Diff can be improve.

--storyboard--
leyko.png
kodora.png
is very hard to see due Bg blending . can you use orange or green color?

[Lunatic]

+1 drain ?
---hitsound---

00:00:336 (1,2,3,4) - whistle at start of each slider.
00:02:972 (1) - delete this note 'll match perfect with piano sound.
00:06:154 put whistle at 1st and 3rd beat of measure ( yes same as 00:00:336 (1,2,3,4) )
00:10:336 (2) - forgot clap at end of slider
00:11:972 (1) - finish at start of slider here 'll note make sound weird.
00:11:972 until - 00:23:245 You can put whistle at each 1st and 3rd beat of each measure It's very good imo.

EXCEPT 00:14:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - And 00:20:699 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) -

Put whistle at each beat. ( white line )

00:23:608 (1) - whistle + finish at start of slider.
00:26:517 (1) - clap
00:35:245 (7) - finish
00:29:426 (1) - this note sample set is normal is it intention?

00:38:881 (1) - whistle
00:39:154 (2,3) - whistle at end of slider and circle
00:39:881 (4,5) - ^
00:40:608 (6) - whistle at end of slider
00:41:063 (1) - start of slider whistle + finish
00:46:881 (3) - finish
00:52:699 (1) - ^
00:53:426 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - same preview whistle suggest ( same pattern also )
00:55:608 (1) - whistle + finish
01:04:154 (1) - whistle
01:04:335 (3) - finish + whistle
01:05:790 (5) - finish start of slider
01:07:245 (4) - finish
01:10:154 (3) - finish

01:15:972 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - consider to Newcombo some ( 3 measure already but no NC )
01:31:063 (6) - add note + clap for constant hitsound.
01:45:063 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - whistle 1st and 3rd beat of each measure.
Except 01:53:790 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - all beat
01:56:699 (1) - start of slider whistle + finish
02:09:790 (2) - finish start of slider
02:11:245 (4) - ^
02:12:245 (5,6,7,8,1) - use same whistle pattern as 00:24:336 (3,4,5) -
02:22:881 (1) - No Need to NC here Imo. only 1 note and note make much different. even it's a little jump but I think player can guess.
02:27:972 (4) - whistle start
02:28:245 (5) - whistle end
02:31:608 (5) - finish start
02:33:063 (2) - ^
02:34:517 (4) - ^
02:37:426 (1) - whis + fin start
02:38:881 (3) - fin start
02:40:336 (2) - ^
02:40:881 (1) - whistle
02:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - whistle

---- game play ----
00:57:608 (5) - 80 , 348 (x,y)
00:57:972 (6) - 80 , 40
02:35:972 (7) - ctrl + g
02:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - please make this more better curve.

[Collab]

Fix title.

Form
é»’ã„æµ·ã«ç´…ã ï½ž Legendary Fish

to

黒い海に紅く～ Legendary Fish

No Kiai time ?

00:48:336 (1,1) - move down 2 grid.
01:02:154 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - can change some to slider ? it's pure circle here.
01:07:245 (4) - 2 grid right.
02:18:881 (1) - this can cause player confuse . it's better to start kick slider at 02:18:790 and extend return to 02:19:245
02:22:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this set is killer compare to whole notes of this diff. can change some to kick sliders
AND / OR slider ? (This set 're more harder Than Lunatic.)
02:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - whistle

[Normal]

Circle size 3 ?

Please fix tags
form
Scarlet Weather Rhapsody SWR Iku Nagae Leyko Kodora BCI hs714

to

Scarlet Weather Rhapsody SWR th10.5 Iku Nagae BCI Leyko Kodora hs714

00:09:063 (1) - Finish end of slider + 00:09:972 (2) - remove finish form head of slider
00:10:517 (3) - finish
01:07:245 (1) - no need NC here.
01:33:426 (1) - ^ even it's 6 combo for normal i think it's fine.
01:54:881 make green timing to reduce volume here it's too loud the finish in music is not much heard. OR
move finish to 01:54:517 instead.
02:40:336 (1) - no need NC

[Easy]

00:32:336 (3) - whistle head
00:32:336 (3) - remove finish end of slider It's very weird.
02:11:245 (3) - change sample set to auto + finish head of slider
02:22:881 (1) - end at 02:24:336
then
make a slider start 02:24:881 end 02:25:426
and put whistle both start and end
02:25:790 (1) - change sample set to auto + finish middle of slider.
02:29:063 (1,1) - careful Bat 'll point this. It's better to have at least 2 beat after Spinner in Easiest difficult of mapset.
02:29:063 (1) - move end to 02:30:881 'll fix above.

I don't Know how to play and mod Taiko sorry.

Goodluck

Kodora

Kodora 2013-06-11T21:51:19+00:00

lol

Leader, please, update our collab.
it still not updated LOL

since i have no time to work on it i asked Leyko to fix my parts. also, dont remove please funniest part since i not found it THAT hard. thanks.

[Luxord]

503 posts

Joined August 2011

[Luxord] 2013-06-13T13:24:26+00:00

Hey there~
M4M Fromy your Queue.

[General]
Inconsistency in combo colours
Easy
Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 255,0,0
Combo4 : 128,0,255

BCI's Normal
Combo1 : 83,89,215
Combo2 : 41,192,181
Combo3 : 69,155,233
Combo4 : 223,0,112

Collab Hard
Combo1 : 254,192,253
Combo2 : 233,18,45
Combo3 : 126,88,199

Lunatic
Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 255,0,0
Combo4 : 128,0,255

Not so important though.

Inconsistency in Kiai Times
714's Taiko Muzukashii
Kiai Starts on 00:46:881, ends on 00:58:517 then on 02:19:972, ends on 02:31:608

714's Taiko Oni
Kiai starts on 00:46:881, ends on 00:58:517 then on 02:19:972, ends on 02:31:608

BCI's Normal
Kiai starts on 02:19:972, ends on 02:41:790 then on 02:43:245, ends on 02:43:426

Collab Hard
Doesn't have any Kiai time.

Easy
Kiai starts on 02:19:972, ends on 02:41:790

Lunatic
Kiai starts on 02:19:972, ends on 02:41:790

Also, there is only 1835 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

[Easy]
01:18:881 (1) - The slider is not symmetrical to both sides, consider making the curve better to make it look symmetrical.
02:08:336 (1,3) - why not make those two the same and just do ctrl+h for the one? It would look better in my opinion.
Nothing else, good and easy

[BCI's Normal]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:11:262 - snap to 00:11:245
00:24:625 - snap to 00:24:608
00:24:807 - snap to 00:24:790
00:25:353 - snap to 00:25:336
00:25:534 - snap to 00:25:517
00:26:080 - snap to 00:26:063
00:26:262 - snap to 00:26:245
00:26:443 - snap to 00:26:426
00:36:262 - snap to 00:36:245
00:36:443 - snap to 00:36:426
00:36:989 - snap to 00:36:972
00:37:171 - snap to 00:37:154
00:42:080 - snap to 00:42:063
00:42:262 - snap to 00:42:245
00:42:807 - snap to 00:42:790
00:42:989 - snap to 00:42:972
00:47:894 - snap to 00:47:881
00:48:080 - snap to 00:48:063
00:48:625 - snap to 00:48:608
00:48:807 - snap to 00:48:790
00:49:353 - snap to 00:49:336
00:49:534 - snap to 00:49:517

Nothing serious, if they affect the kiai time or anything else on hitsounds etc, it would be good to fix them~

01:58:154 (3) - I guess you should get the red anchor a bit to right, gets the ticks to the same X axis and fixes the symmetry
Nothing else~ Well done.

[Collab Hard]
Nothing to see! Nice work there~

[Luncatic]
Alright with this, it's nicely made but I dislike those flow stops, such at this 00:12:517 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - >.>

Good work and good luck! :3

rezoons

rezoons 2013-06-15T23:56:59+00:00

Feeling when i played the map:

Easy:The diff is fine but there are way too much spinner. I understand that you need some of them but there a lot pretty useless and kills the pleasure of the map imo.
BCI's Normal: I really like this diff. I have nothing peculiar to say.
Collab Hard: The diff is good but maybe the difficulty should be more consistant. Some part are rather easy when others are more insane like.
Lunatic: I really liked it ^^. Not much to say.

Mod:
[Easy]

00:07:608 (2) - Maybe x=416 y=304 in order to have a small symmetry with 00:05:426 (4,1,2).
00:11:972 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could do some sort of symmetry here too.
00:18:517 (2,3,4) - ^
00:27:608 - It feels really void when playing. Why don't you add 1 or 2 arrow on 00:26:517 (3)? Or a slider from 00:27:245 to 00:28:699.
00:32:336 (3) - Move it 1 Grid right fro the symmetry.
00:35:245 (1) - Too Far, the DS is x1.4 but should be below x1.
00:43:972 (1) - You have too much slider like this one. Why not replacing some of them by for example?
01:30:517 (1) - This one is definitely useless, we can clearly hear the music. Maybe try something like this:
01:45:063 (1,1) - Should be symmetrical.
01:49:426 (3,2) - Symmetry...
01:51:608 (2,4) - ^
01:57:790 (2,4) - ^
02:17:063 (1) - This one is nearly the same size as your sliders.
02:22:881 (1) - ^
02:25:790 (2) - This one is even larger than half of your slider, it's not logical.

[BCI's Normal]

00:05:790 (5) - If i heard correctly the music you should delete it and just put a single note at 00:05:972. (Like you did at 00:20:517)
00:08:699 (5) - ^
00:50:153 (2) - Move the first point 1 grid down for a better blanket.
01:03:608 (4) - I think it would look better if you would move it like this:
02:01:426 (4,5,1) - Change the direction of 5 in order to do a symmetry.
02:10:699 (4,1) - Move it to x=224 y=76 for a blanket with 3.

[Collab Hard]

00:04:699 (1,2) - Maybe swap them. I think it would play better.
00:07:608 (1,2,3,4) - Why is it not centered this time?
00:12:699 (3,4,5,6) - They havn't the same direction.
00:49:790 (1) - I don't think this NC is needed.
01:04:517 (2) - Delete the note? It doesn't seem to follow the music.
01:07:245 (4) - Move it 1 grid right.
01:16:699 (4) - I think it would look better if moved at x=452 y=248.
02:22:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - It really too difficult for a Hard, add some 1/4 slider instead of all these notes.
02:28:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ^
02:35:245 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe do some pattern. Because there is a huge difference between that 02:11:972 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) (really cool to play) and that, really boring to play.

[Lunatic]

00:12:699 (4,2,2) - I think it would follow better the music if they would have an arrow.
01:57:426 (3,4) - You did a blanket between 3 and 4. Why not between these two?

~Good Luck~

Kayano

1,286 posts

Joined July 2011

Kayano 2013-06-16T03:46:05+00:00

Mod req from my queue~

Red - Unrankable
Purple - Highly recommended
Black - Just suggestion

General

Set the combo color the same

Combo1 : 255,0,128 
Combo2 : 128,128,255 
Combo3 : 255,0,0 
Combo4 : 128,0,255

Inconsistency in Kiai
#1 starts on 00:46:881, ends on 00:58:517. #2 on 02:19:972, ends on 02:31:608

Easy
01:53:790 (1) - delete finish
too many spinners!! delete some of them

Normal
00:09:972 (2) - delete finish
00:21:426 (3) - ^
01:54:881 - clap
01:58:154 (3) - ugly slider..At least make it symmetric

Muzukashii

Taiko diffs:

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"TaikoBG_iku.jpg",0,75

Others are fine

Oni
The same as Muzukashii

Collab Hard
02:11:972 (1) - overlap under 02:11:245 (4) -

Lunatic
Difficult for me to mod

Sorry about the poor mod... But your map is really good now.
Good Luck~! Hope soon rank~

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2013-06-17T13:58:36+00:00

~~italian mafia~~ random mod.

[General]

Try to enable letterboxes here. It fits with BG and looks cute. Anyway, you have no reason to keep them sisabled, right?
You're missing some tags. Collab Collaboration should be added. So, people who love collab diffs may find your map easier! Also, add black_cherry_ita to tags, because it's her previous username and she has some maps ranked with that username.
You'd better credit collab mappers in the creator's word. So, we'll know who made collab withou downloading your map.
recheck titles again, I'm sure that isn't the correct one

[Easy]

I'd increase AR and reduce OD/HP to keep diff better balanced. You have plenty of 2/1 beats and some quite fast 1/1 triplets, so OD/HP 3 are too hard for this diff. :< I guess, the best we can do here is AR3 and OD/HP2. Anyway, AR2 seems a bit too slow with your slider velocity!
00:28:336 - just one more reason to reduce your HP Drain. Desn't looks so playable for beginners, huh?
00:47:608 (2,3) - nazi - just move (3) some grids up to keep your cute circular flow here! this looks better, don't you think so?
00:49:790 (4) - to be honest, I don't really like this slider. It's longer than previous spinner! Try to replace spinner on 00:43:972 - wuth a slider, then? Anyway, that looks.. strange to me :V
00:58:517 (2) - NC bug, it should be fixed. Not a big deal, but still..
01:10:881 - I'd drag break here. Looks great, when HP-Bar disappears with loud hit in music.
Note: if you've dragged start of your break, that'd be reasonable, to drag end of your break, as well! Even something like 01:14:154 - would be nice.
01:26:154 (3,1) - nazi - (3)'s tail is too close to (1), so players may MISTAKENLY hit it. I'd recommend you to move (3)'s tail somewhere. Personally, i was thinking about something like this
Note: I love nazi mods ._. Once you've changed shape of (3) to something curvy, do the same to 01:28:336 (2) - to keep flow smoother!
01:33:426 - it's time to drag da break! You know, that'll look amazing here! And maybe end should be placed at 01:42:154
01:53:790 (1,2,1,2) - nazi - just saying, that keeping circular flow here would be better, imo. flow: pt.1 / pt.2
Note: I know, you will hate me for being so nazy, but I like this diff and I really want it to be perfect! That's why I'm so picky about placement of objects!
02:19:972 (3) - don't be afraid of breaking your combo pattern here, place a new Combo! it'll help us to realize, that it's start of kiai time. NC will look cool here + it's a good iea to warn beginners about start of kiai.
02:43:245 (1) - oh gosh, after a "final" spinner that circle will confuse players. you know, you realax and put your pen/mouse away AND THEN WILD CIRCLE APPEARS. That's an unpleasant thing ~~and it'll hurt your map's userrating after rank~~

[BCI's Normal]

00:05:790 (5) - nazi - that's cruel. ;_; it's a bit overlapped with hitburst and it looks really strange with custom hitburst. How about moving it somewhere else, just to make it easier readable?
00:20:336 - we've already discussed it. I'm just pointing it out again. Just in case if other people will complain: I warned - you rejected.
00:54:154 (3) - did someone say "nazi"? - 00:54:154 (3) - try to curve first part of this slider, so, you'll have awesome curved slider here! example
00:54:154 (3) - 00:54:154 (3) - if you agree to drag breaks on your diff, do the same here! It'll help us to keep mapset more consistent!
02:17:063 (1) - that Nc would fit before break. But before spinner it looks weird, consider removing it.
02:43:245 (1) - oh gosh, after a "final" spinner that circle will confuse players. you know, you realax and put your pen/mouse away AND THEN WILD CIRCLE APPEARS. That's an unpleasant thing ~~and it'll hurt your map's userrating after rank~~ [2]

I've modded this diff via IRC earlier, it's gettenig even better now! Good job!

[Collab Hard]
I'll mod it in english, so Leader will be able to check if he has latest version with your fixes or not.

You'd better increase OD/HP by one tick to keep diff settings better balanced.
01:34:154 - that'd be great if you drag brea here. Same as other diffs. :3
All other diffs have TWO breaks. Make a second break, too? It'd be cool for consistency.

Kodoriki

00:02:517 (4,1) - that pattern shouldn't be antijump, right? I guess you'd better keep regular spacing here instead of x0.6
00:11:972 (1) - just reduce distance of jump a bit more, keeping them under x2.5 would be better. Song isn't that jumpy and jumps like yours breaks your flow.
00:12:699 (3,4,5,6) - nazi - making them parallel would improve your flow A LOT. If you can't - turn Grid level 4, do it and set your grid level 3 back :<
Can't you keep them parallel or at least curve them like this?
00:16:336 (7) - have you missed a new combo here? It's pretty off your pattern, i guess.
00:18:699 (6,7,8) - that't be great if you use regular spacing here, as you did it with other triplets. (When I said regular, I meant manual unstack. x0,6 DS, y'know)
00:49:790 (1) - remove NC, if it's before spinner - it looks overused and unneeded here!
00:52:699 (1) - firstly, that slowdown here doesn't really fits. There's no reason to use a new velocity multiplier for it! Secondly, this appears too soon after spinner, players have no time to read it properly!
01:06:336 (2) - move it somewhere else, to make this stack readable, I'm begging you!
Note: something similar appears at 02:35:245 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3)
02:30:336 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - I'd say that this is TOO hard. This is not an [insane] diff. Consult a BAT for confirmation, PLEASE.
02:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it's a bit too unexpected here + it's too hard. Ask someone to confirm, that it's playable/unplayable.
Note: when i say SOMEONE I mean average skilled player, who plays [Hard] diffs. No an ultra-skilled giy with #100 or higher, y'know.

Leyko

01:07:336 (1,1) - it's impossible to read it in time. make spinner shorter, it's unplayable now!
01:13:881 - missed circle? It's supposed to be a triplet, right? It least it SOUNDS like a triplet, so place a circle here!
02:11:972 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - when rhythm goes tricky and it's quite hard to understand it, it's better to use sliders. This is not an [insane] diff, so making your rhythm a bit easier is a good idea! replace some 3/4s with sliders, maybe? examle

[Lunatic]

Increase OD and HP they're TOO low. It makes your cute diff TOO easy and TOO boring for skilled players!
00:21:063 (5,6) - nazi - consider using something different from stack here, otherwise players may read it as a triplet. That's quite confusing, you know.
00:34:881 (5) - you have a new combo at 00:36:336 (1) - which sounds just like 00:34:881 (5) - so, it'd be a good idea to place NC at ]00:34:881 (5) -as well
00:46:881 (3) - this spinner is faster than two previous spinners. Place a New Combo, to make SV changes readable!
01:10:426 - same thing about dragging breaks goes here.
01:51:608 (5) - Personally, I'm agains using them. They're rankable, but usually they give a weird flow and don't really fit. Try to place second repeat with a circle. Because second reverse-arrow appears too soon and this slider is quite unfitting with your regular rhythm/flow.
02:05:426 (1,1) - even for an [Insane] diff, that's still a bit TOO fast. Try to end spinner earlier? Even very skilled players need some time to FOCUS on objects!
Note: 02:28:699 (1,1) - same :<
02:28:699 (1,1) - thank you for ignoring that beat. It really plays much better without anything here. But if you didn't remove circle from this place in easy - you should add it here to keep rhythm consistent.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck!

Leader

osu! Alumni

1,849 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Leader 2013-06-17T14:34:24+00:00

Thank you everyone for your useful mods, fixed many things :3

Also changed BG on Easy diff, reDL if you care.

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2013-06-17T23:53:55+00:00

Hi! M4M!
I'm kind of a new modder so I may put unless and short suggestions but I try.

[Easy]
02:11:245 (3) - Curve it in the opposite way
01:10:881 - Back the break to the blue point
[BCI's Normal]
01:02:881 (3) - Maybe remove a tick?
[Lunatic]
01:10:881 - Back the break to the blue point

Good luck!

Kodora

Kodora 2013-06-18T22:49:39+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
Kodoriki
00:02:517 (4,1) - that pattern shouldn't be antijump, right? I guess you'd better keep regular spacing here instead of x0.6 fixed
00:11:972 (1) - just reduce distance of jump a bit more, keeping them under x2.5 would be better. Song isn't that jumpy and jumps like yours breaks your flow. fixed
00:12:699 (3,4,5,6) - nazi - making them parallel would improve your flow A LOT. If you can't - turn Grid level 4, do it and set your grid level 3 back :< improved in other way. also, for making sliders parallel grind level 3 better than 4.
Can't you keep them parallel or at least curve them like this?
00:16:336 (7) - have you missed a new combo here? It's pretty off your pattern, i guess. y
00:18:699 (6,7,8) - that't be great if you use regular spacing here, as you did it with other triplets. (When I said regular, I meant manual unstack. x0,6 DS, y'know) no way, i love that triplet
00:49:790 (1) - remove NC, if it's before spinner - it looks overused and unneeded here! it needed since new part of music
00:52:699 (1) - firstly, that slowdown here doesn't really fits. There's no reason to use a new velocity multiplier for it! Secondly, this appears too soon after spinner, players have no time to read it properly! slowdown here fit the misic, also it is not really nesessary, it is not that slow to get even 100 (even not saying about potential miss what really impossible to do here)
01:06:336 (2) - move it somewhere else, to make this stack readable, I'm begging you! nc for better readability, other can be perfectly readable if you follow the rhytm here
Note: something similar appears at 02:35:245 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3)
02:30:336 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - I'd say that this is TOO hard. This is not an [insane] diff. Consult a BAT for confirmation, PLEASE. resolved
02:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it's a bit too unexpected here + it's too hard. Ask someone to confirm, that it's playable/unplayable. just 9 notes with 165 bpm & OD 6, it playable more than enough
Note: when i say SOMEONE I mean average skilled player, who plays [Hard] diffs. No an ultra-skilled giy with #100 or higher, y'know.
Good luck!

barely look at other mods. sorry, but you all modded old version. i fixed most of things what was mentiored and not fixed for now

SPOILER

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Title:Crimson in the Black Sea ~ Legendary Fish
TitleUnicode:é»’ã„æµ·ã«ç´…ã ï½ž Legendary Fish
Artist:ZUN
ArtistUnicode:ZUN
Creator:Leader
Version:Collab Hard
Source:Touhou
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mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2013-06-19T01:28:46+00:00

hey Leader

here the mods that you requested to me~
btw touhou song >W< good~!!

[Muzu]

01:17:790 (27) - how about k here. you used d's at 01:17:426 (25)~(29). it's too monotonic note. i used k for it to follow the rhythm sound like 01:17:426 (25) - before which you used k's
02:43:245 (172) - add finish (D) here after the slider

[Oni]

00:22:517 (127)~(139) - try this for the stream. i changed this to make it fit with the music, especially (133)~(139) http://puu.sh/3iWxr.jpg
00:48:517 (248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255) - this part is not really fit well, becuase you use oo oo patterns there @_@ i recommend you to try this http://puu.sh/3iWGH.jpg or this http://puu.sh/3iWHX.jpg
00:54:517 (291,292,293,294) - the reason like above ^. how about change it to be 00:54:790 (293) - move to 00:54:699 (293) -
01:17:881 (406) - move to 01:17:699 (405) - . the triplet sound will give stronger sound than you put the triplet before at 01:17:790 (405,406,407) -
01:21:245 (434) - k. like the mod before at 00:22:517 (127)~(139) (if you used my mod before)
01:27:245 (468) - k. i used this to follow the rhythm sound with k's pattern that you used at 01:26:517 (466,472,477,483,488) -
01:33:426 (518) - the end of the stream (01:31:972 (502)~(518)) give the lower pitch sound. you used k at the last stream. that's not fit well. change it to be d
01:59:426 (669) - change to be d. 01:59:154 (668) and 01:59:426 (669) have same pitch sounds. you put d at (668) before, so it's better to use the same note (d) at (669)
02:21:426 (760,761,762,763) - the notes aren't fit well try this 02:21:699 (762) - move to 02:21:608 (762) - and then 02:21:517 (761) - change to be d
02:43:245 (881) - add finish (D) here

good luck there o/

hs714

257 posts

Joined March 2011

hs714 2013-06-19T02:52:32+00:00

☆KiyoshiX101

KiyoshiX101 wrote:
Hey there~
M4M Fromy your Queue.

Inconsistency in Kiai Times
714's Taiko Muzukashii
Kiai Starts on 00:46:881, ends on 00:58:517 then on 02:19:972, ends on 02:31:608

714's Taiko Oni
Kiai starts on 00:46:881, ends on 00:58:517 then on 02:19:972, ends on 02:31:608

Good work and good luck! :3

Thank you for your mod! KiyoshiX101 <33
Leader Fixed this mod? if so, I'm really Thank you~! and sorry for late..orz

☆OniJAM

OniJAM wrote:
Mod req from my queue~

Red - Unrankable
Purple - Highly recommended
Black - Just suggestion
Muzukashii
[*]Taiko diffs:
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"TaikoBG_iku.jpg",0,75
[*]Others are fine

Oni
[*]The same as Muzukashii - fixed both! thank you

Sorry about the poor mod... But your map is really good now.
Good Luck~! Hope soon rank~[/list]

Thank you for your mod! OniJAM <33

☆mingmichael

mingmichael wrote:
hey Leader here the mods that you requested to me~
btw touhou song >W< good~!!

[Muzu]
01:17:790 (27) - how about k here. you used d's at 01:17:426 (25)~(29). it's too monotonic note. i used k for it to follow the rhythm sound like 01:17:426 (25) - before which you used k's - done :3
02:43:245 (172) - add finish (D) here after the slider - hmm, sorry. I want to open up 1/1 space at after the slider.
[Oni]
00:22:517 (127)~(139) - try this for the stream. i changed this to make it fit with the music, especially (133)~(139) http://puu.sh/3iWxr.jpg - really nice~ thank you
00:48:517 (248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255) - this part is not really fit well, becuase you use oo oo patterns there @_@ i recommend you to try this http://puu.sh/3iWGH.jpg or this http://puu.sh/3iWHX.jpg - nnn.. sorry.. I think it is fit for this part ;_;
00:54:517 (291,292,293,294) - the reason like above ^. how about change it to be 00:54:790 (293) - move to 00:54:699 (293) - - ^ sorry..
01:17:881 (406) - move to 01:17:699 (405) - . the triplet sound will give stronger sound than you put the triplet before at 01:17:790 (405,406,407) - - thank you!
01:21:245 (434) - k. like the mod before at 00:22:517 (127)~(139) (if you used my mod before) - sorry. I think it is not same back music. ( but I above use your mod. :3 )
01:27:245 (468) - k. i used this to follow the rhythm sound with k's pattern that you used at 01:26:517 (466,472,477,483,488) - - thank you xD
01:33:426 (518) - the end of the stream (01:31:972 (502)~(518)) give the lower pitch sound. you used k at the last stream. that's not fit well. change it to be d - thanks for advice! I changed in one's own way the considering your opinions. changed to d at the stream last notes.
01:59:426 (669) - change to be d. 01:59:154 (668) and 01:59:426 (669) have same pitch sounds. you put d at (668) before, so it's better to use the same note (d) at (669) - thank you!
02:21:426 (760,761,762,763) - the notes aren't fit well try this 02:21:699 (762) - move to 02:21:608 (762) - and then 02:21:517 (761) - change to be d
02:43:245 (881) - add finish (D) here - sorry, No..orz
good luck there o/

Thank you for your mod! mingmichael <33

please update~ (｡･ω･｡)♫
Taiko Muzukashii: http://puu.sh/3j04m.osu
Taiko Oni: http://puu.sh/3j04C.osu

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-06-19T08:06:11+00:00

from my modding queue
i have no idea what the op says, but i guess it has alot to do with water and fishes (and the title) xD

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
unify your audio-leadin to 2000ms on all diffs (BCI's Normal has a different one than the rest as well)
also unify your combo colour setup on the standard diffs
on the tags of Collab Hard you have "Scarlet" written as "SScarlet", need to delete the extra S ><

[Easy]
00:02:517 (4) - normal sample on the slider start
00:20:699 (1,2,3,4) - make a smoother curve here

SPOILER

00:26:517 (3) - whistle on start
00:49:790 (4) - whistle on start and end (or finish)
01:28:336 (2) - how bout make this a mirror of 01:29:790 (3)? the curve would look better
01:30:517 (4) - NC
01:53:790 (1) - try a finish on the end
02:11:245 (3) - NC

[BCI's Normal]
00:17:608 (6) - adjust spacing here to 0.8x
00:21:426 (3) - put a clap on the repeat
00:35:972 (2) - if you make this curve up and blanket the end of 00:35:244 (1) instead it will probably look better
01:02:881 (3) - snap end to 01:03:245 or 01:03:426
01:31:426 (2,3) - the rhythm here is a bit hard to grasp, its better if you swap this for a slider imo
02:19:245 (1) - since the default skin for spinner is blue, it will somewhat camouflage the approach circle and distrub with the reading of this note (since its right at the center), so change ur combo colour setup so this combo becomes pink

[Collab hard]
00:12:699 (3,4,5,6) - are these sliders intentionally made with slight different directions? would look better if you made them align better
00:17:063 (9) - finish sounds a bit abrupt, take it off?
00:47:608 (1,1,1) - these sounds better with their ends snapped to the blue line (also can warn players of the rhythm on 00:53:426 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) which is alot more challenging)
00:53:426 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - and for this its easier to read the rhythm if you NC it like this:

SPOILER

01:02:154 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - same NC pattern here
01:04:336 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - i dont really understand your rhythm and placement here...it will be alot easier to read if you can remove the stack on 01:04:517 (2,3) because there is no stress beat at 01:04:881 (3) leaving the player confused of the rhythm to follow. or you can consider this rhythm:

SPOILER

01:07:336 (1) - shorten this to end at 01:09:790
01:32:881 (6) - maybe a bit nazi but make a straight line with 01:33:426 (1)?
01:53:426 (9) - remove whistle, sounds a bit random here
02:19:972 (1) - do kiai time (or just a kiai burst) here?
02:24:336 (1,2,3,4) - having this in the middle of triplets is a bit too hard for hard diff, using 1/4 sliders would make it alot more playable
02:33:972 (2,3,4,5) - the square can look better here
02:37:426 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this place has the same issue with 01:04:336 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4), my same suggestions there applies here
this hard feels harder than lunatic rhythm wise, it would be alot better if more sliders were used instead of circles for the blue line snaps

[Lunatic]
00:21:063 (5,6) - this looks better if you stack it
00:23:517 - add a note here
00:32:336 (9) - NC here instead of 00:33:426 (1)
00:46:517 (2) - spacing (make it consistent with 02:19:608 (7))
01:19:972 - felt like a note is missing here
01:20:972 (6) - you actually stacked this with 01:20:881 (5) which i believe is accidental, but it doesnt really affect game play since stack leniency places it on top of 01:21:063 (7), so up to you
02:02:517 (1) - finish or whistle on start
02:19:972 (1) - finish on start
02:27:245 (3) - slider end a little too far out? adjust the curve so the end is more inside
02:40:881 (1) - finish ><

Thats all, aside for some rhythmic challenges b/c of the nature of the song, everything seems fine. Good luck~

Leader

osu! Alumni

1,849 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Leader 2013-06-19T10:27:22+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
i have no idea what the op says, but i guess it has alot to do with water and fishes (and the title) xD

ZUN's comment

Translation

Iku Nagae's theme.

This is a pretty old story, but I saw an oarfish mummy in an aquarium once.
I'd seen pictures before, but seeing it in person leaves a totally
different impact. It's a flat and unusually long fish.
It's hard to believe it's something from this world.

This is the theme song for that sort of Iku.

Thank you for mods anyway, will fix soon.

DarkDunskin

1,875 posts

Joined April 2009

DarkDunskin 2013-06-22T23:25:48+00:00

Surprise Mod!

NOTE: No kudosu! until I finished modding the Taiko Diffs please.

[Easy]

1. 00:05:426 (4) - Better use a whistle instead of a finish at sliderend.
2. 00:49:790 (4) - You forgot to add a finish at sliderstart and sliderend.
3. 00:55:608 - Could you perhaps add a single note + Finish here and let the spinner start at 00:55:972 - instead?
4. 01:31:972 (2,3) - I believe (3) is rather hard to get for a new player. Please consider to let (2) end at 01:33:063 - instead.
5. 02:11:245 (3) - Remove Finish from sliderstart.
6. 02:17:063 - Same as 00:55:608 -
7. 02:22:881 (4,1) - Shorten (4) by one repeat and then let (1) start at 02:24:336 - and let (1) repeat at 02:24:881 - instead. Should look like this: http://puu.sh/3lWoQ.jpg Sounds much smoother to me.
8. 02:25:790 (2) - Remove Finish from repeat arrow.
Other than that: nice.

[BCI's Normal]
- 1. 00:21:426 (3) - You should add a Finish at the repeatarrow.
  2. 01:54:517 (2) - Finish at Repeatarrow.
  3. 02:11:245 (1) - Remove Finish at Sliderstart.
  Why do I even bother modding BCI's diffs? Good Job as always.
  
  [Collab Hard]
  - 1. 00:17:063 (3) - Remove finish from Sliderend.
    2. 00:17:790 (3) - Add finish at Sliderstart.
    3. 01:04:517 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - This section is meeeeh. You should follow the main-melody more closely.
    4. 01:47:245 (4) - Slider crosses lifebar, move it down please.
    Yup, okay.
    
    [Lunatic]
    - 00:10:881 (4) - Slidertail crosses lifebar, turn it around a bit.
      01:07:245 (4) - Remove Finish.
      02:08:336 (5) - Finish at sliderstart.
      02:14:154 (2) - ^
      02:15:608 (4) - ^
      02:17:063 (4) - Add Finish.
      02:19:245 (6,7) - Add Finish at sliderstart on each.
      02:22:881 (1) - Add finish.
      02:23:063 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This part looks more like Taikosu! then osu! standard lol.
      The beginnig feels easier than you Hard Collab, but all in all its okay.
      
      I already had a short glimpse at the Oni and for what I see it seems to be much work, so I'll mod these taikos later.
      
      At last I wanted to ask you if you'd accept an Inner Oni for your mapset?
      I mapped this song a while ago and it would fit so nice in here.
      
      Also I believe I have some nice Ideas for a little Storyboard here.
      I could work on a little preview so you could consider about taking it too if you wish.
      
      Alright, have a star!
      
      NOTE: No kudosu! until I finished modding the Taiko Diffs please.

Leader

osu! Alumni

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Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Leader 2013-06-23T11:34:38+00:00

Thank you for mod! I've already known you've had a Inner Oni, tell me if I have to upload the current one (downloaded from your userpage) or if you want to fix something. Also, a Storyboard will be nice :3

DarkDunskin

1,875 posts

Joined April 2009

DarkDunskin 2013-06-23T18:40:20+00:00

Yes thats the Taiko I meant. You can add it if you want.

DarkDunskin

1,875 posts

Joined April 2009

DarkDunskin 2013-06-30T14:02:29+00:00

So here's the Taiko Mod I owed you:

[714's Taiko Oni]

00:05:608 (22,23) - Delete Notes. This is a rather silent part in the song.
00:09:790 (44) - Delete Note, dk kd doesnt fit here.
00:11:972 (61) - Remove Clap.
00:11:972 (61) - Add Finish.
00:17:699 (90,91) - Delete (90) and add Finish on (91).
00:21:336 (115,116) - Delete (116) and add Clap on (115).
00:21:790 (117,118) - Delete (118) and add Finish on (117).
00:23:517 (132,133) - Delete (132) and add Finish on (133).
00:29:426 (159) - Remove Clap and add Finish.
00:35:245 (186) - ^
00:41:063 (208) - Add Finish.
00:49:790 (250) - Remove Clap and add Finish.
00:52:608 (270,271) - Remove Clap and add Finish on (271) and delete (270).
00:55:608 (291) - Remove Clap and add Finish.
00:58:517 (304) - ^
00:58:881 (305,306,307,308,309) - "k d k d D" would fit nice here.
01:01:426 (315) - Remove Clap and add Finish.
01:04:336 (326) - Add Finish.
01:05:790 (331) - ^
01:08:336 (341) - ^
01:10:154 (353) - ^
01:15:881 (384,385) - Delete (384) and add Finish on (385).
01:19:517 (410,411) - Add Clap on (410), delete (411).
01:21:699 (429,430) - Delete (429), add Finish on (430).
01:27:517 (459,460) - Delete (459), add Finish on (460).
01:33:790 (507,508,509,510,511,512,513) - Do it like in the beginning, switch red and blue!
01:38:699 (527,528) - Delete notes.
01:42:608 (548) - Add Clap.
01:42:881 (550) - Delete Note.
01:45:063 (565) - Add Finish.
01:50:790 (597,598) - Delete (597), add Finish on (598).
01:54:426 (623,624) - Add Clap on (623), Delete (624).
01:54:881 (625,626) - Add Finish on (625), delete (626).
01:56:608 (640,641) - Delete (640), remove clap and add Finish on (641).
02:02:517 (663) - Add Finish.
02:08:336 (688) - Remove Clap add Finish.
02:08:699 (689,690,691,692,693) - "k d k d D" would fit nice here.
02:14:154 (710) - Add Finish.
02:14:517 (711,712,713,714,715) - "k d k d D" would fit nice here.
02:17:063 (721) - Remove Clap add Finish.
02:19:245 (730,731) - Add Finish on (730), delete (731).
02:22:790 (750,751) - Delete (750), add Finish on (751).
02:25:790 (771) - Add Finish.
02:28:699 (793,794) - Add finish on (793), delete (794).
02:31:426 (810,811) - Add Clap on (810), remove clap from (811) and add Finish.
02:33:063 (816) - Remove Clap and add Finish.
02:34:517 (822) - ^
02:37:426 (833) - Add Finish.
02:38:881 (838) - Remove Clap and add Finish.
02:43:245 - Add Note + Finish.

Sorry for Utlra-nazi-monster-mod. <_<

[714's Taiko Muzukashii]

00:17:790 (58) - Add Finish.
00:21:790 (74) - ^
00:23:608 (77) - ^
00:29:426 (97) - Remove Clap, add Finish.
00:35:245 (119) - ^
00:41:063 (141) - Add Finish.
00:49:790 (175) - Remove Clap, add Finish.
00:52:699 (185) - Add Finish.
00:55:608 (196) - ^
00:58:517 (207) - Remove Clap, add Finish.
00:59:972 (212) - Add Finish.
01:01:426 (218) - Remove Clap, add Finish.
01:04:336 (229) - Add Finish.
01:05:790 (234) - Remove Clap, add Finish.
01:08:336 (243) - ^
01:10:154 (1) - Add Finish.
01:15:972 (20) - ^
01:27:608 (59)- Add Finish on (59)
01:33:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Do it like the beginning, switch red and blue notes.
01:45:063 (37) - Add Finish.
01:50:881 (58) - Add Finish.
01:54:881 (74) - ^
01:55:608 (1) - Shorten the spinner to 01:56:517 - add note + Finish at 01:56:699 - instead.
02:02:517 (21) - Add Finish.
02:08:336 (43) - Remove Clap, add Finish.
02:09:790 (48) - Add Finish.
02:14:154 (65) - Remove Clap, add Finish.
02:15:608 (70) - ^
02:15:608 (70) - ^
02:19:245 (85,86) - Add Finish on both notes.
02:22:881 (97) - Add Finish.
02:25:790 (108) - ^
02:28:699 (119) - ^
02:31:426 (130,131) - Add Clap on (130), remove Clap from (131) and add Finish.
02:33:063 (136) - Remove Clap, add Finish.
02:34:517 (142) - ^
02:37:426 (153) - Add Finish.
02:38:881 (158) - ^
02:43:245 - Add Note + Finish.

I'm terribly sorry but I react allergic to missing Finish Notes lol.
Muzukashii feels a bit like a harder Futsuu, you should probably add some triplets like kkk or ddd here and there.

Besides that these Taiko's still lack consistency as I believe.
There's still much room for improvements, but don't give up there's still hope!
Find more mods an opinions to your Taiko Difficultys and it should work all out in the end.
Also I'm not always right, I probably just suck at modding Taiko ^^"
That's it.

@ Leader:
I didn't have much time to work on a proper SB for this map until now and won't have it in near future.
So just continue mapping like normal okay ^^

Only kudosu one post (If you found it helpful)~

Hellgert

489 posts

Joined May 2012

Hellgert 2013-07-01T14:47:54+00:00

when this map will be map,i waiting this map rank

can you add a japanese name on it,name:黒い海に紅く～ Legendary Fish(accept/ingrone)

hs714

257 posts

Joined March 2011

hs714 2013-07-03T10:28:06+00:00

DarkDunskin <3

DarkDunskin wrote:
So here's the Taiko Mod I owed you:

[714's Taiko Oni]
00:05:608 (22,23) - Delete Notes. This is a rather silent part in the song. - done
00:09:790 (44) - Delete Note, dk kd doesnt fit here. - nnnn.. sorry ;_;
00:11:972 (61) - Remove Clap. - thanks :3
00:11:972 (61) - Add Finish. - ^
00:17:699 (90,91) - Delete (90) and add Finish on (91). - ^
00:21:336 (115,116) - Delete (116) and add Clap on (115). - sorry..
00:21:790 (117,118) - Delete (118) and add Finish on (117).- ^
00:23:517 (132,133) - Delete (132) and add Finish on (133). - thank you <3
00:29:426 (159) - Remove Clap and add Finish. - ^
00:35:245 (186) - ^ - ^
00:41:063 (208) - Add Finish. - ^
00:49:790 (250) - Remove Clap and add Finish. - ^
00:52:608 (270,271) - Remove Clap and add Finish on (271) and delete (270). - ^
00:55:608 (291) - Remove Clap and add Finish. - ^
00:58:517 (304) - ^- ^
00:58:881 (305,306,307,308,309) - "k d k d D" would fit nice here.- ^
01:01:426 (315) - Remove Clap and add Finish. - ^
01:04:336 (326) - Add Finish. - ^
01:05:790 (331) - ^- ^
01:08:336 (341) - ^ - ^
01:10:154 (353) - ^ - ^
01:15:881 (384,385) - Delete (384) and add Finish on (385).- I think fit this part..sorry ;_;
01:19:517 (410,411) - Add Clap on (410), delete (411). - ^
01:21:699 (429,430) - Delete (429), add Finish on (430). - thanks!
01:27:517 (459,460) - Delete (459), add Finish on (460). - sorry..
01:33:790 (507,508,509,510,511,512,513) - Do it like in the beginning, switch red and blue! - fixed xD
01:38:699 (527,528) - Delete notes. - ^
01:42:608 (548) - Add Clap. - ^
01:42:881 (550) - Delete Note. - sorry. orz
01:45:063 (565) - Add Finish. - done :3
01:50:790 (597,598) - Delete (597), add Finish on (598). - sorry
01:54:426 (623,624) - Add Clap on (623), Delete (624). - ^
01:54:881 (625,626) - Add Finish on (625), delete (626). - ^
01:56:608 (640,641) - Delete (640), remove clap and add Finish on (641). - ^
02:02:517 (663) - Add Finish.- changed xD
02:08:336 (688) - Remove Clap add Finish. - ^
02:08:699 (689,690,691,692,693) - "k d k d D" would fit nice here. - changed to d k k d D~! :3
02:14:154 (710) - Add Finish. - done :3
02:14:517 (711,712,713,714,715) - "k d k d D" would fit nice here. - changed to d d k k D :>
02:17:063 (721) - Remove Clap add Finish. - done~
02:19:245 (730,731) - Add Finish on (730), delete (731). - ^
02:22:790 (750,751) - Delete (750), add Finish on (751). - sorry ;_;
02:25:790 (771) - Add Finish. - done :]
02:28:699 (793,794) - Add finish on (793), delete (794). - sorry!
02:31:426 (810,811) - Add Clap on (810), remove clap from (811) and add Finish. - done :>
02:33:063 (816) - Remove Clap and add Finish. - ^
02:34:517 (822) - ^ - ^
02:37:426 (833) - Add Finish. - ^
02:38:881 (838) - Remove Clap and add Finish. - ^
02:43:245 - Add Note + Finish.
Sorry for Utlra-nazi-monster-mod. <_<
- it's okay! I'm very glad for your mod! xD

[714's Taiko Muzukashii]
00:17:790 (58) - Add Finish.- done :>
00:21:790 (74) - ^ - nnn.. sorry I can't hear the Big notes sound for this part.. :I
00:23:608 (77) - ^ - thank you~!
00:29:426 (97) - Remove Clap, add Finish. - ^
00:35:245 (119) - ^ - ^
00:41:063 (141) - Add Finish. - maybe, 3/4(?) parts Big notes is so hard at the Muzukashii diff..
00:49:790 (175) - Remove Clap, add Finish. - done :>
00:52:699 (185) - Add Finish. - ^
00:55:608 (196) - ^ - ^
00:58:517 (207) - Remove Clap, add Finish. - changed to k d d d k　D :3
00:59:972 (212) - Add Finish. - same as up. sorry. orz
01:01:426 (218) - Remove Clap, add Finish. 0 done :3
01:04:336 (229) - Add Finish. - sorry..orz
01:05:790 (234) - Remove Clap, add Finish. - ^
01:08:336 (243) - ^ - thank you :3
01:10:154 (1) - Add Finish. - ^
01:15:972 (20) - ^ - ^
01:27:608 (59)- Add Finish on (59) - ^
01:33:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Do it like the beginning, switch red and blue notes. - ^
01:45:063 (37) - Add Finish. - ^
01:50:881 (58) - Add Finish. - ^
01:54:881 (74) - ^ - sorry :I
01:55:608 (1) - Shorten the spinner to 01:56:517 - add note + Finish at 01:56:699 - instead. - nnn~.. sorry!orz
02:02:517 (21) - Add Finish. - done :>
02:08:336 (43) - Remove Clap, add Finish. - ^
02:09:790 (48) - Add Finish. - same as up~! orz
02:14:154 (65) - Remove Clap, add Finish. - ^
02:15:608 (70) - ^ - ^
02:15:608 (70) - ^ - ^
02:19:245 (85,86) - Add Finish on both notes. - ^
02:22:881 (97) - Add Finish. - thank you!
02:25:790 (108) - ^- ^
02:28:699 (119) - ^ - ^
02:31:426 (130,131) - Add Clap on (130), remove Clap from (131) and add Finish. - sorry
02:33:063 (136) - Remove Clap, add Finish. - ^
02:34:517 (142) - ^ - done~!
02:37:426 (153) - Add Finish. - sorry!
02:38:881 (158) - ^ - ^ orz
02:43:245 - Add Note + Finish. - changed to slider end at 02:43:245 - :3
I'm terribly sorry but I react allergic to missing Finish Notes lol.
Muzukashii feels a bit like a harder Futsuu, you should probably add some triplets like kkk or ddd here and there.

Besides that these Taiko's still lack consistency as I believe.
There's still much room for improvements, but don't give up there's still hope!
Find more mods an opinions to your Taiko Difficultys and it should work all out in the end.
Also I'm not always right, I probably just suck at modding Taiko ^^"
That's it.

@ Leader:
I didn't have much time to work on a proper SB for this map until now and won't have it in near future.
So just continue mapping like normal okay ^^

Only kudosu one post (If you found it helpful)~

I'm really thank you & really glad add your Inner Oni! \(*'ω')/♥
Thanks for your mod! DarkDunskin <33

update onegaishimasu! ヽ(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ
Taiko Muzukashii: http://puu.sh/3u27a.osu
Taiko Oni: http://puu.sh/3u27c.osu

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,723 posts

Joined July 2010

fanzhen0019 2013-07-12T05:54:57+00:00

Hi :3 From my queue.

General

Use 2000ms lead-in.
Manually resnap these notes in Dunskin's taiko.
01:06:428 (18) -
01:07:428 (24) -
02:39:428 (18) -
02:39:519 (19) -
02:40:519 (27) -

Easy

Hitsounds

01:04:336 (1) - To consist, use whistle here instead of clap.
01:28:336 - ,01:29:063 - Add clap.
01:33:063 (3) - Finish.
02:22:881 - Finish instead.

Arrangement & Design

00:23:608 (1,3) - Consider to make these symmetrical?

BCI's Normal

Hitsounds

01:27:426 (5) - Clap.

Arrangement & Design

Looks nice overall.

Collab Hard

Hitsounds

Kodora's Part:

00:17:790 - Soft-finish here.
Leyko's Part:
00:35:063 (2,3) - Use normal-hitnormal.

Arrangement & Design

Kodora's Part:

02:33:972 (2,3,4,5) - (nazi) It's not a perfect rectangle.
Leyko's Part:
Clear.

Lunatic

Hitsounds

00:03:245 - Add a whistle.
00:04:154 - ,00:04:336 - ,00:04:699 - ,00:05:063 - ,00:05:790 - Add a whistle.
00:12:881 - ,00:13:608 - ,00:14:336 - Add a clap.
00:14:699 (1) - Clap.
00:17:790 - Finish.
00:35:608 - Clap.
00:41:426 - Clap.
00:46:881 (1) - Clap. And remove this clap :00:47:426 (2) -
01:02:426 - Whistle.
01:07:245 (4) - Maybe a clap is needed.
01:15:972 - Finish.
01:20:699 (3) - Clap.
01:21:790 - Finish.
01:53:426 - Clap.
Hitsounds still need some work.

Arrangement & Design

Clear!

That's it! Good luck~

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2013-07-20T00:49:38+00:00

Hi.

Insane

01:23:608 (5) - Distance snap on this note.
02:31:608 (7) - I suggest putting one of those custom hitsounds on the starting point of this slider.

Collab Hard

01:23:972 (7) - Distance snap on this one.
02:20:699 (3) - This slider isn't like the others. It's not symmetrical.

Easy

02:03:972 (2) - Put ending point at X:164 Y:344

Can't find anything on BCI's Normal.

And sorry the noob mod. I don't mod Taiko diffs too. :/

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2013-07-20T08:20:17+00:00

HI

From M4M
I like ZUN song very much

I'm a new mapper .I hope I can help your map as soon as possible
Easy:
00:28:699 how about add a note?
00:34:517 ^
01:33:063 (3) - add the fin?
BCI'Normal:
00:12:699 (2) - add the fin?
01:21:790 (1) - 01:22:336 (2) - add the clap?
Collab Hard:
00:19:245 (1) - move to 120, 296 and 00:19:972 (2) - move to160,128?
00:26:336 (7) - move to 104,192?
01:04:881 (3) - I don't think it's good to stack with01:04:154 (5,1,2) -
01:05:972 (1) - move to 312,152?
01:06:336 (2) - move to 472,112?
02:11:245 (4,1) - how about stack
02:12:245 (2,5,8) - I thinks it's diffcult to set the note on the blue line on hard chang to slide?
02:35:517 (2,2,2) - ^
02:37:245 (3) - move to 232,256?
02:39:426 (2) - I don't think it's good to stack
Lunatic:
00:43:972 (4) - add the fin?
00:58:517 (5) - ^
01:07:245 (4) - ^
Sorrry my mod is limited .

Good luck

Kodora

Kodora 2013-07-30T13:19:49+00:00

/late

fixed few things

sorry, denied all rhytm-suggestions ^^

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: legendary fish.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 81790
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 26472
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Crimson in the Black Sea ~ Legendary Fish
TitleUnicode:黒い海に紅く ～ Legendary Fish
Artist:ZUN
ArtistUnicode:ZUN
Creator:Leader
Version:Collab Hard
Source:Touhou
Tags:Scarlet Weather Rhapsody SWR th10.5 Iku Nagae BCI black_cherry_ita Leyko Kodora hs714 DarkDunskin Collab Collaboration
BeatmapID:249745
BeatmapSetID:88770

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Hellzero

687 posts

Joined April 2010

Hellzero 2013-08-01T09:47:00+00:00

[Lunatic]
00:36:699 (3) - 1 grid up, 1 drid right
00:39:154 (2,3) - too close
01:02:881 (2,3) - ^
01:23:245 (4,5) - ^
01:58:881 (5) - ctrl+g for better flow
02:22:881 - too loud >< maybe make about 40%?
02:28:699 - ^
[Collab Hard]
00:06:154 (3,4) - не лучше ли просто отзеркалить?
Спейсинг скачет, Kodora использует 1.1x а Leyko 1.0x
00:53:426 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - НК на синих тиках? Лучше сделать аналогии с предыдущем паттерном, т.е. на 00:54:154 - 00:54:881 - 00:55:608
01:02:154 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:07:245 (1) - Ну тут то на ровном месте зачем НК. Сделай тогда уж какой-нибудь паттерн (джамп/антиджамп и т.п.) что бы был смысл выделять НК (или убрать)
01:51:426 (4,5,6) - хоть и по спейсингу, но визуально видно что они впритык друг к другу, так что лучше их немного раздвинуть.
02:11:972 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Kodora на такие паттерны НК ставил, так что вы определитесь ставить их или нет. (с НК по-моему лучше смотрится)
02:22:881 (1) - вновь одиночное НК
02:25:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - тот же паттерн, тот же совет с НК
02:36:699 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - это может запутать игрока %_% сначала паттерн идет на синих тиках а потом резко перескакивает на красный но выглядит все одинаково. Лучше анстакнуть (3) 02:37:972
02:40:336 (1) - forever alone~
[BCI's Normal]
すごい
[Easy]
00:36:699 (2) - move last slider point 1 grid left for symmetry lol /;p\
Good job

BCI

1,081 posts

Joined May 2011

BCI 2013-08-13T18:56:07+00:00

Hellzero wrote:
[BCI's Normal]
すごい

я так похожа на японца? :< /runs

Kodora

Kodora 2013-08-13T19:26:43+00:00

BCI wrote:
я так похожа на японца? :< /runs

(｣･ω･)｣うー！(／･ω･)／にゃー！

Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2013-08-19T14:45:52+00:00

Yoo Leader, coming from my Queue.

[General]

iku.png is an unused file in your folder, either find something to use it for or remove it.
Easy and Lunatic have different KIAI times, which should not be the case because both difficulties are yours.
There are some unsnapped things in Dunskin's Inner Oni, you will have to fix those.

[Easy]

00:02:517 (4) - Checking the flow, I would shape it the other way to prevent an useless flow change here.
00:05:426 (4) - I would seperate those two beats for the sake of gameplay feeling, I'd rather have a NC and a clickable beat on the piano note, so the player gets to feel the new part. Maybe you could shorten it by 1/1 and add a note on the downbeat.
00:26:517 (3) - The start should have a whistle aswell considering the intensity of the piano is the same as on the previous Slider, also it will help to emphasize the downbeat.
00:32:336 (3) - Same thing as above on the end, also it will help to catch the enduring tone.
00:58:517 (1) - You're missing a whistle on the end to have a consistent pattern.
01:02:881 (4,5) - Switching to Normals sounds way too sudden here, to follow the piano, I'd rather replace them by whistles.
01:04:336 (1) - Same for this Sliderend here, it will be consistent with your other Sliders aswell.
01:53:790 (1) - The start should either have a Normal sample to have consistency or a whistle to follow the piano, I'll leave this to you.
02:33:063 (2) - I would love to change the whistle on the end to a normal hitnormal, it will be consistent with the previous and next Slider.

[BCI's Normal]

00:58:517 (1) - I think you are missing a clap on the end to keep the consistency.
01:04:336 (1) - Very very nazi, but anyways I would like it if you could place this in the center of the grid.
01:02:881 (3) - You should use your costum tick here aswell, to keep the claps consistent, I don't see a reason not to.
01:05:790 (3) - Same here.
01:56:699 (1) - Missing a clap on the end.
01:57:426 (2) - You don't use your Slidertick costum again, I won't point this out anymore because you can see where it's missing yourelf, just check it.
01:58:154 (3) - You could clean this up a bit and try to make it exactly symmetrical, but the actual reason to point this out is that you accidently put the whistle on the whole Sliderbody, where it's noisy.
02:19:245 (1) - Too soon after a Spinner, I'd recommend you to shorten the Spinner by 1/1.

[Collab Hard]

00:16:699 (2) - You should use normal sampleset at the start to keep consistency, if you wanna keep the whistle switch to addition soft.
00:17:063 (3) - Using a Normal finish on the end sounds too noisy here since there is no enduring sound it would fit to, I'd recommend to leave this with a hitnormal.
00:29:063 (8) - This jump doesnt make a lot of sense, I'd prefer normal spacing.
00:35:154 (3) - This note is mapped to nothing and this should never be the case, especially not in a Hard difficulty, I'd advise to remove it.
00:59:517 (2) - What the hell is that spacing? Space it normally for the sake of readability.
01:04:517 (2) - Having a note here sounds really wry considering the previous red ticks were not mapped aswell, just reomving it would be cool enough.
01:05:063 - According to the melody, here should really be e note, either move 3 there or add a new note, both is fine.
01:07:336 (1) - Why is this Spinner ending on the blue tick? It is much too sudden for the next note and not following anything, please end it either on the white or red tick.
01:21:063 (3,4,5,6) - I don't like the usement of streams in Hard difficulties, leave them to the hardest difficulty please. You could replace those 4 notes by a kick slider.
02:20:699 (3) - A bit nazi, but I think this Slider could be more symmetrical.
02:25:790 (1) - I'd really replace the whistle on the start by a finish, for the one to follow the cymbal and for the other one to keep consistency with previous parts.
02:35:245 (1,1,1) - I would love the idea of adding finishes to all of those, this will make a pretty nice hitsound rhythm.
02:37:426 (1,2) - Stacking those 2 will be very confusing as there was a sudden rhythm change and players will be most likely to think of it as 1/4.
02:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't really like the idea of this stream, but I'd say it is ok, tho I'd rather have something easier.

[Lunatic]

00:03:245 (3) - There is no actual sense in leting this end on the blue tick, there is no sound at all.
00:04:699 (9) - Same here.
00:09:517 (6) - Try a whistle here to get the high tone of the piano.
00:35:972 (4) - The clap on the end sounds unfiting and just wry as the music is too soft to bear the hitnormal at this point. Just removing it would be better.
00:46:154 (1,2) - Try whistles on those starts to introduce the KIAI in a more exciting way?
00:49:790 (8) - Finish should be on the start to follow the cymabal, and the end should not have a hitsound as there is no tone that needs to be emphasized.
01:04:336 (1) - Replace the whistle on the start by a finish to catch the cymbals, it will fit the music better.
01:05:790 (4) - Same thing here.
01:27:608 (3) - And here again.
02:01:063 (5,6) - I would more like the idea of using ctrl and g on both of them to fix the spacing and having the flow more natural by doing so.
02:19:972 (1) - Again, finish fits much better than whistle due to the cymbals.
02:22:881 (1) - EH? Why is this part having Normal hitsound samples? It sounds very sudden, is inconsistent with the previous part and reallly weird. I would just change to soft sampleset for the sake of hitsound consistency and gameplay.
02:28:699 (1) - Same here, but if you won't change it, at least replace the clap on one by a finish for consistency.
02:31:608 (1,6) - Same things about the cymbal and whistles as on the previous Sliders.
02:34:517 (3) - And here aswell.
02:37:426 (1,6) - And here cymbals again.

Uhh, that's it.

Pretty cool set actually, tho I feel as if the Hard collab and the Insane could use some more mods.

Good luck :>

Leader

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Leader 2013-08-19T16:29:58+00:00

Fixed everything on my diffs, really thanks.

Kodora

Kodora 2013-08-20T00:59:40+00:00

Konei wrote:
[Collab Hard]

00:16:699 (2) - You should use normal sampleset at the start to keep consistency, if you wanna keep the whistle switch to addition soft. done
00:17:063 (3) - Using a Normal finish on the end sounds too noisy here since there is no enduring sound it would fit to, I'd recommend to leave this with a hitnormal. i always use finishes to emphazire strong parts of the song, i not always add them only following music. it fits for me, so dont wanna remove.
00:35:154 (3) - This note is mapped to nothing and this should never be the case, especially not in a Hard difficulty, I'd advise to remove it. its COMPLETELY ok. maps not supposed to only blindly copy songs rhytm, mapper can add own rhytm too. if it fits enough there is nothing wrong (just my 2 cents about this)
00:59:517 (2) - What the hell is that spacing? Space it normally for the sake of readability. will fix later
01:04:517 (2) - Having a note here sounds really wry considering the previous red ticks were not mapped aswell, just reomving it would be cool enough. no sorry
01:05:063 - According to the melody, here should really be e note, either move 3 there or add a new note, both is fine. no sorry
01:07:336 (1) - Why is this Spinner ending on the blue tick? It is much too sudden for the next note and not following anything, please end it either on the white or red tick. O_O wondering right now too
01:21:063 (3,4,5,6) - I don't like the usement of streams in Hard difficulties, leave them to the hardest difficulty please. You could replace those 4 notes by a kick slider. 4 notes arent real stream, especially 165 bpm only
02:20:699 (3) - A bit nazi, but I think this Slider could be more symmetrical. ~~this slider sucks gonna remap this part~~
02:25:790 (1) - I'd really replace the whistle on the start by a finish, for the one to follow the cymbal and for the other one to keep consistency with previous parts. nooo
02:35:245 (1,1,1) - I would love the idea of adding finishes to all of those, this will make a pretty nice hitsound rhythm. good, will add
02:37:426 (1,2) - Stacking those 2 will be very confusing as there was a sudden rhythm change and players will be most likely to think of it as 1/4. its clerly readable as 1/2 due to approaches, btw music isnt call for 1/4 here, so i probably leave it as it now
02:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't really like the idea of this stream, but I'd say it is ok, tho I'd rather have something easier. i S'd it with dt, dont see any problem with it. Hard diffs must be challenging, also its a nice difficulty probression.

Btw, my parts is really enough old so i decided to remap them ~~probably i will change even some things what i denied right now... not stream of course~~ so wont send diff right now. Thanks for mod!

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2013-08-24T06:02:27+00:00

here's your ticket (sorry for delay)

Easy

00:06:154 (5,1) - swap NC

BCI's Normal

00:26:426 - not used green line
00:47:608 (1) - delete NC?
02:11:245 (1) - need finish on start imo

Collab Hard

00:53:426 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - try http://puu.sh/49vzt.jpg this NC setting
00:59:517 (2) - hmmmm this note looks like 1/1 beat for me since you placed 00:59:790 (3) - this note more farther than (2) note
01:04:336 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - i don't know which rhythm u tried to follow here
01:07:336 (1,1) - wow this isn't good for hard diff imo
02:22:926 (1) - i'd rather move this slider to 1/4 beat (next blue tick) like you did in before (and 02:28:745 (1) - same here)
02:25:790 (1) - add finish on start
02:28:699 (7) - NC
02:37:426 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - same rhythm problem with before
02:40:336 (1) - delete NC
02:40:381 (1) - you may know here

Lunatic

00:21:336 (8) - 0.4x DS is purposed on this slider? -nazi (and you may know 00:23:608 (1) - here)
00:49:790 (8) - well i think just a note feels better than 1/2 slider (and move spinner too)
00:46:154 (1,2,1) - it will be awesome if you set SV changings to x0.5 -> x0.75 ->x1.0 like this (and 02:19:245 (1,2,1) - same here)
01:30:336 (1) - delete NC for consistence with 00:20:518 (2) - here (and i'm not sure if that NC is really needed)
02:07:972 (9) - clap
02:11:972 (6) - NC

well it'll be better if you add HSs more consistently (just opinion)

good luck~

Kodora

Kodora 2013-08-31T23:47:16+00:00

Remapped my parts in collab. Little note to next modders:

1) I wont remove/replace last stream - it's important part of difficulty progression
2) I wont add more kiai - song is very repetitive and isnt called for it at all
3) Stack Leniency higher than 0.3 makes no sense for my patterns

Kecco

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Kecco 2013-09-01T13:37:21+00:00

Hello, modding the Lunatic diff on my own accord.

[General]
• I don't like the colours you're using. I'd suggest these ones (I used them for some of my touhou maps, they're copyrighted!) They fit much better.

SPOILER

Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 250,83,41
Combo3 : 245,225,86

• Add "Jun'ya Ota" in the tags.

[Lunatic]
00:03:972 (5,6,7,8) - Why don't you make a square? Something like this ↓ Way better flow imo. [If you follow this suggestion, fix the spacing with the slider 00:04:699 (9) - ]

SPOILER

00:03:972 (5) - New combo.
00:07:244 (7,8) - Move them a bit more downwards and to the right. Better flow.
00:09:699 (8) - 444;240
00:22:608 (4) - This note relies on nothing. Delete it.
00:35:972 (4,5) - Why don't you make them the same of 00:35:245 (2,3) - ? Would flow better. [Also, you should do it for consistency with 00:41:063 (1,2,3,4) - ]
00:47:790 (1,2) - I don't like this. Doesn't play good imo. Up to you. You could do something like this.

SPOILER

01:02:336 (1,2) - ^
01:06:699 (6) - New combo.
01:19:245 (4,5,6,7) - Mhmh, it's not that readable, but you're following the beats so I guess it's fine. By the way, if you feel like remapping this, do it.
02:01:063 (5) - New combo.
02:06:881 (6) - ^
02:17:063 (4) - What about this? Or something close to that.

SPOILER

02:20:881 (1,2) - Same suggestion of the ones up.
02:23:608 (6) - New combo.
02:26:699 (1,2) - Same suggestion of the ones up.
02:40:336 (1) - Stack it under the 02:39:790 (7) - ? [Just a suggestion, don't take it that serious]

From 00:26:517 - to 00:58:154 - Too many spinners

But I guess it's fine since you're following the instrument

Nice mappu!

Leader

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Leader 2013-09-01T14:18:58+00:00

Kecco wrote:
Hello, modding the Lunatic diff on my own accord.

[General]
• I don't like the colours you're using. I'd suggest these ones (I used them for some of my touhou maps, they're copyrighted!) They fit much better. I'd rather use mine since they fit with bg <_<
SPOILER
Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 250,83,41
Combo3 : 245,225,86
• Add "Jun'ya Ota" in the tags. Not really needed

[Lunatic]
00:22:608 (4) - This note relies on nothing. Delete it. It does o_O
00:35:972 (4,5) - Why don't you make them the same of 00:35:245 (2,3) - ? Would flow better. [Also, you should do it for consistency with 00:41:063 (1,2,3,4) - ] Seems fine to me, I may change in the future if anyone will suggest the same, though
00:47:790 (1,2) - I don't like this. Doesn't play good imo. Up to you. You could do something like this. It's okay in my opinion
SPOILER

01:19:245 (4,5,6,7) - Mhmh, it's not that readable, but you're following the beats so I guess it's fine. By the way, if you feel like remapping this, do it. This pattern appeared before, what's wrong with this one in particular?
02:01:063 (5) - New combo. No, there's no need
02:06:881 (6) - ^ ^
02:40:336 (1) - Stack it under the 02:39:790 (7) - ? [Just a suggestion, don't take it that serious] Heck no
From 00:26:517 - to 00:58:154 - Too many spinners But I guess it's fine since you're following the instrument It's a kind of escalation, they won't appear anymore in kiai part

Nice mappu!

Rest has been fixed, thank you.

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-09-09T13:58:20+00:00

gg... take a star <3

AruOtta

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AruOtta 2013-09-14T13:03:22+00:00

From your request ~

[Easy]
Nothing to say, just more hitsound =)

[BCI's Normal]
BG : Blue hair like Tenshi ? xD
00:23:608 (1,2) - Blanket ?

[Collab Hard]
00:46:154 (1,2) - Move them down :

SPOILER

[~~Insane~~ Lunatic]
02:43:244 (1) - We can't hear the hitsound =/

Because of short mod (and because I like the song), Take my Star =3

Good Luck *u*

ampzz

ampzz 2013-09-17T15:07:37+00:00

GeneralNothing at all to comment on here; everything checked out a-OK to me and sorry for the lateness.

EasyThe difficulty itself felt like a massive counter-clockwise circle in the beginning with a monotonous amount of looping around the same arc. I'll offer some suggestions to hopefully make it seem less like a circle and have a bit of variation; your choice if you want to apply them.

00:05:426 (4,1,2,3,4) - This I found to be sort of lacking with just a slow progressive curve on the lower half of the screen. Why not mix it up with something snappish like this -
SPOILER
00:09:063 (1,2,3) - Try this?
SPOILER
00:11:972 (1,2,3,4,1) - Go for something bouncy here too?
SPOILER

With this just vertically flip 00:14:881 (1,2,3) - for the end of this.
00:19:972 (4,1,2,3,4) - Using (4) to blanket (1) with a change to the pattern of (2,3,4) looks and plays nicely if done like this -
SPOILER
Part1:

Part 2:
00:23:608 (1,2,3) - Something like this to make it seem less boring -
SPOILER
00:36:699 (2) - vertical flip this and just slightly reposition it so it fits at 1.0x snap.
00:39:608 (1,2,3,4) - Something like this instead of a better lead into the upcoming spinner?
SPOILER
00:55:972 (1) - Didn't expect this spinner here with how you mapped the prior sounding roll with a long curved slider but guess I can't complain there.
01:07:245 (1) - This spinner I would prefer to be a nice curved slider with a repeat on it (which lasts the same length) that blankets the prior (2)'s end

All the rhythm and everything is fine to me; just work on altering some of the combos to be a bit more 'vivid' to play rather than repetitive.

I'll save all the changes I've made to the .osu so if you want to get the codes for all of this let me know.

BCI's NormalOverall this difficulty was very strong and enjoyable to play with only a few things which irked me (personal thing) that I will note.

00:03:972 (2,5) - Feels a bit too condensed for an overlap to me.
00:24:336 (2,1) - This I would suggest just to offset to x:385 y:125 for a better read and to make it seem less copy paste-ish later on..
01:50:517 (4) - Personally I wouldn't bother with this and just have the lull play as is.
02:37:426 (1) - I didn't like this one's positioning; would suggest to move it to x:401 y:163 and after that you'll need to adjust your following combo.

Collab HardA bit of nitpicking on stuff in this difficulty especially with the spinners starting on utterly stupid 1/8th intervals after beats.

00:03:063 (1) - Remove NC and place it on the next white tick instead. Basically copy this NC logic over onto other sections as well so there's more focus on the musical break up.
00:11:245 (7) - Could do with an NC.
00:16:699 (2) - CTRL + G please.
00:28:699 (7,8,9,1) - The flow run off from (7) into (8) just feels awkward to play especially considering how the end of this combo is, rearrange it a bit so it feels natural to play.
00:32:154 (7,1) - A little visual tweak for here would be to use (1) to blanket (7).
00:35:154 (3) - Doesn't have much foreground focus audibly so I would prefer this removed. Then you could rearrange the prior combo like this -
SPOILER

In saying this I really prefer triples to be focused on the highly audible tones so I won't bother pointing out all of them but just use them to emphasise that higher pitched synthesiser roll instead of barely inaudible beats.
00:39:608 (5) - NC this please since it is a new musical phase and to help people comprehend the spacing better.
00:46:154 (1) - CTRL + G this for additional flow in this combo.
00:59:063 (4,6) - I would really love for these to be located at x:328 y:150 instead so it's a really nice flow in and out of the sliders.
01:00:517 (1,2,3) - What about a bit of change here so you keep doing a floating arc like this? -
SPOILER
01:12:972 (2) - I would prefer for this to be removed so there's more focus on triples being played due to that higher pitched synthesiser.
01:15:245 (7) - It's weird that this is a kick slider instead of a 1/1 slider or even 1/2 slider with a repeat consider the same drum rolls have been mapped over before.
01:18:790 (2) - Same deal as other triples like this.
01:26:881 (8,9,1) - A bit of extended flow addition here by opting away from the boring straight slider which doesn't lead to the next sections' direction -
SPOILER
01:32:699 (5,6) - Just no, the kick slider (if you plan to keep it) must start on 01:32:699 - and end on 01:33:063 - with the lull until 01:33:426 (1) - . Your current rhythm set-up here made no sense.
01:45:063 (1,2,3) - Change (1)'s direction so it flows off into (2,3) nicer.
01:47:881 (2) - Eh, Would prefer this gone and funking up the combo around here.
01:48:336 (4,1,2) - Why does (2) overlap on (4)'s start? If it's purely to up the difficulty I highly advise against it. Also, for this I would actually like to play (4) as a repeat slider so you get a nice hold on the piano here.
01:49:426 (1,1,1,1,1) - NC spam, yuck.
02:25:790 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This was just disgusting to sight-read/play.
02:37:426 (4,1) - Either stack (1) under (4) perfectly or set it in a completely different spot on the map.
02:39:790 (2,1) - Yuck. This was horrible when I got to it, even more so than the constant overlap. Why ruin the end with something utterly senseless like this?

Some of the stuff I point out later also reflects on other stuff in the difficulty since I was giving it a few run-throughs and kept forgetting if I had or hadn't picked on things beforehand.

InsaneQuite a fun difficulty.

00:09:699 (8) - Any reason this isn't a circle + 1/2 slider? I kept trying to play is like that. I'll refrain from constantly pointing out this rhythm bit just in case it's how you wanted to represent the section of music.
00:21:245 (7) - Personal irk here is that I prefer playing to a consistent rhythm which would mean that I wouldn't expect to play this.
00:47:790 (1) - Same thing as above; to me it plays really nice without this beat here at all since it's a pure focus on the synth. Optionally you could place your 00:47:881 (4) - back on 00:47:426 - with a repeat so you hold it.
00:58:154 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of this, what about a kick slider?
00:59:972 (3,4) - For HD sight-readabilities' sake get (4) out from under (3)'s body.
01:08:699 (6) - Would prefer this gone myself, I slipped up on the first since I didn't really hear this beat at all; would help to give focus to the rattatat sound too.
01:20:790 (2,4) - These I would prefer gone to give more emphasis on the upcoming stream.
01:31:972 (9,1,1) - Confusing NC break-up. Just place it on 01:31:972 - and remove the other two.
01:52:336 (1,3) - Angle these slightly so it's a natural run off and out of (2).
01:59:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This was really awesome to play, great job. (´∪`*)
02:02:426 (10) - Remove this to make it oh, so much better.
02:22:881 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Not going to lie here, I could not understand the beat break-up at all. There's parts which were mapped to that made me constantly question which band of music I was meant to be playing and others which just confused me outright. Pick a certain series of beats to map here and stick to it so it's actually comprehensible instead of loosely relying on pure circle reading.
My loose take on the rhythm

I'll revise it and let you know some other time when my brain is completely functional again. xD
02:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Would've preferred something a little fancier for the final section/stream of the map.

Kodora

Kodora 2013-09-17T16:34:01+00:00

ampzz wrote:
[notice]
Collab HardA bit of nitpicking on stuff in this difficulty especially with the spinners starting on utterly stupid 1/8th intervals after beats. this totally ok since they all following same note long note, there is no any musical reason to keep 1/4 pause
00:03:063 (1) - Remove NC and place it on the next white tick instead. Basically copy this NC logic over onto other sections as well so there's more focus on the musical break up. NC placed here due to jump, so noo~
00:11:245 (7) - Could do with an NC. Done
00:16:699 (2) - CTRL + G please. Will ruin my pattern, so no.
00:46:154 (1) - CTRL + G this for additional flow in this combo. same here ^
00:59:063 (4,6) - I would really love for these to be located at x:328 y:150 instead so it's a really nice flow in and out of the sliders. Done
01:00:517 (1,2,3) - What about a bit of change here so you keep doing a floating arc like this? - Done
SPOILER
01:45:063 (1,2,3) - Change (1)'s direction so it flows off into (2,3) nicer. Done
01:47:881 (2) - Eh, Would prefer this gone and funking up the combo around here. Pattern combo, so no ;p
01:48:336 (4,1,2) - Why does (2) overlap on (4)'s start? If it's purely to up the difficulty I highly advise against it. Also, for this I would actually like to play (4) as a repeat slider so you get a nice hold on the piano here. It overlaps because i want to make a little trap here, also i dont really get your point about reverse-slider, current rhytm is fine for me
01:49:426 (1,1,1,1,1) - NC spam, yuck. No.
02:25:790 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This was just disgusting to sight-read/play. Its perfectly playable, lol. I tested it several times before with different players and it was works fine.
02:37:426 (4,1) - Either stack (1) under (4) perfectly or set it in a completely different spot on the map. Stacked
02:39:790 (2,1) - Yuck. This was horrible when I got to it, even more so than the constant overlap. Why ruin the end with something utterly senseless like this? Changed this part.

diff

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TitleUnicode:黒い海に紅く ～ Legendary Fish
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Source:Touhou
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ampzz

ampzz wrote:
GeneralNothing at all to comment on here; everything checked out a-OK to me and sorry for the lateness.
EasyThe difficulty itself felt like a massive counter-clockwise circle in the beginning with a monotonous amount of looping around the same arc. I'll offer some suggestions to hopefully make it seem less like a circle and have a bit of variation; your choice if you want to apply them.
00:05:426 (4,1,2,3,4) - This I found to be sort of lacking with just a slow progressive curve on the lower half of the screen. Why not mix it up with something snappish like this - Why not?
SPOILER
00:09:063 (1,2,3) - Try this? I prefer my pattern because it flows better.
SPOILER
00:11:972 (1,2,3,4,1) - Go for something bouncy here too? No, because consistency with previous pattern
SPOILER

With this just vertically flip 00:14:881 (1,2,3) - for the end of this.
00:19:972 (4,1,2,3,4) - Using (4) to blanket (1) with a change to the pattern of (2,3,4) looks and plays nicely if done like this - Neat. Done~
SPOILER
Part1:

Part 2:
00:23:608 (1,2,3) - Something like this to make it seem less boring - Done
SPOILER
00:36:699 (2) - vertical flip this and just slightly reposition it so it fits at 1.0x snap. Okay
00:39:608 (1,2,3,4) - Something like this instead of a better lead into the upcoming spinner? Awesome, changed to that
SPOILER
00:55:972 (1) - Didn't expect this spinner here with how you mapped the prior sounding roll with a long curved slider but guess I can't complain there. Keeping this.
01:07:245 (1) - This spinner I would prefer to be a nice curved slider with a repeat on it (which lasts the same length) that blankets the prior (2)'s end I'd rather a spinner here (I couldn't do a blanket here xD)
All the rhythm and everything is fine to me; just work on altering some of the combos to be a bit more 'vivid' to play rather than repetitive.

I'll save all the changes I've made to the .osu so if you want to get the codes for all of this let me know.

BCI's NormalOverall this difficulty was very strong and enjoyable to play with only a few things which irked me (personal thing) that I will note. Fixing for her
00:03:972 (2,5) - Feels a bit too condensed for an overlap to me. Fixed
00:24:336 (2,1) - This I would suggest just to offset to x:385 y:125 for a better read and to make it seem less copy paste-ish later on.. Nah, it's fine
01:50:517 (4) - Personally I wouldn't bother with this and just have the lull play as is. I prefer as it is, to be honest
02:37:426 (1) - I didn't like this one's positioning; would suggest to move it to x:401 y:163 and after that you'll need to adjust your following combo. Okay

InsaneQuite a fun difficulty.
00:09:699 (8) - Any reason this isn't a circle + 1/2 slider? I kept trying to play is like that. I'll refrain from constantly pointing out this rhythm bit just in case it's how you wanted to represent the section of music. I tried this idea but I think it plays better as it is.
00:21:245 (7) - Personal irk here is that I prefer playing to a consistent rhythm which would mean that I wouldn't expect to play this. Fixed, done like 00:09:426 (6,7,8) -
00:47:790 (1) - Same thing as above; to me it plays really nice without this beat here at all since it's a pure focus on the synth. Optionally you could place your 00:47:881 (4) - back on 00:47:426 - with a repeat so you hold it. Actually, I think it works well with music, might change if someone else complain.
00:58:154 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of this, what about a kick slider? Stream is fine, imo
00:59:972 (3,4) - For HD sight-readabilities' sake get (4) out from under (3)'s body. Okay, done
01:08:699 (6) - Would prefer this gone myself, I slipped up on the first since I didn't really hear this beat at all; would help to give focus to the rattatat sound too. That's cool, removed
01:20:790 (2,4) - These I would prefer gone to give more emphasis on the upcoming stream. Actually, I really like this stream as it is xD
01:31:972 (9,1,1) - Confusing NC break-up. Just place it on 01:31:972 - and remove the other two. Mhm, okay
01:52:336 (1,3) - Angle these slightly so it's a natural run off and out of (2). Done
01:59:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This was really awesome to play, great job. (´∪`*) Thank you!
02:02:426 (10) - Remove this to make it oh, so much better. Done!
02:22:881 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Not going to lie here, I could not understand the beat break-up at all. There's parts which were mapped to that made me constantly question which band of music I was meant to be playing and others which just confused me outright. Pick a certain series of beats to map here and stick to it so it's actually comprehensible instead of loosely relying on pure circle reading. I'll see, probably will fix it.
SPOILER

I'll revise it and let you know some other time when my brain is completely functional again. xD Let me know :3
02:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Would've preferred something a little fancier for the final section/stream of the map. Will rework.

Updatated, many thanks.

@Kenzert9: didn't fix anything, sorry. Thank you anyway for checking~

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