forum

Digital Sexy - Til Death (Nightcore Mix)

posted
Total Posts
93
Topic Starter
Andrea
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domenica 29 settembre 2013 at 04.50.39

Artist: Digital Sexy
Title: Til Death (Nightcore Mix)
Tags: osuplayer111 XinCrin Trance Techno Remix
BPM: 166,25
Filesize: 8805kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (5 stars, 266 notes)
  2. Normal (3,48 stars, 132 notes)
  3. Xin's Easy (1,98 stars, 93 notes)
Download: Digital Sexy - Til Death (Nightcore Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
My 187th Beatmap.

Special thanks to XinCrin for the epic SB ^^


Mapset:

Hard - Done.
Normal - Done.
Xin's Easy - Done.
Darksonic
HI I'M FIRST <3
riffy
First blood star is mine. :3/
Nyukai
I'm glad you are back. <3

gl bakandrea. ><
Gero
\:D/ Finally <333~ Andrea is back!
Asphyxia
Yaay :3 GL with this Andrea
XinCrin
Yay! More Nightcore for osu! <33
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thank you guys :)

Hope to not be lazy and finish this soon.

For making Hard I've took 2 weeks x_x
Kyouren
Welecome to BAT!

Andrea-Chan

We need your ranked the mapper map
Topic Starter
Andrea
Pending and ready for mods~
Asphyxia
Just some suggestions, if you found this useful then you can kudo, if you didn't dont kudo me

If you apply some of my suggestions, I'd like to know which you actually applied, thanks.

Normal>

00:08:693 (4,1,2,3,1) - I found this veeery boring, couldn't you come up with something else? Imo just boring to play it because it repeats too much?

00:18:076 (1) - 00:20:963 (4) - I assume you wanted to stack these but they aren't stacked perfectly?

Hard>

00:29:805 (3) - CTRL + G? It would add a ''bigger'' jump to 00:30:347 (4) -

00:39:369 (4) - CTRL + G? 00:36:121 (1,2,3) - Like this?

00:45:685 (4) - CTRL + G? I think it would add a pretty nice jump to 00:46:046 (5) -

00:52:903 (6) - ^

01:12:211 (2) - ^

Have some stars <3
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thank you for checking, pretty helpful.

Fixed all of them except 00:45 on Hard difficulty!
Aurele
NO.
I DON'T ACCEPT THIS
YOU TOLD ME YOU WOULD DO IT ALL BY YOURSELF.

;W;
Gero
Random Mod ♥~

General

  1. Clean

Xin's Moe Easy

Creo que no hay problema si hago esta diff en español

  1. 00:20:602 (2) - Para un mejor flow, seria mucho mejor si mueves esta nota a X: 256 Y: 27 es mucho mas comodo al jugar en mi opinion.
  2. 00:32:512 (3) - creo que seria mejor agregar un Sampleset "Normal" en vez de un soft, se que quieres mantener consistencia con la Hard pero realmente suena mucho mejor si cambias ese sampleset "soft" ahi, Intentalo.
  3. 00:33:595 - Aqui suena claramente un beat que estas ignorando exactamente es una nota con un finish, 00:33:234 (1) - seria mejor re hacer este patron, que tal si intentas algo asi: si haces esto, podrias agregar un IP aqui 00:33:595 - para que el finish no suene muy fuerte.
  4. 00:37:926 (2,1) - Nazi* Xin aqui podrias crear mejor este blanket, moviendo este slider 00:39:008 (1) - a X:142 Y: 211 por supuesto si haces esto acomodas las notas siguientes.
  5. 01:16:903 (2) - Nazi* mueve el punto rojo a X:166 Y:196 se ve mejor el blanket imo, puedes hacer caso omiso a esto.
Normal

  1. 00:39:369 (2,3) - This is nice But . . Spacing! please.
  2. 00:53:084 (1) - Same Here ^
  3. 01:15:099 - Add note here, sounds good imo.
  4. 01:26:647 - ^
  5. 01:30:256 - ^
  6. 01:22:317 (1) - This is a suggestion. . but what do you think of adding a reverse here? I think it sounds great and avoids confusion with this note 01:23:399 (2).
Hard

  1. because you always do perfect maps? :<
  2. 00:32:512 (6) - this is also a suggestion, be free to ignore this, I think it sounds great if you add a whistle in the head.
  3. 00:33:956 (3) - Same Here ^
  4. 00:54:166 (2) - CTRL + G one jump here has a very good flow.
  5. Nazi* 00:55:971 (7) - move this to X: 107 Y: 53 for to have a perfect stacking with 00:55:249 (4).
This Is All~ Good Luck Guys ~
XinCrin

Gero wrote:

Random Mod ♥~

General

  1. Clean

Xin's Moe Easy

Creo que no hay problema si hago esta diff en español

  1. 00:20:602 (2) - Para un mejor flow, seria mucho mejor si mueves esta nota a X: 256 Y: 27 es mucho mas comodo al jugar en mi opinion. Claro , pero es y:28 :P
  2. 00:32:512 (3) - creo que seria mejor agregar un Sampleset "Normal" en vez de un soft, se que quieres mantener consistencia con la Hard pero realmente suena mucho mejor si cambias ese sampleset "soft" ahi, Intentalo. Claro . Hecho
  3. 00:33:595 - Aqui suena claramente un beat que estas ignorando exactamente es una nota con un finish, 00:33:234 (1) - seria mejor re hacer este patron, que tal si intentas algo asi: si haces esto, podrias agregar un IP aqui 00:33:595 - para que el finish no suene muy fuerte. No exactamente , yo no noto casi un Finish que suena ahi . Solo se siente que la voz se suaviza . Ademas es una diff easy , muchas otas aumentara el star rating y la facilidad
  4. 00:37:926 (2,1) - Nazi* Xin aqui podrias crear mejor este blanket, moviendo este slider 00:39:008 (1) - a X:142 Y: 211 por supuesto si haces esto acomodas las notas siguientes. Buen detalle , pero esto fue intencional
  5. 01:16:903 (2) - Nazi* mueve el punto rojo a X:166 Y:196 se ve mejor el blanket imo, puedes hacer caso omiso a esto.Arreglado
Gracias por el mod Gero n.n

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Yeah Yeah Yeah.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 47580
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Til Death (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:Til Death (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Digital Sexy
ArtistUnicode:Digital Sexy
Creator:Andrea
Version:Xin's Easy
Source:
Tags:osuplayer111 XinCrin Trance Techno
BeatmapID:299510
BeatmapSetID:115950

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,160

[TimingPoints]
1475,360.902255639098,4,2,1,80,1,0
24572,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
33234,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
33956,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
34678,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
36121,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
57775,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
59219,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
70768,-100,4,1,1,80,0,1
82226,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
82317,-100,4,1,1,80,0,1
93865,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,191,255
Combo2 : 128,255,128

[HitObjects]
72,64,753,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,116,1114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,136,1475,2,0,B|212:196|152:204|152:204|160:260,2,160,4|2|2,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,80,3279,2,0,P|320:48|360:28,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,184,4362,6,0,B|432:236|388:252|388:252|372:320,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,312,5444,2,0,L|304:232,2,80,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,344,6527,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,264,7249,6,0,B|100:256|132:200|112:140|112:140|152:128|176:92,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,84,8693,2,0,P|308:100|340:100,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,60,9414,2,0,B|436:104|420:140|420:140|476:196,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,336,10858,5,2,0:0:0:0:
292,304,11219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,232,11580,2,0,B|204:264|208:312|208:312|120:300,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,168,13023,6,0,B|68:136|64:88|64:88|131:97,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,48,14106,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,68,14467,2,0,B|344:80|384:56|384:56|416:72|452:64,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,144,16271,5,2,0:0:0:0:
176,200,16632,2,0,B|156:272|156:272|196:292|212:340,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,92,18798,6,0,P|384:104|396:28,2,160,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,28,20602,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,92,20963,2,0,P|128:104|116:28,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,208,22407,5,0,0:0:0:0:
188,264,22768,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,320,23129,2,0,B|308:328|344:300|344:300|372:316|408:312,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,136,24572,6,0,B|372:132|344:148|344:148|308:120|256:128,2,160,4|0|0,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,224,26377,1,8,1:2:0:0:
424,308,26738,2,0,P|388:312|348:296,1,80,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
260,284,27459,6,0,B|216:308|168:300|168:300|152:328|124:348,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,200,29264,2,0,P|308:160|304:120,2,80,8|0|8,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
220,144,30347,6,0,B|176:148|136:120|136:120|132:156|100:192,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,84,32151,1,8,1:2:0:0:
356,132,32512,2,0,P|384:160|428:172,1,80,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
452,256,33234,6,0,B|400:268|376:320|376:320|328:340|280:332|256:288,1,240,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
196,224,34678,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,60,35399,1,4,0:0:0:0:
316,224,36121,6,0,B|352:248|392:232|392:232|416:260|472:268,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,232,37926,2,0,P|208:272|180:292,2,80,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,196,39008,6,0,B|132:152|132:152|196:128|196:68,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,68,40091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,116,40452,2,0,L|60:196,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,72,41896,6,0,B|248:100|296:84|296:84|360:60,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,48,42978,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,136,43339,2,0,P|412:176|412:216,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,284,44061,2,0,B|416:316|364:284|364:284|344:308|308:316,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,252,45144,5,8,0:0:0:0:
176,216,45505,2,0,B|160:268|188:308|188:308|128:340,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|2:1|2:1,0:0:0:0:
320,112,47670,6,0,P|256:72|188:112,2,160,4|2|2,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,200,49475,2,0,P|380:184|400:156,2,80,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,216,50557,6,0,B|228:272|168:284|168:284|132:332,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,196,52362,2,0,L|100:140,2,80,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,124,53805,5,8,0:0:0:0:
400,100,54166,2,0,B|416:152|376:192|376:192|412:248,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,312,55249,2,0,L|304:240,2,80,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,276,56693,5,8,0:0:0:0:
108,320,57053,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,232,57414,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57775,12,4,59219,0:0:0:0:
4,336,59941,2,0,B|48:308|60:244|16:180|16:180|104:196|160:140|160:140|212:188,1,400,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,186,62106,2,0,B|352:140|352:140|408:196|496:180|496:180|452:244|464:308|508:336,1,400,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,328,64632,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,260,64993,6,0,B|244:292|248:340|248:340|168:336,2,160,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,176,66798,2,0,P|304:124|324:96,2,80,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67881,12,4,70768,1:2:0:0:
40,240,71490,6,0,B|64:284|140:276|160:228|160:228|196:248|256:240,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,212,72933,2,0,P|340:256|324:292,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,168,74016,6,0,P|308:128|400:152,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,204,75099,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,292,75459,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,336,75820,2,0,P|348:344|308:332,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,268,76542,5,2,0:0:0:0:
204,196,76903,2,0,B|172:220|164:260|164:260|104:272|44:248|44:188,1,240,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,104,78347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,108,78708,2,0,P|204:96|228:68,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,52,79429,6,0,B|356:28|412:36|412:36|408:64|424:92,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,164,80512,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,248,80873,2,0,P|448:292|464:332,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
284,200,82317,6,0,B|244:216|204:200|204:200|160:180|124:196,2,160,4|2|2,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,152,84121,2,0,P|372:196|368:232,2,80,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,104,85204,6,0,B|244:120|204:104|204:104|160:84|124:100,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,148,86287,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,232,86647,2,0,P|76:232|112:216,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,204,87369,2,0,B|256:240|256:240|308:268|348:240,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,212,88452,5,8,0:0:0:0:
440,124,88813,2,0,B|384:88|384:88|332:60|295:85,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,116,89896,2,0,P|176:132|136:128,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,80,90617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,168,90978,6,0,B|64:208|64:208|24:248|32:312|72:352|128:340,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,296,92422,2,0,P|248:276|284:280,1,80,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
364,308,93144,2,0,P|403:308|438:290,1,80,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
460,204,93865,1,4,1:2:0:0:
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks for the nice mod Gero :3

Updated >w<
HabiHolic
Nice Song~ Andrea~

Star~
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks for the support :)
Kryptogram
Loving this ♥
Star ♫
riffy
Modding your maps is my way to give you a warm welcome-back :3/

[General]
  1. Just two colours? C'mon, song is begging for someething awesome and colorful! You could go with some more colours
    MOAR COLORS

    Combo1 : 109,69,126
    Combo2 : 185,216,148
    Combo3 : 128,191,255
    Combo4 : 243,182,233
    Combo5 : 201,242,176
  2. Widescreen support. We've discussed it in-game. :P
  3. You could add Remix to tags, we'd b happy to find this awesome map easier/faster. :P
[Xin's Easy]
  1. 00:00:753 (1,2) - I understand that you're keeping them here for vocals, however they're kinda confusing for beginners, so I'd recommend you to replace them with a slider or even remove them! That'd make the rhythm more catchable for beginners.
  2. 00:33:234 (1,2,3) - consider them with a spinner. Music kinda fadeshre, so the spinner could emphasize that effect better.
  3. 00:37:926 (2,1) - nazi - whoops, blanket slider here could be much better! However, it's totally up to you.
  4. 00:45:505 (2,1) - tail of the (1)-slider is too close, players may mistakenly hit it. They're still beginners, so you should go easy on them, try something a bit more friendly!
  5. 01:06:798 (2) - nazi - try to "reverse" this slider. That'd make your flow a bit smoother, imo. See my example to understand it :)

    Great diff!
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:805 (2) - symmetrical patterns and flow are important, but rhythm is more important! Try to nudgethis slider back tothe previous white tick, so it'll reflect "till" in vocals. Sounds much better to me!
  2. 00:12:302 (1) - not a fan of such repetitive sliders. You could make it horzontally symmetrical, so flow could be more interesting. Seriously, it's just the same as 00:08:693 (4) - somehow, it feels boring to me.
    Note: just an optional suggestion. It was kinda boring for me, but it's probably ok for normal-players :)
  3. 00:26:016 - 00:28:903 - I'd prefer to hear them mapped. That'dd make your rhythm more consistent, it fits more with "[Normall]" diff patterns and it sounds cool! Nope? Then remove 00:31:790 (4) - to be consistent!
  4. 00:33:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as [Easy]. You ould place a spinner here to make it fit with your patterns better. However, you may ask Xin before doing/rejecting this suggetion to keep consistency!
  5. 00:39:369 (2,3) - didn't like how you've ignored the beat on 00:40:452 - and jump doesn't feels reasonable here!
  6. 01:23:760 - I'd be happy to see this beat mapped, it sounds TOO strange when you ignore this! Please, please, map it!

    Pretty nice and relaxing diff. Good as always!
[Hard]
  1. OD6 could make this diff a bit more relaxing, this is a [Hard] diff, remember? 1/4 triplets and jumps here are the main reasons why I ask for OD6!

    Great as always! I like your style, good job!
Great map!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thank you really much for the nice mod <3

Updated everything!
[ Zzz ]
Hi~ Andrea

[Xin's Easy]

( The Your If you like Change the recommended )

01:21:956 (4) - Add to Circle ( x372 y208 ) + ( Add to Whistle + Clap )

01:33:865 (4) - x460 y204 > x488 y216 Location Movement ( Just a suggestion ) More Good

[Normal]

( The Your If you like Change the recommended )

01:02:467 (2) - Go down a bit ( HP Bar The Titans seem )

01:05:354 (2) - ( The same reason as above )

01:28:091 (1,2) - ( The same reason as above )

[Hard]

( The Your If you like Change the recommended )

00:58:497 (7) - The Titans seem

+ Star!!
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thank you for checking :3
XinCrin
SPOILER

-Bakari- wrote:

Modding your maps is my way to give you a warm welcome-back :3/
[Xin's Easy]
  1. 00:00:753 (1,2) - I understand that you're keeping them here for vocals, however they're kinda confusing for beginners, so I'd recommend you to replace them with a slider or even remove them! That'd make the rhythm more catchable for beginners. It is the beginning of the beatmap, I do not think there's confusion to play
  2. 00:33:234 (1,2,3) - consider them with a spinner. Music kinda fadeshre, so the spinner could emphasize that effect better. Maybe , yes . But flows a bit strange . Also , the slider and circle , follow much better the music :)
  3. 00:37:926 (2,1) - nazi - whoops, blanket slider here could be much better! However, it's totally up to you. This blanket was intentional :P
  4. 00:45:505 (2,1) - tail of the (1)-slider is too close, players may mistakenly hit it. They're still beginners, so you should go easy on them, try something a bit more friendly! I agree! . Changed it a bit
  5. 01:06:798 (2) - nazi - try to "reverse" this slider. That'd make your flow a bit smoother, imo. See my example to understand it :) Done!

    Great diff!
Good luck!

Thanks a lot , bakari ! :)

SPOILER

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ Andrea

[Xin's Easy]

( The Your If you like Change the recommended )

01:21:956 (4) - Add to Circle ( x372 y208 ) + ( Add to Whistle + Clap ) It's a nice idea . But since it's a easy diff , a circle here could be a bit hard to play to beginners

01:33:865 (4) - x460 y204 > x488 y216 Location Movement ( Just a suggestion ) More Good Done!
Thanks both for the mods :D/

ola k ase
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Yeah Yeah Yeah.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 47580
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Til Death (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:Til Death (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Digital Sexy
ArtistUnicode:Digital Sexy
Creator:Andrea
Version:Xin's Easy
Source:
Tags:osuplayer111 XinCrin Trance Techno Remix
BeatmapID:299510
BeatmapSetID:115950

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,160

[TimingPoints]
1475,360.902255639098,4,2,1,80,1,0
24572,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
33234,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
33956,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
34678,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
36121,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
57775,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
59219,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
70768,-100,4,1,1,80,0,1
82226,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
82317,-100,4,1,1,80,0,1
93865,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,191,255
Combo2 : 128,255,128

[HitObjects]
72,64,753,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,116,1114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,136,1475,2,0,B|212:196|152:204|152:204|160:260,2,160,4|2|2,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,80,3279,2,0,P|320:48|360:28,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,184,4362,6,0,B|432:236|388:252|388:252|372:320,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,312,5444,2,0,L|304:232,2,80,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,344,6527,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,264,7249,6,0,B|100:256|132:200|112:140|112:140|152:128|176:92,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,84,8693,2,0,P|308:100|340:100,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,60,9414,2,0,B|436:104|420:140|420:140|476:196,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,336,10858,5,2,0:0:0:0:
292,304,11219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,232,11580,2,0,B|204:264|208:312|208:312|120:300,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,168,13023,6,0,B|68:136|64:88|64:88|131:97,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,48,14106,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,68,14467,2,0,B|344:80|384:56|384:56|416:72|452:64,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,144,16271,5,2,0:0:0:0:
176,200,16632,2,0,B|156:272|156:272|196:292|212:340,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,92,18798,6,0,P|384:104|396:28,2,160,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,28,20602,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,92,20963,2,0,P|128:104|116:28,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,208,22407,5,0,0:0:0:0:
188,264,22768,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,320,23129,2,0,B|308:328|344:300|344:300|372:316|408:312,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,136,24572,6,0,B|372:132|344:148|344:148|308:120|256:128,2,160,4|0|0,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,224,26377,1,8,1:2:0:0:
424,308,26738,2,0,P|388:312|348:296,1,80,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
260,284,27459,6,0,B|216:308|168:300|168:300|152:328|124:348,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,200,29264,2,0,P|308:160|304:120,2,80,8|0|8,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
220,144,30347,6,0,B|176:148|136:120|136:120|132:156|100:192,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,84,32151,1,8,1:2:0:0:
356,132,32512,2,0,P|384:160|428:172,1,80,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
452,256,33234,6,0,B|400:268|376:320|376:320|328:340|280:332|256:288,1,240,2|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
196,224,34678,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,60,35399,1,4,0:0:0:0:
316,224,36121,6,0,B|352:248|392:232|392:232|416:260|472:268,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,232,37926,2,0,P|208:272|180:292,2,80,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,196,39008,6,0,B|132:152|132:152|196:128|196:68,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,68,40091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,116,40452,2,0,L|60:196,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,72,41896,6,0,B|248:100|296:84|296:84|360:60,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,48,42978,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,136,43339,2,0,P|412:176|412:216,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,284,44061,2,0,B|416:316|364:284|364:284|344:308|308:316,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,252,45144,5,8,0:0:0:0:
176,216,45505,2,0,B|160:268|188:308|188:308|128:340,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|2:1|2:1,0:0:0:0:
52,92,47670,6,0,P|116:40|192:56,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,140,48753,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,124,49114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,200,49475,2,0,P|380:184|400:156,2,80,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,216,50557,6,0,B|228:272|168:284|168:284|132:332,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,196,52362,2,0,L|100:140,2,80,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,124,53805,5,8,0:0:0:0:
400,100,54166,2,0,B|416:152|376:192|376:192|412:248,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,312,55249,2,0,L|304:240,2,80,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,276,56693,5,8,0:0:0:0:
108,320,57053,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,232,57414,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57775,12,4,59219,0:0:0:0:
4,336,59941,2,0,B|48:308|60:244|16:180|16:180|104:196|160:140|160:140|212:188,1,400,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,186,62106,2,0,B|352:140|352:140|408:196|496:180|496:180|452:244|464:308|508:336,1,400,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,328,64632,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,260,64993,6,0,B|244:292|248:340|248:340|168:336,2,160,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,200,66798,2,0,P|364:164|368:120,2,80,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67881,12,4,70768,1:2:0:0:
40,240,71490,6,0,B|64:284|140:276|160:228|160:228|196:248|256:240,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,212,72933,2,0,P|340:256|324:292,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,168,74016,6,0,P|308:128|400:152,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,204,75099,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,292,75459,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,336,75820,2,0,P|348:344|308:332,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,268,76542,5,2,0:0:0:0:
204,196,76903,2,0,B|172:220|164:260|164:260|104:272|44:248|44:188,1,240,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,104,78347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,108,78708,2,0,P|204:96|228:68,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,52,79429,6,0,B|356:28|412:36|412:36|408:64|424:92,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,164,80512,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,248,80873,2,0,P|448:292|464:332,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
284,200,82317,6,0,B|244:216|204:200|204:200|160:180|124:196,2,160,4|2|2,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,152,84121,2,0,P|372:196|368:232,2,80,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,104,85204,6,0,B|244:120|204:104|204:104|160:84|124:100,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,148,86287,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,232,86647,2,0,P|76:232|112:216,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,204,87369,2,0,B|256:240|256:240|308:268|348:240,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,212,88452,5,8,0:0:0:0:
440,124,88813,2,0,B|384:88|384:88|332:60|295:85,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,116,89896,2,0,P|176:132|136:128,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,80,90617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,168,90978,6,0,B|64:208|64:208|24:248|32:312|72:352|128:340,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,296,92422,2,0,P|248:276|284:280,1,80,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
364,308,93144,2,0,P|403:308|438:290,1,80,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
488,216,93865,1,4,1:2:0:0:
Topic Starter
Andrea
Updated and also added epic SB by XinCrin :)
Hanabi
Hi Andrea~ :3

[Normal]
00:01:475 (3) - change shape?


[Hard]
00:11:399 (5) - place here for flow?
00:38:287 (1) - remove NC
00:39:008 (3) - NC
00:39:730 (1) - remove NC
00:40:452 (6) - nc
01:15:820 (4,5,6,7) - ctrl + H


love this xD good luck!

(i'll try to make it conform to your rules :) )
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thank you for checking, fixed some stuff on Hard difficulty. :)
RikiH_
Ciao, m4m!

Red=Unrankable
Blue=Should fix
Black=Suggestion

General

00:24:572 - Cosa ne dici di aggiungere uno sparo di kiai qua? Secondo me ci starebbe bene!
00:36:121 - Anche qua

Xin's Easy

00:01:114 (2,3) - You can make a perfect blanket here
From 00:47:670 - to 00:57:775 - and from 01:11:490 - to 01:33:865 - I highly succest to add claps on the sliderticks because thay sound much, much better in my opinion

Normal

00:03:640 (1) - Secondo me se usi un ctrl+j qua flowwa monto meglio, dato che il movimento della mano viene più naturale
00:15:911 (1,2,1) - Non mi piace questo pattern... Non saprei come mai, forse perchè è disordinato rispetto agli altri, magari puoi provare a farlo simmetrico o qualcosa del genere
00:42:256 (2) - Così secondo me è più carino e flowwa meglio
01:05:354 (2,3) - Beh questo non mi piace molto... Sembra un blanket fatto male anche se non volevi blankettarli, prova a spostare il (3) un po' verso sinistra magari

Hard

00:06:166 (6) - Non sarebbe meglio usare un ctrl+g qui? Flowwa meglio secondo me... Se poi vuoi mantenere il jump ti basta invertire gli slider seguenti!
00:26:738 (2) - Ctrl+g qua così hai un piccolo jump per rendere la map un po' più difficile? Tanto il flow non si romperebbe
00:58:497 (7,8) - Ctrl+g pure qui? Flowwerebbero molto meglio
01:10:948 (2,3,4,5) - Se fossi in te modificherei il (5) per blankettarlo con le note precedenti
01:15:099 (1) - Prova ctrl+g sempre per il flow

________________

Nient'altro... La tua map è perfetta, non riesco a trovare nulla tranne queste 4 cazzate, spero ti siano utili comunque xD
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks for the mod, updated. :)
XinCrin

RikiH_ wrote:

Xin's Easy

00:01:114 (2,3) - You can make a perfect blanket here I feel that it's perfect :o
From 00:47:670 - to 00:57:775 - and from 01:11:490 - to 01:33:865 - I highly succest to add claps on the sliderticks because thay sound much, much better in my opinion I will ask to Andrea about this idea
Thank you for mod ~ :)
happy30
[General]
In the beginning, the falling lights in the SB. I think they fall a bit too fast down. You could create a better feeling if they fall down slower I think. It looks a bit forced now.

[Xin's Easy]
00:57:775 (1,1) - This is kinda tricky for new players. The slider appears fairly fast after the spinner, the fact that this slider starts in the corner and nowhere near the center of the spinner makes this even trickier. Perhaps adjust this pattern so that the slider starts somewhere closer to the middle of the playfield?
01:07:881 (1,1) - The same thing happens here basically. The spinner is long so there will be more reaction time, still it would be better placed moren ear the centre. By the way. I'm not really fond of kiai initializations that happen on spinner-ends. It's kinda anti-climatic for me.

Solid map yo.

[Normal]
00:13:023 - A new section of the song starts here, as you can hear by the closed cymbals kicking in. I don't really like how this here happens on a slider repeat. I really feel that there should be a click here. (or at least a release, but a reverse arrow? >.<) To me it also gives me the feeling you forced to do symmetry here.
00:15:911 (1,2) - Position the (2) a bit higher to that it follows in the path where slider (1) ends?
00:27:820 (2,3) - Same suggestion here basically. Make it follow the parth of the previous slider, like 00:26:377 (5,6) -
00:30:708 (2,3,4,5,6) - This copy paste is pretty bad to be honest. I don't like the circular pattern here that much. You just made two big clockwise circles in this section. While it's not bad to make circular patterns like this, try to vary a bit more between clockwise and anti-clockwise patterns.

Pretty solid map again. I disliked some symmetry because in a few cases the song itself moved on to the next section while the map was still copying a previous pattern for the sake of symmetry, this is forced symmetry.

[Hard]
01:15:459 (2,3,4,5,6) - this part feels a bit under-spaced compared to 01:11:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -. in this under-spaced part the synth is significantly pitched higher than in the other part at 01:16:181 (6,7) - . To compensate that I would put some jumps here which are slightly bigger than 01:11:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

Pretty solid diff yet, but fails to impress me. the spacing and rhythm felt a bit too monotous to me. Try to be more creative with different speeds in the flow.
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks for modding, fixed everything on my difficulties. <3
XinCrin

happy30 wrote:

[General]
In the beginning, the falling lights in the SB. I think they fall a bit too fast down. You could create a better feeling if they fall down slower I think. It looks a bit forced now. In my opinion the light's velocity it's okay . I will not change it :P

[Xin's Easy]
00:57:775 (1,1) - This is kinda tricky for new players. The slider appears fairly fast after the spinner, the fact that this slider starts in the corner and nowhere near the center of the spinner makes this even trickier. Perhaps adjust this pattern so that the slider starts somewhere closer to the middle of the playfield? Fixed
01:07:881 (1,1) - The same thing happens here basically. The spinner is long so there will be more reaction time, still it would be better placed moren ear the centre. By the way. I'm not really fond of kiai initializations that happen on spinner-ends. It's kinda anti-climatic for me. Fixed

Solid map yo.

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Yeah Yeah Yeah.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 47580
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Til Death (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:Til Death (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Digital Sexy
ArtistUnicode:Digital Sexy
Creator:Andrea
Version:Xin's Easy
Source:
Tags:osuplayer111 XinCrin Trance Techno Remix
BeatmapID:299510
BeatmapSetID:115950

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,160

[TimingPoints]
1475,360.902255639098,4,2,1,80,1,0
24572,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
33234,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
33956,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
34678,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
36121,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
57775,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
59219,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
70768,-100,4,1,1,80,0,1
82226,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
82317,-100,4,1,1,80,0,1
93865,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,255
Combo2 : 128,255,128
Combo3 : 128,191,255
Combo4 : 0,0,255

[HitObjects]
72,64,753,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,116,1114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,136,1475,2,0,B|212:196|152:204|152:204|160:260,2,160,4|2|2,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,80,3279,2,0,P|320:48|360:28,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,184,4362,6,0,B|432:236|388:252|388:252|372:320,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,312,5444,2,0,L|304:232,2,80,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,344,6527,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,264,7249,38,0,B|100:256|132:200|112:140|112:140|152:128|176:92,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,84,8693,2,0,P|308:100|340:100,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,60,9414,2,0,B|436:104|420:140|420:140|476:196,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,336,10858,5,2,0:0:0:0:
292,304,11219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,232,11580,2,0,B|204:264|208:312|208:312|120:300,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,168,13023,38,0,B|68:136|64:88|64:88|131:97,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,48,14106,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,68,14467,2,0,B|344:80|384:56|384:56|416:72|452:64,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,144,16271,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,200,16632,2,0,B|156:272|156:272|196:292|212:340,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,92,18798,38,0,P|384:104|396:28,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,28,20602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,92,20963,2,0,P|128:104|116:28,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,208,22407,5,2,0:0:0:0:
188,264,22768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,23129,2,0,B|308:328|344:300|344:300|372:316|408:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,136,24572,38,0,B|372:132|344:148|344:148|308:120|256:128,2,160,4|0|0,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,224,26377,1,8,1:2:0:0:
424,308,26738,2,0,P|388:312|348:296,1,80,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
260,284,27459,6,0,B|216:308|168:300|168:300|152:328|124:348,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,200,29264,2,0,P|308:160|304:120,2,80,8|0|8,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
220,144,30347,38,0,B|176:148|136:120|136:120|132:156|100:192,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,84,32151,1,8,1:2:0:0:
356,132,32512,2,0,P|384:160|428:172,1,80,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
452,256,33234,6,0,B|400:268|376:320|376:320|328:340|280:332|256:288,1,240,2|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
196,224,34678,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,60,35399,1,4,0:0:0:0:
316,224,36121,38,0,B|352:248|392:232|392:232|416:260|472:268,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,232,37926,2,0,P|208:272|180:292,2,80,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,196,39008,6,0,B|132:152|132:152|196:128|196:68,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,68,40091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,116,40452,2,0,L|60:196,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,72,41896,6,0,B|248:100|296:84|296:84|360:60,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,48,42978,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,136,43339,2,0,P|412:176|412:216,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,284,44061,2,0,B|416:316|364:284|364:284|344:308|308:316,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,252,45144,5,8,0:0:0:0:
176,216,45505,2,0,B|160:268|188:308|188:308|128:340,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|2:1|2:1,0:0:0:0:
52,92,47670,38,0,P|116:40|192:56,1,160,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,140,48753,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,124,49114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,200,49475,2,0,P|380:184|400:156,2,80,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,216,50557,6,0,B|228:272|168:284|168:284|132:332,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,196,52362,2,0,L|100:140,2,80,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,124,53805,37,8,0:0:0:0:
400,100,54166,2,0,B|416:152|376:192|376:192|412:248,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,312,55249,2,0,L|304:240,2,80,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,276,56693,5,8,0:0:0:0:
108,320,57053,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,232,57414,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,164,57775,2,0,P|24:104|100:84,2,160,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,336,59941,6,0,B|48:308|60:244|16:180|16:180|104:196|160:140|160:140|212:188,1,400,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,186,62106,2,0,B|352:140|352:140|408:196|496:180|496:180|452:244|464:308|508:336,1,400,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,328,64632,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,260,64993,6,0,B|244:292|248:340|248:340|168:336,2,160,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,200,66798,2,0,P|364:164|368:120,2,80,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67881,12,4,70768,1:2:0:0:
256,136,71490,5,0,0:0:0:0:
168,128,71850,2,0,P|184:188|272:220,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,212,72933,2,0,P|360:256|344:292,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,164,74016,6,0,P|328:124|420:148,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,204,75099,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,288,75459,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,336,75820,2,0,P|348:344|308:332,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,268,76542,37,2,0:0:0:0:
204,196,76903,2,0,B|172:220|164:260|164:260|104:272|44:248|44:188,1,240,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,104,78347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,108,78708,2,0,P|204:96|228:68,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,52,79429,6,0,B|356:28|412:36|412:36|408:64|424:92,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,164,80512,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,248,80873,2,0,P|448:292|464:332,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
284,200,82317,38,0,B|244:216|204:200|204:200|160:180|124:196,2,160,4|2|2,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,152,84121,2,0,P|372:196|368:232,2,80,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,104,85204,6,0,B|244:120|204:104|204:104|160:84|124:100,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,148,86287,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,232,86647,2,0,P|76:232|112:216,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,204,87369,2,0,B|256:240|256:240|308:268|348:240,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,212,88452,37,8,0:0:0:0:
440,124,88813,2,0,B|384:88|384:88|332:60|295:85,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,116,89896,2,0,P|176:132|136:128,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,80,90617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,168,90978,6,0,B|64:208|64:208|24:248|32:312|72:352|128:340,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,296,92422,2,0,P|248:276|284:280,1,80,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
364,308,93144,2,0,P|403:308|438:290,1,80,2|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
488,216,93865,1,4,1:2:0:0:
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply