Sorry for the delay.
[General]
Countdown disrupts the mood of the start of the song.
Looks alright; could still use an Easy, but the Normal's not too hard, so it's fine.
[Normal]
Some of the alignment looks a bit weird, for example, 00:19:017 (4,5) might look better if 5 was at the same height as the endpoint of 4.
Consider shortening 00:30:048 (2) by 2 repeats or so, and adding a slider from 00:31:010 to 00:32:075 to accompany the trumpet; the break feels a bit out of place at the moment.
00:41:014 (1) - I thought it would play better if it ended at 00:41:098 with a few notes after; unfortunately, that'll also make it a bit too hard for your easiest difficulty. What you have is alright too.
00:55:059 (1,2,3,4,5) - Another of those minor alignment things that looks a bit weird, but is technically okay.
01:14:055 (1,1) - If you don't plan to make an Easy, this may be too short of a gap for your easiest difficulty.
01:19:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Looks weird, hard to read too.
01:34:055 (1,1) - I don't like these 2 spinners, combine them together?
[Hard]
01:06:022 (4,5,6) - The slight elevation of 5 is a bit weird.
01:44:034 (3,4) - Weird change in height again.
01:55:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Didn't like how cramped this combo was.
02:13:072 (1,2) - Difference in number of repeats throws people off.
[Lunatic]
Didn't really like how the warning in the SB suddenly disappears; fade it out slower?
10m max score, but it definitely won't be easy to get.
01:47:088 (1) - I think this spinner is too short (and the other ones like this one). Auto should get 2k bonus.
Star~
[General]
Countdown disrupts the mood of the start of the song.
Looks alright; could still use an Easy, but the Normal's not too hard, so it's fine.
[Normal]
Some of the alignment looks a bit weird, for example, 00:19:017 (4,5) might look better if 5 was at the same height as the endpoint of 4.
Consider shortening 00:30:048 (2) by 2 repeats or so, and adding a slider from 00:31:010 to 00:32:075 to accompany the trumpet; the break feels a bit out of place at the moment.
00:41:014 (1) - I thought it would play better if it ended at 00:41:098 with a few notes after; unfortunately, that'll also make it a bit too hard for your easiest difficulty. What you have is alright too.
00:55:059 (1,2,3,4,5) - Another of those minor alignment things that looks a bit weird, but is technically okay.
01:14:055 (1,1) - If you don't plan to make an Easy, this may be too short of a gap for your easiest difficulty.
01:19:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Looks weird, hard to read too.
01:34:055 (1,1) - I don't like these 2 spinners, combine them together?
[Hard]
01:06:022 (4,5,6) - The slight elevation of 5 is a bit weird.
01:44:034 (3,4) - Weird change in height again.
01:55:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Didn't like how cramped this combo was.
02:13:072 (1,2) - Difference in number of repeats throws people off.
[Lunatic]
Didn't really like how the warning in the SB suddenly disappears; fade it out slower?
10m max score, but it definitely won't be easy to get.
01:47:088 (1) - I think this spinner is too short (and the other ones like this one). Auto should get 2k bonus.
Star~