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thepianist

Joined March 2009

thepianist 2009-11-24T21:22:21+00:00

Hehheh ninjamod! My two cents.

Normal:
01:52:005 (4,5) - Consider changing to picture below [347 kb]

Hard:
01:52:005 (6,7) - Change to snap to 1/6th (or even 1/3rds)
02:07:005 (1) - A bit meh-ish

Lunatic
The 2x Speed Warning's redish color looks a little odd or mebbe its how it simply fades in. hmm oh well
01:53:072 (1) - mmmm :\
02:07:005 (1) - ^ consider splitting into multiple sliders instead?

Nevertheless, an exciting map. :] Star.

pieguyn

2,020 posts

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-11-25T04:21:52+00:00

Updated.

Normal:
01:52:005 (4,5): Done.

Hard:
01:52:005 (6,7): This is already snapped to 1/3rds. o_o
02:07:005 (1): Hm... changed.

Lunatic
-The warning has been changed a bit. Instead of fading in and out, it now blinks, which I think is a bit better and more noticeable.
01:53:072 (1): I'm not sure what to do with this without making it seem out of place. Plus, that slider serves as sort of a break from the deathstream.

02:07:005 (1): ^

Thanks for the mod.

Kytoxid

osu! Alumni

1,369 posts

Joined April 2009

Kytoxid 2009-11-25T07:09:02+00:00

Sorry for the delay.

[General]

Countdown disrupts the mood of the start of the song.
Looks alright; could still use an Easy, but the Normal's not too hard, so it's fine.

[Normal]

Some of the alignment looks a bit weird, for example, 00:19:017 (4,5) might look better if 5 was at the same height as the endpoint of 4.

Consider shortening 00:30:048 (2) by 2 repeats or so, and adding a slider from 00:31:010 to 00:32:075 to accompany the trumpet; the break feels a bit out of place at the moment.

00:41:014 (1) - I thought it would play better if it ended at 00:41:098 with a few notes after; unfortunately, that'll also make it a bit too hard for your easiest difficulty. What you have is alright too.
00:55:059 (1,2,3,4,5) - Another of those minor alignment things that looks a bit weird, but is technically okay.
01:14:055 (1,1) - If you don't plan to make an Easy, this may be too short of a gap for your easiest difficulty.
01:19:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Looks weird, hard to read too.
01:34:055 (1,1) - I don't like these 2 spinners, combine them together?

[Hard]

01:06:022 (4,5,6) - The slight elevation of 5 is a bit weird.
01:44:034 (3,4) - Weird change in height again.
01:55:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Didn't like how cramped this combo was.
02:13:072 (1,2) - Difference in number of repeats throws people off.

[Lunatic]

Didn't really like how the warning in the SB suddenly disappears; fade it out slower?
10m max score, but it definitely won't be easy to get.

01:47:088 (1) - I think this spinner is too short (and the other ones like this one). Auto should get 2k bonus.

Star~

pieguyn

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Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-11-25T08:28:02+00:00

Updated.

-The countdown has been removed.
-I think it'll be fine without an Easy... the Normal is easy enough.

Normal:

00:19:017 (4,5): This is supposed to curve.
00:30:048 (2): This has been shortened, and a slider has been added after it.
00:41:014 (1): Yeah, this would be a bit too fast...
00:55:059 (1,2,3,4,5): Changed a bit.
01:14:055 (1,1): Fixed.
01:19:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6): Fixed.
01:34:055 (1,1): This seems fine.

Hard:

01:06:022 (4,5,6): This seems fine.
01:44:034 (3,4): That was intended to be a curve.
01:55:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7): This seems fine.
02:13:072 (1,2): Fixed.

Lunatic:

-The warning has been changed to fade out.
-The maximum score should be fine...as you said, it's hard to get plus it's just barely over.

01:47:088 (1): Auto gets 2000 on these. o_o

Thanks for the mod.

Last edited by pieguyn 2009-11-25T18:31:51+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Dusty

870 posts

Joined June 2009

Dusty 2009-11-25T18:11:40+00:00

Touhou maps usually give me headaches...

anyways, nice map; no big problems, and I didn't notice any smaller ones.

Kytoxid

osu! Alumni

1,369 posts

Joined April 2009

Kytoxid 2009-11-25T21:13:52+00:00

My Auto only got 1k, maybe I was just lagging. Good luck on the map.

Tanmak

896 posts

Joined August 2009

Tanmak 2009-11-25T22:01:19+00:00

Hello~~

[Normal]

01:50:391 Color of ring which are spinner ring and note ring are similar. This factor will make to confuse player.
02:03:724 ^

[Hard]
Fine.

[Lunatic]
00:28:640 (1) Unsnapped. Please Ctrl+Shift+A and check notes snapped.
01:07:264 (2) Remove whistle?
01:35:431 (1) Unsnapped.
01:48:764 (1) ^
02:03:722 Same [Normal]

Starred

pieguyn

2,020 posts

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

pieguyn 2009-11-25T22:50:57+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

DJPop

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3,549 posts

Here since the beginning

DJPop 2009-11-27T03:41:14+00:00

~Normal~
Fine.

~Hard~
Fine.

~Lunatic~
00:15:009 (1,2,3) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
00:30:048 (3) - move up 1 grid (Lv3) then...
00:30:048 (3,4,5,6) - move down 4 grids (Lv3)

+Star

pieguyn

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pieguyn 2009-11-27T04:00:46+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2009-11-27T04:32:41+00:00

[Hard]
01:06:847 (5) - Allign with the end of the slider (4)

The song is not bad. Star

pieguyn

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pieguyn 2009-11-27T05:05:54+00:00

Updated.

Hard:

01:06:847 (5): Moved.

Thanks for modding.

Starrodkirby86

osu! Alumni

3,723 posts

Here since the beginning

Starrodkirby86 2009-11-28T08:04:26+00:00

Talked about nerfing some of Normal already.

[Lunatic]:
01:52:055 (1,2) - Snap these to 1/3?
02:05:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Snap to 1/3 and re-adjust the spacing. o3o

And bamph, this is a great map-set!

pieguyn

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pieguyn 2009-11-28T08:43:59+00:00

Updated.

-Normal has been toned down a bit.

Lunatic:

01:52:055 (1,2): Done.
02:05:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6): Done.

Thanks for modding and starring!

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2009-11-28T23:47:01+00:00

Insane~
02:06:222 (7) - New combo to better differentiate between how fast or slow to go.
02:07:888 (5) - ^