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Teara

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Teara 2009-11-09T15:03:00+00:00

Nice beatmap

Have a star!

[All Diffs]
Make hitsound volume a tiny bit louder, I can barely hear them.

[Easy]
01:02:088 (5,1) - This jump is to long, please snap it.

All the spinners are really hard for a easy..

01:10:064 (1,1) - < Hate it, love it. But its gotta go. Its to way too hard and should not belong in a easy diff IMO. rest of the spinners can be passable.

[Normal]

Nothing wrong

[Hard]

Suggest you lower stack leniency a few times. It plays nicer for me then.

I'd also suggest you lower HP drain by 1, its to high for the beginning of the song and if you miss, its game over, you don't have enough notes to build the hp bar up again.

bmin11

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bmin11 2009-11-09T19:40:58+00:00

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whymeman

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whymeman 2009-11-11T03:24:57+00:00

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~

[Easy]

00:48:075 (5) - Shouldn't a new combo start here?
00:56:016 (5) - ^

This difficulty is missing an audio preview point.

[Normal]

00:27:067 (1) - I have some doubts about this spinner. Its kinda short for a "normal" as auto is getting the 300 + 3000 at most. You have an option to extend the spinner to 00:29:029 which could also work great with the finish (or/and with the clap hitsound).
00:48:052 (1,2) - Just needs a small notch to the left to even out the spacing between 00:48:005 (5,1).
00:52:092 (3) - A small notch to the right can even out the spacing between (2) and (3).

This difficulty is missing an audio preview point.

The spacing seems to have fell a bit short around some places of the map. Make sure to double check into this (and use alt + shift for the distance snap when you have to).

[Hard]

This difficulty is missing an audio preview point.

Overall: The map seems good so far, but the spacing for [Normal] has to be double checked. Also, you have 3 .osb files in the song folder. Make sure to check into that as well.

Kerensa

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Kerensa 2009-11-12T08:59:33+00:00

whymeman wrote:
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~

[Easy]

00:48:075 (5) - Shouldn't a new combo start here?
00:56:016 (5) - ^

This difficulty is missing an audio preview point.

[Normal]

00:27:067 (1) - I have some doubts about this spinner. Its kinda short for a "normal" as auto is getting the 300 + 3000 at most. You have an option to extend the spinner to 00:29:029 which could also work great with the finish (or/and with the clap hitsound).
00:48:052 (1,2) - Just needs a small notch to the left to even out the spacing between 00:48:005 (5,1).
00:52:092 (3) - A small notch to the right can even out the spacing between (2) and (3).

This difficulty is missing an audio preview point.

The spacing seems to have fell a bit short around some places of the map. Make sure to double check into this (and use alt + shift for the distance snap when you have to).

[Hard]

This difficulty is missing an audio preview point.

Overall: The map seems good so far, but the spacing for [Normal] has to be double checked. Also, you have 3 .osb files in the song folder. Make sure to check into that as well.

Yep! All done! thankyou for modding ^^ and also thank you for the suggestion i have looked through them all ^^

haisha_

Teara

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Teara 2009-11-12T14:56:00+00:00

Quick suggestion for [Hard], since you made the stack leniency lower.

~~00:20:049 (2) - < doesn't look nice anymore (In actual play), to fix this, move it up one grid, then one grid to the left ( take distance snap off while you do this )~~

In editor it looked ugly, but when I played it full screen in osu, it looked nice, so never mind this.

~Edit 2

In editor its fine too now... maybe I should get my eyes checked....

00:22:034 (6) - 1 Grid up.

also, don't kudosu this if you decided to use my suggestions, this is just a random nazi.

Great beatmap, good job.

Cant wait to see it ranked.

~ Edit

here is a random replay too!

Love this map

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2009-11-14T01:54:26+00:00

First of all, i'd say to change offset to 14931 (the one you have right now works fine but sounds weird)

- Easy:

.Opinions:
Wow, many colorful combos.
Kinda boring, almost everything is 1/1 D:
.Suggestions:
01:01:49 (2) - feels a bit weird, it can be played without mistkes, but feels too close to 00:59:087 (1)
01:05:20 (1) - ^ but i think this one is even worse
01:41:80 (1) - how about extending it to 1:43:889?

- Normal:

.Opinions:
Colorful combos~
.Suggestions:
00:39:95 (1) - can be played fine, but feels too close to the previous combo
01:12:61 (1) - how about extending it to 1:14:236
01:41:80 (1) - how about extending it to 1:43:889?

- Hard:

.Suggestions:
01:42:073 (1) - how about extending it to 1:43:889?

Good job, just a few spacing that seemed weird, but it's a good map ^^
Star'd

Myridium

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Myridium 2009-11-14T09:10:28+00:00

These are all just suggestions!

[Easy]

OFFSET

For first timing point, make it 14,931.

00:32:053 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:14:070 (1) - Add clap sound.

01:23:050 (4) - New combo.
01:23:096 (1) - No new combo.
01:25:035 (4) - New combo.
01:25:081 (1) - No new combo.

01:27:020 (4) - *Could* Move this note half a beat back.
01:27:044 (1) - *Could* also move spinner back half a beat

[Normal]

OFFSET

For first timing point, make it 14,931.

[Hard]

OFFSET

For first timing point, make it 14,931.

00:18:063 (7) - New combo.
00:18:086 (1) - No new combo.

00:19:079 (3) - No new combo.
00:20:049 (1) - New combo.

00:22:034 (6) - New combo.
00:22:057 (1) - No new combo.
00:23:003 (4) - New combo.
00:23:050 (1) - No new combo.
00:23:096 (4) - New combo.

...et cetera. The combos don't match up with the word phrases.

01:11:068 (5) - Move one quarter forward.
01:26:097 (1) - No new combo.

Anyway, these are just suggestions. Hope they help!
Good map!

Lilac

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Lilac 2009-11-14T09:23:44+00:00

14,931 for the offset sounds better. The metronome sounds sounds right if you do that. (Though changing the offset won't make a difference)

[Easy]
You will not believe how much repetitive hitobjects there are in easy. But...I'll leave it.

[Normal]
01:14:468 - Put a slider here (return arrow and same length like the forthcoming sliders)

[Hard]
00:28:366 (1) - Spinner end should be moved back to the white tick/red tick. (Depending if you changed the offset.)

Below are some alterations that I did... You don't have to use them. (Hard has hitsound improvements and Normal has some hitsound improvements and the above Normal Modding)

The .mp3 also seems cut off at the end... But... STAR!

Download: capsule - Sugarless GiRL (haisha_) [Hard].osu

Download: capsule - Sugarless GiRL (haisha_) [Normal].osu

DoubleDango

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DoubleDango 2009-11-15T03:42:41+00:00

As you requested woman.

But why fade @ 2:08 when the map ends @ 1:41-42?

Download: capsule - Sugarless GiRL .mp3

DJPop

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DJPop 2009-11-16T08:07:58+00:00

~Easy~
00:27:044 (1) - start on red tick
00:34:969 - delete timing section
01:10:064 (1) - move start 1/4 right and move end 1/4 left
01:12:038 (1) - move start 1/2 right

~Normal~
00:37:086 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - add some hitwhistles
01:11:068 (5) - move 1/4 right

~Hard~
01:11:068 (5) - move 1/4 right
01:11:091 (1) - start on red tick

+Star

0_o

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0_o 2009-11-17T08:12:24+00:00

General
I would lighten up some of the new combos, a lot of them aren't that necessary

Normal
00:48:052 (1) - The last repeat is tough to see coming, could you change this somehow?

Either way, I'd say this is ready to be ranked ^_^

Mukku

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Mukku 2009-11-19T13:04:39+00:00

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Shulin

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Shulin 2009-11-20T08:36:51+00:00

General:

Turn the hitsound volume up by 1 tick?

Source, tags etc - well you should probably add some tags so people can find your map

Do you have a higher bit rate mp3? It would make the map sound better if you did

Easy:

Yep, this is pretty much perfect nothing to add here.

Normal:

01:11:080 (4) - Back one tick [To the red one], this is the fault of the singer not singing on time.
01:11:091 (x) - and 01:12:015 (x) - You could put notes here to follow the BG music if ^ still sounds odd.

Hard:

00:38:079 (4) - New combo?
01:11:080 (5) - That note again, back one tick

Same suggestion as normal for additional notes.

Nothing else to add, nice maps probably needs a BAT now

~~ Starred!

Jarby

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Jarby 2009-11-20T10:37:57+00:00

BAT here. Switch the .mp3 to this and set the offset to 20. Do this before looking at the individual difficulty mods. Raise hitsound volume to full.

Hard:

00:43:057 - Remove break, a spinner would work.
00:44:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remove, add break.
00:44:096 - Gets a lot easier from here to kiai. I'd make it harder or make the previous and following sections easier to match.
01:11:060 (5) - Snap to 1/3.
01:42:064 (1) - Extend 1/1, remove note. It's too short.

Easy:

00:44:003 - Add circle.
00:44:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remove, add break.
01:41:071 (1) - I'd extend to 01:43:080.

Normal:

00:41:002 - Remove break.
00:44:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remove, add break.
01:21:033 - Remove break.
01:41:071 (1) - I'd extend to 01:43:080.

DoubleDango

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DoubleDango 2009-11-20T10:46:45+00:00

JarJarJacob wrote:
BAT here. Switch the .mp3 to this and set the offset to 20. Do this before looking at the individual difficulty mods. Raise hitsound volume to full.

Right click the "this" and click save target as, I'm guessing you didn't know how D:

Jarby

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Jarby 2009-11-20T11:22:15+00:00

DoubleDango wrote:
Right click the "this" and click save target as, I'm guessing you didn't know how D:

Install Firefox, click link, Save File.

DoubleDango

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DoubleDango 2009-11-20T11:54:07+00:00

JarJarJacob wrote:
DoubleDango wrote:
Right click the "this" and click save target as, I'm guessing you didn't know how D:
Install Firefox, click link, Save File.

Eww, Maxthon > All

Just 'cause it's imfamous.

Kerensa

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Kerensa 2009-11-21T11:11:26+00:00

JarJarJacob wrote:
BAT here. Switch the .mp3 to this and set the offset to 20. Do this before looking at the individual difficulty mods. Raise hitsound volume to full.

Hard:

00:43:057 - Remove break, a spinner would work.
00:44:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remove, add break.
00:44:096 - Gets a lot easier from here to kiai. I'd make it harder or make the previous and following sections easier to match.
01:11:060 (5) - Snap to 1/3.
01:42:064 (1) - Extend 1/1, remove note. It's too short.

Easy:

00:44:003 - Add circle.
00:44:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remove, add break.
01:41:071 (1) - I'd extend to 01:43:080.

Normal:

00:41:002 - Remove break.
00:44:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remove, add break.
01:21:033 - Remove break.
01:41:071 (1) - I'd extend to 01:43:080.

okies done >_<

Jarby

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Jarby 2009-11-25T12:30:10+00:00

That spinner at the end of Hard is easy enough, whatever.

baka_xD_old

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baka_xD_old 2009-11-27T00:58:01+00:00

wahhh!!!!!!

diz map is so cool!

starzzzz

yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2009-11-27T04:06:07+00:00

yeah go haisha

DoubleDango

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DoubleDango 2009-11-27T04:58:45+00:00

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:
yeah go haisha

haisha_ is best.

Sinistro

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Sinistro 2009-11-27T13:02:16+00:00

haisha_ wrote:
JarJarJacob wrote:
BAT here. Switch the .mp3 to this and set the offset to 20.
okies done >_<

Are you sure you did this? This is the first time I've downloaded this map and the .mp3 I see in the folder is about 2MB in size, while the one JarJarJacob linked you is 3 MB. Also, offset 20 doesn't sound right at all.

When changing the audio, images, videos etc. in a map, you should choose "Full Submission" instead of "Standard Submission", otherwise only the changes in the beatmap's design (circles, sliders etc.) will be updated. Maybe that's what went wrong here?

Back to star.

Kerensa

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Kerensa 2009-11-28T02:43:51+00:00

Sinistro wrote:
Are you sure you did this? This is the first time I've downloaded this map and the .mp3 I see in the folder is about 2MB in size, while the one JarJarJacob linked you is 3 MB. Also, offset 20 doesn't sound right at all.

When changing the audio, images, videos etc. in a map, you should choose "Full Submission" instead of "Standard Submission", otherwise only the changes in the beatmap's design (circles, sliders etc.) will be updated. Maybe that's what went wrong here?

Back to star.

okies ^^ yeah, i don't think i full submitted it =__=my bad >_<;; but i did it this time, the offset and and mp3 should have been changed.\

haisha_

Sinistro

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Sinistro 2009-11-28T13:12:35+00:00

Ok, now that I know what I'm working with...

Easy
00:37:085 (5) - Make this a new combo, and remove the new combo from 00:38:938 (1).
01:01:409 (2) - Why the sudden low spacing here for an Easy? It's not game-breakingly bad, but if you could space it consistently it would be much appreciated. Of course, you'd probably have to move a lot of stuff that comes after that combo too...

Hard
00:38:707 (4), 01:02:568 (4) - New Combo here, if you can.
01:25:502 (3) - Unstack from the slider end.

Kerensa

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Kerensa 2009-11-28T16:11:04+00:00

Sinistro wrote:
Ok, now that I know what I'm working with...

Easy
00:37:085 (5) - Make this a new combo, and remove the new combo from 00:38:938 (1).
01:01:409 (2) - Why the sudden low spacing here for an Easy? It's not game-breakingly bad, but if you could space it consistently it would be much appreciated. Of course, you'd probably have to move a lot of stuff that comes after that combo too...

Hard
00:38:707 (4), 01:02:568 (4) - New Combo here, if you can.
01:25:502 (3) - Unstack from the slider end.

alrighty then ^^ all checks done >_<;;;