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Capsule - Sugarless GiRL

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NoHitter
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NoHitter
Overall
Delete unused .osb file in the song folder

Easy
01:12:793 (1) - Move this to 01:12:561
01:18:816 (1) - Remove new combo
01:23:912 (1) - ^
01:24:839 (7) - Add new combo
01:25:766 (1) - Remove new combo.

Normal
00:34:105 (4) - IMO, add new combo, but it's ok.
00:35:032 (1) - If you followed ^; Remove new combo
00:36:190 (7) - If you followed ^; Add new combo
00:39:897 (7) - ^
00:52:870 (3) - Spacing check
01:12:213 (1) - Move to 01:12:561 and extend to 01:13:719 ; And remove the break

Hard
00:28:545 (2) - Change to spinner to 00:29:472???
01:01:441 (2) - Add new combo
01:01:905 (1) - Remove new combo
01:11:988 (1) - IMO, move to 01:11:866 and extend by 1/4 tick.
01:42:677 (2) - Maybe make it into spinner up to 01:43:372 and make the end part of the spinner with no volume.
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Nharox
First of all, you should cut the mp3 or use a shorter version because there are almost 3 unused minutes and you can save peppy some traffic. ;) And I noticed that you often use combos which doesn't make sense sometimes. 00:43:372 (1) on Hard for example.

[Normal]

00:24:839 (1) - Edit -> Reverse Selection

Overall it's good for your first (?) map. ;)
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
EASY
Good
01:40:036 (1) - A bit hard for newbie ?

NORMAL
00:14:087 (1,1,1) - Hitsound suggestion -> Remove claps at the start of these 3 sliders
00:18:121 - Clap at this exact point of slider (the U-turn there)
00:21:059 (2) - Clap at end of slider
00:25:030 (2) - Remove clap at start of slider
01:17:042 (1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1) - I would suggest don't spam clap here. Maybe add claps to the appropiate white ticks ?

HARD
00:16:962 - No clap here ? XD
00:17:042 (2) - Remove clap ?
00:18:012 (5) - clap
Basically I would suggest you follow a pattern of clap here, like clap every 2 white ticks ? But it's up to you. =D (and I won't mod hitsounds afterthis =P)

This is a good map ! Star !
DoubleDango
27 posts
Joined October 2009
DoubleDango
Cropped @ 1:47 (128kb/s encoded with LAME)

Added ID3 Tags.

Download: 04 Sugarless GiRL.mp3
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
i like it, i love the map
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Clapping:

Easy :

0:25:71 (1);
0:40:823 (3);
0:59:820(1).

Normal :

0:21,132 (1,2);
0:29:708 (1,4,7);
0:32:947 (2,3);
0:36:190 (1,2,3); <- This one is just a hint, but it looks so cool with claps. :3
0:39:897 (1,2);
0:40:823 (3); <- This one you don't clap. Add a "finish" sound to this.
0:50:322 (1,2); <- Not really necessary, but then again...
1:01:441 (1,2);
1:03:758 (2);
1:08:854 (1).

Hard :

I tried to find errors but...this is awesome. I can't check for claps here, really. It's perfect.

Well...fix just these :

0:22:986 (4);
0:24:970 (4);
0:55:881 (1,2);




I dunno why this isn't ranked yet. But well, hope it get ranked soon. Like, now. lol
Btw, am I the only one to think that this hard is insane? It is insanely good, at least.
Nice work, Haisha~ :3
I don't even need to say this won a star. ;3

Ps: Here are the pics.

http://up.ppy.sh/files/sugarlessgirlbackground1.jpg
http://up.ppy.sh/files/sugarlessgirlbackground2.jpg
DoubleDango
27 posts
Joined October 2009
DoubleDango

FuukoLover wrote:

Ps: Here are the pics.

http://up.ppy.sh/files/sugarlessgirlbackground1.jpg
http://up.ppy.sh/files/sugarlessgirlbackground2.jpg
I don't like :P.
Let me find/make some better pictures.

770 x 473 (Same as source image)

Just added a crosshatch filter and added some text.

Last edited by DoubleDango , edited 2 times in total.
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Here they are...>_>;
I tested, and looked great. Dunno if you will actually like it, but then again...

Edit :

Here is the mp3 I edited.
Check it, if you want.





Download: capsule - Sugarless GiRL .mp3
Last edited by Fuuko , edited 1 time in total.
DoubleDango
27 posts
Joined October 2009
DoubleDango
Length: 1:47
Beatrate: 128 kb/s encoded with LAME
ID3 Tags: All but cover art (optimum size since you're capped D:)




You can request me to make some other BG if you like, or the beatcircle and stuff.

EDIT:

Have to rename the mp3 to the same name as the old one, there's a space at the end.

"capsule - Sugarless GiRL .mp3"

Download: capsule - Sugarless GiRL.zip

Download: capsule - Sugarless GiRL -15DB.rar
DoubleDango
27 posts
Joined October 2009
DoubleDango
2:21
128 Kb/s
-10DB from original
Fade out @ end
Full ID3 Tag less cover art to optimize size.

-EDIT-

1:58 -5DB fade @ 1:54 ~ 1:58
Rest is same as the one above.

Download: capsule - Sugarless GiRL -10DB 2-21.rar

Download: capsule - Sugarless GiRL -5DB [1 58] Faded.rar
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Preview points.
Offset change to 14,928.EDIT: This was for Easy, but your timing seems different (and okay) on Normal/Hard. Please pick a consistent timing scheme.
Your song folder has 2 extra .osb files. Please remove them.
Kiai with bright colours hurts the eyes.

[Easy]

00:23:024 (1) - Line this up with the 3 before it.
00:35:029 (3) - Maybe stretch the 2 before it a bit or something, so that this one can line up with it. (or just ungrid snap it).

[Normal]

00:21:018 (1,2) - Space it like 00:20:025 (1,2).

[Hard]

00:23:096 (4) - Add a note after this?

Pretty much all good. Starred
EEeee
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Joined July 2008
EEeee
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DoubleDango
27 posts
Joined October 2009
DoubleDango

EEeee wrote:

*EEeee pats haisha, cause she likes that stuff
Oh really?

*DoubleDango looks at EEeee with dout.
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
Kerensa
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Teara
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814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Nice beatmap :) Have a star!

[All Diffs]
Make hitsound volume a tiny bit louder, I can barely hear them.

[Easy]
01:02:088 (5,1) - This jump is to long, please snap it.

All the spinners are really hard for a easy..

01:10:064 (1,1) - < Hate it, love it. But its gotta go. Its to way too hard and should not belong in a easy diff IMO. rest of the spinners can be passable.

[Normal]

Nothing wrong :)

[Hard]

Suggest you lower stack leniency a few times. It plays nicer for me then.

I'd also suggest you lower HP drain by 1, its to high for the beginning of the song and if you miss, its game over, you don't have enough notes to build the hp bar up again.
bmin11
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bmin11
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whymeman
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whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~


[Easy]

00:48:075 (5) - Shouldn't a new combo start here?
00:56:016 (5) - ^

This difficulty is missing an audio preview point.

[Normal]

00:27:067 (1) - I have some doubts about this spinner. Its kinda short for a "normal" as auto is getting the 300 + 3000 at most. You have an option to extend the spinner to 00:29:029 which could also work great with the finish (or/and with the clap hitsound).
00:48:052 (1,2) - Just needs a small notch to the left to even out the spacing between 00:48:005 (5,1).
00:52:092 (3) - A small notch to the right can even out the spacing between (2) and (3).

This difficulty is missing an audio preview point.

The spacing seems to have fell a bit short around some places of the map. Make sure to double check into this (and use alt + shift for the distance snap when you have to).

[Hard]

This difficulty is missing an audio preview point.


Overall: The map seems good so far, but the spacing for [Normal] has to be double checked. Also, you have 3 .osb files in the song folder. Make sure to check into that as well.
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
Kerensa

whymeman wrote:

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~


[Easy]

00:48:075 (5) - Shouldn't a new combo start here?
00:56:016 (5) - ^

This difficulty is missing an audio preview point.

[Normal]

00:27:067 (1) - I have some doubts about this spinner. Its kinda short for a "normal" as auto is getting the 300 + 3000 at most. You have an option to extend the spinner to 00:29:029 which could also work great with the finish (or/and with the clap hitsound).
00:48:052 (1,2) - Just needs a small notch to the left to even out the spacing between 00:48:005 (5,1).
00:52:092 (3) - A small notch to the right can even out the spacing between (2) and (3).

This difficulty is missing an audio preview point.

The spacing seems to have fell a bit short around some places of the map. Make sure to double check into this (and use alt + shift for the distance snap when you have to).

[Hard]

This difficulty is missing an audio preview point.


Overall: The map seems good so far, but the spacing for [Normal] has to be double checked. Also, you have 3 .osb files in the song folder. Make sure to check into that as well.
Yep! All done! thankyou for modding ^^ and also thank you for the suggestion i have looked through them all ^^

haisha_
Teara
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814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Quick suggestion for [Hard], since you made the stack leniency lower.

00:20:049 (2) - < doesn't look nice anymore (In actual play), to fix this, move it up one grid, then one grid to the left ( take distance snap off while you do this )

In editor it looked ugly, but when I played it full screen in osu, it looked nice, so never mind this.

~Edit 2

In editor its fine too now... maybe I should get my eyes checked....

00:22:034 (6) - 1 Grid up.

also, don't kudosu this if you decided to use my suggestions, this is just a random nazi.

Great beatmap, good job.

Cant wait to see it ranked.

~ Edit

here is a random replay too! :)

Love this map
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
First of all, i'd say to change offset to 14931 (the one you have right now works fine but sounds weird)

- Easy:
  • .Opinions:
    Wow, many colorful combos.
    Kinda boring, almost everything is 1/1 D:
    .Suggestions:
    01:01:49 (2) - feels a bit weird, it can be played without mistkes, but feels too close to 00:59:087 (1)
    01:05:20 (1) - ^ but i think this one is even worse
    01:41:80 (1) - how about extending it to 1:43:889?
- Normal:
  • .Opinions:
    Colorful combos~
    .Suggestions:
    00:39:95 (1) - can be played fine, but feels too close to the previous combo
    01:12:61 (1) - how about extending it to 1:14:236
    01:41:80 (1) - how about extending it to 1:43:889?
- Hard:
  • .Suggestions:
    01:42:073 (1) - how about extending it to 1:43:889?
Good job, just a few spacing that seemed weird, but it's a good map ^^
Star'd
Myridium
39 posts
Joined August 2008
Myridium
These are all just suggestions!

[Easy]

OFFSET

For first timing point, make it 14,931.

00:32:053 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:14:070 (1) - Add clap sound.

01:23:050 (4) - New combo.
01:23:096 (1) - No new combo.
01:25:035 (4) - New combo.
01:25:081 (1) - No new combo.

01:27:020 (4) - *Could* Move this note half a beat back.
01:27:044 (1) - *Could* also move spinner back half a beat

[Normal]

OFFSET

For first timing point, make it 14,931.

[Hard]


OFFSET

For first timing point, make it 14,931.


00:18:063 (7) - New combo.
00:18:086 (1) - No new combo.

00:19:079 (3) - No new combo.
00:20:049 (1) - New combo.

00:22:034 (6) - New combo.
00:22:057 (1) - No new combo.
00:23:003 (4) - New combo.
00:23:050 (1) - No new combo.
00:23:096 (4) - New combo.

...et cetera. The combos don't match up with the word phrases.

01:11:068 (5) - Move one quarter forward.
01:26:097 (1) - No new combo.

Anyway, these are just suggestions. Hope they help!
Good map!
Lilac
Elite Mapper
1,515 posts
Joined December 2008
Lilac
14,931 for the offset sounds better. The metronome sounds sounds right if you do that. (Though changing the offset won't make a difference)

[Easy]
You will not believe how much repetitive hitobjects there are in easy. But...I'll leave it.

[Normal]
01:14:468 - Put a slider here (return arrow and same length like the forthcoming sliders)

[Hard]
00:28:366 (1) - Spinner end should be moved back to the white tick/red tick. (Depending if you changed the offset.)

Below are some alterations that I did... You don't have to use them. (Hard has hitsound improvements and Normal has some hitsound improvements and the above Normal Modding)

The .mp3 also seems cut off at the end... But... STAR!

Download: capsule - Sugarless GiRL (haisha_) [Hard].osu

Download: capsule - Sugarless GiRL (haisha_) [Normal].osu
DoubleDango
27 posts
Joined October 2009
DoubleDango
As you requested woman.

But why fade @ 2:08 when the map ends @ 1:41-42?

Download: capsule - Sugarless GiRL .mp3
DJPop
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DJPop
~Easy~
00:27:044 (1) - start on red tick
00:34:969 - delete timing section
01:10:064 (1) - move start 1/4 right and move end 1/4 left
01:12:038 (1) - move start 1/2 right

~Normal~
00:37:086 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - add some hitwhistles
01:11:068 (5) - move 1/4 right

~Hard~
01:11:068 (5) - move 1/4 right
01:11:091 (1) - start on red tick


+Star
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
0_o
General
I would lighten up some of the new combos, a lot of them aren't that necessary

Normal
00:48:052 (1) - The last repeat is tough to see coming, could you change this somehow?

Either way, I'd say this is ready to be ranked ^_^
Mukku
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Joined February 2009
Mukku
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

Turn the hitsound volume up by 1 tick?

Source, tags etc - well you should probably add some tags so people can find your map :P

Do you have a higher bit rate mp3? It would make the map sound better if you did :P

Easy:

Yep, this is pretty much perfect nothing to add here.

Normal:

01:11:080 (4) - Back one tick [To the red one], this is the fault of the singer not singing on time.
01:11:091 (x) - and 01:12:015 (x) - You could put notes here to follow the BG music if ^ still sounds odd.

Hard:

00:38:079 (4) - New combo?
01:11:080 (5) - That note again, back one tick :P Same suggestion as normal for additional notes.

Nothing else to add, nice maps probably needs a BAT now ;)

~~ Starred!
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
BAT here. Switch the .mp3 to this and set the offset to 20. Do this before looking at the individual difficulty mods. Raise hitsound volume to full.

Hard:

00:43:057 - Remove break, a spinner would work.
00:44:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remove, add break.
00:44:096 - Gets a lot easier from here to kiai. I'd make it harder or make the previous and following sections easier to match.
01:11:060 (5) - Snap to 1/3.
01:42:064 (1) - Extend 1/1, remove note. It's too short.

Easy:

00:44:003 - Add circle.
00:44:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remove, add break.
01:41:071 (1) - I'd extend to 01:43:080.

Normal:

00:41:002 - Remove break.
00:44:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remove, add break.
01:21:033 - Remove break.
01:41:071 (1) - I'd extend to 01:43:080.
DoubleDango
27 posts
Joined October 2009
DoubleDango

JarJarJacob wrote:

BAT here. Switch the .mp3 to this and set the offset to 20. Do this before looking at the individual difficulty mods. Raise hitsound volume to full.
Right click the "this" and click save target as, I'm guessing you didn't know how D:
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby

DoubleDango wrote:

Right click the "this" and click save target as, I'm guessing you didn't know how D:
Install Firefox, click link, Save File.
DoubleDango
27 posts
Joined October 2009
DoubleDango

JarJarJacob wrote:

DoubleDango wrote:

Right click the "this" and click save target as, I'm guessing you didn't know how D:
Install Firefox, click link, Save File.

Eww, Maxthon > All

Just 'cause it's imfamous.
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
Kerensa

JarJarJacob wrote:

BAT here. Switch the .mp3 to this and set the offset to 20. Do this before looking at the individual difficulty mods. Raise hitsound volume to full.

Hard:

00:43:057 - Remove break, a spinner would work.
00:44:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remove, add break.
00:44:096 - Gets a lot easier from here to kiai. I'd make it harder or make the previous and following sections easier to match.
01:11:060 (5) - Snap to 1/3.
01:42:064 (1) - Extend 1/1, remove note. It's too short.

Easy:

00:44:003 - Add circle.
00:44:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remove, add break.
01:41:071 (1) - I'd extend to 01:43:080.

Normal:

00:41:002 - Remove break.
00:44:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remove, add break.
01:21:033 - Remove break.
01:41:071 (1) - I'd extend to 01:43:080.
okies done >_<
Jarby
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Joined August 2008
Jarby
That spinner at the end of Hard is easy enough, whatever.
baka_xD_old
3 posts
Joined April 2009
baka_xD_old
wahhh!!!!!!

diz map is so cool!

starzzzz
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
2,850 posts
Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
yeah go haisha
DoubleDango
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Joined October 2009
DoubleDango

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

yeah go haisha
haisha_ is best.
Sinistro
osu! Alumni
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Sinistro

haisha_ wrote:

JarJarJacob wrote:

BAT here. Switch the .mp3 to this and set the offset to 20.
okies done >_<
Are you sure you did this? This is the first time I've downloaded this map and the .mp3 I see in the folder is about 2MB in size, while the one JarJarJacob linked you is 3 MB. Also, offset 20 doesn't sound right at all.

When changing the audio, images, videos etc. in a map, you should choose "Full Submission" instead of "Standard Submission", otherwise only the changes in the beatmap's design (circles, sliders etc.) will be updated. Maybe that's what went wrong here?

Back to star.
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
Kerensa

Sinistro wrote:

Are you sure you did this? This is the first time I've downloaded this map and the .mp3 I see in the folder is about 2MB in size, while the one JarJarJacob linked you is 3 MB. Also, offset 20 doesn't sound right at all.

When changing the audio, images, videos etc. in a map, you should choose "Full Submission" instead of "Standard Submission", otherwise only the changes in the beatmap's design (circles, sliders etc.) will be updated. Maybe that's what went wrong here?

Back to star.
okies ^^ yeah, i don't think i full submitted it =__=my bad >_<;; but i did it this time, the offset and and mp3 should have been changed.\


haisha_
Sinistro
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Sinistro
Ok, now that I know what I'm working with...

Easy
00:37:085 (5) - Make this a new combo, and remove the new combo from 00:38:938 (1).
01:01:409 (2) - Why the sudden low spacing here for an Easy? It's not game-breakingly bad, but if you could space it consistently it would be much appreciated. Of course, you'd probably have to move a lot of stuff that comes after that combo too...

Hard
00:38:707 (4), 01:02:568 (4) - New Combo here, if you can.
01:25:502 (3) - Unstack from the slider end.
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Topic Starter
Kerensa

Sinistro wrote:

Ok, now that I know what I'm working with...

Easy
00:37:085 (5) - Make this a new combo, and remove the new combo from 00:38:938 (1).
01:01:409 (2) - Why the sudden low spacing here for an Easy? It's not game-breakingly bad, but if you could space it consistently it would be much appreciated. Of course, you'd probably have to move a lot of stuff that comes after that combo too...

Hard
00:38:707 (4), 01:02:568 (4) - New Combo here, if you can.
01:25:502 (3) - Unstack from the slider end.
alrighty then ^^ all checks done >_<;;;
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