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Capsule - Sugarless GiRL

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Topic Starter
Kerensa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, 29 November 2009 at 3:10:25 AM

Artist: capsule
Title: Sugarless GiRL
BPM: 129.5
Filesize: 3570kb
Play Time: 01:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.41 stars, 112 notes)
  2. Hard (4.91 stars, 256 notes)
  3. Normal (4.18 stars, 143 notes)
Download: capsule - Sugarless GiRL
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Who ever downloaded this map before the 28.11.09 please re-download it again >_<

yeahyeahyeahhh ---> for support
DoubleDangou & FuukoLover ---> new images and new mp3
eee & Hikato ---> for reminding me that i spelt the title wrong.
naruti ---> err forgot reason but it was a big help >_<
and many more >_<

THANKYOU =3

haisha_ =3
hbra000
it's awesome good :)
mao130
nice work
Sifu_TigerClaw
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
tasli
good one : >
SteRRuM
Hi!
  1. Delete "=3" from title lol,
  2. Delete "esnips.com" from source
  3. Make Full Submit.
Snap everything to Grid Snap and then PM me.
Topic Starter
Kerensa

SteRRuM wrote:

Hi!
  1. Delete "=3" from title lol,
  2. Delete "esnips.com" from source
  3. Make Full Submit.
Snap everything to Grid Snap and then PM me.

whats full submit? =3
yeahyeahyeahhh
Star for this good map :)
Yes_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Kerensa

Yes wrote:

Nice map and the song is very catchy. STAR for you n_n.


Some things that stood out to me..

-Normal-ish-
00:20:66 (2) - Allign with slider
00:55:86 (1,1,1,1,1) - inconsistent with rest of spacing in song


-Hard-ish-
00:21:12 (1) - Not alligned with 2 and 3
00:22:27 (4,5) - allign with slider
00:58:40 (2) - too far
01:08:85 (2) - new combo?

wowieeeeee! you noticed the really tiny details!! >< thats sooo cooooooool!
yep, i fixed up everything now :P

thankyou!
naruti
hi hi nice map
but some small stuf XD

normal-ish change to easy-ish
Mod later

Hard-ish:
first off all
hard-ish change it to normal-ish and change the overal dif etc.

offset 14.657
add a new timing section @ with offset 46.170
and i do not agree with the big break in the start but maby that wil come later :)

01:03:25 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes
01:00:25 (2) - ^
01:01:86 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:06:94 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:07:00 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^ the spacing confusing me
01:08:85 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^
01:12:14 (1) - slider starts @ 01:12:48
add a note @01:13:64 -
instead of a break a spinne here 01:27:15 ends 01:28:53
01:35:28 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 1 tick forward 1/6 notes
01:38:96 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) -split in 2 combo's combo 1 01:38:96 (1) - combo 2 01:40:11 (1)
01:54:04 (2) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes and put a reverse in it and dont forget the distance between 01:54:50 (3) -
01:54:04 (2,3,4) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes


*feeds Haisha_ a star*

edit: youre tag..
Tags: yeahyeahyeahhh REALY RANDOM 0_o
Topic Starter
Kerensa

naruti wrote:

hi hi nice map
but some small stuf XD

normal-ish change to easy-ish
Mod later

Hard-ish:
first off all
hard-ish change it to normal-ish and change the overal dif etc.

offset 14.657
add a new timing section @ with offset 46.170
and i do not agree with the big break in the start but maby that wil come later :)

01:03:25 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes
01:00:25 (2) - ^
01:01:86 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:06:94 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:07:00 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^ the spacing confusing me
01:08:85 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^
01:12:14 (1) - slider starts @ 01:12:48
add a note @01:13:64 -
instead of a break a spinne here 01:27:15 ends 01:28:53
01:35:28 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 1 tick forward 1/6 notes
01:38:96 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) -split in 2 combo's combo 1 01:38:96 (1) - combo 2 01:40:11 (1)
01:54:04 (2) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes and put a reverse in it and dont forget the distance between 01:54:50 (3) -
01:54:04 (2,3,4) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes


*feeds Haisha_ a star*

edit: youre tag..
Tags: yeahyeahyeahhh REALY RANDOM 0_o

AHHH!!!! naruti your so mean!!! i brain can't take all that in!!! ><

i curse you == but thankyou anyways :D your so kind ^^ *PFFT NOT!* JUST JOKING! i curse you == lol
naruti

haisha_ wrote:

naruti wrote:

hi hi nice map
but some small stuf XD

normal-ish change to easy-ish
Mod later

Hard-ish:
first off all
hard-ish change it to normal-ish and change the overal dif etc.

offset 14.657
add a new timing section @ with offset 46.170
and i do not agree with the big break in the start but maby that wil come later :)

01:03:25 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes
01:00:25 (2) - ^
01:01:86 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:06:94 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:07:00 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^ the spacing confusing me
01:08:85 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^
01:12:14 (1) - slider starts @ 01:12:48
add a note @01:13:64 -
instead of a break a spinne here 01:27:15 ends 01:28:53
01:35:28 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 1 tick forward 1/6 notes
01:38:96 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) -split in 2 combo's combo 1 01:38:96 (1) - combo 2 01:40:11 (1)
01:54:04 (2) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes and put a reverse in it and dont forget the distance between 01:54:50 (3) -
01:54:04 (2,3,4) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes


*feeds Haisha_ a star*

edit: youre tag..
Tags: yeahyeahyeahhh REALY RANDOM 0_o

AHHH!!!! naruti your so mean!!! i brain can't take all that in!!! ><

i curse you == but thankyou anyways :D your so kind ^^ *PFFT NOT!* JUST JOKING! i curse you == lol
~oh NO IM DOOMED ~
no more MR. Nice guy here take it and go
Download: Capsule - Sugarless GiRLS (haisha_) [Hard-ish].osu

Alse did 00:28:740 til 00:43:28 where you had that huge break use it if you want to
Download: Capsule - Sugarless GiRLS (haisha_) [Hard-ish + instrumental].osu
rename the dificulty in whatever you like :)

its your choice wich 1 you use in youre map with my part in it or.......
its all just YOU YOU and YOU

~dont curse me again :cry: ~

oh yeah.. feed me some kudosu

Topic Starter
Kerensa

naruti wrote:

haisha_ wrote:

naruti wrote:

hi hi nice map
but some small stuf XD

normal-ish change to easy-ish
Mod later

Hard-ish:
first off all
hard-ish change it to normal-ish and change the overal dif etc.

offset 14.657
add a new timing section @ with offset 46.170
and i do not agree with the big break in the start but maby that wil come later :)

01:03:25 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes
01:00:25 (2) - ^
01:01:86 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:06:94 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:07:00 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^ the spacing confusing me
01:08:85 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^
01:12:14 (1) - slider starts @ 01:12:48
add a note @01:13:64 -
instead of a break a spinne here 01:27:15 ends 01:28:53
01:35:28 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 1 tick forward 1/6 notes
01:38:96 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) -split in 2 combo's combo 1 01:38:96 (1) - combo 2 01:40:11 (1)
01:54:04 (2) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes and put a reverse in it and dont forget the distance between 01:54:50 (3) -
01:54:04 (2,3,4) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes


*feeds Haisha_ a star*

edit: youre tag..
Tags: yeahyeahyeahhh REALY RANDOM 0_o

AHHH!!!! naruti your so mean!!! i brain can't take all that in!!! ><

i curse you == but thankyou anyways :D your so kind ^^ *PFFT NOT!* JUST JOKING! i curse you == lol
~oh NO IM DOOMED ~
no more MR. Nice guy here take it and go
[attachment=1:830ed]Capsule - Sugarless GiRLS (haisha_) [Hard-ish].osu[/attachment:830ed]

Alse did 00:28:740 til 00:43:28 where you had that huge break use it if you want to
[attachment=0:830ed]Capsule - Sugarless GiRLS (haisha_) [Hard-ish + instrumental].osu[/attachment:830ed]
rename the dificulty in whatever you like :)

its your choice wich 1 you use in youre map with my part in it or.......
its all just YOU YOU and YOU

~dont curse me again :cry: ~

oh yeah.. feed me some kudosu

wahhh!!! naruti hates me now ><
Lissette
Hi!

Suggestions

Normal-ish
00:16:73 (1) - Spacing
00:17:65 (1) - ^
00:19:27 (1) - ^
00:20:19 (1) - ^
00:24:81 (1) - ^
00:48:47 (1) - ^
01:03:31 (1) - ^
01:17:45 (1) - ^
I think you can't put jumps on normal n_n

Hard-ish
00:22:27 (4) - spacing
00:45:82 - remove that break
00:53:21 - ^
01:13:52 - ^
01:16:99 (1) - spacing wrong with respect 01:15:08 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) this can confuse

nice map.... star
Topic Starter
Kerensa

Lissette wrote:

Hi!

Suggestions

Normal-ish
00:16:73 (1) - Spacing
00:17:65 (1) - ^
00:19:27 (1) - ^
00:20:19 (1) - ^
00:24:81 (1) - ^
00:48:47 (1) - ^
01:03:31 (1) - ^
01:17:45 (1) - ^
I think you can't put jumps on normal n_n

Hard-ish
00:22:27 (4) - spacing
00:45:82 - remove that break
00:53:21 - ^
01:13:52 - ^
01:16:99 (1) - spacing wrong with respect 01:15:08 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) this can confuse

nice map.... star

thankyou lissete ^^ it helped me alot ^^
AdvanceBoy
Hello~

Real song and group name: "capsule - Sugarless GiRL" :3

Hmm... in general, it's a good map ;)

[Timing]


BPM: 129,5
Offset: 13.038

Renember:After any BPM-Offset change, please click in the "File - Edit - Options - Timing - Web - Help" panel: Timing ---> Resnap All Notes

[Easy-ish]

Resnap all notes using Beat Snap Divisor: 1/2, after that...

00:27:40 (1) - Starts in the next red tick
00:38:05 (3,4,1) - Not same spaced as 00:36:20 (1,2,3)

*--If you want a perfecly-spaced rectangle...--*
00:46:86 (3,4) - 2 grids to the left
00:50:56 (7,8,9) - 2 grids to the right
*00:50:56 (7,8,9) - Space using Distance Snap?
00:52:42 (1,2) - 2 grids to the left
00:55:20 (4,5) - 4 grids to the right
00:57:05 (6) - 2 grids to the right
*00:56:59 - add a circle?
*00:57:98 (7,8,9,10) - Space using Distance Snap? (that part break the rectangle... :( )

00:59:83 (1) - ends in the next white tick
01:10:72 (1) - ends in the next red tick
*01:14:42 (x) - add a circle?
*01:14:65 (x) - ^
*01:01:45 (1,2), 01:02:84 (5,1), 01:08:86 (1,2) - Not so sure about those jumps, it can be a little confusing
01:27:40 (x) - add a spinner, ends 01:29:02 OR in 01:28:55 and add a circle at 01:29:02

[Normal-ish]

Renember resnap all notes using Beat Snap Divisor 1/2 and change the BPM and Offset

*00:15:81 (1) - according to the DS (Distance Snap), 1 grid too close to 00:14:89 (1)
00:17:67 (1,1) - a bit long and unsuspected jump for Normal (imo)
00:20:68 (2) - bad stackted with the previous slider
00:25:77 (3) - 1 grid to the right
00:46:62 (1) - ends in the red tick
00:46:62 (1,2,3,4,5) - all those whistles... it just don't fell good...
00:57:28 (1) - start in the next red tick?
*01:11:41 (4) - Hmm... delete it (Also delete 01:11:64 (5) ) and make there a slider, what ends in 01:11:76 (blue tick)
*01:15:12 (1,1,1) - hitsounds... hmmhm... I don't know...
*01:17:43 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - don't seems good spaced
01:20:68 (1) - can you put a reverse arrow? OR a circle in the next red tick?
01:35:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - finish overload
01:38:98 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - all those whistles... it just don't fell good...

[Hard-ish]

Renember resnap all notes using Beat Snap Divisor 1/2 and change the BPM and Offset

The first part seems a bit badly spaced :( (00:14:65 to 00:27:12) and 00:46:63 to 01:06:25 seems a bit badly spaced too
00:28:74 (1) - sorry, that spinner is illegal, beacuse, according to the rules, a spinner needs what it can be passed using Auto, with 2000 Bonus , with that spinner, Auto only can get 1000 Bonus (it's too short)
00:37:36 (1,2,1,2) - 1/1 beat forward
00:42:36 - why that sound sample set change and Ki Time? 0_o
00:45:00 - please, inherit that timing seccion :<
00:45:82 - too short and unnesary break (?)
00:46:62 (1) - ends in the previous red tick
01:08:86 (1,2) - that's a big jump...
01:10:72 (1,2) - ^
01:11:87 (x) -add a circle?
01:16:97 (1) - ends in the previous red tick
01:21:37 (x) -^
01:14:85 - please delete that timing seccion :<
01:28:53 - ^
01:35:22 (1,2,3) - those are big jumps...
01:50:79 (4) - back to the previous white tick plz
01:52:42 (x) - add a circle?
01:55:89 (x) -^
01:57:74 (1) - it's too short


Woosh... That's it! But also, I have to tell you what all dfficulties needs the same timings seccions and Ki Times. Also: "tags: naruti", "(online) tags: yeahyeahyeahhh" whyyyyyyy?


*=Small detail/suggestion
"?" at the end=suggestion

PS:Sorry for my bad inglish :oops:
PS2:You want curse me? XD
PS3:Ah, I forgot your star, here is:

STAR!!
Cillu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
minyeob
How about using 1/4 beatsnap divisor..?

[Easy-ish]
I think chorus part should be mapped.

[Normal-ish]
00:46:63 (1) - Ending point's timing is not good...... Decrease the length please. This slider should be ended from the blue tick.
01:12:14 (1) - Extend 4/5 beats please. (You have to extend 5 times by using 1/4 beat snap divisor)

[Hard-ish]
00:28:74 (1) - This spinner is unrankable. (Too short) Rankable spinner= At least 2000 bouns on auto.
00:45:07 (Break) - This break is unnecessary.
00:46:63 (1) - This slider should be ended from the red tick.
00:53:09 - This break is unnecessary
01:57:85 (1) - Unrankable spinner.
tieff
BPM: 129.50 I think.

[Easy-ish]
00:48:71 (5) - New combo.
00:56:12 (5) - ^
01:14:66 (1,2) - Spacing.

[Normal-ish]
Why offset 13?
All good.

[Hard-ish]
Why offset 30?
Mmm... All good.

Star. Nice map, just fix BMP and offset.
Topic Starter
Kerensa

tieff wrote:

BPM: 129.50 I think.

[Easy-ish]
00:48:71 (5) - New combo.
00:56:12 (5) - ^
01:14:66 (1,2) - Spacing.

[Normal-ish]
Why offset 13?
All good.

[Hard-ish]
Why offset 30?
Mmm... All good.

Star. Nice map, just fix BMP and offset.
what does the offset actually change within the song?

NEVERMIND i found out why :)
thankyou
Happy7Satsuki
:) WOW~!!! im adddicted
great map!! xDD
Alice
Yay for capsule <3

Really good map.. Those lines are really suggestions, I can't find enormous errors so I just suggest some things about spacing.
Easy
Some note aren't snapped :?
00:19:51 (1,2,,1,2,3) - I think it looks better if you place that like 00:14:87.

Normal
00:55:88 (1,1,1,1,1) - look good like that:

But actually if you don't think it's a good spacing you can modify it, I'm principally talking about placing the third (1) to the "center".

Hard
Personal taste:
I tried to do bigger hitcircles and I think it look better for this map.. But totally ok if you don't want to do bigger ones, that's really my tastes..

Like already said it's really suggestions.. That map's really good!

Star! :D
heintsi
nice upbeat song and map :) star~~
can't mod cause i lack the skills :D
An-Don
Wow its very nice :D
+star ;D
al2e10
Hi , I have some opinion with your map ~~

[Hard]
00:30:167 (1-5) can you change to "clap,none,clap,none,clap" ~ It is better `
00:31:094 (1-5) also ~
01:03:294 (1-5) also
01:10:708 (1-5) also
01:15:109 (1-4, 1-4)remove new combo and the problem with the first ~
01:17:657 (1-5,1-5,1-3) also ~
STOP !!.........
Many clap for all the time
you can make this for all ~
or
Put another sound for the clap note
~

[Normal]
First , the problem with Hard also!! it is too horrible
00:14:878 (1,1,1) remove new combo for another two
00:55:881 (1,1,1,1,1) also ~ for another fore
01:15:109 (1,1,1) also for another two
01:18:816 (1)remove new combo
01:19:279 (1) also & add at 01:19:742
01:20:206 (1) also
01:20:669 (1) also

[Ease]
That find ...
But the problem for the clap also !!

[ALL]
that good ~~
But you can make it better ~
Change the clap sound

STARRED
yeahyeahyeahhh
More IRC mods!
Jinxy
[Easy]
01:10:59 (1) - Extend by one beat, so it ends on 01:11:86
01:41:75 (1) - Extending this would be good, but I have no idea where it should end.

[Normal]
00:57:27 (1) - This spinner seems to start too early, shorten it by one beat then move it one beat back, so it starts from 00:57:73 to 00:58:89.
01:11:17 (2,3,4) - Disable grid and distance snap and stack these under the end of the slider.
01:12:21 (1) - Extend by one beat.
01:24:83 - The kiai time is in the middle of a break. What the hell? Make the kiai start at 01:28:77.
01:36:65 (1) - Stack under the end of the slider.

[Hard]
No problems, but the lack of a spinner irks me.



A very nice map, starred.
XepherX3
nice map

[hard]
01:27:155 [*] place a spinner here make it end on 01:28:545

starred
Azure_Kite
Green = Suggestion Red = Fix this

[Easy]
00:59:82 (1) - Make this end on the white tick

[Normal]
No problems found :)

[Hard]
00:57:04 (3) - I'd maybe snap this to the slider's end? the other one, I mean.


A great beatmap, love the song, and there's really very little I could provide. Starred!
Topic Starter
Kerensa

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Green = Suggestion Red = Fix this

[Easy]
00:59:82 (1) - Make this end on the white tick

[Normal]
No problems found :)

[Hard]
00:57:04 (3) - I'd maybe snap this to the slider's end? the other one, I mean.


A great beatmap, love the song, and there's really very little I could provide. Starred!
done ^^ thankyou Aaron
gdeath
random star :)
Leimilia
nice one :o
orioncomet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
eee
This map is very nice, good job

one thing:
are you sure the song isn't called Sugarless GiRL
I'm pretty sure it is...

please rename and you should be on your way.
EEeee
Easy
well nothing bad in this diff, maybe u could add a break, but i highly doubt u have to ^^, nice Easy

Normal
Wow, this looks nice, just re-add ur breaks

Hard
Fix ur break time in this diff, it's off
00:37:34 (1) - remove new combo, add new combo to the next note
01:01:44 (1) - remove new combo, add new combo to next note
01:08:85 (5) - new combo
Topic Starter
Kerensa
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hikato
Easy: Seems fine~
Normal: 15 sec break? you should map the break.
Hard: Fine~

Suggestions:
Normal:
Overall difficulty around 5 and size 2

Everything else seems fine. Nice map. :D
arien666
All grid levels what I said are 2

[Easy]
01:25:77(Kiai Start time) - Change 'Kiai Start time' to 01:29:009

[Normal]
00:16:73(1) - Align with 00:14:87(1)
00:20:66(2) - Move 1 grid right(or you can overlap this note on 00:20:20(1) slider's end)
00:26:69(1) - [Suggestion] How about align with 00:25:76(3) slider's reverse mark?(00:25:997)
00:26:92(2) - ^
00:27:15(3) - ^
00:33:41(10) - New combo
00:37:11(19) - ^
01:29:70(1) - Move 1 grid down
01:29:93(2) - ^
01:30:16(3) - ^
01:31:55(1) - ^
01:34:33(1) - ^

[Hard]
00:54:72(2) - [Suggestion] How about align with 00:54:02(1) slider's end?
00:55:41(3) - ^
00:59:12(3) - [Suggestion] How about align with 00:58:43(2) slider's end?
01:05:84(2) - [Suggestion] How about align with 01:05:14(1) slider's end?

That's all what I found...
Good song :3
and Star this :3

ps.post reply sucks when I wanna write over than 15(?) lines...
Mukku
Paum

Streams o/
Eddycted
Hey haisha_!

First of all, capsule is just awesome. <3

Here's some suggestions:

[Easy]
I'd lower hp drain by 2. Easy should be very forgiving. Other than that, I like it (for an easy). ^^

[Normal]
There should be no jumps on Normal. Please make sure everything is distance snapped.

00:37:81 (7) - New combo here.
00:39:89 (13) - Spacing.
00:59:82 (1,2) - Align these horizontally.
01:11:17 (2,3,4) - Place under the slider end point (you need to disable grid snap to do this).
01:19:74 (2) - Make this horizontal (down 1 unit on grid).

[Hard]
I'd increase the hp drain by a little bit, and maybe the overall difficulty too.

00:14:64 (1,2,3) - Distance snap is not consistent here.

And a star for you!
NoHitter
Overall
Delete unused .osb file in the song folder

Easy
01:12:793 (1) - Move this to 01:12:561
01:18:816 (1) - Remove new combo
01:23:912 (1) - ^
01:24:839 (7) - Add new combo
01:25:766 (1) - Remove new combo.

Normal
00:34:105 (4) - IMO, add new combo, but it's ok.
00:35:032 (1) - If you followed ^; Remove new combo
00:36:190 (7) - If you followed ^; Add new combo
00:39:897 (7) - ^
00:52:870 (3) - Spacing check
01:12:213 (1) - Move to 01:12:561 and extend to 01:13:719 ; And remove the break

Hard
00:28:545 (2) - Change to spinner to 00:29:472???
01:01:441 (2) - Add new combo
01:01:905 (1) - Remove new combo
01:11:988 (1) - IMO, move to 01:11:866 and extend by 1/4 tick.
01:42:677 (2) - Maybe make it into spinner up to 01:43:372 and make the end part of the spinner with no volume.
Nharox
First of all, you should cut the mp3 or use a shorter version because there are almost 3 unused minutes and you can save peppy some traffic. ;) And I noticed that you often use combos which doesn't make sense sometimes. 00:43:372 (1) on Hard for example.

[Normal]

00:24:839 (1) - Edit -> Reverse Selection

Overall it's good for your first (?) map. ;)
alvisto
EASY
Good
01:40:036 (1) - A bit hard for newbie ?

NORMAL
00:14:087 (1,1,1) - Hitsound suggestion -> Remove claps at the start of these 3 sliders
00:18:121 - Clap at this exact point of slider (the U-turn there)
00:21:059 (2) - Clap at end of slider
00:25:030 (2) - Remove clap at start of slider
01:17:042 (1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1) - I would suggest don't spam clap here. Maybe add claps to the appropiate white ticks ?

HARD
00:16:962 - No clap here ? XD
00:17:042 (2) - Remove clap ?
00:18:012 (5) - clap
Basically I would suggest you follow a pattern of clap here, like clap every 2 white ticks ? But it's up to you. =D (and I won't mod hitsounds afterthis =P)

This is a good map ! Star !
DoubleDango
Cropped @ 1:47 (128kb/s encoded with LAME)

Added ID3 Tags.

Download: 04 Sugarless GiRL.mp3
ouranhshc
i like it, i love the map
Fuuko
Clapping:

Easy :

0:25:71 (1);
0:40:823 (3);
0:59:820(1).

Normal :

0:21,132 (1,2);
0:29:708 (1,4,7);
0:32:947 (2,3);
0:36:190 (1,2,3); <- This one is just a hint, but it looks so cool with claps. :3
0:39:897 (1,2);
0:40:823 (3); <- This one you don't clap. Add a "finish" sound to this.
0:50:322 (1,2); <- Not really necessary, but then again...
1:01:441 (1,2);
1:03:758 (2);
1:08:854 (1).

Hard :

I tried to find errors but...this is awesome. I can't check for claps here, really. It's perfect.

Well...fix just these :

0:22:986 (4);
0:24:970 (4);
0:55:881 (1,2);




I dunno why this isn't ranked yet. But well, hope it get ranked soon. Like, now. lol
Btw, am I the only one to think that this hard is insane? It is insanely good, at least.
Nice work, Haisha~ :3
I don't even need to say this won a star. ;3

Ps: Here are the pics.

http://up.ppy.sh/files/sugarlessgirlbackground1.jpg
http://up.ppy.sh/files/sugarlessgirlbackground2.jpg
DoubleDango

FuukoLover wrote:

Ps: Here are the pics.

http://up.ppy.sh/files/sugarlessgirlbackground1.jpg
http://up.ppy.sh/files/sugarlessgirlbackground2.jpg
I don't like :P.
Let me find/make some better pictures.

770 x 473 (Same as source image)

Just added a crosshatch filter and added some text.

Fuuko
Here they are...>_>;
I tested, and looked great. Dunno if you will actually like it, but then again...

Edit :

Here is the mp3 I edited.
Check it, if you want.






Download: capsule - Sugarless GiRL .mp3
DoubleDango
Length: 1:47
Beatrate: 128 kb/s encoded with LAME
ID3 Tags: All but cover art (optimum size since you're capped D:)




You can request me to make some other BG if you like, or the beatcircle and stuff.

EDIT:

Have to rename the mp3 to the same name as the old one, there's a space at the end.

"capsule - Sugarless GiRL .mp3"

Download: capsule - Sugarless GiRL.zip

Download: capsule - Sugarless GiRL -15DB.rar
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