nanda2009 wrote:

straight sliders win. :3


As for Joon's mod, I don't really get what you meant about this :



explanation?

anyway, updated.

Cancel wrote:

As promised, the mod from my M4M queue~!

[General]

To be honest, I noticed you Copy-Paste alot of parts! You should do that less. It would make the beatmap boring if you keep doing it.
Too much use of whistle. When you use it too much, it can get irritating. Make a little more variation.
You needed backgrounds, so I collected some for you > http://puu.sh/3r4BR.rar Thanks :3
I would like to see the diffs called Beginner, Standard and Advanced, because they are from a rhythm game.

[Easy]

00:04:831 - 00:07:734 / 00:11:024 - 00:13:928 - Breaks like these aren't needed. Remove them and map those parts too. ok

00:16:250 (4,5,1) - Make it a straight line, like this: I made it look like a curve because it'll make another variation to the pattern. But I guess I'll do this.



After you've done that, move the following sliders and beats, so that the DS is correct.

01:57:670 - Delete bookmark It won't affect how the map play, imo. so, no.

Suprisingly, thats all I can say! Good job~! owo b Thanks.

[Normal]

00:04:831 - 00:07:734 / 00:11:024 - 00:13:928 - The same thing as in Easy. ok

01:28:250 - Add a beat or move spinner to here I'll add a circle on it. I had done that on the other part of the map, afterall

01:48:766 (4) - Move this slider onto the beat correctly (''._.) err, wat? I don't really get it but, stacked with 01:46:831 (1)

01:57:670 - Delete bookmark Same reason as Easy

Wow, this diff is better than the Easy! I could take lessions from you! (With the sliders, I mean. They are beautiful) Thanks.

[Hard]

Change Circle Size to 4. Its much better for an Hard in 2013. Small-sized circles are sexier that those CS4.

01:24:766 (5) - Make a good slab, like this:





01:33:089 - 01:34:250 - Fill this part up. Do something like this: Weird, there won't be enough space to recover from spinners. No.





X-Y for 01:33:089 (1) =
X-Y for 01:33:476 (2) =
X-Y for 01:33:863 (3) =

01:42:960 (6) - Make it a slab like this: No. I want to make more pattern variations, I already done this many times at the map.



01:57:670 - Delete bookmark :V

[Overall]

Good map! Only the hitsounds and the Copy-Pasting needs more work. So with that said: Thanks :3

yurunneram wrote:

EASY

00:55:734 (4) - the position is a bit low. yeah. forgot to copy 01:08:121 (4) to there. Thanks for pointing this :3

NORMAL

00:10:057 (4,5) - The position's a bit off. Move 4 to x128 y112 and 5 to x52 y56 wat? It's not.

HARD

Nothing wrong

AAAAHHHH OAO Gomene I couldn't find anything.. I had a bad day I think it's wrecking my brain I hope it'll get better ><" Gomen please don't give me kudosu.. k

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~ Thanks :3/

tetsutaro wrote:

From the people who brought you

comes this mod.

[Easy]
Oh glorious Easy may your creator be blessed. Automatic no-crappy-Easy star. I always thought that it's crappy lol
00:18:573 (3) and 00:24:767 (3) and 00:29:411 (4) and 01:51:476 (3) - End 1 to 2 beats early and note at original end. fixed
00:55:347 (3,4) - Move (3) and (4) start 1/2 earlier to match vocal -->"夕(1)日(2)に照ら(3)さ(4s)れ Candy Shine(4e)". Similar to 01:07:734 (3,4) and 01:38:702 (3,4) I like to. But sudden timing change (almost every note falls at 1/1 timing, anyway) can cause confusion for beginners

[Normal]
00:22:057 (4) 01:54:960 (4) - Less arched would look better (about 4~8 pixels less) This is quite hard to do because I want to keep the distance of it to (3). But I'll try and see what I can do to these
01:13:928 (1) - Start 01:14:315 or 01:14:508 and note at original start worse than the current one. There's no vocal or any sound there.
01:28:057 (3,4,1) - Move (3) and (4) and (1) start 1/2 earlier to match vocal, or remove (4) and let (1) start there for better spinner usage. I already used this kind of pattern at 01:12:766 (6,1). So, I don't think it's necessary to change this. Especially that it doesn't that confusing.

[Hard]
01:28:250 (6,1) - Remove (6) and let (1) start there for better spinner usage. I don't think it's necessary to change this. Especially that it doesn't that confusing. And, it's on Hard difficulty
01:44:508 (2,1) - Remove (2) and let (1) start there for better spinner usage. I don't think it's necessary to change this. Especially that it doesn't that confusing. And, it's on a Hard difficulty

ax_pokl wrote:

From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix. Will do.

[General]
I think the map is good enough to rank, so I star it. kthx

[Easy]
prefect map! :3
00:20:121 (4) - nc(new combo)? Well yeah, it's a start of a new phrase, done
00:20:895 (1) - no nc? ^
00:32:508 (6,1) - ^ Nah. New phrase started at (1)
01:53:024 (4,1) - ^ ^
01:59:218 (4) - ^ It's the last song, it doesn't indicate new phrase

[Normal]
(It is a little hard to use cs=4 in a Normal beatmap) but it's good
00:49:734 (3) - add a Whistle at the start and end? Added it on the repeater

[Hard]
(It is a little hard to use cs=5 in a Normal beatmap) but it's good

Good map, good luck. Thanks :3

waxman wrote:

HI,I'm waxman NOT AIrman.


[Hard]

change to CS 4 (high suggestion)　if you want higher user rating. Big CS iz ugly.

00:36:573 (3,4,5) - Do you like this? Nah. I'll keep the stack

image

00:42:766 (4,5,6) - Do you like this? if you want to change to this, BPM ×0.75 Well, I don't really get it. :v

image

Good map! Thanks :3

Good Luck.

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! well testplay4mod XD from my queue

EASY

00:38:702 (1,2) - maybe after these 2 notes is better making a slider, instead of other 2 notes 00:39:863 (3,4) - just a suggestion to change a bit pattern. imo it will break the rhythm. The player won't hit the button at 00:40:637 because it's the tail of the slider, if the player is a uber-beginner. It'll break his rhythm and there'll be a bigger chance for 100 at 00:41:411. So, no.
00:46:056 (3,4) - replace with a slider ^
00:51:476 (2,3) - ^
and also in some other part of the song there is this thing, but I think it's ok also if you leave it as it is XD Yupyup. ^

NORMAL

00:43:153 (4,5,6,7) - maybe replace them with a reverse slider from 00:43:153 - to 00:43:928 - it'll destroy the flow. But ohwell for the sake of the beginner-friendliness
01:38:315 (3,4) - move them at the same high of 01:36:960 (6,7) - It'll look sexy, but the DS between (4,5) and other objects would be different. So, no

HARD

00:07:927 (2) - move it to x:220 y:100 That placement is intended, look at 00:01:541 (1,2)
00:27:476 (4,5) - replace them with a slider There's already a slider at 00:28:444 (7), I don't think this map need more sliders.

well this map is really good! I couldn't find lots of things, so star, and good luck for rank thanks :3

1. Karin on the Artist field should be capitalized, make sure to fix that.
2. Combo Colours through your difficulties are inconsistent, make sure to use the same colours.
3. Disable the Countdown on all of the difficulties since you're not really using it.

1. I highly suggest you to reduce HP Drain and AR by 1 tick, they're somehow too high for the easiest difficulty of the mapset.

1. 01:26:895 (2,3,4,5) - Too many circles in a row might be hard to play for beginners, what about changing these into 2 sliders? Would play much better actually on this difficulty.
2. 01:55:346 (4,5,1) - I'd make this spacing straight like you did on the rest of the other patterns on this difficulty, otherwise it would be weird.

1. HP Drain -1 would play much better here.

1. 00:32:121 (5,6) - 3 circles in a row might feel a bit hard for a Normal due to this BPM, I'd suggest you to change these 2 circles into a short slider.

1. HP Drain -1 would play much better here.

1. 00:33:476 - It really feels like you're missing a note here.
2. 01:15:863 (5) - I'd prefer if you actually move this note above the screen instead of stacking it under the previous one.
3. 01:33:089 - Add a note here to follow the bass of the song.
4. 01:33:476 - Same as above.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. Karin on the Artist field should be capitalized, make sure to fix that. :>
2. Combo Colours through your difficulties are inconsistent, make sure to use the same colours. fixed
3. Disable the Countdown on all of the difficulties since you're not really using it. It's automatically disabled because there's not enough space to insert the countdown.

~Easy~

1. I highly suggest you to reduce HP Drain and AR by 1 tick, they're somehow too high for the easiest difficulty of the mapset. sure.

1. 01:26:895 (2,3,4,5) - Too many circles in a row might be hard to play for beginners, what about changing these into 2 sliders? Would play much better actually on this difficulty. I don't really like this kind of pattern orz. But I guess you're right
2. 01:55:346 (4,5,1) - I'd make this spacing straight like you did on the rest of the other patterns on this difficulty, otherwise it would be weird. forgot to fix that lol

~Normal~

1. HP Drain -1 would play much better here. Knowing that the HP drain is quite recognizable, I guess this'll be a good fix to make this map's star indicator lower.

1. 00:32:121 (5,6) - 3 circles in a row might feel a bit hard for a Normal due to this BPM, I'd suggest you to change these 2 circles into a short slider. Sure. It's the only usage of that pattern in the map anyway

~Hard~

1. HP Drain -1 would play much better here. imo there's no difference between HD6 or HD7, most of players won't be easily failed on this map anyway.

1. 00:33:476 - It really feels like you're missing a note here. Now you mention it. I felt like that space needs to be filled
2. 01:15:863 (5) - I'd prefer if you actually move this note above the screen instead of stacking it under the previous one. That part only contains a finish-like sound, without any synth sample (?) used there, which is the reason why I stacked it. (idkidon'tgetitmyself)
3. 01:33:089 - Add a note here to follow the bass of the song. There's no space between spinners and the area that you pointed. And I don't want to move the spinners
4. 01:33:476 - Same as above. Same as above.

Pretty simple and good map. Thank you.

Move it to Pending, don't forget. Sure.

1. The timing between your difficulties is inconsistent, make sure to fix this.

1. I still think HP6 on this difficulty would be better.
2. You have some unsnapped green lines, make sure to fix them properly.

1. 00:01:541 (1) - Unsnapped circle.

captin1 wrote:

timing check requested

offset 1555, +4 for hard, +14 for easy & normal (why were they different? O.o) Yeah, my mistake. fixed

good luck, love this song :3

Andrea wrote:

Recheck.

~General~

1. The timing between your difficulties is inconsistent, make sure to fix this. sure.

~Hard~

1. I still think HP6 on this difficulty would be better. And I still insist to not changing the HP
2. You have some unsnapped green lines, make sure to fix them properly. fixed

1. 00:01:541 (1) - Unsnapped circle. I though Resnap option will resnap it. Anyway, fixed.

Winek wrote:

From my modding queue!

Easy
I think there is too much repetition! I mean circles placed the same way: 00:16:264 (4,5,1)
Try making different form, triangle, stack, line, etc... those are intended, to make it to resembles each other, but I guess you're right, it's kind of boring

Normal
00:04:264 (5) - Add a spinner after this note. No, putting a spinner will make the map difficult, especially if I put the end of the spinner at 00:07:361, it's the only part that imo suitable for the end of the spinner

Hard
I see repetition too much often... Like i said, try to differ the form of sliders and circles. same as Easy

Once you have done that you should probabily hop in a BAT modding queue to get a bubble. I'm trying, it's difficult to get them, though
If i was a BAT, i would give y'a bubble. I promise.
It already got modded a bunch of time, so it's really great. ty