hi
pm mod request, o: Finally i managed it to dl xD
[General]
I suggest following settings:
Easy: OD 2, AR 3, HP 2
Normal: OD 4, AR 5, HP 4
Hard: OD 6, AR 8, OD 6
Insane: OD 7, AR 9, OD 7
HARD: Audio-Leadin is different to the other difficulties, fix all to 0.5 seconds!
[Easy]
00:06:805 - I don't really approve this slider here, it sounds very odd, especially for an Easy diff, could be very frustrating for newbie players. Try this instead:
http://puu.sh/3VfGO.jpg 00:06:955 - Circle, 00:07:255 - Slider start, 00:07:705 - Slider end. I think you should fix that!
00:08:155 - Same for this section,
http://puu.sh/3VfJT.jpg, my suggestion has 1/2 in it, but still, I think it sounds better than the current one, and a beginner can catch this easier than the current version.
00:31:855 (3,4,1) - Just something nazi, can you manage to get a triangle pattern here? I prefer this to the current version, because it, i thinnk is, supposed to be a triangle.
00:33:055 - A rhythm suggestion again, try to reverse 00:33:055 (1) - this slider, and add 00:34:255 - a circle here. It follows the guitar in the background really well, the lyrics are too complex for easy!
00:42:655 (1) - Reversing this one isn't a good idea, because you don't lead in the next long vocal, which is quite important imo. So don't reverse it, at the end it should look like this:
http://puu.sh/3VfTe.jpg00:52:405 (3,4) - What are you following with these two exactly?
Well, really nice sliderart you've got it, but the rhythm is more or less a mess.. It would be a good idea to follow the suggestions above, and go over your diff again, and if you think something looks a bit odd, immediately change it, to improve the overall rhythm. (sometimes it sounds really odd to my ears :s)
[Normal]
00:05:155 (2) - Can you explain me this not-hitsound? xD I think it's the same as before, so add normal, I suppose
00:06:805 (1) - Rhythm suggestion again, it's a bit messed up as well 00:06:805 (1,2) - delete these two, 00:06:955 - add a circle, and add a slider from 00:07:255 - to 00:07:555 - !
00:08:005 (7,8,9) - If you fixed ^, apply the same to here! at the end, it should look like this, and the rhythm is much more clean now.
00:09:205 (1) - This sounds off again, I'm sure you can find a better position, try to get some ideas from the suggestions above
00:11:605 (1) - I think the main mistake you've made is, that you start most of your sliders on the red tick, which isn't really a good idea, whether in normal nor easy. Try to get an easy beat,
while you place the sliders on the white ticks, and some circles on the red ticks! 00:21:955 (2) - Delete this one,00:21:805 - add a circle here though! Sounsd better, because it fits the lyrics much better. 00:22:105 - Don't forget to add a circle here, it will make everything even better.
00:16:255 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1) - Really nice rhythm here! As you can see, you placed most things on the WHITE ticks, what is very important and a good idea here! Try to make it as perfect as here.00:43:105 (2) - Nazi - it would look neater if you rotate it by around 10°
Don't forget to replace!
00:47:605 (2) - Red tick again, fix please, same reasons.
The Kiai: The first part of the kiai is quite messed up again, whereas you use a totally different rhythm in the second half. It should definetly stay the same! You used many red ticks again in the first part! Try to clean it up yourself first, and call me back to give you some further ideas, if it didn't improve. But i'm sure it will.
01:09:505 (2,2,2,2) - I think reversed mini sliders fit better than these ones, don't you think so?
01:13:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This might be a bit hard for a normal, but it's your decision! It's good mapped so, if you are fine with it, leave it :3
Same as easy, the rhythm is a bit messed up sometimes, but i'm sure you can improve it with the suggestions above, but it's not bad, it has good ideas! But I can understand it, the song is a bit complicated to map.
[Wan's
Insane hard]
00:14:305 (2) - If you want to make something difficult here, stack this 00:14:905 (2) - to this one, but don't leave it as it currently is, the spacing is too confusing for a hard in my opinion. My suggestion should be okay though.
00:21:805 (2) - You can improve that blanket, just take the last white point and move it a bit downwards.
00:26:605 (2) - mhh, blanket again. just aesthetics.
00:35:455 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - looks nice, but doesn't follow the background nor the lyrics at all.
00:59:455 (1) - This is not perfectly stacked ingame, looks a bit unpolished, fix it please!
01:00:205 (2) - Because ^ is not stacked, this looks like it's too close to 1. So you should fix it
01:03:055 (6) - I feel a NC here, because he changes his voice.
01:07:705 (5) - This is definetly too close to 3. It looks not very nice ingame due that! Please move it a bit to the right.
No rhythm fails at all, because for a hard diff it's okay to map like this. The jumps are very nice and easy to get, what is very good! I really recommend you to fix those nazi stuff, to make your diff really look polished. Good job!
[Insane]
00:03:055 (4,5) - If you could make a nicer looking blanket between these two (the triplet and the first angle in the slider) I would be very pleased
00:05:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not sure if this is my headset, but how I currently hear it, this stream is somehow too early. Check it please, if it's alright with you leave it, as I said, i'm not sure. (my headset is ---)
00:08:005 (2,3,1) - Move this whole thing a bit to the left (1-2 grids), so you get the rhythm you create a bit easier.
00:09:805 (2,3) - I see what you wanted to make here, but things like this aren't really enjoyable. I suggest CTRL + G, to make a straight line, which is also funny!
00:11:305 (6) - stack with 00:09:955 (3) - ? Just some nazi.
00:18:655 (1,2,3) - good job, ereally cool!00:25:255 (1,2,3,4) - and again, I love you. Antijumps are soooo kawaiii~ if someone mods it, leave it, LEAVE IT xDD00:28:255 (1,2,3) - I don't know how you feel, but the flow is really broken here, for no reason actually. Flowbreaking can be good sometimes, but not here. Try to get a nicerlooking pattern here! You can always ask me for suggestions, but sometimes i want to let the mapper try first.
00:31:855 - What about delete this circle? To create some tension. The players will be stressed, but they have to stop here then.
00:32:005 (5) - If you apply ^, stack this one with 00:32:155 (6) - !
00:39:855 (5,6) - Well, one rhythm issue, here it is. This sounds really bad. In 1/3 parts in every kind of song, flow is very important, so you should keep it, wheter you do it with placing, or the rhythm itself.
01:20:905 (2) - Ctrl + G to make it even more difficult? XD
This looks reaaally cool, especially the kiai, I love the jumps. Gooood job ! :3
Take my star, and if you need more help, don't hesitate to ask me for some further suggestions! hueee~
gooood luck!
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