1. Easy (2.4 stars, 77 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 419 notes)
3. Normal (4.25 stars, 124 notes)
4. TK'S Muzu (4.78 stars, 383 notes)
5. TK'S Oni (4.89 stars, 569 notes)
6. Wan's Hard (5 stars, 219 notes)

On_WanWan wrote:

支持(y)(y)

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

hi title好長

dyxxzgc wrote:

卧槽这个BG....

TKSalt wrote:

hi~
can i make taiko 2diffs?(Oni/Muzu)

Foreverends wrote:

麵麵麵麵麵麵麵麵麵
shoooooooooooooooooooooooooooot

happy623 wrote:

TKSalt wrote:

hi~
can i make taiko 2diffs?(Oni/Muzu)

okay >.0

TKSalt wrote:

thanks! done the taiko diffs. => Link
i think need to timing-check this mapset. (´・ω・｀)

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

[Insane]
00:01:855 (1,2) - use 1/4 00:04:255 (1,2) - too
00:30:955 (1) - 同00:18:655 (1,2,3) - 同做法吧
01:23:455 (1) - NC and 01:23:755 (1) - remove nc

[Wan's Hard]
01:17:305 (5) - 包好4

[Normal]
00:08:005 (1,2,1) - 跟00:06:805 (1,2,3) -

[Easy]
Good , so pass

Foreverends wrote:

pm來吐槽~
感覺就玩slider的 lol

General
標題名就是他媽的坑爹 打工吧! 俺的中二妹妹與住在櫻花莊的青梅竹馬的女友進擊的革命機大作戰的青春物語果然有問題都是你們的錯禁書目錄!
nothing (y)

Insane
00:02:755 (1) - add whistle
00:06:955 (2) - 可以試下放高D然後直程整直佢,等個slider尾對住00:07:255 (1) -

呢個ww

00:07:405 (2) - 用ds1.6將佢放高少少
00:07:705 (1) - 將呢條slider扭返圓D,迎合番00:07:555 (3) -

迎合mean...

00:12:805 (1) - 放喺00:12:355 (5) - 個尾好似好D ;w;
00:14:305 (1,2,3) - 拉上一D,因為如果同00:13:855 (1) - 叠埋嘅話,玩嘅時候見到就好怪QAQ

崩的瞬間

00:21:355 (2) - 叠埋好怪;w;

try this

00:36:255 (2,3,4) - rhythm怪怪地,試下用1/3 map owo 本身都用左1/3 map 發現都係怪怪的 ;w; btw fixed

try this rhythm

01:03:655 (4,5) - ctrl g

fav也太強;w;
good luck >q<

1. Yes, add (TV Size) to your title. You should do this, because this is NOT a full version.
2. Set AudioLeadIn to 0 or 500. No need to make it TOO long.
3. .osz file seems corrupted. Probably it's a bug, because WinRAR opened this file without any problems.
4. More tags! More! At least add Silver Link because you use their animation as your BG-video.

1. That's 200 BPM song. No matter how slow SV is, it's better to use AR3. So, it will make more sense with music and your patterns.
2. 00:09:355 (3) - nazi - this slider looks like it's trying to be a blanket-slider. It's not a big problem, but I'd prefer to see something like this
3. 00:16:255 (1,2) - yup, nazi - try to make a better blanket. I know, that you can do it.. if you can't - poke me and I'll give you my code for a blanket.
4. 00:34:705 - 00:35:155 - please, remove unused green lines. There's no need to keep them here.
5. 00:36:655 (2) - tail of this slider is TOO close to (1) so, players may mistakenly hit it.
6. 00:53:755 (3) - nazi - blanket here will make your flow smoother. Just a minor suggestion, see if you like it or not/
7. 00:53:755 (3) - try to curve slider and make that slidertick louder to emphasize loud beat in music. You shouldn't ignore it!
   
   I understand, that it's really hard to map Easy diffs with 200 BPM. But rhythm could be a bit more consistent. For beginners, it will be hard to feel diffrence between 3/2 beats (example 00:01:855 (1,2) ) and 1/1 or 2/1 rhythm (example 00:03:205 (2,3,1)). So, yea..try to keep rhythm a bit easier and more consistent next time.
   
   tl'dr: there's no need to remap this diff at all. But it's too hard for beginners. Keep it in mind for your future maps.i:<

1. Song is energetic and it's begging for faster AR! So, set AR 5 and OD/HP 3-4. It will make diff a bit more challenging and enjoyable for players.
2. Man, you're overusing NCs a bit.
   • 00:08:005 (1) - this NC can be removed without any problems. Same goes for a lot of combos in this diff, for example: 00:15:055 (1) - 00:17:455 (1) - 00:19:855 (1) - and so on. NC should help us to read patterns, don't overuse them!
3. 01:13:104 (2,2) - nazi - that overlap doesn't look good at all. Please, fix it if it is possible! Your flow is cute, don't ruin it with this overlap :<
4. 01:19:255 (2) - nazi - how about moving (2) some grids down? So, shape of 01:19:855 (1) - will be reasonable. see?

1. Set HP Drain to 7. Your rhythm allows using it, Also, set OD to 6, to gt balanced diff spread.
2. 00:05:455 (1,1) - for a 200 BPM song, you could give players a little bit more time after spinner. Anyway, it's up to you.
3. 00:14:455 (1) - add a repeat to this slider. I'm sure that beat on 00:14:755 - shouldn't be ignored :<
4. 00:25:705 (8) - nazi - stack with (6) doesn't look good at all. In fact, it kinda breaks your flow. Personally, I'd like to place it somewhere else, for example here.
5. 00:32:455 (5) - i'm too picky because i love this diff - it seems like you wanted to do a triangle pattern here, right? this one looks better, right? :3 Poke me if you want my code for hi pattern!
6. 00:34:855 (6,1) - swap NCs to emphasize rhyth/instrument changes. It will fit with your pattern much better.
7. 00:35:755 - this part was mapped even in the [Easy] diff! map it here to keep consistency!
8. 00:54:505 (1) - the way how slider changes its direction is too sudden. Please, make it more readable! According to rules EVERY slider should have clean and visible path from it's beginning and till the end.
   Note: 00:59:455 (1) - same
9. 01:08:905 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I'd say that you abuse New Combos. Seriously, it looks like there's no nee to use it. at least remove some of NCs here.

1. HP Drain 7, please! It will make [Insane] diff actually insane! Song is beggin for crazy things!
2. 00:25:405 (1,1,1) - i'd call it NC abuse because one NC is enough to point out anti-jumps. Anyway, if you want to keep it because it "looks good" - keep it.
3. 00:48:505 (2) - this 1/4 jumps is crazy. It's quite out of your pattern and it may be too sudden for players. If you still want to jkeep this jump here - find someone - who can pass this part.
   
   That's it. Nice diff!

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Wan's Hard]
01:17:305 (5) - 包好4 Fixed~

-Bakari- wrote:

[Wan's Hard]

1. Set HP Drain to 7. Your rhythm allows using it, Also, set OD to 6, to gt balanced diff spread. Fixed~
2. 00:05:455 (1,1) - for a 200 BPM song, you could give players a little bit more time after spinner. Anyway, it's up to you.No fix because I want to match the song..
3. 00:14:455 (1) - add a repeat to this slider. I'm sure that beat on 00:14:755 - shouldn't be ignored :< Fixed:>
4. 00:25:705 (8) - nazi - stack with (6) doesn't look good at all. In fact, it kinda breaks your flow. Personally, I'd like to place it somewhere else, for example here. Good idea >w<
5. 00:32:455 (5) - i'm too picky because i love this diff - it seems like you wanted to do a triangle pattern here, right? this one looks better, right? :3 Poke me if you want my code for hi pattern! Fixed and looks better now XD!
6. 00:34:855 (6,1) - swap NCs to emphasize rhyth/instrument changes. It will fit with your pattern much better. Fixed
7. 00:35:755 - this part was mapped even in the [Easy] diff! map it here to keep consistency! Ok Mapped :3
8. 00:54:505 (1) - the way how slider changes its direction is too sudden. Please, make it more readable! According to rules EVERY slider should have clean and visible path from it's beginning and till the end. Fixed
   Note: 00:59:455 (1) - same ^
9. 01:08:905 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I'd say that you abuse New Combos. Seriously, it looks like there's no nee to use it. at least remove some of NCs here. Fixed I remove some of NCs

-Bakari- wrote:

Hi.

[General]

1. Yes, add (TV Size) to your title. You should do this, because this is NOT a full version. If I put it into the title and it will be corrupted while opening with .osz file O_Q Anyway I will put it and mention it at creator's word for notice
2. Set AudioLeadIn to 0 or 500. No need to make it TOO long. fixed
3. .osz file seems corrupted. Probably it's a bug, because WinRAR opened this file without any problems.
4. More tags! More! At least add Silver Link because you use their animation as your BG-video. fixed

[Easy]

1. That's 200 BPM song. No matter how slow SV is, it's better to use AR3. So, it will make more sense with music and your patterns.
2. 00:09:355 (3) - nazi - this slider looks like it's trying to be a blanket-slider. It's not a big problem, but I'd prefer to see something like this
3. 00:16:255 (1,2) - yup, nazi - try to make a better blanket. I know, that you can do it.. if you can't - poke me and I'll give you my code for a blanket.
4. 00:34:705 - 00:35:155 - please, remove unused green lines. There's no need to keep them here.
5. 00:36:655 (2) - tail of this slider is TOO close to (1) so, players may mistakenly hit it.
6. 00:53:755 (3) - nazi - blanket here will make your flow smoother. Just a minor suggestion, see if you like it or not/
7. 00:53:755 (3) - try to curve slider and make that slidertick louder to emphasize loud beat in music. You shouldn't ignore it!
   
   I understand, that it's really hard to map Easy diffs with 200 BPM. But rhythm could be a bit more consistent. For beginners, it will be hard to feel diffrence between 3/2 beats (example 00:01:855 (1,2) ) and 1/1 or 2/1 rhythm (example 00:03:205 (2,3,1)). So, yea..try to keep rhythm a bit easier and more consistent next time. All fixed
   
   tl'dr: there's no need to remap this diff at all. But it's too hard for beginners. Keep it in mind for your future maps.i:< ok! o/

[Normal]

1. Song is energetic and it's begging for faster AR! So, set AR 5 and OD/HP 3-4. It will make diff a bit more challenging and enjoyable for players.
2. Man, you're overusing NCs a bit.
   • 00:08:005 (1) - this NC can be removed without any problems. Same goes for a lot of combos in this diff, for example: 00:15:055 (1) - 00:17:455 (1) - 00:19:855 (1) - and so on. NC should help us to read patterns, don't overuse them!
3. 01:13:104 (2,2) - nazi - that overlap doesn't look good at all. Please, fix it if it is possible! Your flow is cute, don't ruin it with this overlap :< changed, Hope its okay now xD
4. 01:19:255 (2) - nazi - how about moving (2) some grids down? So, shape of 01:19:855 (1) - will be reasonable. see? All fixed

[Insane]

1. HP Drain 7, please! It will make [Insane] diff actually insane! Song is beggin for crazy things! fixed
2. 00:25:405 (1,1,1) - i'd call it NC abuse because one NC is enough to point out anti-jumps. Anyway, if you want to keep it because it "looks good" - keep it. ;w; I prefer keeping it
3. 00:48:505 (2) - this 1/4 jumps is crazy. It's quite out of your pattern and it may be too sudden for players. If you still want to jkeep this jump here - find someone - who can pass this part. XD Its okay imo
   
   That's it. Nice diff!

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Good luck!