Roxas wrote:

Mania mod as requested

[Harlem]
00:03:319 - You need a circle
00:07:819 - ^
00:10:712 (10712|3) - Random hold... If you want to keep this hold, move in the white tick please
00:10:391 - Why from here no soft-normal hitsounds?
00:12:962 - Add circle in |7|
00:14:677 - Add circle in |3|
00:19:177 - ^ in |4|
00:26:248 - ^
00:27:962 - Add some circles
00:28:391 (28391|2,28391|6) - Those should end in 00:29:677 -
00:32:677 - Add circle

[Shake]
00:04:605 - Add circle
00:11:034 - ^
00:24:105 - ^
00:24:962 - ^
00:26:462 - ^
00:28:391 (28391|4,28391|6,28391|0,28391|2) - Same thing as Harlem

I think you need other mods, good luck!

ts8zs wrote:

I think epilepsy warning is needed:3 (i will add asap)
[THS]
00:02:034 (2,3) - Blanket (i'm fine with the current shape)
00:04:819 (6) - move down (you don't get my point here ^^)
00:08:677 (1) - should be move down a little (i know what you mean, but feels strange when playing)
>00:09:534 (1,1,1) - Then (as i said)
A funny song:3 (indeed ^^)
[Hard]
00:04:819 (7) - should like 00:03:534 (3) - (i'm making symmetry with previous slider)
00:05:248 - note (i want to follow the lead sounds only)
Maybe I don't have enough exp to mod CS3Hard and InsaneXD (xD)
[Normal]
Maybe I don't have enough exp to mod CS2Normal,But don't worry,This diff seems well:3 (excellent )
[Easy]
Seems well ( )
[Stefan's Oni]
00:09:748 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/899611
00:14:248 (63) - Spinner?
00:28:391 (143) - ^
00:42:105 (221) - ^
00:25:605 (126) - k
[Stefan's Muzu]
00:12:534 - k
spinner?
[Try to mod mania and ctb,if don't correct plz tell me:3]
Failed Orz (lol, thanks for trying ^^)

pimpG wrote:

wow that was fast 0_0

pimpG wrote:

wow, more people want to join

i should write in creator's words that i have no slots left
but i like this guest diff, yuno told me i could remove one of his dif's if another person want to join, i will wait until he gets online and ask what diff should i remove

but who is the creator of the gd? you or Groove-chan ?

The key amount of the hardest difficulty in your beatmap set must not be lower than the key amount of the easier difficulties. Single key amount beatmap set is not suitable for this rule.
For example:- (Let 4K be less key amount and 7K be high key amount)
4K Easy + 7K Insane: Accept
7K Easy + 4K Insane: Deny
4K Easy + 4K Hard + 7K Insane: Accept
7K Easy + 7K Hard + 4K Insane: Deny
4K Easy + 4K Insane + 7K Easy + 7K Insane: Accept
7K Easy + 7K Normal + 7K Hard + 7K Insane: Accept

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Audio Lead-In
There is only 1819 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

1. 00:03:105 (4,5,6,1) - make it smooth please, at least make 456 the same spacing.
2. 00:08:248 (4) - strange. place it at the same place of previous 2?
3. 00:09:962 (3) - (nazi)right 1 grid(same spacing as previous)
4. 00:09:105 (1,3,4) - and this hyperdash.. please revmove and make something smooth.
5. 00:13:819 (3,4,5) - make it smooth. not a goo place to place jump.
6. 00:19:177 (1,2,3,4) - if you insist to put jump please ctrl+G this. the current 1 is too close to your previous 5.

1. 00:03:105 (4,5) - imo, ctrl+G to 4(totally same pattern as previous) or ctrl+G to 5(totally reverse pattern as previous) is better. half half is not that good..
2. 00:04:605 (2,3,4) - please ctrl+H this. now the connection between 4 and the next 1 is bad, better leave a jump for them.
   and personal suggest not to leave 00:03:962 (1) - at the centre, save it into the jump pattern will be better, like this
   
   1

   
3. 00:06:534 (1,2,3,4,5) - i know what you want, but please try this,
   
   1

   
   Please note that 1 is your slider end for 1, not a real note, to make it more clear I use note instead of a whole slider.(DS: x2.50(1.80)
   please remember in CTB, a slider end can be treated as a note. in your pattern the slider end for 1 and the next note is almost the same position, makes player stand then start to jump. a bit bad in flow. if you treat the end as a note, then everything solved.
4. 00:10:391 (1,3) - ctrl+G to make a difference?
5. 00:18:105 (8) - better make it an increase jump insead of a slider.
   
   like this

   
6. 00:22:391 (1) - ctrl+G to create a higher jump?
7. 00:24:105 (1,2,3) - for a rain, maybe you can make it harder. your current pattern just like a platter...try this:
   
   1

   
8. 00:25:819 (5,1) - sudden jump, better not use this....plus from here you suddenly following the vocaloid which is 1/6, it feels very strange... at least remove the jump here.
9. 00:36:105 (1) - ctrl+G?
10. 00:40:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/6 here really strange.. maybe use some slider instead of note?

ZHSteven wrote:

CTB modding as requested

[platter]
harder for a platter comparing with the rain below. maybe you want to make some jump more smooth.
remember it is only a platter. not to make some sudden hyperdash. the key to the platter is still make the map smooth. thanks!

1. 00:03:105 (4,5,6,1) - make it smooth please, at least make 456 the same spacing.
2. 00:08:248 (4) - strange. place it at the same place of previous 2?
3. 00:09:962 (3) - (nazi)right 1 grid(same spacing as previous)
4. 00:09:105 (1,3,4) - and this hyperdash.. please revmove and make something smooth.
5. 00:13:819 (3,4,5) - make it smooth. not a goo place to place jump.
6. 00:19:177 (1,2,3,4) - if you insist to put jump please ctrl+G this. the current 1 is too close to your previous 5.

ok i guess i should end here. your jump is pretty much good if the diff is a Rain. but this is only a platter, and the rain below is not hard enough to cover this diff, so i think you should discuss with the creator of the rain, and try to make some changes to make this diff easier or let him make Rain harder. Ok, i'll ask him to make his diff Harder than mine. ~ :3

OK I'm done. please make further discuss with the diff spread, then I think it will be a good map.

osu file format v12

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Countdown: 0
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BeatDivisor: 6
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Title:Harlem Shake
TitleUnicode:Harlem Shake
Artist:Baauer
ArtistUnicode:Baauer
Creator:pimpG
Version:newtoniorock8's Platter
Source:
Tags:meme terrorista durarara Tur00 newtoniorock8 Stefan YunoFanatic
BeatmapID:280269
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ZHSteven wrote:

CTB modding as requested

Both diff is good, nothing much to talk about in general, just 1 problem: the difficulty level between platter and the rain is too close imo. Maybe you can discuss further and see whether we can make platter easier or rain harder? idk..

another problem is, for creator:

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Audio Lead-In
There is only 1819 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

i dont know whether it is a rule or not, just AIBat says so...for me the current setting is fine, just sayin.


go Go GO!

[platter]
harder for a platter comparing with the rain below. maybe you want to make some jump more smooth.
remember it is only a platter. not to make some sudden hyperdash. the key to the platter is still make the map smooth.

1. 00:03:105 (4,5,6,1) - make it smooth please, at least make 456 the same spacing.
2. 00:08:248 (4) - strange. place it at the same place of previous 2?
3. 00:09:962 (3) - (nazi)right 1 grid(same spacing as previous)
4. 00:09:105 (1,3,4) - and this hyperdash.. please revmove and make something smooth.
5. 00:13:819 (3,4,5) - make it smooth. not a goo place to place jump.
6. 00:19:177 (1,2,3,4) - if you insist to put jump please ctrl+G this. the current 1 is too close to your previous 5.

ok i guess i should end here. your jump is pretty much good if the diff is a Rain. but this is only a platter, and the rain below is not hard enough to cover this diff, so i think you should discuss with the creator of the rain, and try to make some changes to make this diff easier or let him make Rain harder.



[Rain]
I like the way you put jump. plays really cool. the only thing you should take care is, maybe pay more attention at the connection of the pattern. there is some strange stand. other than that, maybe try to contact the creator of the platter, and make your diff harder or let him make platter easier.I'll do it after school D:

suggestions for pattern, feel free to reject them all.

1. 00:03:105 (4,5) - imo, ctrl+G to 4(totally same pattern as previous) or ctrl+G to 5(totally reverse pattern as previous) is better. half half is not that good..
2. 00:04:605 (2,3,4) - please ctrl+H this. now the connection between 4 and the next 1 is bad, better leave a jump for them.
   and personal suggest not to leave 00:03:962 (1) - at the centre, save it into the jump pattern will be better, like this
   
   1

   
3. 00:06:534 (1,2,3,4,5) - i know what you want, but please try this,
   
   1

   
   Please note that 1 is your slider end for 1, not a real note, to make it more clear I use note instead of a whole slider.(DS: x2.50(1.80)
   please remember in CTB, a slider end can be treated as a note. in your pattern the slider end for 1 and the next note is almost the same position, makes player stand then start to jump. a bit bad in flow. if you treat the end as a note, then everything solved.
4. 00:10:391 (1,3) - ctrl+G to make a difference?
5. 00:18:105 (8) - better make it an increase jump insead of a slider.
   
   like this

   
6. 00:22:391 (1) - ctrl+G to create a higher jump?
7. 00:24:105 (1,2,3) - for a rain, maybe you can make it harder. your current pattern just like a platter...try this:
   
   1

   
8. 00:25:819 (5,1) - sudden jump, better not use this....plus from here you suddenly following the vocaloid which is 1/6, it feels very strange... at least remove the jump here.
9. 00:36:105 (1) - ctrl+G?
10. 00:40:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/6 here really strange.. maybe use some slider instead of note?

i think except the strange 1/6, the whole map is good. maybe the 1/6 is only your style? idk.....

OK I'm done. please make further discuss with the diff spread, then I think it will be a good map.

ts8zs wrote:

I modded you but didn't help much:3
So~
Star~

_Gezo_ wrote:

there is only one problem though : my 4K chart was thought to be hard/expert level, which is against the rules (our case is in red):

The key amount of the hardest difficulty in your beatmap set must not be lower than the key amount of the easier difficulties. Single key amount beatmap set is not suitable for this rule.
For example:- (Let 4K be less key amount and 7K be high key amount)
4K Easy + 7K Insane: Accept
7K Easy + 4K Insane: Deny
4K Easy + 4K Hard + 7K Insane: Accept
7K Easy + 7K Hard + 4K Insane: Deny
4K Easy + 4K Insane + 7K Easy + 7K Insane: Accept
7K Easy + 7K Normal + 7K Hard + 7K Insane: Accept

I really don't like this rule because if the first guest does a 7K normal, this sets up the "4K gfy" thing.

ZHSteven wrote:

another problem is, for creator:

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Audio Lead-In
There is only 1819 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

i dont know whether it is a rule or not, just AIBat says so...for me the current setting is fine, just sayin. (yeah i have checked this on aibat before, aibat needs a bit more of human touch. i think its fine too)

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

oi :3 (привет )

mod4mod

[General]

I hear a noise sliders. soft-sliderslide2 make a copy and give a name soft-sliderslide (Audio - soft - custom1) then began to acquire higher quality sound
(i did not muted the custom 1 intentionally i only muted the custom 2 because of the custom clap 2, they sound a bit better at my 1/8 sliders with muted sliderslide. also i think the original sliderslide sounds good in the other parts and fits the lead sounds)

http://puu.sh/3QVa0.jpg - put a check mark. warning about epilepsy (yes i will, but i'm actually planning to make a storyboarded epilepsy warning instead of turning it on in that setting. just like this map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/23940 )

your beatmap shorter 45 seconds.Consider making it longer (that's a guideline, the minimum allowed is 30 seconds of draining time, so its fine. i shortened the song because the harlem shake is almost a loop, and i think its pointless mapping loops)

Some hitsounds not heard at all. to have no effect. make the sound louder

[Easy]

00:12:105 (1) - finish here (fixed, also added in the other diffs for consistency)

00:17:891 (5) - can confuse the players. because he has to be here 00:17:784 (this is a blue tick, i prefer keeping white and red tick polarity, i'm mostly following the drums)

00:18:748 (х) - there is not enough Circle (i think the rhythm is a fine, i don't want to make it more complex since its easy)

00:25:605 (x) - ^ (same as above)

[Normal]

00:25:605 (x) - add note (it would be a bit complex for normal imo)

00:27:962 (x) - ^ or delete here 00:28:177 (5) it is better to add.otherwise players would be difficult (same as above)

00:30:962 (2) - add note (i like the slider)

00:32:462 (x) - ^ (it would be a bit complex for normal imo)

00:34:391 (5) - ^ (i like the slider)

00:37:819 (4) - ^ (it would be a bit complex for normal imo)

00:38:462 (6) - move here 00:38:248 (this would break my pattern logic)

[Hard]

00:04:391 (5,6,7) - may be arranged as a 00:03:105 (1,2,3) - (this slider is symmetry with the previous slider)

00:29:677 (4) - add note (fixed)

00:30:534 (1) - remove new combo (i'm using that logic in most of my diff's)

00:23:034 (3,4) - spacing (its intentional, just like 00:19:177 (2,3,4) - and 00:36:319 (2,3,4) - )

[The Harlem Shake!]

00:04:391 (5) - new combo (i think its fine as it is)

00:04:391 (5,6) - to center http://puu.sh/3QWjG.jpg (i prefer the current, this part is an intentional symmetry break)

00:08:034 (6) - maybe http://puu.sh/3QWmi.jpg (really small ds usage comparing to the whole diff, anti jumping here is not fitting imo)

00:09:534 (1,2) - spacing. add note here 00:09:748 (that's intentional, i skip that tick because since this part i'm only following vocal and lead sounds)

00:23:248 (1) - remove new combo ( i see, fixed, nice catch )

00:24:105 (1) - new combo (^)

hitsounds I do not like at all. I do not feel those impacts that need to be. No epic. It would be better to make an impact from the normal in some places. and not so low as shown.I have removed all TS and completely redid hitsounds (looks like we have different tastes for hitsounds i prefer always making my hitsounds sound as so similar to the music as possible. since we are mapping the song, not composing it. i still like hitsounding style that gives the song new feelings but i still prefer my style)

great SB (thanks *w*)

pimpG wrote:

i see. so you are going to make it easier?

ZHSteven wrote:

oh, almost forget, great job with SB~~
+☆

_Gezo_ wrote:

pimpG wrote:

i see. so you are going to make it easier?

No, because that would be as useless as not doing any diff at all. The converted charts are boring enough, if I do a diff just to stick to a retarded rule that only discriminates (sorry but that's how I feel when seeing this rule) lower keys players (4/5/6), better not do anything at all.

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

You can update the SB to using the new widescreen support
(Setup Song -> Desing -> Widescreen support check )

gideon5504 wrote:

Hey there!~From M4M. (hi ^^)

General:
~Check AiMod.

Easy:
~1/2 beats on easy? (its fine, bpm is not high and i'm using it correctly)
~00:01:819 - Lower the volume a bit for the intro? What about 50% volume? (the song has constant volume imo)
~00:21:534 (5) - Avoid this kind of overlap in Easy diffs. (i will consider if more people complain)
~00:26:677 (2) - Move it slightly down to where the previous slider end pointed for better flow. (i think its fine)
~00:33:105 (2) - Move this to the right a bit and slant it for better flow. http://puu.sh/3REAW.jpg (maybe, if more people complain)
~Ofc Distance snap the notes after as well.
~00:35:248 (5) - U noe what I mean. (i will consider if more people complain)
~00:39:962 (5) - I prefer to remove 1 repeat for Easy diff. (fixed since you are the 2nd complaining)

Normal:
~00:05:248 (1,2,3,4) -Move slider 1 to the top of the previous circle then swap with circle 2 and 3. Repeat this for 4.5 and 6. Move them for better cursor flow. http://puu.sh/3REVD.jpg (i think the current is fine)
~Fix the rest after that.
~00:17:248 (4) - NC here to emphasis rhythm change? (would be inconsistent to my new combo logic)
~00:20:891 (1) - These shapes in Normal? (nope, but it fits the sound, so there is no problem)
~00:26:677 (3) - Why curve like that? It was quite sudden to me. (vocal based)
~00:29:677 - Add a note. (my map has storyboard, i want people to look at it at that moment, so no notes here)
~00:34:605 (1) - TEEHEE~ ( =^.^= )
~00:36:105 (1) - Slant this a bit down to connect it to the head of the next slider for better flow. (its intentional)

Hard:
~00:03:105 (1,2,3) - This kind of stacking doesn't really make sense in this kind of mapping. It doesn't flow.. Try stacking them perfectly. (its a reverse stack, since this combo is a vertical mirror of the previous combo, i'm just thinking big)
~00:04:391 (5,6) - ^
~00:08:891 (1,2,3,4) - ^Especially these, since they are kinda like jumps, so it doesn't flow at all. (i will consider if more people complain)
~00:10:391 (2,3,4,5) - ^
~00:31:391 (3,4,5) - Space them properly or people will get confused between 1/2 beats and triplets. (i don't think this gonna happen, but i will consider if more people complain)

The Harlem Shake:
~00:14:248 - Add some more to insane, it's too plain. Stack 5 notes with either ur style or stack perfectly is fine. I would distance snap 1.5x for circle 6. http://puu.sh/3RFtc.jpg (my map is storyboarded, i want people look at it too)
~00:28:391 - Wat about a slowed down velocity slider here to emphasis the vocal? (there is no slider here so it would not make sense)
~00:42:105 - End spinner 1/2 beat earlier and make ^? (x)

I dunno if this mod helped cuz u already had 4 ranked maps? (If I remembered correctly) (yeah, four maps : 3),but, I am still learning to mod. So that's all from me, Good Luck! (thanks fox mod )