Hello! ^_^
As a thankyou for modding my map, I shall mod yours in return to the best of my ability!
[General]
Don't forget to turn on Epilepsy warning, since it has an animating storyboard!
^This is up to you.
[Easy]
00:03:534 - Slider's curve appears off screen. This wouldn't be much of a problem for 1366x768 dimension screen, but mines is 1024x768....
00:17:034 - Try moving it to start at 00:17:248, on the white tick. Really caught me off guard, since it's on the red tick. Try to avoid placing objects on the red tick since this is considered off-beat (Especially if it's on easy mode, at least 90% of the notes should be on the white tickmark). And the hit circle after at 00:17:891 is also off beat, plus it's distance snapping is terrible so just remove it.
Ithould look like this:
I get that your trying to make it in-tune with the beat of the music, but it's really confusing. Try making the pattern more simpler, since it is easy mode, right?
00:20:462 - Move slider to 00:20:677 instead. Remove hit circle at 00:21:534.
00:23:891 - Move slider to 00:24:105 instead
00:24:962 - Move to 00:25:391.
I also noticed that the entire pattern at 00:22:391 - 00:25:819 should be the same as 00:15:534 - 00:18:534, but its objects can be re-arranged to look slightly different.
Same as 00:26:248 - 00:28:391, it's pattern should look like 00:20:248 - 00:21:962. Besides, those 2 sliders at 00:25:819 looks very...odd.
00:40:605 - Extra turn isn't really necessary.
[Normal]
00:01:819 - 00:04:819 The pattern looks almost exactly the same as Easy Thugh this is a minor issue, you should at least try making the sliders look different, or create a different path for them to create a more artistic effect.
00:23:891 - move slider to 00:24:105, and remove the hit circle after it. Try to avoid placing objects on the red tick
00:26:677 - This slider looks like it was simply tossed in without a thought. Try making it look like the one at 00:25:819, and add a turn to it like this:
00:39:319 - Try adding an object here, or removing one of the hit circles before/after it to create a slider, I feel that there's an important note here.
[Hard]
00:03:105 - Ugly stack.
00:04:391 - ^
00:04:819 - Add a reverse to the slider.
00:05:462 - Re-arrange these two sliders please.
00:08:677- Really off tune hit circles, plus the distance snapping makes it worse.
I started playing around with soem objects at this part, and I was able to find a batter pattern:
*NOTE* This isn't the best pattern, but sure as hell is better then the last one.
00:10:391 - Remove all you objects here, and use the same pattern as above. However, turn all of the objects by 90 degrees (doesn't matter which way) so it'll look like this:
Now it sounds more in tune!
00:22:177- Somethings missing, add in an extra note here please!
00:24:105 - Should look like the 2 objects at 00:17:677
00:26:462 - Move these two objects a bit more away from the previous slider.
00:35:891 - Missing a note.
Hope this helps~!
Sorry I can't really mod your storyboard, I've never done one nor have any experience in it. But, I do think it looks nice! xD I see you have a big interest in the character Celty!)
As a thankyou for modding my map, I shall mod yours in return to the best of my ability!
[General]
Don't forget to turn on Epilepsy warning, since it has an animating storyboard!
^This is up to you.
[Easy]
00:03:534 - Slider's curve appears off screen. This wouldn't be much of a problem for 1366x768 dimension screen, but mines is 1024x768....
00:17:034 - Try moving it to start at 00:17:248, on the white tick. Really caught me off guard, since it's on the red tick. Try to avoid placing objects on the red tick since this is considered off-beat (Especially if it's on easy mode, at least 90% of the notes should be on the white tickmark). And the hit circle after at 00:17:891 is also off beat, plus it's distance snapping is terrible so just remove it.
Ithould look like this:
I get that your trying to make it in-tune with the beat of the music, but it's really confusing. Try making the pattern more simpler, since it is easy mode, right?
00:20:462 - Move slider to 00:20:677 instead. Remove hit circle at 00:21:534.
00:23:891 - Move slider to 00:24:105 instead
00:24:962 - Move to 00:25:391.
I also noticed that the entire pattern at 00:22:391 - 00:25:819 should be the same as 00:15:534 - 00:18:534, but its objects can be re-arranged to look slightly different.
Same as 00:26:248 - 00:28:391, it's pattern should look like 00:20:248 - 00:21:962. Besides, those 2 sliders at 00:25:819 looks very...odd.
00:40:605 - Extra turn isn't really necessary.
[Normal]
00:01:819 - 00:04:819 The pattern looks almost exactly the same as Easy Thugh this is a minor issue, you should at least try making the sliders look different, or create a different path for them to create a more artistic effect.
00:23:891 - move slider to 00:24:105, and remove the hit circle after it. Try to avoid placing objects on the red tick
00:26:677 - This slider looks like it was simply tossed in without a thought. Try making it look like the one at 00:25:819, and add a turn to it like this:
00:39:319 - Try adding an object here, or removing one of the hit circles before/after it to create a slider, I feel that there's an important note here.
[Hard]
00:03:105 - Ugly stack.
00:04:391 - ^
00:04:819 - Add a reverse to the slider.
00:05:462 - Re-arrange these two sliders please.
00:08:677- Really off tune hit circles, plus the distance snapping makes it worse.
I started playing around with soem objects at this part, and I was able to find a batter pattern:
*NOTE* This isn't the best pattern, but sure as hell is better then the last one.
00:10:391 - Remove all you objects here, and use the same pattern as above. However, turn all of the objects by 90 degrees (doesn't matter which way) so it'll look like this:
Now it sounds more in tune!
00:22:177- Somethings missing, add in an extra note here please!
00:24:105 - Should look like the 2 objects at 00:17:677
00:26:462 - Move these two objects a bit more away from the previous slider.
00:35:891 - Missing a note.
Hope this helps~!
Sorry I can't really mod your storyboard, I've never done one nor have any experience in it. But, I do think it looks nice! xD I see you have a big interest in the character Celty!)