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Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2013-07-25T08:53:05+00:00

Natsu wrote:
added gero easy Andrea is your after thiso3o

Shut up Bitch!

GO GO! BAKA XD

kisata

521 posts

Joined September 2012

kisata 2013-07-25T19:49:14+00:00

Couple quick thoughts:

1) I'd seriously consider using less distance snap in the Insane. It's pretty inconsistent as is. I understand you're trying to make a jumpy map, but the jumps should be consistent and not, well, random.
2) The difficulty gap between the Normal, Hard, and Insane is quite large. The Hard is also basically a somewhat less difficult AR8 insane.
3) OD8/HP7 combination on the Insane makes some of the patterns (like the stars) quite difficult. I'd seriously consider lowering either the OD or HP by one.
4) Blankets that could be improved:

If you're trying to do some sort of overlapping blanket here or w/e, it doesn't look very good and could be improved.
This blanket can be improved as well. Space it out a bit more.
This one too.
I actually don't know what this is supposed to be.

5) [Insane] 01:27:537 (3,4) - Yeah, this is just... no. Don't make this jump so harsh.
6) [Insane] 03:44:634 - Something weird happened here. You've got two green lines and kiai toggled for less than 50ms lol.

I did enjoy it though. Just some things people might complain about.

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2013-07-25T22:25:09+00:00

apaffy wrote:
Couple quick thoughts:

1) I'd seriously consider using less distance snap in the Insane. It's pretty inconsistent as is. I understand you're trying to make a jumpy map, but the jumps should be consistent and not, well, random. Is not random I put the jumps how I feel the music maybe is random for you but for me all is fine
2) The difficulty gap between the Normal, Hard, and Insane is quite large. The Hard is also basically a somewhat less difficult AR8 insane. the spread is already good for me making a easy hard with hight bpm gonna be ending in a bad rhythm hard
3) OD8/HP7 combination on the Insane makes some of the patterns (like the stars) quite difficult. I'd seriously consider lowering either the OD or HP by one. the density of the beats is enought for hp 7 also od 8 make this fun is a rhythm game what is wrong with make the players be accuracy in the game?
4) Blankets that could be improved: I gonna checkk my map and gonna improve they
If you're trying to do some sort of overlapping blanket here or w/e, it doesn't look very good and could be improved.
This blanket can be improved as well. Space it out a bit more.
This one too.
I actually don't know what this is supposed to be.
5) [Insane] 01:27:537 (3,4) - Yeah, this is just... no. Don't make this jump so harsh. How that can be hard? since im not good playing this and I can FC this mappu
6) [Insane] 03:44:634 - Something weird happened here. You've got two green lines and kiai toggled for less than 50ms lol. Fixed lol

I did enjoy it though. Just some things people might complain about.

yeah I wanna make a kinda challenge insane since im tired of those generic maps, you can have fun with this one imo, idk why you think OD 8 is wrong is totally fine for me well i know is your opinion but i have my own too i think the mappu play really fine

GoldenWolf

2,983 posts

Joined May 2012

GoldenWolf 2013-07-26T20:27:04+00:00

Where is OD9? ;_;

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2013-07-26T20:29:27+00:00

apaffy wrote:
Couple quick thoughts:
3) OD8/HP7 combination on the Insane makes some of the patterns (like the stars) quite difficult. I'd seriously consider lowering either the OD or HP by one.

yeah maybe I will OD 9 again in the next update since i agree with Goldenwolf what is wrong with hight OD? that just make you be more accurate is a rhythm game o.o so acc is important IMO

[Yue]

1,643 posts

Joined January 2011

[Yue] 2013-07-26T21:13:35+00:00

Aqui va el ~~horrible~~ mod:

General:
-La diff de Gerin no tiene puesto el PreviewTime mientras que todas las demas diff si la tienen D:

Gero's Easy:

00:13:666 - creo que deberias agregar un circle aqui, se oye un poco vacio y hay musica asi que deberias considerarlo.
00:16:247 - ^
00:17:537 (1,2) - siento que esto no esta bien, podrias intentar algo asi->
SPOILER
se oye mucho mejor es mas facil de jugar
01:03:344 - deberias agregar un circle porque va perfectamente con la voz. O por lo menos colocar un slider con repeticion que empieze ahi, claro que tendrias que borar los 2 circles que siguen.
02:15:602 - aqui tambien puede ir perfectamente un circle o3o
04:14:796 (2,1) - o.o! creo que deberias borrar (2) y poner el spiner ahi

Hard:

00:18:828 - agrega circle o3o
00:51:086 (1,2) - aqui es la quinta vez que repites ese mismo patron de sliders D:! creo que deberias variar un poco y mover el slider 00:51:570 (2) - hacia otro lado :b (seria bueno que el tercero tambien lo muevas, osea este 00:31:570 (1,2) - ) senti que lo repetias muchas veces en poco tiempo x_x
00:56:247 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - aqui formas con el primer combo un cuadrado pero luego con el segundo combo otro mismo cuadrado, creo que con el segundo combo podrias hacer algo diferente.. algo como un rombo tal vez xD aqui un ejemplo:
SPOILER
01:20:441 (3,1) - lo mismo que te dije en 00:51:086 (1,2)
02:18:828 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - igual que en 00:56:247 pero aqui trata de hacer algo diferente (digamos que ya usaste el rombo la vez anterior y aqui un triangulo o nose x_x dale variedad :3)
03:34:795 (1) - quita en nc D: no entiendo porque lo pusiste ahi u.u
03:43:666 (1) - ^
04:08:505 (1,2) - otra vez siento que lo repites mucho en muy poco tiempo porque ya tienes uno en 04:03:344 (1,2) - y en 04:06:408 (2,3) - ! mueve el slider (2) hacia otro lado porfavor

Insane:
OD+1

01:27:215 (1,2,3,4) - wow x_x siento que este saldo esta demasiado dificil, trata de ponerlos un poco mas juntos uwu

Yo y mis mods feos.

Mucha suerte Natsu-nyan! de dejare una estrella o3o

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2013-07-26T21:28:36+00:00

[Yue] wrote:
Aqui va el ~~horrible~~ mod:

General:
-La diff de Gerin no tiene puesto el PreviewTime mientras que todas las demas diff si la tienen D: arreglado

Hard:
00:18:828 - agrega circle o3o prefiero dejar la pausa porque o.o siento q mi hard cansa mucho al jugarala para algunos newbies asi q mejor puse pequeos descansos de 1/2
00:51:086 (1,2) - aqui es la quinta vez que repites ese mismo patron de sliders D:! creo que deberias variar un poco y mover el slider 00:51:570 (2) - hacia otro lado :b (seria bueno que el tercero tambien lo muevas, osea este 00:31:570 (1,2) - ) senti que lo repetias muchas veces en poco tiempo x_x hahahaah es que siento que va con la cancion ademas no tengo una idea de que otro pattern podria intentar :C
00:56:247 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - aqui formas con el primer combo un cuadrado pero luego con el segundo combo otro mismo cuadrado, creo que con el segundo combo podrias hacer algo diferente.. algo como un rombo tal vez xD aqui un ejemplo:
SPOILER
01:20:441 (3,1) - lo mismo que te dije en 00:51:086 (1,2) oh si hoy en la noche veo que hago ahi
02:18:828 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - igual que en 00:56:247 pero aqui trata de hacer algo diferente (digamos que ya usaste el rombo la vez anterior y aqui un triangulo o nose x_x dale variedad :3) ^
03:34:795 (1) - quita en nc D: no entiendo porque lo pusiste ahi u.u ok
03:43:666 (1) - ^ ok
04:08:505 (1,2) - otra vez siento que lo repites mucho en muy poco tiempo porque ya tienes uno en 04:03:344 (1,2) - y en 04:06:408 (2,3) - ! mueve el slider (2) hacia otro lado porfavor okis mas noche pienso q otra cosa podria hacer aqui ahorita tengo las ideas congeladas
Insane:
OD+1 hahaha ok since is more fun :p
01:27:215 (1,2,3,4) - wow x_x siento que este saldo esta demasiado dificil, trata de ponerlos un poco mas juntos uwu listo rehice el jump del 3 al 4
Yo y mis mods feos.

Mucha suerte Natsu-nyan! de dejare una estrella o3o gracias por el mod y la estrella

kogasa_old_1

123 posts

Joined July 2011

kogasa_old_1 2013-07-26T23:19:11+00:00

Hello! From my modding queue.

General
-Background image is not the recommended size?

Gero's Easy
00:05:925 (1) - Unsnapped spinner ending.
00:39:150 (2) - Placement looks a little odd.
03:42:699 (1) - The timing on the end of this sounds off.
-Slider at the end seems a bit too short for new players.

Xienly's Normal
02:10:924 (1) - Placement seems odd in comparison to surroundings.

Hard
-AR 1? Seems a bit more like an insane map.
01:08:666 (2) - Not sure about the placing here.

Insane
-The jumps and the (kinda ridiculous) stream at 02:40:763 (1) - are nice. Though I might suggest shortening the stream or breaking it up a bit.

Sorry I couldn't be of much help.
Love this map, good luck!

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2013-07-26T23:51:02+00:00

kogasa wrote:
Hello! From my modding queue.

General
-Background image is not the recommended size? yeah will fix tomorrow

Hard
-AR 1? Seems a bit more like an insane map. I think 8 fit the bpm and sv really good but i reduce it and lets next modders check this
01:08:666 (2) - Not sure about the placing here. move to other place hope is better now

Insane
-The jumps and the (kinda ridiculous) stream at 02:40:763 (1) - are nice. Though I might suggest shortening the stream or breaking it up a bit. Is ok for me

Sorry I couldn't be of much help.
Love this map, good luck! Im glad you like it :3 and thanks mod help me to improve

Last edited by Natsu 2013-07-27T05:58:36+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Chloe

1,160 posts

Joined April 2011

Chloe 2013-07-27T03:16:58+00:00

hi there Natsu,as your mod request~

[General]

BGsize is weird, suggesting change to 1366x768, but if you want to keep it, feel free to ignore.

I love 中二病

[Normal]

01:51:086 (3) - make a perfectly blanket here
02:03:021 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/891029 look at the approach circle, what do you find here? I think you can know my meaning xD
there're some useless green lines in the end

[Hard]

00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - same as insane
00:35:118 (1) - decrease one reverse to fit the rythem
00:42:215 (1) - 1/6 here give a more fitting
00:55:118 (1) - ^
01:22:054 (1) - blanket with 01:21:731 (3) -

Uh, I think you should make those blanket better in this diff.

[Insane]

OD-1?

00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - set a gather volume here? It does sound well for now.
00:10:924 (1,2,3,4) - change to http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/891008 for the better flow imo
00:23:989 (1) - delete?
00:34:634 (2,4) - ctrl+G
00:49:634 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/891013 better flow imo
00:59:957 (5) - stack with 00:59:795 (4) -
01:06:408 (5) - stack with 01:05:763 (3) - 's top
01:10:279 (5) - x 148 y 113
01:27:376 (2,3) - ctrl+g better flow!
01:51:731 (1,2,3,4) - maybe don't fit the music imo, also I can't play well here
01:53:344 (2,3,5) - I think you should pay more attention on design ;_;
02:31:247 (2) - maybe you should decrease the ds here
02:31:570 (1) - make a perfectly blanket here?
02:46:892 (3,4) -
03:46:408 (5) - stack with 4

Good luck <3.

mathi747

59 posts

Joined September 2010

mathi747 2013-07-27T05:51:46+00:00

Hi~ late mod
yo tenia un mod para esto pero lo perdi por un apagon ;_;

easy

01:28:021 - me parece que qedaria bueno una nota aca y que el spin empezara aca 01:28:344 -
04:14:473 - algo parecido a lo de arriva aca(?
00:39:150 (2) - se que es por simetria pero este cambio de spacing lo siento feo
02:20:602 - no muy importante pero aca hay una linea verde sin usar
pd:espero no te hallas olvidado de los histounds que me prometiste ;_;

normal

i dont know i love your normals :3
01:18:828 - maybe change this for a slider or delte 01:19:150 (4) - feels better
01:51:086 (3,4) - i think this blanket can be improved(?

and some others but i dont think is worth to list them all
maybe ar 5 too high i find it hard to dt hr, how about ar 4 that said i like high ar because of the bpm so how about reducing od -1 plays really well

hard

00:26:570 - en esta parte que te parece algo asi

00:42:215 (1,2) - me encantan estos sliders pero creo que se pueden ver mejor,

asi se ve mejor ingame
00:56:247 (1,2,3,4) - esto se veria mejor con unos saltos *A*( por ejemplo cambiar el 2 por el 3)
01:27:537 (3,1) - stack this?
02:23:989 (1,2) - veo que te gusta esa convinacion de sliders(?
02:54:150 (2) - talves borrar este slider y agregar un circle ahi 02:54:312 -

no insane mod because ~~im too lazy~~ its too hard for me

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-07-27T06:03:41+00:00

kogasa wrote:
Hello! From my modding queue.

Xienly's Normal
02:10:924 (1) - Placement seems odd in comparison to surroundings. fixed
Sorry I couldn't be of much help.
Love this map, good luck!

is wrote my name is so hard TwT

Chloe wrote:
hi there Natsu,as your mod request~
[Normal]
01:51:086 (3) - make a perfectly blanket here done
02:03:021 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/891029 look at the approach circle, what do you find here? I think you can know my meaning xD err wat?
there're some useless green lines in the end *facepalms, it's reduce volume

mathi747 wrote:
Hi~ late mod
normal
i dont know i love your normals :3 yay ty :3
01:18:828 - maybe change this for a slider or delte 01:19:150 (4) - feels better i know you follow vocal but i'm follow music too sorry ;-;
01:51:086 (3,4) - i think this blanket can be improved(? and some others but i dont think is worth to list them all
maybe ar 5 too high i find it hard to dt hr, how about ar 4 that said i like high ar because of the bpm so how about reducing od -1 plays really well fixed

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Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2013-07-27T06:28:39+00:00

Chloe

Chloe wrote:
hi there Natsu,as your mod request~ hi

[General]
BGsize is weird, suggesting change to 1366x768, but if you want to keep it, feel free to ignore. yeah will change it im lazy now hahahah

I love 中二病 :3

[Hard]
00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - same as insane will try
00:35:118 (1) - decrease one reverse to fit the rythem if other mod say this i will change it
00:42:215 (1) - 1/6 here give a more fitting I think current is fine
00:55:118 (1) - ^^
01:22:054 (1) - blanket with 01:21:731 (3) - ok

Uh, I think you should make those blanket better in this diff.
[Insane]

OD-1? actually i can try a kind of challenge with the map thats why i wnna keep od9
00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - set a gather volume here? It does sound well for now. k
00:10:924 (1,2,3,4) - change to http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/891008 for the better flow imo ok
00:23:989 (1) - delete? is fine it got sound
00:34:634 (2,4) - ctrl+G I preffer my flow now
00:49:634 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/891013 better flow imo will thik about this one
00:59:957 (5) - stack with 00:59:795 (4) - since dont fit the music in this way also in dont like so muchs the stacks
01:06:408 (5) - stack with 01:05:763 (3) - 's top ^
01:10:279 (5) - x 148 y 113 ok
01:27:376 (2,3) - ctrl+g better flow!maybe will try
01:51:731 (1,2,3,4) - maybe don't fit the music imo, also I can't play well here It fit the guitar is a lttle sound but i wanna map it
01:53:344 (2,3,5) - I think you should pay more attention on design ;_; omg fixed
02:31:247 (2) - maybe you should decrease the ds here ok
02:31:570 (1) - make a perfectly blanket here? done
02:46:892 (3,4) - ^
03:46:408 (5) - stack with 4
Good luck <3. thanks for mod <3

mathi747

mathi747 wrote:
Hi~ late mod
yo tenia un mod para esto pero lo perdi por un apagon ;_; xD

hard00:26:570 - en esta parte que te parece algo asi creo q mi ritmo sigue mejor la musica aqui
00:42:215 (1,2) - me encantan estos sliders pero creo que se pueden ver mejor, asi se ve mejor ingame okas
00:56:247 (1,2,3,4) - esto se veria mejor con unos saltos *A*( por ejemplo cambiar el 2 por el 3) no quiero tener muchos jumps en hard el bpm es muy alto x_x
01:27:537 (3,1) - stack this?
02:23:989 (1,2) - veo que te gusta esa convinacion de sliders(? si
02:54:150 (2) - talves borrar este slider y agregar un circle ahi 02:54:312 - mi ritmo sigue mejor la cancion para mi lo considerare

no insane mod because ~~im too lazy~~ its too hard for me gracias por el mod :3

Chronotakular

64 posts

Joined March 2013

Chronotakular 2013-07-27T10:45:06+00:00

Hello there!

[Gero's Easy]

This map, as of right now, is very good.

-The first spinner might be too short for an easy difficulty. Also, I would completely get rid of the last spinner. The last spinner is too difficult for an easy difficulty, in my opinion.

[Xinley's Normal]

This map is also well done.

00:00:751 (1) - As a general rule, I would try to put the first note near the center of the map, just because it is expected to be around there. Not too big of a deal though.
01:28:021 (3) - I would move this note away just a little bit from the tail of the previous slider.
03:21:570 (3,4) - I would move these a little bit further away from note 2 and each other as well.
03:23:989 (1) - Is this 1 note combo intentional?
04:14:473 (3) - I would move this note a little bit further away (up) from 2 and 4.

[Hard]

Fun map!

00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - I would have a greater distance snapping on these notes. I tend to hit all of these early.
00:36:892 (1,2,3,4) - I thought I would mention this. It feels natural to hit these notes according to the lyrics, but they are charted to the instruments. You don't have to/need to change this, but I thought I would point it out. (Perhaps changing the spacing might help make these easier to hit.)
00:57:054 (1) - I wouldn't stack this with the 4 before it. I kept hitting this really early.
01:27:376 (2) - I think it would be easier to hit this if 2 was closer to 1 and 3.
02:04:312 (1,2,3) - I would do something entirely different here. It doesn't seem to fit at all.
02:19:634 (1) - I wouldn't stack this with the 4 before it. I kept hitting this really early.
03:02:215 (1) - I would move this farther away from slider 1. I was also hitting this pretty early.
02:52:376 - 03:02:699 - I would make the hit sounds a little louder here.

[Insane]

Even more fun!

00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - I would have a greater distance snapping on these notes. I tend to hit all of these early.
00:11:408 (1) - Try moving this where the 3 of the previous combo was. The current gap is a bit bigger. Note 2 might need to be moved to compensate for distance if you do move this.
00:23:989 (1) - Consider deleting this note, and giving the player the small break. The note here doesn't really seem to fit in my opinion.
00:56:247 (1) - I would move this just a little bit closer to 5. Just a little bit.
00:59:957 (5) - I would move this just slightly off to the side of the slider in front of it.
02:18:021 (2) - This kinda threw me off track. The reason for this is that sliders 1,3, and 4 loop. This slider does not. Because of how fast the map is moving and the notes are coming and going, it's very hard to see that 2 is not looping. Consider making this note loop like sliders 1 and 3, and making slider 4 not loop, and similar to the current slider 2.

This map is really great! I hope it hits ranked in the near future so I can play it seriously!

I hope I was able to help you in someway! Good luck!

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2013-07-27T11:10:24+00:00

Chronotakular wrote:
Hello there! hi hi~

[Hard]

Fun map! thanks

00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - I would have a greater distance snapping on these notes. I tend to hit all of these early. Is on purpose to follow musci better imo
00:36:892 (1,2,3,4) - I thought I would mention this. It feels natural to hit these notes according to the lyrics, but they are charted to the instruments. You don't have to/need to change this, but I thought I would point it out. (Perhaps changing the spacing might help make these easier to hit.) keep this for now
00:57:054 (1) - I wouldn't stack this with the 4 before it. I kept hitting this really early. fixed
01:27:376 (2) - I think it would be easier to hit this if 2 was closer to 1 and 3. fixed
02:04:312 (1,2,3) - I would do something entirely different here. It doesn't seem to fit at all. It fit for me if other modder say this i will change in another way
02:19:634 (1) - I wouldn't stack this with the 4 before it. I kept hitting this really early. fixed
03:02:215 (1) - I would move this farther away from slider 1. I was also hitting this pretty early. okay
02:52:376 - 03:02:699 - I would make the hit sounds a little louder here. lower a little

[Insane]

Even more fun! Im glad you have fun with this

00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - I would have a greater distance snapping on these notes. I tend to hit all of these early. same as hard
00:11:408 (1) - Try moving this where the 3 of the previous combo was. The current gap is a bit bigger. Note 2 might need to be moved to compensate for distance if you do move this. since i try to make a jumpy pattern here thats why
00:23:989 (1) - Consider deleting this note, and giving the player the small break. The note here doesn't really seem to fit in my opinion. but it have music
00:56:247 (1) - I would move this just a little bit closer to 5. Just a little bit. ok
00:59:957 (5) - I would move this just slightly off to the side of the slider in front of it. is my flow wanna keep this since is easy to read o.o
02:18:021 (2) - This kinda threw me off track. The reason for this is that sliders 1,3, and 4 loop. This slider does not. Because of how fast the map is moving and the notes are coming and going, it's very hard to see that 2 is not looping. Consider making this note loop like sliders 1 and 3, and making slider 4 not loop, and similar to the current slider 2. fixed i add a 5 circles stream and 2 1/4 sliders is better thanks for poiting this

This map is really great! I hope it hits ranked in the near future so I can play it seriously!

I hope I was able to help you in someway! Good luck! yeah thanks for mod that help me so impreve some parts im glad you like this and thanks for mod

aabc271

osu! Alumni

1,315 posts

Joined August 2009

aabc271 2013-07-28T11:33:24+00:00

After some consideration, I thought taiko inner oni is quite similar to oni, so it could be better to use my inner oni as oni. PM me for more details
Also as talked in pm, as ReySHeL will be responsible for muzu, I think I can say I've finished my taiko diff

aabc's Taiko Oni
^ Added tag : aabc271

Please check, thx :3
btw this is probably my hardest aabc's Taiko ever made lol

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2013-07-28T20:36:36+00:00

aabc271 wrote:
After some consideration, I thought taiko inner oni is quite similar to oni, so it could be better to use my inner oni as oni. PM me for more details
Also as talked in pm, as ReySHeL will be responsible for muzu, I think I can say I've finished my taiko diff

aabc's Taiko Oni
^ Added tag : aabc271

Please check, thx :3
btw this is probably my hardest aabc's Taiko ever made lol

Nice diff added thanks awesome taiko (I fix some tags in your diff also i change the preview time)

Losertic

461 posts

Joined May 2012

Losertic 2013-07-29T06:54:07+00:00

Hello!

From M4M.

Modding

General

Pass.

Gero's Easy

00:30:763 (1) - NC.
00:39:795 (3) - move x-346.
00:45:279 (4) - NC.
01:03:344 - add note? or 01:03:344 ~ 01:03:666 add slider.
02:26:247 (1) - nc 02:26:570 (2) - remove nc
03:29:473 (1) - nc 03:29:795 (2) - remove nc
04:14:473 - add note?

Xinely's Normal

00:40:118 (4) - move. (274,206)
01:01:086 (5) - move (371,126)
01:01:408 (1) - move (405,209)
02:49:795 (1) - move (285,120)
03:29:795 (1) - move (402,201)
03:31:892 (4) - ^

Hard

maybe, same kiai time another difficult
00:05:083 (1) - i know triangle combo. (1,2,3) consider 00:05:403 (2) - nc. if you change this combo, 01:27:699 (1). change this (same pattern)
01:22:054 (1) - move (0,143)
03:19:473 (1) - remove nc
01:14:578 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - how about you? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835781 / https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835782

Insane

OD -1? or HP -1?
maybe, same kiai time another difficult
00:01:553 ~ 00:01:914 reverse slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/895201
01:59:635 (1) - nc? 01:59:472 (9) - remove nc.

ahhhhh

insane too hard ;_;. i died stream part.

and good map. S.T.A.R

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-07-29T07:07:15+00:00

fix a little, ty 4 mod all ~

update

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Inside Identity.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 141086
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 17034,89776,100099,129776,182680,193002,254938
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:INSIDE IDENTITY
TitleUnicode:INSIDE IDENTITY
Artist:Black Raison d'etre
ArtistUnicode:Black Raison d'etre
Creator:Natsu
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:Chu-2 byo demo KOI ga shitai
Tags:Xinely Gero aabc271 中二病でも恋がしたい! Lantis ZAQ Uchida Maaya Akasaki Chinatsu Asakura Azumi Uesaka Sumire Kyoto Togashi Yuuta Takanashi Rikka Nibutani Shinka Dekomori Sanae Tsuyuri Kumin Ending
BeatmapID:267652
BeatmapSetID:100682

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
2,89995,98918
2,182737,191821
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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160,216,137215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,212,137537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,132,137860,2,0,P|92:88|120:36,2,100,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,84,138828,6,0,P|256:56|332:88,1,150,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,16,139634,2,0,P|412:92|380:152,1,150,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,284,140763,2,0,P|212:296|176:348,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,360,141247,6,0,P|116:296|144:212,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,164,142054,2,0,P|244:136|308:140,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,96,142699,2,2,P|357:194|268:220,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,164,143666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,104,143989,6,0,P|56:92|-12:144,2,150,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,60,145279,2,0,P|264:48|320:60,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,120,145924,1,4,0:0:0:0:
388,208,146247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,288,146570,6,2,P|280:224|272:116,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,56,147537,1,0,1:0:0:0:
132,96,147860,2,0,P|107:146|118:208,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,232,148344,2,0,P|157:243|222:229,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,288,149150,6,0,P|326:208|266:166,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,340,150441,2,0,P|204:364|156:356,1,100,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
80,328,151086,2,0,L|68:264,1,50,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,192,151570,6,0,P|44:128|89:52,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,60,152376,2,0,P|244:36|328:72,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,104,153344,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,192,153666,2,0,P|416:244|372:292,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,368,154312,6,0,P|324:344|304:264,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,280,155602,2,0,P|436:256|472:208,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,132,156247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,84,156570,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,8,156892,6,2,P|296:88|368:176,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,240,157860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,324,158183,2,0,P|492:264|480:184,2,150,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
412,240,159473,6,2,P|340:268|268:236,1,150,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,348,160441,2,2,P|168:252|220:164,1,200,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,88,161408,2,0,P|220:56|164:44,1,100,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,162054,12,0,164473,0:0:0:0:
288,128,164957,6,0,P|376:84|468:136,2,200,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,172,166570,2,0,P|288:216|384:156,1,200,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,240,167537,5,8,0:0:0:0:
432,240,167699,2,0,P|460:200|436:108,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,64,168505,2,0,P|284:36|216:64,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,117,169795,6,0,P|248:149|180:165,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,104,170441,2,0,L|44:168,1,100,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,248,171086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,300,171408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,260,171731,2,0,L|332:260,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,336,172376,6,0,P|420:272|392:192,2,150,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,356,173828,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,324,174312,2,0,P|152:268|244:268,1,150,4|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,340,175279,6,0,P|440:310|462:216,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,104,176408,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,40,176892,2,0,P|228:56|192:92,1,100,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,177537,6,0,P|156:148|272:140,2,200,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,92,179150,2,0,P|12:144|32:208,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,276,179795,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,324,180118,6,0,P|172:312|224:324,1,100,4|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,272,180763,2,0,P|344:282|392:270,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,180,181408,2,0,P|312:128|224:176,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,208,182215,2,2,L|204:260,2,50,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,256,193021,5,4,0:0:0:0:
72,168,193344,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,193666,2,0,P|180:52|264:64,2,150,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,194957,2,0,L|260:220,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,296,195602,6,0,P|288:304|344:244,2,150,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,376,196892,2,0,P|128:292|162:194,1,200,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,132,197860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,72,198183,6,0,P|332:48|392:56,1,100,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,140,198828,2,0,P|453:98|465:26,2,150,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,192,200118,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,188,200441,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,148,200763,6,0,P|116:144|88:148,1,50,4|4,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
48,148,201086,2,0,L|48:212,1,50,4|4,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
72,284,201570,1,4,1:0:0:0:
160,288,201892,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,202054,12,0,203344,0:0:0:0:
76,132,203989,6,0,P|128:140|172:192,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,216,204473,6,0,P|240:244|312:212,1,150,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,164,205279,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,248,205602,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,296,205924,2,2,P|244:328|140:292,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,248,206892,1,8,0:0:0:0:
12,192,207215,6,0,P|80:160|152:192,2,150,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,248,208505,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,308,208828,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,300,209150,2,8,P|284:280|328:228,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,208,209795,6,2,P|317:162|232:216,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,204,210763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,284,211086,2,0,P|256:292|328:236,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,208,211892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,72,212376,6,0,P|344:24|264:36,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,100,213666,2,0,L|292:208,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,272,214312,1,4,0:0:0:0:
220,304,214473,1,4,0:0:0:0:
144,256,214795,6,0,P|124:192|156:112,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,48,215602,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,64,215924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,116,216247,2,2,P|400:208|356:304,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,320,217215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,276,217537,6,0,P|116:256|80:188,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,218828,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,144,219150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,192,219473,2,0,P|408:240|392:292,1,100,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,348,220118,6,2,P|232:368|152:308,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,224,221086,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,144,221408,2,0,P|248:108|308:144,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,264,222376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,320,222699,6,0,P|236:352|156:312,1,150,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,300,223666,2,2,P|88:228|192:236,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,180,224634,2,0,P|308:164|376:180,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,204,225118,6,0,P|352:272|384:356,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,320,225924,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,240,226247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,148,226570,2,2,P|408:92|316:120,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,188,227537,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,252,227860,6,0,P|128:280|56:248,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,164,228828,2,2,P|220:88|324:100,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,144,229795,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,220,230118,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,292,230441,6,0,P|336:296|292:344,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,304,231086,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,252,231408,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,168,231731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,84,232054,2,0,P|164:76|212:104,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,128,232537,2,0,L|344:128,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,124,233021,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,184,233344,2,0,L|512:184,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,272,233828,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,336,234150,2,2,P|356:360|296:324,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,260,234957,2,0,L|196:216,1,50,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,132,235441,6,0,P|268:88|352:108,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,160,236247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,236,236570,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,304,236892,2,2,P|304:340|204:300,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,244,237860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,160,238183,6,0,P|232:108|316:128,2,150,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,188,239473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,236,239795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,320,240118,2,0,L|192:356,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,360,240763,6,2,P|92:272|136:164,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,124,241731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,76,242054,2,0,P|348:48|420:88,2,150,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,132,243344,5,4,0:0:0:0:
304,260,243828,1,4,0:0:0:0:
196,344,244312,2,2,P|144:272|160:164,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,104,245279,2,0,P|268:84|324:96,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,44,245924,6,2,P|348:100|376:176,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,300,246892,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,272,247376,1,4,0:0:0:0:
148,228,247860,2,2,P|100:196|80:152,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,136,248505,6,2,P|208:100|312:112,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,156,249473,2,2,P|384:192|280:180,1,150,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,272,250441,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,208,250763,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,116,251086,6,0,P|184:72|268:96,2,150,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,164,252537,2,2,P|280:224|364:232,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,176,253344,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,100,253666,6,0,L|316:64,1,50,4|4,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
292,60,253989,2,0,L|224:80,1,50,4|4,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
164,116,254473,1,4,1:0:0:0:
136,200,254795,2,2,P|176:256|252:252,1,150,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2013-07-29T07:25:29+00:00

Losertic wrote:
Hello!

Hard
maybe, same kiai time another difficult I dont understand what you mean :C
00:05:083 (1) - i know triangle combo. (1,2,3) consider 00:05:403 (2) - nc. if you change this combo, 01:27:699 (1). change this (same pattern) actually that combos help the player to read the pattern keep it for now
01:22:054 (1) - move (0,143) ok
03:19:473 (1) - remove nc ok
01:14:578 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - how about you? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835781 / https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835782 I have to think about this one

Insane
OD -1? or HP -1? hp -1 but i keep the od since is the spirit of my mappu xD
maybe, same kiai time another difficult need a explain about this
00:01:553 ~ 00:01:914 reverse slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/895201 fized on my way
01:59:635 (1) - nc? 01:59:472 (9) - remove nc. ok

ahhhhh

insane too hard ;_;. i died stream part. will be ok since i reduce the hp

and good map. S.T.A.R thanks for mod and star /

Last edited by Natsu 2013-07-29T21:45:00+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 2013-07-29T14:52:18+00:00

M4M

Black - Suggestion
Blue - Highly recommended to fix
Red - Unrankable

I miss storyboard on this map so much

What about considering making at least Lyrics storyboard. I think it would fit this map. Maybe some effect at the kiai start etc. But I can't force you. Just saying it would fit. (You can poke me and request me for it and I'll maybe accept, have nothing to do >_<)
Increase whole map's volume. I think the volume should be consistent with volume with music, so increasing it by 10% everywhere wouldn't kill you.

[Insane]

Either -1HP or -1OD. It's not hard to play. But missing 3 notes here can be death because of high HP drain and if you cannot play high OD accurately, you will fail too easily.
00:04:280 (3) - Moving this slider on 134;149 makes the pattern visually better, because before the distance between object was visually not perfect.
00:14:150 (3) - ^ 368;23
00:16:892 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move circles like this to make shape symmetrical with 00:16:570 (2), this is kinda unsymmetrical and why would it be unperfect?

00:16:892 (3) - 84;296
00:16:972 (4) - 87;271
00:17:053 (5) - 97;248
00:17:133 (6) - 113;229
00:17:214 (7) - 134;216

00:37:537 (4,5) - Stack them on the same place. It fits the music better because these are exactly the same notes.
00:47:699 (2,3) - I still don't like this pattern. Reason is just at the start of a mod.
00:55:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe some symmetry with 00:55:441 (5)
01:03:344 (3,1) - Make a perfect stack.
01:03:989 (1,2,3,4) - Make the space between all these sliders consistent.
01:05:763 (3,4) - Told before.
01:23:989 (2,3) - ^
01:45:602 (2,3) - ^
01:50:117 (5,6,7,8) - Place any hitsound or change sampleset here. If you listen to music you can hear that there is just such a rare sound which imo should be hitsounded. Obviously at all diffs.
02:15:279 (2,3) - Same as before.
02:25:602 (2,3) - ^
02:40:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - What about making more clear shape?
03:14:957 (3) - I'd use copy of 03:14:634 (2) instead and using CTRL+H, CTRL+J on it, this is imo not so clear pattern.
03:26:570 (3,4) - Same as before.
03:48:344 (2,3) - Atleast blanket with 03:47:860 (1) properly.
03:49:795 (3,4) - It's really such annoying pattern.. just saying it again and again

03:57:537 (3,4) - ^

Good map, but needs a bit of improvement of perfection and needs to get aesthetic.

[Hard]

00:07:699 (2,1) - Avoid this overlap
00:27:699 (1,2,3) - Quite flow break. I prefer adding note on 00:27:537. You can stack with slider or with 00:26:892 (2)'s start.
00:38:505 (2) - Moving on 143;115 avoids ugly overlap perfectly.
03:30:441 (2,1) - Make a perfect blanket

Much better diff, but I recommend to clear a lot of overlaps.

[Xinely's Normal]

00:25:279 (1,2) - Symmetry please
00:33:989 (2) - Don't worry of ignoring distance snap a bit to imrpove blanketing. See it's better when it's on 206;123
00:37:215 (2) - ^
00:39:150 (2,3,4) - Gosh.. make this pattern perfect, it sux.
00:45:924 (1,2,3) - ^
01:00:118 (4,5,1) - ^
02:02:054 (3,4,1) - ^
02:56:892 (3) - Sounds weird. Consider using another slider length.
03:58:183 (1,2) - Blanketing..

Good difficulty, but needs to improve blanketing really much and it will be fine.

[Gero's Easy]

Perfect map, but I've got only one think I'd like to change:
02:21:247 (1,2) - Could you consider making place where is red point sharper by making previous point's curve lower? It's your choice, but I think this shape is nicer than you've done.

[aabc's Taiko Oni]

I'd delete all new combos. It's unnecessary.
00:16:892 (4) - k
00:55:118 (2,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1) - Kinda over+offmapping

(well, whole map is overmapped, but this is kinda confusing)
02:17:699 (2,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1) - ^
02:31:086 (1) - k
02:43:989 (2,3) - kk
02:56:892 (2) - k
03:34:312 (1) - k
03:54:957 (1) - k

Good diff, but kinda overmapped.

Overall map is good. Good luck with rank.

aabc271

osu! Alumni

1,315 posts

Joined August 2009

aabc271 2013-07-29T15:46:26+00:00

Wafu wrote:
Black - Suggestion
Blue - Highly recommended to fix
Red - Unrankable

[aabc's Taiko Oni]

I'd delete all new combos. It's unnecessary. I have no preference for this. Maybe Natsu can help me fix this ?
00:16:892 (4) - k I'll keep this as d because DK (4,1) is actually based on the rising instrumental pitch. Changing this to KK is like ignoring the music, which doesn't fit well
00:55:118 (2,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1) - Kinda over+offmapping (well, whole map is overmapped, but this is kinda confusing)Well, this actually looks fine for me. In terms of difficulty, this stream has a very similar level with others. I know this stream is not strictly following the music, but after consideration of pattern consistency and feeling delivery, I decided to use the current stream
02:17:699 (2,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1) - ^ ^
02:31:086 (1) - k Same reason as 00:16:892
02:43:989 (2,3) - kk I used DD here because the later K (1) has a significantly higher pitch than these 2, so I think DD is a better choice
02:56:892 (2) - k Similar reason as 00:16:892, the later K (1) sounds more high-pitched, so DK fits better in my mind
03:34:312 (1) - k ^
03:54:957 (1) - k ^

Good diff, but kinda overmapped. I'm sorry, but I really think this song justifies this level of taiko oni ( 9+* )
The song is intense throughout the song ( except the x0.8~0.9 section ) and therefore a harder diff fits this song well
As I mentioned in my post, this is actually my hardest aabc's Taiko, and at first I even named this as inner oni
This map is indeed not easy, but I do believe I have valid reasons supporting that
But well, at least I'm glad to hear this is a good diff :3

I'll ask Natsu about the hitsound volume issue. Current volume in my diff sounds reasonable for me

Overall map is good. Good luck with rank.

Nothing changed, but still, thanks for your mod

Natsu

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Topic Starter

Natsu 2013-07-29T22:09:36+00:00

Wafu wrote:
M4M

I miss storyboard on this map so much
What about considering making at least Lyrics storyboard. I think it would fit this map. Maybe some effect at the kiai start etc. But I can't force you. Just saying it would fit. (You can poke me and request me for it and I'll maybe accept, have nothing to do >_<) Yeah SB gonna be nice If you wanna do it go ahead It will be nice :3
Increase whole map's volume. I think the volume should be consistent with volume with music, so increasing it by 10% everywhere wouldn't kill you.[/color]

[Insane]

Either -1HP or -1OD. It's not hard to play. But missing 3 notes here can be death because of high HP drain and if you cannot play high OD accurately, you will fail too easily.
00:04:280 (3) - Moving this slider on 134;149 makes the pattern visually better, because before the distance between object was visually not perfect.
00:14:150 (3) - ^ 368;23[/color] done in my way
00:16:892 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move circles like this to make shape symmetrical with 00:16:570 (2), this is kinda unsymmetrical and why would it be unperfect? okay
00:37:537 (4,5) - Stack them on the same place. It fits the music better because these are exactly the same notes. I dont like stacks so much since they break the flowhttps://osu.ppy.sh/forum/posting.php?mode=quote&f=6&p=2464823#
00:47:699 (2,3) - I still don't like this pattern. Reason is just at the start of a mod. maybe it not look cool but play so natural with player cursor
00:55:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe some symmetry with 00:55:441 (5) okay
01:03:344 (3,1) - Make a perfect stack.
01:03:989 (1,2,3,4) - Make the space between all these sliders consistent. done
01:05:763 (3,4) - Told before.
01:23:989 (2,3) - ^
01:45:602 (2,3) - ^
01:50:117 (5,6,7,8) - Place any hitsound or change sampleset here. If you listen to music you can hear that there is just such a rare sound which imo should be hitsounded. Obviously at all diffs. since i dont like hitsounds in the middle of stream since they confuse the player thats why I use normal smaplest to makke it easy to follow
02:15:279 (2,3) - Same as before.
02:25:602 (2,3) - ^[/color]
02:40:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - What about making more clear shape? I move some circles making ti more curved
03:14:957 (3) - I'd use copy of 03:14:634 (2) instead and using CTRL+H, CTRL+J on it, this is imo not so clear pattern. okay
03:26:570 (3,4) - Same as before.
03:48:344 (2,3) - Atleast blanket with 03:47:860 (1) properly. done
03:49:795 (3,4) - It's really such annoying pattern.. just saying it again and again same explain as before x_X
03:57:537 (3,4) - ^[/color]

Good map, but needs a bit of improvement of perfection and needs to get aesthetic. thanks

[Hard]

00:07:699 (2,1) - Avoid this overlap done
00:27:699 (1,2,3) - Quite flow break. I prefer adding note on 00:27:537. You can stack with slider or with 00:26:892 (2)'s start.
00:38:505 (2) - Moving on 143;115 avoids ugly overlap perfectly. okay[/color]
03:30:441 (2,1) - Make a perfect blanket ok

Much better diff, but I recommend to clear a lot of overlaps. yeah maybe I will up AR to 8 to avoid they

Overall map is good. Good luck with rank. thanks for mod

Xinely

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Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-07-29T22:56:07+00:00

Wafu wrote:
M4M

Black - Suggestion
Blue - Highly recommended to fix
Red - Unrankable

[Xinely's Normal]

00:25:279 (1,2) - Symmetry please
00:33:989 (2) - Don't worry of ignoring distance snap a bit to imrpove blanketing. See it's better when it's on 206;123
00:37:215 (2) - ^
00:39:150 (2,3,4) - Gosh.. make this pattern perfect, it sux.
00:45:924 (1,2,3) - ^
01:00:118 (4,5,1) - ^
02:02:054 (3,4,1) - ^
02:56:892 (3) - Sounds weird. Consider using another slider length.
03:58:183 (1,2) - Blanketing..
[/color]

Good difficulty, but needs to improve blanketing really much and it will be fine.

thanks 4 mod
.osu given natsu in game

Overall map is good. Good luck with rank.

riffy

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riffy 2013-07-30T07:13:09+00:00

yo!

[General]

Try to find an 1024x768 BG or 1366x768 BG. So, we will make sure that BGl looks good on any PC.
Taiko diff has different offset. :< Please, fix it as soon as ppossible!
You need one more taiko diff! according to this rule your mapset is unrankable.
I'd add a storyboard. I know, it's hard and takes a lot of time. But it will make mapset much more interesting for players! Well, I'm not forcing you but please, think about it!

[Gero's Easy]

First of all, AR1 is TOO low. I'd recommend you to use AR3 because song is kinda fast. Anyway, if you want to keep this diff really ease, AR2 is fine, too.
Note: don't forget to increase HP Drain by one tick, too! (Only if you set AR3)
00:05:925 (1) - unsnapped spinner. :< You know, all objects should be snapped properly to fit with music
00:25:279 (1,2) - your consistent 1/1 rhythm kinda breaks here, it may confuse beginners a little bit. If you try to mphasize vocals here, you can get more consistent rhythm like uh.. this.
Note: 01:08:505 (4,1) - 01:16:892 (1,2) - and so on - same as above. I know, it's really hard to make an [Easy] for fast songs. Just make sure that it is playable for beginners!
00:30:763 (4) - consider adding a new combo here? I'm sure that it will help you to emphasize vocals! What's more it fits with your pattern much better!
00:33:344 (2) - nazi - I'm not sure if beginners are able to read such patterns. That loop can confuse them, so how about using something more readable?
00:37:537 (3) - This slider doesn't reflect music well, imo. I'd recommend you to place an 1/2 slider or a circle on 00:37:537 and slider on 00:38:021. So, rhythm will look like this
01:03:989 (1,1) - to keep your comboing consistent, I'd remove NCs here and place one NC on 01:04:312 (2) - it will help you to keep patterns and rhythm consistent + it fits here better, imo!
01:04:312 (2) - consider adding a circle here to follow vocals and music better. It is really needed here!
02:20:602 - try to place an 1/2 slider with repeat here. Too much of empty space will stress beginners!
Note: if you dsagree - remove unused green line :3/
02:38:183 - this beat is begging for a circle! Place it here to emphasize vocals and music, beginners will like it, I'm sure!
03:29:473 (6,1,2) - nazi - there is only ONE overlap in the whole diff. It looks kinda out of your pattern. I'd recommend you to avoid this overlap if it is possible. :<
04:14:876 (1) - is this spinner really needed here? This is the easiest diff, I think there's no need to place this short spinner here. It will confuse players. :<

I don't really like low AR and some rhythm changes here. Anyway, diff is pretty good!

[Xinely's Normal]

00:02:035 - I'd recommend you to start mapping from this point. As for 00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - you should remove them. Players will use these 4 ignored beats to catch your rhythm!
00:17:215 - music stops and fades out here, so consider ending a slider here as well. Adding a repeat to 00:16:892 (3) - will be a good idea.
Note: 00:27:537 - same happens here with vocals. But I'm not sure about this one, please ask someone else to confirm it :<
00:33:021 (1,2) - nazi - I know you as a really good mapper, and I'm 140% sure that you can make a cute blanket slider here!
Note: unfortunately, a lot of blankets here look a little bit messy. I think you can change them yourself since you're experienced enough. Anyway, feel gree to poke me if you'll need some help with them :>
00:47:860 (3,1) - nazi - it doesn't flows really good. Tail of (1) is too close, so players may mistakenly hit it. Consider moving it somewhere else, please!
Note: same 01:40:118 (1,2) - 02:28:344 (4,1) - :<
01:40:118 (1,2) - how about adding a circle here to emphasize drums? It will also make yourrhythm more consistent and easier understandable
03:20:763 (1) - ULTRA-NAZI - for some reason I really dislike the curve here. Just make this slider straight as you did it with (2). It looks much better, imo.

Awesome diff! Cute patterns and simple rhythm! I like it very much!

[Hard]

AR7 looks too slow here. Playfield is flooded with hitobjecs and Ar doesn't match with SV at all. try to use Ar8, it will make your patterns much more readable!
Note: yes, it will hurt balance of this mapset. But I'm SURE that it's needed here. at least ask someone else to confirm that I'm right/wrong.
00:05:805 (1,1) - players need some time after spinner. Slider appears too fast. It's reeeeally hard to catch it, a specially here, when BPM is so fast! Try to leave some space between spinner and slider. Same happens with other spinners! :<
Note: also, spinner should be started EXACTLY on the red tick. We should follow music as close, as possible!
00:27:699 (1,2,3) - to be honest, I don't really like these triplets. It seems like you don't really use 1/4 circles in this diff. So, these tripletsmay confuse players.
Note: 00:58:021 (1,2,3) - same :<
02:09:876 (1) - 02:17:941 (1) - 03:33:586 (1) - don't you think that such spinners are too short. This is not an [Insane] diff and some players need more time to detect and complete the spinner. :<

Low AR looks really strange here, imo. Diff is well-mapped and has cute rhythm, tho.

[Insane]

Personally, I don't relly like diff settings here. How about OD8 and H Drain 7? it will make diff more playable and it makes sense with your rhythm. :<
00:47:699 (2,3) - nazi - I like this diff so much, but some blankets are a little bit messy. It bugs me a lot, so please make this blanket a bit neater.
01:07:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is overmap! Please, try to avoid overmap because it is confusing for players and doesn't fit with music! I'm sre, that you can make this diff challenging enough without overmapping!
Note: 01:16:247 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 02:40:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ~~OH MY GOD~~
01:49:473 (3) - I'd use Ctrl+G for this slider because it gives better flow, imo. Anyway, just try and see if you like it or not!
02:04:634 (1,1) - remove these NCs becausethey follow nothing in music and break your comboing :<
Note: 04:04:957 (1,1,1) - same
03:58:666 (1) - nazi - this heart doesn't looks PERFECT, so you can improve this. Read this to improve this slider and to avoid the same mistake in future

Those streams are really crazy. o3o/ Just make sure that there's no overmapping and you'll get really awesome map!

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Good luck!

Natsu

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Topic Starter

Natsu 2013-07-30T08:36:00+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
yo!

[General]
Try to find an 1024x768 BG or 1366x768 BG. So, we will make sure that BGl looks good on any PC. yeah will fix x_x
Taiko diff has different offset. :< Please, fix it as soon as ppossible! Oh I will discuse this with the mapper :3
You need one more taiko diff! according to this rule your mapset is unrankable. I know another mapper is making muzu right now I think
I'd add a storyboard. I know, it's hard and takes a lot of time. But it will make mapset much more interesting for players! Well, I'm not forcing you but please, think about it! yeah since wafu told me the same maybe he wanna make some for this
[Hard]
AR7 looks too slow here. Playfield is flooded with hitobjecs and Ar doesn't match with SV at all. try to use Ar8, it will make your patterns much more readable! yup up to AR8
Note: yes, it will hurt balance of this mapset. But I'm SURE that it's needed here. at least ask someone else to confirm that I'm right/wrong.
00:05:805 (1,1) - players need some time after spinner. Slider appears too fast. It's reeeeally hard to catch it, a specially here, when BPM is so fast! Try to leave some space between spinner and slider. Same happens with other spinners! :< fixed i reduce 1/2 some spinners
Note: also, spinner should be started EXACTLY on the red tick. We should follow music as close, as possible!
00:27:699 (1,2,3) - to be honest, I don't really like these triplets. It seems like you don't really use 1/4 circles in this diff. So, these tripletsmay confuse players.
Note: 00:58:021 (1,2,3) - same :< I will keep this for now since just 2 triplet dont hurt it but your opinion is right too so i wanna hear more opinions about his one
02:09:876 (1) - 02:17:941 (1) - 03:33:586 (1) - don't you think that such spinners are too short. This is not an [Insane] diff and some players need more time to detect and complete the spinner. :< I map that three spinner :3 should be fine now

Low AR looks really strange here, imo. Diff is well-mapped and has cute rhythm, tho. thanks look and play alñlot better with AR8
[Insane]
Personally, I don't relly like diff settings here. How about OD8 and H Drain 7? it will make diff more playable and it makes sense with your rhythm. :< Yeah but since alt of testers and me want to keep the OD9 since this make the map more challenge imo
00:47:699 (2,3) - nazi - I like this diff so much, but some blankets are a little bit messy. It bugs me a lot, so please make this blanket a bit neater. fixed
01:07:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is overmap! Please, try to avoid overmap because it is confusing for players and doesn't fit with music! I'm sre, that you can make this diff challenging enough without overmapping!
Note: 01:16:247 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 02:40:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ~~OH MY GOD~~ well mmm they fit the music for me since the 3/4 rhythm is really low but is on there and the overmap is just little mmm more of tester and modders enjoy this part of deathstream since it make the game more intersting also in my point of view they follow the music vocals/rhythm thats why I wanna keep they
01:49:473 (3) - I'd use Ctrl+G for this slider because it gives better flow, imo. Anyway, just try and see if you like it or not! i move the slider to another position better
02:04:634 (1,1) - remove these NCs becausethey follow nothing in music and break your comboing :< Done
Note: 04:04:957 (1,1,1) - same ok
03:58:666 (1) - nazi - this heart doesn't looks PERFECT, so you can improve this. Read this to improve this slider and to avoid the same mistake in future orz I add a spinner there better T-T

Those streams are really crazy. o3o/ Just make sure that there's no overmapping and you'll get really awesome map! thanks
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Good luck! thanks you and thanks for mod also xinely diff updated but she is lazy huehue so always bring me her diff on pm iin game

Hikaros

197 posts

Joined August 2008

Hikaros 2013-07-30T09:04:35+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
01:07:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is overmap! Please, try to avoid overmap because it is confusing for players and doesn't fit with music! I'm sre, that you can make this diff challenging enough without overmapping!
Note: 01:16:247 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 02:40:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ~~OH MY GOD~~

wtf? you basically want to kill the funniest parts of the map? without those itd be just as generic as most of the recent maps. Id call it streamy not overmapped and in my opinion every map should have things like that instead of being so boring... latest maps are so damn easy because they lack these kind of streams. Please stop suggesting for them to be removed.

Natsu i love dem streams, keep up the awesome job <3

Wafu

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Joined June 2011

Wafu 2013-07-30T09:12:40+00:00

^ We're finding fun in perfection, not in overmap.
@Natsu: Okay, storyboard is WIP.

Natsu

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Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2013-07-30T09:14:21+00:00

Wafu wrote:
^ We're finding fun in perfection, not in overmap.
@Natsu: Okay, storyboard is WIP. thanks :3

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2013-07-30T12:25:56+00:00

Yue

Aqui va el ~~horrible~~ mod:

General:
-La diff de Gerin no tiene puesto el PreviewTime mientras que todas las demas diff si la tienen D: yeah, fixed :3

Gero's Easy:

00:13:666 - creo que deberias agregar un circle aqui, se oye un poco vacio y hay musica asi que deberias considerarlo. fixed
00:16:247 - ^
00:17:537 (1,2) - siento que esto no esta bien, podrias intentar algo asi->
SPOILER
se oye mucho mejor es mas facil de jugar meh, no me gusta :< no cambios yue lo siento
01:03:344 - deberias agregar un circle porque va perfectamente con la voz. O por lo menos colocar un slider con repeticion que empieze ahi, claro que tendrias que borar los 2 circles que siguen. Fixed
02:15:602 - aqui tambien puede ir perfectamente un circle o3o fixed
04:14:796 (2,1) - o.o! creo que deberias borrar (2) y poner el spiner ahi necesito mas opiniones acerca de esto :3 no cambios por ahora

Yo y mis mods feos.

Mucha suerte Natsu-nyan! de dejare una estrella o3o

kogasa

Hello! From my modding queue.

General
-Background image is not the recommended size?

Gero's Easy
00:05:925 (1) - Unsnapped spinner ending. Fixed
00:39:150 (2) - Placement looks a little odd. i dont think so
03:42:699 (1) - The timing on the end of this sounds off. Fixed
-Slider at the end seems a bit too short for new players.

Sorry I couldn't be of much help.
Love this map, good luck!

mathi747

Hi~ late mod
yo tenia un mod para esto pero lo perdi por un apagon ;_;

[box=easy]01:28:021 - me parece que qedaria bueno una nota aca y que el spin empezara aca 01:28:344 -
04:14:473 - algo parecido a lo de arriva aca(?
00:39:150 (2) - se que es por simetria pero este cambio de spacing lo siento feo
02:20:602 - no muy importante pero aca hay una linea verde sin usar
pd:espero no te hallas olvidado de los histounds que me prometiste ;_;

All fixed

no insane mod because ~~im too lazy~~ its too hard for me

Chronotakular

Hello there!

[Gero's Easy]

This map, as of right now, is very good.

-The first spinner might be too short for an easy difficulty. Also, I would completely get rid of the last spinner. The last spinner is too difficult for an easy difficulty, in my opinion. this is not very difficult no changes

This map is really great! I hope it hits ranked in the near future so I can play it seriously!

I hope I was able to help you in someway! Good luck!

Losertic

Hello!

From M4M.

[box=Modding][notice]

General

Pass.

Gero's Easy

00:30:763 (1) - NC.
00:39:795 (3) - move x-346.
00:45:279 (4) - NC.
01:03:344 - add note? or 01:03:344 ~ 01:03:666 add slider.
02:26:247 (1) - nc 02:26:570 (2) - remove nc
03:29:473 (1) - nc 03:29:795 (2) - remove nc
04:14:473 - add note?

All Fixed

insane too hard ;_;. i died stream part.

and good map. S.T.A.R

Wafu

M4M

Black - Suggestion
Blue - Highly recommended to fix
Red - Unrankable

I miss storyboard on this map so much

What about considering making at least Lyrics storyboard. I think it would fit this map. Maybe some effect at the kiai start etc. But I can't force you. Just saying it would fit. (You can poke me and request me for it and I'll maybe accept, have nothing to do >_<)
Increase whole map's volume. I think the volume should be consistent with volume with music, so increasing it by 10% everywhere wouldn't kill you.

[Gero's Easy]

Perfect map, but I've got only one think I'd like to change:
02:21:247 (1,2) - Could you consider making place where is red point sharper by making previous point's curve lower? It's your choice, but I think this shape is nicer than you've done. Fixed

Overall map is good. Good luck with rank.

-Bakari-

yo! You! =3

[Gero's Easy]

First of all, AR1 is TOO low. I'd recommend you to use AR3 because song is kinda fast. Anyway, if you want to keep this diff really ease, AR2 is fine, too. Yes bakadi fixed o3o
Note: don't forget to increase HP Drain by one tick, too! (Only if you set AR3)
00:05:925 (1) - unsnapped spinner. :< You know, all objects should be snapped properly to fit with music fixed
00:25:279 (1,2) - your consistent 1/1 rhythm kinda breaks here, it may confuse beginners a little bit. If you try to mphasize vocals here, you can get more consistent rhythm like uh.. this. mmm i don't think so this soonds bad imo :<
Note: 01:08:505 (4,1) - 01:16:892 (1,2) - and so on - same as above. I know, it's really hard to make an [Easy] for fast songs. Just make sure that it is playable for beginners! ^
00:30:763 (4) - consider adding a new combo here? I'm sure that it will help you to emphasize vocals! What's more it fits with your pattern much better! fixed
00:33:344 (2) - nazi - I'm not sure if beginners are able to read such patterns. That loop can confuse them, so how about using something more readable? orz :< i like this slider ;_; no changes for now
00:37:537 (3) - This slider doesn't reflect music well, imo. I'd recommend you to place an 1/2 slider or a circle on 00:37:537 and slider on 00:38:021. So, rhythm will look like this yes of course <3 fixed
01:03:989 (1,1) - to keep your comboing consistent, I'd remove NCs here and place one NC on 01:04:312 (2) - it will help you to keep patterns and rhythm consistent + it fits here better, imo! fixed
01:04:312 (2) - consider adding a circle here to follow vocals and music better. It is really needed here! fixed
02:20:602 - try to place an 1/2 slider with repeat here. Too much of empty space will stress beginners! fixed :3/
Note: if you dsagree - remove unused green line :3/
02:38:183 - this beat is begging for a circle! Place it here to emphasize vocals and music, beginners will like it, I'm sure! mmm really? I think it's okay for now orz :c
03:29:473 (6,1,2) - nazi - there is only ONE overlap in the whole diff. It looks kinda out of your pattern. I'd recommend you to avoid this overlap if it is possible. :< orz orz i like this pattern :c , I need more opinions on this mentioned more times if it takes away
04:14:876 (1) - is this spinner really needed here? This is the easiest diff, I think there's no need to place this short spinner here. It will confuse players. :< fixed

I don't really like low AR and some rhythm changes here. Anyway, diff is pretty good!

~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck!

My Updated

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 141086
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:INSIDE IDENTITY
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Creator:Natsu
Version:Gero's Easy
Source:Chu-2 byo demo KOI ga shitai
Tags:Xinely Gero aabc271 中二病でも恋がしたい! Lantis ZAQ Uchida Maaya Akasaki Chinatsu Asakura Azumi Uesaka Sumire Kyoto Togashi Yuuta Takanashi Rikka Nibutani Shinka Dekomori Sanae Tsuyuri Kumin Ending
BeatmapID:282223
BeatmapSetID:100682

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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riffy

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riffy 2013-07-30T14:22:23+00:00

Hikaros wrote:
wtf? you basically want to kill the funniest parts of the map? without those itd be just as generic as most of the recent maps. Id call it streamy not overmapped and in my opinion every map should have things like that instead of being so boring... latest maps are so damn easy because they lack these kind of streams. Please stop suggesting for them to be removed.

It's about following music. I didn't hear ANY music on somebeats like 01:16:650 - 01:19:231 (6,8) - and others. if we will follow music as close as possible, streams will become something interesting instead of "just alot of 1/4 notes with reduced spacing"

Anyway, if mapper wants to map even REALLY QUITE beats, it's up to him. :/

Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 2013-07-30T15:28:09+00:00

^ You're right. This is rhythm game, not fantasy.

Hikaros

197 posts

Joined August 2008

Hikaros 2013-07-30T17:49:20+00:00

To players like me it makes a lot of sense and fun streams like those in a rythm game and i am way more experienced than you, just because you can't play those maps/levels don't say "players would enjoy it more if you fix the overmapping" cuz hell i know most players like me woudn't enjoy it more if natsu removed those streams. If it were for people like you there wouldn't be maps like Mythologia or Hatsune Miku - Rubik's Cube and a lot of more maps like these... osu maps would be so f****** boring without maps like these. People who barely play the easy insane maps shouldn't be allowed to mod those levels for the rest i am not saying "hey stop mapping" because hell you guys made a pretty good job modding but for these insanes you shouldn't if you can't play them.

Wafu

1,703 posts

Joined June 2011

Wafu 2013-07-30T18:16:35+00:00

I can play really insane maps and don't say you're more experienced. I won't make the spamstorm here, I will close it by this post. Joined osu! longer time before me = More experienced? Nope. Higher rank means you're pro obviously... because I don't play like 1 year. I just in most cases close the map before the end so I'm not getting pp etc. and don't want to ruin my accuracy by making A etc. I'm currently mainly mapper and modder and its part is obviously testing maps of every difficulty.

Don't flame and act like pro unless you're not right. Thanks~

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2013-07-30T20:50:49+00:00

Calm down guys x_x im gonna run 1 time again at 25% to see what I can do since yesterday I checked but I heart 3/4 rhythm and was all right plz dont fight PEACE AND LOVE huehue :3

Btw updated Gero diff

CXu

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Joined March 2009

CXu 2013-07-30T21:08:35+00:00

This map makes me realise I need to map that god-damn easy on my own mapset ;_;

GoldenWolf

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Joined May 2012

GoldenWolf 2013-07-30T21:18:51+00:00

There are some overmapped streams indeed, but they're not "bad" overmapped ones, they still fit the song, play well and aren't confusing, even at OD9 (Well at least for me, but I'm not even a good player, so...)
I didn't notice any stream that should be removed for any reasons other than they're overmapped (And as I said, they're nicely done imo)

Just my 2 cents.

ReySHeL

612 posts

Joined March 2012

ReySHeL 2013-07-31T00:43:38+00:00

Muzu diff finished~

update and add to reyshel tag plz!
http://puu.sh/3PQyJ.zip

Natsu

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Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2013-07-31T01:09:33+00:00

ReySHeL wrote:
Muzu diff finished~
update and add to reyshel tag plz!
http://puu.sh/3PQyJ.zip

thanks and added

/

GoldenWolf wrote:
There are some overmapped streams indeed, but they're not "bad" overmapped ones, they still fit the song, play well and aren't confusing, even at OD9 (Well at least for me, but I'm not even a good player, so...)
I didn't notice any stream that should be removed for any reasons other than they're overmapped (And as I said, they're nicely done imo)

Just my 2 cents.

I know since I like how I make the streams but im open if some body suggest me better rhythms them obiously I will change they for better game play, since people told overmap but they dont suggest me a better rhythm x_X :C

CrazyErrorMan

110 posts

Joined February 2013

CrazyErrorMan 2013-07-31T02:10:03+00:00

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If you don't know how to load up AiMod then follow my steps.
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