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Nakanishi Ryosuke - Nyuubu Todoke

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Zero__wind
Hi :3 from my queue

Hard
HP6 OD6
00:18:111 (4) - add whistle and 00:18:986 (2) - add whistle ? same whistle pattern suggestions for the siilar pat follows, like 00:26:111 (4,2) -
00:22:111 (4) - whistle at end ?
00:24:111 (1) - finish at recerse point
00:28:861 (1) - make it more "curvy" to match with the former slider
00:42:111 (4) - whistle on head, just like what you did before
00:45:611 (4) - maybe form a blancket with 00:45:111 (3) - 's tail
00:48:611 (9,1) - exchange NC ?
00:50:111 (5) - whistle on head

Normal
OD4
00:15:111 (4) - seems no need to add finish here
why don't you add claps regularly? It seems that there should be claps on 00:18:611 (3,4) - 's ends
00:42:611 (3) - remove finish at the end
00:49:111 (1,1) - plz obey the distance snap, and there's no need to add a single NC on 00:49:111 (1) -
00:55:361 (1) - finish ?

Easy
Use NC1 instead of N for the first timing point 00:00:611 - so the sliderslide noise won't bother
00:22:611 (3) - remove the finish on head, the finish at end is fine
00:24:361 (1) - only add finish at end, remove the one on head
00:32:361 (1) - move the finish from its head to its end
00:33:111 (2) - whissle on head
00:36:111 (1) - remove the whistle at end
00:37:111 (2) - add whistle
00:43:111 (2) - no need to add finish here
00:48:611 (1) - add finish
00:50:611 (4,1) - avoid the small overlap between them would look better
00:55:361 (1) - this spinner is a bit short for the Easiest diff, replacee it with a long slider, or remve 00:55:111 (3) - and start the spinner there

Good luck
Smoothie

Zero__wind wrote:

Hard
HP6 OD6 Alright
00:18:111 (4) - add whistle and 00:18:986 (2) - add whistle ? same whistle pattern suggestions for the siilar pat follows, like 00:26:111 (4,2) - I don't really think they fit.
00:22:111 (4) - whistle at end ? ^
00:24:111 (1) - finish at recerse point Sure
00:28:861 (1) - make it more "curvy" to match with the former slider Alright
00:42:111 (4) - whistle on head, just like what you did before I'd rather not.
00:45:611 (4) - maybe form a blancket with 00:45:111 (3) - 's tail Okay
00:48:611 (9,1) - exchange NC ? Nah
00:50:111 (5) - whistle on head Doesn't really fit imo.
Thank you!

Update
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[Metadata]
Title:Nyuubu Todoke
TitleUnicode:入部届
Artist:Nakanishi Ryosuke
ArtistUnicode:中西 亮輔
Creator:[Epicz]
Version:Smoothie's Hard
Source:Kuruko no Basuke
Tags:Basketball OST Smoothie
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BeatmapSetID:85924

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OverallDifficulty:6
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Rakuen
DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Good >.o /
Resuze the background to 1024x768

Offset: 616 (nearest I found, please change and try)
Even a little offset will affect the game play

[Easy]
Please follow more white tick for Easy
00:09:611 - Add Circle
00:13:611 - Add Circle
00:48:111 - Add Circle

[Normal]
>.o)b

[Hard]
00:40:861 - Add Circle or something else cuz the music started already
You can try to map the leftover part of the music

Good luck
Lally
hiii o3o

[General]
  • Inconsistency in combo colours since you don't have different BG's i don't see a reason for having different combo colors
[Easy]
Spacing:
  1. 00:43:111 (2,3) - here the spacing is different from the rest i think an other for of slider will hel something like:
    Here is the code for you :3
    103,253,43111,2,0,P|119:285|188:308,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    250,242,44111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Placement:
  1. 00:18:611 (3,4,1) - the blankets here can be done better; just try to stak better 00:19:111 (4) - with 00:22:111 (2) -
  2. 00:25:111 (2,3) - same about here
  3. 00:28:111 (4,1) - same about here
  4. 00:32:361 (1,2) - imo is better to do it like:
  5. 00:37:861 (3,4) - try to do it like this: if you follow this, place 00:40:611 (5) - to x:239 y:309
Hitsounds:
  1. 00:13:111 (2) - whistle since it follows the song and because you have the same sound here as 00:09:111 (2) -
  2. 00:16:611 - from here try to follow the same patterns i mean:

    nothing / finish when is needed
    clap
    nothing /finish if is needed
    whistle
    nothing / finish when is needed
    because atm you're going sometimes a bit random with hitsounds
[Normal]
Spacing:
  1. 00:11:111 (4,1) - this can confuse very much,my suggestion is to move 00:11:111 (4) - like this:
Placement:
  1. 00:29:611 (2,3,4) - try something like this:
  2. 00:37:861 (3,4) - try something like:
  3. 00:41:861 (2,3) - this little overlap is a bit uglu imo try to improve it
  4. 00:48:361 (4,5) - i think is better t replace this 2 circles with a slider
  5. 00:53:611 (4,5,6) - try to do here the same as 00:29:611 (2,3,4) -
Hitsounds:
  • Follow what I said in Easy :3
[Hard]
  1. 00:24:111 (1) - i have a little rhythm suggestion here: it will sound better and will be consistent with the prev patterns
  2. 00:34:361 (4,5) - try to improve the blanket like:
  3. 00:51:361 (2,3) - do a better blaket here

really nice mapset OwO have a staru-chan
CXu
Sup, from my queue.
Under 1 minute? Awwyeah less work.

[General]
  1. Pretty sure the offset should be 633ms.
  2. You have a SB in [Easy], but not the other diffs. Move the SB lines to a separate .osb file. Also, the SB uses flashes that are in 4:3, while the bg is 16:9. This makes it look pretty weird when playing with widescreen. Consider either cropping the bg, or enlarge the flashes (though I don't really know if this is allowed or not.)
  3. Add "basket" into tags, as well as maybe "Kagami Taiga" and "Kuroko Tetsuya"? Also add "黒子のバスケ" to tags.


[Easy]
  1. CS2? It is the easiest diff after all, and normal uses CS3 as well. :P
  2. 00:13:111 (2) - Change clap to whistle.
  3. 00:13:861 (3) - Remove whistle.
  4. 00:19:111 (4) - Move 1 gridlvl4 down.
  5. 00:19:111 - Clap[
  6. 00:22:111 - Whistle
  7. And so on I guess. It works fairly well to have clap on the 2nd beat, and whistle on the 4th beat, so just add in the missing ones.
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:611 - Why is this set to soft sampleset custom 3? Keep consistency with [Easy], and use N:C1 here as well. And you don't have any custom sounds on S:C3 anyway :P
  2. 00:13:111 (2,4) - Somehow get these centered? Looks better imo when the (4) is in the center of the spinner when the spinner appears. You can get it to the middle by moving 00:08:361 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - so that the note is in center.
  3. 00:32:361 (1) - Move to 72;276 for a straight line between (1,2)
  4. 00:37:861 (3,4) - Extend (3) so it has the repeat on 00:38:236 - and ends at 00:38:611 - , remove (4) and add a note at 00:38:861 -
[Smoothie's Hard]
  1. Different combocolors? Your colors are a bit dark imo, and blends in a bit more. Consider making them a bit lighter. Especially Color1 can blend a bit with the left part of the bg.
  2. Cool
That's all, good luck!
Smoothie

DEAncientNaga wrote:

DEAncientNaga
[Hard]
00:40:861 - Add Circle or something else cuz the music started already I want to give the players some time to focus on the next note. So i'd rather not add one there.
You can try to map the leftover part of the music

Lally wrote:

Lally
[Hard]
  1. 00:24:111 (1) - i have a little rhythm suggestion here: it will sound better and will be consistent with the prev patterns Alrighty
  2. 00:34:361 (4,5) - try to improve the blanket like: I've changed the pattern here.
  3. 00:51:361 (2,3) - do a better blaket here Done

CXu wrote:

CXu
[Smoothie's Hard]
  1. Different combocolors? Your colors are a bit dark imo, and blends in a bit more. Consider making them a bit lighter. Especially Color1 can blend a bit with the left part of the bg. Should be better now.
  2. Cool

Thank you guys!

Update
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Nyuubu Todoke.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 16111
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Nyuubu Todoke
TitleUnicode:入部届
Artist:Nakanishi Ryosuke
ArtistUnicode:中西 亮輔
Creator:[Epicz]
Version:Smoothie's Hard
Source:Kuruko no Basuke
Tags:Basketball OST Smoothie
BeatmapID:237239
BeatmapSetID:85924

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Background.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Combo3 : 0,174,0
Combo4 : 151,151,204

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Alarido
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No General issues to point.

* No complaints for [Easy] and [Normal] diffs.

[Smoothie's Hard]
00:20:861 (1) - A bit adjustement on note position can make your diff better → http://puu.sh/3ww3W.jpg

Aaaand that's it ^^ The song choice is pretty nice <3 and sound me sooooo~ [Epicz] ♥ (= Awesome!)

GO GO Map! Go Go Get it Raned <3 !!!!

Att..

P.S.: Have a Star !
Konei
I'll mod it soon, hue.
Smoothie

Alarido wrote:

[Smoothie's Hard]
00:20:861 (1) - A bit adjustement on note position can make your diff better → http://puu.sh/3ww3W.jpg I prefer it the way it is now :s

Thanks though!
Hinsvar
Hi; mod here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General
  1. The BG file's size is 1.28 MB? It really should be decreased to ~200 KB to make the beatmap's .osz smaller... You can get ~1 MB off if you do that, and that's a significant reduction!
>Easy
  1. 00:15:111 (1) - Whistle to emphasize the instrument in the song?
  2. 00:21:611 - Remove finish? I don't think it's necessary at all, since there's nothing on the music that can be emphasized with a finish here.
  3. 00:27:611 - ^
  4. 00:37:861 (3) - ^ (For this one, yeah, all of them.)
  5. 00:40:611 (5) - Whistle here?
>Normal
  1. 00:09:861 (3,4,1) - Why are the spacing not ~1.0x here?
  2. 00:41:111 (1,2) - What's with the spacing here? And looks like the entire kiai time uses a different spacing which is unnoticeable anyway...
  3. 00:49:111 (1,1) - Don't make a jump, even if you want stuff to be symmetrical, and even if it's small, in a Normal diff.
>Smoothie's Hard
  1. 00:53:361 (4,5) - Would look better if the distance between them is ~1.0x (aka spaced normally) since it'll look neater that way. Not a big deal though.
Nah, this map is already pretty good. Kinda hard to get too much thing wrong in a less-than-a-minute-with-three-diffs mapset.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Yukyy

Hinsvar wrote:

>General
  1. The BG file's size is 1.28 MB? It really should be decreased to ~200 KB to make the beatmap's .osz smaller... You can get ~1 MB off if you do that, and that's a significant reduction!
BG with reduzed file size incoming:
Click me
Topic Starter
[Epicz]

CXu wrote:

SPOILER
Sup, from my queue.
Under 1 minute? Awwyeah less work.

[General]
  1. Pretty sure the offset should be 633ms.
  2. You have a SB in [Easy], but not the other diffs. Move the SB lines to a separate .osb file. Also, the SB uses flashes that are in 4:3, while the bg is 16:9. This makes it look pretty weird when playing with widescreen. Consider either cropping the bg, or enlarge the flashes (though I don't really know if this is allowed or not.)
  3. Add "basket" into tags, as well as maybe "Kagami Taiga" and "Kuroko Tetsuya"? Also add "黒子のバスケ" to tags.


^fixed almost all except the offset-thing

[Easy]
  1. CS2? It is the easiest diff after all, and normal uses CS3 as well. :P
  2. 00:13:111 (2) - Change clap to whistle.
  3. 00:13:861 (3) - Remove whistle.
  4. 00:19:111 (4) - Move 1 gridlvl4 down.
  5. 00:19:111 - Clap[
  6. 00:22:111 - Whistle
  7. And so on I guess. It works fairly well to have clap on the 2nd beat, and whistle on the 4th beat, so just add in the missing ones.
^fixed all

[Normal]
  1. 00:00:611 - Why is this set to soft sampleset custom 3? Keep consistency with [Easy], and use N:C1 here as well. And you don't have any custom sounds on S:C3 anyway :P
  2. 00:13:111 (2,4) - Somehow get these centered? Looks better imo when the (4) is in the center of the spinner when the spinner appears. You can get it to the middle by moving 00:08:361 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - so that the note is in center.
  3. 00:32:361 (1) - Move to 72;276 for a straight line between (1,2)
  4. 00:37:861 (3,4) - Extend (3) so it has the repeat on 00:38:236 - and ends at 00:38:611 - , remove (4) and add a note at 00:38:861 -
^fixed all

That's all, good luck! thanks!

Hinsvar wrote:

SPOILER
Hi; mod here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General
  1. The BG file's size is 1.28 MB? It really should be decreased to ~200 KB to make the beatmap's .osz smaller... You can get ~1 MB off if you do that, and that's a significant reduction!
>Easy
  1. 00:15:111 (1) - Whistle to emphasize the instrument in the song?
  2. 00:21:611 - Remove finish? I don't think it's necessary at all, since there's nothing on the music that can be emphasized with a finish here.
  3. 00:27:611 - ^
  4. 00:37:861 (3) - ^ (For this one, yeah, all of them.)
  5. 00:40:611 (5) - Whistle here?
>Normal
  1. 00:09:861 (3,4,1) - Why are the spacing not ~1.0x here?
  2. 00:41:111 (1,2) - What's with the spacing here? And looks like the entire kiai time uses a different spacing which is unnoticeable anyway...
  3. 00:49:111 (1,1) - Don't make a jump, even if you want stuff to be symmetrical, and even if it's small, in a Normal diff.
Nah, this map is already pretty good. Kinda hard to get too much thing wrong in a less-than-a-minute-with-three-diffs mapset.

fixed all in both difs

Good luck on the way 8-) thanks :3
thanks for modding!
Helios_Zul
Hello. Mod From My Queue

Cool Skin !

General
1. Your approachcircle dimension must 128x128 - Your approach circle is 126x128 (AIMod)
2. Your approachcircle 2x dimension must 256x256 - Your approach circle x2 is 252x256 (AIMod)

Easy
00:43:111(2) Change It Like This ?

00:52:111(5) Move To x:308 y:156
00:52:611(1) Move To x:380 y:224

Normal
00:13:611(3) Move To x:384 y:256
00:15:111(4) Move To x:256 y:188
00:32:317(1) Move To x:64 y:284
00:33:861(3) Move To x:420 y:240
00:41:111(1) Make More Neatly

00:44:611(1) Move To x:264 y:132

Smoothie's Hard
00:27:611(4) Change It Like This?


Not Much Wrong Here~

I Hope My Mod Will Help Perhaps.
Good Luck And GO RANKED!
:) Take My Star Too ! :)
Yukyy

Helios_Zul wrote:

Hello. Mod From My Queue

Cool Skin ! Thanks^^

1. Your approachcircle dimension must 128x128 - Your approach circle is 126x128 (AIMod)
2. Your approachcircle 2x dimension must 256x256 - Your approach circle x2 is 252x256 (AIMod)
Fixed
Click
GIDZ
Hi~From modding queue: t/139620&start=0

General:
~ http://puu.sh/3Actz.jpg 0.o

Easy:
~Kiai mode should have 70% volume instead of the next section to make Kiai mode more effective.

Normal:
~Kiai mode should have 70% volume instead of the next section to make Kiai mode more effective.
~00:17:111 (1) - Note after spinner might cause confusion for beginners especially placed in the middle. You could try to move it slightly to the left and 1x distance snap everything else, but other modders might tell you off for the note after spin in normal.
~00:41:111 (1) - Same with slider but I think it's fine, maybe just have a thought about it urself first. On weather or not it's sensible to give beginners a handicap :|


Hard:
~Kiai mode should have 70% volume instead of the next section to make Kiai mode more effective.
~00:29:611 (4,5) - Make jumps instead for more fun? My suggestion --> http://puu.sh/3AcW2.jpg 2x distance snap for jumps.
~00:31:111 (7) -IF you took my suggestion, slant ur slider to the left instead and then distance snap 1x for everything else.

Nice mapping^^ Good luck!
Gamu
Hi~ Request from https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/141348

[General]

●About Source: Kuruko no Basuke is wrong.... Correct source is this. ⇒ Kuroko no Basuke You need to fix it.
●About tags: Kuroko is no need. It is because this word is used in the source. Remove please.
●About Skin: approachcircle size is 128*128...approachcircle@2x size is 256*256... Please change to the size of these.

[Easy]

●nice

[Normal]

●00:09:111 (2) - soft-clap ⇒ norma-whistle change? would be a good sound.
●00:38:861 (4) - Remove circle? I think it sounds strange. And. 00:39:111 (1) - You change start. It is 00:38:861. http://puu.sh/3ApOc.jpg
●00:52:611 (4) - Add new combo. keep the consistency.

[Smoothie's Hard]

●00:24:111 (1) - Remove new combo. And. 00:24:861 (2) - Add new combo. This might be correct..



*that's all.

sorry for little modding..orz

good luck :3
Gnep_old
Good map, very good timing.
Thanks.
Sun Rainbow
I am sorry i skip your map,Because is too prefect for me.

Star~
fanzhen0019
orz Sorry for my delay.. > <||

From my queue,


General
  • normal-hitclap is hard to recognize..
    Others are fine imo.

Easy

Hitsounds
  • Fine.
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:50:611 (4) - Blanket with 5

Normal

Hitsounds
  • Fine.
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:30:611 (4) - Put it up 2 grid in grid lv4.
  2. 00:53:611 (2,3,4) - Not blanketed very well.

    272,268,53611,2,0,P|224:260|192:236,2,70,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,54361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    232,120,54611,2,0,P|272:116|308:144,2,70,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Smoothie's Hard

Hitsounds
  • Fine.
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:29:111 (3,4,5) - Not in a good shape imo. Maybe try this?


Quite nice mapset.Star! :D
Smoothie

fanzhen0019 wrote:

Smoothie's Hard

Hitsounds
  • Fine.
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:29:111 (3,4,5) - Not in a good shape imo. Maybe try this? Alright

Thank you

Update
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Nyuubu Todoke.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 16111
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Nyuubu Todoke
TitleUnicode:入部届
Artist:Nakanishi Ryosuke
ArtistUnicode:中西 亮輔
Creator:[Epicz]
Version:Smoothie's Hard
Source:Kuroko no Basuke
Tags:Basket Basketball OST Smoothie Kagami Taiga Tetsuya 黒子のバスケ
BeatmapID:237239
BeatmapSetID:85924

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Background.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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611,500,4,1,1,50,1,0
40611,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
56611,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0


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Konei
Eh, sorry for delay.


[Easy]

  1. 00:17:111 (1) - Actually, this could be too soon after the Spinner. Try to shorten the Spinner.
  2. 00:17:611 (2) - Using finish for the whole Slider sounds way too strong, try whistles or claps instead.
  3. 00:40:611 (5) - Add a finish, also, since this is the point where music becomes strongest, start the NC here instead.
  4. 00:44:111 (3) - Try to center this on the grid, looks more tidy.
  5. 00:46:611 (3) - Allign this with 2, looks better when you work with the grid.

[Normal]

  1. 00:09:111 (2) - Just use a normal clap here, it will be consistent with the next one.
  2. 00:22:611 (3) - Try to make the shape laying straight on the grid? See if you like what I did below.
  3. 00:24:361 (1) - Make this shape smoother? In general, shapes like this look wry and such, so I think you should avoid them.
  4. 00:28:611 (1) - Finish on the end sounds kinda out of place, remove it? Red ticks are most likely not supporting strong sounds like finishes. After that, consider to add the finish on the start.
  5. 00:29:611 (2) - Copy this shape and use it on 4? Looks neater if they are similar/the same.
  6. 00:32:611 (2) - Remove finish on the end and add it on the start?
  7. 00:45:611 (2) - You could move this somewhat down to have a more awesome circle if you see what I mean.
  8. 00:49:111 (1) - Inconsistent spacing, you should fix that one.
  9. 00:54:361 (2,3) - Space them out, so that they dont touch. It looks not really pleasing to have that overlap.

[Smoothie's Hard]

  1. No complaints here, pretty good job ~

Yewp, that's about it. Hitsounds on easier difficultys are a bit inconsistent, but it should be alright with some more mods :>

Go go, get this ranked ~
Irreversible
hi ._. take my free mod!

[Easy]

00:18:611 (3) - I think adding a clap here won't hurt, it's pretty emphasizing.
00:18:611 (3) - Also, You use a pretty linear pattern here, so i would make it straight down to 00:17:611 (2) - , because it'll look a bit more polished this way.
00:19:111 (4) - Don't Forget to blanket if you applied ^.
00:39:111 (4) - Blanket nazi again, moving it a Little bit to the left will help.
00:41:611 (2) - I think you messed up the finishes in this part. 00:41:611 (2) - Either remove this here, (slider end) OR add one 00:46:611 (3) - here.
00:43:111 (3) - I would rotate this by like -15°. You'll create a better flow.

[Normal]

00:13:611 (3) - Move it a bit to the top, just blanket things.
00:20:611 (1) - Add a clap at the start?
00:22:611 (3) - ^
00:26:611 (3) - Maybe the same here, although it's a bit too loud, i would lower the clap volume if you want to add one
00:41:861 (2) - I like the rhythm you created here, but please shorten this slider to00:42:111 - . It sounds much better!
00:53:611 (2,3,4) - DS doesn't allow that, but i would definetly space them a Little bit out, otherwise they look really really messy.

[Smoothie's Hard]

00:09:111 (4) - If you would move this a bit to the right and downwards, it will blanket better with the slider left to it.
00:10:361 (4) - Move the last White Point of the slider to 288 208, blanket
00:14:361 (5) - Why not shorten this slider 00:14:611 - until here? And add a circle 00:14:861 - here.
00:19:861 (5) - Try to move this slider to 288 160, and rotate it like -75°, it'll create a better flow, try to get a better flow with the next things as well, i'm sure you can do that yourself.
00:32:111 (10) - Add a whistle, because it's pretty empty? O:
00:41:236 - Ahh, the begin of the kiai and you don't add a triplet here. Please do so to emphasize the kiai begin!
00:52:111 (4) - Blanket again, move the last White Point a bit downwards.
00:53:486 (4) - Don't Forget to stack this if you applied ^.


All diffs are really enjoyable, just These blanket stuff Needs to be fixed!
I remember the map Long time ago, you really did a good Job.
Smoothie
I fixed pretty much everything.

Thanks a bunch!
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TitleUnicode:入部届
Artist:Nakanishi Ryosuke
ArtistUnicode:中西 亮輔
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Version:Smoothie's Hard
Source:Kuroko no Basuke
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Aurele
Like requested :3

General
Please delete the notepad file "Credits" and add it to the Beatmaps' Thread instead.

Easy
  1. 00:17:111 (1,2,3,4) - Actually, it's pretty good the way it is but, I have a little suggestion for you. Basically, when objects are all aligned together, it is looking boring. What I am suggesting you is to move the slider (2) some grids up to make an angle with the previous note and after, you also make another angle with the next circle. On my example, I've reshaped the slider (4) a bit to make a better blanket with the previous circle (3), you should do the same. (Make sure to also keep the same spacing consistency with your next objects!) Here's the example:
  2. 00:44:111 (4) - The spacing is not consistent here, you should try to move the next slider a bit to keep it consistent with your previous spacing.
Nice diff o3o!

Normal
  1. 00:19:611 (4) - The flow might be good with the previous slider, but it isn't with the next one, so it's pretty bad actually.. I suggest you to, instead of making a curved slider, you could simple make it straight and simple. It's going to have a nice flow with the previous and the next slider:
  2. 00:28:111 (4) - The spacing here is clearly wrong, it's obvious. Please make the change by moving this circle closer to the previous slider and then, keep the same consistency with your next objects.
  3. 00:36:111 (1) - By making a rotation with this slider would be helping a lot with the spacing before it. To be honest, it's pretty close. Here's an example that could help you:
It's actually pretty good now, I will come back later: My nephew is being an ass right now.

:3
Topic Starter
[Epicz]

Gabe wrote:

Like requested :3


General
Please delete the notepad file "Credits" and add it to the Beatmaps' Thread instead. done

Easy
  1. 00:17:111 (1,2,3,4) - Actually, it's pretty good the way it is but, I have a little suggestion for you. Basically, when objects are all aligned together, it is looking boring. What I am suggesting you is to move the slider (2) some grids up to make an angle with the previous note and after, you also make another angle with the next circle. On my example, I've reshaped the slider (4) a bit to make a better blanket with the previous circle (3), you should do the same. (Make sure to also keep the same spacing consistency with your next objects!) Here's the example:
    should be better now
  2. 00:44:111 (4) - The spacing is not consistent here, you should try to move the next slider a bit to keep it consistent with your previous spacing.fixed
Nice diff o3o! thanks!

Normal
  1. 00:19:611 (4) - The flow might be good with the previous slider, but it isn't with the next one, so it's pretty bad actually.. I suggest you to, instead of making a curved slider, you could simple make it straight and simple. It's going to have a nice flow with the previous and the next slider:
    you're absolutely right, changed it
  2. 00:28:111 (4) - The spacing here is clearly wrong, it's obvious. Please make the change by moving this circle closer to the previous slider and then, keep the same consistency with your next objects. fixed
  3. 00:36:111 (1) - By making a rotation with this slider would be helping a lot with the spacing before it. To be honest, it's pretty close. Here's an example that could help you:
    yep, fixed
It's actually pretty good now, I will come back later: My nephew is being an ass right now. LOL, kk...

:3
thanks gabe!
Lanturn
No KD, just a thing that bugged me when I played Smoothie's diff

00:41:111 (1,2,3) - This triplet honestly doesn't fit, People would expect to follow the trumpet(?) starting at 00:40:861 - more for timing.

An optimal solution to this to me would be:

Putting the reverse slider near the spinners center would make it easy to hit as well.


Again, No KD. Great mapset, I've already modded this once before. Good luck [Epicz]
Smoothie
I guess you're right.
I removed the triplet.

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Natsu
why this is not bubbled :/?
Topic Starter
[Epicz]

Natsu wrote:

why this is not bubbled :/?
cuz gabe is busy ._.
Irreversible


Hey there, from the QAT Queue!

[General]

:shock: Different combo colors on purpose? If yes, leave them, if not, fix them!
You have some issues with the skin dimensions, you

[Easy]

00:09:111 (2) - About the position of this circle, I recommend 172 172
00:11:111 (4) - And 224 84 for this one, the reason is that you get a straight line 00:08:361 (1,2) - for these two, and the triangle pattern stays the same. You shouldn't fix the DS between 00:11:111 (4,1) - , because 0.04 doesn't make a big difference.
00:17:611 (2) - This whistle pattern looks a bit weird tbh. You used it here, but then you left it out again, if you want to keep it make it consistent over the whole part, or just leave it away.
00:19:111 (4,1,2) - Move this whole combo for about 1-2 grids to the left, to make the blanekts perfect.
00:28:611 (1) - Move this one a bit to the right as well, aesthetics again. (Reason would be blanket)
00:35:111 (3) - I recommend moving this to 108 108, because it creates a better round-flow between 2 and 3.
00:52:611 (1,2) - And the blanket can be improved here :)

[Normal]

00:09:111 (2) - ?? Why that clap, i don't get it, you never used it before D: 00:11:111 (4) - Same for this one, you should keep your hitsounds consistent.
00:24:361 (1) - Finish at the end? Consistency~
00:30:611 (4) - You might see the blanket fail here, fix it please :)

That's all for here!~

[Smoothie's Hard]

00:12:611 (4,5,1) - Could you improve this pattern? Rotating and make it curvier would help I suppose.
00:14:361 (5) - That jump there bothers me a bit, it makes everythign unnecessary hard, I suggest reversing the slider instead.
00:34:861 (8,9) - http://puu.sh/43IV1.jpg What about something like this?
00:43:361 (2,3,4) - What if you moved 4 a bit higher? It would look better then because the distance between 2 and 3 and 3 and 4 would look more consistent.
00:52:111 (4) - Blanket again, fix the white points until it fits


Well, that's all already from my side, Kecco will come soon and gives you the second mod!~ good luck
Topic Starter
[Epicz]

Irreversible wrote:



Hey there, from the QAT Queue!

[General]

:shock: Different combo colors on purpose? If yes, leave them, if not, fix them!
You have some issues with the skin dimensions, you

[Easy]

00:09:111 (2) - About the position of this circle, I recommend 172 172
00:11:111 (4) - And 224 84 for this one, the reason is that you get a straight line 00:08:361 (1,2) - for these two, and the triangle pattern stays the same. You shouldn't fix the DS between 00:11:111 (4,1) - , because 0.04 doesn't make a big difference.
00:17:611 (2) - This whistle pattern looks a bit weird tbh. You used it here, but then you left it out again, if you want to keep it make it consistent over the whole part, or just leave it away.
00:19:111 (4,1,2) - Move this whole combo for about 1-2 grids to the left, to make the blanekts perfect.
00:28:611 (1) - Move this one a bit to the right as well, aesthetics again. (Reason would be blanket)
00:35:111 (3) - I recommend moving this to 108 108, because it creates a better round-flow between 2 and 3.
00:52:611 (1,2) - And the blanket can be improved here :)

[Normal]

00:09:111 (2) - ?? Why that clap, i don't get it, you never used it before D: 00:11:111 (4) - Same for this one, you should keep your hitsounds consistent.
00:24:361 (1) - Finish at the end? Consistency~
00:30:611 (4) - You might see the blanket fail here, fix it please :)

That's all for here!~

[Smoothie's Hard]

00:12:611 (4,5,1) - Could you improve this pattern? Rotating and make it curvier would help I suppose.
00:14:361 (5) - That jump there bothers me a bit, it makes everythign unnecessary hard, I suggest reversing the slider instead.
00:34:861 (8,9) - http://puu.sh/43IV1.jpg What about something like this?
00:43:361 (2,3,4) - What if you moved 4 a bit higher? It would look better then because the distance between 2 and 3 and 3 and 4 would look more consistent.
00:52:111 (4) - Blanket again, fix the white points until it fits


Well, that's all already from my side, Kecco will come soon and gives you the second mod!~ good luck
everything fixed, thanks irre!
Smoothie

Irreversible wrote:




[Smoothie's Hard]

00:12:611 (4,5,1) - Could you improve this pattern? Rotating and make it curvier would help I suppose. I think it is fine the way it is.
00:14:361 (5) - That jump there bothers me a bit, it makes everythign unnecessary hard, I suggest reversing the slider instead. Sure
00:34:861 (8,9) - http://puu.sh/43IV1.jpg What about something like this? Puu.sh seems to be down at the moment...
00:43:361 (2,3,4) - What if you moved 4 a bit higher? It would look better then because the distance between 2 and 3 and 3 and 4 would look more consistent. Alrighty
00:52:111 (4) - Blanket again, fix the white points until it fits Fixed
Thanks!

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512,192,11861,6,0,P|472:184|428:156,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,100,12361,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,68,12486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,40,12611,2,0,P|304:88|300:136,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,80,13111,2,0,P|228:132|236:168,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,204,13611,5,0,0:0:0:0:
100,152,13861,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,152,13986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,232,14236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,232,14361,2,0,P|100:276|144:300,2,85
24,292,15111,2,0,P|52:336|168:368,1,170
216,308,15861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,252,16111,2,0,P|296:296|292:344,1,85
216,308,16611,6,0,P|196:232|256:168,1,170,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,148,17361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,148,17611,2,0,L|432:196,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,196,18111,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,112,18361,2,0,L|508:68,2,42.5
420,84,18861,5,0,0:0:0:0:
420,84,18986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,84,19111,2,0,P|384:60|328:40,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,76,19611,1,8,0:0:0:0:
233,152,19861,2,0,P|188:149|153:130,1,85,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,17,20361,2,0,L|112:52,2,42.5,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,96,20861,6,0,L|-8:64,2,42.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,220,21361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,164,21611,2,0,P|108:220|96:276,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,328,22111,2,0,L|212:360,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,296,22611,2,0,P|265:269|281:213,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,268,23111,2,0,P|388:328|484:328,1,170,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,260,23861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,189,24111,2,0,P|488:200|512:260,1,170,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,260,24861,6,0,L|440:328,2,42.5,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,248,25361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,168,25611,2,0,P|344:128|388:108,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,96,26111,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,40,26361,2,0,L|360:16,2,42.5
292,84,26861,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,84,26986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,84,27111,2,0,P|264:108|196:132,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,112,27611,2,0,P|120:80|72:32,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,124,28111,2,0,P|72:200|44:292,1,170,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,332,28861,5,0,0:0:0:0:
120,332,28986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,332,29111,2,0,L|204:364,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,228,29611,2,0,L|264:320,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,236,30111,2,0,L|336:324,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,380,30611,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,336,30861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,252,31111,2,0,P|448:172|476:80,1,170,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,44,31861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,48,32111,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,108,32361,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,108,32486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,108,32611,2,0,L|208:24,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,76,33111,2,0,P|128:156|60:220,1,170,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,288,33861,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,288,33986,2,0,P|48:304|80:356,1,85
116,360,34361,2,0,L|208:364,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,336,34861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,264,35111,2,0,L|148:256,1,170
80,212,35861,6,0,P|72:168|84:128,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,72,36361,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,72,36486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,72,36611,2,0,L|244:72,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,0,37111,2,0,P|312:68|260:152,1,170,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,192,37861,5,8,0:0:0:0:
344,192,37986,2,0,L|440:192,1,85
456,224,38361,2,0,B|464:264|464:264|456:312,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,360,38861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,39111,12,4,40611,0:0:0:0:
328,332,41111,5,8,0:0:0:0:
328,332,41361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,252,41611,2,0,P|320:248|260:272,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,304,42111,2,0,P|132:324|40:280,1,170,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,208,42861,6,0,L|24:160,2,42.5,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,172,43361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,118,43611,2,0,P|232:160|228:200,1,85,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,92,44111,2,0,P|188:40|292:76,1,170,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,120,44861,5,0,0:0:0:0:
336,120,44986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,120,45111,2,0,P|340:168|328:208,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,276,45611,2,0,P|404:240|416:196,2,85,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,348,46361,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,280,46611,2,0,P|252:320|252:368,1,85,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,360,47111,2,0,L|76:196,1,170
0,196,47861,2,0,P|60:132|144:156,1,170
208,192,48611,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,124,48861,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,124,48986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,124,49111,2,0,P|288:160|296:200,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,280,49611,2,0,P|360:256|380:208,1,85,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,140,50111,2,0,P|448:176|456:256,1,170,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,332,50861,6,0,L|468:356,2,42.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,292,51361,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,336,51611,2,0,P|272:288|288:240,1,85,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,232,52111,2,0,B|152:260|152:260|112:204|32:228,1,170,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,304,52861,5,8,0:0:0:0:
80,304,52986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,304,53111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
49,225,53361,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,148,53611,2,0,P|125:167|178:167,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,91,54111,2,0,P|198:82|229:52,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,47,54611,2,0,P|299:87|269:126,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,199,55111,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55236,12,4,56611,0:0:0:0:
happy30


[General]
  1. The offset is a bit too early. try offset 623 (+12).
  2. Don't forget to resnap the kiai start/ends after adjusting the offset.
  3. The hitsounds in Easy and Normal lack a bit of structure. It's not a big problem but I listed a few suggestions in the mod below.
[Easy]
  1. AR-1? Currently it feels a bit too fast for the pacing of the map.
  2. 00:15:121 (1) - Add a finish hitsound on this spinner's end?
  3. 00:44:621 (1) - Could you remove the finish at the end? It doesn't really fit there imo.
  4. 00:52:621 (1) - Could you adjust the pattern here so this slider doesn"t overlap with (4)? It looks a bit messy.
[Normal]
  1. 00:17:611 (2) - Remove the finish at the start?
  2. 00:19:611 (4) - Add a whistle on the end?
  3. 00:29:611 (2) - Here too, on the end?
  4. 00:36:111 (1) - Add finish on end?
  5. 00:43:611 (4) - Whistle on end?
    00:53:611 (2) - Same
The distance spacing in this diff varies a lot. At most places it's 1.10 but at many places it's also 1.00 or even 1.20.
Could you recheck the spacing in the WHOLE diff and make everything 1.10? Thanks.

Hard is good. goodjob!
Topic Starter
[Epicz]

happy30 wrote:



[General]
  1. The offset is a bit too early. try offset 623 (+12).
  2. Don't forget to resnap the kiai start/ends after adjusting the offset.
  3. The hitsounds in Easy and Normal lack a bit of structure. It's not a big problem but I listed a few suggestions in the mod below.
[Easy]
  1. AR-1? Currently it feels a bit too fast for the pacing of the map.
  2. 00:15:121 (1) - Add a finish hitsound on this spinner's end?
  3. 00:44:621 (1) - Could you remove the finish at the end? It doesn't really fit there imo.
  4. 00:52:621 (1) - Could you adjust the pattern here so this slider doesn"t overlap with (4)? It looks a bit messy.
[Normal]
  1. 00:17:611 (2) - Remove the finish at the start?
  2. 00:19:611 (4) - Add a whistle on the end?
  3. 00:29:611 (2) - Here too, on the end?
  4. 00:36:111 (1) - Add finish on end?
  5. 00:43:611 (4) - Whistle on end?
    00:53:611 (2) - Same
The distance spacing in this diff varies a lot. At most places it's 1.10 but at many places it's also 1.00 or even 1.20.
Could you recheck the spacing in the WHOLE diff and make everything 1.10? Thanks.

Hard is good. goodjob!
fixed everything, thanks happy30
happy30
Bubbled
Thanks for using the QAT's service!
Natsu
omg go go Epicz
Tari
Why are there different combo color for Hard when all diffs use same background.

Please check Skin too~ there are some unused things I think and wrong dimensions for some images.

if you have some good reason for these things, then thats fine.
Yukyy

Tari wrote:

Please check Skin too~ there are some unused things I think and wrong dimensions for some images.
I think all is fine with the dimensions. The skin has a normal AND HD version included, if that's what you mean.
Lanturn
go go epicz! so close to your first ranked mapset!
Topic Starter
[Epicz]

Lanturn wrote:

go go epicz! so close to your first ranked mapset!
yep :3 hopefully some BAT modding it within the next few hours, days, weeks years
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