Let's take a look-see.
[General]
The blue text is still a bit too light for my eyes. ._.
Storyboarded credits went by too quickly to read. Consider moving the Storyboard by Loogiesquared text to 00:37:049 to sync with the beat.
Especially before play begins, the blue cursor is quite hard to see compared to the white background. (I have brightness settings fairly high.)
I found the endings to be somewhat abrupt.
There were a bunch of spacing irregularities that I didn't point out because they weren't that noticeable during play, but if you'd like, turn off grid snap and respace all the notes. (for example, 01:37:050 (6,1) - On Demon, these are touching whereas the rest of the stream don't, and the identical pattern at 01:39:000 (5,1) actually becomes farther than normal.)
[Snail on Wheels]
00:21:000 - Add a break.
00:26:062 (5,1) - Might want to properly arrange this spacing.
00:31:031 (4) - New combo?
00:34:031 (4) - ^
00:36:000 (1) - This set of streams may get a bit rough for an Easy difficulty.
00:42:037 (1,1,1) - Combining these into 1 spinner might be better and more appropriate for an Easy.
00:46:087 (1) - Follows the spinners too closely.
00:48:000 - Maybe I missed something, but I do not see the point of this timing section.
00:54:037 (1,1,1) - Too many spinners. ._.
00:58:087 (1) - Follows the spinners too tightly again.
00:58:087 (1,2,3,4) - Consider centering this square, either just horizontally, or at the actual center of the screen.
01:24:000 (1,2,3) - Notice how the 1-2 spacing differs from the 2-3 spacing (1,2 barely touch, 2,3 do not). Would look much neater if this was consistent, and possibly centered.
01:28:012 - Might as well take this break out, too short anyways.
01:30:000 (1,2,3) - Same thing about the spacing as above.
01:34:012 - Very short break again.
01:42:037 (1,1,1) - More spinner spam.
01:46:087 (1) - Follows the spinners too closely.
01:46:087 (1,2,3,4) - Center?
[Turtle on Wheels]
00:36:000 (1,2,3) - This section is much easier than the equivalent section on Snails. Consider swapping the patterns.
00:47:025 (2) - Doesn't fall properly between 1 and 3, needs to be moved to the right. Doesn't look very good as it is right now.
00:47:097 - Once again, why is this timing section here?
00:48:000 (4) - Consider doing something more interesting here.
00:58:087 (5) - New combo?
01:18:000 (2) - New combo? Also, possibly unrankable, dunno how easy this is to read.
01:21:000 (1) - Once again, unrankable, please storyboard a direction arrow if you wish to keep this.
01:27:000 (5) - Too far again, although less noticeable.
01:28:012 - Another short break.
01:33:000 (5) - Too far.
01:34:012 - Very short break.
01:36:000 (1) - Yawn, boring.
01:46:087 (5) - New combo?
[Rabbit on Wheels]
00:24:028 - Break is tiny. Remove it.
00:27:028 - ^
00:36:056 (1) - No new combo?
00:47:097 - Once again, I question the utility of this timing section.
00:54:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too much clapping.
01:00:037 (1,1) - A bit boring, but that's okay.
01:06:000 (1,1) - I thought this was a bit unnatural.
01:20:081 (2) - New combo?
01:27:000 (4) - Too close this time. Distance snap?
01:28:012 - This break's okay, I guess. You could still remove it, you could keep it.
[Animask on Wheels]
00:21:037 (2) - I didn't like how this slightly covered up 4, but it's not that bad.
00:30:000 (1,2,3) - Height changes slightly, looks a bit weird. Fine as-is though.
00:34:031 (5,6,7) - Should probably put new combos on these notes to indicate the jump on 6-7 without making it look ugly.
01:08:062 (12,1) - This jump is a bit surprising since it doesn't follow the same beat pattern as the combo before.
01:23:062 (1) - Move the timing sections so that this note is also on soft hitsounds?
01:23:081 - Why are there 2 timing sections here?
01:27:000 (2,3,4) - Spacing isn't regular.
01:31:050 (5,6,7) - ^, but not as noticeable.
01:43:012 (1,2,3) - These antijumps are a bit surprising.
01:44:062 (1,2,3) - ^, although they should have learned by now. XD
01:46:050 (1,2,3,4) - ^
[Demon on Wheels]
00:27:000 (1) - So many claps in this section...
00:31:068 (5) - Move the new combo to this note instead to be consistent.
00:34:068 (7) - New combo?
00:35:062 (1) - No new combo.
00:56:025 (2,3,4) - Much more bundled together than the other identical patterns, intended?
00:58:050 (5) - Not lined up with 4.
01:18:000 (1) - This section feels awfully empty...
01:23:081 - Why 2 timing sections?
01:27:000 (5) - Very noticeable difference compared to 3, 4.
Don't need to change all of this, of course. Some things are important though.
EDIT: Hey, you took the time to fix this. Star~