bigfrog wrote:

DJ Octavia's Speed
00:06:698(2) try to stack 00:06:066(2) tail?
00:12:066(3) reverse stack 00:11:434(1) head
00:35:908(1) one grid down?
00:36:698(1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/828731 for stack perfect
00:49:645(2,3,4) one grid right
01:05:119(3) one grid down
02:56:277(1) x356 y164 to parallel with 02;55:645(1,2)

Thanks, everything fixed!

Easy

Starzd's Normal

DJ Octavia's Speed

[Epicz] wrote:

inc shit mod, dann mal los Nich so selbstbewusst sein :

Easy

1. 00:08:908 (4,1) - die 4 überlappt mit der 1, sollteste evlt ändern
2. 00:59:434 (1,2) - klingt besser und spielt sich auch besser(?) ansonsten gäbe es noch folgende möglichkeit:
3. 01:36:224 (1) - finish
4. 02:00:066 (2,1) - bekommst du doch sicherlich schöner hin, oder?^^

All fixed, more parts changed with your second idea, nice one

Not Me^^

Starzd's Normal

1. 00:13:961 (1) - finish
2. 00:48:066 (1) - something like that? (for a better flow)
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:25:961 (1,2,3,4,5) - ? just make sure to add a note here 01:28:171 -
4. 01:46:171 (1) - finish
5. 01:48:698 (1,2,3,4) -
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:51:224 (1) - finish
7. 02:05:119 (4) -
8. 02:08:908 (1) - whistle
9. 02:28:803 (3) - whistle at the end of the slider?
10. 02:29:908 (1,2,3) - sounds way better
11. 02:33:540 (1) - finish
12. 02:45:540 (1) - finish
13. 02:54:382 (1) - finish

DJ Octavia's Speed

1. - Sollte doch Touhou sein, oder?

fixed this by myself

Ich hoffe es ist okay dass ich die höheren Difs erstmal überspringe, da ich von denen kaum Erfahrung habe.
Ansonste nette Map, viel Glück beim gerankt bekommen. danke^^ passt schon, auch easy und normal sind wichtig beim ranken Vielen dank für den Mod

Done

- Melody wrote:

Double Post for Hyper IV


Hyper IV ;


00:09:540 (3) - Add Whistle fixed
00:19:645 (1,2) - ^^ No, because there are allready hitsounds on the heads
00:59:434 (1,2,3,4) - ^^^^ 1,2 whistle 3,4 claps
01:04:487 (2,3,4,5) - ^^^^ Sorry, but these seem too spaamyy to me
01:14:592 (2,3,4,5) - ^^^^ I dont want hitsound on every note, sorrry but no
01:38:592 (1) - ^ There is nothing in the song where I would say it is worth to use hitsound here, sorry :I
01:41:119 (1) - ^ same here
01:46:171 (1,2,3) - ^^^
01:48:698 (1,2,1) - ^^^
01:51:224 (1,2,3) - ^^^
01:52:487 (1,2,3) - ^^^ I am really sorry to decline all these, but this is an overusing of whistles imo, it is like doing it all the time, but i want to keep it down.
02:12:698 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^^^^^^ Same here
02:43:645 (1,2,3) - ^^^ fixed
00:22:171 (1) - Add Clap fixed
01:15:856 (1,2,1,2) - ^^^^ Sorry but no, there are allready claps at 01:17:119 (1,2,1,2) -
01:42:382 (1,2,3) - ^^^ Added Clap, Finish, Clap
01:45:224 (1,2,3) - ^^^ fixed
01:52:171 (1,2) - ^^ fixed
01:53:434 (4,5) - ^^ fixed


~Good Luck thanks

Done

DJ Octavia wrote:

Achtung! Mein Erster Noob-Mod inc!

Absolutely Insane

01:36:066 (1) - Finish sound at the end of the Slider Nah, I like it the way it is
02:30:382 (1) - Spinner should start at 02:29:829 fixed, dunno why i did not think of that.

Definitly Ins4ne

00:16:803 (2,4) - Clap on both Slider
00:21:540 (1,1,1,1) - Clap at the end of the first two Slider, Whistle at the end of the last two Slider
00:24:698 (3) - Make it louder and remove Whistle, does not fit here.
01:36:066 (3) - Finish sound at the end of the Slider
01:48:699 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Clap > nothing > Whistle > nothing > Clap > nothing > Whistle > nothing > Clap > nothing > Whistle > nothing
01:57:540 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - every 2nd Sliderhead Clap
02:44:277 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - They look strange, better use same height for both patterns
02:54:382 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The first four circles 1 grid up, the others 1 grid down on tiny grid level to stack them

ALL FIXED, nice ideas especially Hitsounds.

Hyper IV

01:20:277 (1,2,3,4) - Add Claps
01:42:698 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about stacking 2,3 to 5,6?
Fixed both

Thanks for the mod !!

Done

Updated Nwolf's Oni
Added Nwolf's Muzukashii

For all Taiko - Players: Have fun

[Epicz] wrote:

Starzd's Normal

1. 00:13:961 (1) - finish Added
2. 00:48:066 (1) - something like that? (for a better flow)
   SPOILER

   
   Alright
3. 01:25:961 (1,2,3,4,5) - ? just make sure to add a note here 01:28:171 - ^
4. 01:46:171 (1) - finish ^
5. 01:48:698 (1,2,3,4) -
   SPOILER

   
   ^
6. 01:51:224 (1) - finish ^
7. 02:05:119 (4) -
8. 02:08:908 (1) - whistle ^
9. 02:28:803 (3) - whistle at the end of the slider? ^
10. 02:29:908 (1,2,3) - sounds way better Doesn't play out too well.
11. 02:33:540 (1) - finish ^
12. 02:45:540 (1) - finish ^
13. 02:54:382 (1) - finish ^

bigfrog wrote:

Starzd's Normal
00:09:540(2) wrong distance? replace I think I've made a solution.
00:20:277(1,2,3,4) try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/828191 Sure
00:48:066(1) move to 00:46:487(2) place,then fix 00:47:119(4,5) place Done
00:49:329(2) move to 00:47:434(5) then fix 00:49:961(3) place ^
01:05:119(3) try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/828617 ^
01:07:645(3) one grid up ^
01:08:277(1) one grid left ^
01:09:224(2) ^
01:28:487(1) reverse stack 01:27:224(5) reverse ^
01:36:066(1) one grid up ^
02:13:961(3) one grid down and one grid left ^
02:15:224(1) move to x200 y120 ^
02:29:908(1) try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/828643 ^
02:45:224(2) right and up one grid ^
02:51:856(1) one grid down ^
02:53:119(3) ^

vahn10 wrote:

PM request now I mod both osu! and taiko

[General]
01:38:592 - End first kiai here Sorry, but it fits like it is atm imo

EZ

00:407 (1) - slider out of screen fixed
00:53:750 (1,1,1) - Delete NC Sorry but No, fits here perectly imo.
00:59:434 (1) - ^
01:047 (1) - ^
01:167 (1,1,1) - ^
01:21:540 (1,1) - ^
01:24:066 (1,1,1) - ^
01:29:119 (1,1,1) - ^ I fixed NCs in another way, so it is not that spammy, but not all of them are removed.
01:47:434 (1,1) - ^ Wouldn't be that nice imo.
02:37:329 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ 02:36:698 (1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1) - Made it not that spammy, but I wanted to create some party - effect for the player here, what I think fits to the song.
02:066 (1,1,1,1) - ^ fit imo for partey as well ^_^ Newbies shall have fun with this diff

hyper

01:43:329 (4,5,6) - add finish at the end of it's sliders
02:41:119 (5,6) - whistle
both fixed

Ins4ane

00:04:013 (1,1,1) - Delete NC Fixed with a broken heart

Thank you very much for the mod vahn :3 But what about Oni , Absolutely and Starzd? ^^ Not that I want to make you modd them with violence^^ Just asking

Cheers, InC0

Aaaand Done

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

[Easy]
* In general, this diff seems a bit enclustered (it means, objects too close amongst themselves). You could increase DS a bit here and rearrange them.
02:05:119 (1,2) - The (1) slider shouldn't touch the 02:06:382 (1) one. Could you make like this? → http://puu.sh/3rMyF.jpg
♥ I liked the path you made here from 02:46:803 to 02:56:277 - As I could say in my language, "Show de bola!" (a Brazilian, footbal-originated slang that could be like "It's really awesome!".

[Starzd's Normal]
00:41:750 (3) - Why not make a more clean slider like this? → http://puu.sh/3rMRa.jpg

[Abs0lutely Insane]
00:24:698 (5) - This one could be improved this way → http://puu.sh/3rN3n.jpg

[Definitly Ins4ne]
* The spelling of 'Insane' on diff name reminds me this map (: Feels nice ♥
01:07:013 (1,2,3,4) - Their feet could be stacked instead of how they are currently. It's valid for 01:09:540 (1,2,3,4) too.
01:20:908 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - These notes feels a bit (or a lot?) randomical...
01:57:540 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Better (and more logical?) appearance → http://puu.sh/3rNtz.jpg
♥ Good work on following voice with longer sliders from 02:16:487 to 02:27:856
02:28:013 (1) - This spinner could be mapped imo (unless you keep it for a lazy-less recovery time

[DJ Octavia's Speed]
* Perfect work with Geometrics and square sliders ♥
00:04:013 (1,1,1) - Could improve this pattern this way → http://puu.sh/3rNKn.jpg

[Hyper IV]
02:41:119 (5,6) - Seems a bit hard to read overlapped notes in this way.

vahn10 wrote:

Rename this to Slider Madness!
00:04:013 (1,1,1) - Delete NC

Alarido wrote:

[DJ Octavia's Speed]
* Perfect work with Geometrics and square sliders ♥
00:04:013 (1,1,1) - Could improve this pattern this way → http://puu.sh/3rNKn.jpg

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376,72,108066,2,2,P|432:176|188:308,1,464.999985694885
332,240,108698,6,0,P|336:148|272:112,1,154.999995231629
276,268,109013,2,0,P|280:176|216:140,1,154.999995231629
220,300,109329,2,0,P|224:208|160:172,1,154.999995231629
80,296,109645,6,2,P|92:172|132:112,1,154.999995231629
224,44,109961,6,0,P|316:88|300:144,1,154.999995231629
160,160,110277,2,0,P|68:204|84:260,1,154.999995231629
228,236,110592,2,0,P|320:280|304:336,1,154.999995231629
380,172,110908,5,2,0:0:0:0:
240,108,111066,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,68,111224,6,0,P|76:156|92:228,1,154.999995231629
236,272,111540,2,0,P|220:184|236:112,1,154.999995231629
388,136,111856,2,2,B|396:236|368:320|284:356|180:348|100:336|84:256,1,464.999985694885
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372,104,112803,2,0,L|216:44,1,154.999995231629
84,104,113119,2,2,P|232:256|372:92,1,464.999985694885
332,256,113750,6,0,P|244:288|228:224,1,154.999995231629
68,256,114066,2,0,P|156:288|172:224,1,154.999995231629
332,256,114382,2,8,P|264:312|68:252,1,309.999990463257
328,80,115013,6,0,P|228:52|184:92,1,154.999995231629
36,80,115329,2,0,P|136:52|180:92,1,154.999995231629
328,80,115645,2,8,P|200:36|36:80,1,309.999990463257
324,200,116277,6,0,P|416:84|416:44,1,154.999995231629
272,144,116592,2,0,P|156:52|116:52,1,154.999995231629
216,196,116908,2,0,P|124:312|124:352,1,154.999995231629
268,252,117224,2,0,P|384:344|424:344,1,154.999995231629
448,200,117540,6,0,P|364:176|288:204,1,154.999995231629
240,52,117856,2,0,P|216:136|244:212,1,154.999995231629
92,260,118171,2,0,P|176:284|252:256,1,154.999995231629
240,52,118487,6,0,P|216:136|244:212,1,154.999995231629
368,280,118803,5,8,0:0:0:0:
428,136,118961,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,48,119119,6,0,P|176:44|140:68,1,154.999995231629
60,184,119434,5,8,0:0:0:0:
172,292,119592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,296,119750,6,0,P|404:232|392:164,1,154.999995231629
308,60,120066,6,0,L|232:200,1,154.999995231629
372,272,120382,2,0,L|232:196,1,154.999995231629
160,336,120698,2,0,L|236:196,1,154.999995231629
96,124,121013,2,0,L|236:200,1,154.999995231629
232,197,121329,6,0,L|316:44,1,154.999995231629
232,197,121645,2,0,L|384:276,1,154.999995231629
232,197,121961,2,0,L|160:336,1,154.999995231629
232,197,122277,2,0,L|92:120,1,154.999995231629
248,144,122592,5,8,0:0:0:0:
380,60,122750,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,80,122908,6,2,L|64:80,1,154.999995231629
184,188,123224,5,8,0:0:0:0:
328,132,123382,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,44,123540,6,2,L|44:44,1,154.999995231629
88,200,123856,6,0,P|144:284|184:256,1,154.999995231629
112,128,124171,2,0,P|168:212|208:184,1,154.999995231629
136,56,124487,2,0,P|192:140|232:112,1,154.999995231629
68,88,124803,6,2,P|124:172|164:144,1,154.999995231629
276,72,125119,6,0,P|360:128|332:168,1,154.999995231629
196,136,125434,2,0,P|280:192|252:232,1,154.999995231629
112,200,125750,2,0,P|196:256|168:296,1,154.999995231629
136,132,126066,6,2,P|220:188|192:228,1,154.999995231629
276,72,126382,6,8,B|348:108|348:108|312:176,3,154.999995231629
196,72,127013,2,8,B|124:108|124:108|160:176,3,154.999995231629
44,276,127645,6,0,P|160:336|220:324,1,154.999995231629
312,252,127961,2,0,P|421:181|441:123,1,154.999995231629
288,100,128277,2,0,P|172:40|112:52,1,154.999995231629
36,144,128592,2,0,P|104:255|161:276,1,154.999995231629
220,216,128908,6,0,L|384:148,1,154.999995231629
208,148,129224,2,0,L|44:216,1,154.999995231629
168,92,129540,2,0,L|332:24,1,154.999995231629
464,60,129856,6,2,L|300:128,1,154.999995231629
176,172,130171,5,8,0:0:0:0:
104,308,130329,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,236,130487,6,2,L|420:236,1,154.999995231629
268,320,130803,5,8,0:0:0:0:
136,240,130961,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,84,131119,6,2,L|292:84,1,154.999995231629
440,64,131434,6,0,P|464:188|428:248,1,154.999995231629
360,84,131750,2,0,P|384:208|348:268,1,154.999995231629
280,108,132066,2,0,P|304:232|268:292,1,154.999995231629
200,128,132382,2,0,P|224:252|188:312,1,154.999995231629
76,344,132698,6,0,P|52:220|88:160,1,154.999995231629
156,320,133013,2,0,P|132:196|168:136,1,154.999995231629
236,300,133329,2,0,P|212:176|248:116,1,154.999995231629
316,280,133645,2,0,P|292:156|328:96,1,154.999995231629
160,64,133961,6,2,P|244:44|332:72,1,154.999995231629
408,180,134277,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,180,134434,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,176,134592,5,8,0:0:0:0:
252,176,134750,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,316,134908,6,2,P|268:336|356:308,1,154.999995231629
356,168,135224,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,248,135382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,308,135540,6,0,P|76:180|112:160,1,154.999995231629
224,104,135856,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,104,136013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,248,136171,5,0,0:0:0:0:
40,44,154171,5,8,0:0:0:0:
472,344,154803,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,344,155434,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,76,155750,5,8,0:0:0:0:
448,256,156066,2,2,P|388:88|96:156,1,464.999985694885
196,324,156698,6,0,P|328:336|448:304,1,232.500001716614
404,84,157013,2,0,P|272:72|152:104,1,232.500001716614
40,284,157329,2,0,P|84:200|36:68,1,232.500001716614
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116,320,157961,6,0,P|272:184|220:116,1,232.500001716614
52,284,158277,2,0,P|208:148|156:80,1,232.500001716614
444,208,158592,6,2,P|308:52|240:104,1,232.500001716614
364,280,158908,2,2,P|228:124|160:176,1,232.500001716614
208,348,159224,6,0,P|320:264|376:168,1,232.500001716614
168,304,159540,2,0,P|244:186|264:77,1,232.500001716614
116,280,159856,2,0,P|147:143|128:34,1,232.500001716614
368,76,160171,6,0,P|231:44|122:63,1,232.500001716614
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376,192,160803,2,0,P|251:255|179:340,1,232.500001716614
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192,180,161434,2,2,P|312:176|420:132,1,232.500001716614
184,92,161750,6,0,P|112:188|220:200,1,232.500001716614
180,220,162066,2,0,P|252:124|144:112,1,232.500001716614
412,140,162382,6,0,P|316:68|304:176,1,232.500001716614
284,136,162698,2,0,P|380:208|392:100,1,232.500001716614
184,176,163013,6,0,P|211:292|289:217,1,232.500001716614
280,264,163329,2,0,P|252:147|174:222,1,232.500001716614
380,300,163645,6,2,P|400:176|352:60,1,232.500001716614
220,260,163961,2,2,P|240:136|192:20,1,232.500001716614
60,224,164277,6,0,P|152:328|260:332,1,232.500001716614
472,312,164592,2,0,P|380:200|248:196,1,232.500001716614
108,48,164908,2,0,P|212:152|272:108,1,232.500001716614
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256,192,165540,12,0,166645,0:0:0:0:
400,40,166803,6,0,P|272:80|176:68,1,232.500001716614
408,104,167119,2,0,P|280:144|184:132,1,232.500001716614
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80,280,167750,2,0,P|208:240|304:252,1,232.500001716614
420,48,168066,6,0,P|460:176|448:272,1,232.500001716614
356,56,168382,2,0,P|396:184|384:280,1,232.500001716614
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120,112,171224,6,2,P|232:64|372:72,1,232.500001716614
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464,44,175329,2,0,P|332:132|260:96,1,232.500001716614
48,164,175645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,164,175803,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,280,175961,5,8,0:0:0:0:
252,280,176119,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,164,176277,5,4,0:0:0:0:

Alarido wrote:

M4M From Coffee Party Queue - Round V

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

Let's go!

[Easy]
* In general, this diff seems a bit enclustered (it means, objects too close amongst themselves). You could increase DS a bit here and rearrange them.
02:05:119 (1,2) - The (1) slider shouldn't touch the 02:06:382 (1) one. Could you make like this? → http://puu.sh/3rMyF.jpg sure, looks way better!! Thanks :3
♥ I liked the path you made here from 02:46:803 to 02:56:277 - As I could say in my language, "Show de bola!" (a Brazilian, footbal-originated slang that could be like "It's really awesome!". <3

[Abs0lutely Insane]
00:24:698 (5) - This one could be improved this way → http://puu.sh/3rN3n.jpg fixed, looks very nice.

[Definitly Ins4ne]
* The spelling of 'Insane' on diff name reminds me this map (: Feels nice ♥ hehe (:
01:07:013 (1,2,3,4) - Their feet could be stacked instead of how they are currently. It's valid for 01:09:540 (1,2,3,4) too. I thought a time about it, and finally, I changed it, looks fine :3
01:20:908 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - These notes feels a bit (or a lot?) randomical...Actually, you are right, but no, you are wrong, I no this is confusing, but all in all, I am using one DS between all these, and the system is like this: Start Note, next is a jump, the next start note shall create a movement for the cursor, that is kind of demanding, or contrayly for the player. So there is a system, but no determined pattern, what actually is, I am glad you discovered it, my style of "Sudden, Chaotic, Systematic Jumping"
01:57:540 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Better (and more logical?) appearance → http://puu.sh/3rNtz.jpg Yop , changed, very nice :3 And thanks for IngameChat -> Code
♥ Good work on following voice with longer sliders from 02:16:487 to 02:27:856
02:28:013 (1) - This spinner could be mapped imo (unless you keep it for a lazy-less recovery time It is something like a finger recovery time before the ending jumps^^ Anyways, if somebody else wants me to map it, i will do my best!

[Hyper IV]
02:41:119 (5,6) - Seems a bit hard to read overlapped notes in this way.fixed it, increased distance here and swapped in time to create a better playable jump between 02:40:961 (4,5) -.

That's it ^^

More a bit work (getting one or 2 mods or maybe a BAT) and possibly a Bubble. Found more problems at [Easy] diff due to notes too enclustered (touching amongst themselves), but it's quite easy to solve (even though it's hard work, let's say, a blue-collar work)
I think I will wait what BAT says to the clustered things in Easy diff, because I think it shouldn't be that disturbing for Newcommers ^_^

GO GO LUCKY FOR RANKING Thanks

Att.

Aaaaand Done Very nice Ideas for improving my diffs! Thank you so much for modding

Alarido wrote:

Hi ^^

The code for 01:57:540 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) at [Definitly Ins4ne] as requested ingame:

Ingame Chat

11:50 InC0nceNtrateD: thanks for the mod <3 gonna go for it now :3
11:51 Alarido: thanks for the mod too (: very helpful
11:56 InC0nceNtrateD: hehe :3 always try my best
12:12 InC0nceNtrateD: hey uhm
12:12 InC0nceNtrateD: in your mod for the definitly insane
12:12 InC0nceNtrateD: u have the small sliders with a smoother shape
12:12 InC0nceNtrateD: could u give me the code?
12:23 Alarido: yes
12:23 Alarido: how do I copy of the chat log?
12:24 InC0nceNtrateD: press up arrow key
12:24 InC0nceNtrateD: to get to ur message
12:24 InC0nceNtrateD: and then shift plus a direction on the arrow keys to mark
12:24 InC0nceNtrateD: copy it with Crtl + C
12:25 InC0nceNtrateD: or just
12:25 InC0nceNtrateD: use /savelog
12:25 InC0nceNtrateD: then a log will be saved

The Requested Code:05071

420,216,117540,6,0,L|484:240,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,260,117698,2,0,L|444:312,1,47.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,296,117856,2,0,L|376:364,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,316,118014,2,0,L|301:384,1,47.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,316,118171,6,0,L|212:380,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,296,118329,2,0,L|131:360,1,47.5
120,260,118487,2,0,L|64:308,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,216,118645,2,0,L|20:240,1,47.5

Hope it be helpful <3

Att.

Thanks again! It is very helpful to me and looks awesome now

Is now Up - to - Date

vahn10 wrote:

Muzu

00:24:698 (105) - shorten slider until it is both in white ticks
00:31:171 (25) - d

Nwolf wrote:

vahn10 wrote:

Muzu

00:24:698 (105) - shorten slider until it is both in white ticks
00:31:171 (25) - d

ty, plays/sounds a bit better now :3

Updated in last update

OEvil wrote:

A Random Mod From Nowhere! I wanted to say Hell >.> But you said that you will kill me <.< So /me runs from now Too late, I am on my way, destiny's comin! o.o

[All Difficulties]

General

Inconsistency in Letterbox In Breaks: Umm.. what about disable it in all difficulties
- [Abs0lutely Insane] : 1
- [Definitly Ins4ne] : 1
- [Easy] : 1
- [Hyper IV] : 1
- [Nwolf's Muzukashii] : 0
- [Nwolf's Oni] : 0
- [Starzd's Normal] : 1
- [Tavi's Slider Madness] : 1

fixed this, activated everywhere, because Tavi's Slider Madness requires it.

Tags
- Consider adding "Tavi" to all of your tags
Since Tavi is the short form of DJ Octavia, I fixed it.

[Definitly Ins4ne]

Spinner Length
02:56:277 (1) - This spinner is 473 ms long, which is shorter than 750 ms; check that it gets at least 1000 on auto. (not sure about that) Again, this spinner is hard to do on purpose, like the jumps before, these are the last challenges to FC that map And yes, I checked it again, and I lengthened it a time before, AutoBot reaches the 1000 score I even think it is okay, that it is ONE spinner, in ONE difficulty, because This

Done Thanks Bro

Zero__wind wrote:

ok, big stuff handled

huge irc, don't read it

03:55 InC0nceNtrateD: did u get my pm? ._.
03:57 Zero__wind: ah yeah, but there's no link in it 0.0
03:58 InC0nceNtrateD: yep i thought its not necessary because its my only pending one^^
03:58 *InC0nceNtrateD is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/262191 IOSYS - Usatei 2011 [Easy]]
03:58 InC0nceNtrateD: this is the map :3
04:00 Zero__wind: oops som many diffs
04:00 InC0nceNtrateD: hehe^^ asked BATs, it should be rankable
04:00 InC0nceNtrateD: quote: It is rankable, I guess, but it has a funny Diff spread xD"
04:01 Zero__wind: yeah because you've got no Hard diff to be in the mid
04:02 InC0nceNtrateD: i know^^
04:02 Zero__wind: and this would get in your way =.=
04:02 InC0nceNtrateD: I dont think so... hope so....^^
04:03 Zero__wind: you made 3 Insanes ?
04:03 InC0nceNtrateD: yop
04:05 InC0nceNtrateD: can u tell me... whats this letterbox things?
04:05 InC0nceNtrateD: taiko diffs aimod tells me to deactivate them and complains about other diffs having them...
04:05 InC0nceNtrateD: shall i deactivte them in every diff?
04:08 Zero__wind: the letterbox stuff is that during breaktime you play area will have a balck surrounding, if activated
04:08 Zero__wind: it should be decided donsiderting the bg image
04:10 Zero__wind: just for an example, if there's a character's face in the quite upper place of a bg, then the letterbox may overlap the character's face during breaks and that was no good
04:10 Zero__wind: hmm, I'm not really sure in what certain cases letterbox will be good
04:10 Zero__wind: It quite depend on the bg, or SB if it has
04:11 InC0nceNtrateD: one diff has a warning sign in sb for high SV
04:11 InC0nceNtrateD: so
04:11 InC0nceNtrateD: i guess its not necessary
04:11 InC0nceNtrateD: ill deactivate it
04:11 InC0nceNtrateD: thanks
04:11 Zero__wind: np
04:12 InC0nceNtrateD: aaaand, will you mod it
04:12 InC0nceNtrateD: ?
04:13 Zero__wind: taking a look at the Insanes
04:13 InC0nceNtrateD: allright
04:13 InC0nceNtrateD: lol
04:13 InC0nceNtrateD: i have to activate leterboxes
04:13 Zero__wind: but fine it hard to find much to say 0.0
04:14 InC0nceNtrateD: cause the diff with SB does not let me toggle it off
04:14 InC0nceNtrateD: uhhm^^ just say what u find then
04:14 InC0nceNtrateD: if the mods get smaller and smaller, bats will see that the map is good <- Well, Fuck o.o
04:14 Zero__wind: then let's make it simple~
04:14 Zero__wind: shall we go ?
04:14 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/262188 IOSYS - Usatei 2011 [Abs0lutely Insane]]
04:14 InC0nceNtrateD: chill
04:15 InC0nceNtrateD: chill
04:15 InC0nceNtrateD: xD
04:15 InC0nceNtrateD: give me a minute
04:15 Zero__wind: 0.0
04:15 Zero__wind: ok I'd have some time to have a cup of water
04:16 InC0nceNtrateD: have fun with it
04:16 InC0nceNtrateD: now i am ready
04:16 Zero__wind: hmm well before modding may I know which BAT did you turned to ?
04:17 InC0nceNtrateD: second
04:17 Zero__wind: ? who gave you the reply
04:17 InC0nceNtrateD: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/LunarSakuya
04:17 InC0nceNtrateD: not the reply
04:17 InC0nceNtrateD: told me some things
04:17 InC0nceNtrateD: like it should be rankable
04:18 InC0nceNtrateD: and a tag mistake
04:18 InC0nceNtrateD: its on her list...his list... on the list
04:18 Zero__wind: ah yeah Sakuya is a quite nice girl
04:18 InC0nceNtrateD: her list then
04:19 Zero__wind: hmm, well glad to hear that
04:19 InC0nceNtrateD: yeah she's nice^^
04:19 Zero__wind: hmm, then for your map
04:19 Zero__wind: first
04:19 Zero__wind: exchange your combo color 2 and 3
04:20 InC0nceNtrateD: o.o
04:20 Zero__wind: to make the two yellow type colors seperate
04:20 InC0nceNtrateD: uhhm on every diff?
04:20 Zero__wind: sure
04:21 Zero__wind: you'd do it faster opending the .osu file with txt
04:21 InC0nceNtrateD: I am dumb atm xD
04:21 InC0nceNtrateD: give me some time >_<
04:21 Zero__wind: in the .osu file the color subtitle
04:22 Zero__wind: you would find combo1 2 3 4
04:22 InC0nceNtrateD: yop
04:22 Zero__wind: and always remember that the last combo (4, in your case) is the first combo color, in editor
04:22 InC0nceNtrateD: allright
04:23 InC0nceNtrateD: so combo 2 and 3 swapping?
04:23 Zero__wind: and then the 1,2,3 and so on (if there are more) are actually the combo color 2,3,4 ...
04:23 InC0nceNtrateD: now im confused
04:23 Zero__wind: so to swap 2 and 3, actually you shold swap 3 and 4 in your .osu file
04:23 Zero__wind: I don't know why it's like this
04:23 InC0nceNtrateD: but i thought 4 was 1 o_o
04:24 Zero__wind: ah sorry
04:24 Zero__wind: my mistake
04:24 Zero__wind: swapping 1 and 2
04:24 InC0nceNtrateD: ahhh yes
04:24 InC0nceNtrateD: that makes sense
04:24 InC0nceNtrateD: allright
04:24 Zero__wind: and copy it in all .osu files will do
04:24 Zero__wind: ah, surely not the taikos
04:26 InC0nceNtrateD: done :3
04:26 Zero__wind: fine
04:26 Zero__wind: then let's go with the map
04:26 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/262188 IOSYS - Usatei 2011 [Abs0lutely Insane]]
04:26 InC0nceNtrateD: yo
04:26 Zero__wind: 00:03:698 (1,1,1,1) - maybe some whistles needed
04:26 Zero__wind: at your choice
04:27 InC0nceNtrateD: humm, right at the beginning?
04:27 InC0nceNtrateD: i am not sure
04:27 InC0nceNtrateD: adding them to the heads maybe... your opinion?
04:28 Zero__wind: well I'd give you a choice
04:28 Zero__wind: add whistles on both head and tail of 00:03:698 (1) -
04:28 Zero__wind: and only on head of 00:04:013 (1,1,1) -
04:28 Zero__wind: well, it's only suggestions
04:28 InC0nceNtrateD: hmmmmmm let me think
04:29 InC0nceNtrateD: i gotta hear it some times^^
04:29 Zero__wind: some mapper like normal whistle while some don't
04:29 InC0nceNtrateD: yeah actually i am not a fan, but many people seem to like it, so i gave in ^^
04:29 InC0nceNtrateD: yeah lets keep the last one
04:29 InC0nceNtrateD: i mean
04:29 Zero__wind: fine
04:30 InC0nceNtrateD: Added to the first head nd tail and the others head
04:30 Zero__wind: nice
04:30 Zero__wind: and well, finish for heavy beats like 00:05:119 (1) - 's head
04:31 InC0nceNtrateD: added
04:31 InC0nceNtrateD: added to 00:07:645 (1) -
04:31 Zero__wind: yeah
04:31 Zero__wind: and so on
04:31 InC0nceNtrateD: 00:10:171 (1) - ... after the stream , not srue
04:31 Zero__wind: and also in other diffs. I won't point out each
04:31 InC0nceNtrateD: sure*
04:31 InC0nceNtrateD: yo
04:31 Zero__wind: 00:10:171 (1) - will do
04:31 Zero__wind: just the similar points
04:32 InC0nceNtrateD: allright
04:32 Zero__wind: you can find it out
04:32 InC0nceNtrateD: will add later
04:32 Zero__wind: 00:10:487 (2) - CTRL+G for a better flow
04:33 InC0nceNtrateD: done
04:33 Zero__wind: 00:11:750 (2) - same
04:33 InC0nceNtrateD: done before u wrote
04:33 Zero__wind: and CTRL+G to 00:13:013 (2) - and 00:13:329 (3) -
04:34 InC0nceNtrateD: hmmm.... allright
04:34 Zero__wind: not swapping their order
04:34 Zero__wind: just make them both go in opposite direction
04:34 Zero__wind: hope you didn't misunderstood
04:35 InC0nceNtrateD: no... just thought about this, but its not that good, ctrl + g ed only one at a time
04:35 InC0nceNtrateD: so first ctrl g to 2, then crtl g to 3
04:35 Zero__wind: yeah
04:36 Zero__wind: what I suggest is like http://puu.sh/3s2p7.jpg
04:36 InC0nceNtrateD: exactly what i did
04:37 Zero__wind: yeah
04:38 Zero__wind: 00:55:645 (1) - finish on head
04:38 Zero__wind: also similar points
04:38 InC0nceNtrateD: 00:58:171 (1) - head e.g?
04:38 InC0nceNtrateD: or some point earlier?
04:39 Zero__wind: 01:00:698 (1) - on this
04:39 Zero__wind: only on odd ones, ignoring the even ones
04:39 Zero__wind: as I suppose
04:39 Zero__wind: well, more is ok
04:40 InC0nceNtrateD: odd, even?
04:40 Zero__wind: just like you won't be hated adding four finish on each of their head 00:59:434 (1,2,3,4) -
04:40 InC0nceNtrateD: what does that mean
04:40 Zero__wind: about the number
04:40 Zero__wind: odd number means 1 3 5 7 9 while means the opposite
04:41 Zero__wind: even means the opposite *
04:41 InC0nceNtrateD: oh okay
04:42 Zero__wind: well suggesting not add finish on body, too exagerated, only add on head 01:09:540 (1,2,3,4) -
04:43 InC0nceNtrateD: sounds nice, sure - fixed
04:43 Zero__wind: NC on 01:45:224 (1,1,1) - these three are not neccessary
04:44 InC0nceNtrateD: removed
04:45 Zero__wind: multi-reverse like 02:14:277 (2,2) - are not recommended
04:45 InC0nceNtrateD: hmmm ._.
04:45 Zero__wind: as the slider is not long whilte the sv is high, it's hard to react if the slider would revrerse once more or not
04:45 InC0nceNtrateD: ur right
04:45 InC0nceNtrateD: im thinking
04:46 Zero__wind: it' not like the 1/4 reverses
04:46 Zero__wind: player would surely hold tight when dealing with them
04:46 Zero__wind: but not really with these two
04:46 InC0nceNtrateD: yep
04:47 InC0nceNtrateD: how about two sliders of 1/2 length instead
04:47 InC0nceNtrateD: 1/2 beat
04:47 Zero__wind: yeah
04:47 Zero__wind: ok
04:47 InC0nceNtrateD: kay let me fix that
04:47 Zero__wind: or reverse once left and add a note
04:47 Zero__wind: both sollutions fine
04:48 InC0nceNtrateD: and right? no chnge needed then? o.o
04:48 Zero__wind: just choose one way to fix both
04:48 InC0nceNtrateD: okay
04:48 Zero__wind: consistency is appreciated
04:49 Zero__wind: 02:29:829 (1) - well, better start on white tick
04:49 Zero__wind: while ending at the same point
04:50 InC0nceNtrateD: hmm but... vocals definitely start at the blue i think
04:50 Zero__wind: yeah I know that
04:50 Zero__wind: don't make things complicated
04:50 InC0nceNtrateD: allright i see
04:50 InC0nceNtrateD: fixed it
04:51 Zero__wind: also in other diffs, if there are
04:51 InC0nceNtrateD: noted it
04:51 Zero__wind: 02:34:171 (1,2,3,4,1) - and add finish to them all
04:51 Zero__wind: or not on 4
04:51 InC0nceNtrateD: sounds great, but 4
04:51 InC0nceNtrateD: yep
04:51 InC0nceNtrateD: 4 seems unnecessary to me
04:52 Zero__wind: yes
04:52 Zero__wind: 02:36:698 (1) - surely I would say to add finish on head
04:52 InC0nceNtrateD: fixed
04:52 InC0nceNtrateD: 02:39:224 (1) - as well
04:53 Zero__wind: yeah many more
04:53 InC0nceNtrateD: and so on
04:53 Zero__wind: 02:45:540 (1) - for this one, recommend to end at 02:46:487 -
04:54 Zero__wind: having only a 1/2 beat gap between the obects afterwards would be too short for a 190BPM map
04:54 InC0nceNtrateD: seems a bit early to me, but okay
04:54 InC0nceNtrateD: fixed it
04:55 Zero__wind: then well this diff is clear, while you may need double check for finish sounds afterwards
04:55 InC0nceNtrateD: yop i will do that
04:55 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/262189 IOSYS - Usatei 2011 [Definitly Ins4ne]]
04:55 InC0nceNtrateD: allright
04:57 Zero__wind: the rhythm messed a bit from 00:40:329 (1) -
04:58 Zero__wind: I'd suggest to add a single on the red tick
04:58 Zero__wind: and make the four reverses follow
04:58 InC0nceNtrateD: dont know what umean o_o
04:59 InC0nceNtrateD: all four are redticks
04:59 Zero__wind: yeah, better make them start on white to make it more intuitive
05:00 InC0nceNtrateD: then i gotta change 00:41:592 (1) -
05:00 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/3s3vq.jpg
05:00 Zero__wind: and you may need a simple rearrange for the objects
05:01 Zero__wind: 00:43:013 (1,1) - yeah also about these, I've already mentioned in the previous diff
05:02 Zero__wind: reverse once less and a circle at (256,252) will do
05:03 Zero__wind: and hmm, 00:55:645 (1,2) - these is not so good for similar reason, there are better though
05:03 InC0nceNtrateD: jumpy, like it fixed
05:03 Zero__wind: because they are short
05:04 InC0nceNtrateD: Hmmmm, is it necessary, i wanted to keep these
05:04 Zero__wind: players would easily be mislead by 00:53:119 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
05:04 Zero__wind: it's ok
05:05 InC0nceNtrateD: so 00:55 and 00:53 are okay?
05:05 Zero__wind: 00:53:119 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - these are definitely fine
05:06 InC0nceNtrateD: good
05:06 InC0nceNtrateD: i think ill wait for bat with the others...
05:06 Zero__wind: my concern is that after thiese reverses which only reverses once, 00:55:645 (1,2) - these two may cause combo break for players because they recerse twice more
05:07 Zero__wind: well, it's ok though
05:07 InC0nceNtrateD: hmm as soon as it is obvious to see, that this diff is for expirienced players... i guess this shouldnt be that bad, none of my testplayers failed here...
05:07 Zero__wind: yeah
05:09 Zero__wind: 01:52:171 (1,2,3) - and 01:53:434 (1,2,3) - make not much sense
05:09 InC0nceNtrateD: definitly overmapped i guess
05:10 Zero__wind: 01:58:803 (1) - end at white tick plz
05:10 InC0nceNtrateD: fixed all three
05:11 Zero__wind: 02:41:277 (2,1) - maybe CTRL+G for better flow
05:11 Zero__wind: ame point here 02:45:540 (1) -
05:12 InC0nceNtrateD: hmm moment pls
05:12 Zero__wind: and at last, remove 02:56:908 (1) - and end spinner at that point will do
05:12 Zero__wind: fine
05:12 Zero__wind: and this diff is clear
05:13 InC0nceNtrateD: wait wait
05:13 Zero__wind: ok
05:13 InC0nceNtrateD: the first ctrl g is not that good imo
05:13 Zero__wind: ok
05:13 Zero__wind: only suggestion
05:13 InC0nceNtrateD: lol no
05:13 InC0nceNtrateD: wait
05:13 InC0nceNtrateD: confuuusion
05:13 InC0nceNtrateD: it is
05:13 InC0nceNtrateD: xD
05:13 InC0nceNtrateD: done
05:14 InC0nceNtrateD: changed position of
05:14 InC0nceNtrateD: 02:41:277 (2) - due to ds
05:14 Zero__wind: ok
05:15 InC0nceNtrateD: the spinner note at the end
05:15 InC0nceNtrateD: I think... since it is requested the third time now
05:15 InC0nceNtrateD: I give in and.... cry.... remove it
05:15 InC0nceNtrateD: :'O removed
05:15 Zero__wind: =.=
05:15 InC0nceNtrateD: and fixed
05:16 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/262192 IOSYS - Usatei 2011 [Hyper IV]]
05:16 Zero__wind: ok then this one
05:16 InC0nceNtrateD: allright
05:17 Zero__wind: 00:27:224 (1) -
05:17 Zero__wind: end this at a tick with 1/4 baed
05:17 Zero__wind: based
05:17 Zero__wind: suggest to end it at 00:27:382 -
05:18 Zero__wind: while you can make 00:27:224 (1,2) - further from each other
05:18 Zero__wind: and if you choose to end it at 00:27:461 - , then you'd better make them closer
05:18 InC0nceNtrateD: first done and farer away done
05:19 InC0nceNtrateD: its definitely a jump map... soooo...^^
05:19 Zero__wind: 00:29:750 (1) -
05:19 Zero__wind: same
05:19 InC0nceNtrateD: yop
05:19 Zero__wind: 00:32:277 (1) -
05:19 Zero__wind: 00:39:856 (3) - omg my ears
05:20 InC0nceNtrateD: how about 45%`?
05:20 Zero__wind: only finish on head is enough OAQ
05:20 Zero__wind: never add finish on body omg
05:21 Zero__wind: it's fucking crazy
05:21 InC0nceNtrateD: i know xD thats actually why i did it
05:21 InC0nceNtrateD: fixed all
05:21 Zero__wind: hmm, well, and one thing I may should have to mention earlier, is the NC consistency
05:22 Zero__wind: take 00:45:224 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,1,2) - for example
05:22 Zero__wind: You should choose too add a NC once each four beat or each two
05:22 Zero__wind: not messing up
05:22 Zero__wind: I'd suggest four
05:23 InC0nceNtrateD: so 1,2,3,4 into 1,2,1,2 and then 1,1,2,1,2?
05:23 Zero__wind: hmm and well, please keep the consistency throughout the diff
05:23 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/3s4yj.jpg
05:23 Zero__wind: you may find it more regular
05:24 InC0nceNtrateD: allright done
05:24 Zero__wind: actually this would be a big task to handle
05:25 InC0nceNtrateD: hum?
05:25 Zero__wind: also for other Insane diffs
05:25 Zero__wind: that's why I'd say I should have mentioned it earlier
05:25 Zero__wind: well, you'll need to check it afterwards by yourself
05:25 Zero__wind: for NC consistency
05:26 Zero__wind: well, you may check this while checking the finish sounds :3
05:26 InC0nceNtrateD: omg o.o allright since i want to get ranked, i will have to work on it
05:26 Zero__wind: yeah =.=
05:27 Zero__wind: oops, missed one important point
05:27 Zero__wind: 00:29:750 (1) -
05:27 InC0nceNtrateD: i allready changed this one
05:27 Zero__wind: no no no
05:27 InC0nceNtrateD: huuuuum
05:27 Zero__wind: It's a much more serious problem
05:27 InC0nceNtrateD: :I
05:27 InC0nceNtrateD: tell me
05:28 Zero__wind: The reverse arrow of it is mostly overlapped by the hitburst of 00:29:434 (3) - , and this is an unrankable point
05:28 Zero__wind: never overlap reverse arrows
05:28 InC0nceNtrateD: soo i just replace the thing and its fine?
05:29 Zero__wind: you may change the placement of 00:29:119 (1,2,3,4) -
05:29 Zero__wind: so that you won't need to deal with 00:29:750 (1,2) - and the things after
05:30 InC0nceNtrateD: chill
05:30 InC0nceNtrateD: i did it this way:
05:30 InC0nceNtrateD: http://puu.sh/3s4SL.jpg
05:30 InC0nceNtrateD: okay so?
05:31 Zero__wind: what's the y-axis for 00:29:592 (4) - according to your change ?
05:32 InC0nceNtrateD: 0
05:32 Zero__wind: oops then you'd better make 1 and 4 a bit more to the mid
05:32 InC0nceNtrateD: just reduce space would do it as well i guess
05:33 Zero__wind: avoid placing notes wich an y-axis under 12 when it's in the left half of the playingarea
05:33 Zero__wind: because it would touch the HP bar
05:33 InC0nceNtrateD: allright thanks for this
05:33 InC0nceNtrateD: now i got 38
05:33 InC0nceNtrateD: for 4 y
05:33 Zero__wind: fine
05:34 Zero__wind: remember to make 1 symmetrical with it
05:34 InC0nceNtrateD: yop
05:35 Zero__wind: well, same problem here for 01:27:856 (3,4) -
05:35 Zero__wind: arrow overlapped
05:35 InC0nceNtrateD: Ahhhhhhhhhhhh
05:35 InC0nceNtrateD: NOOOOOOOOO :'O
05:35 Zero__wind: and the ones after
05:35 Zero__wind: omg
05:36 InC0nceNtrateD: thats what the nooo omeant
05:36 InC0nceNtrateD: lawl
05:36 Zero__wind: It's a sad story, I have to say
05:36 InC0nceNtrateD: when suddenly le wild troll solution appears
05:36 Zero__wind: =.=
05:37 InC0nceNtrateD: just rotating 3,4 90 degrees to the boundary depending on their position
05:37 Zero__wind: don't be upset, it's so easy to fix http://puu.sh/3s5du.jpg
05:37 Zero__wind: rotate, and rotate more. and rotate more and more
05:38 InC0nceNtrateD: thats just what i thought xD
05:38 Zero__wind: and you solved it
05:38 InC0nceNtrateD: okay ill fix it later
05:38 Zero__wind: fine
05:39 Zero__wind: 01:41:119 (1) - well same point for this
05:39 Zero__wind: too high above
05:39 Zero__wind: 01:39:856 (1,1) - make them a bit closer will do
05:39 InC0nceNtrateD: fixed first and moved 01:39:856 (1) - with it
05:39 InC0nceNtrateD: lol
05:39 Zero__wind: yeah
05:41 Zero__wind: 02:33:540 (5) - this one does not fit well
05:41 Zero__wind: not like 02:31:645 (1,2) -
05:41 InC0nceNtrateD: hmmm i dont see it... what exactly does not fit there?
05:42 Zero__wind: it's that you need a beat at 02:33:856 - , not at 02:34:013 -
05:42 InC0nceNtrateD: http://puu.sh/3s5s3.jpg
05:42 InC0nceNtrateD: i think this could do it as well
05:43 Zero__wind: yeah, slider or two circles, either will do
05:43 Zero__wind: ok and nothing more for this diff
05:44 InC0nceNtrateD: hell yeah xd
05:44 InC0nceNtrateD: uhhm i am really gratefull for this irc mod, it was very helpfull!
05:44 InC0nceNtrateD: all this unrankable stuff and so on
05:44 Zero__wind: yeah...
05:44 Zero__wind: you'll remember them next time
05:45 InC0nceNtrateD: i hope so

Good luck

Fixed all and stuff o.o Dude, you deserve 100 Kudosu for this!! Thanks, I can't say how much u did, it would take too much space here O_O Thanks for the luck!!

OEvil wrote:

[Tavi's Slider Madness]

Breaks
02:16:371 - The break here is 17200 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms. (not sure about that)

DJ Octavia wrote:

OEvil wrote:

[Tavi's Slider Madness]

Breaks
02:16:371 - The break here is 17200 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms. (not sure about that)

Fixed, thanks!

Updated

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[Nwolf's Muzukashii]01:00:382 (26) - remove finish, add finish on 01:00:698 (28) Kept finish (26) but also added the other one.
01:10:487 (84) - remove finish, add finish to 01:10:803 (86) ^
02:02:277 (108,109) - change to dk, there's nothing in the music suggesting the different end Last Usa starts high and goes down, that's why I changed it.

[Nwolf's Oni]Your k placement in this section is very random 0_0 Try to follow my suggestion: You can't imagine how much I hate this part of the songr
00:29:119 (33,34,35,36) - kkkd Keeping it as it is cause the vocals go up where k is.

01:36:145 (175,176,177) - delete, there's no reason for them and it just breaks flow Deleted 175 and 177

good luck with improving~ ty

Alarido wrote:

[Starzd's Normal]
00:41:750 (3) - Why not make a more clean slider like this? → http://puu.sh/3rMRa.jpg

RikiH_ wrote:

Starzd's Normal
00:19:645 (4) - Make something like this: Done

00:22:803 (1) - This should really be symmetric with the center of the grid (Spam ctrl+J for helping you) Done
00:49:645 - Players can get confused because of this gap, since in 00:47:119 there is a note, so add a note here ^
00:50:592 (1) - In my opinion this is really ugly... Fixed
00:54:382 (1,2) - ?? Why aren't these stacked under the previous notes? The distance spacing between them were originally so they would be a tiny bit further away from eachother. It seems as if one of the notes glitched. Fixed.
01:06:698 (2,3) - Ugly overlap, fix please Done
01:19:013 (2,4) - Stack these sliders properly ^
01:22:171 (2) - THat curve is quite weird, try this: ^

01:27:224 (7) - This breaks the flow, make 2 sliders instead of one Sure
02:06:382 (1,2,3) - The whole pattern can be better, first of all make 02:06:382 (1) symmetric with the center (Spam ctrl+h for helping you) and then move (2) and (3) properly in order to fix the spacing Done
02:16:487 - Let the break start here I did that before, must've glitched again. Done.
02:45:540 (1) - End this 1/1 earlier, it's too near to the next object Done.

[Epicz] wrote:

as requested, here's the chatlog:

SPOILER

17:10 [Epicz]: können wir den recheck vllt per irc regeln?
17:11 [Epicz]: Inc000000000
17:12 InC0nceNtrateD: moooment
17:12 InC0nceNtrateD: gib mir 3 minuten xD
17:14 [Epicz]: ist aufjedenfall besser als die vorherige easy
17:14 [Epicz]: leichter
17:14 InC0nceNtrateD: so
17:14 InC0nceNtrateD: bin bereit
17:14 [Epicz]: 00:09:540 (4) - reverse weg?
17:14 [Epicz]: ich hör da nix :/
17:14 [Epicz]: selbst mit 25%
17:15 InC0nceNtrateD: "me - me"
17:15 InC0nceNtrateD: lyrics
17:15 InC0nceNtrateD: und der endpunkt ist das Ussa
17:15 InC0nceNtrateD: bzw Us
17:15 [Epicz]: für mich klingts so
17:15 [Epicz]: 00:09:540 (4) - hier endet das "me - me"
17:16 [Epicz]: und usa geht wieder ab 00:10:171 - hier los
17:16 [Epicz]: aber najo, hab dann wohl schlechte ohren
17:16 [Epicz]: wüsste eh nicht ob der slider dann zu kurz ist
17:16 [Epicz]: also falls du den reverse löschen würdest
17:16 [Epicz]: achja, solltest die easy noch hitsounden
17:17 [Epicz]: würd dir ja helfen, aber ich bin selbst 'nen noob im hitsounden
17:17 InC0nceNtrateD: jap aber das hasse ich also wird das wohl noch etwas dauern >_>
17:17 [Epicz]: ich schau mal kurz was
17:17 InC0nceNtrateD: jo
17:18 [Epicz]: war ausm mod von lally
17:18 [Epicz]: evlt passt es ja
17:18 [Epicz]: http://puu.sh/3xTAW.jpg
17:18 InC0nceNtrateD: danke^^
17:19 [Epicz]: 00:41:750 (2) -
17:19 [Epicz]: evlt drehen?
17:19 [Epicz]: sodass der bogen unten ist
17:19 [Epicz]: evlt für den flow besser
17:19 InC0nceNtrateD: hatte ich
17:19 InC0nceNtrateD: stimmt
17:19 [Epicz]: ist*
17:19 InC0nceNtrateD: weiss nich obs dann noch ganz im screen is
17:20 [Epicz]: sollte
17:20 InC0nceNtrateD: okay done
17:21 [Epicz]: 00:49:329 (2) - 00:51:856 (3) - keine ahnung ob die kurzen reverse slider wirklich empfehlenswert sind
17:21 [Epicz]: für 'ne easy dif
17:21 [Epicz]: theoretisch würden normale slider ausreichen, aber dann isses vllt zu eintönig
17:22 InC0nceNtrateD: eben
17:22 InC0nceNtrateD: ich glaub die gehn schon
17:22 InC0nceNtrateD: sind ja nicht schwer im endeffekt
17:22 InC0nceNtrateD: musst ja als newbie auch keine mausbewegung machen
17:22 InC0nceNtrateD: und sie sind langsam
17:22 [Epicz]: stimmt schon
17:22 [Epicz]: aber najo
17:23 InC0nceNtrateD: naja die möcht ich eigentlich lassen
17:23 InC0nceNtrateD: weil wenn dus dir anschaust
17:23 InC0nceNtrateD: das is dann echt nur es selbe immer
17:23 [Epicz]: 01:00:698 (1) - unused green line?
17:24 [Epicz]: oder wofür ist die? xD
17:24 InC0nceNtrateD: und ide is ja sowieso nicht kreativ
17:24 InC0nceNtrateD: ich seh hier keine linie o.o
17:24 InC0nceNtrateD: 01:15:856 - is eine xD
17:24 [Epicz]: lol, verlinkt der anscheinend nicht
17:25 [Epicz]: 01:36:382 -
17:25 [Epicz]: ah doch
17:25 [Epicz]: hier meinte ich eig.
17:26 InC0nceNtrateD: die endet die kiai time
17:26 InC0nceNtrateD: o.o
17:26 [Epicz]: jetzt echt? o.ö mom xD
17:26 InC0nceNtrateD: xD
17:26 [Epicz]: oh jo, lol
17:26 [Epicz]: sry xD
17:26 InC0nceNtrateD: ich hab nix gegen kiai only aber xD unrankable dies das
17:27 InC0nceNtrateD: okay give me more
17:27 [Epicz]: 01:46:171 (1,2,1,2) - evlt die blankets besser machen?
17:27 [Epicz]: könntest z.B
17:28 [Epicz]: da wo 01:46:171 (1) - endet, die 01:48:698 (1) - anfangen lassen
17:28 [Epicz]: http://puu.sh/3xTVm.jpg
17:28 [Epicz]: und halt die blankets besser machen
17:28 [Epicz]: wie z.B
17:29 InC0nceNtrateD: ahh moment
17:29 InC0nceNtrateD: also einfach
17:29 InC0nceNtrateD: ne warte xD
17:31 InC0nceNtrateD: hab die blankets besser gemacht und 1,1 fangen auf der selben position exakt an
17:31 InC0nceNtrateD: http://puu.sh/3xU1N.jpg
17:31 [Epicz]: sieht viel besser aus
17:32 InC0nceNtrateD: :3
17:32 InC0nceNtrateD: InC0 gut gemacht
17:32 [Epicz]: xDD
17:33 [Epicz]: achjo, die spinner kannste meistens mitn finish beenden
17:33 [Epicz]: ist mir soeben noch eingefallen
17:33 InC0nceNtrateD: okay mach ich mal^^
17:34 InC0nceNtrateD: hast noch was?^^
17:35 [Epicz]: 02:35:750 (2,3) - stattdessen 'nen slider?
17:35 [Epicz]: ähnelt ja schon 'nen singletap pattern xD
17:36 InC0nceNtrateD: okay fixed^^
17:36 [Epicz]: 02:49:329 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - overlaps sind überhaupt nicht zu empfehlen
17:36 [Epicz]: für ne easy dif
17:36 InC0nceNtrateD: singletap mit 1beat abstand
17:36 [Epicz]: für beginner, joa, warum nicht? xD
17:36 InC0nceNtrateD: i know
17:36 [Epicz]: sonst failen sie die map noch
17:36 InC0nceNtrateD: aber es geht nicht anders
17:36 InC0nceNtrateD: soll ich etwa noch mehr DS reinhauen?
17:37 InC0nceNtrateD: ich hab die da nicht freiwillig reingebaut
17:38 InC0nceNtrateD: also was denkst du
17:39 [Epicz]: naja, kannst es ja anders anordnen
17:39 InC0nceNtrateD: mit 1,3 würds gehn
17:39 InC0nceNtrateD: aber I am not sure
17:39 [Epicz]: geht theoretisch auch mit 1,0
17:39 InC0nceNtrateD: ?
17:39 InC0nceNtrateD: nein o.o
17:40 [Epicz]: wäre aber möglich dass es BATs auch nicht so toll finden
17:40 [Epicz]: die wahrscheinlichkeit ist eig. sogar recht hoch
17:41 [Epicz]: najo, ist ja deine map
17:41 InC0nceNtrateD: ja aber ich muss dann auf 1,3 increasen
17:41 InC0nceNtrateD: wie gesagt
17:41 InC0nceNtrateD: meinst ich soll das tun?
17:41 [Epicz]: geht auch mit 1,0
17:41 [Epicz]: :C
17:41 InC0nceNtrateD: wie?!
17:41 InC0nceNtrateD: wenn ich 1,00 da habe kann ich nur overlappen
17:41 [Epicz]: gib mir 'ne minute
17:43 [Epicz]: 02:52:487 (3,1) - evlt einen slider?
17:43 [Epicz]: ich schick dir gleich nen code
17:44 InC0nceNtrateD: done
17:46 [Epicz]: aehm
17:46 [Epicz]: mom
17:46 [Epicz]: xD
17:46 InC0nceNtrateD: was versuchst du grade? xD
17:46 InC0nceNtrateD: mit 1,00 kannst du diese overlapps nicht vermeiden
17:46 [Epicz]: brauch kurz das offset von 02:48:066 -
17:46 [Epicz]: also aus der .osu
17:46 [Epicz]: schick dir dann kurz nen code
17:46 [Epicz]: kannst es dir ja anschauen
17:46 InC0nceNtrateD: schickst du mir nen screen?
17:47 InC0nceNtrateD: code und ich sind nicht gut befreundet
17:47 [Epicz]: ist bissl unpassend
17:47 [Epicz]: geht nen stück
17:47 [Epicz]: mom, ich frag einfach jemanden
17:49 InC0nceNtrateD: InC0nfused
17:49 [Epicz]: bin kurz was am schauen
17:49 InC0nceNtrateD: lass dir zeit^^
17:51 [Epicz]: 112,104,168066,6,0,P|88:132|116:260,1,180
17:51 [Epicz]: ah damn
17:51 [Epicz]: mom
17:51 InC0nceNtrateD: >_>
17:51 [Epicz]: öffnest halt die .osu datei
17:51 [Epicz]: und dann
17:52 [Epicz]: http://puu.sh/3xUIS.txt
17:52 [Epicz]: brauchste einfach nur ersetzen
17:52 [Epicz]: ab
17:52 [Epicz]: 168066
17:52 [Epicz]: ist nämlich das offset
17:52 [Epicz]: aber speicher deine dif vorher ab
17:52 [Epicz]: ist halt nur'n schnelles beispiel
17:52 [Epicz]: aber najo
17:52 [Epicz]: so könnt es gehen
17:53 [Epicz]: musst es hiermit ersetzen
17:53 [Epicz]: http://puu.sh/3xULX.png
17:54 InC0nceNtrateD: da is nix o.o
17:54 [Epicz]: wo?
17:54 InC0nceNtrateD: beim letzten link
17:55 [Epicz]: so http://puu.sh/3xUP2.txt
17:55 [Epicz]: damit ersetzen
17:55 [Epicz]: ach damn
17:55 InC0nceNtrateD: ?
17:56 [Epicz]: so
17:56 [Epicz]: http://puu.sh/3xURu.txt
17:56 [Epicz]: den code brauchst du
17:56 [Epicz]: öffne die jetzige .osu so wie sie ist
17:56 InC0nceNtrateD: O_O
17:56 [Epicz]: und die 3 zahl ist das offset
17:56 InC0nceNtrateD: also
17:56 InC0nceNtrateD: nochmal neu
17:57 [Epicz]: da einfach 168066 raussuchen
17:57 [Epicz]: und ab da den code einfügen
17:57 [Epicz]: ist eig. recht simpel
17:57 InC0nceNtrateD: hab ich
17:57 InC0nceNtrateD: i know
17:57 [Epicz]: ah, k
17:57 [Epicz]: und?
17:57 InC0nceNtrateD: aber du hast mir grade alles vernebelt
17:57 InC0nceNtrateD: muss die stelle finden
17:57 [Epicz]: so könnte es theoretisch funkt.
17:58 [Epicz]: ist halt nur'n schnelles beispiel
17:58 InC0nceNtrateD: lol
17:58 InC0nceNtrateD: du sagst keine overlaps
17:59 InC0nceNtrateD: und haust overlaps rein? o.o
17:59 InC0nceNtrateD: ich peils nicht
17:59 [Epicz]: screen mal
17:59 InC0nceNtrateD: http://puu.sh/3xUYg.jpg
17:59 InC0nceNtrateD: das sind alles overlapps o.o
17:59 InC0nceNtrateD: die overlappen sich dooooch xD
17:59 [Epicz]: war halt nurn schnelles beispiel
18:00 [Epicz]: aber wenn du die minimalen meinst
18:00 [Epicz]: die hast du jetzt schon drin
18:00 [Epicz]: wie z.B
18:00 [Epicz]: http://puu.sh/3xV0t.jpg
18:00 InC0nceNtrateD: ja und du meinst ich soll sie raus machen, bringst mir aber nen beispiel mit genau denselben das kapier ich grad nich
18:00 [Epicz]: es ging ums stacken
18:01 [Epicz]: der circle
18:01 [Epicz]: so kannste es halt verhindern
18:01 [Epicz]: die wirst es nicht kompl. ohne overlays hinbekommen
18:01 InC0nceNtrateD: achsooo xD
18:01 InC0nceNtrateD: sag doch stacking O_O
18:01 [Epicz]: jo, hatte es irgendwie verwechselt
18:01 [Epicz]: sry
18:01 InC0nceNtrateD: ich dachte die ganze zeit die kreise die sich schneiden meinst du
18:01 [Epicz]: nah
18:01 [Epicz]: mir gings um stacken
18:01 InC0nceNtrateD: stacking is was ganz anderes
18:01 [Epicz]: jo, aber ist trdz. nicht empfehlenswert
18:01 InC0nceNtrateD: ach man ganze verwirrung umsosnt xd
18:01 [Epicz]: :C
18:02 InC0nceNtrateD: ja aber sonst wird der DS zuhoch
18:02 [Epicz]: noe, bleibt doch bei 1.0
18:02 InC0nceNtrateD: ausserdem find ichs nicht schlimm dass da overlaps sind
18:02 [Epicz]: so wie ich es z.B gemacht habe
18:02 InC0nceNtrateD: ne ich mien grade die overlaps nicht die stacks
18:02 InC0nceNtrateD: xD
18:03 [Epicz]: wat, jetzt bin ich aber verwirrt :/
18:03 [Epicz]: also stacking solltest du aufjedenfall verhindern
18:03 [Epicz]: minimale overlays sollten nicht so schlimm sein
18:03 InC0nceNtrateD: also
18:03 InC0nceNtrateD: stacking ist draussen keine frage
18:03 InC0nceNtrateD: overlays bleiben da ich sie nicht schlimm finde und ich dann den DS increasen müsste und der mir zu hoch wird
18:04 [Epicz]: jo, wie gesagt, minimale overlays sollten nicht das problem sein
18:04 InC0nceNtrateD: also sind wir uns einig x
18:04 InC0nceNtrateD: xD
18:04 InC0nceNtrateD: conclusion: Stacking -> removed
18:05 [Epicz]: ansonsten nette dif
18:05 InC0nceNtrateD: dankö
18:05 [Epicz]: paar nc's sind vllt noch recht random
18:05 [Epicz]: bzw unpassend
18:05 [Epicz]: und solltest halt hitsounds adden
18:05 InC0nceNtrateD: her damit
18:06 [Epicz]: bin nen noob im hitsounden
18:06 [Epicz]: xD
18:06 [Epicz]: mappen*
18:06 InC0nceNtrateD: ich mein die ncs^^
18:06 [Epicz]: spielen*
18:06 [Epicz]: ah, mom
18:09 InC0nceNtrateD: huuuömm
18:10 InC0nceNtrateD: 00:12:698 (1) - hab ich removed die nc
18:10 [Epicz]: schau gleich noch mal kurz drüber
18:10 [Epicz]: spiel mal kurz ne runde
18:10 InC0nceNtrateD: okay
18:13 InC0nceNtrateD: update dann aber
18:13 InC0nceNtrateD: hab NCs paar removed
18:13 [Epicz]: mach ich
18:23 [Epicz]: 00:17:750 (1) - nc weg?
18:24 InC0nceNtrateD: moment
18:24 [Epicz]: 00:53:119 (1,1) - ncs weg?
18:24 [Epicz]: jojo
18:24 InC0nceNtrateD: erstes
18:24 InC0nceNtrateD: fixed
18:24 [Epicz]: 00:59:434 (1) - nc weg
18:24 InC0nceNtrateD: zwetes nein, weils einfach passt
18:24 InC0nceNtrateD: fixed
18:25 InC0nceNtrateD: okay weiter?
18:25 [Epicz]: 01:09:540 (1) - nc weg?
18:25 InC0nceNtrateD: du hast 01:04:487 (1) - vergessen
18:26 [Epicz]: 01:18:382 (1,2) - nc weg?
18:26 InC0nceNtrateD: all fixed
18:26 [Epicz]: allgemein die 2er combo sieht auf dauer recht langweilig aus
18:26 InC0nceNtrateD: okay
18:26 InC0nceNtrateD: mach ich alle weg
18:27 [Epicz]: 01:53:750 (1,2) - nc weg?
18:27 InC0nceNtrateD: fixed
18:28 [Epicz]: jo, mehr find ich wahrscheinlich nicht
18:28 InC0nceNtrateD: alles klar
18:28 InC0nceNtrateD: danke für den mod :3
18:28 [Epicz]: np :3
18:29 InC0nceNtrateD: postes log bekommst nen kudoooo
18:29 InC0nceNtrateD:
18:30 [Epicz]: nene, brauchst nicht
18:30 [Epicz]: ist eh nicht erlaubt
18:30 [Epicz]: soweit ich weiß
18:30 [Epicz]: ist ja nur'n recheck
18:31 InC0nceNtrateD: dann werden einige kudos denied werden xD
18:31 InC0nceNtrateD: schreib aber nen post mit dem recheck pls
18:31 InC0nceNtrateD: also log und recheck oder so

Thanks for Checking the new Easy Diff

• too many big notes which are quite consider and unrankable for muzukashii diff

1. 00:13:961 (45,47,49) - . you put D D D at those. it's quite hard for the Muzukashii diff O o O o O o O patterns usually used for the Oni or Oni+ diff. i recommend you to change it to be normal note (d's) or you can delete 00:14:119 (46,48) - if you still want to use D's
2. 00:45:066 (96) - change to be d. because you can hear, the pitch sound is different than 00:44:592 (93,94,95) - which you used k's
3. 00:45:382 (98) - change this to be k if you used my mod before ^
4. 00:55:171 (151) - delete this
5. 00:59:434 (22,24,25,26,28) - you used big notes there. yeah, that good BUT for Oni diff it's quite consider for the muzukashii diff because used many big notes. i think it's better to you the normal notes there than big notes
6. 01:00:540 (27,79,81,82,84,86) - ^
7. 01:14:592 (106,108) - ^
8. 01:34:803 (217,219,220,222) - ^ . but i think you can delete 01:34:645 (216,218,221) - if you still want used big notes there
9. 01:44:592 (26) - change to be normal note here. there's not any cymbal or finish sound at the song. and it'll be weird :/
   
10. 02:09:856 (30,31,32) - O O o. hmmm it's quite hard for muzu :'(
11. 02:11:119 (35,36,37) - this too ^
    try this~ 02:09:856 (30,31,32) - change this to be k k d. i change 02:09:856 (30,31) - to be k's to follow the notes before it which are k's and d at 02:10:171 (32) - is to follow the next notes 02:10:487 (33,34) - (btw k's and d's there are for the different vocal sounds too, you can hear it after you change that)
    02:11:119 (35,36) - d k. d at 02:11:119 (35) - is to follow the note before at 02:10:171 (32,33,34) - and k at 02:11:277 (36) - is for the higher vocal pitch sound from 02:11:119 (35) - to 02:11:277 (36) -
    
12. 02:25:961 (113,115) - normal notes are better for muzukashii diff
13. 02:34:171 (155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168) - those are good, BUT for oni diff i think ;w; make it's QUITE easy for the muzukashii diff to decrease the big notes. try this :
    02:26:277 (115,156,159,161,163) - delete these notes ALL, change 02:34:487 (156,158) - to be d's and 02:36:382 (163) - change to be normal note

• change the OD to be 5

1. 00:14:987 (75,76,77,78,79) - using 1/4 beat snap divisor notes are better there.... .__.
2. 00:24:777 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156) - OMG, what are these......?! ;w; delete ALL those notes. you can hear from the music too, there is NOT any sound at that part too.
3. 00:24:698 (149) - change to be big K if you delete 00:24:777 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156) -
4. 00:51:540 (119) - d here. the vocal sound becomes lower at there from 00:51:224 (117,118) - . if you still used k at 00:51:540 (119) - , the sound will be too flat (no any variation notes), because it's too monotonous notes (k k k)
5. 01:46:961 (7,8) - ctrl+g. 01:46:961 (7) - to follow the vocal at 01:46:803 (6) -
6. 01:52:013 (46,47) - ^
7. 01:55:803 (74) - normal note here
8. 02:32:513 (121,122) - dk

RikiH_ wrote:

Let's make this map suitable for bubble, or at least let's try to imporve it more You absolutely must fix red things

General

About that hard: I asked a BAT, he said that it's not necessary but you should improve the diff spread. Choose one of the four insanes and make it easrier or if you want, map an hard (I suggest to map an hard, because ruining an Insane would be bad)

Easy

Use Slider Tick Rate 1, 2 doesn't make much sense in my opinion... It's just too noisy. For example: In this part 01:31:013 (1,2,3,4) if you put slidertickrate 1 you can hear one tick every time she says tei-tei-tei, I don't know how to explain but I think you understood

00:15:224 (1,2,3) - Copy, paste and rotate the first slider, and obtain a symmetrical pattern like this, it looks better:

01:36:066 (5) - Move to 128|204. This is because horizontal/vertical lines look a bit bad
02:51:856 (2) - Move 1 grid up for the same reason

All fixed

Abs0lutely Insane

00:07:645 (1) - Move 2 grids right
00:08:592 (4) - move 2 grid left if you fixed that ^
00:19:961 (9,1) - They touch in a bad way, you should do something to avoid this ( My suggestion: Move 00:20:277 (1,2,3,4,5) some grids up)
00:46:803 (1,2,3,4) - Put these notes in this order, it will flow much better because of the previous slider:

01:01:961 (1,2,3,4) - Make thems tart on the same point?
01:04:329 (4) - Try 288|176 to avoid that overlap
02:10:171 (1,2,3,4) - Stack the ends properly!

All fixed, too

Definitly Ins4ne

00:45:856 (1) - Remove NC for consistency with other patterns
01:36:066 (3) - NC here?
01:53:750 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Make these patterns start in the exact center. To do this, select 01:53:750 (1,2,3,4,5) and move it to 256|64, to the same with 01:55:013 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:40:171 (3,4) - Select these notes, then use ctrl+g
As well as previous, All fixed.

Hyper IV

AR10 for 190 BPM? Everyone will kill you I think the jumppatterns require it o.o I am hating AR10 myself, don't know why I mapped this, but it is like my jumping challenge diff :3

00:11:434 (1,2) - Move (1) 2 grid right and (2) 2 grid left
00:27:224 (1,2) - No wait a second, is this 1/12? It doesn't make much sense, everyone will point this out! I suggest to use 1/8
00:29:750 (1,2) - The same
00:32:277 (1,2) - ^
Well, do the same with all 1/12 sliders, there is no reason to use 1/12, use 1/8 instead!

All fixed

00:37:961 (3) - 2 repeats? It kills the flow, make somthing like this:

Fixed and for the flow I Ctrl + Ged 00:38:592 (1,2,3,4) -

01:01:961 (1,2,3,4) - No hitsounds here?
01:26:592 (1) - Remove NC for consistency with other patterns
01:32:908 (1) - ^
02:21:540 - Do this, please:

All fixed

Sl1der Way

The main problem of this diff is that you have very few hitsounds, you should add some claps and whistles, like in other diffs!

Added more Hitsounds >_<

01:06:698 (3,4,5,6) - They should have the same shape imo fixed
01:16:171 (2) - Ctrl+g
01:16:487 (3) - If you did it ^, then ctrl+g here too Sorry but I want to keep the 8 shape here, and even want to slow down the cursor movement a bit.
01:18:382 (1) - Usually people hate 90° sliders like this, I suggest to turn all 90° sliders in something else... Nahhh, I like these squares, and they r not that hard to play, I wanna keep them :I
02:28:487 (2) - Make this symmetricl to the center
02:33:540 - I'd add a note here and here 02:33:856 - (Or maybe a slider)
02:50:277 (6) - Ctrl+g

Fixed All

___________________

Okay, this is what I found, just a thing: in my opinion you need to improve a bit the hitsounds, look for someone that can mod them better than me.
Gogogo, don't give up

Done Thanks for this big mod again and I hope I can see a BAT post here soon
I do not give up yet

• seems fine, though, i agree if you make a hard or make one of those insane diffs easier

• 00:09:540 (4) - add finish at both slider's head and reverse arrown, it fits the song
  00:12:698 (3) - add finish at slider's head
  00:13:961 (4) - ^
  00:24:066 (4) - add finish at both slider's head and reverse arrown, it fits the song
  00:44:277 (4) - add whistle, like 00:41:750 (2) -
  00:55:645 (1,2,3) - not really symmetry, make it like this?
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:00:698 (1) - add finish at slider's head
  01:14:592 (1) - remove nc? to make it consistent like 01:05:750 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:00:698 (1,2,3,4) -
  01:36:066 (5) - nc?
  01:55:013 (4) - add finish at slider's tail
  01:58:803 (1) - add finish
  02:03:856 (1) - ^
  02:28:487 (1,1) - that's a big gap between them. how about adding slider starts from 02:32:908 - end at 02:33:540 - ?
  02:34:171 (1) - add finish at reverse arrow
  02:35:750 (2) - add finish at slider's tail
  02:41:119 (4) - add finish at slider's head
  02:54:382 (2) - nc

• holy cheese
  
  00:10:645 (2) - add clap
  00:13:329 (3) - add finish at slider's head
  00:13:961 (1) - ^
  00:14:592 (3) - ^
  00:15:224 (1) - ^
  00:41:750 (1,2,3,4,5) - add hitsounds at these? i'm out of suggestions
  00:45:540 (1) - 00:48:066 (1,1) - add finish
  00:47:434 (1) - 00:49:961 (1) - 00:52:487 (1) - replace finish with whistle seems better
  01:01:171 (2) - ctrl+g?
  01:01:961 (1,2,3,4) - too much claps imo, how about only adding it at slider's head?
  02:08:908 (1) - end this spinner at 02:10:803 - ?
  02:28:487 (2) - add finish at slider's tail

• 00:09:540 (2) - add finish at both ends
  00:12:698 (3) - nc
  00:19:645 (4) - add whistle like 00:17:119 (3) -
  00:22:803 (1) - add finish at both ends
  00:49:250 (2,3) - seems error, because this is what i got http://puu.sh/3BD7w.jpg
  00:49:645 (4) - add clap
  00:52:171 (3) - remove clap from slider's head and add it at slider's tail
  00:55:645 (1) - add finish at slider's head
  00:59:119 (2) - add finish at slider's tail
  00:59:750 (3) - add finish
  01:00:066 (4) - add finish at both sides
  01:04:487 (2) - ^
  01:05:119 (3) - add finish at slider's head and tail
  01:05:750 (1) - add finish at slider's head
  01:09:224 (2) - add finish at slider's tail
  01:09:856 (3) - add finish
  01:10:171 (4) - add finish at both ends
  01:10:803 (1) - why not make it symmetry? rotate by 6 degrees then adjust the square points i don't know how to input codes, i'm sorry
  
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  01:15:856 (1) - add finish at slider's head
  01:23:119 - add a note
  01:25:961 (5) - nc
  01:31:013 (1,3) - add finish at slider's head
  01:36:066 (1) - ^
  02:00:066 (2) - rhythm suggestion. it fits the vocal better
  
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  02:02:592 (4) - ^
  02:05:119 (5) - ^
  02:06:382 (1) - add finish at slider's head
  02:08:908 (1) - add finish
  02:12:698 (2,3) - add finish at slider's head
  02:28:487 (2,3) - i believe this is supposed to be mapped in 1/3
  
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  02:30:540 (2) - add clap at reverse arrow for consistency with 02:29:908 (1,3) -
  02:36:698 (1) - add finish at slider's head
  02:51:856 (1) - add finish
  
  there are still a lot of places that can be spiced up with finish

RikiH_ wrote:

Starzd's Normal

00:19:645 (4) - This still looks ugly, give it a symmetrical shape Tried to fix it :S this might do.
00:22:803 (1) - not symmetricl with the center, try to move the red point to 476|194, it's not perfect but it's better and should help you Red point at 476|192 made it completely symmetrical, done.
00:47:434 (5) - Whistle here Done
00:49:250 (2) - What the hell is this? D: I think you accidentally put a note here Oops! Removed!
00:49:961 (5) - ^ Done
00:52:171 (3) - Whistle in the end Done
00:55:645 (1) - Whisle on the beginning, put a whistle also on 00:56:908 (2) (repeat) - 00:58:171 (1) (start) - 00:59:119 (2) (end) and so on on every big white tick until 01:15:856 (1) -
If you followed my previous suggestion, put a whistle on 00:59:750 (3) and on 01:00:066 (4) (At the beginning and at the end) - Also, if you put whistles, remove the claps Done all
01:03:224 (1) - Try a better shape, for example this: (If you need the code, contact me in-game)Tried to improve, if still not good I'll contact you ingame.

01:13:329 (1) - The same as that ^ If I were you, I'd copy-paste it Done
01:22:171 (2) - 2nd slidertick to 239|77 Done
01:28:487 (1,2) - Claps on repeats are a bit loudy imo, I'd remove them I see what you mean, sure.
01:33:540 (1) - Like 01:03:224 (1) - Okay
01:58:171 (3) - Remove clap from the end and put whistle instead Done
02:00:066 (2) - Remove clap from the repeat, maybe try to put a whistle on it instead Done
02:02:592 (4) - The same Done
02:41:750 (1,2) - Please improve this slider, make something like this (And then copy-paste and rotate it): (If you need the code blah blah blah)Improved it imo, looks much better now.

02:45:540 (1) - Okay, let me explain: You have a gap here 02:46:803 - and a note is necessary in this point. But if you put the note here, the pause between that note and the spinner would be too short, so you would shorten the spinner but if you did it, it would be too short. So, use this rhythm in this part: Thanks! Done.

02:48:698 (5,1) - Make a better blanket here: Tried to improve it.

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

[Starzd's Normal]

• 00:09:540 (2) - add finish at both ends Done
  00:12:698 (3) - nc Done
  00:19:645 (4) - add whistle like 00:17:119 (3) - Done
  00:22:803 (1) - add finish at both ends Done
  00:49:250 (2,3) - seems error, because this is what i got http://puu.sh/3BD7w.jpg Already removed
  00:49:645 (4) - add clap Done
  00:52:171 (3) - remove clap from slider's head and add it at slider's tail Done
  00:55:645 (1) - add finish at slider's head Whistle seems to fit better imo, as RikiH_ suggested.
  00:59:119 (2) - add finish at slider's tail ^
  00:59:750 (3) - add finish ^
  01:00:066 (4) - add finish at both sides ^
  01:04:487 (2) - ^ ^
  01:05:119 (3) - add finish at slider's head and tail ^
  01:05:750 (1) - add finish at slider's head ^
  01:09:224 (2) - add finish at slider's tail ^
  01:09:856 (3) - add finish ^
  01:10:171 (4) - add finish at both ends ^
  01:10:803 (1) - why not make it symmetry? rotate by 6 degrees then adjust the square points i don't know how to input codes, i'm sorryDone
  
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  01:15:856 (1) - add finish at slider's head Done
  01:23:119 - add a note As I believe I have said before, spacing would be too tricky if I was to add a note there.
  01:25:961 (5) - nc Done
  01:31:013 (1,3) - add finish at slider's head Done
  01:36:066 (1) - ^ Done
  02:00:066 (2) - rhythm suggestion. it fits the vocal better Hmm okay, done.
  
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  02:02:592 (4) - ^
  02:05:119 (5) - ^
  02:06:382 (1) - add finish at slider's head Done
  02:08:908 (1) - add finish Done
  02:12:698 (2,3) - add finish at slider's head Done
  02:28:487 (2,3) - i believe this is supposed to be mapped in 1/3 Hmm okay
  
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  02:30:540 (2) - add clap at reverse arrow for consistency with 02:29:908 (1,3) - Done
  02:36:698 (1) - add finish at slider's head Done
  02:51:856 (1) - add finish Done
  
  there are still a lot of places that can be spiced up with finish Hmm alright

1. Raise sound volume in both diffs to at least 90%. Not only are the volumes currently inconsistent between the Oni and Muzukashii, in the Oni it's pretty hard to hear the drums clearly with default sound settings during the more active parts of the song.

LunarSakuya wrote:

hey

General
- Artist Unicode: ウサテイ2011 I can not save the file with this in it >_>

- Consider adding "kagome" and "cool&create" to tags since it's the original theme and arranger
- DJ Octavia made the slider diff? If so, add his name to tags also if you're keeping this diff DJ Octavia made the old Diff called Slider Madness, which is available in the Map description, since he was not motivated in mapping another diff, I made the Sl1iderway in order to keep his idea in a rankable version, so short: I mapped the diff.

- Difficulty spread seems sketchy. 4 insanes are just too much, so consider deleting 1 or 2. At least, there should be a Hard diff to balance the set out.
I hate mapping hard diffs, but i will try >_<

- Adding the video for this song would be cool If you like, I guess you could take it from the ranked version if the mapper doesn't mind of course
I gonna ask for it^^

Easy
00:20:277 (1) - Clap on end, watch out for hitsound consistency
00:37:961 (3) - Delete Finish at end, extra emphasis not needed here imo
00:53:119 (1,1,1,2,3) - Symmetry is definitely possible with these if you like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/867323 & https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/867324
00:55:645 (1) - Clap on end, i don't see why not use the same hitsound pattern as the rest of the kiai time~
00:58:803 (4) - Clap, same reason as above
01:14:592 (1) - Delete NC, follow 01:09:540 (4) -
02:14:592 - perhaps add a note here, this gap creates a break in the rhythm flow i feel when playing
02:28:487 (1) - Try not to overuse spinners. For example, this one seems to be a filler in a milder part of the song, too strong for a solo. I highly suggest you delete and map this out (and the small gap after it).
02:52:487 (1) - Delete NC, add NC on the next note. Keeps consistent with 02:48:066 (1,2,3) -


Sl1der Way
00:03:698 (1,2,3,4,5) - try using Soft sample here, fits the bgm better imo
01:01:961 (1,2,3,4) - not really feelin this clap spam, one on each head sounds good enough
01:04:487 (1,2,3,4) - you could make this symmetrical? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/867363 seems to match the nature of this map
01:08:119 - Add note, keep the lyrical flow going; like 01:13:171 (8) -
01:32:277 (1,2) - Too close, looks like an unecessary antijump when i play it
02:29:908 (1) - Filler spinner, map this out please
nice slider art

Abs0lutely Insane
00:03:698 (1,2,3,4,5) - like mentioned earlier, try soft sample set
A little overmapping here and there, mainly with streams. Make sure every stream "fits" and has some purpose for their respective parts. For example, 00:15:224 (1,2,3,4) - , i feel like the map is supposed to be more jumpy to go with the usa usa usa! Very pretty patterns though~

Definitly Ins4ne
-diff name spelled wrong, Definitly --> Definitely Since nobody gets why it is spellt this way, I changed it :3

00:24:698 (3) - NC, follows an NC pattern with 00:24:066 (1,2) - to distinguish different spacing
00:37:329 (7) - NC, like 00:39:856 (1) -
00:42:619 (1) - Delete NC, didn't see a reason for this
00:55:645 (1,2) - Highly suggest you turn these into long sliders. Entering this kiai time, i feel like i'm supposed to start flying through the map! if you get me lol
02:28:013 (1) - way too long orz, I'd map this out
02:34:803 (1) - Delete NC, what's this trying to indicate?
02:56:277 (1) - suspiciously short but I guess it's passable

Hyper IV
00:09:540 (3) - Ctrl + H to avoid overlap with (2)? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/867396
00:29:119 (1) - NC
00:49:329 (1,1,1) - try to avoid the whistle spam, can be a bit hard on the ears
00:52:487 (5) - don't use 1/12 please
00:55:645 (1,2) - what I said for Definitely Ins4ne, don't really know about these holds on a part like this; same for similar areas Changed it in Definitely Ins4ne, but in this diff, it belongs to the style of Hyper IV, so I wanna keep it, also for creating a contrast to the jumpy rest of the map.
01:53:434 (4) - NC, like 01:52:171 (1) -
02:16:487 (1) - I believe you can map this out
02:45:540 (1,1,1) - Try soft sample set, Normal is too loud for this quiet part

Exciting map~ xD tewi <3
Needs some more work, mostly with the insanes =v= nevertheless, challenging and fun. Thanks ^_^
Also keep in mind, you will also need a BAT that knows taiko to approve the taiko diffs before getting a bubble
Good luck!!

Thank you Lunar for this Mod, I changed everything that is not commented

• General

1. Im not sure about kiai starting at 3856, but it seems fine.
   
2. You use too much Copy - Paste, overusing it makes sliders ugly.
   
3. Adding the "Green" section at 75540 would make nice effect with the next kiai that is at next White tick
   
4. I think the Normal is too fast
   
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• Easy

1. 00:07:013 (2) - Moving that a bit down would make better Blanket, also move that one too if you moved previous 00:07:645 (3) - It should look like this
   
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2. 00:09:540 (4) - This slider may be coliding to previous moved sliders, just move it a bit right, 00:10:803 (1) - this is needed to be moved 2 grids/3 left
   
3. 00:13:961 (4) - This slider shape is overused at This part of the song, you can avoid that chosing other shapes like this:
   
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4. 00:21:540 (2) - Maybe that slider would be great here
   
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5. 00:24:066 (4) - I would use other pattern
   
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6. 00:53:119 (1) - I dont like that slider, i would like to see it in other way since the blanket to the (2) looks bad ( same with 00:54:382 (1) - because its coppied)
   
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7. 00:55:645 (1,2,3) - I would like to see other sliders here, something like this:
   
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8. 01:00:698 (1) - Use that so it can look batter SS:
   
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9. 01:04:487 (4) - I dont like that shape there is my suggestion, but please shape it better than i did XD
   
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10. 01:09:540 (4) - This slider seems okay, but it can look better, try make it, please
    
11. 01:15:856 (1) - Maybe use it
    
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12. 01:18:382 (3) - This slider seems bad for me, also its kinda overused Fix it, please i have no idea how.
    
13. 01:31:013 (1) - TO not overuse that slider that much you can make star here with that sliders:
    
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14. 01:57:540 (2) - Just move it a bit higher, and curve it in other way (02:02:592 (2) - same with this one)
    
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15. 02:28:487 (2) - Just look at the ss, it gives it better look
    
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16. 02:54:382 (1,2) - Make move the (2) for a better effect
    
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• Starzd's Normal

1. 00:22:803 (1) - I dont like that slider, fix it somehow, please
   
2. 00:24:382 (2) - Move it a bit down, it can look better
   
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3. 00:17:119 (3) - Curve it in other way, and that will be nice
   
4. 00:07:645 (1) - This slider shopuld look like this:
   
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5. 00:11:434 (2) - Almost same as the previous
   
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6. 00:40:487 (1) - Ctrl + G for better flow
   
7. 00:49:329 (2) - this note is definetly TOO big jump, Normal cant have that big jumps In my opinion so 00:47:434 (5,2,3,4) - Ctrl + G on that notes
   
8. 01:00:698 (1) - Ctrl + G for better play
   
9. 01:56:908 (2,3) - Really nice pattern But ctrl + G on (3)

• Hard

1. 00:03:698 (1,2,3,4) - You can increase spacing per slider like this:
   
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2. 00:05:592 (2) - A bit up
   
3. 00:07:645 (1,3) - That sliders break flow IMO, continue 1/2 at the ,,Usa, Usa'' XD
   
4. 00:12:066 (7) - Make it look better, by curving it in oppositive way
   
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5. 00:20:277 (1,2) - Please fix that slider it looks bad if you put 1/1 slider when you should 1/2
   
6. 00:21:540 (3,4) - If you didnt fixed previous sugestion both circles down to make blanket with the 2 previous
   
7. 00:43:013 (1,2) - Please fix it
   
8. 01:11:750 (3,1,2,3,4) - Use instead of them 1/2 sliders, that would be nice
   
9. 01:11:750 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,3) - same with these, i dont ike that *make it 1/2 please*
   
10. 02:03:856 (1,1) - Same with these Please XD
    
11. 02:52:487 (3,4) - Mmmmm something like this:
    
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12. 02:55:645 (1,2,3,4) - Look at the screenshot
    
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• Sl1der Way

1. 00:43:013 (1,3) - Make it look like this ( same with (2) , (4) since its coppied)
   
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2. 00:44:908 (5) - Curve it a bit (same with (6) since its coppied for symmetry
   
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3. 01:23:434 (1) - Make the curve look better, also with the coppied one
   
4. 00:59:750 (2) - a bit down i dont like when they are touching OwO
   
5. 01:18:382 (1) - I hate that type of sliders ;_; there is my sugestion:
   
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6. 01:20:908 (1) - Curve to the down
   
7. 01:21:540 (4) - Curve to the up
   
8. 01:32:277 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I dont like THAT sliders Please change shape of them
   
9. 02:56:277 (1) - Just make it longer
   
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• Abs0lutely Insane
  This diff is so fast and im not skilled that much to mod that kind of black magic, but there are few sugestions

1. 00:59:434 (1,2,3,4) - Curve them plz
   
2. 01:15:856 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Please fix that part by remapping it it seems too much copy- paste for me, but nice idea
   
3. Im not able to mod more parts of this diff since im not pro mapper/modder
   
   

Papysh wrote:

This diff is so fast and im not skilled that much to mod that kind of black magic, but there are few sugestions

Irreversible wrote:

Papysh wrote:

This diff is so fast and im not skilled that much to mod that kind of black magic, but there are few sugestions

i lol'd hard

Papysh wrote:

Hello, Mod request from PM

• General

1. Im not sure about kiai starting at 3856, but it seems fine.
   
2. You use too much Copy - Paste, overusing it makes sliders ugly.
   
3. Adding the "Green" section at 75540 would make nice effect with the next kiai that is at next White tick
   
4. I think the Normal is too fast
   
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• Easy

1. 00:07:013 (2) - Moving that a bit down would make better Blanket, also move that one too if you moved previous 00:07:645 (3) - It should look like this
   
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2. 00:09:540 (4) - This slider may be coliding to previous moved sliders, just move it a bit right, 00:10:803 (1) - this is needed to be moved 2 grids/3 left
   fixed
3. 00:13:961 (4) - This slider shape is overused at This part of the song, you can avoid that chosing other shapes like this:
   
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   I like having a bit of an ordered map, sorry :I There was a time where I ONLY copypasted ^_^
4. 00:21:540 (2) - Maybe that slider would be great here
   
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   see above
5. 00:24:066 (4) - I would use other pattern
   
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   fixed
6. 00:53:119 (1) - I dont like that slider, i would like to see it in other way since the blanket to the (2) looks bad ( same with 00:54:382 (1) - because its coppied)
   
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   Since 1,2 do not show up the same time, they dont form a blanket, no change here
7. 00:55:645 (1,2,3) - I would like to see other sliders here, something like this:
   
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   sorry, but this is a - i know people wont see it - heart shape, no change. -> heart: 00:53:119 (1,1,1,2,3) -
8. 01:00:698 (1) - Use that so it can look batter SS:
   
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   fixed, nice idea
9. 01:04:487 (4) - I dont like that shape there is my suggestion, but please shape it better than i did XD
   
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   fixed
10. 01:09:540 (4) - This slider seems okay, but it can look better, try make it, please
    fixed
11. 01:15:856 (1) - Maybe use it
    
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    nah doesnt fit imo
12. 01:18:382 (3) - This slider seems bad for me, also its kinda overused Fix it, please i have no idea how.
    It is not bad and it is used on purpose
13. 01:31:013 (1) - TO not overuse that slider that much you can make star here with that sliders:
    
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    it is allready a shamrock
14. 01:57:540 (2) - Just move it a bit higher, and curve it in other way (02:02:592 (2) - same with this one)
    
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    fixed both
15. 02:28:487 (2) - Just look at the ss, it gives it better look
    
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    fixed
16. 02:54:382 (1,2) - Make move the (2) for a better effect
    
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fixed


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• Hard

1. 00:03:698 (1,2,3,4) - You can increase spacing per slider like this:
   
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   fixed, nice catch
2. 00:05:592 (2) - A bit up
   fixed
3. 00:07:645 (1,3) - That sliders break flow IMO, continue 1/2 at the ,,Usa, Usa'' XD
   I dont think so, no changes
4. 00:12:066 (7) - Make it look better, by curving it in oppositive way
   
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   fixed
5. 00:20:277 (1,2) - Please fix that slider it looks bad if you put 1/1 slider when you should 1/2
   
6. 00:21:540 (3,4) - If you didnt fixed previous sugestion both circles down to make blanket with the 2 previous
   fixed second option, I tried with only 1/2 but in Hard diff u need some other things because it gets boring.
7. 00:43:013 (1,2) - Please fix it
   Fix what? the song is goin slower and I used them to lead in the spinner sliders spinner pattern.
8. 01:11:750 (3,1,2,3,4) - Use instead of them 1/2 sliders, that would be nice
   
9. 01:11:750 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,3) - same with these, i dont ike that *make it 1/2 please*
   with these two times u made my osu selecting bull**** sorry i had to tell :'D No seriously: I think they r nice and give a cool variety here.
10. 02:03:856 (1,1) - Same with these Please XD
    Same as above
11. 02:52:487 (3,4) - Mmmmm something like this:
    
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    fixed, dunno why i made them this ugly lol
12. 02:55:645 (1,2,3,4) - Look at the screenshot
    
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fixed, nice idea (:


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• Sl1der Way

1. 00:43:013 (1,3) - Make it look like this ( same with (2) , (4) since its coppied)
   
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   fixed 1,3 but cant do it with 2,4 it would ruin the flow, but it looks nice !
2. 00:44:908 (5) - Curve it a bit (same with (6) since its coppied for symmetry
   
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   there is no curve in the two sliders o.o
3. 01:23:434 (1) - Make the curve look better, also with the coppied one
   fixed
4. 00:59:750 (2) - a bit down i dont like when they are touching OwO
   fixed, me neither o.o
5. 01:18:382 (1) - I hate that type of sliders ;_; there is my sugestion:
   
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   Not a chance, since this diff shall somehow remember to the old slider madness where this was a pattern, i will keep it
6. 01:20:908 (1) - Curve to the down
   
7. 01:21:540 (4) - Curve to the up
   Nah it would not fit with the circle pattern afterwards. Anyway it is nice like it is now
8. 01:32:277 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I dont like THAT sliders Please change shape of them
   Muhahaha I am so cruel They will be there forever o.o .... and ever ...and ever...
9. 02:56:277 (1) - Just make it longer
   
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fixed


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• Abs0lutely Insane
  This diff is so fast and im not skilled that much to mod that kind of black magic, but there are few sugestions Nyan I am a magican

1. 00:59:434 (1,2,3,4) - Curve them plz
   No, not everything has to be curved, and this fits perfectly how it is
2. 01:15:856 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Please fix that part by remapping it it seems too much copy- paste for me, but nice idea
   It is just epic to play, I will not change this, sorry for not accepting ur suggestions in this diff x:
3. Im not able to mod more parts of this diff since im not pro mapper/modder

Thats all i cant mod the diffs higher since they are too fast~ No problem, thanks for ur many suggestions
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