[General]
00:01:809 - The Timing Point can be moved to 00:00:632. You have no Lead-in.
Timing seems to be a little off. Try having
-10 offset on both Timing Points.
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Kantan]
00:58:238 (66,70) - I would rather suggest to move them one 1/2 backwards. On BPM 134 1/2 notes seem okay, but maybe we should take the save way, and make it 1/1 beats?
That's all. Really nice Kantan.
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Futsuu]
GeneralThe diff spread between Kantan and Futsuu might be a bit high. You can prevent it easy by just having some more gaps between notes. Just check my mod.
Notes00:22:593 (37) - Remove this notes. In Futsuu this can be quick distracting for players. But I also have to say that it dosen't sound so nice at all.
Though, it isn't 2/6, rather 3/8.
00:30:039 (53,54) - Recommending to delete these notes to make the diff spread between kantan and Futsuu a bit lower. Also, tbh it sounds good. First you have 8 note patterns (00:27:129~00:29:815) with a gap and afterwards, it's becoming a 6 not patterns (00:30:711~00:32:502) with a gap. A good reducers of notes in my opinon! Makes the patterns interesting and fits to music as well.
00:37:203 (72,73) - ^
00:39:442 (79) - No problem to use here a kat. Sounds nice. Lineal pattern. No problem for Futsuu level.
00:58:696 (121,129) - (00:58:696 ; 01:02:278) - Yes, I think deleting these notes might sound better, keeps diff spread lower as well. Not a must.
01:07:651 (144,145) - Actually the same as before, but since this is the second kiai, you may consider to keep it.
01:14:815 (164,165) - ^
01:09:890 (151) - No problem to use here a kat. Sounds nice. Lineal pattern. No problem for Futsuu level.
01:17:054 (171) - ^
01:23:099 (188,189,190,191,192,193) - Mh. How about the following constalation? Sounds interesting. Keeps your two-plet patterns and makes diff-spread a bit easier.
01:26:233~01:33:397 - You started to use two-plets in the middle of the kiai, so I recommen to keep it like that(maybe with my pattern suggestion), since it would look uneven to have the first half of the kiai triplets, at the 3/4 twoplets and at the end triplets again.
My mod seems longer as it is, but it is nothing minor.
Maybe here and there a little pattern change and I'm totally fine with the Futsuu. Nice!
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Muzukashii]
General00:41:457 -
No SV changed in a Muzukashii, please. Namcos latest maps contain also SV changes, but a Muzukashii shouldn't have this in my opinion(so or so, Namco is overtaking it nowadays). It can be distracting and could confuse in some cases player due to less notes as in Onis, so it is harder to consider the play-wise for them. Sometimes it is fine, but not recommendable in this map-set, especially due to the overlapp which is a no go in a Muzukashii. For Oni this might be in special cases okay.
Notes00:02:691 (6,7) - Yes, I think this fits as
k d better since the piano is also higher-lower pitches.
00:08:573 (21,22) - ^
00:12:103 (28,29) - ^
00:22:593 (47) - As I stated in the Futsuu before, this isn't 2/6, rather 3/8. (Maybe just have one note here, look weird anyway).
(47) -> 3/8
(48) -> 4/6 (as you have already)
01:04:740 - Ahaha! Great use of abekobe in this kiai. Great!
Nice Muzukashii. Good job.
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Oni]
00:05:044 (12,13) - Yes, I think this fits as
k d better since the piano is also higher-lower pitches.
00:07:397 (19,20) - ^
00:08:573 (22,23) - ^
00:22:593 (53,54,55) - Same as in Muzukashii and Futsuu.
00:23:867 (56,57,58,59,1) - Good idea. But looks a bit weird. Consider this please.
00:26:457 (4) - Probably better to delete this note. Not a must.
00:40:561~00:41:457 -
This is a problem. Due to big decelerating part it is way too hard to consider this as 1/4 or 1/3. Delete all the timelines and put a
x1.00 at 00:41:457 and a
x0.75 at 00:41:681. This works fine, fit's to the music and looks fine.
01:10:114~01:10:561 - Maybe have a slider here. I think the finisher can emphasize them-self in this way better.
01:17:278~01:17:726 - ^
01:24:442~01:24:890 - ^
01:31:606~01:32:726 - Slider as well?
{
01:04:740~01:10:114 - First section has no gaps.
01:11:905~01:15:039 - Second one does have some.
01:19:069~01:24:442 - Third one has gaps as well.
01:26:233~01:31:606 - Same here.
} So I suggest to have gaps in the first section as well,
or use no gaps in the third section,
or first+third = gaps and second+forth = no gaps
Last option seems to be the best to me. Right now the gaps are placed a bit random.
Oni is fine.
Well, that's it. After some things have been changed, I see no reason why not to bubble / rank it.
Have a star and good luck!