버블(bubble)되었는데 업뎃하면 터진다고 PM 보낸걸로 아는데 ㅡㅡ; 업뎃(update) 하셨네

[Normal]
01:09:04 (4) - 3번과 간격이 조금 떨어졌네요.


[Hard]
Fine for me.


[Insane]
00:14:81 (4) - 시작 부분이 화면 밖으로 조금 나갑니다.

01:04:79 -
01:56:77 -
02:54:75 -
위 세 시작점부터 각각 코러스 부분으로 들어가는데요, 뉴 콤보 들어가는게 서로 다 달라요.
가급적이면 셋 일관성 있는 규칙성으로 뉴콤보 넣는거 추천합니다.


잘 만드시네요! 별~ ^^

The name of artist is acctually Rin Kagamine...

~star~

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음악의 음질이 56kbps라 그런지 좀 안좋네요.....특히 심벌같이 고음의 경우는 때에 따라서 듣기가 거북할 수도 있겠네요..

그러기에 음악파일을 새로 보내드리겠습니다.

원래는 굉장히 깔끔한 음질이지만 현재 파일용량을 보니 이미 13.7메가나 차지하고 있네요.
그러기에 96kbps로 올려드립니다. 이정도면 1.6메가만 더 들어갑니다.

아 혹시 모르니까 새로운 파일로 바꾼 다음에 배경음과 노트가 일치하는지 확인해주세요.
(아니 이미 이 파일은 첫 부분이 약간 추가된 소리가 있어서 오프셋을 조절해야겠지만요..)

스타 드리겠습니다.

Download: Servant_of_Evil(Len)a.mp3

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Normal
you don't need the SB warning on this diff, So you have to select the option (Diff. Specific) on the the design panel of the editor only in the difficulty you want the warning.

Hard
make the SB warning more visible plz.
02:33:34 (9) - move to the next blue tick

Insane
make the SB warning more visible plz.

Star!

~Normal~
Fine.

~Hard~
01:08:84 (6) - new combo
01:16:59 (5) - ^
02:58:84 (8) - ^

~Insane~
01:25:84 (1) - remove new combo
01:26:84 (1) - ^
02:40:84 (7) - new combo
02:42:09 (1) - remove new combo
02:42:59 (3) - new combo


+Star

Geez, why is the novid version 19.6 MB? o_O (any way of getting that FLV out of the novid version?)

[All]

Preview points need to be set.

[Normal]

Looked fine.

[Hard]

01:22:84 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern seemed a bit random.

I thought that as the song was a bit long, this map could have used a few more breaks, but it's fine without them too.

[Insane]

15m is a bit high for max score, is this map hard enough for that?

01:18:84 (3,6) - Not sure if this slider covering is okay, since although it's barely revealed, I dunno if there's enough time.
02:26:84 (7) - New combo?
02:34:84 (4) - Move the new combo before this onto this note?
02:43:34 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Picky thing, 8,9,10,11 needs to be moved right one grid for the left inverted V to be symmetric.
03:37:59 (3,5) - Slightly misaligned.

Starred, very fun.

I think that it is perfect ^^.


star~

[Normal]

01:09:846 (7,1) Finish
02:09:096 (4,6) Whistles

[Hard]

00:42:846 New combo?

[Insane]

00:50:846 New combo?

omg @_@ almost a perfect map. Starred!

Normal
01:10:034 (1,2) - new combo on 2nd, remove new coimbo from 1st

Hard
[General] This mode is mapped very well, but try to add another little break time along the song... one isn't enough even for Insane mode...

Insane
01:20:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move these beats 1-2 squares right
02:55:084 (1,4) - clap here

... and that's all! Fine sound placing for a well-playable map... Bat members had better to watch this! ;3

Add Source and Tags

[Normal]
01:14:059 (10) - Too far away from 1

[Hard]
01:56:084 (1) - The Warning should be a little sooner
02:13:072 (6) - Whistle here sounds odd

[Insane]
Raise Hitsound Volume a little in the beginning

★

[M0D]

[Insane]
The map is pretty booring because of the lack of hitsound =( try adding more whistles and finishes to make the map have much power.
01:37:022 (4) - recheck space
00:15:034 (5,6) - ^
01:33:022 (2) - add a clap @ the beginning of slider
01:37:022 (4) - ^
01:37:059 (5) - ^
01:34:034 (6) - clap?
01:36:009 (7) - add clap at the END of the slider I hope you do this hitsound pattern all through out the map
01:45:034 (4) - unpredictable hidden slider, 01:44:059 (1) - is covering the repeating arrow thing
combo color sucks >w<

[Hard]
Hitsound comment refer to [Insane]
no other probs found

[Normal]
Hitsound comment refer to [Insane]
REMOVE SB CODEs coz after finish playing the map it still goes on and um of course a skip button appears but it's better if it ends automatically. Make x2 sb Diff. Specific only in [Insane] and [Hard]
02:13:721 - end kiai section

star

seemed fine to me, no probs, good job, star

+STAR
good map

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

Why don't you change the "Custom Colours"? I suggest Pink & Yellow

[Normal]

It's ok

[Hard]

It's ok

[Insane]

It's ok

Starred~

good

[Hard]
01:24:846 (7) - New combo
01:25:846 (1) - No new combo

Star for you!

No problems found ^.^


star~

hello

the source is not the same for every beatmap

Normal:

01:15:084 (2) - the endings of sliders are not perfect together
01:17:084 (6) - the part here is very low down on the screen. maybe you want to move it up a litte
01:26:084 (3) - this slider can be changed to 2 circles if you like
01:33:084 (3) - move the ending of this slider 1 down so it is nice on the other circles. it is also not perfect with the slider (1)
02:03:084 (3,4,5) - i think you can make this easier for the normal. but it is ok for me

end the first kiai time here 01:21:084 (8) -

hard:

01:22:059 (10) - i would remove this and use a sound on (9) circle
01:22:034 (9) - the kiai time should also end here
02:00:084 (7) - new combo
03:02:034 (7) - new combo
03:06:084 (4) - new combo
03:11:047 (8) - the kiai time should end here
03:36:084 (3) - new combo
03:48:084 (4) - new combo
03:56:084 (9) - new combo
04:00:084 (8) - new combo

(all this new combos are in the kiai time i think because you like to make it only half so long there. you can think if you want to change them or not, to make it the same with other combos in kiai time)

Insane:

00:42:084 (6) - new combo
01:10:034 (6) - new combo
01:10:084 (1) - remove combo
01:12:047 (4) - new combo
01:12:084 (1) - remove combo

01:58:059 (5) - new combo
02:02:034 (9) - new combo
02:02:084 (1) - remove combo

03:08:059 (5) - new combo
03:55:084 (5) - new combo

nice map star

As your request in my queue. Anyway, I love this map~

[Normal]
Remove the X2 Speed in this diff since you don't use that. Or do you use that thing..?

[Hard]
01:22:034 (9) - Add clap.
02:06:084 (3) - Move this slider to the same place as (2).
02:13:047 (5) - Add clap.
02:13:072 (6) - Remove clap.
03:11:047 (8) - Remove clap at the end. Add finish at the end.
03:12:158 - IMO, the break is too long..
03:43:072 (1) - Silence the spinner will be better.
03:46:084 (2) - Add finish at the beginning of the slider.

[Insane]
Perfect.

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Yes, you may ignore them all ^^
And *star~

Hello.

- Hard
01:04:846 ~ Unnecessary x2 SB; remove.

- Normal
Again, unnecessary x2 SB; remove.

Have a star.

umm...

A bit sad that there isn't alot of soft whistle, which I think it fits perfact with this map
Star for a nice job and a chear

[General]
*Offset: 846 You had yours on an upbeat so the metronome and pulsating osu! logo were wtfing.
*Why is the first section in 2/4?
*Source is Akuno-P. Add to all diffs.
*Remove all tags since they're redundant (they're in the artist and title fields). Please add Len to tags, though. Rin isn't needed either, but you could keep her name there if you want. Also add Vocaloid and Servant of Evil to tags. Change these on all diffs.
*combobuster? I think you mean "comboburst". Rename and do a full resubmission if you want the comboburst to be in the map. The pic also has a glowy spot on the top right that could be edited out. EDIT: Or just use this higher quality one here

[Normal]
01:21:034 (6,7,8) - Sounds awkward since the singing is actually 1/4th before on each note. Because of the offbeats, I'd just recommend making a slider with a repeat here starting at the blue previous blue tick. (01:21:221)
02:13:047 (3,4) - I'd recommend making this a slider too. Offbeats on a easier diffs are tricky.

[Hard]
*Increase overall diff by a couple ticks and maybe decrease drain by one tick please.
01:06:084 (3) - I think the kiai would look better starting here. It feels weird while playing for it to come early like this.
01:58:084 (3) - Same kiai suggestion.
02:56:084 (3) - blah blah kiai
03:01:084 (4,5,6) - I don't like pauses before notes stacked on sliders because they look like they should be hit right after the slider. If you could move these off of the slider I think it'd look better and be easier to read.
03:46:084 (2) - Kiai would look better here instead of on (1) imo.

[Insane]
*Same kiai suggestions
*I was going to ask you to increase the overall diff 1-2 ticks, but 2 ticks more makes the score increase ~3M points o.o; Maybe you could turn drain down 1 and overall diff up 1 or something so that the score doesn't go higher.
00:52:059 (1,2,3) - Ooh, I like this.
01:21:009 (3,4,5,6) - Kinda hard to see because the previous 50/100/30 semi-covers them up.
02:14:084 - A (5) here would sound better imo
04:08:084 (1,2,3) - Move a tiny grid to the left so it's centered please xp
03:46:059 (1) - Change kiai to (3).

Not bad of a beatmap for one of your fist. It's kinda repetitive, but then again, it's a long song, so... XP

Hit circle overlay GOGOGO

EDIT: Bubble #2. You should have protected Pasonia's bubble :;

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RemmyX25 wrote:

Hitcircle colors are terrible imo, especially for Team/Tag TeamVS. games. Also could do with an [Easy] difficulty >_> fixed

Also is there anyway you can convert (or get someone to convert) the FLV file into something like a .avi and full submit? Makes the NoVideo download so much easier. fixed

Normal:
In my opinion, the difficulty sliders could be lowered a bit, especially the circle size. fixed

Hard:
03:28:846 (1,2,1,2) - Just pointing out that it's EXTREMELY difficult to see the repeat sign on these sliders fixed

Overall very well done. Please do consider my suggestions.

I fixed....

[General]

1. Delete the .osb from the song folder.
2. Is this a duet or something? At 01:40:846 there seem to be two voices (male and female), so you should at least add the other vocaloid's name (forgot what name was it) in tags or something.
3. You didn't use the second sampleset allowed for soft, so delete "soft-sliderslide2.wav" from the folder.

[Skin]

1. I don't think the "star.png" image is used while playing, so you need to delete it.

[Hard]

01:56:846 (1) - IMO this 2x slider is unecessary. Doesn't really fit with the song.
02:54:846 (1,2,3) - Same as above.

[Insane]

Yeah, the same 2x slider thing in [Hard].

That's it. Don't forget to full submit after all those changes!

안녕하세요
Nazi?

전체적으로..
노트위에다가 time line 으로 hit sound를 Normal로 바꿉니다.
조금 여유를 두고 뒤로 조금만 옮기셔도 됩니다.
물론 키아이 time은 그대로 두시고..

[Normal]

• 00:58:846 (7) New combo
  01:16:846 (3) None
  02:00:846 (4) None
  02:01:596 (5) Whistle
  02:04:346 (4) ^
  -02:13:721- 여기서 kiai 플래시는 어떨까요?

[Hard]

• 00:51:846 (7) Whistle
  01:07:846 (4) 모두 whistle
  01:59:596 (5) Whistle
  03:07:846 (9) 클랩 빼고 Finish
  03:41:846 (1) Newcombo
  03:43:721 (1) 끝은 그대로, 시작은 03:43:846로
  휘슬이 나올만한 대서 클랩이 뜨네요

[Insane]

• 01:10:346 (6) Whistle
  02:45:221 (1?) Whistle
  02:50:346 (1) ^
  03:35:346 (4) Distance

ㄲㄲ 대충 끝난 모양
왜 whistle이 어울릴만한 데에 clap을 넣었는지 이유나 한번..

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랄까, 님 맵의 BAT STAR는 어디갔죠?
스타도 터지던가..?

?? 무슨소리?

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