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Ren Kagamine - Aku no Meshitsukai
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moded in IRC~
Normal hits mixed with soft hits sounds bad.
<Normal>
Remove the break
<Hard>
01:28:78 (1,2,3) - Bad spacing
<Insane>
1) Overall set to 7 or 8 plz
2) Completely silenced hitsounds don't make sense
3) This map's score is too high
star'd
<Normal>
Remove the break
<Hard>
01:28:78 (1,2,3) - Bad spacing
<Insane>
1) Overall set to 7 or 8 plz
2) Completely silenced hitsounds don't make sense
3) This map's score is too high
star'd
There's a lot of screeching noises in the mp3. Think you can find a better one? If not, that's fine.
Normal~
Delete the unused timing sections starting at 134,646ms to the end of the song.
Oh wow! And delete that break at 03:11:87 as well.
Hard~
Black hit circles aren't a very good idea for this song.
For example: 01:21:91 (13,14,15,16) - The video shows black and coincidentally, the notes are black too which makes it very hard to see. (Other places as well.)
03:43:74 (1) - Shorten this to 03:44:74 instead. Where it ends right now doesn't sound good since it stops at nothingness.
Insane~
04:08:98 (5) - Align with 6 vertically.
Normal~
Delete the unused timing sections starting at 134,646ms to the end of the song.
Oh wow! And delete that break at 03:11:87 as well.
Hard~
Black hit circles aren't a very good idea for this song.
For example: 01:21:91 (13,14,15,16) - The video shows black and coincidentally, the notes are black too which makes it very hard to see. (Other places as well.)
03:43:74 (1) - Shorten this to 03:44:74 instead. Where it ends right now doesn't sound good since it stops at nothingness.
Insane~
04:08:98 (5) - Align with 6 vertically.
제가 돌아왔습니다 -ㅂ-
안니버씨의 간절한 모습이 #korean에서 보이더라구요 ㅇㅅㅇ
[Normal]
01:24:78 (1,2,3,4)-> 약간 트집일 수도 있겠습니다만.... 2,3 간격이 좀 멀지 않나요?
[Hard]
00:34:55 (1) - 헐 나 트집잡는 사람이였나? (2)와의 스페이싱
01:06:54 (4) - 뉴콤보 하는게 더 좋지 않을까요?
[Insane]
죄송하지만......
많은 논란이 있을 것 같습니다.
점수가 1900만점 ㄷㄷㄷ
안 줄이면 곤란해요 진짜
그나저나 전체적으로 잘 만들었어요! >A<행운을 빕니다.
안니버씨의 간절한 모습이 #korean에서 보이더라구요 ㅇㅅㅇ
[Normal]
01:24:78 (1,2,3,4)-> 약간 트집일 수도 있겠습니다만.... 2,3 간격이 좀 멀지 않나요?
[Hard]
00:34:55 (1) - 헐 나 트집잡는 사람이였나? (2)와의 스페이싱
01:06:54 (4) - 뉴콤보 하는게 더 좋지 않을까요?
[Insane]
죄송하지만......
많은 논란이 있을 것 같습니다.
점수가 1900만점 ㄷㄷㄷ
안 줄이면 곤란해요 진짜
그나저나 전체적으로 잘 만들었어요! >A<행운을 빕니다.
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Download: soft-hitclap.rar
Download: soft-hitclap.rar
normal, hard, insane
nice map.
SPOILER
no visible faults.
no visible faults.
nice map.
Mod
[Insane]
02:46:510 (6) new combo
[Hard]
01:02:419 (10) new combo
01:20:788 (7) ^
01:34:784 (10) ^
03:33:244 (1) remove new combo
03:29:745 (1) ^
03:34:744 (1) ^
[Normal]
fine
[All]
I think the clap sound of S1 is not good for Easy ...
And please add some wistle in the soft part ~
It is good for it ~
Star ~
[Insane]
02:46:510 (6) new combo
[Hard]
01:02:419 (10) new combo
01:20:788 (7) ^
01:34:784 (10) ^
03:33:244 (1) remove new combo
03:29:745 (1) ^
03:34:744 (1) ^
[Normal]
fine
[All]
I think the clap sound of S1 is not good for Easy ...
And please add some wistle in the soft part ~
It is good for it ~
Star ~
Nyan.
I've given this map some consideration before bubbling, but after that I decided that the small fragments of minijumps weren't enough to killjoy. Enjoyable. Bubbled.
I've given this map some consideration before bubbling, but after that I decided that the small fragments of minijumps weren't enough to killjoy. Enjoyable. Bubbled.
버블(bubble)되었는데 업뎃하면 터진다고 PM 보낸걸로 아는데 ㅡㅡ; 업뎃(update) 하셨네
[Normal]
01:09:04 (4) - 3번과 간격이 조금 떨어졌네요.
[Hard]
Fine for me.
[Insane]
00:14:81 (4) - 시작 부분이 화면 밖으로 조금 나갑니다.
01:04:79 -
01:56:77 -
02:54:75 -
위 세 시작점부터 각각 코러스 부분으로 들어가는데요, 뉴 콤보 들어가는게 서로 다 달라요.
가급적이면 셋 일관성 있는 규칙성으로 뉴콤보 넣는거 추천합니다.
잘 만드시네요! 별~ ^^
01:09:04 (4) - 3번과 간격이 조금 떨어졌네요.
[Hard]
Fine for me.
[Insane]
00:14:81 (4) - 시작 부분이 화면 밖으로 조금 나갑니다.
01:04:79 -
01:56:77 -
02:54:75 -
위 세 시작점부터 각각 코러스 부분으로 들어가는데요, 뉴 콤보 들어가는게 서로 다 달라요.
가급적이면 셋 일관성 있는 규칙성으로 뉴콤보 넣는거 추천합니다.
잘 만드시네요! 별~ ^^
~star~
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
음악의 음질이 56kbps라 그런지 좀 안좋네요.....특히 심벌같이 고음의 경우는 때에 따라서 듣기가 거북할 수도 있겠네요..
그러기에 음악파일을 새로 보내드리겠습니다.
원래는 굉장히 깔끔한 음질이지만 현재 파일용량을 보니 이미 13.7메가나 차지하고 있네요.
그러기에 96kbps로 올려드립니다. 이정도면 1.6메가만 더 들어갑니다.
아 혹시 모르니까 새로운 파일로 바꾼 다음에 배경음과 노트가 일치하는지 확인해주세요.
(아니 이미 이 파일은 첫 부분이 약간 추가된 소리가 있어서 오프셋을 조절해야겠지만요..)
스타 드리겠습니다.
Download: Servant_of_Evil(Len)a.mp3
그러기에 음악파일을 새로 보내드리겠습니다.
원래는 굉장히 깔끔한 음질이지만 현재 파일용량을 보니 이미 13.7메가나 차지하고 있네요.
그러기에 96kbps로 올려드립니다. 이정도면 1.6메가만 더 들어갑니다.
아 혹시 모르니까 새로운 파일로 바꾼 다음에 배경음과 노트가 일치하는지 확인해주세요.
(아니 이미 이 파일은 첫 부분이 약간 추가된 소리가 있어서 오프셋을 조절해야겠지만요..)
스타 드리겠습니다.
Download: Servant_of_Evil(Len)a.mp3
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Normal
you don't need the SB warning on this diff, So you have to select the option (Diff. Specific) on the the design panel of the editor only in the difficulty you want the warning.
Hard
make the SB warning more visible plz.
02:33:34 (9) - move to the next blue tick
Insane
make the SB warning more visible plz.
Star!
you don't need the SB warning on this diff, So you have to select the option (Diff. Specific) on the the design panel of the editor only in the difficulty you want the warning.
Hard
make the SB warning more visible plz.
02:33:34 (9) - move to the next blue tick
Insane
make the SB warning more visible plz.
Star!
~Normal~
Fine.
~Hard~
01:08:84 (6) - new combo
01:16:59 (5) - ^
02:58:84 (8) - ^
~Insane~
01:25:84 (1) - remove new combo
01:26:84 (1) - ^
02:40:84 (7) - new combo
02:42:09 (1) - remove new combo
02:42:59 (3) - new combo
+Star
Fine.
~Hard~
01:08:84 (6) - new combo
01:16:59 (5) - ^
02:58:84 (8) - ^
~Insane~
01:25:84 (1) - remove new combo
01:26:84 (1) - ^
02:40:84 (7) - new combo
02:42:09 (1) - remove new combo
02:42:59 (3) - new combo
+Star
Geez, why is the novid version 19.6 MB? o_O (any way of getting that FLV out of the novid version?)
[All]
Preview points need to be set.
[Normal]
Looked fine.
[Hard]
01:22:84 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern seemed a bit random.
I thought that as the song was a bit long, this map could have used a few more breaks, but it's fine without them too.
[Insane]
15m is a bit high for max score, is this map hard enough for that?
01:18:84 (3,6) - Not sure if this slider covering is okay, since although it's barely revealed, I dunno if there's enough time.
02:26:84 (7) - New combo?
02:34:84 (4) - Move the new combo before this onto this note?
02:43:34 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Picky thing, 8,9,10,11 needs to be moved right one grid for the left inverted V to be symmetric.
03:37:59 (3,5) - Slightly misaligned.
Starred, very fun.
[All]
Preview points need to be set.
[Normal]
Looked fine.
[Hard]
01:22:84 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern seemed a bit random.
I thought that as the song was a bit long, this map could have used a few more breaks, but it's fine without them too.
[Insane]
15m is a bit high for max score, is this map hard enough for that?
01:18:84 (3,6) - Not sure if this slider covering is okay, since although it's barely revealed, I dunno if there's enough time.
02:26:84 (7) - New combo?
02:34:84 (4) - Move the new combo before this onto this note?
02:43:34 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Picky thing, 8,9,10,11 needs to be moved right one grid for the left inverted V to be symmetric.
03:37:59 (3,5) - Slightly misaligned.
Starred, very fun.
[Normal]
01:09:846 (7,1) Finish
02:09:096 (4,6) Whistles
[Hard]
00:42:846 New combo?
[Insane]
00:50:846 New combo?
omg @_@ almost a perfect map. Starred!
01:09:846 (7,1) Finish
02:09:096 (4,6) Whistles
[Hard]
00:42:846 New combo?
[Insane]
00:50:846 New combo?
omg @_@ almost a perfect map. Starred!
Normal
01:10:034 (1,2) - new combo on 2nd, remove new coimbo from 1st
Hard
[General] This mode is mapped very well, but try to add another little break time along the song... one isn't enough even for Insane mode...
Insane
01:20:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move these beats 1-2 squares right
02:55:084 (1,4) - clap here
... and that's all! Fine sound placing for a well-playable map... Bat members had better to watch this! ;3
01:10:034 (1,2) - new combo on 2nd, remove new coimbo from 1st
Hard
[General] This mode is mapped very well, but try to add another little break time along the song... one isn't enough even for Insane mode...
Insane
01:20:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move these beats 1-2 squares right
02:55:084 (1,4) - clap here
... and that's all! Fine sound placing for a well-playable map... Bat members had better to watch this! ;3
Add Source and Tags
[Normal]
01:14:059 (10) - Too far away from 1
[Hard]
01:56:084 (1) - The Warning should be a little sooner
02:13:072 (6) - Whistle here sounds odd
[Insane]
Raise Hitsound Volume a little in the beginning
[Normal]
01:14:059 (10) - Too far away from 1
[Hard]
01:56:084 (1) - The Warning should be a little sooner
02:13:072 (6) - Whistle here sounds odd
[Insane]
Raise Hitsound Volume a little in the beginning
[M0D]
[Insane]
The map is pretty booring because of the lack of hitsound =( try adding more whistles and finishes to make the map have much power.
01:37:022 (4) - recheck space
00:15:034 (5,6) - ^
01:33:022 (2) - add a clap @ the beginning of slider
01:37:022 (4) - ^
01:37:059 (5) - ^
01:34:034 (6) - clap?
01:36:009 (7) - add clap at the END of the slider I hope you do this hitsound pattern all through out the map
01:45:034 (4) - unpredictable hidden slider, 01:44:059 (1) - is covering the repeating arrow thing
combo color sucks >w<
[Hard]
Hitsound comment refer to [Insane]
no other probs found
[Normal]
Hitsound comment refer to [Insane]
REMOVE SB CODEs coz after finish playing the map it still goes on and um of course a skip button appears but it's better if it ends automatically. Make x2 sb Diff. Specific only in [Insane] and [Hard]
02:13:721 - end kiai section
star
[Insane]
The map is pretty booring because of the lack of hitsound =( try adding more whistles and finishes to make the map have much power.
01:37:022 (4) - recheck space
00:15:034 (5,6) - ^
01:33:022 (2) - add a clap @ the beginning of slider
01:37:022 (4) - ^
01:37:059 (5) - ^
01:34:034 (6) - clap?
01:36:009 (7) - add clap at the END of the slider I hope you do this hitsound pattern all through out the map
01:45:034 (4) - unpredictable hidden slider, 01:44:059 (1) - is covering the repeating arrow thing
combo color sucks >w<
[Hard]
Hitsound comment refer to [Insane]
no other probs found
[Normal]
Hitsound comment refer to [Insane]
REMOVE SB CODEs coz after finish playing the map it still goes on and um of course a skip button appears but it's better if it ends automatically. Make x2 sb Diff. Specific only in [Insane] and [Hard]
02:13:721 - end kiai section
star
seemed fine to me, no probs, good job, star
Mod Info's:
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
Why don't you change the "Custom Colours"? I suggest Pink & Yellow
[Normal]
It's ok
[Hard]
It's ok
[Insane]
It's ok
Starred~
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
Why don't you change the "Custom Colours"? I suggest Pink & Yellow
[Normal]
It's ok
[Hard]
It's ok
[Insane]
It's ok
Starred~
good
[Hard]
01:24:846 (7) - New combo
01:25:846 (1) - No new combo
Star for you!
01:24:846 (7) - New combo
01:25:846 (1) - No new combo
Star for you!
No problems found ^.^
star~
star~
hello
the source is not the same for every beatmap
Normal:
01:15:084 (2) - the endings of sliders are not perfect together
01:17:084 (6) - the part here is very low down on the screen. maybe you want to move it up a litte
01:26:084 (3) - this slider can be changed to 2 circles if you like
01:33:084 (3) - move the ending of this slider 1 down so it is nice on the other circles. it is also not perfect with the slider (1)
02:03:084 (3,4,5) - i think you can make this easier for the normal. but it is ok for me
end the first kiai time here 01:21:084 (8) -
hard:
01:22:059 (10) - i would remove this and use a sound on (9) circle
01:22:034 (9) - the kiai time should also end here
02:00:084 (7) - new combo
03:02:034 (7) - new combo
03:06:084 (4) - new combo
03:11:047 (8) - the kiai time should end here
03:36:084 (3) - new combo
03:48:084 (4) - new combo
03:56:084 (9) - new combo
04:00:084 (8) - new combo
(all this new combos are in the kiai time i think because you like to make it only half so long there. you can think if you want to change them or not, to make it the same with other combos in kiai time)
Insane:
00:42:084 (6) - new combo
01:10:034 (6) - new combo
01:10:084 (1) - remove combo
01:12:047 (4) - new combo
01:12:084 (1) - remove combo
01:58:059 (5) - new combo
02:02:034 (9) - new combo
02:02:084 (1) - remove combo
03:08:059 (5) - new combo
03:55:084 (5) - new combo
nice map star
the source is not the same for every beatmap
Normal:
01:15:084 (2) - the endings of sliders are not perfect together
01:17:084 (6) - the part here is very low down on the screen. maybe you want to move it up a litte
01:26:084 (3) - this slider can be changed to 2 circles if you like
01:33:084 (3) - move the ending of this slider 1 down so it is nice on the other circles. it is also not perfect with the slider (1)
02:03:084 (3,4,5) - i think you can make this easier for the normal. but it is ok for me
end the first kiai time here 01:21:084 (8) -
hard:
01:22:059 (10) - i would remove this and use a sound on (9) circle
01:22:034 (9) - the kiai time should also end here
02:00:084 (7) - new combo
03:02:034 (7) - new combo
03:06:084 (4) - new combo
03:11:047 (8) - the kiai time should end here
03:36:084 (3) - new combo
03:48:084 (4) - new combo
03:56:084 (9) - new combo
04:00:084 (8) - new combo
(all this new combos are in the kiai time i think because you like to make it only half so long there. you can think if you want to change them or not, to make it the same with other combos in kiai time)
Insane:
00:42:084 (6) - new combo
01:10:034 (6) - new combo
01:10:084 (1) - remove combo
01:12:047 (4) - new combo
01:12:084 (1) - remove combo
01:58:059 (5) - new combo
02:02:034 (9) - new combo
02:02:084 (1) - remove combo
03:08:059 (5) - new combo
03:55:084 (5) - new combo
nice map star
As your request in my queue. Anyway, I love this map~
[Normal]
Remove the X2 Speed in this diff since you don't use that. Or do you use that thing..?
[Hard]
01:22:034 (9) - Add clap.
02:06:084 (3) - Move this slider to the same place as (2).
02:13:047 (5) - Add clap.
02:13:072 (6) - Remove clap.
03:11:047 (8) - Remove clap at the end. Add finish at the end.
03:12:158 - IMO, the break is too long..
03:43:072 (1) - Silence the spinner will be better.
03:46:084 (2) - Add finish at the beginning of the slider.
[Insane]
Perfect.
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Yes, you may ignore them all ^^
And *star~
[Normal]
Remove the X2 Speed in this diff since you don't use that. Or do you use that thing..?
[Hard]
01:22:034 (9) - Add clap.
02:06:084 (3) - Move this slider to the same place as (2).
02:13:047 (5) - Add clap.
02:13:072 (6) - Remove clap.
03:11:047 (8) - Remove clap at the end. Add finish at the end.
03:12:158 - IMO, the break is too long..
03:43:072 (1) - Silence the spinner will be better.
03:46:084 (2) - Add finish at the beginning of the slider.
[Insane]
Perfect.
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Yes, you may ignore them all ^^
And *star~
Hello.
- Hard
01:04:846 ~ Unnecessary x2 SB; remove.
- Normal
Again, unnecessary x2 SB; remove.
Have a star.
- Hard
01:04:846 ~ Unnecessary x2 SB; remove.
- Normal
Again, unnecessary x2 SB; remove.
Have a star.