merchat
merchat7 wrote:
holysoup! 1/3 beatmap, this'll be interesting.
hihi! merchat!
[Normal]
- Od seems rather low compare to Hard, I would increase it a bit. fixed
00:31:222 (1) -The end can be a bit better stack with 2, sorry for nazi fixed
00:35:757 (2) -Hmm, it's fine if you like it, but I prefer if this was align with (1) and (3) on x-axis (place at x:512). I find your beatmap looks really clean, but this look a bit messy for me. fixed
00:37:501 (4) -Hmm I think there should be a new combo here fixed
00:49:362 (2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/3wazu.jpg Maybe this? I feel it would look a bit better if it was a bit more align with y-axis, but you'll need to adjust next notes. fixed
00:58:431 (2) -Hmm I like the sound of whistle on this repeat. fixed
01:01:222 (5) - and 01:05:408 (4) -Try a wave slider maybe? I think it goes with the feel of vocal. Here's some code fixed
01:05:408 (4) -I prefer no whistle at end like 01:01:222 (5)
01:06:106 - Perhaps this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/3wb5P.jpg. I'm not fond of the slider on 01:08:199 since the drum sound is 1/3 earlier so it felt off.
01:10:292 (1) -Prefer low volume finish here fixed
01:21:455 (1) -Wave slider here? I think it goes nice with pattern as 01:20:059 (3) -is a wave slider too. fixed
01:24:245 (1) -Hmm prefer finish here (with timing point to reduce volume?), but fine if not. Same for Hard and Insane. fixed
01:28:431 (1) - ^ maybe here too? (At begin) fixed
01:34:013 (3) -^ repeat think i'll leave this one
01:38:548 (5) -^ begin+repeat? maybe too much?
01:25:641 (3,4,1) -Hmm, I like the flow more if you rotate this by about 10 degree anti-clockwise and put in same spot. haha ok fixed
01:39:594 (1) -Hmm seems like it should be clap at begin here fixed
01:45:873 (3) -I think finish sound nice at end here fixed
02:00:176 (3) -Maybe clap here fixed
02:00:525 (1) -Then maybe finish at begin and repeat here? Finish also at begin and repeat on 02:01:920 (2) -also sound quite nice, but it isn't back up by music. mm~ let me think about thisWow awesome, I can't find anything ><Nevermind, I activate super-nazi mode. But it's really good, you don't have to follow anything, the new combo I think is the only real error here and stacking. If you change a hitsound, be sure to adjust for all diff though.
thanks so much! I fixed most things
[Hard]
00:24:245 (3) -Curve a bit? fixed
00:50:757 - I prefer just a repeating slider + hit circle here
00:57:734 -Hmm, I think this is a good place to do 1/3 I left this one because I like to alternate between the 1/3 rhythm and 1/2 rhythm : )
01:01:920 (1,2,3) -The vocal feel pretty emphasized here so a repeating slider + hit circle seems better I think rather than following drums. Maybe something like this http://puu.sh/3wbFJ.jpg (1) is stacked with 01:01:222 (3) - (2) is stacked with 01:04:362 (1) I didn't change this one because right before this there was the 1/2 jump rhythm so I think with the 1/3 rhythm here plays better.
01:06:455 (4) -Hmm I think same shape as (3) looks better here Perhaps whistle at end here of this slider. fixed
01:11:338 (4,5) -Change the slider to hit circle, then move repeating slider to 01:11:687, afterward 1/3 slider on 01:12:501. The sound at 01:11:687 is really emphasized so it felt a bit weird not to play anything on there
01:20:059 (4,5,6,7) -1.8x spaced 1/3 sliders feel better then hit circle here I think. Since there is quite a considerable amount of emphasis on the 1/3 ticks here.
01:44:129 (1,2) -Hmm the feel here kind of feel like this to me nice! fixed!
I think patterns like 02:01:571 (3,4,5,6) -flows really well. I feel you should do 1.8x spaced 1/3 sliders pattern more. Actually on second thought, I think you should space most if not all 1/3s with 1.8x. Feel much better to me, but if you prefer more opinions, that is fine plus no overlap :3 Just the 1/3 spacing to consider here, I don't see any other problems.
yea I was debating about the spacing as well. I'm thinking of just removing the 0.75x section in the verses but.. hm.. gotta think more about this so I left it for now. But I do think that increasing spacing is better... but then i'm also concerned it'll be too similar to insane spacing cause of the difficulty scaling.
[Insane]
00:28:431 (1) -Hmm I feel like a stack here would've work better. Try stacking this slider with (8) and stack the end of 00:29:129 (2) - with begin of 00:30:176 (5) - Feel pretty nice
00:33:663 (7) -Ctrl + J and stack with 00:33:663 (7) -? The jump is pretty fitting
01:06:455 (5) -I like the feel when this is ctrl+g
Hmm a bit unsure how to mod 1/3 Insane, but I try increasing the spacing of the 1/3 rhythm like I did in Hard and it felt better. I think the perfect spacing is 2.0 for the 1.0x part and 2.6+ or jump patterns for 0.75x slider velocity part.I think if you do this, the diff would be perfect.I try 2.0x spacing for the 1/3s from 00:22:850 - 00:43:083 - and it felt much better already. I really hope you consider this. Note: For the hit circle, I just space them out as 1.6x, a big jump can make people confuse whether it is 1/2 or 1/3.
I think for the insane with 2.0x spacing is a little far. this song is relatively slow and relaxing (even though I tapped bpm at pretty high number) so I didn't really set the spacing that far for the insane. I feel like this is ideal spacing for this cute song. but of course i'm keeping what you said in mind, and I'd like to see what others have to say too.
First of awesome hitsounding! But I agree with Kiiwa, I think some more finish is needed at some place. The only other thing I would like to see change is to increase spacing of the 1/3s in Hard & Insane. But if you don't agree, that's fine too.
yea I added more finished in all the difficulties
Not a bad song, and i see nothing wrong (all suggestions except some errors in Normal), two stars
wow 2 stars thanks!!
Good luck, i might come back later incase I made some sort of inconsistency mistake with my hitsound suggestions.
thanks so much omg for detailed mod
you do like the best mod I dont' even understand how.
you and kosiga are the best modders in this community.
Most thoughtful and detailed modding at all times
please post again so I can kd you once more!
how are you not BAT?
Satellite
Satellite wrote:
- OD+1 yup fixed
- 00:37:501 (4) - Nc? fixed
- 00:31:222 (1) - ugly slider? try this. fixed
- 01:14:478 (3) - add clap for 01:14:827 - here. fixed
- 01:52:850 (3) - Nc? fixed
- 01:14:478 (3) - same normal fixed
- 01:34:711 (5) - end point forget finish. check normal diff. fixed
really nice map sp+1~ good luck
- check AIMOD
fixed
other good
thanks so much for mod + star!! : )
Alarido
Thanks so much for modding and star!!Alarido wrote:
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party QueueLegenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods* No General issues to point.haha i fixed this, it was a misplacement thanks!
♥ Ah, so sweet song ♥ and melodious (: I noitced later it's an 1/3 meter song (waltz). Really I appreciate natural waltz (* . .|* . .|* . .) and find it majestic *.* (It maybe the reason why most of church hymns are 1/3 meter songs)
* And no complaints for [Normal] and [Insane]
[Hard]
♥ 00:54:943 (1,2,3) - Interesting pattern here (:
That's it.
Take a Star !!!
and LET'S RANK THIS ^^
Att.
DEAncientNaga
DEAncientNaga wrote:
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[General]
Nice.
02:03:548 - Consider adding a spinner until 02:08:897 - or shorter mm ok i'll think about htis
[Normal]
01:22:850 (3) - Looks not nice when next note not arranged to the tail of slider, make it like 01:24:245 (1,2) i moved things around a bit
[Hard]
00:54:943 (1,2,3) - looks not nice, try to invert (3) and make (4) at the tail of (3) fixed this pattern up
[Insane]
02:02:618 - Replace this one to stream with 4 hits mm maybe not
Hmm close to rank
Good luck!
thanks for modding!