holysoup! 1/3 beatmap, this'll be interesting.
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General]
Nothing
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Normal]
- Od seems rather low compare to Hard, I would increase it a bit.
00:31:222 (1) -The end can be a bit better stack with 2, sorry for nazi
00:35:757 (2) -Hmm, it's fine if you like it, but I prefer if this was align with (1) and (3) on x-axis (place at x:512). I find your beatmap looks really clean, but this look a bit messy for me.
00:37:501 (4) -Hmm I think there should be a new combo here
00:49:362 (2,3,1) -
http://puu.sh/3wazu.jpg Maybe this? I feel it would look a bit better if it was a bit more align with y-axis, but you'll need to adjust next notes.
128,304,49362,2,0,P|115:247|133:208,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,169,50059,2,0,P|215:217|198:259,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,344,50757,6,0,P|300:372|388:336,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:58:431 (2) -Hmm I like the sound of whistle on this repeat.
01:01:222 (5) - and 01:05:408 (4) -Try a wave slider maybe? I think it goes with the feel of vocal. Here's some code
428,164,61222,2,0,B|389:143|432:100|389:78,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,256,65408,2,0,B|305:226|359:197|323:164,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:05:408 (4) -I prefer no whistle at end like 01:01:222 (5) -
01:06:106 - Perhaps this rhythm instead
http://puu.sh/3wb5P.jpg. I'm not fond of the slider on 01:08:199 since the drum sound is 1/3 earlier so it felt off.
01:10:292 (1) -Prefer low volume finish here
01:21:455 (1) -Wave slider here? I think it goes nice with pattern as 01:20:059 (3) -is a wave slider too.
01:24:245 (1) -Hmm prefer finish here (with timing point to reduce volume?), but fine if not. Same for Hard and Insane.
01:28:431 (1) - ^ maybe here too? (At begin)
01:34:013 (3) -^ repeat
01:38:548 (5) -^ begin+repeat?
01:25:641 (3,4,1) -Hmm, I like the flow more if you rotate this by about 10 degree anti-clockwise and put in same spot.
01:39:594 (1) -Hmm seems like it should be clap at begin here
01:45:873 (3) -I think finish sound nice at end here
01:57:734 (1) -Same as 01:24:245
02:00:176 (3) -Maybe clap here
02:00:525 (1) -Then maybe finish at begin and repeat here? Finish also at begin and repeat on 02:01:920 (2) -also sound quite nice, but it isn't back up by music.
Wow awesome, I can't find anything >< Nevermind, I activate super-nazi mode. But it's really good, you don't have to follow anything, the new combo I think is the only real error here and stacking. If you change a hitsound, be sure to adjust for all diff though.
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Hard]
00:24:245 (3) -Curve a bit?
http://puu.sh/3wbeG.jpg00:50:757 - I prefer just a repeating slider + hit circle here
http://puu.sh/3wbrV.jpg00:57:734 -Hmm, I think this is a good place to do 1/3
http://puu.sh/3wbxK.jpg01:01:920 (1,2,3) -The vocal feel pretty emphasized here so a repeating slider + hit circle seems better I think rather than following drums. Maybe something like this
http://puu.sh/3wbFJ.jpg (1) is stacked with 01:01:222 (3) - (2) is stacked with 01:04:362 (1) -
01:06:455 (4) -Hmm I think same shape as (3) looks better here Perhaps whistle at end here of this slider.
01:11:338 (4,5) -Change the slider to hit circle, then move repeating slider to 01:11:687, afterward 1/3 slider on 01:12:501. The sound at 01:11:687 is really emphasized so it felt a bit weird not to play anything on there
01:20:059 (4,5,6,7) -1.8x spaced 1/3 sliders feel better then hit circle here I think. Since there is quite a considerable amount of emphasis on the 1/3 ticks here.
01:44:129 (1,2) -Hmm the feel here kind of feel like this to me
http://puu.sh/3wbmm.jpgI think patterns like 02:01:571 (3,4,5,6) -flows really well. I feel you should do 1.8x spaced 1/3 sliders pattern more. Actually on second thought, I think you should space most if not all 1/3s with 1.8x. Feel much better to me, but if you prefer more opinions, that is fine plus no overlap :3 Just the 1/3 spacing to consider here, I don't see any other problems.
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Insane]
00:28:431 (1) -Hmm I feel like a stack here would've work better. Try stacking this slider with (8) and stack the end of 00:29:129 (2) - with begin of 00:30:176 (5) - Feel pretty nice
00:33:663 (7) -Ctrl + J and stack with 00:33:663 (7) -? The jump is pretty fitting
01:06:455 (5) -I like the feel when this is ctrl+g
Hmm a bit unsure how to mod 1/3 Insane, but I try increasing the spacing of the 1/3 rhythm like I did in Hard and it felt better. I think the perfect spacing is 2.0 for the 1.0x part and 2.6+ or jump patterns for 0.75x slider velocity part.
I think if you do this, the diff would be perfect. I try 2.0x spacing for the 1/3s from 00:22:850 - 00:43:083 - and it felt much better already. I really hope you consider this. Note: For the hit circle, I just space them out as 1.6x, a big jump can make people confuse whether it is 1/2 or 1/3.
First of awesome hitsounding! But I agree with Kiiwa, I think some more finish is needed at some place. The only other thing I would like to see change is to increase spacing of the 1/3s in Hard & Insane. But if you don't agree, that's fine too.
Not a bad song, and i see nothing wrong (all suggestions except some errors in Normal), two stars
Good luck, i might come back later incase I made some sort of inconsistency mistake with my hitsound suggestions.