Applied everything for my diffs. Also I'm looking for better mp3, atm
Thank you!Onisakura wrote:
Sup :3
mod from pm ingame
[General]
Found better clap.wav for this map....but i think it's need cuting(lolwut?) (cut or whatever :3 it's big..like 1.5 or 2 sec) sure :3/
[Easy]
just only one thing
02:08:413 (4) - seems to be better if change it on short slider with reverse for vocal, cuz it's end of beatmap and this part should looks more distinguish, or something like that :3 then it'll be the only short slider here, which looks kinda awkward, don't you think so?
[Hard]
00:48:964 (3,4,5,6) - turn this for wave...like this not sure, i want to keep it compressed :<
So you will have after this: badass pattern 00:48:137 (1,2,3) and little sweet stream 00:48:964 (3,4,5,6)
01:08:620 (2,3) - jump...hmmmm...maybe it looks batter without this...donno...it's just extreamly far, imo let's listen to other people, if they will agree - I'll change ;_;
01:13:585 (2,3) - jump through slider 01:12:964 (1) - not a good idea, because this two objects have the same combo colour sure!
(in first test mod it was like..."WTF it was that right now? Where?) really? :3)
Well that's all what i found :3
Good luck ^_^
I don't really like that "ahhh~" because thi s is not an anime song, so lyrics here look strange. AS foor pictures, they look quite strange. Random forest or something. ~.~ I guess we don't need that kind of SB, sorry. ;_; Simply adding moving clouds would be much better, I'll try to do it soon. '_'ThoomyyxD wrote:
Thanks for mods! (:
http://puu.sh/3qCQg.osu
:3
EDIT: SB!
OSB + SB
I hope you like it..
moe moe moe
-bakari-best xd
Thank you for looking at, I appreciate it!Inyuschan wrote:
-Okay, don't punch me or whatever, it's only suggestions D:-
[Hard]
00:23:930 - I miss one note here o3o yes!
00:44:206 - Same nooo, it will be overmapping here :<
01:08:826 - Maybe reverse selection and move a bit to note 4? selection? what selection?
Normal and Easy I think are good o3o cool o3o/
Won't you do Insane diff? nah, I don't feel like doing it
I mean slider 3 :3-Bakari- wrote:
Thank you for looking at, I appreciate it!Inyuschan wrote:
-Okay, don't punch me or whatever, it's only suggestions D:-
[Hard]
00:23:930 - I miss one note here o3o yes!
00:44:206 - Same nooo, it will be overmapping here :<
01:08:826 - Maybe reverse selection and move a bit to note 4? selection? what selection?
Normal and Easy I think are good o3o cool o3o/
Won't you do Insane diff? nah, I don't feel like doing it
Thanks a lot!Dizco wrote:
Hi, i saw this in #modreqs, so im gonna leave some comments.
Overall the mapset feels pretty complete and almost ready for rank so im just gonna be making small suggestion mostly.
[General/All diffs]
Intro is pretty long, countdown at half speed would fit nicely imo. No, I don't think that countdown fits here. It sounds kinda weird
Letterbox in break looks weird with SB as its supposed to look like its part of the bg image, suggest to remove letterbox, i had to go manually change in the .osu file for some reason because the option was disabled. nice catch!
Can barely hear hitsounds most places, suggest to increase overall volume by about 10% except in kiai. Well, everything sounds hearable for me. So, I'm keeping it the way it is for now.
Like someone already mentioned slidertick and sliderslide cant be both mute, i think you should unmute slidertick and use tickrate 2 it fits the song very good imo. aaand isn't it already fixed? Probably I didn't update it properly
Generally speaking on hitsounds i think that the drum sampleset sound good with whistle on 2 and 4. Normal sampleset sound good with clap on 1 and 3 if you plan on using this clapsound. It looks like you were thinking along the same lines already, except for the normal clap, i'm going to point out where you missed them instead but i suggest to do the opposite. Theres a few so maybe i made some mistakes. Well, I'm rehitsounding it now.
First note sounds good with a normal finish, maybe add another inherit section at 00:16:801 - or just change sample manually on the first note. Yea.
I dont understand why you use the normal sampleset so much more than the drum one, it would fit nicely in other places of the map too.I'll see what can I do to make it sound better
[Easy]
00:17:422 (2) - make same shape as 1? or vice versa sure
00:18:663 (4,1,2) - Maybe something nicer can be made here, possibly this(slider staircase with consistent angle change making a curve flow): ~
00:25:284 (4) - dont understand this curve or angle, maybe just make it flow directly into next combo?it looks better if I keep it this way. What's more 00:26:939 (2,3,4) - has absolutely the same flow and it looks/flows really food, imo!
00:37:698 (3,4,5) - making this tidier wont affect flow i think try like this: but I can't see anything wrong with current one, it looks really neat to me D: so, I don't feel like changing them, sorry
00:38:112 (4) - Move node #1 to {x:436 y:132}, move node #2 to {x:455 y:91}, move node #3 to {x:452 y:47}.
00:38:939 (5) - Move node #2 to {x:315 y:74}, move node #3 to {x:278 y:97}.
00:39:767 (1) - Move to {x:249 y:192}.
01:06:250 (1,1,2) - This can look a bit nicer maybe about like this: well, the same as above. sorry.
01:06:250 (1) - Move node #2 to {x:440 y:239}, move node #3 to {x:437 y:143}, add node #4 at {x:355 y:70}.
01:09:560 (1) - Move node #1 to {x:324 y:237}, move node #2 to {x:329 y:192}, move node #3 to {x:307 y:152}.
01:28:595 (4,5,1) - why not arrange this a bit neater too: that blanket kinda ruins my flow and I really want to avoid using it!
I think i modded this the other way around regarding normal sampleset because this diff wasnt hitsounded at all pretty much when i started. i only did one sections because you can probaby figure out yourself how to do the rest. I've rehitsounded it. Sounds much better now
00:16:595 (1) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:17:422 (2) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:21:560 (3) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:23:629 (2) - Add a whistle on the start, add a whistle on the end.
00:25:284 (4) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:26:939 (2) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:29:422 (5) - Add a whistle.
00:31:905 (2) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:33:146 (1) - Add a clap.
00:34:801 (3) - Add a clap.
00:35:215 (4) - Add a clap on repeat #1 (at 00:35:628).
00:36:457 (1) - Add a clap.
00:36:870 (2) - Add a clap on the end.
00:38:112 (4) - Add a clap on the start, remove the clap on the end.
00:38:939 (5) - Add a clap on the start.
00:39:767 (1) - Add a clap.
00:40:181 (2) - Remove the clap on the end.
00:41:422 (3) - Add a clap.
00:41:836 (4) - Remove the clap on the start, remove the clap on the end.
00:43:077 (1) - Add a clap.
00:43:491 (2) - Remove the clap on the start, add a clap on repeat #1 (at 00:43:904), remove the clap on the end.
00:44:732 (3) - Add a clap.
00:45:560 (5) - Add a clap on the start.
00:46:388 (1) - Add a clap.
00:49:698 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
01:39:353 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
01:54:663 (4) - Add a clap on the end.
01:55:905 (1) - Add a clap.
01:59:215 (1) - Add a clap on the end.
[Normal]
I've fixed [General] things, but rest is up to GD-mapper.
[Hard]
Well polished diff mostly.
00:23:215 (1) - this spacing change was very unexpected and doesnt fit i think, the sound here flows the same from 00:23:008 (9) - all the way into next slider it would make more sense to add spacing to 9 instead since its slightly diffrent sound, and maybe add spacing to 8 too. nice catch!
00:33:146 (1) - this is a very powerful sound, a jump would fit nicely I'm not sure, because I'm against using 1/1 jumps
00:49:698 (1) - here too. ~
01:19:491 (1) - and here. I don't think it's really needed here, what's more it will ruin flow and symmetrical pattern :<
01:26:112 (1) - and maybe here, but not as much as the others perhaps. \same as above. sorry :<
01:49:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this could also have more spacing reflecting the change in sound. well, I think this reflects music good enough. Anyway, if anyone will give me better idea = I'll change
01:54:457 (1) - orz nonsense spinner, remove please and map something else. Something like this maybe: yes!
If you feel you need a spinner replacing one of the breaks with one would make much more sense.
01:55:905 (1) - and if you do that, which i REALLY hope you do, you could make this note a jump. ~
00:47:215 (8) - also strange spacing, there is no change in the music here ~
01:08:732 (3) - ctrl-g please. god, i have no choice :<
01:15:353 (3) - ctrl-g jump makes no sense here. ~
01:28:595 (3) - why spacing? i dont understand. ctrl-h-g and snap please ~
00:16:595 (1) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:23:629 (3) - Add a whistle.
00:37:284 (2) - Move node #3 to {x:256 y:194}, move node #4 to {x:242 y:116}. maaaaaybe better, but its good as it is so you can just leave it. Changed a bt
00:39:767 (5) - Remove the clap on the end,maybe can remove the ugly angle made by red node like this, but its fine as is: move node #2 to {x:437 y:351}, move node #3 to {x:387 y:337}, move node #4 to {x:364 y:310}, move node #5 to {x:351 y:295}, move node #6 to {x:351 y:295}, move node #7 to {x:340 y:282}, move node #8 to {x:324 y:235}, add node #9 at {x:267 y:223}, add node #10 at {x:208 y:252}. Yeeeeaaa, I've made it prettier :3
00:45:146 (2) - Add a clap on the start.
00:49:284 (4) - Add a clap.
00:49:491 (5) - Add a clap.
I tried to make these work without red nodes making an ugly angle, not sure how good it turned out. But you can try like this i guess if it bothers you or just leave it as is: changed them in another way, looks good
00:53:836 (3) - Move node #1 to {x:56 y:62}, move node #2 to {x:76 y:52}, move node #3 to {x:101 y:50}, move node #4 to {x:127 y:64}, move node #5 to {x:134 y:70}, move node #6 to {x:137 y:77}, move node #7 to {x:151 y:103}, move node #8 to {x:208 y:99}.
01:21:767 (4) - Move to {x:340 y:138}.
01:21:974 (5) - Move node #2 to {x:334 y:35}, move node #3 to {x:296 y:54}, move node #4 to {x:281 y:71}, move node #5 to {x:275 y:80}, move node #6 to {x:268 y:93}, add node #7 at {x:247 y:120}, add node #8 at {x:210 y:124}.
01:54:250 (1) - Remove the whistle. yes and yes to all suggestions below.
01:56:732 (4) - Add a clap on the end.
01:57:560 (6) - Add a clap on the end.
02:00:870 (6) - Add a clap on repeat #1 (at 02:01:283).
02:06:250 (2) - Add a clap.
Good luck.
Dizco wrote:
[Normal]
00:29:215 (6) - syncopation felt weird also this sliders start and end follow diffrent sounds, try like this(use scale by if you want to keep the shape):
fixed
01:40:595 (3) - this note felt strange, not sure why exactly, maybe because it wasnt immediately obvious if supposed to follow drum or guitar. Maybe add more notes here, like this? Or make the whole thing 1 big slider:
Nope.
01:54:250 (3) - same here, maybe add repeat on 2 instead Nope
01:58:181 - felt like there should be a circle here. Noupe
01:01:284 (1) - why red node? Becase i want xD, I like so
You can not bother with my sliderfix mods if you dont care.
00:19:077 (5) - Add a whistle on the end. yeahyeahyeahyeahyehayea
00:31:491 (1) - Add a whistle and remove the finish. ^
00:37:284 (2) - Move node #3 to {x:403 y:156}. small suggestion looks better i think ^
00:39:767 (1) - Remove the clap on the end. ^
00:41:008 (2) - Add a clap on the end. ^
00:42:250 (1) - Add a clap on the end. yeah
00:54:663 (3) - Move node #2 to {x:148 y:281}, move node #3 to {x:216 y:264}. Just a little prettyfying
00:57:560 (2) - Add a clap on the end.
01:01:284 (1) - Remove the clap on the start, remove the clap on the end.
01:06:250 (1) - Move node #2 to {x:278 y:193}, move node #3 to {x:263 y:246}.
01:09:560 (1) - Move node #2 to {x:105 y:251}, move node #3 to {x:152 y:284}.
01:29:422 (5) - Move node #1 to {x:158 y:201}, move node #2 to {x:114 y:241}, move node #3 to {x:54 y:241}.
01:39:353 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
01:41:008 (4) - Move node #2 to {x:180 y:242}.
01:41:836 (5) - Move node #2 to {x:160 y:88}, move node #3 to {x:179 y:38}.
01:42:663 (1) - Move node #2 to {x:316 y:109}, move node #3 to {x:369 y:91}.
01:47:629 (3) - Move node #2 to {x:95 y:130}, move node #3 to {x:59 y:174}. nope
Good luck.
Konei wrote:
Ohai, from my Queue.
[xD's Normal]That's pretty much it!
- 00:19:077 (5) - Looks rather unclean, please either try to stack it with 3's end, which would be good, or replace it somewhere else. Noupe
- 00:22:388 (5) - Stack this perfectly. yeah
- 00:31:077 (3) - I see no point in leting this touch the upper Slider, it looks untidy and irretating, so just move it on the other side or down, it'd be fine either way. yeah
- 00:44:319 (3) - Move this a bit down to fix the inconsistent spacing. ^
- 00:57:560 (2) - Move this directly to 1's ending, it will improve slow and make the pattern neater. ^
- 01:15:767 (4) - Better to place it the same way as 2, this would look much better and less untidy. sure
- 01:22:388 (4) - Flows pretty bad since it's so far away from 3's ending and yea, just try to move it closer to it's ending. noupe
- 01:24:457 (3) - Looks untidy again, just move it so it's start won't touch 2 anymore. se
- 01:47:629 (3) - Blanket with 2 can be improved a lot, really! I like this, I see it well
- 01:50:112 (2) - Should be better blanketing 1. ^
- 02:05:836 (1) - Would be cool if you could lower volume for this part like Bakari did.
Easy and Hard are awesome, but in my opinion thoomy's diff could be more tidy and flow can be improved a lot. I do mourn
Take my star and good luck!
Thank you!Nemis wrote:
More IM!• SuggestionGood luck -Bakari- <3
• High suggestion/must fix
[General]
• Add "Korn" in the tags, it's the group where Jonathan Davis belongs KOЯN
• I'd add some flash/thunders in the SB during the KIAI yes!
• At the end of the map the clouds in the SB are cutted, you should fix them: it's invisible during gameplay. confirmed twice!
[Hard]
• 00:25:698 (8,9,1) - Improve this triangle a little bit (just move 00:26:526 (1) - this slider 1 tiny grid up):
• 00:26:939 (2) - Flip this slider vertically, it's so repetitive 00:26:526 (1,2,3) - here...
• 00:48:457 (2) - I'd suggest to remove this whistle, I prefer just a clap here
• 00:50:319 (3) - Add a note here, it follows the vocal I'd prefer to ignore this part. It doesn't sounds like something that should be mapped :<
• 00:53:836 (3,4,5) - Improve this triangle a little bit:
• 00:54:663 (5,6,7) - Same as above, If you fix them they will be really better to see
• 00:57:560 (5) - Reverse this slider (CTRL+G) even if you make a jump 00:57:560 (5,6) - here, it follows a lot
• 01:01:698 (7,8) - Improve this blanket a little bit
• 01:02:112 (8,9,10,1) - Increase the spacing here, it would be fun to play in this part
• 01:09:560 (1,3) - Stack these two sliders manually, if you play the map you'll see them perfectly overlapped:
• 01:12:870 (1) - Enlarge its curve a little bit keeping the blanket and then try to stack 01:13:491 (2) - this note under 01:12:457 (4) - this slider's end:
• 01:26:939 (3) - Try to end its end on 01:27:767 (1) - this slider:
• 01:32:732 (5) - Here changes the music, add a new combo as you did 01:02:939 (1) - here
• 01:41:836 (7,1) - Stack these two elements manually for a better readability
• 01:42:663 (1,3) - Same as above, it would help the players reading the sliders
• 01:45:560 (8,1) - Improve this blanket a little bit
• 01:49:077 (1) - Add a finish on its head, it fits the music here
• 01:54:250 (1) - This new combo is unneeded, remove it
• 01:55:905 (1) - Move this note at x:128 y:272 to improve 01:55:077 (3,4,1) - this triangle
• 01:58:388 (8,9,1) - Improve this triangle a little bit:
• 01:59:629 (2,5) - Fix this stack even if it's not so perceptible while playing
[Easy]
• 00:37:698 (3,4,5) - Make a triangle with these three elements and then improve the blanket:
• 00:45:560 (5,1) - Move these two elements at x:264 y:212 to overlap 00:45:560 (5) - this slider's head on 00:43:077 (1) - this note. Then fix the spacing 00:45:146 (4,5) - here
• 01:32:732 (5) - I'd suggest to add a new combo here I don't think it's needed. IT may confuse some beginners, so let's keep it as is
• 01:54:663 (4,1,2) - Improve this triangle a little bit
http://puu.sh/3OU2k.osuNemis wrote:
More IM!• Suggestion[/color]
• High suggestion/must fix
[xD's Normal]
• 00:16:595 (1,2,3) - Try to fix this curve a little bit:
• 00:22:388 (5) - Here is missing a whistle on its end
• 00:28:181 (4,5) - Improve this curve a little bit:
• 00:29:422 (6) - Here is missing a whistle
00:31:491 (1) - Add a new combo on this spinner, it's needed
• 00:42:250 (1) - Remove this new combo and then add a new one 00:43:077 (2) - on this slider
• 00:49:698 (1) - Add a finish on its head as you did 00:33:146 (1) - here
• 00:51:353 (3,4) - Add a note beetween these two elements, it would fit the music, at this moment this space is a bit strange
• 00:59:629 (5) - Add a new combo here and then remove 01:01:284 (1) - this one. I'd suggest to add a new one 01:02:939 (3) - on this slider too
• 01:06:250 (1,2) - Improve this blanket a little bit:
• 01:06:250 (1) - Add a finish on its head since here starts the KIAI
• 01:17:422 (2) - Move this note 1 grid to left to improve 01:16:181 (1,2) - this blanket
• 01:19:491 (1) - Add a finish on its head
• 01:22:388 (4) - Try to stack this note on 01:23:629 (2) - this slider's end better
• 01:22:801 (1,3) - Don't overlap these two sliders, try to make a triangle with them moving 01:24:457 (3) - this slider at x:344 y:240 and then 01:23:629 (2,3) - fix this blanket. You should obtain something like this:
• 01:39:353 (1) - Add a finish on its head
• 01:29:008 (4) - Try to stack this note on 01:30:250 (6) - this slider's end better
• 01:29:422 (5,6,1) - Make a triangle with these three elements, it would be cool to see:
• 01:41:836 (5,1) - Improve this blanket a little bit
• 01:45:146 (4) - I'd suggest to stack its head under 01:42:663 (1) - this slider's reverse
• 01:46:801 (2,3) - Fix this blanket a little bit
• 01:50:112 (2) - Change this slider with 01:49:284 (1) - this one rotated by 180° to improve 01:49:284 (1,2) - this blanket:
• 01:51:767 (5) - Change this slider with 01:49:284 (1) - this one, it would be better to esthetically
• 02:05:836 (1) - from here until the end, don't use D:C1, N:C1 is fine and fits the music better. I don't see why you should use drums here
• 02:09:560 (7) - Remove this note and the greenline, then add a finish 02:09:146 (6) - here
[Easy]
• 00:37:698 (3,4,5) - Make a triangle with these three elements and then improve the blanket:
• 00:45:560 (5,1) - Move these two elements at x:264 y:212 to overlap 00:45:560 (5) - this slider's head on 00:43:077 (1) - this note. Then fix the spacing 00:45:146 (4,5) - here
• 01:32:732 (5) - I'd suggest to add a new combo here
• 01:54:663 (4,1,2) - Improve this triangle a little bit
Good luck -Bakari- <3