1. Easy (1,63 stars, 128 notes)
2. Hard (3,03 stars, 281 notes)
3. xD's Normal (1,77 stars, 162 notes)

inverness wrote:

Infested Mushroom <3
c*

1. The Mp3 ends in a terrible way, add some fade out to it or something.

1. 01:03:033 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
2. 01:32:826 (1) - Same as above.
3. 02:09:240 (1) - ^

1. 00:52:275 - It feels like you're missing a circle here.
2. 02:08:413 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.

1. A lot of notes are wrongly snapped, check all the difficulty carefully.

1. 01:00:551 (3,4) - This jump feels random and confusing, I'd space it normally instead.
2. 01:03:033 (1) - Same as Easy.
3. 01:22:895 (1,2,3) - Spacing is not consistent here, check it out.
4. 01:24:551 (1,2,3) - Same as above.
5. 01:32:826 (1) - Same as Easy.
6. 01:54:102 (5,1) - I dislike this sudden spacing change, even if there's a new combo here.
7. 02:04:895 (6) - Add a new combo here due to the jumpy pattern.
8. 02:08:413 (8) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
9. 02:09:240 (1) - Remove this new combo afterwards since it won't be necessary.

Onisakura wrote:

Sup :3

mod from pm ingame

[General]

Found better clap.wav for this map....but i think it's need cuting(lolwut?) (cut or whatever :3 it's big..like 1.5 or 2 sec) sure :3/


[Easy]

just only one thing

02:08:413 (4) - seems to be better if change it on short slider with reverse for vocal, cuz it's end of beatmap and this part should looks more distinguish, or something like that :3 then it'll be the only short slider here, which looks kinda awkward, don't you think so?

[Hard]

00:48:964 (3,4,5,6) - turn this for wave...like this not sure, i want to keep it compressed :<

Example

So you will have after this: badass pattern 00:48:137 (1,2,3) and little sweet stream 00:48:964 (3,4,5,6)

01:08:620 (2,3) - jump...hmmmm...maybe it looks batter without this...donno...it's just extreamly far, imo let's listen to other people, if they will agree - I'll change ;_;

01:13:585 (2,3) - jump through slider 01:12:964 (1) - not a good idea, because this two objects have the same combo colour sure!
(in first test mod it was like..."WTF it was that right now? Where?) really? :3)


Well that's all what i found :3
Good luck ^_^

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Thanks for mods! (:
http://puu.sh/3qCQg.osu
:3

EDIT: SB!
OSB + SB
I hope you like it..
moe moe moe
-bakari-best xd

Inyuschan wrote:

-Okay, don't punch me or whatever, it's only suggestions D:-

[Hard]

00:23:930 - I miss one note here o3o yes!

SPOILER

00:44:206 - Same nooo, it will be overmapping here :<

SPOILER

01:08:826 - Maybe reverse selection and move a bit to note 4? selection? what selection?

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Normal and Easy I think are good o3o cool o3o/

Won't you do Insane diff? nah, I don't feel like doing it

-Bakari- wrote:

Inyuschan wrote:

-Okay, don't punch me or whatever, it's only suggestions D:-

[Hard]

00:23:930 - I miss one note here o3o yes!

SPOILER

00:44:206 - Same nooo, it will be overmapping here :<

SPOILER

01:08:826 - Maybe reverse selection and move a bit to note 4? selection? what selection?

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Normal and Easy I think are good o3o cool o3o/

Won't you do Insane diff? nah, I don't feel like doing it

Thank you for looking at, I appreciate it!

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  [*e299]00:30:250 (2) - ctrl+g? just a suggestion, because too much etna sliders as for me (00:26:526 (1,2,3) - then 00:29:836 (1,2) - ) - imho it looks boring.[
  [*e299]00:49:077 (4,5) - 2 hitobjects at the same tick, probably resnap fault, you should fix them. Anyway, rhytm in the whole part may be way better if you will use here 1/8 slider instead:
  
  [spoilerboxe299][imge299]http://puu.sh/3vYVq.jpg[/imge299][/spoilerboxe299]
  [/*:me299]
  [*e299]00:59:008 (9) - begin nc here instead of 00:59:629 (1) - follow lyrics[/*:me299]

1. 01:05:422 - 01:06:043 - place spinner here? imo fits as well[/*:me299]
2. 01:19:491 (1) - just a suggestion to improve your flow:
   
   [spoilerboxe299][imge299]http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850627[/imge299][/spoilerboxe299]
   
   (if you will apply it, place then 01:20:732 (2) - somewhere like x258 y249 or so to make symmethry with 01:21:146 (3) )[/*:me299]
3. 01:32:836 - place spinner here follow vocal & end it at 01:35:215 [/*:me299]
4. 01:4574 (1) - ctrl+g for better flow?
   
   
   what the hell with those suddenly end of map, it looks TOTALLY weird. map it to the end or at least to 02:10:801 to make your map fit the song more!

Dizco wrote:

Hi, i saw this in #modreqs, so im gonna leave some comments.

Overall the mapset feels pretty complete and almost ready for rank so im just gonna be making small suggestion mostly.

[General/All diffs]
Intro is pretty long, countdown at half speed would fit nicely imo. No, I don't think that countdown fits here. It sounds kinda weird
Letterbox in break looks weird with SB as its supposed to look like its part of the bg image, suggest to remove letterbox, i had to go manually change in the .osu file for some reason because the option was disabled. nice catch!
Can barely hear hitsounds most places, suggest to increase overall volume by about 10% except in kiai. Well, everything sounds hearable for me. So, I'm keeping it the way it is for now.
Like someone already mentioned slidertick and sliderslide cant be both mute, i think you should unmute slidertick and use tickrate 2 it fits the song very good imo. aaand isn't it already fixed? Probably I didn't update it properly
Generally speaking on hitsounds i think that the drum sampleset sound good with whistle on 2 and 4. Normal sampleset sound good with clap on 1 and 3 if you plan on using this clapsound. It looks like you were thinking along the same lines already, except for the normal clap, i'm going to point out where you missed them instead but i suggest to do the opposite. Theres a few so maybe i made some mistakes. Well, I'm rehitsounding it now.
First note sounds good with a normal finish, maybe add another inherit section at 00:16:801 - or just change sample manually on the first note. Yea.
I dont understand why you use the normal sampleset so much more than the drum one, it would fit nicely in other places of the map too.I'll see what can I do to make it sound better

[Easy]
00:17:422 (2) - make same shape as 1? or vice versa sure
00:18:663 (4,1,2) - Maybe something nicer can be made here, possibly this(slider staircase with consistent angle change making a curve flow): ~

SPOILER

00:25:284 (4) - dont understand this curve or angle, maybe just make it flow directly into next combo?it looks better if I keep it this way. What's more 00:26:939 (2,3,4) - has absolutely the same flow and it looks/flows really food, imo!

00:37:698 (3,4,5) - making this tidier wont affect flow i think try like this: but I can't see anything wrong with current one, it looks really neat to me D: so, I don't feel like changing them, sorry
00:38:112 (4) - Move node #1 to {x:436 y:132}, move node #2 to {x:455 y:91}, move node #3 to {x:452 y:47}.
00:38:939 (5) - Move node #2 to {x:315 y:74}, move node #3 to {x:278 y:97}.
00:39:767 (1) - Move to {x:249 y:192}.

01:06:250 (1,1,2) - This can look a bit nicer maybe about like this: well, the same as above. sorry.
01:06:250 (1) - Move node #2 to {x:440 y:239}, move node #3 to {x:437 y:143}, add node #4 at {x:355 y:70}.
01:09:560 (1) - Move node #1 to {x:324 y:237}, move node #2 to {x:329 y:192}, move node #3 to {x:307 y:152}.

01:28:595 (4,5,1) - why not arrange this a bit neater too: that blanket kinda ruins my flow and I really want to avoid using it!

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I think i modded this the other way around regarding normal sampleset because this diff wasnt hitsounded at all pretty much when i started. i only did one sections because you can probaby figure out yourself how to do the rest. I've rehitsounded it. Sounds much better now
00:16:595 (1) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:17:422 (2) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:21:560 (3) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:23:629 (2) - Add a whistle on the start, add a whistle on the end.
00:25:284 (4) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:26:939 (2) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:29:422 (5) - Add a whistle.
00:31:905 (2) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:33:146 (1) - Add a clap.
00:34:801 (3) - Add a clap.
00:35:215 (4) - Add a clap on repeat #1 (at 00:35:628).
00:36:457 (1) - Add a clap.
00:36:870 (2) - Add a clap on the end.
00:38:112 (4) - Add a clap on the start, remove the clap on the end.
00:38:939 (5) - Add a clap on the start.
00:39:767 (1) - Add a clap.
00:40:181 (2) - Remove the clap on the end.
00:41:422 (3) - Add a clap.
00:41:836 (4) - Remove the clap on the start, remove the clap on the end.
00:43:077 (1) - Add a clap.
00:43:491 (2) - Remove the clap on the start, add a clap on repeat #1 (at 00:43:904), remove the clap on the end.
00:44:732 (3) - Add a clap.
00:45:560 (5) - Add a clap on the start.
00:46:388 (1) - Add a clap.
00:49:698 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
01:39:353 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
01:54:663 (4) - Add a clap on the end.
01:55:905 (1) - Add a clap.
01:59:215 (1) - Add a clap on the end.

[Normal]
I've fixed [General] things, but rest is up to GD-mapper.

[Hard]
Well polished diff mostly.

00:23:215 (1) - this spacing change was very unexpected and doesnt fit i think, the sound here flows the same from 00:23:008 (9) - all the way into next slider it would make more sense to add spacing to 9 instead since its slightly diffrent sound, and maybe add spacing to 8 too. nice catch!
00:33:146 (1) - this is a very powerful sound, a jump would fit nicely I'm not sure, because I'm against using 1/1 jumps
00:49:698 (1) - here too. ~
01:19:491 (1) - and here. I don't think it's really needed here, what's more it will ruin flow and symmetrical pattern :<
01:26:112 (1) - and maybe here, but not as much as the others perhaps. \same as above. sorry :<
01:49:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this could also have more spacing reflecting the change in sound. well, I think this reflects music good enough. Anyway, if anyone will give me better idea = I'll change
01:54:457 (1) - orz nonsense spinner, remove please and map something else. Something like this maybe: yes!

If you feel you need a spinner replacing one of the breaks with one would make much more sense.
01:55:905 (1) - and if you do that, which i REALLY hope you do, you could make this note a jump. ~
00:47:215 (8) - also strange spacing, there is no change in the music here ~
01:08:732 (3) - ctrl-g please. god, i have no choice :<
01:15:353 (3) - ctrl-g jump makes no sense here. ~
01:28:595 (3) - why spacing? i dont understand. ctrl-h-g and snap please ~
00:16:595 (1) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:23:629 (3) - Add a whistle.
00:37:284 (2) - Move node #3 to {x:256 y:194}, move node #4 to {x:242 y:116}. maaaaaybe better, but its good as it is so you can just leave it. Changed a bt
00:39:767 (5) - Remove the clap on the end,maybe can remove the ugly angle made by red node like this, but its fine as is: move node #2 to {x:437 y:351}, move node #3 to {x:387 y:337}, move node #4 to {x:364 y:310}, move node #5 to {x:351 y:295}, move node #6 to {x:351 y:295}, move node #7 to {x:340 y:282}, move node #8 to {x:324 y:235}, add node #9 at {x:267 y:223}, add node #10 at {x:208 y:252}. Yeeeeaaa, I've made it prettier :3
00:45:146 (2) - Add a clap on the start.
00:49:284 (4) - Add a clap.
00:49:491 (5) - Add a clap.

I tried to make these work without red nodes making an ugly angle, not sure how good it turned out. But you can try like this i guess if it bothers you or just leave it as is: changed them in another way, looks good
00:53:836 (3) - Move node #1 to {x:56 y:62}, move node #2 to {x:76 y:52}, move node #3 to {x:101 y:50}, move node #4 to {x:127 y:64}, move node #5 to {x:134 y:70}, move node #6 to {x:137 y:77}, move node #7 to {x:151 y:103}, move node #8 to {x:208 y:99}.
01:21:767 (4) - Move to {x:340 y:138}.
01:21:974 (5) - Move node #2 to {x:334 y:35}, move node #3 to {x:296 y:54}, move node #4 to {x:281 y:71}, move node #5 to {x:275 y:80}, move node #6 to {x:268 y:93}, add node #7 at {x:247 y:120}, add node #8 at {x:210 y:124}.
01:54:250 (1) - Remove the whistle. yes and yes to all suggestions below.
01:56:732 (4) - Add a clap on the end.
01:57:560 (6) - Add a clap on the end.
02:00:870 (6) - Add a clap on repeat #1 (at 02:01:283).
02:06:250 (2) - Add a clap.

Good luck.

1. KIAI seems to have a lack of hitsounds, you should try to find a fiting custom clap and try to use it, that'd be cool
   
   
2. It seems pretty strange to me that the smoke keeps going, even after the song ended. So could you fade the BG or the smoke out?

1. 00:30:250 (2) - I'd like to change this angle to make it more flowy and fiting to the pattern if you see what I mean, you may want to try it.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:45:560 (5) - Try to shape this with 1's direction, increases transition in my opinion.
3. 00:58:388 (4) - Try CTRL + H, that flows much smoother here.
4. 01:09:560 (1,4) - You should add finishes to those two, they will be consistent with the next part.
5. 01:47:629 (3) - I know I could say this aswell for some other spots, but it's strange here, so could you make this curve straight?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:19:077 (5) - Looks rather unclean, please either try to stack it with 3's end, which would be good, or replace it somewhere else.
2. 00:22:388 (5) - Stack this perfectly.
3. 00:31:077 (3) - I see no point in leting this touch the upper Slider, it looks untidy and irretating, so just move it on the other side or down, it'd be fine either way.
4. 00:44:319 (3) - Move this a bit down to fix the inconsistent spacing.
5. 00:57:560 (2) - Move this directly to 1's ending, it will improve slow and make the pattern neater.
6. 01:15:767 (4) - Better to place it the same way as 2, this would look much better and less untidy.
7. 01:22:388 (4) - Flows pretty bad since it's so far away from 3's ending and yea, just try to move it closer to it's ending.
8. 01:24:457 (3) - Looks untidy again, just move it so it's start won't touch 2 anymore.
9. 01:47:629 (3) - Blanket with 2 can be improved a lot, really!
10. 01:50:112 (2) - Should be better blanketing 1.
11. 02:05:836 (1) - Would be cool if you could lower volume for this part like Bakari did.

1. 00:32:732 (5) - Nazi but yea, you could try to move it down and make a better triangle.
2. 01:13:698 (3) - Stack it with the previous 2, it will look much cleaner lol.
3. 01:20:732 (2) - Center this on the grid, it will make it look neater xD
4. 01:42:663 (1) - Improve stack with 7? Not neccasary, I will leave it to you.
5. 02:05:422 (4) - Missing clap on the start.

Nemis wrote:

More IM!

• Suggestion
• High suggestion/must fix

[General]
• Add "Korn" in the tags, it's the group where Jonathan Davis belongs KOЯN
• I'd add some flash/thunders in the SB during the KIAI yes!
• At the end of the map the clouds in the SB are cutted, you should fix them: it's invisible during gameplay. confirmed twice!

SPOILER

[Hard]
• 00:25:698 (8,9,1) - Improve this triangle a little bit (just move 00:26:526 (1) - this slider 1 tiny grid up):

SPOILER

• 00:26:939 (2) - Flip this slider vertically, it's so repetitive 00:26:526 (1,2,3) - here...
• 00:48:457 (2) - I'd suggest to remove this whistle, I prefer just a clap here
• 00:50:319 (3) - Add a note here, it follows the vocal I'd prefer to ignore this part. It doesn't sounds like something that should be mapped :<
• 00:53:836 (3,4,5) - Improve this triangle a little bit:

SPOILER

• 00:54:663 (5,6,7) - Same as above, If you fix them they will be really better to see
• 00:57:560 (5) - Reverse this slider (CTRL+G) even if you make a jump 00:57:560 (5,6) - here, it follows a lot
• 01:01:698 (7,8) - Improve this blanket a little bit
• 01:02:112 (8,9,10,1) - Increase the spacing here, it would be fun to play in this part
• 01:09:560 (1,3) - Stack these two sliders manually, if you play the map you'll see them perfectly overlapped:

SPOILER

• 01:12:870 (1) - Enlarge its curve a little bit keeping the blanket and then try to stack 01:13:491 (2) - this note under 01:12:457 (4) - this slider's end:

SPOILER

• 01:26:939 (3) - Try to end its end on 01:27:767 (1) - this slider:

SPOILER

• 01:32:732 (5) - Here changes the music, add a new combo as you did 01:02:939 (1) - here
• 01:41:836 (7,1) - Stack these two elements manually for a better readability
• 01:42:663 (1,3) - Same as above, it would help the players reading the sliders
• 01:45:560 (8,1) - Improve this blanket a little bit
• 01:49:077 (1) - Add a finish on its head, it fits the music here
• 01:54:250 (1) - This new combo is unneeded, remove it
• 01:55:905 (1) - Move this note at x:128 y:272 to improve 01:55:077 (3,4,1) - this triangle
• 01:58:388 (8,9,1) - Improve this triangle a little bit:

SPOILER

• 01:59:629 (2,5) - Fix this stack even if it's not so perceptible while playing

[Easy]
• 00:37:698 (3,4,5) - Make a triangle with these three elements and then improve the blanket:

SPOILER

• 00:45:560 (5,1) - Move these two elements at x:264 y:212 to overlap 00:45:560 (5) - this slider's head on 00:43:077 (1) - this note. Then fix the spacing 00:45:146 (4,5) - here
• 01:32:732 (5) - I'd suggest to add a new combo here I don't think it's needed. IT may confuse some beginners, so let's keep it as is
• 01:54:663 (4,1,2) - Improve this triangle a little bit

Good luck -Bakari- <3