Colin Hou wrote:

rebubbled, 元宵节快乐

raririn wrote:

哎 真是好长时间了呢
加油

Tachibana Kanade wrote:

..
好..
好事多磨

Zeroarg wrote:

Go ranked *w*

OniJAM wrote:

Thank you all. But I maynot repending it soon, just because my study...
I will try to remap this beatmap.
I want to fix two Insane diffs into one. and add Futsuu and Kantan diff for Taiko, 7K EZ NM HD SHD for mania.
so it will be 12 diffs then.
But just wait until middle of June.

1. Timing: offset (+12).
2. Hitsound: Fixed some weird places/parts.
3. Pattern embellished.
4. Useless new combo wiped off.

• Muzukashii diff isn't allowed use different triplet, like ddk dkd dkk kkd kdk kdd. it must same, like ddd or kkk only. you must change it, for the example like 00:16:253 (66,67,68) -

1. 00:32:266 (131) - d, because you can hear if 00:32:266 (131) - has a same pitch sound like 00:32:063 (130) - right? better use the same note like
2. 00:32:063 (130) -
3. 00:33:685 (135) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jTbO.jpg
4. 00:40:374 (161,162,163) - k d d. you can hear the pitch sounds there (background sounds). the pitch sounds are getting low from 00:40:374 (161) until 00:40:780 (163) -
5. 00:41:489 (166) - k, becuase 00:41:489 (166) - has same pitch sound like 00:41:185 (165) - (hear it again carefully). and you use 00:41:185 (165) - k. so it's better use the same note at 00:41:489 (166) -
6. 00:46:861 (188) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jTj1.jpg
7. 01:27:199 (351) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jToI.jpg

1. 00:14:631 (67) - change this to be d
2. 00:30:442 (159) - d
3. 00:59:834 (311) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jTA1.jpg
4. 01:15:847 (402,403) - why you use finishes here........ remove the finishes please

mingmichael wrote:

hey Oni here the mods that you requested to me~

[Muzukashii]

• Muzukashii diff isn't allowed use different triplet, like ddk dkd dkk kkd kdk kdd. it must same, like ddd or kkk only. you must change it, for the example like 00:16:253 (66,67,68) -

1. 00:32:266 (131) - d, because you can hear if 00:32:266 (131) - has a same pitch sound like 00:32:063 (130) - right? better use the same note like
2. 00:32:063 (130) -
3. 00:33:685 (135) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jTbO.jpg
4. 00:40:374 (161,162,163) - k d d. you can hear the pitch sounds there (background sounds). the pitch sounds are getting low from 00:40:374 (161) until 00:40:780 (163) -
5. 00:41:489 (166) - k, becuase 00:41:489 (166) - has same pitch sound like 00:41:185 (165) - (hear it again carefully). and you use 00:41:185 (165) - k. so it's better use the same note at 00:41:489 (166) -
6. 00:46:861 (188) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jTj1.jpg
7. 01:27:199 (351) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jToI.jpg

[Oni]

1. 00:14:631 (67) - change this to be d
2. 00:30:442 (159) - d
3. 00:59:834 (311) - try this~ http://puu.sh/3jTA1.jpg
4. 01:15:847 (402,403) - why you use finishes here........ remove the finishes please

goodluck!

1. It would be nice to use same kiai and colours on the whole mapset, though it's not necessary if you don't want.

1. 01:13:617 (2) - This slider could be stacked better with the previous one.

1. 00:25:780 (2) - Too many slider repeats might be confusing and hard to read for beginners, I suggest you to remake this pattern.
2. 00:40:374 (4) - Same as above for the same reason.
3. 00:41:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This whole pattern seems a bit too hard compared to the rest of the whole difficulty if you ask me.
4. 01:07:131 (4) - Again, please don't use too many repeats since they only cause confusion to beginners.
5. 01:10:374 (1) - Same as above, once again.
6. 01:17:672 (5) - ^
7. 01:19:293 (3) - ^
8. 01:23:347 (1) - ^

1. Increase HP and OD by 1 tick at least, it's way too low for this kind of difficulty right now.

1. 00:21:726 (5) - This note feels too loud compared to the rest.

1. 00:59:023 (1,2,3,4) - These notes feels too close each other, make the spacing bigger perhaps? Would play better and also easier to read.
2. 01:01:455 (9) - Add a new combo here, otherwise it will be too long.

ts8zs wrote:

没我事真是太好了……不想重新做了……随便你们改吧……

OniJAM wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

没我事真是太好了……不想重新做了……随便你们改吧……

不好意思没和包子你和@Mamosora 说就把你们俩的Oni和我remake的だ部分拼成了Collab Oni...
“だが、すべて、私の私利私欲のために”
电脑被小学生占领了一天今晚改图还有包子放心不会没你事的……

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. It would be nice to use same kiai and colours on the whole mapset, though it's not necessary if you don't want.

~Ash Roller~

1. 01:13:617 (2) - This slider could be stacked better with the previous one.

~Lime Bell~

1. 00:25:780 (2) - Too many slider repeats might be confusing and hard to read for beginners, I suggest you to remake this pattern.
2. 00:40:374 (4) - Same as above for the same reason.
3. 00:41:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This whole pattern seems a bit too hard compared to the rest of the whole difficulty if you ask me.
4. 01:07:131 (4) - Again, please don't use too many repeats since they only cause confusion to beginners.
5. 01:10:374 (1) - Same as above, once again.
6. 01:17:672 (5) - ^
7. 01:19:293 (3) - ^
8. 01:23:347 (1) - ^

~Sky Raker~

1. Increase HP and OD by 1 tick at least, it's way too low for this kind of difficulty right now.

1. 00:21:726 (5) - This note feels too loud compared to the rest.

~Black Lotus~

1. 00:59:023 (1,2,3,4) - These notes feels too close each other, make the spacing bigger perhaps? Would play better and also easier to read.
2. 01:01:455 (9) - Add a new combo here, otherwise it will be too long.

tetsutaro wrote:

***中文開首語還沒有寫好，就只放banner算了***

[基本]
<太鼓> 因為黃色連打、旋轉音符不是必須打擊的元素，所以用法與應援團滑條有不同。下面再作詳細的解說。
使用衝衝時間煙火不當：Offset 71996 的調時區間改至 75238 (比下一區間差1毫秒)

[太鼓梅級] 目測難度：梅級1星
音符總體以2拍分隔為主實在太稀疏。開首時 (00:15:239 前) 這樣還OK，但是衝衝時間 (01:02:266~ )麻煩再加強。以下附上本家コネクト譜面作參考用：

コネクト 3/3/3/5

00:33:077 (20) - 黃色連打提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 00:34:699 放音符
00:46:050 (32) - 黃色連打提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 00:47:672 放音符
01:00:644 (1) - 旋轉音符提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 01:02:266 放音符

[太鼓竹級] 目測難度：竹級3星
00:33:888 (35) - 黃色連打提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 00:34:699 放音符
00:46:050 (56) - 黃色連打提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 00:47:672 放音符
01:00:644 (1) - 旋轉音符提早1/2 ~ 1拍完結，原終結點 01:02:266 放音符

[太鼓松級] 目測難度：松級7星
00:00:645 ~ 00:15:239 - 開首開太猛，衝衝時間被比下去了。建議只跟鋼琴音

[太鼓鬼級] 目測難度：鬼級8星

[Ash Roller]
除了總體1拍節奏悶得很之外都沒有問題

[Lime Bell]
也是悶。A段建議採用完全歌詞取向
00:36:320 (3) - 前移1/2拍; 00:37:131 (4) - 前移至00:36:726開始，延長成2拍長; 00:37:739 (5) - 改成2個單體音符
00:39:361 (3) - 前移1/2拍，延長成1.5拍長或是00:39:969加單體音符

Mamosora wrote:

嘛... 上傳者是你 給你的.osu檔也是你的財產了w
remap辛苦了 有甚麼需要幫助的可以隨時PM我~

[ Sana ] wrote:

Hi~ from my queue
please tell me what did you fix and did not fix.
Sky Raker

1. 00:56:185 (2) - ctrl + g Nope
2. 01:10:374 (1,2,3,4) - it can be boring to player. change like -> Nice idea
   
3. 01:27:401 (5) - make reverse slider -> Okay
   
4. 01:28:212 - add circle here Okay

Black Lotus

1. 00:04:699 (7) - ctrl + g Nope
2. 00:11:996 (3) - place here -> Fixed
   
3. 00:29:428 (4) - ctrl + g Changed in my way
4. 00:30:644 (3,2) - overlap perfectly Fixed
5. 01:10:780 (2,3,4) - doesn't fit as well. -> Okay
   

GL

[Seraphin] wrote:

From Cat and Frog's modding queue~ \w

This is one of my favorite OPs.

Unrankable
Strong suggestion
Suggestion

[General]
Hitsound volume -5%

[Ash Roller]
00:46:050 (3) - uncurve, leads into (4) better
00:42:807 (3,4) - combine into 1 3-repeat slider?

[Lime Bell]
01:24:563 (2,3) - unstack?

[Sky Raker]
00:07:131 (1,3) - try making these curves a little smoother?
00:19:293 (2,3,4) - doesn't really feel in place
00:20:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - stream, slider, or remove. it sounds weird
00:24:361 (1,2,3) - make into slider
00:56:996 (4) - make like (2)
01:03:280 (5) - remove

[Black Lotus]
ok

Sorry about small mod ;w;
The map is practically perfect
BAT, come here.

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, from my queue

[General]
kiai - have you considered soft whistle instead of normal whistle? it has a really nice effect imo ~ ofc, it's completely up to you

[Ash Roller]
00:08:753 (3) - missing whistle
00:42:807 (3) - add clap on end

[Lime Bell]
fine

[Sky Raker]
00:38:753 (3,4,5) - make it equidistant plz
00:42:807 (1) - add finish to match cymbal
00:44:428 (1) - add finish same idea as before
00:47:672 - maybe continue the same clap pattern as before up till here? ofc it's up to you

[Black Lotus]
00:37:435 (6,7,8) - maybe make curve leading into (1) is better flow
00:38:753 (3,4,5) - maybe curve? same idea as before
00:42:807 (1) - add finish on start to match cymbal
00:44:428 (1) - add finish on start
01:26:388 (6) - maybe x:320 y:292?

solid map
good luck

1. SV 1.6 太高了吧. 改做1.2吧
2. 01:23:347 (32,33,34) - Big Kat?
3. 大致沒問題, 很好

1. SV 1.6 改做 SV 1.4吧, Oni的話沒問題, Fuutsu和Kantan的確不用這麼高, 新手開個HR可能什麼都看不到了
2. 00:11:185 (x) - 加個k在這裡吧 鋼琴音做支持 這樣聽上去不錯
3. < 00:28:212 (24) - 這裡是bass drum, 再該加上finish, 下Big Don會好一點.
4. 00:47:672 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67) - 這段, 有明顯的重低音鼓. 我建議的下法如下: >
   
   圖

   
   <*> 即 dk k k k ddk k k kD
5. 其他沒大問題

1. 同樣的, SV 1.6 改做 SV 1.4吧
2. 00:21:726 (85) - Big Don
3. 00:28:212 (109) - 同理, 這裡都是大鼓+ fin, 即是Big Don
4. 00:28:212 (24) - 這裡是bass drum, 再該加上finish, 下Big Don會好一點.
5. 因為我發現太多沒下fin的地方了, 最後下不下的決定權交回你手上, 總結來說這跟vocal的譜還是可以的
   不過漏太多fin有點不帶感就是了
6. 同樣沒大問題

1. 00:20:712 (104) - 你這段在跟鼓的話, 就用d吧.
2. 00:21:422 (110) - Del
3. 00:21:523 (110,111) - 改做kk
4. (*) 總合上段 , pattern更改為 ddddk kkd.
5. < 00:27:705 (143) - 這個不是k啊. 細心一聽這裡是兩個連續的低音 意思是在00:27:807 (x) - 加個d
6. 圖

   
7. 00:28:009 (145) - d
8. 00:28:212 (146) - Big Don
9. 00:28:313 (147) - del >
10. <*> 上段, 總結-> dd d D
11. 00:28:415 (147) - 這裡換做ddk吧
12. 01:22:739 (449) - k
13. 01:23:144 (452) - ^

KanaRin wrote:

好~
這圖開很久了吧. 一聽上就忍不住空耳了
~高帥富~

[Kantan]

Mod info:
KAT / K = Blue note ( Big KAT = Big notes , same of DON)
DON / D= Red note

1. SV 1.6 太高了吧. 改做1.2吧
2. 01:23:347 (32,33,34) - Big Kat?
3. 大致沒問題, 很好

[Fuutsu]

1. SV 1.6 改做 SV 1.4吧, Oni的話沒問題, Fuutsu和Kantan的確不用這麼高, 新手開個HR可能什麼都看不到了
2. 00:11:185 (x) - 加個k在這裡吧 鋼琴音做支持 這樣聽上去不錯
3. < 00:28:212 (24) - 這裡是bass drum, 再該加上finish, 下Big Don會好一點.
4. 00:47:672 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67) - 這段, 有明顯的重低音鼓. 我建議的下法如下: >
   
   圖

   
   <*> 即 dk k k k ddk k k kD
5. 其他沒大問題

[Mamo's Muzu']

1. 同樣的, SV 1.6 改做 SV 1.4吧
2. 00:21:726 (85) - Big Don
3. 00:28:212 (109) - 同理, 這裡都是大鼓+ fin, 即是Big Don
4. 00:28:212 (24) - 這裡是bass drum, 再該加上finish, 下Big Don會好一點.
5. 因為我發現太多沒下fin的地方了, 最後下不下的決定權交回你手上, 總結來說這跟vocal的譜還是可以的
   不過漏太多fin有點不帶感就是了
6. 同樣沒大問題

[Taiko Oni]

1. 00:20:712 (104) - 你這段在跟鼓的話, 就用d吧.
2. 00:21:422 (110) - Del
3. 00:21:523 (110,111) - 改做kk
4. (*) 總合上段 , pattern更改為 ddddk kkd.
5. < 00:27:705 (143) - 這個不是k啊. 細心一聽這裡是兩個連續的低音 意思是在00:27:807 (x) - 加個d
6. 圖

   
7. 00:28:009 (145) - d
8. 00:28:212 (146) - Big Don
9. 00:28:313 (147) - del >
10. <*> 上段, 總結-> dd d D
11. 00:28:415 (147) - 這裡換做ddk吧
12. 01:22:739 (449) - k
13. 01:23:144 (452) - ^

1. change your circle size and approach rate to 5. change your hp drain rate and overall difficulty to 4.
2. 00:20:104 (5,6,7) - this straight 3 big d isn't a good idea. it's not really friendly for new player. it would be better and easier if you change it to d k d.
3. 00:34:699 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - tbh this part is kinda hard after you mapped 1/1 with gaps and suddenly 1/1 with no gap. makes everything feels difficulty, try to make it easier. maybe: Dk k k ddk k k ddk and so on.
4. 01:18:482 (25,26,27,28,29) - since the pattern before is d ddd d, it would be better if you make this as k kkk k, to make it sound better when consistent.
5. 01:21:726 (30,31,32,33,34) - please don't spam finish when there's no loud instrument or music/cymbals.

1. Do the settings same like I say in Kantan.
2. 00:10:982 (17) - move this to 00:10:780 (17) - to avoid confusion, because the starting you're mapping it based on 1/1 if there's suddenly change to 1/2 looks confusing to play.
3. 00:21:726 (12) - add finish here there's cymbal.
4. 00:22:536 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - why don't you make it like this: dkd dkd dkd ddD kdk kdk kdk. sounds better when the second part is a counter from the first part.
5. 00:35:915 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - this part feels weird when you mapped it with four circles pattern. try to reconsider and map based on the song more.00:37:536 (41,42,43,44) - this doesn't sound good and 00:43:617 (52,53,54,55) - sounds better with kdkk
6. 00:47:672 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76) - why this part suddenly become so hard and you mapped it using 1/2. try to make it easier. maybe follow vocal.
7. 01:05:915 (10) - this circle you should bring to 01:06:320 (10) -
8. 01:07:536 (13) - this circle should bring to 01:07:942 (13) -
9. 01:09:563 (16) - remove finish from here please.
10. 01:17:063 () - add a circle here just to make a variation for the ending.

1. 00:00:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would make this as k d k d k d k
2. 00:06:320 (18,19,20,21,22) - if you really following vocal here, it should be kddkk
3. 00:09:969 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - try to make this like: ddk k kd d dk, counter pattern always sounds good \o/
4. 00:40:374 (154,155,156,157,158) - dkkdd sounds better here.
5. 00:44:428 (172) - add whistlere here, there's not much change of beat here. so just follow the pattern before.
6. I don't really have problem when kiai because you're following on vocal most of it. but seriously remove some of the random finishes @_@

1. 00:07:131 (33) - this would be better if it's whistle.
2. 00:24:057 () - add a circle here. this three * is related, would be better if you do it all rather than just one.
3. 00:24:158 (126) - add clap*
4. 00:24:361 (127) - add a circle here*
5. 00:25:577 (133,134) - because there's a gap before, you should delete this two circles to make it consistent and add a circle at 00:27:604 () -
6. 00:26:996 (140) - sounds better if clap
7. 01:15:442 (398) ~ end - starting from here, most of the beat is overmapped and some of the whistles are random, please check again. @____@

HeatKai wrote:

Taiko mod as requested from the Malaysian Taiko Queue

[Kantan]

1. change your circle size and approach rate to 5. change your hp drain rate and overall difficulty to 4. well.. fixed, but i see some ranked taiko map use 3 3 0 3, just like http://osu.ppy.sh/s/61820, i just copy that
2. 00:20:104 (5,6,7) - this straight 3 big d isn't a good idea. it's not really friendly for new player. it would be better and easier if you change it to d k d. fixed
3. 00:34:699 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - tbh this part is kinda hard after you mapped 1/1 with gaps and suddenly 1/1 with no gap. makes everything feels difficulty, try to make it easier. maybe: Dk k k ddk k k ddk and so on. fixed
4. 01:18:482 (25,26,27,28,29) - since the pattern before is d ddd d, it would be better if you make this as k kkk k, to make it sound better when consistent. fixed
5. 01:21:726 (30,31,32,33,34) - please don't spam finish when there's no loud instrument or music/cymbals. fixed

[Futsuu]

1. Do the settings same like I say in Kantan. fixed
2. 00:10:982 (17) - move this to 00:10:780 (17) - to avoid confusion, because the starting you're mapping it based on 1/1 if there's suddenly change to 1/2 looks confusing to play. fixed
3. 00:21:726 (12) - add finish here there's cymbal.
4. 00:22:536 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - why don't you make it like this: dkd dkd dkd ddD kdk kdk kdk. sounds better when the second part is a counter from the first part. fixed
5. 00:35:915 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - this part feels weird when you mapped it with four circles pattern. try to reconsider and map based on the song more.00:37:536 (41,42,43,44) - this doesn't sound good and 00:43:617 (52,53,54,55) - sounds better with kdkk fixed
6. 00:47:672 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76) - why this part suddenly become so hard and you mapped it using 1/2. try to make it easier. maybe follow vocal. remaped this part, but not follow vocal
7. 01:05:915 (10) - this circle you should bring to 01:06:320 (10) - fixed
8. 01:07:536 (13) - this circle should bring to 01:07:942 (13) - fixed
9. 01:09:563 (16) - remove finish from here please. fixed
10. 01:17:063 () - add a circle here just to make a variation for the ending. not fixed, because i remove all 1/2 part

[Mamo's Muzukashii]
Try to reduce some finishes, some of it sounds really random. fixed

1. 00:00:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would make this as k d k d k d k fixed
2. 00:06:320 (18,19,20,21,22) - if you really following vocal here, it should be kddkk fixed
3. 00:09:969 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - try to make this like: ddk k kd d dk, counter pattern always sounds good \o/ fixed
4. 00:40:374 (154,155,156,157,158) - dkkdd sounds better here. fixed
5. 00:44:428 (172) - add whistlere here, there's not much change of beat here. so just follow the pattern before. fixed
6. I don't really have problem when kiai because you're following on vocal most of it. but seriously remove some of the random finishes @_@

have remove some finishes

[Collab Oni]

1. 00:07:131 (33) - this would be better if it's whistle. fixed
2. 00:24:057 () - add a circle here. this three * is related, would be better if you do it all rather than just one. fixed
3. 00:24:158 (126) - add clap* fixed
4. 00:24:361 (127) - add a circle here* fixed
5. 00:25:577 (133,134) - because there's a gap before, you should delete this two circles to make it consistent and add a circle at 00:27:604 () - fixed
6. 00:26:996 (140) - sounds better if clap fixed
7. 01:15:442 (398) ~ end - starting from here, most of the beat is overmapped and some of the whistles are random, please check again. @____@

baldrace wrote:

Hi~from my queue

General
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Ash Roller
00:54:158 (1,2) - 音效过渡有点不自然，我觉得这两个也要加whistle fixed

Lime Bell
fine

Sky Raker
这diff看起来不干净，压在残影上的物件太多了 > <
00:23:144 (5) - 这边开始的一段为什么一直在上面摆东西，下面都没用到 > <
00:35:509 (2,3,4) - 为什么没clap了 > < 不是有么

Black Lotus
00:01:455 (5) - 这个滑条和你前面几个note还有后面几个note使用的sv以及间距明显不对，建议减速 not fixed, sv是一样的啊 间距也没有大问题
00:37:131 (4,5) - 这个节奏感觉有点突兀，其他类似的地方都没有这个节奏- - 有所改动 把这两个节奏改掉了
00:53:347 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里为什么放连打。> < 缓冲部分放连打我是觉得没有问题
00:55:172 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - 这梗感觉曲子没这个节奏在这里，莫名 这部分是有点不舒服 不过暂时先不改动 因为暂时我找不到更好的改法，如果有人给个好的建议我会改掉的
00:23:347 (1,2,3) - 白线的三连感觉不是很好，三连尽量红线起 这个地方我觉得还是蛮和节拍的

大概就那么多吧。
good luck

Papysh wrote:

Hi, From my Modding queue!

Ash Roller

1. 00:00:645 (1,2,3) - I would use that pattern, Because it looks better for me hmm, but i think my pattern flows better and looks well too
   
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2. 00:03:888 (1) - I would like to curve that slider a little bit, It looks better for me yes fixed, but also change 2
   
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3. 00:23:753 (4) - Move that a bit higher (about 2 grids) and then move that slider 00:24:158 (5) - a bit left (2-3 grids) so it can fit better with 00:21:726 (1,5) - And it looks better nope, while player play this part, they can't see 1 and 2 when 5 appears
4. 01:02:266 (1) - please move that slider a bit so it can look better with the 01:00:644 (1) - fixed
   
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Rest Looks Perfect for me

Lime Bell

1. 00:01:050 (2) - Move that a bit Right Because it looks better for me fixed
2. 00:07:536 (2) - Same as previous, but move that a bit down nope, this time ka- na- ta- are in the same tune, so keep 1 2 3 in a straight line fits better, also it flows better to beginners
3. 00:08:753 (4) - Chenge shape of that slider so it can look better, and play better nope
   
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4. 00:52:536 (3,4) - Maybe somethink like this nope
   
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5. 01:18:482 (1) - Maybe curve taht slider a bit, for better look not very bad looking, and it will break the link with 01:16:050 (2) -

Rest looks perfect for me

Sky Raker

1. 00:16:861 (1,2) - Maybe chose better shape for that sliders, so they can fit better and it will make them look better remap some part
2. 00:08:753 (1,2,1) - Maybe curve them a bit like this it looks nice when you only see 00:08:753 (1,2,3,1) - , but 00:07:942 (3,4) cannot have a good flow with this part
   
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3. 00:20:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - I dont like that because the circles are touching GREAT! Fixed
   
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Rest looks Good for me

Black Lotus

1. 00:05:104 (8) - Ctrl + Shift + R -> Selection centre -> 8 fixed
2. 00:13:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Nice stream here thanks
3. 00:19:090 (3) - I would chose other shape for it not a good shape for me
   
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This dif is really good diff, Everything else look perfect

I Hope, that my sugestions helped

Vita-VVA wrote:

[ash roller]

spinners could be a bit shorter?(especially the last one) a long spinner is a bit harder for beginners (peosonally)
nope, the first spinner might be a little longer... but i can't find a more suitable place, the second has the same length as Zeroarg's newly ranked version.
[lime bell]
00:33:888 (4) - divide it into two slider in order to make it more suitable for the rhythm(just suggest) too difficult for beginners

00:39:361 (3) - it's better to add a note at any place I make this part a little easier for players to adjust themselves because before and after this part is difficult than average

00:46:253 (4,5) - combine them into one? no, i think mine suits the music better

01:14:428 (4) - a bit shorter is better it is ok to ends at 01:14:834 - , but i want to keep the same length with 01:11:996 (1,2,3) -


[sky raker]
00:09:969 (1) - the sound is different from others...especially or mistakes? no mistakes, i use this sound again in Black Lotus diff

00:47:672 (1) - may use shorter and slower sliders to suit the rhythm ╮(╯▽╰)╭also no speed change in Black Lotus diff, so i decide not to change this part

00:50:915 (1) -
00:51:726 (1) -
won't you think using the same tricks would be better? 我英死早没看懂233 well, now i know what you means though Tieba chats, but i think it my arrangment also suits the music, and using same tricks maybe too difficult for Hard and lacking of link with 00:52:536 (3) -

01:10:982 (4) - why not adding another note? too tight if added


[black lotus]
I am not good at streams so only suggestion
01:00:644 (1) - not a buautiful arrange.... ....


That's all,good luck!