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All fixed.Yes wrote:
lower volume for beginning then raise volume a little at 00:26:019 then full at 00:27:090? for all difficulties
lunatic
00:50:062 (x) - add note?
02:13:033 (5) - new combo
02:20:019 (2) - i think too many whistles. try removing this whistle and then
02:20:062 (4) - clap instead?
02:23:062 (2) - ^
02:24:005 (4) - ^ and all other places in song that sound like that :/
02:40:033 (x) - note?
02:40:055 (1) - clap at end
02:44:073 (9) - clap at 02:44:083
03:39:080 - lower volume
03:46:076 (1) - finish at beginning
03:53:062 - new timing section and raise volume a little from before
03:53:062 (1) - finish
04:06:058 (x) - spinner here might be nice?
04:34:076 (x) - note here?
hard
00:44:040 (2) - no whistle, clap at end
00:47:083 (2) - ^
01:48:047 (1) - end at 01:49:076 and lower volume for spinner
02:20:040 (2) - no whistle, clap at end
02:23:083 (2) - ^ (and all other places)
02:25:012 (x) - note?
03:39:080 - lower volume
03:46:076 (1) - finish at beginning
03:53:062 - new timing section and raise volume a little from before
03:53:062 (1) - finish at beginning
star!
Kytoxid wrote:
[All]
Background seems a bit blurry.
MP3 is 6 minutes long. Please cut it down to the part you actually use.
Your easiest difficulty is above 4 stars, consider making an easier difficulty.
Anything longer than 3 minutes gets tedious in my opinion.
[Normal]
Technically fine, but seems a bit slider-heavy as a whole, and felt kinda repetitive after a while.
02:09:090 (1) - This 1/2 BPM section seemed very random to me; the music didn't change in it.
[Hard]
I felt this difficulty was somewhat easy considering the 8.5m score tag on it. Shorten the length?
02:09:090 (1) - Same as on Normal.
[Lunatic]
13m is definitely too high. Shorten the length?
As your hardest difficulty, could be harder.
Have a star.
Fixed.Thanksblissfulyoshi wrote:
Source: HARMONY (album name) Added
Add to the tags: Alstroemeria Records Added
Consider adding kiai timing to the last chorus of each difficulty
Easy:
Combo mod:
00:37:337 (3) - add a new combo for the new line of lyrics?
00:51:480 (3) - ^
01:53:622 (1) - remove new combo since I did not see any new of lyrics starting here
Timing section mod:
02:17:50 - unneeded timing section, please remove it
Normal:
Combo mod:
00:33:051 (1) - remove new combo to follow the lyrics
Timing section mod:
02:17:50 - unneeded timing section, please remove it
Hard:
Combo mod:
00:33:051 (1) - remove new combo to follow the lyrics
01:21:908 (1,3) - since there is no slider here, remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 to follow your pattern
03:10:765 (6,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a ew combo to 6 to follow your pattern (if you do this, add a new combo to 03:12:480 (3) also)
Timing section mod:
02:17:50 - unneeded timing section, please remove it
It feels very strange to end the map right before the chorus. I would just map the last chorus too
Because the score is too high, it is not possible to do...
Lunatic:
Combo mod:
00:29:622 (1,4) - add a new combo to 4 and remove 1's new combo to follow your normal pattern for this section
00:33:051 (1) - remove new combo to follow the lyrics
01:21:908 (1,3) - since there is no slider here, remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 to follow your pattern
02:00:480 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 01:53:622 (1)
03:10:765 (7,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a ew combo to 6 to follow your pattern (if you do this, add a new combo to 03:12:480 (3) also)
Timing section mod:
02:17:50 - unneeded timing section, please remove it
The ending felt abrupt in this difficulty with the map ending when the music reached its climax
It is the same as Hard...
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Nice map. Star.