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Masayoshi Minoshima feat. nomico - Alice Maestera
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Mod Info's:
Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!
Starts Suggestions:
- 5 Minutes of playing are too much for a ranked map.
BPM: 140. Offset: 480. (Resnap all notes when you do this changes)
[Normal]
00:50:083 (5) - New combo.
02:43:012 (7) - ^
[Hard]
About lenght of this difficulty, look starts suggestions.
00:50:082 (5) - New combo.
02:42:025 (5) - ^
03:48:089 (3) - ^
04:07:032 (1) - End the map here with a spinner. Because 5 minutes of playing are unrankable.
[Lunatic]
About lenght of this difficulty, look starts suggestions.
00:50:082 (9) - New combo.
01:56:018 (11) - New combo due to the jump.
02:42:014 (5) - New combo.
04:07:032 (1) - Like hard difficulty.
04:17:093 (4) - New combo.
Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!
Starts Suggestions:
- 5 Minutes of playing are too much for a ranked map.
BPM: 140. Offset: 480. (Resnap all notes when you do this changes)
[Normal]
00:50:083 (5) - New combo.
02:43:012 (7) - ^
[Hard]
About lenght of this difficulty, look starts suggestions.
00:50:082 (5) - New combo.
02:42:025 (5) - ^
03:48:089 (3) - ^
04:07:032 (1) - End the map here with a spinner. Because 5 minutes of playing are unrankable.
[Lunatic]
About lenght of this difficulty, look starts suggestions.
00:50:082 (9) - New combo.
01:56:018 (11) - New combo due to the jump.
02:42:014 (5) - New combo.
04:07:032 (1) - Like hard difficulty.
04:17:093 (4) - New combo.
lower volume for beginning then raise volume a little at 00:26:019 then full at 00:27:090? for all difficulties
lunatic
00:50:062 (x) - add note?
02:13:033 (5) - new combo
02:20:019 (2) - i think too many whistles. try removing this whistle and then
02:20:062 (4) - clap instead?
02:23:062 (2) - ^
02:24:005 (4) - ^ and all other places in song that sound like that :/
02:40:033 (x) - note?
02:40:055 (1) - clap at end
02:44:073 (9) - clap at 02:44:083
03:39:080 - lower volume
03:46:076 (1) - finish at beginning
03:53:062 - new timing section and raise volume a little from before
03:53:062 (1) - finish
04:06:058 (x) - spinner here might be nice?
04:34:076 (x) - note here?
hard
00:44:040 (2) - no whistle, clap at end
00:47:083 (2) - ^
01:48:047 (1) - end at 01:49:076 and lower volume for spinner
02:20:040 (2) - no whistle, clap at end
02:23:083 (2) - ^ (and all other places)
02:25:012 (x) - note?
03:39:080 - lower volume
03:46:076 (1) - finish at beginning
03:53:062 - new timing section and raise volume a little from before
03:53:062 (1) - finish at beginning
star!
lunatic
00:50:062 (x) - add note?
02:13:033 (5) - new combo
02:20:019 (2) - i think too many whistles. try removing this whistle and then
02:20:062 (4) - clap instead?
02:23:062 (2) - ^
02:24:005 (4) - ^ and all other places in song that sound like that :/
02:40:033 (x) - note?
02:40:055 (1) - clap at end
02:44:073 (9) - clap at 02:44:083
03:39:080 - lower volume
03:46:076 (1) - finish at beginning
03:53:062 - new timing section and raise volume a little from before
03:53:062 (1) - finish
04:06:058 (x) - spinner here might be nice?
04:34:076 (x) - note here?
hard
00:44:040 (2) - no whistle, clap at end
00:47:083 (2) - ^
01:48:047 (1) - end at 01:49:076 and lower volume for spinner
02:20:040 (2) - no whistle, clap at end
02:23:083 (2) - ^ (and all other places)
02:25:012 (x) - note?
03:39:080 - lower volume
03:46:076 (1) - finish at beginning
03:53:062 - new timing section and raise volume a little from before
03:53:062 (1) - finish at beginning
star!
[All]
Background seems a bit blurry.
MP3 is 6 minutes long. Please cut it down to the part you actually use.
Your easiest difficulty is above 4 stars, consider making an easier difficulty.
Anything longer than 3 minutes gets tedious in my opinion.
[Normal]
Technically fine, but seems a bit slider-heavy as a whole, and felt kinda repetitive after a while.
02:09:090 (1) - This 1/2 BPM section seemed very random to me; the music didn't change in it.
[Hard]
I felt this difficulty was somewhat easy considering the 8.5m score tag on it. Shorten the length?
02:09:090 (1) - Same as on Normal.
[Lunatic]
13m is definitely too high. Shorten the length?
As your hardest difficulty, could be harder.
Have a star.
Background seems a bit blurry.
MP3 is 6 minutes long. Please cut it down to the part you actually use.
Your easiest difficulty is above 4 stars, consider making an easier difficulty.
Anything longer than 3 minutes gets tedious in my opinion.
[Normal]
Technically fine, but seems a bit slider-heavy as a whole, and felt kinda repetitive after a while.
02:09:090 (1) - This 1/2 BPM section seemed very random to me; the music didn't change in it.
[Hard]
I felt this difficulty was somewhat easy considering the 8.5m score tag on it. Shorten the length?
02:09:090 (1) - Same as on Normal.
[Lunatic]
13m is definitely too high. Shorten the length?
As your hardest difficulty, could be harder.
Have a star.
star~
Topic Starter
All fixed.Yes wrote:
lower volume for beginning then raise volume a little at 00:26:019 then full at 00:27:090? for all difficulties
lunatic
00:50:062 (x) - add note?
02:13:033 (5) - new combo
02:20:019 (2) - i think too many whistles. try removing this whistle and then
02:20:062 (4) - clap instead?
02:23:062 (2) - ^
02:24:005 (4) - ^ and all other places in song that sound like that :/
02:40:033 (x) - note?
02:40:055 (1) - clap at end
02:44:073 (9) - clap at 02:44:083
03:39:080 - lower volume
03:46:076 (1) - finish at beginning
03:53:062 - new timing section and raise volume a little from before
03:53:062 (1) - finish
04:06:058 (x) - spinner here might be nice?
04:34:076 (x) - note here?
hard
00:44:040 (2) - no whistle, clap at end
00:47:083 (2) - ^
01:48:047 (1) - end at 01:49:076 and lower volume for spinner
02:20:040 (2) - no whistle, clap at end
02:23:083 (2) - ^ (and all other places)
02:25:012 (x) - note?
03:39:080 - lower volume
03:46:076 (1) - finish at beginning
03:53:062 - new timing section and raise volume a little from before
03:53:062 (1) - finish at beginning
star!
Thank you Yes
Topic Starter
Kytoxid wrote:
[All]
Background seems a bit blurry.
MP3 is 6 minutes long. Please cut it down to the part you actually use.
Your easiest difficulty is above 4 stars, consider making an easier difficulty.
Anything longer than 3 minutes gets tedious in my opinion.
[Normal]
Technically fine, but seems a bit slider-heavy as a whole, and felt kinda repetitive after a while.
02:09:090 (1) - This 1/2 BPM section seemed very random to me; the music didn't change in it.
[Hard]
I felt this difficulty was somewhat easy considering the 8.5m score tag on it. Shorten the length?
02:09:090 (1) - Same as on Normal.
[Lunatic]
13m is definitely too high. Shorten the length?
As your hardest difficulty, could be harder.
Have a star.
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Filfilling PM mod request~
LUNATIC
00:29:094 (3) - Beat placement different than HARD and all the other similar notes ? Move this 1 tick earlier and let the slider end at 00:30:265
Others difficulties are very good and fun, played through them several times.
Star for sure. ^.^
LUNATIC
00:29:094 (3) - Beat placement different than HARD and all the other similar notes ? Move this 1 tick earlier and let the slider end at 00:30:265
Others difficulties are very good and fun, played through them several times.
Star for sure. ^.^
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
hard
02 44 837 (7) 02 44 837 to 02 45 265?
03 37 551 (5 6 7) to 03 37 658? (lunatic)
lunatic
00 10 122 (10) 00 10 122 to 00 10 551?(repeat to this slider)
00 49 015 remove?
04 20 087 remove and (1) 04 20 194 to 04 20 837?
02 44 837 (7) 02 44 837 to 02 45 265?
03 37 551 (5 6 7) to 03 37 658? (lunatic)
lunatic
00 10 122 (10) 00 10 122 to 00 10 551?(repeat to this slider)
00 49 015 remove?
04 20 087 remove and (1) 04 20 194 to 04 20 837?
Here's my mod
Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this
[Easy]
No Problems found
[Normal]
01:36:047 (2) - Extend by 1/2 a beat, move the spinner forward by 1/4 beat and shorten by 1/4 beat?
No problems found
[Hard]
03:26:083 - Same suggestion as 01:36:047 (2) [Normal], only I'd probably place a beat here or reverse the slider instead of lengthening it
No problems found
[Lunatic]
03:26:083 (1) - Same suggestion here as [Normal] and [Hard]
No problems found
A good fun looking beatmap. Starred
Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this
[Easy]
No Problems found
[Normal]
01:36:047 (2) - Extend by 1/2 a beat, move the spinner forward by 1/4 beat and shorten by 1/4 beat?
No problems found
[Hard]
03:26:083 - Same suggestion as 01:36:047 (2) [Normal], only I'd probably place a beat here or reverse the slider instead of lengthening it
No problems found
[Lunatic]
03:26:083 (1) - Same suggestion here as [Normal] and [Hard]
No problems found
A good fun looking beatmap. Starred
All good.
Just one thing that worth mentioning, next time you may make an easier hard than this one, in this map, hard and insane are more or less the same to me. :3
Just one thing that worth mentioning, next time you may make an easier hard than this one, in this map, hard and insane are more or less the same to me. :3
Source: HARMONY (album name)
Add to the tags: Alstroemeria Records
Consider adding kiai timing to the last chorus of each difficulty
Easy:
Combo mod:
00:37:337 (3) - add a new combo for the new line of lyrics?
00:51:480 (3) - ^
01:53:622 (1) - remove new combo since I did not see any new of lyrics starting here
Timing section mod:
02:17:50 - unneeded timing section, please remove it
Normal:
Combo mod:
00:33:051 (1) - remove new combo to follow the lyrics
Timing section mod:
02:17:50 - unneeded timing section, please remove it
Hard:
Combo mod:
00:33:051 (1) - remove new combo to follow the lyrics
01:21:908 (1,3) - since there is no slider here, remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 to follow your pattern
03:10:765 (6,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a ew combo to 6 to follow your pattern (if you do this, add a new combo to 03:12:480 (3) also)
Timing section mod:
02:17:50 - unneeded timing section, please remove it
It feels very strange to end the map right before the chorus. I would just map the last chorus too
Lunatic:
Combo mod:
00:29:622 (1,4) - add a new combo to 4 and remove 1's new combo to follow your normal pattern for this section
00:33:051 (1) - remove new combo to follow the lyrics
01:21:908 (1,3) - since there is no slider here, remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 to follow your pattern
02:00:480 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 01:53:622 (1)
03:10:765 (7,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a ew combo to 6 to follow your pattern (if you do this, add a new combo to 03:12:480 (3) also)
Timing section mod:
02:17:50 - unneeded timing section, please remove it
The ending felt abrupt in this difficulty with the map ending when the music reached its climax
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Nice map. Star.
Add to the tags: Alstroemeria Records
Consider adding kiai timing to the last chorus of each difficulty
Easy:
Combo mod:
00:37:337 (3) - add a new combo for the new line of lyrics?
00:51:480 (3) - ^
01:53:622 (1) - remove new combo since I did not see any new of lyrics starting here
Timing section mod:
02:17:50 - unneeded timing section, please remove it
Normal:
Combo mod:
00:33:051 (1) - remove new combo to follow the lyrics
Timing section mod:
02:17:50 - unneeded timing section, please remove it
Hard:
Combo mod:
00:33:051 (1) - remove new combo to follow the lyrics
01:21:908 (1,3) - since there is no slider here, remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 to follow your pattern
03:10:765 (6,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a ew combo to 6 to follow your pattern (if you do this, add a new combo to 03:12:480 (3) also)
Timing section mod:
02:17:50 - unneeded timing section, please remove it
It feels very strange to end the map right before the chorus. I would just map the last chorus too
Lunatic:
Combo mod:
00:29:622 (1,4) - add a new combo to 4 and remove 1's new combo to follow your normal pattern for this section
00:33:051 (1) - remove new combo to follow the lyrics
01:21:908 (1,3) - since there is no slider here, remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 to follow your pattern
02:00:480 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 01:53:622 (1)
03:10:765 (7,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a ew combo to 6 to follow your pattern (if you do this, add a new combo to 03:12:480 (3) also)
Timing section mod:
02:17:50 - unneeded timing section, please remove it
The ending felt abrupt in this difficulty with the map ending when the music reached its climax
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Nice map. Star.