Minor things:- 00:33:194 (3) - This would play better as a stream IMO.
- 01:34:764 (6,7,1) - Adjust the notes such that they are in the same direction as the slider start? Like
this? It looks neater.
- 03:48:543 (5) - Move this note slightly upwards for better circular flow instead of a horizontal pattern. Like
this.
- 05:40:171 (2) - Reverse (Ctrl+G) for better flow.
That's all.