Ayu wrote:

Just here to give my thoughts.

I found some overmaps I kinda disliked, so here they are:

01:35:388 (2,4) - I don't hear anything on these blue ticks, so I don't get why you would add these notes here. <---- No. Without this notes sounds very empty and not rhythmicaly.
02:19:516 (7) - Again, I can't hear anything on this tick. The note seems to be pretty useless anyway. <---- No. Triple sounds much better that 1/2 rhythm.
03:54:225 (5,7) - This even sounds pretty awkward, and this isn't even the only one.<--- Remove only note 5.
04:10:272 (5,7) - Same as above here, it just sounds awkward because there's just nothing on these ticks. <--- 1/2 sounds empty and boring. 1/4 sound mmuch better for this rhythm
04:24:225 (4,6) - Same error as above, again nothing on the blue ticks so please don't let us click them. ^ same
04:59:109 (3,5) - Sounds meh, I wouldn't map the blue ticks here myself. ^ same
05:12:191 (8) - This is pretty funny, because there's nothing on the blue tick you mapped on, while there is on the blue tick 05:11:842. But you didn't map anything here, lol. <---blaaah/ Here all fine. maybe you will be better to listen to music?
06:04:691 (4) - I can't hear anything on the blue tick here. <---- I can. And triple sounds here better thaht 1/2
06:13:063 (2) - Here neither. ^ same

So, except for these I also found some other things listed below.

01:36:348 (1) - Noting this slider. I dislikes this slider, for its form. It's out of shape with the atmosphere of the map itself, and it doesn't really add anything to the music or whatsoever. <---- omg xD this slider is great.
01:47:510 (1) - This one feels a little bit out of place from 01:47:162 (8)
02:45:330 (3,4) - I think it wouldn't be so bad to just stack these under the sliderend of (2)
03:26:580 (1) - This really killed it. If I can recall correctly, I've read somewhere on your userpage or somewhere else w/e, that you're fond of perfect sliders, but this is everything except. You should turn off grid snap and use a hitcircle's approach circle to make it perfectly round. Since you pasted it at 03:29:371 (2) again, it applies for this one too of course. <--- I like this slider forms, and I won't change it.
03:55:708 (6) - I think you could easily improve this by moving it farther away from (5)'s sliderend. <--- Already changed.

The map isn't bad overall, so good luck getting this approved.

Ayu wrote:

Just here to give my thoughts.

I found some overmaps I kinda disliked, so here they are:

01:35:388 (2,4) - I don't hear anything on these blue ticks, so I don't get why you would add these notes here.
02:19:516 (7) - Again, I can't hear anything on this tick. The note seems to be pretty useless anyway.
03:54:225 (5,7) - This even sounds pretty awkward, and this isn't even the only one.
04:10:272 (5,7) - Same as above here, it just sounds awkward because there's just nothing on these ticks.
04:24:225 (4,6) - Same error as above, again nothing on the blue ticks so please don't let us click them.
04:59:109 (3,5) - Sounds meh, I wouldn't map the blue ticks here myself.
05:12:191 (8) - This is pretty funny, because there's nothing on the blue tick you mapped on, while there is on the blue tick
05:11:842. But you didn't map anything here, lol.
06:04:691 (4) - I can't hear anything on the blue tick here.
06:13:063 (2) - Here neither.

05:12:191 (8) - This is pretty funny, because there's nothing on the blue tick you mapped on, while there is on the blue tick
05:11:842. But you didn't map anything here, lol. this part in particular.

04:59:109 (3,5) - Sounds meh, I wouldn't map the blue ticks here myself.

[ J o j o ] wrote:

:3

Ayu wrote:

Can I have my kd kthx

RikiH_ wrote:

Someone should consider rebubbling this...