done everything on my part~ Thanks alot
http://puu.sh/3ez9g.zip

Mod Applier 1.0 wrote:

Deep Blue - Mod Applied as Stated
Pale Blue - Mod Applied on my own way
Pale Rose - Reason for no change on that point
Green - Just comments

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hi random mod

[General]
Hitsound kinda inconsistent in some diff imo ► Well, it'll being fixed through next days... it'll take some time from me. I'm likely doing this at next Saturday.

[Starin']
HP-1 ► Done.
AR+1 ► Done.
OD+1 ► Done.
02:42:964 (2) - ctrl+h? and move to x:456 y:116 ► Done.

[Touchin']
HP-2 ► Done.
AR+1 ► Done.
02:53:552 Add a circle? I think you missed one here ► Added.

[Kissin']
HP-2 ► Done.
AR+1 ► Done.
02:29:351 (9) - Reduce 1 repeat, you put too many ► Done.

[Deep Love]
HP-1 ► Done. (I got surprised how it reduced the maximum score it was 10.6M, now it's 8M)
02:50:023 (1,2,3,1) - This overlap, maybe you can fix it? ► Fixed in part: This is an Insane diff, and I feel these notes flew well... I hope they flow better now than before.

Overall It's a good map ♥ Thanks ^^
--
That's all, sorry for poor mod

I like this song, go for ranked XD

Thank you Very much for the mod, my dear

And don't worry nor regret about poor modding (: it's fine from beginners and your free will is very appreciated ♥ And I'm a beginner modder too (: Just we need improve our skills a bit more each time. Playing and mapping are good ways to do. We could also look at maps we love and see their threads. Ranked maps were once on Pending and received various mods.
I recommend reading this topic about flow. Very interesting and kinda opening my eyes and changing my modding concepts

And that's it. LET'S RANK IT, People

jonathanlfj wrote:

done everything on my part~ Thanks alot
http://puu.sh/3ez9g.zip

Updated !

Starin'

00:40:947 - Not going to start with a finish?
00:57:082 - ^
02:05:653 - You started this kiai with hitsounds. Why did you start adding hitsounds on every beat for the end part of the song?
02:37:922 - Finish?
02:39:939 (1,1) - This blanket is closer than the other blankets.

Touchin'

00:40:947 - Missing a hitsound like Starin'
00:57:082 - ^?
01:00:107 (1) - Kind of wish this was a tad lower to complement the triple, but this is probably inconsistent with your other blankets.
02:05:653 - Finish? Also this doesn't have the same hitsound spam as Starin'. Perhaps the spam was a mistake in starin' or why do you have differing hitsound approaches?
02:37:922 - Finish?

Kissin'

00:04:645 - Not going to hitsound the intro? There are parts that could be accented with a clap here and there. Your parts are missing hitsounds in general. How have people not noticed this?
00:20:779 (1,3) - Whistle or some other hitsound? The beat should be more accented here.
00:26:830 (1,2,3,4) - The gaps between each slider are at different lengths. The gap between 3,4 is especially short. <Would not have noticed this the other night x.x
00:40:947 - My finish suggestions will apply to this difficulty as well.
00:53:300 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Fun pattern.
01:00:359 (8) - Looks and plays better blanketed around 7.
02:06:157 (2,3,4) - Such an imperfect transition. I don't know how to fix it though. >.<
02:21:283 (5,1) - Seems to play best as a single slider. It would mess with your next pattern though. Well not necessarily actually. It depends on how you map it.
02:29:351 (9,1) - A bit too close don't you think?
02:31:619 (2,3,4) - Misleading disguising 1/2th notes in a 1/4th note pattern.
02:35:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Add curves to the sliders? The stream might be able to be touched up, but not entirely sure. Curving the sliders to complement the stream might be enough.
02:45:989 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Good flow here.
02:53:300 (3) - The volume of the ends of this are a tad high for the beat. At least lower the end, because it ends on a blue tick.

Deep Love
Intro lacks hitsounds.

00:06:662 - I just realized that a finish could work here. Add it to the other difficulties as well if you agree.
00:09:435 (6,7,8) - Good pattern choice.
00:13:468 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^
00:14:729 (1,2,3,4) - Unusual but works.
00:17:502 (8,1) - These sliders aren't the same shape. I think a symmetry pattern here would work better.
00:19:771 (7,8) - Is this overlap really necessary?
00:21:788 (1) - Start with clap.
00:30:611 (1,2,3) - Not the best transition. It is satisfactory for lining up the next part though. Not sure if it should be changed.
00:34:140 (9) - End with clap.
00:40:947 - Finishes in the same spots as was suggested in the other difficulties.
00:40:947 (1,2) - Blanket looks imperfect to me. The spacing shows 0.98.
01:13:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Increase spacing to 0.9? I don't like the angle of 3.
01:29:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:33:132 (4,5) - Not the best angle IMO. But my mood to determine for sure whether it should be changed has faded.
02:12:460 (10) - New combo.
02:13:972 (16,17,18) - Inconsistent shape compared to the other triples.
02:24:561 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - >.< I prefer consistent spacing. It's distracting to me, but it may be fine.

I can't mod the last part. I can't concentrate anymore. Good luck.

Hi

Modding here because you requested it :3

[General]
In some diffs you use a whitish color or a light gray one, in kiai time those colors get even more brighter, and may hurt some people's eyes.

[Starin']
Increase AR to 3, AR2 seems slow for me, having a slow AR may cause beginners hit before time.
02:05:653 - 02:17:754 - Your hitsounding is a bit inconsistent in comparison with the other parts, keep using the claps only in 2nd and 4th beat.
02:37:922 (1,1,1,1) - I don't think this NC spam is good, all these four are would fit in one single combo.
02:45:989 (1,1,1,1) - ^Same here.

[Touchin']
01:49:519 - Drag the break here, as in Starin'
02:37:922 (1,1,1,1) - Same as Starin'

[Kissin']
I think AR7 would fit better here, the streams will be a bit easier to read in my opinion, but if you do, increase the AR in Touchin' to 5, for a nice spread.
01:49:519 - Drag the break here.

[Deep Love]
Looks fine, but I have some small complains here, maybe it's just a personal distaste though
00:35:149 (2,3,4) - This and all similar patterns are hard to read and play as they're clustered and somehows break the flow of the map.
00:53:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd unstack the circles from the end of the sliders, I felt them a bit unconfortable while playing
01:49:519 - Drag the break here.
I had some troubles with some streams involving sliders, but I won't say anything there as it may be my lack of skill.
I have to say that I loved the heart stream :3

Edit: Could you fix the tags in my diffs? My name is missing in them >-<

I was a bit short, but this indeed is a good mapset, it's what I could call a "tasty mapset", good job in all diffs, very fun and nice patterns
Just let's wait and gather some mods for my diffs >-<
Good luck o/

hey Alarido here the mods that you requested to me~
btw, I LOVE THIS SONG! <3 GREAT QuQ
okay, here the mods XD

[Muzu]

1. 00:26:073 (59) - d, for the lower vocal sound than (58) and (60). if you use k too there, the sound will be flat.
2. 00:39:183 (3) - change to be d
3. 01:34:645 (45) - d, for the lower vocal sound there. (44) and (46) already use k, if you use k in (45) the sound will be flat. same like 00:26:073 (59) -
   let's make a good pattern here~
   00:26:073 (59) - move to 01:52:040 (7) - and change k if you want.
   01:53:552 (11) - d
   01:53:804 (12) - move to 01:54:056 (12) - and then change to be k
   01:54:309 (13) - change to be d
   01:57:082 (21) - k, to follow the vocal sound
   
   let's make a good pattern again here~ using
   01:58:090 (24) - k
   01:58:846 (26,27) - d k
   01:59:603 (28) - d
   01:59:855 (29) - move to 02:00:107 (29) -
   02:00:863 (31,32) - d k
   02:01:872 (34) - move to 02:02:124 (34) -
   02:02:880 (36,37) - d k

[Oni]

1. 01:16:493 (184) - still low vocal sound there, how about d? d is better than k
2. 02:37:670 (7,8) - how about k D or d D?

hope this map will be ranked soon!!! i will wait >,<

Alarido wrote:

Mod Applier 1.0 wrote:
Deep Blue - Mod Applied as Stated
Pale Blue - Mod Applied on my own way
Pale Rose - Reason for no change on that point
Green - Just comments

TheVileOne wrote:

Starin'

00:40:947 - Not going to start with a finish? ► Added finish, fits well.
00:57:082 - ^ ► ^.
02:05:653 - You started this kiai with hitsounds. Why did you start adding hitsounds on every beat for the end part of the song? ► As a result of remapping, some hitsounds got crucnhed, messy and awkward, so I fixed them, making consistent (e.g., finish as you pointed and claps on the 2nd and 4th white ticks as jonathanlfj suggested before -- with an exception at the prelude, where I made hitsounds more quiet to fit that song part.).
02:37:922 - Finish? ► Added, fits well and consistent with other parts.
02:39:939 (1,1) - This blanket is closer than the other blankets. ► Fixed (:

Touchin'

00:40:947 - Missing a hitsound like Starin' ► Added.
00:57:082 - ^? ► ^ .
01:00:107 (1) - Kind of wish this was a tad lower to complement the triple, but this is probably inconsistent with your other blankets. ► So I checked the rhythm and seems fiting well. On note positioning I'll think about tomorrow (and maybe change later), I need find a way to do it without mess with further patterns.
02:05:653 - Finish? Also this doesn't have the same hitsound spam as Starin'. Perhaps the spam was a mistake in starin' or why do you have differing hitsound approaches? ► You're right. Feel the same explanation on [Starin'] applies here too, so I fixed them.
02:37:922 - Finish? ► Added, fits well and feels consistent.

Kissin'

I'm going to mod the rest tomorrow. I will not be able to give the harder difficulties a proper mod right now.

Thanks for this part, I'll be waiting your remaining mod (and I'll kd when you finish the mod).

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Alarido wrote:

Mod Applier 1.0 wrote:
Deep Blue - Mod Applied as Stated
Pale Blue - Mod Applied on my own way
Pale Rose - Reason for no change on that point
Green - Just comments

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi

Modding here because you requested it :3

[General]
In some diffs you use a whitish color or a light gray one, in kiai time those colors get even more brighter, and may hurt some people's eyes. ► Done. Deleted the white one (it was Combo Color 8) and darkened a bit the gray (Combo Color 7).

[Starin']
Increase AR to 3, AR2 seems slow for me, having a slow AR may cause beginners hit before time. ► Done.
02:05:653 - 02:17:754 - Your hitsounding is a bit inconsistent in comparison with the other parts, keep using the claps only in 2nd and 4th beat. ► Done. I'll follow this clap pattern at all std diffs (jonathanlfj-- my collab partner at [Kissin'] -- gave the same idea in this map and also on Sade - Smooth Operator).
02:37:922 (1,1,1,1) - I don't think this NC spam is good, all these four are would fit in one single combo. ► Done.
02:45:989 (1,1,1,1) - ^Same here. ► Done.

[Touchin']
01:49:519 - Drag the break here, as in Starin' ► Done.
02:37:922 (1,1,1,1) - Same as Starin' ► Done.

[Kissin']
I think AR7 would fit better here, the streams will be a bit easier to read in my opinion, but if you do, increase the AR in Touchin' to 5, for a nice spread. ► Done, changed here and there as you said.
01:49:519 - Drag the break here. ► Done.

[Deep Love]
Looks fine, but I have some small complains here, maybe it's just a personal distaste though
00:35:149 (2,3,4) - This and all similar patterns are hard to read and play as they're clustered and somehows break the flow of the map. ► Changed to well playable forms.
00:53:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd unstack the circles from the end of the sliders, I felt them a bit unconfortable while playing ► Done. Really, I don't like them too.
01:49:519 - Drag the break here. ► Done.
I had some troubles with some streams involving sliders, but I won't say anything there as it may be my lack of skill.
I have to say that I loved the heart stream :3 ► Thanks ♥.

Edit: Could you fix the tags in my diffs? My name is missing in them >-< ► Fixed.

I was a bit short, but this indeed is a good mapset, it's what I could call a "tasty mapset", good job in all diffs, very fun and nice patterns
Just let's wait and gather some mods for my diffs >-<
Good luck o/

Thank you very much, DakeDekaane
For the mod and your diffs ♥

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mingmichael wrote:

hey Alarido here the mods that you requested to me~
btw, I LOVE THIS SONG! <3 GREAT QuQ
okay, here the mods XD

[Muzu]

1. 00:26:073 (59) - d, for the lower vocal sound than (58) and (60). if you use k too there, the sound will be flat. /*I'm following the percusions in this part, you can notice the intensity justifies a kat there :3
2. 00:39:183 (3) - change to be d /*Ok
3. 01:34:645 (45) - d, for the lower vocal sound there. (44) and (46) already use k, if you use k in (45) the sound will be flat. same like 00:26:073 (59) - /*The same :3
   let's make a good pattern here~ /*Ok, all done here :3
   00:26:073 (59) - move to 01:52:040 (7) - and change k if you want.
   01:53:552 (11) - d
   01:53:804 (12) - move to 01:54:056 (12) - and then change to be k
   01:54:309 (13) - change to be d
   01:57:082 (21) - k, to follow the vocal sound
   
   let's make a good pattern again here~ using /*Ok, I liked, done.
   01:58:090 (24) - k
   01:58:846 (26,27) - d k
   01:59:603 (28) - d
   01:59:855 (29) - move to 02:00:107 (29) -
   02:00:863 (31,32) - d k
   02:01:872 (34) - move to 02:02:124 (34) -
   02:02:880 (36,37) - d k

[Oni]

1. 01:16:493 (184) - still low vocal sound there, how about d? d is better than k /*Ok
2. 02:37:670 (7,8) - how about k D or d D? /*Used d D

hope this map will be ranked soon!!! i will wait >,<

Thanks for modding :3
Muzukashii: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=a46cVcLQ
Oni: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=0V12Xs6F

Taiko diffs updated
Standard mods applied

Finished mod.

Mod Applier1.0 wrote:

Deep Blue - Mod Applied as Stated
Pale Blue - Mod Applied on my own way
Pale Rose - Reason for no change on that point
Green - Just comments

TheVileOne wrote:

(...)

Kissin'

00:04:645 - Not going to hitsound the intro? There are parts that could be accented with a clap here and there. Your parts are missing hitsounds in general. How have people not noticed this? ► Fixed hitsounding at all.
00:20:779 (1,3) - Whistle or some other hitsound? The beat should be more accented here. ► Added soft whistles
00:26:830 (1,2,3,4) - The gaps between each slider are at different lengths. The gap between 3,4 is especially short. <Would not have noticed this the other night x.x ► belongs to jonathanlfj part
00:40:947 - My finish suggestions will apply to this difficulty as well. ► Added finish.
00:53:300 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Fun pattern. ♥ Thanks ^^
01:00:359 (8) - Looks and plays better blanketed around 7. ► belongs to jonathanlfj part
02:06:157 (2,3,4) - Such an imperfect transition. I don't know how to fix it though. >.< ► belongs to jonathanlfj part
02:21:283 (5,1) - Seems to play best as a single slider. It would mess with your next pattern though. Well not necessarily actually. It depends on how you map it. ► belongs to jonathanlfj part
02:29:351 (9,1) - A bit too close don't you think? ► Yes, since a repeat was removed from (9) and I don't how fix. The extra repeat does not feels good here. And three hitcircles should a bit more spaced if were placed here due to "tum-tum-tum" strong drums. Thence I'll wait for further suggestions about this.
02:31:619 (2,3,4) - Misleading disguising 1/2th notes in a 1/4th note pattern. ► Changed into a repeating 1/2 repeating slider.
02:35:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Add curves to the sliders? The stream might be able to be touched up, but not entirely sure. Curving the sliders to complement the stream might be enough. ► Changed.
02:45:989 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Good flow here. ♥ Thanks to jonathanlfj ^.^
02:53:300 (3) - The volume of the ends of this are a tad high for the beat. At least lower the end, because it ends on a blue tick. ► belongs to jonathanlfj part

Deep Love
Intro lacks hitsounds. ► Fixed as well.

00:06:662 - I just realized that a finish could work here. Add it to the other difficulties as well if you agree. ► Added.
00:09:435 (6,7,8) - Good pattern choice. ♥ Thanks
00:13:468 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^ ♥ ^
00:14:729 (1,2,3,4) - Unusual but works.
00:17:502 (8,1) - These sliders aren't the same shape. I think a symmetry pattern here would work better. ► Well, I spare symmetry since the remap -- old version was fully symmetrical, but flow was horrible. I'll change under further suggestions if next modders point it and show how to do.
00:19:771 (7,8) - Is this overlap really necessary? ► Fixed, unoverlapped.
00:21:788 (1) - Start with clap. ► Added.
00:30:611 (1,2,3) - Not the best transition. It is satisfactory for lining up the next part though. Not sure if it should be changed. ► Me too... let's wait for more suggestions. In truth, I tried something like a folded 1/1 slider, but flow felt a bit abrupt too.
00:34:140 (9) - End with clap. ► Added.
00:40:947 - Finishes in the same spots as was suggested in the other difficulties. ► Added.
00:40:947 (1,2) - Blanket looks imperfect to me. The spacing shows 0.98. ► Fixed.
01:13:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Increase spacing to 0.9? I don't like the angle of 3. ► Fixed.
01:29:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Inconsistent spacing. ► Fixed.
01:33:132 (4,5) - Not the best angle IMO. But my mood to determine for sure whether it should be changed has faded. ► Fixed a bit by touching only (4), making it land on (5)'s head.
02:12:460 (10) - New combo. ► Added.
02:13:972 (16,17,18) - Inconsistent shape compared to the other triples. ► Fixed.
02:24:561 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - >.< I prefer consistent spacing. It's distracting to me, but it may be fine. ► Fixed the spacing inside the stream.

I can't mod the last part. I can't concentrate anymore. Good luck.

♥ Thank you very much, TheVilleOne !
Fixed and updated my parts.

jonathanlfj, feel free to apply mods on your parts too (:

Alarido wrote:

Kissin'
00:26:830 (1,2,3,4) - The gaps between each slider are at different lengths. The gap between 3,4 is especially short. <Would not have noticed this the other night x.x fixed
01:00:359 (8) - Looks and plays better blanketed around 7. true
02:06:157 (2,3,4) - Such an imperfect transition. I don't know how to fix it though. >.< managed to make it look more pleasing
02:21:283 (5,1) - Seems to play best as a single slider. It would mess with your next pattern though. Well not necessarily actually. It depends on how you map it. i needed a note at 02:21:788 to stress the heavy down beat in the music instead of a slider end
02:45:989 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Good flow here. Thanks
02:53:300 (3) - The volume of the ends of this are a tad high for the beat. At least lower the end, because it ends on a blue tick. lowered to 30%

Very helpful mod thanks!
and Alarido nice sb u got there just noticed it xD
http://puu.sh/3gNBy.zip

jonathanlfj wrote:

and Alarido nice sb u got there just noticed it xD

Thanks, dear <3
SB coded by hand

........................................................................................

► [Kissin'] updated.
► Fixed a little note placement at [Touchin']

C'mom, modders!

Hallo, sorry for dealy ;_;

Starin':
clear :3

Touchin':
no point to keep HP on 2, +1
BG quality is horrible :\
00:58:090 (2) - for better flow you can make something like http://puu.sh/3in0z.jpg

Kissin':
oh... that "beating" in sb is so annoying, consider to remove this
00:20:905 (2,3) - with slider this will play definitely better http://puu.sh/3ingg.jpg especially this is hard diff

Deep Love:
00:27:208 (2,4,6,8,10) - just my note that such start on blue is hated by majority of players, moreover this is considered as jump here but blue don't have any heavy noticed sound
01:13:972 (4,5,6,7) - this rhythm seems little random
02:20:023 (1,2) - this stack seems unnecessary and random after 02:17:502 (7,2,4,6), music wise stack 02:19:771 (6,1) would be better
everything else seems fine

Good Luck!

Mod Applier 1.0 wrote:

Deep Blue ► Fixed as stated.
Green ► My comments.

Sieg wrote:

Hallo, sorry for dealy ;_;

Starin':
clear :3 ♥ Thanks !

Touchin':
no point to keep HP on 2, +1 ► Done.
BG quality is horrible :\ ► Changed.
00:58:090 (2) - for better flow you can make something like http://puu.sh/3in0z.jpg ► Good idea Done.

Kissin':
oh... that "beating" in sb is so annoying, consider to remove this ► Really. Removed that pulsing effect.
00:20:905 (2,3) - with slider this will play definitely better http://puu.sh/3ingg.jpg especially this is hard diff ► too! Done!

Deep Love:
00:27:208 (2,4,6,8,10) - just my note that such start on blue is hated by majority of players, moreover this is considered as jump here but blue don't have any heavy noticed sound ► Removed the notes.
01:13:972 (4,5,6,7) - this rhythm seems little random ► Changed into a better fitting one
02:20:023 (1,2) - this stack seems unnecessary and random after 02:17:502 (7,2,4,6), music wise stack 02:19:771 (6,1) would be better ► Hum, right! Changed too.
everything else seems fine

Good Luck!

And Good Luck for your maps too, Sieg!
Very helpful mod, full quality ♥
Thank you very much ^^

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ja faz um mês que passei por aki...
vo fazer a recheck em breve
nao vi o map re-feito ainda mas tenho boas expectativas

Hey there Alarido! Free mod from me because i love you~
Can't help really much here i think, coz I've mod this map before orz
Anyway, hope this mod helps you

• Starin'

1. 00:18:258 (4) - NC for different beat on song
2. 00:36:914 (1) - End the spinner here? The background music is all faded out at this point
3. 02:49:014 (4) - Make this into a slider that extend to 02:49:519, fit to the song and plays better in my opinion orz

• Touchin'

1. 00:30:359 (1) - If you're following the vocal here, I suggest you to change these two into a note instead. Because the vocal started at 00:30:611 -, and if you're using slider at 00:30:359 -, it doesn't sound really fit actually. Anyway, it's only my opinion orz

• Kissin'

1. For the name SB, you may want to move Jonathanlfj's name image more to the left a bit. The current one is a bit too on the edge and I almost can't recognize the j orz
2. 00:50:275 (7) - Change this into a short triplet stream? just like the one in 00:47:250 (3,4,5) -. Plays better and make it harder, the repeat is kinda too easy for hard imo
3. 00:59:855 (7) - NC here for different beat of song and then remove the NC here 01:01:115 (1) -. The current combo division at this part isn't really fit with the song
4. 01:04:645 (1,2) - Why NC? doesn't really necessary :v
5. 01:27:334 (1) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820856 the addition of notes(please don't mind the placement lol), I think the current one is too easy to play on Hard orz
6. 02:16:493 (7) - NC? different beat
7. 02:51:535 (4) - ctrl + G? This slider is really fit for a jump (especially because of finish hitsound )

• Deep Love

1. 00:17:880 - Add note here? fit for the current song. make it like this for better play http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820872
2. 00:21:788 (1) - Why don't stack with the (8) slider at 216/256?
3. 01:30:359 (7) - NC here to avoid too long combos (15 isn't short lol)

I guess that's all, sorry for the short mod really
Nice map already and Good Luck!

Mod Applier 1.0 wrote:

Deep Blue ► Changed as told.
Pale Blue ► Changed on my own.
Rose ► No change (and why)
Green ► Comments From The Friends
Bold Purple is jonathanlfj collab part (for [Kissin'] diff only)

Let's go!

AnreFM wrote:

Hey there Alarido! Free mod from me because i love you~
Can't help really much here i think, coz I've mod this map before orz
Anyway, hope this mod helps you

• Starin'

1. 00:18:258 (4) - NC for different beat on song ► Done.
2. 00:36:914 (1) - End the spinner here? The background music is all faded out at this point ► Made the spinner ends a bit earlier by 1/2 .
3. 02:49:014 (4) - Make this into a slider that extend to 02:49:519, fit to the song and plays better in my opinion orz ► Done.

• Touchin'

1. 00:30:359 (1) - If you're following the vocal here, I suggest you to change these two into a note instead. Because the vocal started at 00:30:611 -, and if you're using slider at 00:30:359 -, it doesn't sound really fit actually. Anyway, it's only my opinion orz ► No changes because I'm following drums here.

• Kissin'

1. For the name SB, you may want to move Jonathanlfj's name image more to the left a bit. The current one is a bit too on the edge and I almost can't recognize the j orz ► Done.
2. 00:50:275 (7) - Change this into a short triplet stream? just like the one in 00:47:250 (3,4,5) -. Plays better and make it harder, the repeat is kinda too easy for hard imo ► Kept the repeating slider for consistence with 00:49:267 (5). But changed the patterns a bit here.
3. 00:59:855 (7) - NC here for different beat of song and then remove the NC here 01:01:115 (1) -. The current combo division at this part isn't really fit with the song @ jonathanlfj collab part
4. 01:04:645 (1,2) - Why NC? doesn't really necessary :v @ jonathanlfj collab part
5. 01:27:334 (1) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820856 the addition of notes(please don't mind the placement lol), I think the current one is too easy to play on Hard orz ► Added the notes, but made them a star (feels better and harder too)
6. 02:16:493 (7) - NC? different beat @ jonathanlfj collab part
7. 02:51:535 (4) - ctrl + G? This slider is really fit for a jump (especially because of finish hitsound ) @ jonathanlfj collab part

• Deep Love

1. 00:17:880 - Add note here? fit for the current song. make it like this for better play http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820872 ► I added a note, but changed the pattern in order to avoid Highlander-like jumps that song clearly don't suggest.
2. 00:21:788 (1) - Why don't stack with the (8) slider at 216/256? ► Done.
3. 01:30:359 (7) - NC here to avoid too long combos (15 isn't short lol) ► Done.

I guess that's all, sorry for the short mod really
Nice map already and Good Luck!

Ah... your mod is very helpful, buddy

Thanks in advance!
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pimpG wrote:

ja faz um mês que passei por aki...
vo fazer a recheck em breve
nao vi o map re-feito ainda mas tenho boas expectativas

Espero não decepcionar dessa vez, pimp .

E também tenho que procurar mais mods pra Taiko.

Att.

Bem, pimp.... Ainda falta a parte de jonathanlfj dos mods de AnreFM (se ele vai decidir alterar ou não). Talvez não seja necessário alterar nada nas partes d'ele.

Fiz M4M para HelloSCV e ainda nem sinal d'ele.

Sem falar das diffs Taiko. Mandei um mp para [Luanny], se ela souber Taiko...

Pelo menos o Tiger fez um testplay do Oni e disse que ainda precisa de ajustes. Talvez ele venha moddar as diffs.

Bem... Hoje é quinta. Seria bom se eles viessem antes do sábado... Eu queria esse mapa ranked antes de agosto desse ano ._.

srry for the delay
basically did everything, here is the update:
http://puu.sh/3kzke.zip

Updated!

C'mon, Modders! (especially Taiko, Dekaane's diffs needs Taiko mod!)

E pimp, todas as diffs atualizadas. Fique à vontade para fazer o recheck e... espero não decepcioná-lo.

Dois longos meses...

Hi, m4m. I'll try to give you as much valuable advice and don't kill your style

[General]
all fine, but IMO will be better if you start mapping from 00:04:645

[Deep Love]
00:06:409 (1) - here it would be much better if there had two notes instead of a slider. and NC on 00:06:662 rather than 00:06:409. I do focus on it, because you haven't correct sequence of new combo.
00:12:712 (6) - NC
00:14:729 (1) - nice slider, but IMO clear simple slider better :p
00:17:502 (8) - remove second slider point and make a simple slider.
00:21:535 (3) - move on one grid left, for symmetry between patterns
00:30:863 (2) - move on one grid right
00:31:367 (3) - ^ on one grid up
00:36:157 (2) - move on xy 44|200 IMO looks better
01:09:687 - add note, sounds is really good.
01:10:443 - ^
01:11:199 - ^
01:14:729 (6) - 1/2 slider looks much better; reduce slider to 01:14:981 and add one repeat aaand add finish on tail~ sounds is really good
02:26:073 (1) - move NC on previous pattern
02:35:653 - missed note

[Kissin']
01:38:678 (1,2,3) - regular spacing looks much better
01:40:695 (5,6,7) - ^
01:42:712 (1,2,3) - ^

[Touchin']
All diffs of have to start and end the same way.
00:19:267 (2,3) - spacing error
02:50:779 (2,3) - ^
01:09:183 (1,2) - change on slider pls, your variant too hard for normal diff
01:09:939 (3,4) - ^
01:10:695 (5,6) - ^

[Starin']
00:40:947 (1,2) - spacing error
00:42:460 (2,3) - ^
00:42:964 (3,4) - ^
00:50:023 (2,3) - ^
02:06:662 (2,3) - ^

That's all, I hope this can help you.

as m4m







Good luk~

Verlaren wrote:

Hi, m4m. I'll try to give you as much valuable advice and don't kill your style

[General]
all fine, but IMO will be better if you start mapping from 00:04:645 ► Fixed on Deep Love, looks fine at others.

[Deep Love]
00:06:409 (1) - here it would be much better if there had two notes instead of a slider. and NC on 00:06:662 rather than 00:06:409. I do focus on it, because you haven't correct sequence of new combo. ► Done by pattern rearranging on timeline and some on screen too.
00:12:712 (6) - NC ► Added.
00:14:729 (1) - nice slider, but IMO clear simple slider better :p ► Deleted unnecessary dots from all these 4 sliders. I'll keep them as is, waiting for further mods to decide on it.
00:17:502 (8) - remove second slider point and make a simple slider. ► Done.
00:21:535 (3) - move on one grid left, for symmetry between patterns ► Done. ► Done.
00:30:863 (2) - move on one grid right ► Done.
00:31:367 (3) - ^ on one grid up ► Done.
00:36:157 (2) - move on xy 44|200 IMO looks better ► Done.
01:09:687 - add note, sounds is really good. ► Done.
01:10:443 - ^ ► Done.
01:11:199 - ^ ► Done.
01:14:729 (6) - 1/2 slider looks much better; reduce slider to 01:14:981 and add one repeat aaand add finish on tail~ sounds is really good ► True
02:26:073 (1) - move NC on previous pattern ► I couldn't understand
02:35:653 - missed note ► and pattern correctness to Thanks for pointing it ^^ pattern rearranged into a better look too (:

[Kissin']

SPOILER

00:26:830 (1,2,3,4) - this shape looks much better - please wait for jonathanlfj response

01:38:678 (1,2,3) - regular spacing looks much better ► but I did't want destroy the patterns. I've tried you said here, but I regretted, so I kept it, sorry. ► Buuuuut.... The spacing inside the "aparent triplets" was increased a bit.
01:40:695 (5,6,7) - ^ ► ^ ► ^
01:42:712 (1,2,3) - ^ ► ^ ► ^

[Touchin']
All diffs of have to start and end the same way.
00:19:267 (2,3) - spacing error ► spacing with previous note was not fixed because the current blanket looks better here, and it'll not so difficult for beginners imo ► but spacing with next was fixed by changing further patterns.
02:50:779 (2,3) - ^ ► I made Ctrl+G on (2) here.
01:09:183 (1,2) - change on slider pls, your variant too hard for normal diff ► changed.
01:09:939 (3,4) - ^ ► changed.
01:10:695 (5,6) - ^ ► changed.

[Starin']
00:40:947 (1,2) - spacing error ► fixed, even though is minimal
00:42:460 (2,3) - ^ ► ^
00:42:964 (3,4) - ^ ► ^
00:50:023 (2,3) - ^ ► ^
02:06:662 (2,3) - ^ ► ^

That's all, I hope this can help you.

Thank you Verlaren! Good luck for your maps too

HelloSCV wrote:

as m4m

General

1. Taiko BG is unrankable please delete that ► Deleted and replaced with the same BG of [Deep Love].

Starin'

00:23:804 (3) - delete clap on start ► Deleted, this clap was really a mistake.

Touchin'

1. i recommend you to re-arrange NCs, add them every second long white tick, i mean like this http://puu.sh/3lu2N.jpg ► I did my best here, tried follow this NC change pattern with some exceptions due to voice/pattern and so on.

00:56:577 (4) - clap? ► Added.
01:11:704 (1) - move this spinner 01:11:451 - by here ► Done.
02:37:418 (4) - clap ► Added.
02:37:922 (1) - change NC color plz ► Changed.

Kissin'

01:04:645 (4) - how about NC?
01:44:981 (6) - maybe a note with clap here? feels much better ► Added.
02:31:619 - why are you using 0.9x SV? just curious ► Fixed.
02:37:418 (9) - clap ► Added.

Deep Love

00:17:502 (8,9,1) - this pattern can cause confusing for players like 1/4 beat so how about changing DS? ► Fixed/rearranged.
01:34:897 (8) - missed clap on start ► Added.
02:05:653 (1) - why don't you add finish here? ► Added.

Good luk~

Thanks in advance, HelloSCV ! Good luck on your maps, especially Higurashi Moratorium! The song is so awesome, and the 'spell-casting moment' is so Epic *.*

P.S.: The lines I said nothing (at [Kissin'] diff) are the ones jonathanlfj will work on.

Att.

hello

Alarido wrote:

C'mon, Modders! (especially Taiko, Dekaane's diffs needs Taiko mod!)

sorry orz

Oni

00:10:191 - k, light clap
00:18:258 - ^
00:23:048 - ^
00:24:813 - try d?
00:35:401 - k? (if following music)
00:35:905 - d, vocal has lower pitch than previous note
01:30:359 - not d? (following music)

Muzukashii

00:26:073 - d? pitch is lowering here

starin'

02:06:662 (2,3) - quebrou o ds por causa da forma imagino.. não recomendado pra easy
02:45:989 (1) - esse combo tem a mesma cor do anterior. remove nc e adicione de novo

touchin'

00:18:258 (4) - faltando clap
01:09:183 (3,4,5) - faltando finish no começo dos sliders
02:17:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:32:376 (2,3,4,5,6) - não entendi porque usou ritmo mais complexo nessa parte

kissin'

00:20:779 (1) - remove whistle, probably drum sampleset clap with reduced volume would fit better this sounds
01:23:300 (1,1) - rhythm is not apropriate for a hard
01:42:712 (1,2,3,4) - remove the 1st note. its inconsistent to main vocal
02:03:384 (1,2) - remove this notes, the drums at the background are 1/8, sounds weird actually

deep love

00:06:662 (1) - mova o finish para o começo do slider
00:31:619 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - aqui seria mais interessante seguir o vocal a risca imo.
02:17:754 (1,3,5) - faltando finish no começo
02:23:048 (7,8,9) - melhor as notas não encostarem assim
02:27:081 (7,8,9) - ^

conclusão. esta bem melhor que antes!
a única coisa que me chamou a atenção é que a 1a vista a dificuldade kissin pareceu mais difícil que a deep love. pois tem muito mais jumps, imo uma dificuldade insane tem que ter dificuldade superior em tudo.

mais alguns mods e ja da pra chamar um bat
boa sorte

pimpG wrote:

starin'

02:06:662 (2,3) - quebrou o ds por causa da forma imagino.. não recomendado pra easy ► certamente, meu caro. Aqui fiz o melhor que pude (if anyone has better suggestion here, please tell me -- and explain with images plz)
02:45:989 (1) - esse combo tem a mesma cor do anterior. remove nc e adicione de novo ► feito.

touchin'

00:18:258 (4) - faltando clap ► feito.
01:09:183 (3,4,5) - faltando finish no começo dos sliders ► feito.
02:17:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ► idem.
02:32:376 (2,3,4,5,6) - não entendi porque usou ritmo mais complexo nessa parte ► pois é... Removi o (3) e estiquei o (2) até o tick branco. O (2) agora é slider 1/1.

kissin'

00:20:779 (1) - remove whistle, probably drum sampleset clap with reduced volume would fit better this sounds ► removed whistle.
01:23:300 (1,1) - rhythm is not apropriate for a hard ► True. Added sliders in the vain space between the notes.
01:42:712 (1,2,3,4) - remove the 1st note. its inconsistent to main vocal ► removed.
02:03:384 (1,2) - remove this notes, the drums at the background are 1/8, sounds weird actually (*)

deep love

00:06:662 (1) - mova o finish para o começo do slider ► opa! feito.
00:31:619 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - aqui seria mais interessante seguir o vocal a risca imo. ► Fiz algo aqui, mas eu não fiquei muuuito assim, tão contente... pelo menos, ficou melhor que antes e segue melhor as vocais.
02:17:754 (1,3,5) - faltando finish no começo ► feito.
02:23:048 (7,8,9) - melhor as notas não encostarem assim ► feito.
02:27:081 (7,8,9) - ^ ► feito.

conclusão. esta bem melhor que antes!
a única coisa que me chamou a atenção é que a 1a vista a dificuldade kissin pareceu mais difícil que a deep love. pois tem muito mais jumps, imo uma dificuldade insane tem que ter dificuldade superior em tudo.
► pois é, pimp... Posso dizer que devo essa dificuldade extra ao meu caro parceiro de collab.
Se bem que eu consigo passar [Kissin'] tranquilo (com 2~4 misses), mas não consigo passar[Deep Love] .... ainda!. (digo: passar sem HT/NF)
mas vc tem razão. Uma Insane tem que ser uma Insane. Hard, hard; normal, normal.


mais alguns mods e ja da pra chamar um bat ► opa!!! Mas... no meu caso, tem que ser um que também saiba tudo de Taiko, acho que nem todos sabem.
boa sorte

Brigadãããão pimp! Valeu!

Vou pegar mais alguns mods (haja M4M para tal)
Hm...

Light Usagi wrote:

hello /*Hi o/

Oni

00:35:905 - d, vocal has lower pitch than previous note /*Made something else there, d sounds a bit plain there imo

Muzukashii

00:26:073 - d? pitch is lowering here /*The percusions are in the same pitch for those 3 kat

Everything else was fixed. Thanks for modding >-<
Only made changes in Oni
http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=a46cVcLQ

Updated all diffs!

C'mom modders ~ especially Taiko

Enquanto isso, tenho que fazer mais m4m, tenho que trabalhar o normal de Coldplay, refazer às partes de Delirious, remapear o Hard de Sade e, quem sabe um dia, reviver Genesis...

E ao mesmo tempo, atender aos requests da Slow BPM queue...sabe? Parece que tou pegando um gosto por mapear low BPMs...desde que conheci jonathanlfj, ah...

E é isso. Sigo na luta por mais espaço e, quem sabe, vira um BAT ... Não custa nada sonhar, e acho mais fácil virar BAT do que FC Freedom DiVE (coisa que só os deuses como Cookiezi conseguem imo)

Modding for M4M~

[General]
Your tags and source are still broken, by the way. Sword Art Online as source, remove unnecessary tags etc. etc.

[Dekaane's Muzukashii]
00:14:477 (25,26) - swap d and k around, it fits the pattern better

[Dekaane's Oni]
00:09:561 (11,12,13,14,15,16) - try kdkkdk
00:13:594 (27,28,29,30,31,32) - ^
00:17:628 (44,45,46,47,48,49) - ^
00:20:779 (56,57) - use k d to follow the drum

wow Dake you're getting quite good at taiko mapping~
good luck for rank~

Everything done, thanks CQ :3

Oni: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=0V12Xs6F
Muzu: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=a46cVcLQ

DakeDekaane wrote:

Everything done, thanks CQ :3

Oni: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=0V12Xs6F
Muzu: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=a46cVcLQ

Updated

CoroQuetz wrote:

Modding for M4M~

[General]
Your tags and source are still broken, by the way. Sword Art Online as source, remove unnecessary tags etc. etc. ► I can't set 'Sword Art Online' as source because the song is not part of the anime's OST. The video is an AMV too.

Thanks for the mod too (: and...
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C'MON, MODDERS

(and mighty some BATs too)

When I'm in blue, I give things to others. It's done by catharsis, in a try on feel less bad; and those who accept my gifts really make me a bit less sad...in truth, they make me happy -- even though my maps never get ranked.

............................................

"Paralisa com seu olhar
Monalisa,
Seu quase-rir me ilumina tudo ao redor,
minha vida
ai de mim!
Me conduza junto a você
Ou me usa pro seu prazer
Me fascina... Deusa com ar de menina!"
(Jorge Vercillo)

Não sei se isto é por causa da Cida Rosália... Na verdade, acho muito difícil ser por causa dela, já que isso é uma página virada rs...

Apenas poetando aqui, já que ainda não temos tópico "Mensagens Interessantes" no Portuguese, mas... Quem sabe rs...

you don't have to kudos this
offset 6658

okamiratsu wrote:

you don't have to kudos this
offset 6658

Thanks

(Dekaane's diffs keep as is until receive the updated version from him or get authorised to alter the offset)

If it's only the offset, you can fix it for me :p

DakeDekaane wrote:

If it's only the offset, you can fix it for me :p

Done.
Updated (: