at last.
[Colours]
Combo1 : 132,226,234
Combo2 : 230,155,163
Combo3 : 173,222,165
-Bakari- wrote:
yo
[General][Normal]
- Try to enable letterboxes, there's absolutely no reason to keep them disabled. sure, why not.
- I guess you forgot to add tag reconnect.People may look for it, y'know yep~
- Try to use slider tick rate 2, sounds much better and fits with music quite good good idea!
- Colours don't really fit with BG/ What's more bright colours may hurt players' eyes. Consider fading them a bit! nah, I don't agree here. The colors have a beautiful effect in my opinion.
colours[Colours]
Combo1 : 132,226,234
Combo2 : 230,155,163
Combo3 : 173,222,165- Consult a BAT, this BG may be unacceptable for young players. Asked a bunch of BATs and noone saw a problem.
[Hard]
- Try to use Distance Snap x1.2 to avoid overlaps. You use a lot of 1/2 patterns and they look much nerater with DS x1.2. You use a lot of 1/2s and it looks really messy because they're overlapped! Many Easy/Normal diffs work like this, and I like it lol. I dont see a problem.
- 00:09:273 (3) - nazi - consider changing your curvew a bit, so you'll make your flow smoother + it looks a bit neater. sure example
- 00:28:533 (4,5,6) - nazi - straight line here looks a bit awkward after all these curvy sliders, just move (5) a little bit, so your flow will look more consistent! examplei good point, fixed.
Note: if you agree, curve 00:30:014 (1,2) - as well! nah, not this one. It's a new combo, so here starts a new flow- 01:08:533 (3) - that slider sounds a bit confusing because vocals appear in the middle of it. I understand that you wanty to keep it symmetrical, so here's tweo variants how to change it. variant one (slider's shape isn't changed)/ (variant two)better rhythm, but you'll have to change that symmetrical pattern this pattern is focusing on the instruments, not on the vocals. I see your point but I somewhat like to keep it :c
- 01:17:422 (1) - consider avoiding loop sliders, because they may confuse beginners. This is the easiest diff, so you should think about beginners a bit! hm yeah, but I'd like an awesome shape to start the KIAI.
- 01:24:459 (2,4) - angle here looks kinda rough, that'd be great if you make shape smoother. example yup, changed.
- 01:44:829 - drag your break here? Looks like a good idea + it will improve your map visually :V And then, drag end of your break to 01:51:496 - seems good, fixed~
- 02:10:385 - you'd better not to ignore that sound, because it sounds really awkward if you ignore it. Sound becomes louser and stops at big white line. You can try to use slider like you did it at 00:58:903 (1) - . It will fiot with music much better, imo. hm, I find this sound is good to make a break, I wouldn't like mapping it :<
- 02:43:348 - start spinner here and map previous part with curvy and tricky slider. example Spinner start is consistent with the previous one.
- 03:13:718 - 03:30:755 - drag start/end of your breaks top these ticks. It'll look really good! yep~
- 04:21:125 (1) - place a finish. It'd fit with music + it will make end of this map more enjoiyable for players! cool, added~
- Song is relaxing, but AR7 fitw with this diff much better. Anyway, AR7 will also help you to keep diff settings balanced! Try AR7 and if you don't like it -set AR6 back! AR 7 is too fast for me ><
- 01:44:829 - drag your break here? Looks like a good idea + it will improve your map visually :V And then, drag end of your break to 01:51:496 -
Note: do it ONLY if you agree to do the same on [Normal].- 00:23:348 - end spinner here, please! That sounds and looks much better! + object after spinner appears too fast and players have no time to focus on it! Remember, SONG IS RELAXING< so we don't expect something that fast here!
- 00:26:557 (6) - this slider should 1/6 later. It will sound MUCH, MUCH better! All fixed, and fixed some other vocal snapping.
00:35:940 (1,2) - it starts on music and ends on vocal. That sounds pretty bad to me, what about some mixing? that'd fit perfectly here, imo. hmm, okay, changed in another way~
00:55:199 (3) - I'm not sure, but I'd add a new combo here. It'll look awesome + fit with cute sound here. yea, but it'd break my consistency ><
01:03:718 (3) - i guess it's easy to hear that beat at 01:04:088 - what if we'll try to emphasize it? Try to place a red dot on slider exactly at the place where beat appears, it'll look like this. (example is ugly, tho) there is a bunch of drum beats there, no point in emphasizing one imo :3
01:12:236 (2,1) - nazi - try to stack them? Not a big deal, but it'll improve your flow a bit. nope, intentionally done so it's easier to read :>
01:58:533 - have you missed a circle here? Sounds quite empty without it. :< if you place it, it will improve your rhythm consistency! added
02:21:125 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - song is relaxing, so it may annoy players o click that much. Consider adding more sliders to this pattern? it won't hurt your rhythm,anyway. I think this flows awesome ~
02:42:607 (1,1) - try to remove one of these NCs? SLooks like they're not really needed here! yep, right~
03:17:915 (5) - nazi - all your previous sliders in this combo were curved, consider curving this one as well. It'll fit with your flow better + looks cute! example Fixed~
Oops, fixed all unsnapped Sliders o.o10crystalmask01 wrote:
I spotted a few errors I'd like to note:
Normal mode:
Slider at 00:03:348 and 00:04:829 are not snapped.
Hard mode
Sliders at 00:03:348 and 00:04:829 are also not snapped.
Slider at 00:09:273 and 00:10:755 sounds off.
Apart from this, it's a wonderful map!
Hope this helps~!
Irreversible wrote:
ircgl20:58 Irreversible: schöne map
20:58 Konei: danke :<
20:59 Irreversible: lol
21:00 Konei: hngh
21:00 Irreversible: 00:25:570 (4,6) - die 2 slider sehen nicht so schön aus zsm
21:01 Konei: 5 ein bisschen gechanged~
21:01 Irreversible: 00:31:310 (3,4,5) -
21:01 Irreversible: 00:31:310 (3,4,5) - pass es aber ein wenig an, ist nur die grundidee
21:01 Konei: yep
21:01 Irreversible: 00:35:940 (1,2) - spacing change pls es ist zu weit weg (ist es nicht, aber würde besser aussehen)
21:02 Konei: fixed~
21:02 Irreversible: 01:13:224 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) -
21:02 Irreversible: markier alles und verschieb es nach x: 112 y: 100
21:03 Irreversible: 01:18:409 (2) - move to x: x: 184 y: 104
21:03 Irreversible: 01:20:385 (1) - ein paar grids nach unten das ein schöner übergang eingeleitet wird
21:03 Irreversible: 01:27:422 (3) - ein wenig nach oben rechts, sodass ein schöner bogen mit 2 und 4 entsteht
21:04 Irreversible: 01:30:261 (2) - same sugestion as above, also ein wenig näher zum slider schieben
21:04 Irreversible: 01:53:718 (2) - NC
21:04 Irreversible: 01:58:533 (6) - whistle, wegen dem hintergrund
21:05 Irreversible: 02:05:817 (2) - spacing, näher zum slider
21:05 Irreversible: 02:14:829 (4) - vllt verschiebst du den so, dass alle circles + der anfangspunkt vom slider eine linie ergeben
21:05 Irreversible: 02:14:829 (4) - vllt sowas.http://puu.sh/3fGCH.jpg
21:07 Konei: all fixed
21:08 Irreversible: 02:42:607 (1) - schau mal ob das spacing hier gleich ist wie beim circle stream
21:08 Irreversible: 02:47:298 (2) - spacing wieder
21:08 Irreversible: 02:52:607 (2) - es würde noch gut zum song passen, wenn du den hier zu x: 472 y: 180 verschiebst
21:09 Irreversible: 03:02:977 (4) - ? wieso drum
21:09 Irreversible: 03:19:273 (3) - ein wenig nach unten
21:09 Irreversible: 03:21:125 (8) - nach rechts,
21:10 Irreversible: 03:50:385 (4) - hier auch wieder drum.. hier passts aber besser
21:10 Irreversible: 04:16:681 (4) - vielleicht dne so moven das es ein blanket gibt mit dem vorhin?
21:11 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/256249 Itou Kanako - At Last [Normal]]
21:11 Irreversible: 00:14:459 (3) - der wäre bei X: 296 Y: 304 iwie besser platziert, oder halt iwo da
21:11 Konei: kk
21:12 Irreversible: 01:29:273 (1) - symmetrisch pls
21:12 Konei: fixed
21:12 Irreversible: 02:31:866 (5) - wenn du nicht alles umplacen musst wäre der ein wenig weiter oben besser, wegen dem übergang auch
21:13 Konei: fixed~
21:13 Irreversible: that's it
Really? Thanks a bunch :3Andrea wrote:
I'll mod this tomorrow
Lally wrote:
hey <3
[General][Normal]
- ♥
[Hard]
- 00:11:496 (5) - at first look this slider sounds a bit strange to me,why don't you try to finish it at 00:11:866 - sounds much better to me nope the sound ends there.
- 00:21:125 - a cirle before the spinner with a finish will sound good imo cool
- 00:34:459 (5,6,1) - i don't really like how the whislte sound here i don't really understand if it don't fit here: 00:35:940 (1) - or 00:35:570 (6) - my main suggestion is to remove one of it, if it were for me i would remove it at 00:35:570 (6) - but if you try to put a really silet finish at 00:35:940 (1) - it will fit too,so try what is the best for you hm, okay~
- 00:47:051 (6) - by this slider is the same thing that i mentioned before o3o try to finish it at 00:47:422 - it sound much better for me same
- 00:50:385 - to 00:55:940 - try to continue the clap pattern that you started it will sound better i think I have all claps I need, lol.
- 00:58:903 (8) - same again for this slider try to finish it at 00:59:273 - same
- 01:34:088 (4) - i don't think this drum whistle fit here nope, it's in the song.
- 01:58:903 (1) - i think a clap is better here nope, would be inconsistent.
- 01:59:644 (2) - try to replace the clap at slider-start with a whistle would be inconsistent.
- 02:15:940 (4) - same again for this slider finish it at 02:16:310 - same
- 02:17:792 (2,3) - [nazi]spacing here[/nazi] hmhmh, it helps me to use the blanket and it's readable :c
- 02:46:310 (1) - this slider sound strange o.o try to finish it here: 02:47:792 - HUE, fail. Fixed.
- 03:39:644 (1,2) - don't really like this little overlap It's ok
- 04:13:718 (5) - the whistle on reversearrow don't fit really well it's in the song.
really relaxing mapset *.*)/ a staru-chan for you good luck :3
- 00:09:150 - what about to add a circle here? Sure
- 00:21:125 - add a circle with a finish here before the spinner i think will give a better effect *3* Yep
- 01:24:459 (4) - uhm why don't you stack this one with 01:23:348 (1) - ? because it's a jump xD
- 03:50:385 (4) - drum whistle :c whyy because it's in the song :>
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eveless wrote:
[general]
add "yaoi""nitro+chiral""bl" in tags? added all~
[Hard]
01:10:014 (3,4) - Anti-flow for me, I'd like to do it like this sure
01:32:236 (1) - ^Same, yep
01:40:014 (2,3,4) - Too crowded imo, Can you make them a bit more far? yep
03:16:496 (2) - Incorrect position, use 1/4 or 1/12 then hear it carefully, you can found that it should be put in 03:16:496. oops, fixed~
14:50 Konei: miya, can I ask you a quick question?
14:51 Miya: yup? :o
14:51 Konei: eveless is a bit unsure about a part on my map sounding off
14:51 *Konei is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/252393 Itou Kanako - At Last [Hard]]
14:51 Konei: 03:16:125 (2) - this slider
14:52 Konei: could you check it?
14:52 Miya: hmm wait a minute
14:52 Konei: sure
14:55 Miya: yup
14:56 Miya: its off
14:56 Konei: alright
14:56 Miya: its 1/6 not 1/4
14:56 Konei: so when does it start?
14:57 Miya: 03:16:187 -
14:57 Miya: and 03:16:310 - are 1/6
14:57 Konei: end on 03:16:434 ?
14:57 Miya: but back to 1/4 here 03:16:496 -
14:57 Konei: ehh, Im a bit confused now xD
14:59 Miya: a picture may help >< https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826854
15:00 Konei: oh okay owo
15:00 Konei: thanks a lot
15:00 Miya: this song is a mix 1/4 and 1/6 ew, a pain xD
15:00 Miya: careful~
15:01 Konei: I know right orz
Ewwww, I'm sorry ;__;eveless wrote:
So why didnt you believe me ;_;
/me back to play mmorpg