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Aya Ishihara - Reset (SMT: Devil Survivor Opening)

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Vexed_old
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yeahyeahyeahhh
Hmm.. maybe 1 less on the tick? Though I was able to pass it with how it is. I mean, it is insane lol.
Remco32
? - up to you
(?) - not entirely sure myself


General
Make the ending of the storyboard a little later, so you fade out AFTER you see the logo at the end of the movie.

I like this ending more then the current:

All with whistle hitsounds, except the last one, which has a finish hitsound.

Easy
00:38:56 (2) - spacing

Normal
None

Hard
None

Insane
00:29:57 (1,1,1,1) - I prefer a more ordered way of note placing, instead of just randomly trowing them somewhere - ?
Topic Starter
cyanberryio

Remco32 wrote:

[size=85]
General
Make the ending of the storyboard a little later, so you fade out AFTER you see the logo at the end of the movie. Hmm... I made the statusbar fade at the end. But I want to see what happens when someone's death clock runs out to make a fail section, and a pass section where it goes back up.

I like this ending more then the current:

All with whistle hitsounds, except the last one, which has a finish hitsound. You mean remove the spinner? :\ I need to break ties, especially on Easy/Normal.

Easy
00:38:56 (2) - spacing fixed, the lazy way

Insane
00:29:57 (1,1,1,1) - I prefer a more ordered way of note placing, instead of just randomly trowing them somewhere - ? changed, and feck the spacing to the next note :P
Thanks for the mod+star. :)
Vexed_old
I tried to leave this one specific comment you made alone, but it's been eating away at me ever since.
"Where are your, I.E. my ranked maps"?
Well there is no specific reason why i don't have any really. Examples of Good quality maps follow.
One map everyone knows about. The last 2, no one does. I have alot of maps no one has ever seen.
It was just this one comment i felt i needed to sort out.

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http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?t=12591
SPOILER
http://www.mediafire.com/file/wyjmzjngqnd/Men At Work - Land Down Under.osz
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http://www.mediafire.com/file/ojghzznmhj2/Lady GaGa - PokerFace.osz
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
00:23:57 (5) - the whistle at the end sounds a bit off
any particular reason you used no claps at all?


[Normal]
00:41:55 (3,4,5) - hitsound the beginning of each


[Hard]
00:36:76 (1,4,8) - hitsound the start ;o
just as a side note i think it would sound better if you used a few more hitsounds, since you seem to be using them properly ;o


[Insane]
00:36:76 (2) - ;o
00:50:70 (3,4) - just a thought, but if youre going to do an epic slowdown at the end these are kinda disrupting it

starr'd
Topic Starter
cyanberryio

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
00:23:57 (5) - the whistle at the end sounds a bit off The whole slider does... Do I have to use 1/8th again? :'(
any particular reason you used no claps at all? Well, I clapped on a certain sound I heard in the music, and I started on Normal. So swapped some out and added in some.


[Normal]
00:41:55 (3,4,5) - hitsound the beginning of each Hmm... I hope I did this right.


[Hard]
00:36:76 (1,4,8) - hitsound the start ;o Used the sounds sounds as in Normal, hopefully good. ^^
just as a side note i think it would sound better if you used a few more hitsounds, since you seem to be using them properly ;o thanks...(taking this as a compliment) I never thought I was was good. But added some more


[Insane]
00:36:76 (2) - ;o ._.
00:50:70 (3,4) - just a thought, but if youre going to do an epic slowdown at the end these are kinda disrupting it Removed

starr'd thanks!
Thanks again for mod+BAT star. :D
Sleep Powder
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whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed Modding go!

Osz. File Check (Done)

SPOILER
Video: Yes
Custom Skin: Yes
[Current] Size: 6.61 MB / 20.00 MB
Source: Yes
Tags: No (Please add in the Tags in all difficulties.)

[Easy] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 100.100 / 800 ms (I keep getting hits about 6 ms early. Try 794 ms and see if that works.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.30
Distance Snap Average: x1.0
[Current] Objects: 67 ( 49 Circles / 17 Sliders / 1 Spinner )
[Current] Max Combo: 117
[Current] Max Score: 115,182
[Current] Star Rating: 2.00
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv. 3
[Current] Circle Size: Lv. 1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv. 3

00:29:57 (1,1,1,1) - Could be a bit confusing but it might not be that bad. (To reduce confusing the new players, its optional that you can use two sliders for this part.)
00:51:59 (1,2,3) - This could be a bit confusing for a new player. Maybe turning the first two notes into a slider would help? (Only a suggestion)

Notes: Clean and simple. It should be fine for new players, but just make sure those two sections are not too confusing.

[Normal] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 100.100 / 800 ms (I keep getting hits about 6 ms early. Try 794 ms and see if that works.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.60
Distance Snap Average: x1.0
[Current] Objects: 92 ( 67 Circles / 24 Sliders / 1 Spinner )
[Current] Max Combo: 160
[Current] Max Score: 297,080
[Current] Star Rating: 3.75
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv. 5
[Current] Circle Size: Lv. 1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv. 5

00:39:76 (6,7,1) - Slight oddity with the spacing inbetween.

Notes: Cleanly mapped as well. Just that one very small error to check into. That's all. 8-)

[Hard] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 100.100 / 800 ms (I keep getting hits about 6 ms early. Try 794 ms and see if that works.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.90
Distance Snap Average: x1.0
[Current] Objects: 138 ( 91 Circles / 46 Sliders / 1 Spinner )
[Current] Max Combo: 217
[Current] Max Score: 755,926
[Current] Star Rating: 4.78
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv. 7
[Current] Circle Size: Lv. 2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv. 7

-No Appearent Errors-

Notes: Nothing wrong with this map so far. Lookes cleanly mapped.

[Insane] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 100.100 / 800 ms (I keep getting hits about 6 ms early. Try 794 ms and see if that works.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 2.60
Distance Snap Average: x0.9
[Current] Objects: 164 ( 95 Circles / 67 Sliders / 1 Spinner )
[Current] Max Combo: 244
[Current] Max Score: 1,194,540
[Current] Star Rating: 5.00
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv. 8
[Current] Circle Size: Lv. 3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv. 9

00:11:73 (6,7) - Isn't (7) supposed to be closer to (6)?

Notes: Just one minor error I see so far. The rest of the map should be fine.

Overall: The map is well made overall. Very few errors and nicely done story board. I'll drop my star in then.
Topic Starter
cyanberryio
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ignorethis
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Topic Starter
cyanberryio

ignorethis wrote:

<Normal>
00:19:67 (4,5,6) - Triplets are not allowed in Normal, change into a slider.
They're fine.

<Hard>
00:40:95 (1) - Overlapped.
Fixed.

Creative SBing ;) Star'd. Thanks!
Thanks again for mod+star!
alvisto
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alvisto
INSANE
00:35:559 - add a whistle ? Because a whistle in early part that doesn't get followed is weird to me
00:51:143 - Since all your ending sounds similar in all the difficulties, why not make this one more special ? Add a note 1/4 after each note. Maybe delay the spinner by 2 ticks and add a whistle beat at 00:52:941.
Topic Starter
cyanberryio

alvisto wrote:

HARD
00:12:632 - lol, I have nothing to pick on, so I pick on small trivial stuff.... The alignment is not straight here, or do you intend to make it that way ? Purposely

INSANE
00:35:559 - add a whistle ? Because a whistle in early part that doesn't get followed is weird to me Added.
00:51:143 - Since all your ending sounds similar in all the difficulties, why not make this one more special ? Add a note 1/4 after each note. Maybe delay the spinner by 2 ticks and add a whistle beat at 00:52:941. K

Good map ! Star ! Thanks!
Thanks again for mod+star!
Soaprman
Everything plays well and looks fine.

The storyboard and kiai stars are well done, too!
mm201
Sweet map. Starred.

Discussed some of this on IRC, but posting for completeness.

Timing:
  1. Offset: BPM
  2. 807: 100.150
  3. 8,002: 100.150
  4. 40,334: 100.150
  5. 46,348: 100.150
Any chance of finding a better mp3? This one has a very poor samplerate and all sorts of skips and pops all over the place. (The timing sections here reflect that.)

The video is causing serious performance issues on my machine. Lower the complexity/bitrate if you can.

The tick rate on Insane was something really low. It works much better if all difficulties have a tick rate of 2 or even 4.

Hard:
  1. 00:44:70 (2,3,4) - Works better if you have two 1/3s here instead.
Insane:
  1. 00:43:95 (10) - New Combo.
Rest is perfect
Vexed_old

MetalMario201 wrote:

Sweet map. Starred.

Discussed some of this on IRC, but posting for completeness.

Timing:
  1. Offset: BPM
  2. 807: 100.150
  3. 8,002: 100.150
  4. 40,334: 100.150
  5. 46,348: 100.150
Any chance of finding a better mp3? This one has a very poor samplerate and all sorts of skips and pops all over the place. (The timing sections here reflect that.)

The video is causing serious performance issues on my machine. Lower the complexity/bitrate if you can.

The tick rate on Insane was something really low. It works much better if all difficulties have a tick rate of 2 or even 4.

Hard:
  1. 00:44:70 (2,3,4) - Works better if you have two 1/3s here instead.
Insane:
  1. 00:43:95 (10) - New Combo.
Rest is perfect
Sorry. I have to say something here.
In MetalMarios defence, his signature says, treat his mod posts as suggestions only. On to the next point. Absolutely do not change the BPM or OFFSET again unless a BAT says to. I just think it would be kind of a bad idea to do so.
The biggest thing is BPM. That should surely not be changed at this point. Even if it were to be changed by a BAT. I can Darn well tell you it 100% would not be changed to that.

I think the Mp3 is poor, unfortunately.
Topic Starter
cyanberryio

MetalMario201 wrote:

Sweet map. Starred.

Discussed some of this on IRC, but posting for completeness.

Timing:
  1. Offset: BPM
  2. 807: 100.150
  3. 8,002: 100.150
  4. 40,334: 100.150
  5. 46,348: 100.150
Yes, as Vexed said, I'll wait for a BAT. Sorry... Or just maybe BAT can confirm these or use them as a guideline. :)

Any chance of finding a better mp3? This one has a very poor samplerate and all sorts of skips and pops all over the place. (The timing sections here reflect that.)
It's a direct rip(sort of, yay for CamStudio)from the game. The emulator was going 100% all the time. ;) Sadly I don't know the software to cut the full length using the BPM. Or does Audacity have this hidden somewhere?

The video is causing serious performance issues on my machine. Lower the complexity/bitrate if you can.
._. Sadly I don't know what that is. It used to be 256x192, but it lagged at the beginning and took a while to start, so I used AnyVideoConvertor to expand it. u.u

The tick rate on Insane was something really low. It works much better if all difficulties have a tick rate of 2 or even 4.
Fixed.

Hard:
  1. 00:44:70 (2,3,4) - Works better if you have two 1/3s here instead.
Alright, I guess

Insane:
  1. 00:43:95 (10) - New Combo.
Alright.

Rest is perfect
Thanks for mod+star!

And before anyone says anything about the Kiai Timing guideline.

peppy wrote:

READ THIS: All guidelines are exactly that: GUIDELINES. They are NOT rules and may be broken in special cases. If you are wanting to break a guideline, ask yourself only this: Does what I'm doing make sense? Is it more fun to play like this compared to if i had to stick to the guidelines? If you answer yes to both these questions then it is probably OK.
Starrodkirby86

Can you align the Accuracy % with the pie, please? ^^

Also, the timing I did feel to be odd in some way. I played better when the offset was -10, but...I haven't done anything comprehensive. I thought it might have been the .mp3. I'll look around. >A<

Other than that, I didn't feel to be many other problems. I'm getting a bit exhausted as it's late...but whatever.
KatanAnime
great map :P star
Breeze
Nce map and SB
star!
minyeob
[Easy]
00:51:59 (1,2,3) - I think this part is hard to beginners.(Timing is little hard to notice =) )

I have a suggestion.

00:51:59 (1) - 1/4 beat later(To white tick)
00:52:04 (2) - 1/2 beat later(To white tick)
00:52:49 (3) - 3/4 beat later(To white tick)
00:53:54 (1) - This spinner should be started from 53:28 ( ).

Cool map! Starred
Topic Starter
cyanberryio

minyeob wrote:

[Easy]
00:51:59 (1,2,3) - I think this part is hard to beginners.(Timing is little hard to notice =) )

I have a suggestion.

00:51:59 (1) - 1/4 beat later(To white tick)
00:52:04 (2) - 1/2 beat later(To white tick)
00:52:49 (3) - 3/4 beat later(To white tick)
00:53:54 (1) - This spinner should be started from 53:28 ( ).
I know how this fits, but I think changing it to a slider is the better solution.

Cool map! Starred Thanks!
Thanks again for mod+star.
Starrodkirby86
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Mafiamaster
Wow, this is great~ Nice SB

Normal~
00:04:39 (7) - It's not much but stack on the fading 3. ;_;
Topic Starter
cyanberryio

Mafiamaster wrote:

Wow, this is great~ Nice SB Thanks! :D

Normal~
00:04:39 (7) - It's not much but stack on the fading 3. ;_;
Moved the 3 instead(symmetrical now).
Haha, at least you tried. ;) Kudos for the effort. :P

Thanks for mod(sort of, lol)+star. :D

Whoops, missed kirby's post. >_>

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

I've been looking around...only other source I can find it ripping from the Atlus trailer... dun really want to have to change it

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZzNhVB41Dk0 good find ;)

The volume's horrible on this. ==; I'm sure it can amplified a bit up, but what do you think? I can take care of whatever, as long as you just give me the A-OK, haha. Don't waste your time, I think I can do it myself. :P (EDIT IN: ON second thought >_>)

I'm also going to check the timing on this. Be right back. yay
It isn't TOO noticeable is it? D: (the jumpiness/bad audio)
Ryuukun
I have no problems with this map.
zwlda
Starred for awsomesauce :)
Gens
Timing's kinda weird... I actually found MM201's timing pretty accurate (Maybe a minor offset adjustment but bleh). It's pretty complicated for me to time this...
Also, Vexed, don't talk like that without even trying the timing he suggested first... I think MetalMario is a good timer. (I am assuming you didn't try it, because it really looks like it)

That, or get a better mp3, of course. I suppose this is NOT the mp3 before the one Starrod gave, so... I better wait abit more.

If you do not change the timing though, it IS noticeable in-game. Sounds like offset's too early and BPM too slow.

Aside from that, excellent map.
Mystearica
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Topic Starter
cyanberryio

Mystearica wrote:

You should consider making a skin for the spinner to fit the rest of your stuff. I wouldn't really know how to make one that fits. u.u

[Easy]

00:52:94 (1) - This spinner could be removed, instead you can end at 00:55:945 by adding notes/fading them out. Alternatively you can just end your spinner here if you really want to keep it, but don't forget the note above. (This goes for Normal and Hard as well since they have the same spinner) I need the spinner there, IMO. [Easy] is very easy to SS, so this is a tiebreaker.

[Hard]

00:44:99 (3) - Spacing is wrong here, just stack it onto 4 and it'll be alright. Ha, oops, that was the part MM201 told me to place on 1/3. I forgot about it when I resnapped. ><
Thanks for the mod+star! :D
GbL
Nice map. :D
Star.
0_o
Normal
00:45:14 (6,7,8) - I dunno about 1/4 stacks in Normals, maybe consider making it a repeat slider instead?
00:48:44 (5,6,7) - ^

Insane
00:54:59 (4) - I don't really like patterns like this, doesn't flow well imo
00:55:19 (4) - ^

cool sb, *
fartownik
[Hard]
SPOILER
00:12:745 (9) - Move 1 tick down.

[Insane]
SPOILER
00:53:54 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This section sounds really weird. Maybe add more whistles?

~Starry
Alace
Rechecker is coming
<Hard>
00:44:74 (2,3) - I suggest don`t use 1/3 snap here
Add a single note on 00:44:485 IMO

btw you really eed a image for spinner

star
Topic Starter
cyanberryio

fartownik wrote:

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:12:745 (9) - Move 1 tick down.
This was purposely done.

[Insane]
SPOILER
00:53:54 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This section sounds really weird. Maybe add more whistles?
tried, hope I didn't overdo it.

~Starry

Alace wrote:

Rechecker is coming
<Hard>
00:44:74 (2,3) - I suggest don`t use 1/3 snap here Yeah, MM suggested this, I don't know why. >_>
Add a single note on 00:44:485 IMO sure, done

btw you really eed a image for spinner suggestions? .-.

star
btw, 0_o, I like it those patterns ;p
kino77
Great job~
Jeffro
[Easy]
00:15:14 (2,3,4) - I don't like 3 whistles here.
00:17:54 (2,3,4) - ^
00:22:94 (4) - Whistle appropriate here :)
00:27:14 (5) - ^

Thats it. Awesome map!

Starred for justice!
v2b
offset 735 feels better for me
nice map
star :)
DJPop
Just suggestion :D

~Easy~
00:52:94 (1) - remove spinner, then...
00:51:59 (1) - extend repeat 1 time
00:53:545 - add spinner
00:55:945 - end spinner here with hitfinish

~Normal~
00:52:94 (1) - remove spinner, then...
00:52:945 - add note
00:53:245 - add note or not, up2u
00:53:545 - add spinner
00:55:945 - end spinner here with hitfinish

~Hard~
Same as Normal.

~Insane~
Fine.


+Star
Topic Starter
cyanberryio

v2b wrote:

offset 735 feels better for me
nice map
star :)
Thanks, and I trust your offset a bit. (Although it may be my UO, it sounds early) A BAT will come soon, and check. Thanks for the mod+star!

DJPop wrote:

Just suggestion :D

~Easy~
00:52:94 (1) - remove spinner, then...
00:51:59 (1) - extend repeat 1 time
00:53:545 - add spinner
00:55:945 - end spinner here with hitfinish

~Normal~
00:52:94 (1) - remove spinner, then...
00:52:945 - add note
00:53:245 - add note or not, up2u
00:53:545 - add spinner
00:55:945 - end spinner here with hitfinish

~Hard~
Same as Normal.

~Insane~
Fine.


+Star
All done, and thank you for showing me why it should be a finish sound, all changes done. Thanks for the mod+star!
rust45
The mapping fine but easy and normal weren't snapped to the timeline, and just in case resnap the other diffs.

* and *
arien666
Fixed on IRC
SPOILER
[Easy]
Fine :3

[Normal]
00:20:83(2) - Move unti bothl (1)-(2)'s distance and (2)-(3)'s distance are same[Don't use grid snap on this work]
00:29:53(1) - Move 1 grid up
00:31:93(1) - Move 1 grid down

[Hard]
00:46:03(1) - Move 1 grid up

[Insane]
00:04:78(2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
00:05:38(4) - ^

Good map XD
I hope it will be ranked XD

Star this :3
Kytoxid
[Easy]
Pretty nice.

[Normal]
00:10:93 (1) - From this note on, I'd say it's better for Normal to follow the vocal line, since it's much more intuitive for the extra notes. Would take a lot of remapping though, so this is very optional.
00:20:53 (1) - Move it a bit farther for distance snapping.

[Hard]
00:01:03 (1) - Link every 2 triplet sections with a beat (like on Insane) so that you get sections of 7 instead of 3, since they follow the music better and feel smoother while the stacks/sliders still keep it easier than Insane.
00:37:93 (4,5,6,7,8) - Shift these around a bit so that they're more "square". Random thing I noticed, lol.

[Insane]
Looks fine.
anonymous_old
w00t-w00t!~ Modded in less than 5 minutes.

Easy
SPOILER

No visible faults.

Normal
SPOILER

00:30:96 (1) : Set the timing to 1/8, then make this beat go back by one tick.

Hard
SPOILER

00:15:88 : Add a beat here.
00:34:785 : Add a beat here.

Insane
SPOILER

00:10:78 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) : This whole section doesn't fit well with the music.
Kitsunemimi
o.o Why is this thing +51...
anonymous_old

Harris73 wrote:

o.o Why is this thing +51...
how rude.
Hitoshirenu Shourai
Drop Brutal and you'll get a bubble.

Edit: Cloudy.
RemmyX25
Very nicely done. I like the skin a lot.

Consider this ranked.
AngelHoney
nice map~
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