1. BB's Insane (4,99 stars, 365 notes)
2. Easy (1,07 stars, 95 notes)
3. Hard (4,63 stars, 231 notes)
4. Normal (2,83 stars, 146 notes)

Azer wrote:

The timing is fine.

AnimeStyle wrote:

Azer wrote:

The timing is fine.

I hope so :/

1. 00:04:216 (4) - If you want a prefect square move it to x=208 y=312.
2. 00:28:966 (1) - The note is partially hidden by the slider and it's not very pretty. Move it to x=312 y=232?
3. 00:34:966 (1) - Finish?
4. 01:01:966 (5,1) - Bad distance snapping between them.
5. 01:05:716 (2,3) - A lot of modder would said to you that the stacked note are a little bit hard for beginner player but since you use them a lot in your diff.... Well, do as you want.
6. 01:15:841 (3) - It's out of the screen. Move it away.
7. 01:16:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Seems a little bit randomly placed. Try making some pattern. For the five first note you can do someting like this:
   
   GROSSE IMAGE N°1

   
   for example. (Like you did at 01:55:966 (1,2,3,4,1))
8. 01:23:716 (2) - Move it's last slider point to x=28 y=112 for the blanket.
9. 01:27:466 (2) - CTRL+G?

1. 00:01:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - They nearly are on the same circle. Try to do this better.
   
   GROSSE IMAGE n°2

   
2. 00:21:466 (5) - Move it one grid left for a perfect square.
3. 00:34:966 (1) - I think you can map this part instead of putting a spinner. But you can let the other one.
4. 01:22:966 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too many finish. You don't have those in the other diff.
5. 01:25:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as 00:01:966. And out a NC on the 5 or remove the one at 00:01:966 for consistency.

1. AR+1 or even +2. Clearly!
2. 00:13:966 (1,2,3,4,5) - Example of crowded note like i said. Use a DS of at least x1 in all the diff. Otherwise you have all these useless overlapping. Your SV is already small enough like this for a Hard.
3. 00:24:841 (3,4,5,1) - You have a big problem here. Either you move 3 away form the other or you move 4 1/2 beat earlier but otherwise this is unrankable.
4. 00:27:466 (3) - It's really weird how you alternate jump and anti-jump. The rules is they are supposed to match with the music. If the music stay the same, don't change the DS.
5. 00:37:966 (1) - CTRL+G?
6. 01:06:091 (4,5,6) - Too many claps.
7. 01:14:528 (2,4) - they overlap.
8. 01:29:716 (3,4,5,6) - Too crowded.
9. 01:46:591 (4,1) - Small overlap.
10. 01:49:966 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Too crowded.
11. 01:54:091 (4,5,6,7) - Swap the position of 4 and 5 the make 6 and 7 further form the center than they are. You'll have a progressive jump. Each note is further away than the previous one.
12. 01:57:278 (1,2) - Doesn't play very well.
13. 02:00:278 (1,2) - ^
14. 02:01:966 - well, i can see that you ran out of idea here (and maybe a little before). The big slider are useless. Keep them foor the end like you did in the normal diff. The notes get too repetitve and the whole is a little bit too loud.
15. I really think you should rework on this diff. Either take a higher DS or a higher SV. The higher SV would be better imo but it's far more work than taking a higher DS. But don't delete your diff, there are still a lot of good idea in it. ^^

rezoons wrote:

Hi ,

Mod from my queue:

Feeling when i played the map:
*Easy/Normal: Very good. They are pleasant to play and the placement is pretty good. And i like your hitsounds even they are a little bit too much in some place.
*Hard: Mixed. The low AR combined with some anti-jump make isn't good to play. There are a lot of moment in your diff when the notes are really close to each other and it's making it hard to read with the low AR. And i can guess than you completly ran out of idea of pattern at the end of your diff. XD
I think this diff have some potential but still need some work on.

Mod:
[Easy]

1. 00:04:216 (4) - If you want a prefect square move it to x=208 y=312. - fixed
2. 00:28:966 (1) - The note is partially hidden by the slider and it's not very pretty. Move it to x=312 y=232? - fixed
3. 00:34:966 (1) - Finish? - fixed
4. 01:01:966 (5,1) - Bad distance snapping between them. - fixed
5. 01:05:716 (2,3) - A lot of modder would said to you that the stacked note are a little bit hard for beginner player but since you use them a lot in your diff.... Well, do as you want. - i remind myself, as i began to play osu, it doesn't was difficult for when the notes was stacked, but just when they had enough time between them
6. 01:15:841 (3) - It's out of the screen. Move it away. - fixed
7. 01:16:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Seems a little bit randomly placed. Try making some pattern. For the five first note you can do someting like this:
   
   GROSSE IMAGE N°1

   
   for example. (Like you did at 01:55:966 (1,2,3,4,1)) - fixed
8. 01:23:716 (2) - Move it's last slider point to x=28 y=112 for the blanket. - fixed, but other placement
9. 01:27:466 (2) - CTRL+G?

- fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:01:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - They nearly are on the same circle. Try to do this better. - fixed
   
   GROSSE IMAGE n°2

   
2. 00:21:466 (5) - Move it one grid left for a perfect square. - fixed
3. 00:34:966 (1) - I think you can map this part instead of putting a spinner. But you can let the other one. - I wait on further modding ;3, let's see what the others say, but i want to let the spinners
4. 01:22:966 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too many finish. You don't have those in the other diff. - changed the hitsounds of the sliders to clap
5. 01:25:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as 00:01:966. And out a NC on the 5 or remove the one at 00:01:966 for consistency.

- fixed, but used other paterns

[Hard]

1. AR+1 or even +2. Clearly! - fixed
2. 00:13:966 (1,2,3,4,5) - Example of crowded note like i said. Use a DS of at least x1 in all the diff. Otherwise you have all these useless overlapping. Your SV is already small enough like this for a Hard. - I used 1,0x, you don't like overlapping, but this doesn't mean that everybody don't like it <_<
3. 00:24:841 (3,4,5,1) - You have a big problem here. Either you move 3 away form the other or you move 4 1/2 beat earlier but otherwise this is unrankable. - fixed, i placed 4 earlier , but I really DON'T understand why this shoul be unrankable
4. 00:27:466 (3) - It's really weird how you alternate jump and anti-jump. The rules is they are supposed to match with the music. If the music stay the same, don't change the DS. - fixed
5. 00:37:966 (1) - CTRL+G? - fixed
6. 01:06:091 (4,5,6) - Too many claps. - I like it so
7. 01:14:528 (2,4) - they overlap. - I can't change DS you said,so they have to overlap ;P
8. 01:29:716 (3,4,5,6) - Too crowded. - fixed
9. 01:46:591 (4,1) - Small overlap. - fixed
10. 01:49:966 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Too crowded. - you really hate overlapping, don't you?
11. 01:54:091 (4,5,6,7) - Swap the position of 4 and 5 the make 6 and 7 further form the center than they are. You'll have a progressive jump. Each note is further away than the previous one. - fixed
12. 01:57:278 (1,2) - Doesn't play very well. - not imp
13. 02:00:278 (1,2) - ^
14. 02:01:966 - well, i can see that you ran out of idea here (and maybe a little before). The big slider are useless. Keep them foor the end like you did in the normal diff. The notes get too repetitve and the whole is a little bit too loud. - I made it lower, the sliders at 02:01:966 are there because of 00:34:966, at both times, a sythesizer can be heard in the background
15. I really think you should rework on this diff. Either take a higher DS or a higher SV. The higher SV would be better imo but it's far more work than taking a higher DS. But don't delete your diff, there are still a lot of good idea in it. ^^

- If I'm honest, I'm really disagree with changing DS or SV, imp this fits to hard, I really hate that many people make insanes, and say there were hard, today many diffs aren't really hard anymore, they're insane
A orginally hard should be betwenn 3,75 and 4,5 Stars NOT 5,00 <_<

~Good Luck~

AnimeStyle wrote:

Mod:
01:05:716 (2,3) - A lot of modder would said to you that the stacked note are a little bit hard for beginner player but since you use them a lot in your diff.... Well, do as you want. - i remind myself, as i began to play osu, it doesn't was difficult for when the notes was stacked, but just when they had enough time between them

Me too. But i know a lot of modder say that so, since i'm the first mod, i thought that i should tell you this.

I used 1,0x, you don't like overlapping, but this doesn't mean that everybody don't like it <_<

Well, it's true that i prefer map without too much overlapping but i would say that, thinking now about it, everything i said was based with your map with the low AR so maybe in increasing it, it doesn't feel that crowded anymore. Besides, all i said was just suggestion. It's your own beatmap so do as you want ^^.

00:24:841 (3,4,5,1) - You have a big problem here. Either you move 3 away form the other or you move 4 1/2 beat earlier but otherwise this is unrankable. - fixed, i placed 4 earlier , but I really DON'T understand why this shoul be unrankable

Well, maybe i wrote too fast. It's just that you have the same position for 3 and 4 than for 5 and 1 but the time gap between 3 and 4 is diffrent from the one between 5 and 1. It's pretty confusing but maybe now with the higher AR it's not anymore. In fact i've recently seen a map ranked with the same thing (but with AR8 XD).

If I'm honest, I'm really disagree with changing DS or SV, imp this fits to hard, I really hate that many people make insanes, and say there were hard, today many diffs aren't really hard anymore, they're insane

I didn't tell you to make insane but increasing the DS or the SV to avoid the overlapping XD so if you like them don't change anything. Don't worry your map is a Hard and in fact increasing the DS or the SV by 0.1 wouldn't have changed it.

A orginally hard should be betwenn 3,75 and 4,5 Stars NOT 5,00 <_<

Well, the Star system sucks. So it's not a very good indication for this.

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hey :3

[General]
I would use less volume, the hit sounds are very loud ;/ - the beginning and at the end it was defnitly too loud , I made it lower
I believe the kiai would fit better at 01:31:966 ~ 01:55:966 instead. - If you heard the originally version of the song, you would set the kiai like me, it's the moment with the most epicness imp XD

[Easy]
That's alright besides that 02:13:966 (3) - can't you place this somewhere else? :c - I changed the placement of (2) , now it's in the middle of the endslider :3

[Normal]
Nothing to see. - Yeha XD

[Hard]
00:24:841 (3,4,5) - Bad beat spacing :c Hard to read. - i love tricky things XD
02:13:966 (1) - Make something else. I don't like this :C - changed it comletly XD


/star - Thanks :3
Good luck

1. 00:03:466 (3) - remove finish

1. 02:13:966 (3) - you can try other shape for this slider

1. 01:55:591 - lost this rhythm i think not well

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

Hi ! Here is my mod. From your PM in-game.
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-General-
✔ Okay.
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-Easy-

1. 00:03:466 (3) - remove finish

- i need it for consistency
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-Normal-

1. 02:13:966 (3) - you can try other shape for this slider

- you're right, I change the shape so that it fits
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-Hard-

1. 01:55:591 - lost this rhythm i think not well

- this is the same rhythm as before :/
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only can find those, hope can help you.
I think maybe you can make a Insane for this map . - KiyoshiX101 will make an Insane GD ;3
Good luck to you~

Gloria Guard wrote:

[General]

I think soft-sliderslide add is better imo..
because it's spoil the mood of the song

- i added it (again) XD

[Easy]

01:04:966 ~ 01:28:216 This part sound really big! because this part hear really quiet.
i recommend sound volume 40~50%. down imo

- you're right, i fixed this

[Normal]

00:06:079 (2,3) Umm this slider pattern shape more improve imo. - fixed, i changed like your pattern

SPOILER

01:04:966 ~ 01:28:216 easy diff same

- fixed

[Hard]

01:51:466 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) You don't overlap notes please.. this overlap playing really confuse. - fixed
You increase this part spacing 1.2x please.
01:52:966 (1,2,3) (1) repeat slider why (2),(3) repeat sliders overlap?.. It is interfere with playing.- fixed

Mystyk wrote:

Hi! Your requested mod :3

General:
I feel like that kiai part should be actually 00:52:966 (1) - 01:04:966 (1) I don't understand why you put the kiai on a slow part.
then also add kiai here 01:43:966 (1) - 01:55:966 (1) - if you want to know why look above, i changed the kiai to your suggestion

Easy:
00:06:466 (2) - I think a longer reverse slider would fit better - http://puu.sh/3BS0H.jpg - because of the melody, it actually feels weird while playing, so the place between these sliders 00:06:466 (2,1) - feel empty, but if you made that reverse slider longer, it wouldn't be empty, but it would still fit the music, and as I can see, you did it similarly here - 00:24:466 (3)
00:09:466 (2) - ^
00:12:466 (2) - ^
01:12:466 (2,3) - remove (2) and put (3) earlier, and make it longer, like this - http://puu.sh/3BSdi.jpg - it fits the melody very well
01:15:466 (2,3) - same here ^

Actually this is a very nice difficulty, good job.
Thanks :3 I fixed all

Normal:
00:05:716 (2) - this should be a simple slider and not a reverse slider, it would fit better to the melody, but like that this 00:06:278 - feels too empty, so maybe you could try mapping this differently, for example: http://puu.sh/3BSxG.jpg or maybe just add a hit circle? - i added a circle
00:08:716 (3) - ^ ^
00:11:716 (2) - ^ ^
00:53:716 (3,6,3,6) - these claps sound kind of odd or unfitting, maybe you could try using something else, something that is softer (like a soft whistle or..etc.) - I'm really disagree
01:06:091 (4,4) - don't use clap here, it's too loud, and this is a silent part in the music - fixed
01:23:341 (2,3,2,3) - same about the claps, you could also give some curve to these sliders maybe? it might look nicer, just like this - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864537 - your idea was great, looks much better now
01:44:716 (3,6) - not really a good idea to stack these, try to place them in another way, this is an example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864544 - also fixed, but in another way
01:47:716 (3,6) - same as above ^ try to think of something else ^
01:51:466 (1) - what about ctrl+G on this slider? so that the flow will be better, look at this - http://puu.sh/3BUdb.jpg - fixed
01:56:716 (3,4) - I already mentioned this before, it's the same as - 00:05:716 (2) - all fixed like above
01:59:716 (3,4) - ^ ^
02:02:716 (3,4) - ^ ^
02:04:966 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this is too much for a Normal, and if you listen to the melody, it doesn't need so many sliders, I think you shold do it like you did previously - fixed

Hard:
00:06:466 (3,4) - I think you should follow the melody more, because it actually feels weird to play this, something like this - http://puu.sh/3BUEc.jpg - fixed
00:13:966 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should improve this pattern, I personally don't like little overlaps, but aside from that 00:15:091 (4) - doesn't look so nice, so at least try to change the place of that one (if you don't want to change all of them)- fixed
00:15:841 (1,2,3,4) - I repeat what I mentioned above, try to improve the pattern, and improve the flow too, it is not so nice to go to (3) from (2) and then go back to (4) which is at the same spot, so, something like this could work too? - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864853 - it's just an example, but I think it might improve flow - fixed, used youre suggestion
00:21:091 (4) - this is a bit confusing, because the melody is actually on 00:20:903 - so maybe try replacing (4)? and you start following the melody here anyway 00:21:278 (1,2) - so it would fit- fixed
00:23:153 (2) - add hit circle? it would fit the melody - would fit, but doesnt't sounds good
00:26:341 (2) - ctrl+G for better flow (and good distance)- fixed
00:28:403 (5,6,1) - I think you should change this, simply to make a nicer pattern and also because (4) leads in the opposite direction, so if you changed the pattern, it would flow better, for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864861 - fixed
00:34:966 (1,1) - I think you should remove the whistles, they don't fit, you used a kind of "drum" or whatever before, so try to change the whistle
also, according to the beat the reverse slider should be something like this - http://puu.sh/3BYzf.jpg - so it should have the reverse arrow on the white tick 1/2 after where it is now, but of course if you did that, you should change this 00:37:966 (1) - too - the voulme was too high, i lowered it
00:52:966 (1) - add new combo after the spinner - some wayne stuff, but okay
00:52:966 (1,2,3) - this kind of pattern would have a better flow, since (3) would lead into (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864873- fixed
00:59:341 (2,3,4) - this would flow better and it looks nicer too - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864876- fixed
01:00:841 (2,3) - this little jump is weird, it feels forced just to keep symmetry, so you should try to think of a better way to place these, and there are many objects near each other, so it would be better if you placed them in another way- fixed
01:06:091 (4,5,6) - remove clap from these, they sound weird, also, I don't know why you placed 3 objects, because the song has a long melody, and I think 3 objects sound unfitting, so you should make one long slider- added a custom clap
01:09:091 (4,5,6) - same as above ^ both hitsounds and too many objects - ^
01:13:403 (6) - according to the melody there should be only a simple slider, and not a reverse slider - you're listened wrong to the melody
01:13:403 (6,3) - use something else instead of the claps, like soft whistle or..etc. - claps sounds different now XD
01:23:903 (3,6) - ^ ;P
01:29:716 (3,4) - it's weird that you suddenly start (4) on the other side, so it's confusing, and again, you seem to do that because of symmetry, so I would suggest you to try something else, for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864908 - though, for this, you'll slightly have to change these 01:28:966 (1,2,3) - mhh changed but i didn't used your suggest, would looks bad with the slider before :C
01:43:966 (1) - add new combo after spinner- wayne D:
01:46:591 (4) - I would replace this for better flow, and because it is quite far from (1), but you used distance snap, so it looks weird that the distance is not near 1.00 between (4) and (1), you could try placing it somewhere in the red section - http://puu.sh/3BZH1.jpg - mhh i'm disagree
01:53:341 (2,3) - I think this would work better, since (1) leads upwards, but you placed (2,3) down - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864927 - changed like your suggest
02:09:466 (5,7) - very small thing, but it would look nicer if you placed these a little bit further from each other - beause your mod is great, okay XD
02:15:466 (5,6) - don't overlap these
02:15:841 (6) - why is this a long slider? I think 1/2 would fit better for the melody (well if you don't change the previous things, at least make this a better blanket 02:15:841 (6,7) - ) - changed patern

I hope it was useful, good luck!

mathi747 wrote:

Hi~

Hard:
Feels a bit undermaped tbh
00:10:966 (1,3) - those sliders sound weird imo - sounds like every slider on this map
00:34:966 (1,1) - well not sure if this 2 big sliders are the best idea for this part maybe you can change them - fit to the synth in the back
00:59:341 (2,3) - imo this overlap dont look good - but i think it does
00:25:403 (4) - this is very personal but how about using 1.5 spacing with this circle - why should i do this
02:10:966 - maybe this is too loud, how about lowering by 5% or 10% - would bring inconsistency to the presilder

Normal:
Looks good for me but i feel like ar too high for such a slow map and i dont know you but im not fan of small circles so how about ar-1 and cs+1 - i don't think so, the map would look messy with CS+1

Easy:
Looks good for me too but generally easy goes with od 2 or even 1 - fixed

Sorry poor mod a bit rushed
Good luck!

Krah wrote:

Hi =)
Random mod


[General]

- Ok


[Easy]

- 00:16:966 (1,2) - *nazi* y=248 for harmonize the distance snapping. - okay, okay XD
- 00:58:216 (4) - It would be better if your slider curves up insted of curving down - jup
- 01:05:716 (2) - Please avoid stack for beginner. - .___. , i changed it, because a few modder said this already, i know this by myself, but imp it's so a stupid suggest
- 01:13:966 (1) -This can be really confused for a beginner. Make instead a circle slider ? - no, not a circle, changed the slider shape :3
- 02:10:966 (2,3) - NC for both of this notes. - jup


[Normal]

- 00:33:466 (3,4,5,6) - I really think you can make a better pattern with this notes. - how about a suggestion? XD
- 00:34:966 (1) - Map this instead of just do a slider ? - no, fits to the synth :3
- 00:57:466 (4) - x=372,y=40 for harmonize the distance snapping - you're such a nazi modder, but well , okay fixed XD
- 01:01:966 (5) - Ctrl+g - yes :3
- 01:06:091 (4) - This slider is offscreen and really limit on a 4:3 screen :s Fix this - fixed
- 02:10:966 (2,3) - NC for both of this notes- jep


[Hard]

- 00:14:716 (3) - Ctrl+g
- 00:15:466 (5) - Untack this ? - no, i like it how it is, sry :/
- 00:23:341 (2) - Ctrl+g - jep :3
- 00:59:716 (3) - ^ - jep :3
- 01:52:403 (4) - There is no need here for a repeat slider. Make instead a simple slider of 1beat. - no way, sounds much better how it is
- 01:57:841 (2) - Ctrl+g - fixed
- 02:00:841 (2) - ^ - fixed


Good luck for rank =)

backstep wrote:

Mod as your request (Quick check i need some rest now, it started mod 1:35 PM)

General

I'm hitsound modder, so i don't mod about your style arrange notes.

Easy

00:53:716 (2) - Normal Clap pattern i feel weird, i suggest remove ALL CLAPS then add whistle at start slider (It's look better)
00:55:216 (4) - ^
00:56:716 (2) - ^
00:58:216 (4) - ^
00:59:716 (2) - ^
01:01:216 (4) - ^
01:44:716 (2) - ^
01:46:216 (4) - ^
01:47:716 (2) - ^
01:49:216 (4) - ^
01:50:716 (2) - ^
01:52:216 (4) - ^

It sounds really bad whistle instead of clap,i'm really disagree

Normal

- Suggestion like Easy diff - same as above, ab big NO

00:53:716 (3) - Normal Clap pattern i feel weird, i suggest remove ALL CLAPS then add whistle at start slider (It's look better)
00:55:216 (6) - ^
00:56:716 (3) - ^
00:58:216 (6) - ^
00:58:966 (1) - Add whistle at the end of slider.
01:00:466 (3) - ^
01:44:716 (3) - Normal Clap pattern i feel weird, i suggest remove ALL CLAPS then add whistle at start slider (It's look better)
01:46:216 (6) - ^
01:47:716 (3) - ^
01:49:216 (6) - ^
01:49:966 (1) - End of slider add whistle.
01:51:466 (1) - ^

Hard

You kidding me? .___.

00:52:966 (1) - Add whistle at end of slider.
00:54:466 (3) - ^
00:56:716 (3) - Whistle.
00:58:216 (6) - Add Whistle at start of slider.
00:59:716 (3) - ^
01:00:841 (2) - Add Whistle at end of slider.
01:43:966 (1) - ^
01:45:466 (3) - ^
01:46:966 (1) - ^
01:49:216 (4) - Add Whistle at start of slider.
01:50:716 (3) - Add whistle.
01:52:216 (3) - ^
02:16:216 (7,8) - Swap this note ? (It's look easy to guess it.) - the only useful suggest

I hate "TRANCE" but this is i can do, good luck