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Thunderstorm
437 posts
Joined May 2009
Thunderstorm
Some suggestions

[Easy]
00:08:084 (1) - make it symmetrical?

[Normal]
AR OD -1?

[GGu's hard]
nothing major

[Insane]
Still can't understand why in songs w/ high bpm is so much broken spacing.


No kd
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter
뭐 이리 잘만드세요 다들

General

  1. BG 바꾸시는걸 추천. BG는 수위가 높으면 안되요 ! 가령 피 색깔이라던가..
  2. 동영상이 BG랑 비율이 약간 틀리네요 지금 사이즈는 800x448임. 800x450 추천드림
  3. Artist에 있는 Horizon이랑 Tags에 있는 Horizon 중복. sound horizon 삭제를 추천.

Easy

  1. 00:33:322 (1) - 초보자들이 과연 이걸 칠 수 있을지가 의문임. 이건 어떠심? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758265
    코드 ! 나머지들도 디스턴스 알맞게 이동시킴.
    SPOILER
    324,288,33322,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,248,33654,2,0,P|264:208|244:160,2,79.9999999999999,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    184,212,34651,2,0,P|212:104|320:132,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
    332,204,35979,6,0,P|396:244|476:208,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    484,136,36975,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    408,160,37307,2,0,L|396:320,1,160
    324,356,38304,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    316,276,38636,1,4,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:38:636 (2) - 소리 바뀜 뉴콤 추천
  3. 00:56:070 (3) - 소리 급상승. 뉴콤 추천
  4. 00:59:888 (1) - 머리에 피닛? 00:49:262 (1) 이거처럼.
  5. 01:05:202 (1) - 소리에 다운비트가 좀 있네요. 5/4박 슬라이더로 처리하시는게 어떠심? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758268
    01:06:530 (1) - 만약 고치셨으면 여기 Ctrl + G
    01:07:859 (3) - 이쪽도
    위에 3개 몽땅 합친코드임
    SPOILER
    368,180,65202,6,0,B|384:128|344:92|344:92|288:92|252:48,1,200
    184,148,66530,6,0,P|116:112|48:148,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    116,192,67526,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    48,236,67859,2,0,P|116:272|184:236,1,160

Normal

  1. 00:38:636 (1,2,1,2) - 소리에 비해서 밋밋하네요. 슬라이더로 재미를 좀 주시는건 어떠심? http://puu.sh/2UlyE.jpg
  2. 01:27:119 (1) - 노말이니까 말할께요. 이쪽에 서클하나 추가하시고 스피너를 01:27:285 이쪽으로 미시는건 어떠심? http://puu.sh/2UlEn.jpg

GGu's Hard


  • 음 나머지는 다 괜찮은데 점프처리가 약간 아쉽네요.
  1. AR -1. SV에 정말 안 어울리는 AR임. 그렇게 어렵지도 않구요.
  2. 00:25:020 (4) - 소리가 갑자기 바뀌니 점프처리를 추천드릴께요 가령 x:103, y:317로 이동이라던가.
  3. 00:30:334 (4) - 여기도 마찬가지. x:30, y:209로 이동 추천
  4. 00:50:424 (1) - x:120, y:256

Insane

  1. OD +1. 저 같으면 이 비피엠과 난이도에 플레이어들에게 쉽게 100퍼를 주지는 않을꺼임.
  2. Stack Leniency 3이 더 좋은거같아요. 거의 다 노트들이 겹쳐져있어서.
  3. 00:06:591 (5,1,2,3,4) - 박자가 약간 부자연스럽네요. 이건 어떠심? http://puu.sh/2UlW8.jpg 1~5번 참조
  4. 00:40:629 (1) - 1/1슬라로 길이 늘리시는게 좋을듯 음이 대충 거기서 끝나는거 같음 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758289
  5. 00:43:784 (1) - 머리 피닛
  6. 01:01:716 (3) - Ctrl + G? 동선이 약간 이상함
왠만한 매퍼들보다 잘 찍으시네요 :) 랭크 힘내시길 ;)
MineC24
1,072 posts
Joined May 2010
MineC24
모딩 리퀘스트~

Easy
00:25:352 (1) ~ 00:34:651 (3) - 이지난이도 치고는 비트가 빽빽하게 들어간 느낌...
중간중간 긴 슬라이더를 넣어서 조금 더 쉽게 만드는게 좋아 보여요.
00:55:572 (2) - 00:54:575 (1) 하고 애매하게 Blanket 된 느낌... 약간 이동

Normal
개인적으로, AR - 1

00:30:666 (1) - 이 긴 슬라이더 말고, 일반적인 슬라이더(1 리버스) 조합으로 비트를 쪼개는게 더 좋아보이는... (00:33:322 (1) - 이 패턴처럼..)
00:37:639 (4) - x:160 y:120 으로 이동하는게 더 좋아보여요

GGu's Hard
00:14:062 (3) - 슬라이더 끝에 있는 피니시 제거
00:46:273 (1) - 궅이 NC를 넣을 필요는 없을 것 같아요..

Insane
HP Drain 8 은 너무 어려운... :o

00:14:063 (1) - NC 제거
00:14:395 (3) - 피니시 제거

이 난이도는 굳이 건드릴게 없는... :D

잘만드셨네요~ :)
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
Hi.

[General]
  1. Disable letterboxing during breaks. It doesn't make any sense since song has a video and has no breaks at all!
  2. You forgot to add Wit Studio in tags, you use their animation, after all.
[Easy]
  1. No. No. And NO. You shouldn't use any slowdowns/speed ups at easiest diffs here. This song is fast 18-+ BPM and it has 1/1 rhythm, so it's already too hard for beginners and [Normal] diff players. Don't make it unplayable, [Easy] should be easy and [Normal] should be playable. that's why I am strobgly against ANY velocity changes.
  2. 00:31:662 (2,3,4,1,2) - don't place them too colse. Beginners might mistakenly click on other note. [ur=http://puu.sh/2Vb7Q.jpg]lsee? there's too many notes][/url]
    Note: same happens to some others patterns 00:41:126 (1,2,3,4) - 00:43:783 (1,2,3,4) -
  3. 00:39:964 (1) - I guess you should remove this new combo, it feels off your pattern and seems quite messy.
  4. 00:51:089 (2) - try to finish this slider at 00:51:587 - to keep consistent 1/1 rhythm here. It will fit with background music and make dff more playable for beginners.
    Note: same 01:01:715 (2) - here. (fslider should end at 01:02:213)
  5. 00:54:575 (1,2,1) - that pattern feels quite off vocals, I'd recommend you to re-arrange patterns a bit.
    Note: it's all about keeping 1/1 rhythm here!
    example
  6. 01:06:032 - that empy space may stress beginners a lot. What's more, there's an unused green line that may confuse modders a bit. try to place here some objects and remove that green line, please.
[Normal]
  1. No. No. And NO. You shouldn't use any slowdowns/speed ups at easiest diffs here. This song is fast 18-+ BPM and it has 1/1 rhythm, so it's already too hard for beginners and [Normal] diff players. Don't make it unplayable, [Easy] should be easy and [Normal] should be playable. that's why I am strobgly against ANY velocity changes.
  2. Consider increasing HP Drain by one tick to keep diff settings more balanced.
  3. 00:01:941 (5) - I'd finish that slider 1/2 later (at 00:02:439 ) it'll make rhythm more consistent and it will fit with background music much better.
  4. 00:42:621 (1,2) - nazi - try to rotate that slider a bit, to make a blanket with 00:42:289 (3). It'll look like this.
  5. 00:50:424 (3) - nazi - its tail is too close to (2), so players might mistakenly click it. Not a big problem, but looks a little bit messy, imo. Consider re-arranging that pattern a bit.
    Note: 01:01:050 (3) - same happens here.
[GGu's Hard]
  1. Try to do HP Drain +1 to get a better balanced diff. it makes map much more interesting for players
  2. I don't think that x0.5 SV multiplier is needed, it seems kinda too slow and too unexpected for a [Hard] diff. This is not an [Insane], remember?

    Diff is quite cute and well-constructed, but slowdowns make it less..uh..enjoyable.
[Insane]
  1. 00:30:584 (10,1) - nazi - well.. shape of this slider isn't really readable because part of its is overlapped with stream. Try to avoid it if it is possible.

    Pretty nice diff.
I can't say that map is bad, but it needs some work on [Easy] and [Normal].
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck.
Dive
57 posts
Joined October 2010
Dive
nice map nice song
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
OMG! This map is just too perfect. I can't find anything to suggest.
Even though I have questions about a certain pattern, I always find the answer.

Have a Star~
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
hey

General
- Delete "horizon" from tags. It's already in the Artist :P

- Your bg is a little too big. Please recompress it so it's under 1mb. (Right now, it's 1.62mb)

Easy
00:25:352 (1) to 00:34:651 (3) - the claps in this section feel a bit overwhelming imo. More like, I feel that the transition from the quiet part to here is a bit big. I suggest replace the claps with a lighter hitsound or just delete them I guess. I'd probably go for a Soft whistle.

Normal
00:25:352 (1) - same as Easy. I would avoid these Claps for this section

GGu's Hard
00:02:439 (1) - Delete NC, i didn't catch the point of this single combo
00:03:767 (4,1) - Reverse this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781578 this matches the instruments much better imo
00:25:352 (1) - Refer to Easy's mod. Opening up this part with claps seems a little too sudden and loud
01:07:526 (4,1) - Reverse this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781586

Insane
00:02:772 (1) - the whistles are kinda loud in this section.. :o
00:07:753 (1,2,3,4) - hmm I'd curve this stream the other way http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781593 the direction/transition is rather awkward and disturbs the oval flow imo
00:25:353 (1) - same issue as Easy
01:06:531 (1) - gah whistles too loud again xD
The directionality in some places felt a bit awkward while playing but otherwise pretty nice diff

Love your soft-finish3 xDD & clean map!
Good luck <3
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
Hi there :3

General
  1. Offset is a bit early. +5ms please.
  2. Increase the overal volume by 10%, 60% its just too small. The loud voice of music, really overlap the hitsound because of this ><
Easy
  1. 00:13:398 (1) - Reduce this soft finish volume. It's still really loud with 50% volume, 40% will do.
  2. 00:17:383 (2) - ^ at slider start.
  3. 00:20:039 (1) - ^
  4. 00:22:696 (2) - ^
  5. 00:45:277 (4) - Add finish sound at this slider start for consistencies of finish rhythm?
  6. 00:50:923 (2) - This slider should start on 1/2 rhythm earlier, since the vocal is start on that spot. You follow the vocal at this slider end 00:49:262 (1) - , you better make this slider start follow the vocal too. But take caution, that finish sounds will be too loud here. Don't add finish sounds at slider start.
  7. 00:56:070 (3) - Unnesecary NC imo, still on same rhythm and same stanza. Just remove this NC.
  8. 01:01:715 (2) - Same with 00:50:923 (2) -
  9. 01:11:844 (1,3) - Ugh, please, don't do overlap at easy diff. It will surprise a lot of beginner. Try another pattern please.
Normal
  1. Well, lower the soft finish sounds 3 volume is apply to this diff too.
  2. 00:22:696 (1) - I think you forget a finish at this slider start.
Hard
  1. Soft finish sounds 3 should be lowered on this diff too.
  2. Omg, those normal whistle sounds 1 is really loud, which makes the song doesnt good to hear. Lower all that whistle sounds volume please D:
Insane
  1. Soft finish sounds 3 should be lowered on this diff too.
  2. Same with hard, those normal whistle 1 volume should also be lowered too.
  3. 01:26:626 (2,3,4) - Oh god, i hate 1/4 jump, i very don't like this. But if you still want to use this i suggest to make shape like this for better flow http://puu.sh/381m5.jpg
Nothing much to say, it's really a great map. Insane was fun to play, but meh that 1/4 jump ><
Everything is nice and clean, gap is good too. But i think this map need more mod before bubble.
Call me back after 2 more mod :3
jieusieu
460 posts
Joined March 2011
jieusieu
[ggu's hard]
00:19:209 (3) - 슬라이더 아래로 1칸 내리고 가운데 뼈대 오른쪽 1칸.
다 잘 감싸졌는데 얘만 졸라 스파이같음
00:34:983 (2,3) - 슬라가 더 이쁠거같음, 꼬리는 위로 하는게?
01:25:625 (2) - 꼬리 좀만 내리기 ㄱㄱ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/793547
(3)을 왼쪽으로 향하게 해주는것도 나쁘지 않을듯

[insane]
00:35:150 (3) - 좀 애매한 장소에 있는데... 좀 위로 올리시거나 내리시는걸 추천
01:26:622 (2,3,4) - 거리를 좀 더 주는게 좋을것 같아요 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/793582

굳럭
Gloria Guard
2,273 posts
Joined May 2011
Gloria Guard
도와주러 왔습니다 ~ ^^/

[General]

태그에 opening 넣어주세요


[Easy]

00:39:969 (2,3,4) 음.. 제 개인적인 생각입니다만.. 이 세개 노트패턴을 이등변 삼각형으로
만들면 더 좋을것 같아요.
SPOILER
01:15:169 (1,2,3) 2번 노트로 인해서 3번슬라이더 이어지는 흐름이 안좋네요. 저는 이 패턴흐름을 추천합니다
SPOILER
01:22:143 (4,2) 나지, 조금 애매하지만 오버랩된것 같습니다.. 1그리드 내려주는게 좋다고 생각합니다
01:27:124 여기에 노트넣는것은 어떤가요? 여기서 드럼소리가 크게 들리는것 같네요


[Normal]

00:31:418 (1,2,3) 3번 모양 blanket이 조금 애매하네요.. 1번처럼 감싸주는것을 좀더 확실하게 하는게 좋을것 같아요
01:05:207 (1,2) 음.. 커브방향을 바꿔주시면 더 좋은 흐름이 될것같아요.
SPOILER


[GGu's Hard]

00:01:946 (3) 1그리드 업. 패턴 모양을 정확한 삼각형 모양이 좋을 것 같아요
01:00:890 (4) 의도한것은 이해합니다. 하지만 저는 디스턴스를 일정하게 하는게 더 흐름에 좋고
플레이 할때도 좋을 것 같다고 생각합니다


[Insane]

00:06:761 (1,2) 음.. 저는 대칭 모양이 이상하다고 생각합니다.. 1번을 복사하셔서 2번에다가 붙여넣기하시면
더 좋은 대칭 모양이 될것 같습니다.
00:11:410 (3) 의도하신것 같지만.. 저는 Ctrl+G 하는게 더흐름에 좋다고 생각합니다 왜냐하면..
커브방향이 반대쪽으로 향해있으면 4번노트를 치기에 조금 흐름이 끊긴다고 생각이 되기때문입니다.



랭크가 눈앞에 있습니다 ~ 화이팅!
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
Ok, everything looks good now.
Bubbled~

Good luck in ranking :3
Beige
Elite Mapper
2,191 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Beige

Miya wrote:

Ok, everything looks good now.
Bubbled~

Good luck in ranking :3
Thank you ~ :3
Sure
4,219 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
Change log
  1. Fixed audio volume of 'soft-hitfinish3.wav' which was not balanced.
  2. Fixed audio volume of 'normal-slidertick3.wav' for balancing.
  3. Changed usage of tick sound in Normal diff.
  4. Fixed stack leniency of Hard from 3 to 4.


Nice map, ranked! ;)
MineC24
1,072 posts
Joined May 2010
MineC24
랭크 축하해여~~
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
축하 드려요~

( 쿠리아를 넘을것인가! )
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
100만 플카로 가버렷 ><
ㅊㅊ
Verlaren
Verlaren
Congrats/
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter
축축 ~~
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
grats
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
another one :o congratz :D
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
Quick, everyone cash in on the most popular song of the moment!
_VLaD__old
_VLaD__old
grats! :3
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
another version? o.o

Congratulations!
Azmato
Azmato
추카영!!
lolcubes
osu! Alumni
4,437 posts
Joined November 2010
lolcubes
Offset seems a bit early, applying +10 online offset.
DingGGu
305 posts
Joined January 2011
DingGGu

lolcubes wrote:

Offset seems a bit early, applying +10 online offset.
you have some mistakes.

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/87630 is same with this beatmap(mp3 files).

why only this beatmap get changed?
Sure
4,219 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
Hmm... The offset was fine when I played this.

SPOILER
lolcubes
osu! Alumni
4,437 posts
Joined November 2010
lolcubes
Hm, I have downloaded the map for the first time today and I have confirmed it with 2 other people.
It's possible it's a mistake but I had to play it with +11 to achieve my record at least.

edit: after further checking with Faust, we came to the conclusion that adding +8 on this version and +10 on Kuria's was the best solution (this version has 120 offset, Kuria's has 118).
I have checked Kuria's version now because apparently the mp3 originates from there, and with +10:
SPOILER
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