1. Easy (2.2 stars, 92 notes)
2. GGu's Hard (4.95 stars, 243 notes)
3. Insane (4.81 stars, 368 notes)
4. Normal (4.21 stars, 142 notes)

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Tsumetaku wrote:

BG... Format to 1024x768 Now, Allow 1024x768 and 1366x768 (Widescreen)

DingGGu wrote:

Tsumetaku wrote:

BG... Format to 1024x768 Now, Allow 1024x768 and 1366x768 (Widescreen)

General

Easy

Normal

GGu's Hard

Insane

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1. Disable letterboxing during breaks. It doesn't make any sense since song has a video and has no breaks at all!
2. You forgot to add Wit Studio in tags, you use their animation, after all.

1. No. No. And NO. You shouldn't use any slowdowns/speed ups at easiest diffs here. This song is fast 18-+ BPM and it has 1/1 rhythm, so it's already too hard for beginners and [Normal] diff players. Don't make it unplayable, [Easy] should be easy and [Normal] should be playable. that's why I am strobgly against ANY velocity changes.
2. 00:31:662 (2,3,4,1,2) - don't place them too colse. Beginners might mistakenly click on other note. [ur=http://puu.sh/2Vb7Q.jpg]lsee? there's too many notes][/url]
   Note: same happens to some others patterns 00:41:126 (1,2,3,4) - 00:43:783 (1,2,3,4) -
3. 00:39:964 (1) - I guess you should remove this new combo, it feels off your pattern and seems quite messy.
4. 00:51:089 (2) - try to finish this slider at 00:51:587 - to keep consistent 1/1 rhythm here. It will fit with background music and make dff more playable for beginners.
   Note: same 01:01:715 (2) - here. (fslider should end at 01:02:213)
5. 00:54:575 (1,2,1) - that pattern feels quite off vocals, I'd recommend you to re-arrange patterns a bit.
   Note: it's all about keeping 1/1 rhythm here!
   
   example

   
6. 01:06:032 - that empy space may stress beginners a lot. What's more, there's an unused green line that may confuse modders a bit. try to place here some objects and remove that green line, please.

1. No. No. And NO. You shouldn't use any slowdowns/speed ups at easiest diffs here. This song is fast 18-+ BPM and it has 1/1 rhythm, so it's already too hard for beginners and [Normal] diff players. Don't make it unplayable, [Easy] should be easy and [Normal] should be playable. that's why I am strobgly against ANY velocity changes.
2. Consider increasing HP Drain by one tick to keep diff settings more balanced.
3. 00:01:941 (5) - I'd finish that slider 1/2 later (at 00:02:439 ) it'll make rhythm more consistent and it will fit with background music much better.
4. 00:42:621 (1,2) - nazi - try to rotate that slider a bit, to make a blanket with 00:42:289 (3). It'll look like this.
5. 00:50:424 (3) - nazi - its tail is too close to (2), so players might mistakenly click it. Not a big problem, but looks a little bit messy, imo. Consider re-arranging that pattern a bit.
   Note: 01:01:050 (3) - same happens here.

1. Try to do HP Drain +1 to get a better balanced diff. it makes map much more interesting for players
2. I don't think that x0.5 SV multiplier is needed, it seems kinda too slow and too unexpected for a [Hard] diff. This is not an [Insane], remember?
   
   Diff is quite cute and well-constructed, but slowdowns make it less..uh..enjoyable.

1. 00:30:584 (10,1) - nazi - well.. shape of this slider isn't really readable because part of its is overlapped with stream. Try to avoid it if it is possible.
   
   Pretty nice diff.

1. Offset is a bit early. +5ms please.
2. Increase the overal volume by 10%, 60% its just too small. The loud voice of music, really overlap the hitsound because of this ><

1. 00:13:398 (1) - Reduce this soft finish volume. It's still really loud with 50% volume, 40% will do.
2. 00:17:383 (2) - ^ at slider start.
3. 00:20:039 (1) - ^
4. 00:22:696 (2) - ^
5. 00:45:277 (4) - Add finish sound at this slider start for consistencies of finish rhythm?
6. 00:50:923 (2) - This slider should start on 1/2 rhythm earlier, since the vocal is start on that spot. You follow the vocal at this slider end 00:49:262 (1) - , you better make this slider start follow the vocal too. But take caution, that finish sounds will be too loud here. Don't add finish sounds at slider start.
7. 00:56:070 (3) - Unnesecary NC imo, still on same rhythm and same stanza. Just remove this NC.
8. 01:01:715 (2) - Same with 00:50:923 (2) -
9. 01:11:844 (1,3) - Ugh, please, don't do overlap at easy diff. It will surprise a lot of beginner. Try another pattern please.

1. Well, lower the soft finish sounds 3 volume is apply to this diff too.
2. 00:22:696 (1) - I think you forget a finish at this slider start.

1. Soft finish sounds 3 should be lowered on this diff too.
2. Omg, those normal whistle sounds 1 is really loud, which makes the song doesnt good to hear. Lower all that whistle sounds volume please D:

1. Soft finish sounds 3 should be lowered on this diff too.
2. Same with hard, those normal whistle 1 volume should also be lowered too.
3. 01:26:626 (2,3,4) - Oh god, i hate 1/4 jump, i very don't like this. But if you still want to use this i suggest to make shape like this for better flow http://puu.sh/381m5.jpg

Miya wrote:

Ok, everything looks good now.
Bubbled~

Good luck in ranking :3