1. Collab (4.9 stars, 481 notes)
2. HaHoEasy (1.39 stars, 148 notes)
3. Normal (3.28 stars, 236 notes)

HabiHolic wrote:

For Ranked Pink Agate~~!!

Pink Agate wrote:

thank you RemmyX25,but I can't fix those now ,I will fix when I finish my map,next time ,very thanks your satr

edit:I update latest ver.at 4/11 22:30

1. 00:24:655(6)感觉这里还可以修好看点
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2. 00:30:280其实我感觉这一段空着有点不好，换个地方break比较合适（毕竟ez和hard都没空，而且音乐明显是一段的开头..
3. 00:49:030(6)nc
4. 01:22:076(5)这里还是学后面一样改成这个节奏比较合vocal
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1. 00:35:905(5,7)没叠好
2. 02:22:780(2)nc应该在这吧
3. 02:32:623(10)这里感觉换成slider好点
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4. 还有就是有些地方可以加一下nc，经常有13、14这种combo，略长

1. 01:47:623(1)why there is nc here
2. 01:53:717(4)nc because you used a nc at 01:54:655
3. 02:07:076(6)remove this note may better to me
4. 02:32:623(5)same as hard diff

Tony wrote:

I don't understand why that bg ;w; but good job on map :3

1. repeat的皮肤建议换一个
2. collab和sun里的PreviewTime是199030，另外两个难度则是198912
3. offset - 6？

1. 01:09:030 - 冗余的时间线
2. 00:56:647 - 无用的时间线
3. 00:57:467 - 无用的时间线
4. 00:57:584 - 无用的时间线
5. 00:58:873 - 无用的时间线
6. 00:58:873 - 无用的时间线
7. 03:33:326 - 无用的时间线

1. 00:15:280 (1) - 加finish
2. 00:17:155 (5) - 建议弧度加大
3. 00:21:842 - 感觉缺了个note
4. 00:24:655 (6) - slider没有画好，建议重画
5. 00:30:514 - 这段break柑橘可以map掉
6. 00:34:967 - 无用的时间线
7. 00:35:084 - 无用的时间线
8. 00:38:717 (3) - 移动到392,160的话更好看
9. 00:45:748 (2) - 第二个圈加finish
10. 00:46:217 (3,4) - 不弄成一样的？
11. 00:49:030 (6) - 建议NC
12. 00:51:842 (12) - 第二个圈加clap
13. 00:52:780 (1,2,3) - 1和3围成了一段圆弧，所以把2放在中间要好看一些。位置自己找
14. 00:56:530 - 这四根时间线没用
15. 00:58:873 - 无用的时间线
16. 01:07:780 (6) - 第一个圈加finish
17. 01:16:685 (4,5) - 太近
18. 01:22:311 (6) - 第二个圈加finish
19. 01:25:592 (6,1,2) - 太近
20. 01:33:092 - 这两根时间线没用
21. 01:51:373 - 加circle
22. 02:04:498 (1) - 去掉NC
23. 02:11:530 (2) - 第一个圈加finish
24. 02:19:030 (1) - 加finish
25. 02:23:717 (2) - 建议移动到203,223
26. 02:26:530 (1) - 加finish
27. 02:34:967 - 这一段建议用0.75x
28. 02:34:967 (1,2) - 重叠着不好看
29. 02:39:655 (3) - 建议移动到284,277
30. 02:45:748 (1) - 建议延迟到02:47:155开始
31. 03:02:155 - 无用的时间线
32. 03:03:561 (1) - 第二个圈加finish
33. 03:11:530 (2) - 加finish
34. 03:19:030 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
35. 03:25:592 - 加circle
36. 03:27:936 (4,2) - 没有重叠好
37. 03:32:155 (1) - 强烈不建议

1. 00:07:780 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
2. 00:14:811 (1) - 去掉NC
3. 00:15:280 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
4. 00:33:561 (2,2) - 感觉被挡住了
5. 00:51:842 (5) - 右移一格
6. 01:03:795 (6,2) - 没有重叠好
7. 01:28:170 (4) - NC
8. 01:28:405 (1) - 去掉NC
9. 01:34:030 - break开始的时间是不是有点太靠后了，建议map到这个点
10. 01:48:444 - 无用的时间线
11. 02:00:280 (1) - 移动到272,96
12. 02:25:592 - 无用的时间线
13. 02:26:530 - 无用的时间线
14. 02:46:451 (10,1) - 不好看
15. 02:52:780 (7) - 移动到24,126
16. 02:56:530 (1) - 有点太长了
17. 03:03:561 (1) - 好像是unrankable的

1. 建议加上SB显示每一段是谁做的
2. 00:30:045 (3) - 第二个圈加finish
3. 00:55:826 (2,1) - 没有重叠好
4. 00:59:811 (1,3) - 没有重叠好
5. 03:02:155 (1) - 建议做音量慢慢加大

wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request

[General]
fine

[HaHoEasy]
01:41:061 - I suggest to add a note to follow the vocal here, it's kinda a heavy beat fix

[Normal]
00:24:655 (1,2) - this can blanket better fix
01:17:155 (5,6) - this jump is too large for a Normal diff imo, reduce the spacing plz fix
01:57:467 (2,3,4) - you can make this circle more beautiful, try to use ctrl+shift+r 小改动
02:06:373 (3,1,2,3) - the spacing is really strange to me, first the jump between 02:06:373 (3,1) - doesn't fit the song well imo, and then, neither does the anti-jump 02:08:248 (2,3) - fix
02:18:092 (3) - I suggest to change them into 2 1/2 sliders, or the slider with more than 1 repeating is kinda hard to read no
02:34:967 - 02:41:530 - this part is too quiet imo fix
03:25:826 (1) - this speed-up slider is really odd to me, it's too sudden(especially when the slider is just after an anti-jump), I strongly suggest you to use normal speed on it:arrow: fix
03:32:155 (1) - this must be changed, this kick spinner is too hard to play as a Normal diff, this's unreasonable
fix

[Collab]
01:53:717 - better to add NC here, for easier to read the same patterns fix

spread我可能会在找几个人看看0.0

1. 00:11:530 (4) - Since this note does not have the same tone as the previous three objects, a new combo could be added. If it does not have any new combos, it will not emphasize the second tone.
2. 00:18:092 - I completely understand what you tried to do here, but it isn't working well. On your previous notes, you were adding claps on the upbeats and then, at the third note (which was mainly a slider), you were adding a clap at the end of it even if it wasn't an upbeat. That totally perfect and it sounds well but, here, it is completely different. I highly suggest you to delete this clap and to add it on the next circle to keep the consistency.
3. 00:19:967 - It's the same thing as said previously. The clap here sounds weird, which does not make it sound good with your objects. On the next circle, which is placed on a upbeat, you have added a whistle instead. Your logic here was: "If I add a clap here.. I shouldn't add another one here because two claps in a row can be annoying. So, I will add a whistle instead". It's completely understandable, but it is not a good choice. Delete the clap at the end of this slider and, on the next circle (which has the whistle), delete it and replace it by a clap instead.
4. 00:20:905 (3,4) - There's so much thing to say in here.. Like mentionned on the previous points, delete the clap at the end of the slider and on the slider (4), add a clap and a whistle at the beginning & add another whistle at the end. Want to know why I am suggesting you to add whistles? Well, at 00:18:561 (4) - , you have added a clap to emphasize the "haahw!" so, since at this slider it is almost the same thing, I thought you could add one whistle at the beginning to emphasize the sound and then, another whistle at the end to do make it different from the previous one.
5. 00:23:248 (5) - Have you forgot to add a new combo here? I think you got confused a bit. Normally, you where adding new combos on the bigdownbeats, but since the big downbeat located on 00:22:780 - is a slider end, you can't add a new combo. Actually, you have a solution to this problem, all you have to do, is to add it on the next object (Which is currently the slider 5). If you don't add any combos here, the combo will be very, very long. It would be better to add one instead of keeping it like that.
6. 00:23:248 (5) - Wrong hitsound consistency. Delete the clap on the reverse arrow and instead, add one at the beginning and another at the end. It will be more consistent since they will be placed on the upbeats.
7. 00:24:655 (6,7) - Do the same thing as mentionned on 00:18:092 -
8. 00:27:936 (2) - Just replace the whistle by a clap, to keep the consistency of your previous objects.
9. 00:28:405 (3,4) - The hitsounds are inconsistent and the whistle sounds wrong in here. I highly suggest you to delete the whistle on the circle 4 and to replace it by a clap. After that, to keep your thing consistent, delete the clap at the end of the slider (3)
10. 00:30:280 (5) - Add a new combo here please. The tonality is totally not the same and the combo is getting very long. It would be better to add a new combo to emphasize the tone change.
11. 00:34:030 (1,2) - like said many times already, delete the clap at the end of the slider 1 and replace the whistle of the circle 2 by a clap. It's going to keep the consistency of your previous hitsounds.
12. 00:35:084 - Can you tell me why there's an inherited timing point here which has the same purpose has the initial timing point? It would be better to delete it since it does completely nothing.
13. 00:37:780 (4) - A New combo could be added here since first, it's placed on a downbeat; second, it doesn't have the same tonality of the previous objects and third, as you can see, this object is placed in an inconsistent manner on the timeline. In other word, the object is far from the previous one.
14. 00:40:123 (3) - Can you keep the consistency with your hitsounds please? Delete the clap on the reverse arrow and add claps on both beginning and end instead.
15. 00:45:280 (1,2) - both of these sliders are not sounding well and plays a bit weird. Actually, I am not sure if a beginner would be able to get it correctly o.o. Here's what I am suggesting you:
    
    Example with code

    
    
    
    
    Here's the code if you ever want those objects.
    All you have to do, it's to delete from 00:45:280 - to 00:52:311 - , and add this code on the .osu
    

    80,200,45280,6,0,P|56:136|96:52,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    172,236,47155,2,0,P|196:300|156:384,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    160,136,49030,6,0,L|264:112,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    264,212,49967,2,0,L|361:189,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    360,288,50905,2,0,L|464:264,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    284,356,52311,1,10,0:0:0:0:

16. 00:52:780 (1,2) - Like said many times already: delete the clap at the end of the slider and replace the whistle by a clap.
17. 00:56:061 (4) - The whistle is not necessary here, I suggest you to replace it by a clap instead.

1. 00:24:186 (3) - On this circle, the spacing consistency is broken before it. As you can see, the spacing is totally consistent (1,00x) on the next note but, on the previous spacing, it is not the same. (0,91x) You should make the change to avoid any jumps.
2. 00:34:967 - and 00:35:084 - are those timing points needed? I highly suggest you to delete them since they don't have any purpose.
3. 01:11:530 (4) - I think you're able to add a new combo here, the tone is actually not the same as the previous objects.
4. 01:22:780 (7) - The combo is getting very long here and like said on the previous point, the tone is not the same. So, it would be better on adding a new combo to this slider.
5. 02:06:373 (3,1) - Those objects are squishy. In other word, they're overlapping each others which looks terrible. I suggest you to do something here instead of placing the slider (1) in that way.
6. 02:14:576 (6) - Add a new combo here please, the object is way too far from the previous one and the tonality is not the same. So, I don't understand why it does not have a new combo.

Gabe wrote:

currently looking at the map

I am going to pop this bubble for now, the Easy is totally not ready yet.
I will be done with my mod later today.

Giving you an idea of the mod

Edit:
Hello Pink Agate,

I was not able to finish the mod, unfortunately. My computer is having a problem which I don't know how to fix it. Actually, my client is having no sound at all: Can't hear the song, either the special effects from clicking on an option.

Hope this problem will be fixed soon,
Sorry again!

currently looking at the map

General
Mostly for Normal and Collab; 01:34:030 - after this object, the break time should not be placed to 01:35:905 . I don't see the reason why. Can you please keep it at its default place?

HaHoEasy

1. 00:11:530 (4) - Since this note does not have the same tone as the previous three objects, a new combo could be added. If it does not have any new combos, it will not emphasize the second tone.
2. 00:18:092 - I completely understand what you tried to do here, but it isn't working well. On your previous notes, you were adding claps on the upbeats and then, at the third note (which was mainly a slider), you were adding a clap at the end of it even if it wasn't an upbeat. That totally perfect and it sounds well but, here, it is completely different. I highly suggest you to delete this clap and to add it on the next circle to keep the consistency.
3. 00:19:967 - It's the same thing as said previously. The clap here sounds weird, which does not make it sound good with your objects. On the next circle, which is placed on a upbeat, you have added a whistle instead. Your logic here was: "If I add a clap here.. I shouldn't add another one here because two claps in a row can be annoying. So, I will add a whistle instead". It's completely understandable, but it is not a good choice. Delete the clap at the end of this slider and, on the next circle (which has the whistle), delete it and replace it by a clap instead.
4. 00:20:905 (3,4) - There's so much thing to say in here.. Like mentionned on the previous points, delete the clap at the end of the slider and on the slider (4), add a clap and a whistle at the beginning & add another whistle at the end. Want to know why I am suggesting you to add whistles? Well, at 00:18:561 (4) - , you have added a clap to emphasize the "haahw!" so, since at this slider it is almost the same thing, I thought you could add one whistle at the beginning to emphasize the sound and then, another whistle at the end to do make it different from the previous one.
5. 00:23:248 (5) - Have you forgot to add a new combo here? I think you got confused a bit. Normally, you where adding new combos on the bigdownbeats, but since the big downbeat located on 00:22:780 - is a slider end, you can't add a new combo. Actually, you have a solution to this problem, all you have to do, is to add it on the next object (Which is currently the slider 5). If you don't add any combos here, the combo will be very, very long. It would be better to add one instead of keeping it like that.
6. 00:23:248 (5) - Wrong hitsound consistency. Delete the clap on the reverse arrow and instead, add one at the beginning and another at the end. It will be more consistent since they will be placed on the upbeats.
7. 00:24:655 (6,7) - Do the same thing as mentionned on 00:18:092 -
8. 00:27:936 (2) - Just replace the whistle by a clap, to keep the consistency of your previous objects.
9. 00:28:405 (3,4) - The hitsounds are inconsistent and the whistle sounds wrong in here. I highly suggest you to delete the whistle on the circle 4 and to replace it by a clap. After that, to keep your thing consistent, delete the clap at the end of the slider (3)
10. 00:30:280 (5) - Add a new combo here please. The tonality is totally not the same and the combo is getting very long. It would be better to add a new combo to emphasize the tone change.
11. 00:34:030 (1,2) - like said many times already, delete the clap at the end of the slider 1 and replace the whistle of the circle 2 by a clap. It's going to keep the consistency of your previous hitsounds.
12. 00:35:084 - Can you tell me why there's an inherited timing point here which has the same purpose has the initial timing point? It would be better to delete it since it does completely nothing.
13. 00:37:780 (4) - A New combo could be added here since first, it's placed on a downbeat; second, it doesn't have the same tonality of the previous objects and third, as you can see, this object is placed in an inconsistent manner on the timeline. In other word, the object is far from the previous one.
14. 00:40:123 (3) - Can you keep the consistency with your hitsounds please? Delete the clap on the reverse arrow and add claps on both beginning and end instead.
15. 00:45:280 (1,2) - both of these sliders are not sounding well and plays a bit weird. Actually, I am not sure if a beginner would be able to get it correctly o.o. Here's what I am suggesting you:
    
    Example with code

    
    
    
    
    Here's the code if you ever want those objects.
    All you have to do, it's to delete from 00:45:280 - to 00:52:311 - , and add this code on the .osu
    

    80,200,45280,6,0,P|56:136|96:52,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    172,236,47155,2,0,P|196:300|156:384,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    160,136,49030,6,0,L|264:112,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    264,212,49967,2,0,L|361:189,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    360,288,50905,2,0,L|464:264,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    284,356,52311,1,10,0:0:0:0:

16. 00:52:780 (1,2) - Like said many times already: delete the clap at the end of the slider and replace the whistle by a clap.
17. 00:56:061 (4) - The whistle is not necessary here, I suggest you to replace it by a clap instead.

Actually, I am going to stop here.
Please, keep in mind to make all of your hitsounds consistent! Prioritize the claps on the upbeats and some whistles some times.
You can do it yourself and please, take your time on reviewing EVERYTHING on the map! You can also look at Pink Agate's difficulties to guide you.
If you have some questions, you can PM or talk to me directly on the game.
Good luck.

Good luck.

Gabe wrote:

General
Mostly for Normal and Collab; 01:34:030 - after this object, the break time should not be placed to 01:35:905 . I don't see the reason why. Can you please keep it at its default place?
fix


Normal

1. 00:24:186 (3) - On this circle, the spacing consistency is broken before it. As you can see, the spacing is totally consistent (1,00x) on the next note but, on the previous spacing, it is not the same. (0,91x) You should make the change to avoid any jumps.
2. 00:34:967 - and 00:35:084 - are those timing points needed? I highly suggest you to delete them since they don't have any purpose.
3. 01:11:530 (4) - I think you're able to add a new combo here, the tone is actually not the same as the previous objects.
4. 01:22:780 (7) - The combo is getting very long here and like said on the previous point, the tone is not the same. So, it would be better on adding a new combo to this slider.
5. 02:06:373 (3,1) - Those objects are squishy. In other word, they're overlapping each others which looks terrible. I suggest you to do something here instead of placing the slider (1) in that way.
6. 02:14:576 (6) - Add a new combo here please, the object is way too far from the previous one and the tonality is not the same. So, I don't understand why it does not have a new combo.

all fix
Going to say nothing on Collab, I've always played it in the past and it was awesome.

Good luck.

Sonnyc wrote:

보핍 보핍

Norman wrote:

보핍 보핍 (2)

1. 00:07:790 (1) - Sldier head, add finish?
2. 00:15:290 (1) - Slider head, Finish?
3. 00:22:321 (4) - Slider end, finish instead of whistle?
4. 00:23:258 (1) - I guess you are missing a clap at slider start and end
5. 00:40:133 (3) - ^
6. 00:41:540 (1) - These 2 claps sounds a little weird, you add 1-3 clap at beginning part, why 0-2 clap here?
7. 00:56:657, 00:57:477, 00:57:594 - Unused timing section
8. 00:58:415 - 1.5xBPM here make no sence
9. 00:58:883 - Unused timing section
10. 01:05:915 (8) - Clap on head here sounds bad, suggest remove this
11. 01:08:727 (3,4,5) - 0-2 clap again, Hmm, idk why you do so, well, I won't point this any more, it's all depend on you how to use hitsound
12. 01:30:290 (1) - Finish?
13. 01:34:040 (4) - ^
14. 01:49:977, 01:50:094 - Unused timing section
15. 02:56:540 (1) - Finish?
16. 03:11:540 (1) - ^
17. 03:25:602 - 03:26:305 - Why no KIAI here, if you want a second KIAI, I think you should end first KIAI at 03:25:836 and start at 03:26:540, at least you should make the 2nd KIAI start at 03:26:540 since it's not on downbeat now
18. 03:34:040 - Shouldn't KIAI ends here?

1. 00:22:555 (4) - Slider尾, 不加finish?
2. 00:56:540, 00:56:657, 00:57:477, 00:57:594 - 没用的绿线
3. 01:22:555 (6) - 这里不该有finish吧, 要加的话应该加到01:22:790 (1) slider头上, 01:30:055 (6,1)不是就这样加了么
4. 01:34:508 - Break拉到这里意义何在?
5. 01:47:750 - ^
6. 02:04:040 (2) - Finish
7. 02:11:540 (2) - ^, slidere头
8. 02:19:040 (1) - finish
9. 02:50:915 - 这个break拉到这里还是意义不明
10. 03:03:571 (1) - Slider尾, finish
11. 03:11:540 (2) - ^
12. 03:19:040 (1) - ^, 头

1. 00:30:055 (3) - Slider end, no finish here?
2. 00:58:415 - To tell the truth, I think this KIAI effect doesn't really make sence here, remove it?
3. 01:30:290 (1) - Add finish?
4. 01:34:508 - Why drag break to here?
5. 01:46:344 - ^
6. 02:11:540 (4) - Add finish?
7. 02:50:915 - Still, why?
8. 03:01:227 - ^
9. 03:11:540 (1) - Finish?

Breeze wrote:

Hi

[HaHoEasy]

1. 00:07:790 (1) - Sldier head, add finish?
2. 00:15:290 (1) - Slider head, Finish?
3. 00:22:321 (4) - Slider end, finish instead of whistle?
4. 00:23:258 (1) - I guess you are missing a clap at slider start and end
5. 00:40:133 (3) - ^
6. 00:41:540 (1) - These 2 claps sounds a little weird, you add 1-3 clap at beginning part, why 0-2 clap here?
7. 00:56:657, 00:57:477, 00:57:594 - Unused timing section
8. 00:58:415 - 1.5xBPM here make no sence
9. 00:58:883 - Unused timing section
10. 01:05:915 (8) - Clap on head here sounds bad, suggest remove this
11. 01:08:727 (3,4,5) - 0-2 clap again, Hmm, idk why you do so, well, I won't point this any more, it's all depend on you how to use hitsound
12. 01:30:290 (1) - Finish?
13. 01:34:040 (4) - ^
14. 01:49:977, 01:50:094 - Unused timing section
15. 02:56:540 (1) - Finish?
16. 03:11:540 (1) - ^
17. 03:25:602 - 03:26:305 - Why no KIAI here, if you want a second KIAI, I think you should end first KIAI at 03:25:836 and start at 03:26:540, at least you should make the 2nd KIAI start at 03:26:540 since it's not on downbeat now
18. 03:34:040 - Shouldn't KIAI ends here?

[Normal]

1. 00:22:555 (4) - Slider尾, 不加finish?
2. 00:56:540, 00:56:657, 00:57:477, 00:57:594 - 没用的绿线
3. 01:22:555 (6) - 这里不该有finish吧, 要加的话应该加到01:22:790 (1) slider头上, 01:30:055 (6,1)不是就这样加了么
4. 01:34:508 - Break拉到这里意义何在?
5. 01:47:750 - ^
6. 02:04:040 (2) - Finish
7. 02:11:540 (2) - ^, slidere头
8. 02:19:040 (1) - finish
9. 02:50:915 - 这个break拉到这里还是意义不明
10. 03:03:571 (1) - Slider尾, finish
11. 03:11:540 (2) - ^
12. 03:19:040 (1) - ^, 头

[Collab]

1. 00:30:055 (3) - Slider end, no finish here?
2. 00:58:415 - To tell the truth, I think this KIAI effect doesn't really make sence here, remove it?
3. 01:30:290 (1) - Add finish?
4. 01:34:508 - Why drag break to here?
5. 01:46:344 - ^
6. 02:11:540 (4) - Add finish?
7. 02:50:915 - Still, why?
8. 03:01:227 - ^
9. 03:11:540 (1) - Finish?

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