Class - Singura Iubire · forum

Tony

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Tony 2013-02-02T20:13:31+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, August 19, 2013 at 10:30:19 AM

Artist: Class
Title: Singura Iubire
Source: Best of Romanian Songs 2006
Tags: -Bakari- BCI
BPM: 128
Filesize: 22725kb
Play Time: 03:45
Difficulties Available:

Dificil (4.93 stars, 514 notes)
Facil (1.61 stars, 190 notes)
Mediu (3.5 stars, 254 notes)

Download: Class - Singura Iubire
Download: Class - Singura Iubire (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Dar știu că am puterea...
Să las totul în urma mea...
Despărțirea e grea....
Dar e mai bine așa...
Translation:
But I know I have the power....
To leave everything behind...
The separation is painful...
But it's better this way...
map from project called Best of Romanian Songs 2006
Mapset:
[Facil] --- 100% Easy by -Bakari- and BCI <3
[Mediu] --- 100% Normal by me
[Dificil] --- 100% Hard by me

Last edited by Tony 2013-08-19T07:31:01+00:00, edited 24 times in total.

Nemis

847 posts

Joined May 2012

Nemis 2013-02-12T17:20:05+00:00

[Nebunie]
00:40:341 (2,3,4,5,6) - Fix this pent... idk the word
00:47:841 (2,3,4,5,6) - Fix this star
00:53:700 (4) - I prefer it flipped vertically (flows more with 00:54:403 (5,1) - )
01:53:700 (4) - Remove it and create a slider from 01:53:466 (3) - to 01:53:934 (5) - ?
01:58:153 (6,1) - x: 168; y: 204
02:02:137 (1) - Make it more adherent with 02:01:903 (6) -
02:09:637 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - I don't like this pattern so much >.<
03:20:419 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - boh
03:43:387 (1) - It finishes at 03:44:911 (1) - !

[Dificil]
It's WIP but i remember to you that 03:43:387 (1) - finishes at 03:44:911 (1) -

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2013-04-02T14:03:01+00:00

Bakari and BCI's diff goes here

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Class - Singura Iubire.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Singura Iubire
TitleUnicode:Singura Iubire
Artist:Class
ArtistUnicode:Class
Creator:Tony
Version:Facil
Source:
Tags:-Bakari- BCI
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,7762,13387
2,92337,99637
2,148387,161512
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Tony

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Topic Starter

Tony 2013-04-03T15:41:49+00:00

ok all good now :3

DingGGu

305 posts

Joined January 2011

DingGGu 2013-04-06T12:07:42+00:00

Hello!!! I'm DingGGu from My Modding Queue~

[General]

i'm first time listen roman songs.. lol

[Facil]

00:30:262 (1) - Move 1 left, red point.
02:13:387 (3) - Move 1 grid down, last point of slider.
03:41:512 (3) - Move 1 grid up slider.

[Mediu]

01:47:137 (4) - move 1 grid right, last point of slider.
02:02:137 (4) - move 1 grid up, last point of slider.
02:22:762 (1) - distance check. and try to this
02:54:637 (2) - distance check

[Dificil]

00:24:169 (1) - move 2 grid left, last point of slider.

very good~!

MineC24

1,072 posts

Joined May 2010

MineC24 2013-04-12T12:27:06+00:00

Modding queue~

All diff

^ Preview time set please..

remove Countdown check box.

Facil

01:27:918 (5) - how about this? ->

01:39:637 - add spin (same as Mediu)
02:04:949 (2) - slider change -> same as 02:04:012 (1) (And Rotate 90 * 2 times)
03:41:512 (3) - imo, slider end sound change by finish (Music end decoration

)

Nice pattern!

Mediu

00:04:012 (1,2) - how about this? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/701341
00:13:387 (Break time) - Break time end set -> 00:13:387
01:10:105 (2) - this slider -> graze 01:11:512 (4)
change this? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/701349
01:25:574 (3) - remove red slider point
03:13:387 (2) - add NC..? (Start kiai time

)
03:32:137 (1) - move x:116 y:84 (Blanket)

Dificil

imo, AR + 1..?

00:13:387 (Break time) - Break time end set -> 00:13:387
00:42:450 (3,4,5) -

<- this shape change by Equilateral triangle

03:13:387 (3) - add NC
03:14:794 (1) - remove NC
03:15:262 (3) - add NC
03:27:919 (1) - remove NC and 03:28:387 (2) - add NC (follow music

)
03:41:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - use compose -> create polygon circles

Wow Sooo Nice pattern

Star~

Tony

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Tony 2013-05-11T05:44:42+00:00

okay. updated. thanks :3

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-05-15T23:31:26+00:00

I have to mod this map tomorrow.

Tony

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Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Tony 2013-05-16T05:14:32+00:00

ok <333

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-05-16T18:52:40+00:00

~General~

Preview Time between the difficulties is inconsistent, make sure to use it the same on all of them.

~Mediu~

03:43:387 (1) - This spinner should end on the next white tick to be consistent with the other difficulties.

~Dificil~

02:09:872 (4,5) - This sudden spacing change feels random and doesn't make much sense, I'd prefer if you space them normally.
02:26:512 (1) - Do not completely silence this spinner, it feels weird, try using 25% at least.
02:37:528 (3,4) - I wouldn't stack these two objects together, since they would confuse with the previous stacks which are using a different timing.
02:45:028 (4,5) - Same as above for the same reason.
02:52:528 (4,5) - Once again, I'm sure these would be better if spaced normally.
03:41:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This formation doesn't look so good to me, I think you can improve it even more with some work.
03:43:387 (1) - Same as Mediu difficulty.

Pretty simple and clean map, I like it.

[Luxord]

503 posts

Joined August 2011

[Luxord] 2013-05-17T12:30:48+00:00

Hey Tony :3

Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- Dificil : 192888
- Facil : 193357
- Mediu : 192888

There is only 1262 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

[Facil]
00:23:230 - Put clap at the tick~
00:36:355 - ^
00:38:230 - ^
00:39:168 - ^
00:41:980 - ^
00:43:855 - ^
00:43:387 (1,2) - That beat blanket needs work .-.
00:48:074 - Put clap at the tick~
00:49:480 - ^
00:50:418 - ^
00:53:230 - ^
00:58:855 - ^
01:11:980 - ^
01:12:918 - ^
Anyway you got my point XD

Awesome Diff.

[Midiu]
01:47:137 (4,5) - Fix the blanket~ Play a bit with the reverse and middle anchor point of the slider.
02:21:824 (5,1) - ^. This one looks bad :c
03:31:199 (4,1) - Fix the blanket~ Play a bit with the reverse and middle anchor point of the slider.
Nothing else~

[Dificil]
02:07:762 (1,2) - I guess the blanket could be better here.
Nothing else. This difficulty is nice, very enjoyable!

Good job once more, Tony

Have a star~

Tony

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Tony 2013-05-17T16:54:54+00:00

Thanks guys for the mods ЖD Most things were fixed. @KiyoshiX101: never was a fan of hitsounds on ticks...

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2013-05-27T09:31:20+00:00

Didn't apply anything because I want to keep smooth flow in my way, sorry @ DingGGu

MineC24 wrote:
01:27:918 (5) - how about this? -> why not?
01:39:637 - add spin (same as Mediu) no. It is not acceptable for this diff, let's keep this diff playable for beginners
02:04:949 (2) - slider change -> same as 02:04:012 (1) (And Rotate 90 * 2 times) Why? I'd prefer to keep it that way, unless you provide me with understandable reason.
03:41:512 (3) - imo, slider end sound change by finish (Music end decoration ) No. Hitsound should fit with music, finish won't fot here at all!

WHY DO YOU IGNORE ME ANDREA ;_;

I don't think we should hitsound ticks here, it may stress beginners a bit. Just because slider sounds "different" from regular hitsounding, sorry. As for blanket slider, I'll re-work it. @ KiyoshiX101

uguu

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Class - Singura Iubire.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 192888
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Singura Iubire
TitleUnicode:Singura Iubire
Artist:Class
ArtistUnicode:Class
Creator:Tony
Version:Facil
Source:Best of Romanian Songs 2006
Tags:-Bakari- BCI
BeatmapID:236562
BeatmapSetID:77224

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,7762,13387
2,92337,99637
2,148387,161512
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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146512,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0
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Roxas

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Roxas 2013-05-28T14:34:29+00:00

o/

[General]
2000ms as lead-in for every diff

[Facillll]
01:00:262 (3) - delete this and copypaste from 00:56:980 (4) -
01:41:980 (2) - rotate -4° ?
02:28:387 - 02:41:512 - delete these green lines
03:41:512 (3) - make a better blanket

[Mediuuu]
00:13:387 - for the break why dont you make like the easy?
01:11:512 (4) - blanket with 01:10:105 (2) - ?

[Dificillll]
00:13:387 - same as normal

for the rest is okay

good luck <3

Tony

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Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Tony 2013-06-14T17:44:49+00:00

updated! thank you very much Roxas

Tur00

608 posts

Joined November 2011

Tur00 2013-07-06T07:18:43+00:00

A mod from PM to my NO lover :3

[Easy]

00:00:262 - Volumen 40%
00:00:262 - 00:07:293 - I don't like how your map start , use this code .

SPOILER

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[spoilerbox]
00:20:887 (3) - move last point 1 grid up
00:56:980 (4) - Ctrl+J and move again , before this slider was going outside.
01:26:512 (4,5) - Move this slider to 01:28:387 and delete the reverse arrow,
Then make that (4) finish here 01:27:215 and add reverse arrow
01:53:230 (2,3,4) - Try this..
[spoilerbox]

02:48:543 (2,3) - exchange the position of these notes . First the slider , then the circle.
03:07:762 (3,1) - Make that (3) finish here 03:08:465 and add reverse arrow, then move (1) to 03:09:637
and make that finish in 03:10:340 and add reverse arrow .

[Normal]

Nothing to do here .

Tony

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Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Tony 2013-07-11T12:54:02+00:00

thank you! updated

YTYuyu

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YTYuyu 2013-08-11T04:14:47+00:00

here's your m4m request :3.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, and Other.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Facil]
00:06:355 (2,3) - for this pattern, i think that doing something like this would be more beginner friendly and smoother to follow during gameplay as the introduction to the song.
00:43:387 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is good, the only problem is how it's placed. the transition from (2,3) makes the flow feel awkward and odd to follow for beginners during gameplay, so i'm highly suggesting that you do something like this because it'll be more flow and consistent since it'll be blanketed like the other notes during gameplay.
01:01:668 (4) - if you want to make this pattern symmetrical, then align this to (2) to make it aesthetically fun for beginners to follow during gameplay.
01:01:668 (4,1) - a minor spacing error here, so be sure to fix it so that the spacing is consistent and steady in the flow.
01:47:137 (2) - i think you can do Ctrl+J to make it flow smoother and to make it look fun for beginners since the transition from (1,2) looks fun and more straightforward during gameplay.
02:16:668 (2) - same as 01:01:668 about the symmetrical pattern.
02:18:074 (4) - i think you can align this to (3). same reason as 01:47:137.
03:14:324 (2,3) - this pattern doesn't seem to flow properly to the vocals because of where (3) starts. the vocals are still going and that breaks the flow and transition during gameplay, so for this one, replace (3) and add a circle, followed by a 2/1 repeat slider. doing this instead would make the rhythm to the vocals a lot smoother and more flowy during gameplay. note that if you do this, then you have to fix the spacing for the other notes.

[Mediu]
00:19:012 (1) - the finish here is too loud and distracting, so you should replace this for a whistle since the whistle sounds a lot nicer during gameplay. if you wanna keep it, then try to decrease the volume of the finish to make it sound similar to the whistle.
00:22:762 (1) - ^
00:29:090 - i think you can add a circle since the vocals in the song change in this part of the song. i also feel that it feels empty without it IMO.
00:55:808 - ^
01:30:965 - ^
01:31:199 (2,3) - perhaps you can replace (3) for a repeat on (2)? i feel that it'll flow a lot smoother when following the hold in the vocals during gameplay.
01:49:949 (3) - maybe making this slider straight would be more flowy and smoother in transition during gameplay.
02:12:449 (3) - i say that you flip it the other way instead. the transition would feel a smoother when you get to (4) during gameplay.
03:27:215 - same as 00:29:090.
03:29:324 (2) - same as 02:12:449.

[Dificil]
00:16:083 (4) - i think you can do a spacing change on this note to make it more readable and more flowy during gameplay. something around 0.3 should be fine to follow IMO.
00:29:091 (4,5,6,7) - i can see a possible jump pattern because of how the vocals sound here. it'll also be smoother to follow from that triplet during gameplay IMO. the jump should look something like this or something similar to this.
00:37:762 (2,3) - the curve to the circle make the flow feel awkward to follow because it's at the opposite direction and that could be uncomfortable to follow IMO, so for this one, flip (2) vertically(Ctrl+J) to make the transition feel a lot smoother to follow during gameplay.
01:01:200 (5) - i think you can put this circle in the middle of the square to make it look more fun to follow for players during gameplay instead of going around in a circle in this pattern.
01:02:958 (3) - same as 00:16:083.
01:30:966 (4,5,6,7) - same as 00:29:091, but try a different jump pattern instead to change it up, or do the same thing for consistency.
02:12:333 (3) - same as 00:16:083.
03:17:958 (3) - ^
03:25:106 (2) - *nazi* if you wanna make this perfect, than stack this note perfectly at the end of (1).
03:27:919 (1,2) - personally, i really think that (1) shouldn't be a NC and (2) should because (2) would show that a new phrase in the BGM starts over since there are cymbals here, whereas the vocals are together in (1) during gameplay. also i think that it'll make more sense if you do this as well during gameplay since the this jump shows emphasis in the vocals as well.
03:29:208 (4) - same as 00:16:083.

and that's it. the map has potential, but i think it can be improved a bit further. also it's almost ready for a bubble, so here's a star and GL on the rank. once you get 2-3 mods, call me back for a re-check.

riffy

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riffy 2013-08-11T06:26:55+00:00

Everything should be fixed.

code

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Class - Singura Iubire.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 192888
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Singura Iubire
TitleUnicode:Singura Iubire
Artist:Class
ArtistUnicode:Class
Creator:Tony
Version:Facil
Source:Best of Romanian Songs 2006
Tags:-Bakari- BCI
BeatmapID:236562
BeatmapSetID:77224

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

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2,148587,161512
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Tony

1,510 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Tony 2013-08-11T09:20:51+00:00

alright. I think everything fixed

updated~
thanks for the mod Byakugan <3 I'll ask for some mods and then ask you to recheck :3

Leader

osu! Alumni

1,849 posts

Joined January 2011

Leader 2013-08-13T19:26:44+00:00

just few suggestions

21:12 Leader: 02:30:731 (5) - in dificil diff
21:12 Leader: you stacked notes under slider only when they were 1/4
21:12 Leader: this is 1/2, so move it somewhere else for consistency?
21:12 Leader: hidden players will blame you xD
21:14 Leader: 01:01:200 (1) - imo a clap will fit better than a whistle
21:17 Tony: yes for first
21:17 Tony: no for second
21:17 Tony: why clap?
21:17 Tony: o.o
21:18 Leader: that final note needs a louder sound imo ;w;
21:18 Leader: final because final note of the pattern
21:18 Leader: mediu diff: 02:26:512 (5) - 
21:18 Leader: this is unrankable i think..
21:18 Leader: 5% volume
21:19 Leader: Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable. The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent, but only do it if it makes sense. Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together. 
21:21 Tony: I'll increase the volume to 15% :3
21:22 Leader: nice!
21:22 Tony: ok fixed :3
21:24 Leader: facil is too good ;w;
21:24 Tony: oh xD
21:25 Tony: post irc then

:3

pandaikon

102 posts

Joined February 2011

pandaikon 2013-08-14T07:36:21+00:00

yo

[General]
All cool here

[Facil]
00:43:387 (1,2,3) - it's not that important, but i think this kind of flow may confuse new players. maybe change it a bit by moving 00:44:793 (2) - at around x:228, y:188, or reverse the 00:45:262 (3) - and change the pattern a bit?
01:56:512 (1) - what about moving the slider at 01:56:980 - make it end at 01:57:918 - and add a note at 01:56:512 - ? somehow it feels like a note is missed there
03:41:512 (3) - i will be mean, so move it at x:352,y:164 to make a perfect blanket

[Mediu]
the flow is funny here, lol
00:04:012 (1,2,3,1) - there is this pattern, and even though it may prove difficult to normal players to do it from the first try (at least i think so), i'd tell you to leave it as it is, since i like it. instead, maybe fix the flow here 00:19:949 (2,3) - ?
01:11:512 (4) - it slightly touches 01:10:105 (2) - . move it down a bit

[Dificil]
it's pretty good. couldn't find anything except 02:13:153 (5) - being kind of too low

he approves

nice map, tony
good luck with ranking it

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2013-08-14T12:24:08+00:00

da code

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Class - Singura Iubire.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 192888
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Singura Iubire
TitleUnicode:Singura Iubire
Artist:Class
ArtistUnicode:Class
Creator:Tony
Version:Facil
Source:Best of Romanian Songs 2006
Tags:-Bakari- BCI
BeatmapID:236562
BeatmapSetID:77224

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1
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384,28,112762,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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36,160,115105,2,0,P|16:208|60:308,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,336,116512,5,2,0:0:0:0:
224,336,116980,2,0,P|297:304|325:229,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,160,118387,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,88,118855,2,0,P|224:56|232:4,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,168,120262,5,2,0:0:0:0:
116,216,120730,2,0,P|68:220|24:216,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,280,122137,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,236,122605,2,0,P|296:232|420:236,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,176,124012,6,0,L|500:92,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,56,124949,2,0,L|392:140,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,125887,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,132,126355,2,0,P|204:116|88:128,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,188,127762,6,0,P|24:224|28:272,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,248,128699,2,0,P|192:232|276:256,1,160
480,92,131043,5,8,0:3:0:0:
392,76,131512,2,0,P|352:68|304:80,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,124,132449,2,0,P|196:132|156:120,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,52,133387,2,0,P|76:116|128:204,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,244,134793,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,288,135262,6,0,L|424:288,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,220,136668,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,140,137137,2,0,P|408:108|392:72,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,32,138074,2,0,P|304:76|280:108,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,139012,6,0,P|325:244|353:262,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,152,140418,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,72,140887,2,0,P|112:40|32:72,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,156,142293,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,236,142762,6,0,P|56:296|80:324,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,324,143699,2,0,P|136:264|112:236,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,164,144637,2,0,P|176:128|272:172,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,146629,12,4,148387,0:0:0:0:
476,308,163387,6,0,P|416:328|324:308,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,248,164793,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,184,165262,2,0,P|104:164|44:184,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,300,167137,6,0,L|344:300,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,244,168543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,168,169012,2,0,P|464:104|476:80,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,40,169949,2,0,P|360:56|304:60,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,92,170887,6,0,P|200:168|248:232,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,256,172293,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,172762,2,0,L|84:324,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,152,174637,6,0,P|76:104|100:80,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,160,175574,2,0,P|124:208|96:236,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,76,176980,2,0,B|256:76|256:128|352:128,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,140,178387,6,0,P|436:208|396:296,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,320,179793,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,256,180262,2,0,B|200:256|200:256|168:260|168:260|88:260,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,188,181668,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,108,182137,6,0,P|164:72|232:112,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,183543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,276,184012,2,0,P|356:312|420:277,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,200,185418,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,112,185887,6,0,B|392:112|392:76|308:76,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,140,187293,1,8,0:0:0:0:
194,76,187762,2,0,B|120:76|120:112|40:112,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,140,190105,6,0,P|332:120|420:148,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,220,191512,2,0,P|308:216|256:296,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,352,192918,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,312,193387,6,0,P|112:268|116:228,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,188,194324,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,224,194793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,264,195262,2,0,B|368:234|352:186|352:186|340:146|352:106,1,160
312,28,196668,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,40,197137,5,2,0:0:0:0:
148,80,197605,2,0,P|116:120|100:152,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,232,198543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,304,199012,2,0,L|228:304,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,224,199949,2,0,L|180:224,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,200887,5,2,0:0:0:0:
196,76,201355,2,0,P|244:80|364:60,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,24,202762,2,8,P|476:24|480:180,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,248,204637,6,0,P|440:288|448:328,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,240,206043,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,156,206512,2,0,B|344:140|304:160|304:160|260:180|220:152,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,80,207918,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,44,208387,5,6,0:0:0:0:
112,88,208855,2,0,L|16:84,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,152,210262,2,0,P|200:212|112:348,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,356,212137,5,2,0:0:0:0:
36,268,212605,2,0,P|104:248|88:176,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,88,214012,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,32,214480,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,60,214949,2,0,L|316:56,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,52,215887,6,0,P|452:72|464:232,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,296,217762,2,0,L|508:312,2,80,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,268,219168,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,296,219637,6,0,L|164:312,2,80,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,212,221043,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,156,221512,2,0,P|304:124|184:224,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,223387,12,0,225262,0:0:0:0:

Applied everything, thank you.

Tony

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Tony 2013-08-14T12:53:44+00:00

everything fixed! thanks pandaikon <3
added video btw :3

Mystyk

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Mystyk 2013-08-15T10:36:26+00:00

Here is your requested mod :3 I hope it will be helpful >.<

General:
You should consider changing this color: http://puu.sh/42BrI.jpg - because it is hard to see the reverse arrow especially at the kiai times, when the objects are flashing (so thy are brigther)

Facil:
01:02:137 (1) - very little thing, but you could place this a little bit up, so that the distance looks equal (just turn off grid snap) - http://puu.sh/42Blo.jpg
01:25:105 (2) - the flow might be a bit better if you flip this horizontally, vertically and ctrl+G, or anyway, something like this: http://puu.sh/42Bpm.jpg
01:49:012 (1) - I would rather have this in the other direction, for better flow (even though it is very small) - http://puu.sh/42BtZ.jpg
01:56:980 (2) - where is the clap from the beginning of the slider?
02:18:074 (4) - this pattern doesn't look so nice, so why don't you try this? - http://puu.sh/42BAU.jpg
03:24:637 (1) - the same that I mentioned before, you could make this go in the opposite direction for better flow: http://puu.sh/42BL4.jpg
03:37:762 (2) - I think you should make this curvy for a nicer pattern :3 http://puu.sh/42BN8.jpg
03:39:637 (1,2,3) - you can also try doing something with this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/928339

Sorry, these are mainly small things, so I'm not sure if it's any useful, very nice difficulty!

Mediu:
00:34:715 (4) - it would be nicer if the shape wasn't as curvy as that

you could try something like:
http://puu.sh/42C3c.jpg or http://puu.sh/42C48.jpg or etc...
00:36:824 (3) - rotate this for better flow? http://puu.sh/42C7i.jpg - you did it similarly here 00:40:574 (3) -
00:38:465 (5) - same here, though this one looks nicer than the previous

00:41:512 (4,5) - I think it doesn't look good, that (5) is not a perfect blanket: http://puu.sh/42Cbq.jpg so I think you should try to make the shape of (5) and (4)...like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/928366
also replace 00:40:574 (3) - a little bit: http://puu.sh/42Chh.jpg - it will still be a triangle

01:14:324 (3) - why don't you use a long slider here? she is singing in a long way, just an idea for pattern:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/928377
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/928380
01:17:605 (2,3) - this doesn't look good imo

this would look nicer: http://puu.sh/42CzE.jpg though you would have to replace some things afterwards
01:28:387 (1) - well this sounds kind of weird, because the clap should be on the blue tick 01:28:738 - so maybe remove clap?
01:29:324 (3) - again why not a long slider? since she sings like that >.<
01:43:387 (3,4) - this looks like the same pattern as before but flipped x_X so I suggest the same as before
01:46:199 (3) - same here, I already mentioned it, why copy-paste?

01:49:949 (3) - wouldn't this fit better to the lyrics? - http://puu.sh/42CMA.jpg but even if you don't change this, you should change the shape of (3) for better flow: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/928406

Dificil:
00:33:778 (4,5) - I think there are too many hit circle around this part, so you could make this a slider, also because it sounds like that she sings in a longer way so a slider would fit better than 2 hit circles, and like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/928427 - you would synch to tuuu-jeee (dunno what she is singing C:)
00:35:419 (4) - the flow breaks here, because you lead (4) in the opposite direction, so I would sugest you to replace it a bit
01:49:950 (3) - ctrl+g on this for better flow?
01:52:762 (1,2) - I think you should remove (2) and make (1) longer, because she is singing longer than that short slider and it feels like there is too much mapping there when it's not needed, and also, in the middle of this slider 01:54:169 (6) - she starts singing, but you started the slider earlier, so I think you could improve this part and try this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/928436 (and also replace 01:55:106 (6) - ) (it is not so much different from yours but might bet better)
02:03:544 (5) - make this blanket nicer >.< so put the end point of the slider a bit to the left
02:37:059 (2) - ^ but to the right (about 1 grid..xD)

Pretty nice mapset so there is not much to say, good luck! :3

Tony

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Tony 2013-08-16T07:28:35+00:00

most fixed. thanks Mystyk o3o

YTYuyu

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YTYuyu 2013-08-18T18:30:19+00:00

re-check~

[Mediu]
00:26:512 (1) - replace the finish for a whistle for consistency in the hitsounding. since you did it in the 1st part, it's best that you keep it consistent here during gameplay.
01:05:887 (1) - ^
01:09:637 (1) - ^
01:13:387 (1) - ^
and so on...please note that you only do this at the choruses, not at the verses, also do the same thing on Dificil for consistency in the diffs. in other words, the same pattern as Facil. if you can come up with a good reason, then we'll move on.

Tony

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Tony 2013-08-18T20:24:21+00:00

instead of complicating my life I decided to replace in verses too the finishes. so everything should be consistent!
I should really watch out for improving my hitsounds. I just realised that I need to work a bit on my mapping style D:
ready to go then :3

YTYuyu

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YTYuyu 2013-08-18T21:05:54+00:00

hai here you go and GL