1. Why Stack Leniency is so low? It disturbs especially in Insane diff.
2. Try to move Preview point to 01:01:846?

1. 00:39:859 (5) - try to make better blanket with (4). If necessary, move circle (4) left.
2. 00:54:952 (1) - I suggest to make in another way:
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:16:380 (4,5) - remove overlap or connect it with 00:16:753 (1).
2. 00:29:610 (3,4,5) - it might be confusing, try to replace (5) with next slider: (probably it'll be needed change NCs)
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:38:554 (3) - try to make blanket with (2)?
4. 00:39:672 (1,2) - following previous suggestion, move these circles a bit higher to make better flow. Example:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:40:604 (1) - this slider better looks/flows when it's more straight, like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:43:399 (1) - move slidertail 4px up to make better blanket.
7. 00:46:008 (4) - slider should flow better when You move centerpoint below slider hits.
8. 01:09:486 (3,4,5) - try to make regular polygon.
9. 01:16:753 (2) - make shape more similar to 01:17:312 (3)?

1. 00:01:287 (1,1) - this transition is really unclear. Maybe reverse slider?

1. 00:18:057 (1) - ctrl+g for better flow?
2. 00:22:716 (1,2,3,4) - transform it to square.
3. 00:41:163 (3) - ctrl+g?
4. 00:58:026 (4) - try to make pattern like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:59:517 (2) - remove?
6. 01:08:182 (10,11) - remove circle and extend slider to 01:08:554 (11).
7. 01:09:859 (2) - invisible stack.
8. 01:18:989 - add note?
9. 01:24:206 (4) - move it a bit right to avoid stack with (6).

wa_ wrote:

Some suggestions

[General]

1. Why Stack Leniency is so low? It disturbs especially in Insane diff.
2. Try to move Preview point to 01:01:846?

[Deekane's Normal]

1. 00:39:859 (5) - try to make better blanket with (4). If necessary, move circle (4) left.
2. 00:54:952 (1) - I suggest to make in another way:
   
   SPOILER

   

[Banana's Hard]

1. 00:16:380 (4,5) - remove overlap or connect it with 00:16:753 (1).
2. 00:29:610 (3,4,5) - it might be confusing, try to replace (5) with next slider: (probably it'll be needed change NCs)
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:38:554 (3) - try to make blanket with (2)?
4. 00:39:672 (1,2) - following previous suggestion, move these circles a bit higher to make better flow. Example:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:40:604 (1) - this slider better looks/flows when it's more straight, like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:43:399 (1) - move slidertail 4px up to make better blanket.
7. 00:46:008 (4) - slider should flow better when You move centerpoint below slider hits.
8. 01:09:486 (3,4,5) - try to make regular polygon.
9. 01:16:753 (2) - make shape more similar to 01:17:312 (3)?

[5.167569%]

1. 00:01:287 (1,1) - this transition is really unclear. Maybe reverse slider?

Diff is really good, so I haven't found anything special.

[Insane]

1. 00:18:057 (1) - ctrl+g for better flow? changed this part
2. 00:22:716 (1,2,3,4) - transform it to square. no, I do it on my purpose
3. 00:41:163 (3) - ctrl+g? ^
4. 00:58:026 (4) - try to make pattern like this? no
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:59:517 (2) - remove? ^
6. 01:08:182 (10,11) - remove circle and extend slider to 01:08:554 (11). ^
7. 01:09:859 (2) - invisible stack. I've stacked it in before time, and I've followed other's mod to change it
8. 01:18:989 - add note? I'll consider it
9. 01:24:206 (4) - move it a bit right to avoid stack with (6).

^

Good luck!

CSAQ wrote:

hi~

-

[Insane]

00:03:337 (1) - 哨音感覺不適合放這? 還有 00:04:828 (1) - 00:06:318 (1) -
00:07:716 (1,2) - New Combo放在(2)
00:22:716 ~ 00:25:511 這段用Normal音效處理比較明顯
00:24:206 (4) - 這裡我覺得多一個折返 or 0.5倍速處理會比較好
00:34:641 (1,2) - 去掉哨音用Normal音效?
00:36:877 (1,2) - 和前面兩次一樣用大間距? 感覺比較統一
00:38:740 (T) - 不要降低音量啊，有點恐怖
00:38:368 ~ 00:43:213 這段的clap我建議放 00:38:368 , 00:39:859 , 去掉 00:40:231 , 00:41:349 , 00:42:840 ,比較能銜接的上
00:48:057 (1,2,3) - 不做個小跳? 然後建議改Normal音效
00:51:784 (4) - 頭加clap , 還有00:53:275 , 00:54:765
00:55:883 (4) - finish換clap吧 , 00:58:119
01:00:355 (x) - 這裡放個note?
01:02:964 ~ 這段之後全用Normal音效處理反而太突兀了，用Soft音效再加鼓點應該好很多
01:08:182 (10) - New Combo?
01:12:560 (T) - 嗯,不要降太多音量
01:18:989 (x) - 放個note?
01:26:163 (T) - 保持Normal音效?
01:28:119 (5) - 可以把(5)換成Slider，不然就在後面接一個圈，比較有結束感

這Diff有些雜亂了，作圖先擬一個骨架出來，有系統的去處理，比較容易做，玩家也比較容易熟悉，然後音效也是，統一之後整個map打起來也會比較流暢，大概是這樣~

[5.167569%]

00:04:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 放不下可以換角度or縮小間距，折返處理比較不好
00:23:647 (1,2,3) - 這三顆起點在前一個(4)下面比較好
00:45:635 (5,6) - 盡量不要完全疊合，可能會誤判
00:48:803 (1,2) - 這個起點在前一個(3)下面?
01:09:859 (1,2,3) - 同上，起點在(7)
01:12:840 (1,2,1) - 放同間距感覺不適合?
01:14:890 (1,2,3,4) - 同上上
01:28:119 (4) - 換長條or後面接轉圈?

[Banana's Hard]

00:13:958 (2) - 放到00:14:144?
01:01:846 (1) - 感覺不到降速的理由?
01:15:821 (3,4) - 換成一個折返Slider?
01:28:119 (4) - 我覺得放(3)左邊比較好? 然後也是同前面mod，轉圈結尾?

這首應該不適合哨音，感覺把音樂都壓下去了呢

[Dekaane's Normal]

00:01:846 (1) - 做一些東西吧? 放轉圈感覺不好
00:32:219 (4) - 最低難度不適合放這種梗，換一個Circle在00:32:405?
00:40:977 (6) - New Combo?
00:54:952 (1) - 換成00:54:765,00:55:138兩個Circle? 壓白線感覺比較流暢

這個做最低難度有些太難的梗了，可能加個Easy或這個改簡單一點？

-

嗯，應該是這些了，加油！

Well, I will got a easy diff in near future, maybe you don't need to mind this

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

normal和banana不用看了吧

insane
00:07:716 (1) - 这里new combo加的莫名 好 删了
00:19:362 (2) - 这个软一点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760496 改了.
00:53:088 (2) - ^ ^
01:20:293 (3) - ^ ^
00:35:387 (1,2,3,4) - 个人很不喜欢这个梗。。 没改.
音效前后差距好大, 建议前面别老用softwhistle 已经晚了.... 我觉得改后面我能接受 但是前面不行;_; 但是我试了好多normal-hitclap都不是很合适

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Hellowww ~
You requested via in-game ~


[General]
- Combo colors should be the same in every difficulty.
- Set the preview point at 01:01:474


[Dekaane's Normal]
00:39:859 (5) - Middle point at x:104 y:92 and last point at x:160 y:100
00:45:076 (3,4,5) - Try this.

SPOILER

[Banana's Hard]
- You should have at least one spinner to have some differences between scores.
00:13:958 (2) - Move this note two ticks forward (00:14:144) ? Sounds better.
00:24:579 - Add a circle?
00:39:859 (2) - Move two tick forward.
00:41:536 (3) - ^



[Insane]
- You should have at least one spinner to have some differences between scores.
00:27:374 (8) - Stack with (1) fix
00:43:958 (5) - Slider can be better. hmm.. perhaps now it's better


Good luck! >w<

Megurine Luka wrote:

m4m as requested

[G]

可以在tag里加一个opening
一般来说mapper自己要做超过别人的量。你这个现在只有一个diff，音效还不是自己的，感觉比较危险，可以考虑做一个新手向的Easy
可以考虑找一个静音的sliderslide文件，很多歌里都有随便拖一个就可以了
需要在Color一栏里加入SliderBorder值，默认白色255,255,255 加这个的原因是为了防止与player自身使用的skins引起冲突，你有hitcircle的皮肤所以这个必须加。如果不会可以打开我有皮肤的图做参考/.\

[N]

00:39:486 (4,5) -

01:00:169 (3) -

01:11:722 (5) - 感觉需要往左上1grid左右
01:14:890 (3) - NC

[H]
前奏部分whistle还行，Vocal一开始的whistle显得很违和，考虑换掉
00:38:554 (3) -

00:40:604 (1) - 这样可能好点

01:01:846 (1) - 这个还不如跟Vocal，换成1.0倍速SV的折返slider

[5]

00:05:573 (5) - 其实比较突兀的突然转变，不如加个NC？
00:16:194 (2) - CTRL+G for better flow
00:24:206 (4) - add one turn
00:34:828 (x) - x=280 y=208的地方加个circle
00:39:486 (2) - ctrl+G for better flow
00:41:163 (2) - ^
00:45:821 (6) - ^
01:05:387 (3) - ^


[I]

00:02:033 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 我觉得这两组的排列方法不如对换一下，因为一般人都是比较适应spacing从小到大这样子，你这样反而有点突然。
00:15:449 (2) - 和1错开一点，像是

01:09:672 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉略坑
01:11:722 (3) - CTRL+G会好点的感觉

总体还行0.0 就是谱面做的有点乱~加油吧w

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

00:39:859 (5) - Middle point at x:104 y:92 and last point at x:160 y:100 /*o3o
00:45:076 (3,4,5) - Try this. /*I like my actual pattern.

wa_ wrote:

00:39:859 (5) - try to make better blanket with (4). If necessary, move circle (4) left. /*That'd both destroy my smiling face with 00:37:995 (1,2,3), and I don't want to break spacing consistency ;c

big brother wrote:

5

00:05:573 (5) - 其实比较突兀的突然转变，不如加个NC？ 好
00:16:194 (2) - CTRL+G for better flow better什么flow那就撞上去了
00:24:206 (4) - add one turn 不好 这里是四声你听下
00:34:828 (x) - x=280 y=208的地方加个circle 还是空着吧
00:39:486 (2) - ctrl+G for better flow
00:41:163 (2) - ^
00:45:821 (6) - ^
01:05:387 (3) - ^ 这个我觉得倒是确实好点, 不过先不改了

BakaHuang wrote:

hi

This is my super love song and Kanako is my favourite singer :3

luka的kudo没给 lol... 忘了

Insane

整体感觉有点绕手,就是note出现的方向和我下意识想的方向是相反的 ;w;

我举点例子(可能是我个人习惯原因 觉得nazi可以忽略

00:03:716(3,4)-位置可以换一下 后面那个也一样 感觉比较顺手
00:05:206(3,4)-这里位置也换下,因为你的排版一直在左边 从左到右比较顺手
00:15:082(1,2)-如果是我就会把slider放到前面note(4)的左边 一般顺着比较舒服吧
00:17:132(4,5)-这里也是的,前面note(2,3,4)都有像左排列的趋势 突然(5)到了右边可能有点..你懂的XD (这个无大碍 以上fix
00:18:063(1)-slider弯向可以朝左上方向
00:23:840(2)-放在左边更顺手 差不多bg助手右胸部的位置X_X(( sry no change
00:24:212(4)-可以变成5个note连打 往右边放 ^
00:24:771(2)-如果你上面按照我的改了 你可以这样放 (2)的开头加个soft-finish

00:26:076(2,3)-这个时间轴上的位置可以换下 如果换了位置也要调整一下 不换也行问题不大
00:26:821(5)-离前面的(4)近一点 然后我觉得(6)可以不要..我觉得这里的节奏不适合连打 感觉不太好诶..
00:27:566(1,2,3)-这里和上面感觉一样 把(1,2)删了 把slider移上来 然后00:27:939(2)-添加个和(1)一样长度的slider,在和note(4)中间加个note（可以不加
00:35:393(1,2,3)-(1)换到(3)的位置 (1)的位置换成(2) (2)的位置换成(3) fixolor]
00:38:560(2,3)-感觉连打不合适 把slider提到(2)的位置 换成1/4的slider
00:49:181(4)-太远了 [color=#FF0000]fixolor]
01:13:219(1)-换成x0.5的slider 把折返去了

后面看不动了..还有很多NC问题和音效问题没说ORZ..总之要改善排版 要干净点 学习点别人的map :3

等你觉得这图可以泡之前来找我remod ok

Banana's Hard

whistle用的太频繁了..我觉得开头和副歌部分用就行

其他难度都挺好的 现在最低难度不要求三星了?

1. Preview time is 61666 better.

1. 00:24:212 (4) - add repeat?
2. 00:32:039 (2) - Why you use finish here? it's fine only clap.
3. 00:46:200 (6) - 1/2 slider is best. not fit 3/4 slider.
4. 00:50:299 (3,4) - bad flow. try Ctrl+G, more enjoyble.
5. 00:55:051 (4) - hmm, I don't know how you using whistle. this whistle is really not match here. cuz triplet , and blue line. Please try to listen to song.
6. 01:12:566 - Volume is very low. It will cause to confuse the player.
   
   mod is difficult to this diff.
   I felt that there were many triplet that does not match the song.

1. not found big issue.

1. hmm, whistle volume is noisy.. It is because it depends on the entire slider.
2. 00:24:585 - add note?
3. 00:26:821 - this part is follow vocal, add note?
4. 00:30:734 (2) - not fit vocal and song. like this rhythm?
   
   
5. 00:51:604 (2) - move to 00:51:417 - stack with 00:51:231 (1) - fit song this pattern.
6. 00:52:535 (1,2) - here, vocal has long sound so need slider. like this?
   

1. 00:34:647 (4) - add finish of slider end?

Guy wrote:

Hi! request from via in-game

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. Preview time is 61666 better.

[Insane]

1. 00:24:212 (4) - add repeat?
2. 00:32:039 (2) - Why you use finish here? it's fine only clap. fix
3. 00:46:200 (6) - 1/2 slider is best. not fit 3/4 slider.
4. 00:50:299 (3,4) - bad flow. try Ctrl+G, more enjoyble. fix
5. 00:55:051 (4) - hmm, I don't know how you using whistle. this whistle is really not match here. cuz triplet , and blue line. Please try to listen to song. fix
6. 01:12:566 - Volume is very low. It will cause to confuse the player. 25% now
   
   mod is difficult to this diff.
   I felt that there were many triplet that does not match the song.

[5.167569%]

1. not found big issue.

[Banana's Hard]

1. hmm, whistle volume is noisy.. It is because it depends on the entire slider.
2. 00:24:585 - add note?
3. 00:26:821 - this part is follow vocal, add note?
4. 00:30:734 (2) - not fit vocal and song. like this rhythm?
   
   
5. 00:51:604 (2) - move to 00:51:417 - stack with 00:51:231 (1) - fit song this pattern.
6. 00:52:535 (1,2) - here, vocal has long sound so need slider. like this?
   

[Dakaane's Normal]

1. 00:34:647 (4) - add finish of slider end?

Good luck~

AnimeStyle wrote:

Mod Request


[General]

Please adjust the audio leadin, it's different between the diffs　It does not have problem :3
The end of the audio sounds strange, like it's clipped, pls fix this :/

[Gamu's Easy]

00:13:026 (4,5) - Sliders should not end at the beginning of a beat,especially when the singer starts to sing -> http://puu.sh/31tEN.jpg good idea. But, no change orz sorry
00:24:765 (3) - Avoid in easy diff starting circles/sliders on a red tick, it's confusing for beginner, except it's clearly when they should klick it will no problem

Anyways a nice diff :3　


I hope the mod is helpful :3
Anyways a great map for a newby mapper ;D go on

AnimeStyle wrote:

Mod Request


[General]

Please adjust the audio leadin, it's different between the diffs I've asked Strawberry and he told me this is ok,so.... no change
The end of the audio sounds strange, like it's clipped, pls fix this :/ change the mp3

[Gamu's Easy]

00:13:026 (4,5) - Sliders should not end at the beginning of a beat,especially when the singer starts to sing -> http://puu.sh/31tEN.jpg
00:24:765 (3) - Avoid in easy diff starting circles/sliders on a red tick, it's confusing for beginner, except it's clearly when they should klick

Anyways a nice diff :3

[Normal]

Lot's of unsnapped stuff <_< (Look in Ai-Mod) Ctrl+Shift+U hmmm..... I've found nothing

00:07:629 (3,1) - Such things are really great in insane and hard diffs, but in normal you should not use it fix
00:08:281 (1) - Move this a little bit left/up -> http://puu.sh/31u8a.jpg fix
00:18:995 (1) - NO , if you really want to overlap them, do something like this -> http://puu.sh/31uhU.jpg I made a mistake here... fix
00:29:802 (3,4) - 00:07:629 <- the same hmm... I think it's relly fit the normal diff
00:32:039 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:32:970 (4,1) - ^ ^
00:34:275 (2,1,2) - ^ ^
00:35:765 (1) - ^ ^
00:36:324 (1) - Add clap fix
00:46:945 (5,1,2,3) - you know ^
00:53:840 (4,1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:56:542 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:06:324 (1,2) - .___. ^
01:17:132 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:25:517 (2,3,1,2) - ^ ^

I'm to strict :c
but the map looks good already :3

[5.167569%]

00:44:896 (3) - should be completely under (2)

[Insane]

No sense to mod this XD imp it's perfect OqO


I hope the mod is helpful :3
Anyways a great map for a newby mapper ;D go on uh. thx

Banana wrote:

i think the strange beats in my part is not that bad in playing

修改稿 Preview Time 和offset都改过了 mod啥的修改主要改了绿线音量 改完感觉不用另加音效文件

随手骗一发kd好了
[General]
下下来的解压包里面有两个mp3 像这样...
plz remove the 2nd mp3 file and full sub again fix
第三页有两个mod没给kd 如果不是忘记的话... wa_'s mod helps, plz kd his post fix
offset 改了以后起码你的Insane的 preview's time 忘记加六了 另外个人推荐再往前1/2放Preview Time no
PreviewTime: 57939

[Insane]
考虑bpm推荐AR8 虽然开头有一点不好读不过整体上看看还是ar8好 改成AR8打成屎了... 又换了回去
音效略乱 个人感觉（而且我也是这么做的..）一种音效可以从头用到尾 不管这么讲 S用25的音量对于这首歌有点轻了肯定会被挑 5什么的我不太清楚能不能用 总之用S来减音量只要用N的数值就行
这首歌个人感觉整体上不适合蓝线单note或者蓝线尾巴的滑条 比如00:46:200 (6) - fix 个人感觉1/2滑条加圈然后后面接(7)会比较自然 自创3/4我觉得不是所有人都能把握好建议还是老实一点
00:54:771 (2) - 这个用的还行我就作为hd党建议一下人工stack方便读图.. fix
00:57:753 - 个人感觉不自创节奏就不会死...不过这节奏也还行 如果全改成圈应该好读
自创节奏和音效自己再把握一下 不喜欢挑细节

Kloyd wrote:

Quick check #pm req

Dake'sNormal

00:39:865 (4) - basket more
00:47:132 (5) - rhythm recommendation http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/778998

Normal
00:29:802 (3,4) - I think stacking is better idea
00:42:473 (4) - not good overlap.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/779035 <-- It'll work better (I mean playable)
01:10:796 - adding circle shall be better rhythm (216:248) fix
01:25:517 (2,3) - stack

Hard

01:27:007 (2,1) - basketing may be better or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/779051 this might work better

Irreversible wrote:

[Dekaane's Normal]

00:38:374 (2,3,4) - Try to get this pattern better - So everything looks nice blanketed (that word).. I know, it's fine for 2 and 3, but not for 3 and 4, what looks weird for me. /*Oh well everybody is telling me blanket there, ok, blanketed (2,3,4)
00:42:473 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - If you wanna use another hitsound here, lower the volume..because like this it's just a bit too loud. /*I lowered the volume a bit.
01:02:970 (3) - I suggest you another rhythm here: It's a bit weird for normal. Try putting a reverse slider that it fits her song, it's better http://puu.sh/32jB8.jpg /*Actually I'm following the drums here, not that weird I think
01:06:324 (2) - Why don't you push up this part with some claps? You could add one here /*Added some claps in this part
01:07:629 (4,6) - Add on these two a clap too (maybe make it a bit less volume) (slider start i mean) /*^
01:12:846 (6) - Move it a bit downward for a better flow, normal is always so straight, but here's a place to make it a bit different. /*Got it, but moved (7) instead.
01:14:150 (2) - WRong direction of the slider i think o.o Ctrl + j :3 /*I like this way :c

good job dake~ /*Thank you Irre :3

I hope i could help you a bit ^^ take my star for sure! good luck with ranking :3

Irreversible wrote:

Hey there! Random mod :3

You can ignore the suggestions, it's a mod that might help you, and this is only my point of view :3


[General]

Nice skin idea! But i can't play it, it's so .. transparent xD
This map needs more KIAI flashes!!! xD 01:08:933 - and here 01:20:858 - :3 if you would add them it just gives me this feeling. xD

delete the skin... But not change the kiai time

[Insane]

Overall suggestions:

00:00:921 (3) - Well, i kinda don't like the placing here, why is it showing to the left? :X I would let it look differently.
00:16:386 (1) - Same here, it will flow better if the bow is upwards, not downwards :3 sure changed here
00:18:809 - What about deleting this circle? It will give the player some resttime, because you have to click already a lot in the begin.
00:22:722 (1,2,3,4) - Make it look like a real square (place circle, 90° rotate) no.. I did it on my purpose
00:24:212 (4) - why not reversing this one? It will fit pretty well with this bebep in the background~
01:10:424 (1) - Why did you suddenly make this with whistles? xDD I got pretty distracted by that. fix

Problems that I had playing this map:

00:02:039 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Well, i agree with this jumps in this part. But it's not veery good to put these heavy jumps at the begin of the map. Its like the funny part is already over - also, it's a bit hard to get it straight away. I would remove the big distance snap, just make it a little bit easier to read. It will help the player flow through your map better! Hmm... I'm trying change this
00:06:324 (1,2,3,4) - I didn't get that at all, it's just a too big anti jump xD Make the distance a bit bigger maybe?
00:24:212 (4) - This just appears all of a sudden. Although i know this song pretty good, it just throws me out, because the mini slider is soo fast somehow. Try placing it differently
00:58:684 (1,2,3) - Decreasing this DS would make it better, because it throws me out of the rhythm as well. maybe it's hard to hit, but I think it's really fit :3

The Kiai time itself is very well done! :3

Feedback:

Well, I really love the song, and this map is really cool to play! I just had some problems with the jumps, but maybe this was just me, but feel free to change
To the triplets: You used very many of them - now think: Do you mean they are all necessary? (for example: 00:53:374 (3,4) (a bit weird) - 00:41:542 (4,5) - (it's a calm part, dunno why its there)
I mostly use triplets to stress something a bit, i don't know how you think.

But: I like it~

[5.119237189237981731234%]

When i first played the map, the begin was REALLY terrible. I'm sorry, but i would remap that. I'm wondering why you mapped like this? O: The rest of the map is really great, but the first part.. is just too meh.
But i have to say, i like the other patterns like this (straight line, especially in the kiai time). They were pretty playable, and the DS is also fine


Overall suggestions:

00:10:051 (3) - Add a clap on the slider end? I like this clap, clap, clapclap hitsound pattern :3
00:45:641 (5,6) - Meh, i don't really suggest putting it like that, it will throw off many people i guess. Remove it
00:58:312 (2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - Nice pattern, i love it

Things what threw me off:

00:46:200 (1,2,3) - This is not very readable, I like stacks, but that's too much.

Pretty neat! Not much to say here. Unique Mapping style is always cool~


[Banana's Hard]


00:06:324 (1,2) - They look like bananas >w< loljk ehm.. It's kinda flow killing, try make something with more flow. http://puu.sh/32jky.jpg
00:12:473 (2) - It would be great if you could move them a bit to the top, it will flow better with the previous circle.
00:30:734 (2) - Stack this to 00:30:175 (1) - and not to 00:31:107 (3) - . In an insane it would be okay, but i think this is a bit too hard for here.
00:32:225 (2) - Stack this to the previous slider? It fits with the lyrics, because its like.. maybe you know what i mean if you listen to her singing. XD (can't explain that
01:13:778 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - http://puu.sh/32jqt.jpg What about something like this?
00:37:070 (4) - Why dont you let this slider look to the other side?
01:15:082 (1,2,3,4) - Well you did things like this over the whole map (mapping to the background). It's not wrong, you can leave it. But I suggest you mapping this little part to the lyrics. I mean it's the most powerful voice of her at this part, and I think (maybe I'm wrong) that it would empathize the map better.
^Same for the other parts

The rest looks fine for me!

[Normal]

Fine!

[Dekaane's Normal]

00:38:374 (2,3,4) - Try to get this pattern better - So everything looks nice blanketed (that word).. I know, it's fine for 2 and 3, but not for 3 and 4, what looks weird for me.
00:42:473 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - If you wanna use another hitsound here, lower the volume..because like this it's just a bit too loud.
01:02:970 (3) - I suggest you another rhythm here: It's a bit weird for normal. Try putting a reverse slider that it fits her song, it's better http://puu.sh/32jB8.jpg
01:06:324 (2) - Why don't you push up this part with some claps? You could add one here
01:07:629 (4,6) - Add on these two a clap too (maybe make it a bit less volume) (slider start i mean)
01:12:846 (6) - Move it a bit downward for a better flow, normal is always so straight, but here's a place to make it a bit different.
01:14:150 (2) - WRong direction of the slider i think o.o Ctrl + j :3

good job dake~

[Gamu's Easy]

Did you use a speciul hitsound here? cool :3
00:36:324 (3,4) - They fit to the song, yes, but it's an easy.. a bit too hard.
01:02:225 (1) - Not sure if this is allowed (to soon after the spinner) Deleting it won't hurt.
01:22:163 (3) - Moving this one a bit to the top, will let flow everything better

Also, not much to say here :p



I hope i could help you a bit ^^ take my star for sure! good luck with ranking :3

Irreversible wrote:

[5.119237189237981731234%]

When i first played the map, the begin was REALLY terrible. I'm sorry, but i would remap that. I'm wondering why you mapped like this? O: The rest of the map is really great, but the first part.. is just too meh.
But i have to say, i like the other patterns like this (straight line, especially in the kiai time). They were pretty playable, and the DS is also fine

because this is the world line!
because i'm egg pain ww


Overall suggestions:

00:10:051 (3) - Add a clap on the slider end? I like this clap, clap, clapclap hitsound pattern :3 i used 24clap tool in the map ww
00:45:641 (5,6) - Meh, i don't really suggest putting it like that, it will throw off many people i guess. Remove it i like eggpain patterns, no change ww
00:58:312 (2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - Nice pattern, i love it thanks ww

Things what threw me off:

00:46:200 (1,2,3) - This is not very readable, I like stacks, but that's too much. hmm.. probably stack in a clearer way? i manually stack it to the top

Pretty neat! Not much to say here. Unique Mapping style is always cool~ thanks ww

Irreversible wrote:

nonono! don't delete the skin!

put it in again, it makes it special, maybe try to make it not that distracting!

Irreversible wrote:

Hey there! Random mod :3

[Gamu's Easy]

Did you use a speciul hitsound here? cool :3
00:36:324 (3,4) - They fit to the song, yes, but it's an easy.. a bit too hard. ok. circle changed.
01:02:225 (1) - Not sure if this is allowed (to soon after the spinner) Deleting it won't hurt. it is no problem...maybe
01:22:163 (3) - Moving this one a bit to the top, will let flow everything better I don't think so

Also, not much to say here :p

I hope i could help you a bit ^^ take my star for sure! good luck with ranking :3

EvilElvisV2 wrote:

Hirrou.Sorry i can't find any problems here, so take this star!

jieusieu wrote:

irc

20:36 Chloe: hello :3
20:36 Chloe: would you mind to take a mod req if you're free
20:36 jieusieu: oh
20:37 jieusieu: but my modding is really suck
20:37 jieusieu: are you ok?
20:37 Chloe: it's no problem
20:37 *Chloe is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/246599 Itou Kanako - Hacking to the Gate (TV Size)]
20:37 Chloe: thx xD
20:46 jieusieu: [insane]
20:46 Chloe: hmm
20:46 jieusieu: 00:24:212 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/783840 how about this?
20:47 Chloe: my net speed is slow...
20:47 jieusieu: xD
20:48 jieusieu: xD
20:48 Chloe: hm..
20:48 Chloe: I've tried this a few times
20:48 Chloe: but it seems not well
20:48 Chloe: good*
20:49 jieusieu: ok
20:50 jieusieu: 01:12:194 (4,5) - move to x416 y184 is better imo
20:50 jieusieu: 01:12:194 (4,5) - move to x416 y184 is better imo
20:50 Chloe: if it need reverse, I think reverse 4 times is better
20:50 jieusieu: oh yes, but that distance D:
20:51 Chloe: I have a good idea
20:51 jieusieu: hmm?
20:51 Chloe: 00:24:585 (1) - delete this and move the beginning of 00:24:771 (2) - to 00:23:094 (3) -
20:53 jieusieu: ok good
20:53 jieusieu:
20:56 jieusieu: 00:53:840 (6) - i think it needs more distance from 00:53:281 (4) -
20:56 jieusieu: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/783854
20:56 jieusieu: x436 y120
20:57 Chloe: ok
20:59 jieusieu: [normal]
21:00 jieusieu: 00:42:473 (1) - umm... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/783866 how about this?
21:01 Chloe: ok
21:01 jieusieu: 01:15:827 (2) - remove nc?
21:02 Chloe: I think it doesn't need remove the nc
21:03 jieusieu: 01:08:933 (1,2,3) - bcz this
21:04 Chloe: 01:02:970 (1,1,2,3) -
21:04 Chloe: but as this nc
21:05 jieusieu: ah ok xD
21:05 jieusieu: my mod is that all, sorry to my poor modding and english
21:07 Chloe: hmm you're kindly
21:07 Chloe: and you can post this to forum , I'll give you kds~
21:07 jieusieu: thank you

gl for rank!!

Sonnyc wrote:

mm Slider tick is invisible. Is this my problem..? hmm.. maybe it's skin's problem

Gamu's Easy:

00:01:852 (1,2,1,1) - Avoid random spacing in easy plz.
00:10:424 (5) - Clap fits than a Finish
00:14:150 (1) - Well Clap should sound at the start and the end, not the tick,,
00:36:324 (3) - At a red line is tough for beginners to catch rhythms. Place rather at 00:36:511.
00:39:119 (3) - This is a different case with above, and start from 00:38:933 to follow the music.
01:02:225 (1) - Considering this is an easy, a slider after a spinner is quite difficult. Delete plz

Dakaane's Normal:

-- Hit sound is toooo loud.

00:27:566 (3,1) - .. an anti jump in normal? Well rather place (3) on top of 00:28:312 (1) will be less confusing.
00:28:684 (2) - Delete Whistle at the reverse.
01:18:250 (2,3) - Stack properly

Normal:

00:10:796 (1) - End at 00:13:032.
00:17:504 (2,1) - idk. This anti jump also doesnt feel nice, but don't know how to suggest. fix
00:23:653 (1) - End at 00:25:144.
00:29:802 (3) - (168,88) will be smoother. fix
00:40:237 (4) - Clap I think it doesn't need
01:01:852 (1,2) - For difficulty, delete these. why.. it's really fit the 4stars
01:15:827 (1) - Delete NC 01:27:380 (3) -
01:27:380 (1) - well place somewhere else 01:27:380 (3) -

Banana's Hard:

-- Is the skin still available? This is missing a slider border then.

00:30:921 - There is a vocal, no reason to make this empty
01:24:958 (3) - Delete Whistle at the start.

5.167569:

-- Hmm,, is this a time line??

00:10:796 (1) - Ending at 00:13:405 will be better.
00:45:641 (5,6) - Hope you can do some stacks like 00:44:523 (2,3).
00:57:753 (5) - (304,261)
01:01:107 (2) - Missing Finish
01:01:293 (3) - Finish should only be in the end.
01:02:970 (1) - Add Finish
01:07:163 (5) - Delete this. I feel overmap<<
01:08:933 (4) - Add Finish to emphasize
01:09:492 (7) - ^
01:12:660 - Hmm This being empty didn't felt nice.
01:14:896 (1) - Add FInish
01:21:417 (4) - ^
01:22:163 (3) - Delete Finish
01:24:958 - Also, similar suggestion to add a note.
01:27:007 (1,2) - I think the combo should be like (10,1).

Insane:

00:03:343 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Well, I didn't enjoyed this anti jumps
00:20:206 (6) - I don't think a stream fits here
00:24:212 (4) - Reduce one reverse. Refer from song,,
00:43:964 (5) - Well, this kind of slider isn't prefered these days..
00:58:032 (4) - Add a second slider dot at (433,169) for a blanket?
01:01:107 (5) - I don't think this is a good spot for a speed reduction.
01:25:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think these streams are too far, which is not good in playing imo
this diff need more consider about the mod, I'll pay more time on this

Good luck

Autumn wrote:

Hi~M4M here ^^

[Gamu's Esay]
00:10:424 (5) - Finish on 00:10:796 (1) ?
00:54:958 (5) - Exchange NC with 00:55:330 (1) ?
01:08:560 (4) - Exchange NC with 01:08:933 (1) ?

[Dekaane's Normal]
Silence the sliderslide?

[Normal]
00:43:219 - 00:49:368 这段为啥不用24clap了?我觉得这里气氛反而更high嘛
01:17:691 (2) - 拖到01:18:250 试试? vocal是在这里结束的
sry no change

[Banana]
00:38:560 (3) - 包?你不是也有强迫症? ww

[AR3]
难度名哪来的?(思考 不得不吐槽一下这世界线变动的太厉害了... 都不知道去哪个次元了
00:13:778 (1) - 好远...刚转完转盘摆这么远会遭到很多玩家的怨念...试试放右边:

SPOILER

话说我最近也在学习各种叠滑条头的摆法233

[Insane]
00:22:349 (3) - 试试Clap ok
00:40:237 - 这里突然冒出来的clap有些不自然,去掉它或者在以下几个地方放上clap: ok, deleted it

00:38:001 -
00:39:492 -
00:40:983 -
00:41:728 -
00:42:473 -

00:53:653 (5) - 包一下比较好看..不过其实没太大关系ww look not so pretty

SPOILER

01:15:827 (4) - 从前后flow考虑这样似乎更顺手:

SPOILER

01:16:945 (4,5,6,7) - 试试这种排列,把5和后面的滑条尾叠起来,形成一个圈

SPOILER

01:27:380 (3,4,5) - 试试把这三个用Ctrl+H移到左边怎么样 顺便NC nc but no ctrl h

GL~Take my star~
EL PSY CONGROO!