Hi~ by request
These are mostly just suggestions and rhythm things.
I hope this was helpful~
GL!
These are mostly just suggestions and rhythm things.
Insane
These overlapping squares in this first section are very annoying to read, they're all jumbled together with no clear pattern, and it's hard to tell where they fit in with the music. Here's my suggestion with some explanation:
00:02:033 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These notes here belong to one musical group, but not the same grouping as the rest of the squares. if you're going to create overlapping squares, then group each "set" of squares together with each other, but separate from the other groups.
00:03:337 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Group these two together, but separate and distinct from the previous squares and next squares
00:04:828 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - And these
00:06:318 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - And these
Something like this :http://puu.sh/2QGfz.png Each square pattern should have 2 squares, and be easily distinguishable from the other square patterns.
00:09:206 (4) - Add note here, there should be a triple
00:12:188 (4) - Here too, missing a triple
00:13:399 (2,3) - These are weird as 1/4 sliders, I'd just change them to a short stream. If you want to keep them as sliders, space them out from each other and the previous/next notes to make it easier to read, and create a small jump there.
Doublecheck your triple placement throughout the map after these next two triples - A lot of them feel very out of place and don't follow a consistent rhythm
00:15:821 (3,4,5) - This and
00:18:430 (2,3,4) - This are very nicely placed triples, and fit well. Use these two as examples and remove/add triples after these to follow the same or similar rhythm and beat
00:54:672 (1,2) - This double is a little weird? It might be better to tie this double in with a slider, either before or after
00:57:747 (3,4,5,6) - these doubles don't fit. normal 1/2 sliders or circles would feel better
00:59:610 (3) - this would just be better as 2 circles
01:03:710 (4) - Add note
01:09:672 (1,2,3,4) - remove the sliders in these and just make them stacked triples
01:15:635 (4) - Add note
01:15:821 (4) - make this 2 circles instead
01:18:989 (6) - add note
01:20:666 (1,2,3,1) - The stacking of this is very hard to read, make the slider 2 circles and make the first combo distinct from the second one
01:25:697 (2,3,4,5) - this is very weird, just make it a stream
00:02:033 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These notes here belong to one musical group, but not the same grouping as the rest of the squares. if you're going to create overlapping squares, then group each "set" of squares together with each other, but separate from the other groups.
00:03:337 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Group these two together, but separate and distinct from the previous squares and next squares
00:04:828 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - And these
00:06:318 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - And these
Something like this :http://puu.sh/2QGfz.png Each square pattern should have 2 squares, and be easily distinguishable from the other square patterns.
00:09:206 (4) - Add note here, there should be a triple
00:12:188 (4) - Here too, missing a triple
00:13:399 (2,3) - These are weird as 1/4 sliders, I'd just change them to a short stream. If you want to keep them as sliders, space them out from each other and the previous/next notes to make it easier to read, and create a small jump there.
Doublecheck your triple placement throughout the map after these next two triples - A lot of them feel very out of place and don't follow a consistent rhythm
00:15:821 (3,4,5) - This and
00:18:430 (2,3,4) - This are very nicely placed triples, and fit well. Use these two as examples and remove/add triples after these to follow the same or similar rhythm and beat
00:54:672 (1,2) - This double is a little weird? It might be better to tie this double in with a slider, either before or after
00:57:747 (3,4,5,6) - these doubles don't fit. normal 1/2 sliders or circles would feel better
00:59:610 (3) - this would just be better as 2 circles
01:03:710 (4) - Add note
01:09:672 (1,2,3,4) - remove the sliders in these and just make them stacked triples
01:15:635 (4) - Add note
01:15:821 (4) - make this 2 circles instead
01:18:989 (6) - add note
01:20:666 (1,2,3,1) - The stacking of this is very hard to read, make the slider 2 circles and make the first combo distinct from the second one
01:25:697 (2,3,4,5) - this is very weird, just make it a stream
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00:01:287 (1) - move this so it's not overlapping on top of the next note, it's making it needlessly hard to read
00:21:225 (1,2,3) - distance snap these instead of stacking it separate from the slider
00:25:324 (1,2,3) - distance snap these as well
00:34:269 (6,7,8) - ^
00:44:890 (3) - either stack this or move it down further so it's not stacked/overlapping
00:59:610 (1,2) - ctrl g
01:07:064 (4,5,6) - this triple feels weird/doesn't fit
01:08:741 (2,3,4) - ^
01:10:324 (4) - add note here if you want a triple
01:12:840 (1,2) - space these further apart
00:21:225 (1,2,3) - distance snap these instead of stacking it separate from the slider
00:25:324 (1,2,3) - distance snap these as well
00:34:269 (6,7,8) - ^
00:44:890 (3) - either stack this or move it down further so it's not stacked/overlapping
00:59:610 (1,2) - ctrl g
01:07:064 (4,5,6) - this triple feels weird/doesn't fit
01:08:741 (2,3,4) - ^
01:10:324 (4) - add note here if you want a triple
01:12:840 (1,2) - space these further apart
Bakana's Hard
00:24:579 (8) - add circle
00:26:815 (4) - ^
00:27:001 (5) - change this to a full beat slider, remove the next note since it will replace it
00:28:306 (8) - add circle, move the slider to the next white tick, which will replace that first circle again
00:28:492 (9) - Add circle
00:30:728 (2) - awkward, the beats should be on the two white ticks, not the 3 red, replace this with a slider or circles with all beats on the white ticks
00:39:486 (4) - add circle
00:39:672 (1,2) - remove these two, put a 1/2 slider there instead
00:41:163 (2) - add circle
00:41:349 (3) - remove circle
00:41:722 (4) - add circle
00:51:411 (2) - add circle
00:51:598 (3,4) - remove these, put a full beat slider here instead
00:52:529 (6) - remove this, move the next slider back to here
00:53:088 (7) - add circle
00:53:275 (8) - remove circle
00:53:461 (8) - replace this with 2 circles on the first 2 half beats and a full beat slider where this slider used to end (this will remove two notes out of the next combo)
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01:05:200 (3,4,1) - remove all of these and add these instead:
01:05:387 (3) - circle
01:05:573 (4) - ^
01:05:759 (5) - full beat slider
01:06:318 (6) - half beat slider (or 2 circles)
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01:09:300 (3) - add circle
01:15:262 (2) - ^
01:21:225 (3) - ^
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01:23:461 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - redo all of these to fit with the vocals better: I suggest the following
01:23:275 (1) - circle
01:23:461 (2) - ^
01:23:647 (3) - full beat slider
01:24:206 (4) - circle
01:24:393 (5) - full beat slider
01:24:952 (6) - circle
01:25:138 (7) - full beat slider
01:25:697 (8) - 2 beat slider
01:26:815 (9) - circle
00:26:815 (4) - ^
00:27:001 (5) - change this to a full beat slider, remove the next note since it will replace it
00:28:306 (8) - add circle, move the slider to the next white tick, which will replace that first circle again
00:28:492 (9) - Add circle
00:30:728 (2) - awkward, the beats should be on the two white ticks, not the 3 red, replace this with a slider or circles with all beats on the white ticks
00:39:486 (4) - add circle
00:39:672 (1,2) - remove these two, put a 1/2 slider there instead
00:41:163 (2) - add circle
00:41:349 (3) - remove circle
00:41:722 (4) - add circle
00:51:411 (2) - add circle
00:51:598 (3,4) - remove these, put a full beat slider here instead
00:52:529 (6) - remove this, move the next slider back to here
00:53:088 (7) - add circle
00:53:275 (8) - remove circle
00:53:461 (8) - replace this with 2 circles on the first 2 half beats and a full beat slider where this slider used to end (this will remove two notes out of the next combo)
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01:05:200 (3,4,1) - remove all of these and add these instead:
01:05:387 (3) - circle
01:05:573 (4) - ^
01:05:759 (5) - full beat slider
01:06:318 (6) - half beat slider (or 2 circles)
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01:09:300 (3) - add circle
01:15:262 (2) - ^
01:21:225 (3) - ^
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01:23:461 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - redo all of these to fit with the vocals better: I suggest the following
01:23:275 (1) - circle
01:23:461 (2) - ^
01:23:647 (3) - full beat slider
01:24:206 (4) - circle
01:24:393 (5) - full beat slider
01:24:952 (6) - circle
01:25:138 (7) - full beat slider
01:25:697 (8) - 2 beat slider
01:26:815 (9) - circle
Dekaane's Normal
00:16:380 (4) - This slider doesn't fit very well,there should at least be beats
00:16:753 (5) - here, and
00:17:498 (6) - here
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00:22:343 (4) - add circle
00:53:275 (1) - this is a little awkward, move this slider over to
00:52:902 (1) - here
00:53:461 (2) - add circle
00:53:647 (3) - ^
00:53:834 (4) - add 2 beat slider
01:23:461 (6) - add circle
01:26:815 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is good, maybe use something like this for the ending in all the other difficulties (the slider particularly, all circles in the other difficulties were kind of hard to read/understand)
00:16:753 (5) - here, and
00:17:498 (6) - here
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00:22:343 (4) - add circle
00:53:275 (1) - this is a little awkward, move this slider over to
00:52:902 (1) - here
00:53:461 (2) - add circle
00:53:647 (3) - ^
00:53:834 (4) - add 2 beat slider
01:23:461 (6) - add circle
01:26:815 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is good, maybe use something like this for the ending in all the other difficulties (the slider particularly, all circles in the other difficulties were kind of hard to read/understand)
I hope this was helpful~
GL!